forum

marble - Suisai Candy (TV size)

posted
Total Posts
9
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 Tháng Tư 2013 at 12:49:45 CH

Artist: marble
Title: Suisai Candy (TV size)
Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
BPM: 143
Filesize: 15599kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,64 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Hard (4,87 stars, 238 notes)
  3. Normal (3,86 stars, 130 notes)
Download: marble - Suisai Candy (TV size)
Download: marble - Suisai Candy (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Hi, I do it because I want to be other Nymph, And I want to become a which part in Nymph's map.
I give this map to Zejky - He taught me the way to edit map. Thank you very much.
Mapset
- Done~
- Done~
- Done~
aonkub555
Hello

i have something suggestion.
in this song if you will place note follow vocal you should place at red tick always or if you want to follow sound instrument. you should place at white tick always. but i think should use mix together :)

The circles and sliders should only start and end on a white or red tick in normal and easy, you shouldn’t use the blue ticks, yellow, etc.

Easy
slider at 00:56:566 i think should will end at 00:57:406
slider 00:35:168 end at 00:35:378
move circle 00:35:902 to 00:35:797
move slider 00:36:322 to 00:36:217
start slider 01:11:671 and end at 01:12:720
remove circle 01:12:930
move circle 01:13:350 to 01:13:140
move slider 01:13:769 to 01:13:559
move circle 01:15:028 to 01:14:818
move slider 01:15:448 to 01:15:238
move circle 01:16:706 to 01:16:497
move 01:18:385 to 01:18:175
move 01:19:224 to 01:19:014
move 01:19:643 to 01:19:434
move 01:20:063 to 01:19:853
remove kiai time 01:23:420

Nomal
remove kiai time 00:04:538
slider 00:35:797 should end at 00:36:217 for fit vocal
slider 00:38:315 sugestion end at 00:38:734 and change to reverse slider

Hard
remove kiai time 00:04:538 what For?
remove kiai time 01:23:420 - ^
move circle 00:24:678 to 00:24:469 because it unbalanced Rhythm
move circle 00:24:783 to 00:24:573 - ^
move circle 00:24:888 to 00:24:678 - ^
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

aonkub555 wrote:

Hello

i have something suggestion.
in this song if you will place note follow vocal you should place at red tick always or if you want to follow sound instrument. you should place at white tick always. but i think should use mix together :)

The circles and sliders should only start and end on a white or red tick in normal and easy, you shouldn’t use the blue ticks, yellow, etc.

Modding
Easy
slider at 00:56:566 i think should will end at 00:57:406
slider 00:35:168 end at 00:35:378
move circle 00:35:902 to 00:35:797
move slider 00:36:322 to 00:36:217
start slider 01:11:671 and end at 01:12:720
remove circle 01:12:930
move circle 01:13:350 to 01:13:140
move slider 01:13:769 to 01:13:559
move circle 01:15:028 to 01:14:818
move slider 01:15:448 to 01:15:238
move circle 01:16:706 to 01:16:497
move 01:18:385 to 01:18:175
move 01:19:224 to 01:19:014
move 01:19:643 to 01:19:434
move 01:20:063 to 01:19:853
remove kiai time 01:23:420

Nomal
remove kiai time 00:04:538
slider 00:35:797 should end at 00:36:217 for fit vocal
slider 00:38:315 sugestion end at 00:38:734 and change to reverse slider

Hard
remove kiai time 00:04:538 what For?
remove kiai time 01:23:420 - ^
move circle 00:24:678 to 00:24:469 because it unbalanced Rhythm
move circle 00:24:783 to 00:24:573 - ^
move circle 00:24:888 to 00:24:678 - ^

Thank you. Updated~
Sonnyc
Easy:

00:15:028 (6) - New Combo
00:16:497 (1) - Well, consider deleting this..? The gap between 00:17:965 (1) felt too short.
00:31:811 (2) - You forgot Clap at the start
00:36:217 (4) - End at 00:36:846.
00:49:434 (1) - Start at 00:49:853.
00:54:469 (5) - Clap
00:56:986 (9) - Clap at the start, not end
01:01:601 (6) - NC

Normal:

00:12:510 (3) - Whistle
00:23:839 (1,2) - Start NC at (2)
00:49:224 (2) - Delete this note
00:59:713 (5,6) - This rhythm is weird. Just make a 1/2 slider with a reverse starting 00:59:713.
01:13:140 (6,7) - These are a connected vocal. Consider mapping as a slider.

