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ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Imagery

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HelloSCV
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HelloSCV
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 12월 30일 일요일 at 오전 11:04:25

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Imagery
Source: Touhou
Tags: Ayumi Nomiya W_h_i_t_e
BPM: 142
Filesize: 4842kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.98 stars, 705 notes)
  2. W h i t e's Normal (3.02 stars, 297 notes)
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Imagery
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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11/21 Beatmap uploaded
11/25 W h i t e's Normal was added

Normal = Done ( by W h i t e )
Hard = will be made by Ra-s
Insane = Done ( by HelloSCV )

:D
Last edited by HelloSCV , edited 5 times in total.
echoFX
101 posts
Joined January 2012
echoFX
Like !

I tested W h i t e's Normal and Insane.

The Timing feels good and the Background is good.

Normal have no fail at all. Very nice and clean Mapping. :D

Insane is pretty well mapped. :)

The only thing is the part at 00:40:563 (1) - or 00:52:393 (2) - or 01:09:295 (1) - here the Circles hit on the Lyrics.
Thats ok but i think you can make those parts easyer to read. Cause if you dont know the Song, its a little bit hard to catch.

Maybe put the Circles in a row with very small Grid. So its easyer to see that those Circles are different.


But over all: Great Work! Want to see more! :)

Fynn
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

FynnFTW wrote:

Like !

I tested W h i t e's Normal and Insane.

The Timing feels good and the Background is good.

Normal have no fail at all. Very nice and clean Mapping. :D

Insane is pretty well mapped. :)

The only thing is the part at 00:40:563 (1) - or 00:52:393 (2) - or 01:09:295 (1) - here the Circles hit on the Lyrics.
Thats ok but i think you can make those parts easyer to read. Cause if you dont know the Song, its a little bit hard to catch.

Maybe put the Circles in a row with very small Grid. So its easyer to see that those Circles are different.


But over all: Great Work! Want to see more! :)

Fynn
Fixed little those things :D thank you for suggest and interest
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
Hi~ HelloSCV
Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[General]
브레이크 타임 한군대 더 추가해보시는게 어떨까요? 한군대만 있으니 왠지 길어보이는..
01:51:549 - ~ 02:05:070 -
전체 볼륨 +5%? 소리가 작은 느낌이..

[W h i t e's Normal]
vary good difficulty :D

[Insane]
00:42:253 (1,2,3) - 점프 배치 해보는게 어떨까요? 2번 x152 y80, 3번 x200 y240(슬라이드 그대로 이동)
02:10:774 (6) - 1/2 슬라이드 반복 추가?
02:57:781 (2,3) - 02:58:309 (1,2) - 와 대칭?
01:33:802 (2,3) - 연타넣어보시는 게 어떠신지? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509160
04:07:605 (2,3,4) - 스트림 추가..? (위와 같습니다.)

조언드릴께없네요,, 너무 잘만들으셔서..(역시 굇맵퍼..)
모딩에 도움 되길바랄께요 :(
Ranked Hope!
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

-Kirito wrote:

Hi~ HelloSCV
Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[General]
브레이크 타임 한군대 더 추가해보시는게 어떨까요? 한군대만 있으니 왠지 길어보이는.. Not Fixed
01:51:549 - ~ 02:05:070 -
전체 볼륨 +5%? 소리가 작은 느낌이.. Not Fixed

[W h i t e's Normal]
vary good difficulty :D

[Insane]
00:42:253 (1,2,3) - 점프 배치 해보는게 어떨까요? 2번 x152 y80, 3번 x200 y240(슬라이드 그대로 이동) Fixed
02:10:774 (6) - 1/2 슬라이드 반복 추가? Not Fixed
02:57:781 (2,3) - 02:58:309 (1,2) - 와 대칭? Fixed
01:33:802 (2,3) - 연타넣어보시는 게 어떠신지? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509160 Think abot it more
04:07:605 (2,3,4) - 스트림 추가..? (위와 같습니다.) Think abot it more

조언드릴께없네요,, 너무 잘만들으셔서..(역시 굇맵퍼..) 엌ㅋ 감사합니다!
모딩에 도움 되길바랄께요 :(
Ranked Hope!
좀더 생각을 많이하게된 계기가 됫네요 충분한 도움되엇습니다 다시한번 감사드려요~
echoFX
101 posts
Joined January 2012
echoFX
with those changes... it feels ranked :D *Shoot Star*!
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Thank you for your shiny star!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
from your queue(m4m)
General
probably the spread of diff doesn't Rankable, you should keep the name like "Normal→Hard→Insane" not "Normal→Insane. this mean not to skip the name of diff.
White's Normal
Placement
00:54:506(1,2) swap NC seems more better to fit the vocal.
00:58:732(4) like this? seems nice imo.
SPOILER
02:21:549(4)^
03:43:398(7) maybe like this? it seems more beautiful.
SPOILER
03:54:506(5) this note seems a bit difficult for newbie because of hidden stack. so, you can move this note to 03:54:929' s head. it's easier than current placement imo.
Rhythm
01:41:830(1) a bit soon after a spinner for the easiest diff imo. maybe delete this note?
03:44:788 unnecessary green line.

Insane
this diff should be the "Hard" imo. so maybe AR8 or 7 better or you can make another diff.
Placement
00:23:239(5,6) Ctrl+G? it's more hitable imo
00:29:577(3) make nice blanket?
SPOILER
00:46:478(1) delete NC?
02:14:366(1)^
01:39:718(1,2,3,4) like this? this flow seems more better.
SPOILER
Rhythm
03:44:788 unnecessary green line.
Hit Sonud
00:49:013(1) add finish at head?
02:11:830(1)^
04:11:830(1) delete finish. this back music doesn't hear it.

sorry for short modding, overall fine I suupose. good luck & star~

EDIT sorry for my careless, you can ignore myrequest ><
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 1 time in total.
HelloSCV
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HelloSCV
This is WIP map

i said Hard = will be made by Ra-s :/
anyway thank you for mod~
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