1. Not Quite (2.15 stars, 193 notes)
2. Saku's Platter (4.99 stars, 567 notes)
3. Very Much (4.7 stars, 372 notes)

1. First of all, your combo colours doesn't with BG and it makes me sad. :<
   
   tryyyy me! try meeee!

   Combo1 : 218,199,184
   Combo2 : 227,221,219

2. Disable audioLeadIn it doesn't make any sense here because mapping starts at 00:05:858 -
3. You Normal-sliderslide is too loud! Try to use silinced one? At least reduce volume of Normal:C1 sampleset >3</
4. Add tags It's Not Me, You because album name is It's Not Me, It's You

1. 00:05:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - uh.. it's kinda hard to read/play and doesn't looks so awesome, try to make a stream here instead!
2. 00:35:396 (5,6,7) - some patterns, eg - this one, are hard to read because of AR7. Try to make them easier to read (they're overlapped with hitbursts, now) or you can use AR 8 here. It's hardest diff in the mapset :3/
3. I don't really understand what's the point of THAT too fast velocity changes. in my opinion , map is much better with x1.2 speed for kiais. Maybe it's just me.
4. Stacks with inconsistent rhythm make players ANGRY - eg 02:05:396 (4,5,1) - too confusing with hidden!
5. 02:17:858 (1,1,1) - circle is covered by spinner's hitburst + appears too soon after spinner. And it looks like spinner spam. o3o/ If it's SO hard to map, start break here? Or map first spinner.

-Bakari- wrote:

LOVE MEEEE~~~ LOVE ME VEEERY VEEERY MUCH~

I don't care if it's not ready. I just want to help you!

[General]

1. First of all, your combo colours doesn't with BG and it makes me sad. :< - Me either. Used.
   
   tryyyy me! try meeee!

   Combo1 : 218,199,184
   Combo2 : 227,221,219

2. Disable audioLeadIn it doesn't make any sense here because mapping starts at 00:05:858 - Right away.
3. You Normal-sliderslide is too loud! Try to use silinced one? At least reduce volume of Normal:C1 sampleset >3</ - I'll re-upload with the silenced sliderslide.And no, I don't think reducing volume works great since even the first slider ( 00:09:550 (1) - ) sounds ugly with it.
4. Add tags It's Not Me, You because album name is It's Not Me, It's You - Done.

[Very Much]

1. 00:05:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - uh.. it's kinda hard to read/play and doesn't looks so awesome, try to make a stream here instead! -It's already a stream, and I do it on purpose to follow the down note of the drum.
2. 00:35:396 (5,6,7) - some patterns, eg - this one, are hard to read because of AR7. Try to make them easier to read (they're overlapped with hitbursts, now) or you can use AR 8 here. It's hardest diff in the mapset :3/ - I've done something ugu. Changed to circle pattern. About AR8, I don't think that'll help much since it'll just increase the star rating.
3. I don't really understand what's the point of THAT too fast velocity changes. in my opinion , map is much better with x1.2 speed for kiais. Maybe it's just me. - It's not that angry I believe. Kiai is not always the answer.
4. Stacks with inconsistent rhythm make players ANGRY - eg 02:05:396 (4,5,1) - too confusing with hidden! - Thank you but no. I think that stack here has the best flow. There are two rhythm option that I think fit with this. One is that I use now, and the second is changing (4) and (5) into a slider. However, If I do the second option, it would break the vocal-following (notice that between 4 and 5 she doesn't hold a note). I know there are some that I tend to do the opposite, but this one looks totally awesome to me.
5. 02:17:858 (1,1,1) - circle is covered by spinner's hitburst + appears too soon after spinner. And it looks like spinner spam. o3o/ If it's SO hard to map, start break here? Or map first spinner. - It's not that hard because I do it on purpose. Also, I forget to do my "usual habit on mapping". I've done something ugu.

Ahh, whatever! I'm here to star it!

Star! ~

Awoken wrote:

Add 15+ Language Warning in description? o3o
Hoping this for rank xD

Garven wrote:

Get more priority so I can nuke please.