1. Hard (4.47 stars, 538 notes)
2. Normal (2.71 stars, 299 notes)

Zweib wrote:

Hi~ From qkenan's queue

only 2 diffs? XD

[General]

Sorry for post so late, due to this map almost perfect.
I cannot find much to mod. Here is just some suggestion.

The hitsound might be too weak, I suggest increasing the volume by 10% Think about it more

[Normal]

AR4 is a little bit hard to read, AR5 is easier. And it makes no change to star difficulty(2.70) hmm.. fixed
00:08:456 (4) - blanket with (3)? not fixed :/

[Hard]

01:48:193 (2) - not symmetrical, move to (404, 76) that doesn't purposed not fixed

01:57:140 (1,2,3) - I think this sounds better. think about it more

SPOILER

04:37:140 (6,7) - ^

04:28:193 (2) - first point to (4, 180) fixed
Good luck for rank thanks xD

neonat wrote:

Normal
I got a little confused when test playing at the start lol >.<
Just suggestions!!
00:05:298 (5) - maybe move it to 00:05:035, but still end at 00:05:825, or same pattern as what is in front of it, slider ( 00:05:035 - 00:05:562 .) circle ( 00:05:825 .). I know you wanted it to be identical to the others, like 00:09:509 (5), but if you hear the song, unlike 00:09:509 (5), the voice does not change tone at 00:05:298, unlike at 00:09:509, which makes that beat more plausible. Does this make sense to you? @@ >.< Great suggestion fixed
00:13:719 (5) - maybe change to a circle at 00:13:456 and a slider from 00:13:983 to 00:14:246 Fixed
02:14:772 (1) - end at 02:16:351? move 02:16:877 (1) to 02:16:614 but it still ends at 02:18:983 only decrease 02:14:772 (1) - this spinner's length

Hard
00:15:035 (2) - how about ending the slider at 00:15:298, remove 00:15:825 (3), add a slider from 00:15:562 - 00:15:825. This way, each slider starts at each new word said.eh... think about it more , not bad

jogfi2002 wrote:

Hello, this is mod from kagami.

[General]
No obvious problems.

[Normal]
00:50:562 (3,4) - Could be replaceed by a 1/1 slider hmm i like this rhythm
01:36:614 (3) - Remove this note, let the spinner starts here think about it more
02:05:298 (2,3) - Replace it like this: Picture ^
02:36:877 (5) - Maybe better to make this reverse slider 1/2 longer. ^

[Hard]
00:14:509 (8,1) - Replace two notes with one slider.current looks fine D:
00:35:298 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is not on the music, try to make slider. you can hear piano sounds on background ;_;
00:37:404 (3) - Put it at the end of the slider, then let the spinner starts here.think about it more :/
01:19:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make it like this could fit the music better: Picture oh yea it's true!
02:12:140 (1,2,3,4) - As I said below. piano sounds
02:48:719 (5,6,7) - Replace it like this: Picture Fixed
03:49:772 (2,3) - A bit confusing, but not big problem./o/

I also tried DT in Hard, can be read easily. lol

A good map! Nice arrangement and interesting.
Feel free to send me PM if you want something.
Hope you good luck!thanks a lot xDD