Hard:

00:03:699 (6,7,8,9,10) - Make a consistent distance
00:10:413 (8,1) - Uhh,, bad anti-jump imo
00:12:091 (7) - instead 1/4, use 1/2
00:16:706 (1) - End at 00:17:545 -
00:34:014 (2) - Delete
00:45:133 (4) - Start at 00:45:238, end at 00:45:448.
00:45:657 (5) - Start at 00:45:552, end at 00:45:867.
00:46:077 - Add a note
01:21:322 (8) - MAke a new slider. The start and the end should be visible.
01:28:455 (5) - Since a speed down, NC

There are toooo many Distance errors in Hard. Fix by your own please.
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Sonnyc wrote:

Modding
Easy:

00:15:028 (6) - New Combo
00:16:497 (1) - Well, consider deleting this..? The gap between 00:17:965 (1) felt too short.
00:31:811 (2) - You forgot Clap at the start
00:36:217 (4) - End at 00:36:846.
00:49:434 (1) - Start at 00:49:853.
00:54:469 (5) - Clap
00:56:986 (9) - Clap at the start, not end
01:01:601 (6) - NC

Normal:

00:12:510 (3) - Whistle
00:23:839 (1,2) - Start NC at (2)
00:49:224 (2) - Delete this note
00:59:713 (5,6) - This rhythm is weird. Just make a 1/2 slider with a reverse starting 00:59:713.
01:13:140 (6,7) - These are a connected vocal. Consider mapping as a slider.

Hard:

00:03:699 (6,7,8,9,10) - Make a consistent distance
00:10:413 (8,1) - Uhh,, bad anti-jump imo
00:12:091 (7) - instead 1/4, use 1/2
00:16:706 (1) - End at 00:17:545 -
00:34:014 (2) - Delete
00:45:133 (4) - Start at 00:45:238, end at 00:45:448.
00:45:657 (5) - Start at 00:45:552, end at 00:45:867.
00:46:077 - Add a note
01:21:322 (8) - MAke a new slider. The start and the end should be visible.
01:28:455 (5) - Since a speed down, NC

There are toooo many Distance errors in Hard. Fix by your own please.
Thank you. Updated~
Yuki-kun
Mod via pm request~

Tổng quan
--- Cậu luôn bắt đầu slider dài ở red point trên thanh timing, chính cái này làm cậu bỏ qua rất nhiều vị trí đáng lẽ có hitsound sẽ hay hơn rất nhiều.

Kiai Times: chú ý thống nhất kiai trong toàn bộ diff

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:23:420

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:21:322

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:23:420

Hitsounds
Thêm whistle vào sẽ làm cho map tạo cảm hứng hơn đấy. Hơn nữa, toàn bộ map của cậu, hitsound nghe random quá @@

Mod

[Easy]
Thừa timing: 00:17:965 (1) - Cái này không cần vì cậu không có custom finish.
00:38:524 (2,4) - Overlap. Di chuyển cái 4 hoặc cái 2 cho nó tách nhau ra hoặc thay đổi đường đi của 2
00:42:720 (6,7) - Đừng làm cong slider quá thế này, nhìn rất xấu.
00:44:399 (1,2) - Pattern kiểu này thì không đẹp lắm, với cả cậu bỏ qua hơi nhiều hitsound. Chuyển 2 cái slider sau thành như ảnh dưới được không?
00:54:888 (6) - New combo (NC)
01:01:601 (6) - NC
01:02:021 (2) - Cái slider dài này cậu bỏ qua kha khá hitsound đấy.
01:08:315 (6) - NC, mà cái slider này cũng xấu quá.
01:09:993 (8) - Tương tự cái trên, sửa slider đi.
01:13:559 (4) - Bỏ cái clap ở đầu slider đi
01:15:238 (1) - Cái này nữa. Còn nếu muốn giữ thì cho nó sang 01:15:448 -

[Normal]
Cậu lạm dụng slider dài quá nhiều, thành ra map này hitsound bị nghèo nàn quá.
00:08:944 (3) - Di chuyển sang 00:09:154 (3) - Nhớ thay đổi cả vị trí.
00:09:364 (4) - Thu ngắn cái slider lạ và bắt đầu ở 00:09:573 -
00:12:510 (3) - Lùi về 00:12:301 . Nhớ chỉnh vị trí cho phù hợp.
00:41:042 (1) - Stack với 00:39:783 (5) - . Nhưng nhớ là kiểu hidden này sang normal map ko được hay lắm đâu.
00:41:881 (3) - Quay cái slider như thế này đi.
00:44:399 (1,2,3) - Bad flow. Thử xếp kiểu khác đi.
00:57:615 (1) - Clap ở cuối slider.
00:58:035 (2,3,4) - Pattern xấu.

[Hard]
CS: 4

00:07:056 (9) - Stack với 00:06:427 (8) -
00:10:413 (8) - Stack.
00:11:252 (4,5) - Bad flow.
00:19:643 (4,1) - Nguyên đoạn này nghỉ vì lí do gì vậy?
00:27:825 (2,3,4,5) - Bad flow.
00:30:972 (11) - Stack
00:48:594 (6,1,2,3) - Di cái 6 ra chỗ khác đi.
01:06:007 (6) - Bỏ clap đi.
01:07:895 (3) - Clap.

Và chú ý cuối cùng là toàn bộ map nên kết thúc giống nhau.

Good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Yuki-kun wrote:

Mod via pm request~

Modding
Tổng quan
--- Cậu luôn bắt đầu slider dài ở red point trên thanh timing, chính cái này làm cậu bỏ qua rất nhiều vị trí đáng lẽ có hitsound sẽ hay hơn rất nhiều.

Kiai Times: chú ý thống nhất kiai trong toàn bộ diff

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:23:420

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:21:322

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:538, ends on 00:04:643
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:531, ends on 01:04:853
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:04:958, ends on 01:23:420

Hitsounds
Thêm whistle vào sẽ làm cho map tạo cảm hứng hơn đấy. Hơn nữa, toàn bộ map của cậu, hitsound nghe random quá @@

Mod

[Easy]
Thừa timing: 00:17:965 (1) - Cái này không cần vì cậu không có custom finish.
00:38:524 (2,4) - Overlap. Di chuyển cái 4 hoặc cái 2 cho nó tách nhau ra hoặc thay đổi đường đi của 2
00:42:720 (6,7) - Đừng làm cong slider quá thế này, nhìn rất xấu.
00:44:399 (1,2) - Pattern kiểu này thì không đẹp lắm, với cả cậu bỏ qua hơi nhiều hitsound. Chuyển 2 cái slider sau thành như ảnh dưới được không?
00:54:888 (6) - New combo (NC)
01:01:601 (6) - NC
01:02:021 (2) - Cái slider dài này cậu bỏ qua kha khá hitsound đấy.
01:08:315 (6) - NC, mà cái slider này cũng xấu quá.
01:09:993 (8) - Tương tự cái trên, sửa slider đi.
01:13:559 (4) - Bỏ cái clap ở đầu slider đi
01:15:238 (1) - Cái này nữa. Còn nếu muốn giữ thì cho nó sang 01:15:448 -

[Normal]
Cậu lạm dụng slider dài quá nhiều, thành ra map này hitsound bị nghèo nàn quá.
00:08:944 (3) - Di chuyển sang 00:09:154 (3) - Nhớ thay đổi cả vị trí.
00:09:364 (4) - Thu ngắn cái slider lạ và bắt đầu ở 00:09:573 -
00:12:510 (3) - Lùi về 00:12:301 . Nhớ chỉnh vị trí cho phù hợp.
00:41:042 (1) - Stack với 00:39:783 (5) - . Nhưng nhớ là kiểu hidden này sang normal map ko được hay lắm đâu.
00:41:881 (3) - Quay cái slider như thế này đi.
00:44:399 (1,2,3) - Bad flow. Thử xếp kiểu khác đi.
00:57:615 (1) - Clap ở cuối slider.
00:58:035 (2,3,4) - Pattern xấu.

[Hard]
CS: 4

00:07:056 (9) - Stack với 00:06:427 (8) -
00:10:413 (8) - Stack.
00:11:252 (4,5) - Bad flow.
00:19:643 (4,1) - Nguyên đoạn này nghỉ vì lí do gì vậy?
00:27:825 (2,3,4,5) - Bad flow.
00:30:972 (11) - Stack
00:48:594 (6,1,2,3) - Di cái 6 ra chỗ khác đi.
01:06:007 (6) - Bỏ clap đi.
01:07:895 (3) - Clap.

Và chú ý cuối cùng là toàn bộ map nên kết thúc giống nhau.

Good luck~ <3

Cảm ơn. Yuki-kun. Có gì những map típ mod giúp em nữa nhá. ^^
Haya
Yo, modding because you asked me so kindly lol
[General]
Offset is at 00:01:182 -
Slidertickrate 1

[Easy]
00:41:042 (4) - NC
00:46:497 (4) - NC
01:09:573 (2) - Stick with the Distance Snap!
01:16:497 (2) - Too hard for Easy players
01:18:175 (4) - Same here
01:21:741 (1) - Might be too short
01:24:259 (2) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/2vw4e
01:27:196 (2) - Same here just reversed

[Normal]
Circle Size - 1
00:20:483 - Map this part too
00:44:399 (1,2) - Don't let them overlap!
00:50:063 (1) - Too short for beginners
00:51:951 (2) - Stick with the Distance Snap!
01:11:042 (1,2) - Stack them
01:13:140 (6,7,8) - This one is too hard for beginners ._. Just delete the 01:13:769 (7) -
01:21:322 - Insert a note
01:26:357 - ^
01:28:455 (1) - Remove the NC

[Hard]
Circle Size - 1
Overall Difficulty + 1
Even if this is a Hard Difficulty, you should (almost) always use the Distance Snap!
00:02:860 (5) - 2 grids to the right
00:11:881 (5) - Ugly overlap
00:15:238 (5) - Slider doesn't fit here ._. move it two ticks to the right until it starts on the white tick.
00:16:706 (1) - Holy Shit this one is short
00:37:895 (1) - Delete this one. Instead make the stream longer until here 00:37:685 (6) - . Then make a 1/2 slider like this: http://puu.sh/2vwmm
00:41:462 (4) - Overlap
00:53:839 - A triplet fits here
00:58:874 (5) - Overlapping again ~
01:07:266 (9,1,2,3) - Swap those two. http://puu.sh/2vwpf
01:16:706 (4) - Overlap
01:17:965 (3) - Overlap
01:25:098 (5) - Overlap
01:28:035 (4) - Do it the same distance as 01:27:196 (2) -
01:28:455 (1) - Remove NC

There you go ~ Good luck with the map :3
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Haya wrote:

Yo, modding because you asked me so kindly lol
[General]
Offset is at 00:01:182 -
Slidertickrate 1

Modding
[Easy]
00:41:042 (4) - NC
00:46:497 (4) - NC
01:09:573 (2) - Stick with the Distance Snap!
01:16:497 (2) - Too hard for Easy players
01:18:175 (4) - Same here
01:21:741 (1) - Might be too short
01:24:259 (2) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/2vw4e
01:27:196 (2) - Same here just reversed

[Normal]
Circle Size - 1
00:20:483 - Map this part too
00:44:399 (1,2) - Don't let them overlap!
00:50:063 (1) - Too short for beginners
00:51:951 (2) - Stick with the Distance Snap!
01:11:042 (1,2) - Stack them
01:13:140 (6,7,8) - This one is too hard for beginners ._. Just delete the 01:13:769 (7) -
01:21:322 - Insert a note
01:26:357 - ^
01:28:455 (1) - Remove the NC

[Hard]
Circle Size - 1
Overall Difficulty + 1
Even if this is a Hard Difficulty, you should (almost) always use the Distance Snap!
00:02:860 (5) - 2 grids to the right
00:11:881 (5) - Ugly overlap
00:15:238 (5) - Slider doesn't fit here ._. move it two ticks to the right until it starts on the white tick.
00:16:706 (1) - Holy Shit this one is short
00:37:895 (1) - Delete this one. Instead make the stream longer until here 00:37:685 (6) - . Then make a 1/2 slider like this: http://puu.sh/2vwmm
00:41:462 (4) - Overlap
00:53:839 - A triplet fits here
00:58:874 (5) - Overlapping again ~
01:07:266 (9,1,2,3) - Swap those two. http://puu.sh/2vwpf
01:16:706 (4) - Overlap
01:17:965 (3) - Overlap
01:25:098 (5) - Overlap
01:28:035 (4) - Do it the same distance as 01:27:196 (2) -
01:28:455 (1) - Remove NC

There you go ~ Good luck with the map :3
Thanks, Haya-san. updated~
Please sign in to reply.

New reply