This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 09, 2013 at 5:09:40 PM

Artist: Tada Aoi
Title: Harvest
Source: Rewrite Harvest festa!
Tags: key galgame opening op alacat
BPM: 156
Filesize: 6275kb
Play Time: 04:01
Difficulties Available:

1. alacat's Normal (2.88 stars, 251 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 508 notes)
3. Insane (4.99 stars, 388 notes)

Download: Tada Aoi - Harvest
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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revived
| Mapset |
Normal - alacat
Hard - me
Insane - me (remapping)
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full ver
thanks to Sekai-nyan for allowed me to use her mp3

bmp: 156
offset: 9190
gl

I have -10ms as offset.
BPM: 156,01
Offset: 9180

thank you >w<//

done

http://puu.sh/100vB

yay thank you~
I will finish hard ASAP! 9O`v`O)9

edit: added tags and change combo colours~ please update~

M4M

[Hard]

00:10:728 (1) - distance snap x1.10(?) just my thinking.
00:18:805 (1,2,3,4) - use this beat?
00:56:112 (3) - delete note?
01:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - um... more easliy? it look like so hard in hard diff
02:13:035 (3) - (nazi) move to bottom 2 grid
04:01:303 (3) - (nazi) x 256 y296

[Insane]

00:44:959 (2) - x280 y288
01:41:497 (1) - x344 y124
01:41:497 (1) - ctrl+R(?)
02:55:727 (1) - add NC
02:59:573 (3) - add whistle and 02:59:958 (1,2,4) - remove whistle
03:11:496 (4) - use this slider's shape? 03:10:727 (3) - just imo.. :3
03:34:765 (3) - more move to top? (for increase space each other about 03:34:765 (3,4) - )

good luck~

edit : give my star :p

fixed some, thanks~ :3

m4m :w:
map is moegood.

[Hard]
00:34:959 - move to 00:35:343
00:35:343 - move 00:34:959 :w: http://puu.sh/11kQY
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00:58:420 - 00:58:805 - slider 1x repeat
01:44:381 - remove
01:44:574 - ^
01:44:381 - 01:44:766 - slider, make it like 01:46:112 - 01:46:497

[Insane]
found nothin wrong :w:

[alaneko's normal]
00:50:920 - note
00:51:112 - remove
00:51:497 - move to 00:51:305
01:14:958 - note
01:17:266 - 01:17:651 - slider
01:18:035 - note
01:43:804 - remove, note
01:44:574 - move to 01:44:189
01:44:958 - 01:45:343 - slider
02:00:343 - move to 02:00:150
02:01:496 - move to 02:01:304

[General]
01:18:420 - maybe make kiai end here? o_o

[Normal]
サビを中心にfinish不足でちょっと盛りあがりに欠けるような気もする
個人的に追加して欲しい所↓

01:16:689 - ここ音欲しいと思います　starrating上がっちゃうけどこんな感じの方が良いと思う
http://puu.sh/11dqR
02:38:227 - clap外した方が鳴り方が美しい
02:39:958 (1) - アクセントが赤線なので赤線からstartでいいかなこれは
02:57:842 (4) - 単発に変更？　静かなpartなのでややovermap気味に聞こえる
03:01:304 (1) - これは白線からstart
03:04:381 (1) - ＾　それと終点は03:07:265 - の方が適切
04:01:496 (1) - こっちは赤線


[Hard]
00:09:574 (2) - maybe move this note downward?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420588
00:10:536 (5,1) - why is a jump here? x_x
00:14:382 (2,3) - make jump here for consistency with 00:11:689 (3,4) -
00:15:920 - the cymbal in the music is much lower than 00:15:343 - , so reduce volume here too?
00:16:882 - too many whistles this section.... maybe sounds better if remove from here~
00:17:651 - ^
00:20:920 - add whistle here instead of whistle at the end to follow the piano sound better?
00:27:266 (4) - volume is too loud, i'd suggest 50% or so~
00:33:420 (4) - ^
00:43:612 (2) - whistle on slider body sounds noisy to me
01:36:497 (4) - ^^
01:42:650 (4) - ^
02:03:804 (7) - make same shape as (6)?
03:01:496 (1) - end the spinner at 03:03:035 - ? i think its more suitable place to stop spinner because of the piano sound
03:18:419 (1) - i think finish is too loud here.. maybe clap instead?
03:49:284 (1) - should end at 03:51:303 -

[Insane]
00:12:651 (2) - nazi* considering (1)'s place, this note should be placed rightward to match it with (3)'s shape
00:15:920 - same as Hard, consider lowering volume here~
00:22:266 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/11m8u maybe bigger spacing here?
00:27:266 - too loud imo o_o
00:33:420 - ^
00:48:612 (7) -inconsistant with 01:58:035 (7) - .. it'd be better to add spinner here too
01:02:843 (6,1) - newcombo on redtick is better here(and looks better due to stacking) like 0:50:535 (1) -
01:36:497 - can you reduce volume a bit
01:42:650 - ^
01:58:131 (1) - end at 01:59:381 - instead? the heavier bass sound is good place to end it~
03:49:284 (1) - same as hard~
03:54:765 - add a note here to vollow bass? ;_;

that's it~
good luck!

>_Ryuu
Thanks modding:3

>Melophobia

finish ありがとうございました！

Thanks modding !

http://puu.sh/11oic

thank you all~ :3
updated~

From ★ ~ K & D Modding Queue ~ ★
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alacat's Normal

03:01:496 (1) -Use a Inherited Point with 0% Volume to silence this slider. I think it's better so.
03:04:573 (1) - Same here as above.

Hard

Your combos are a bit too short for Hard and they don't fit to the beat or to her voice.

00:13:805 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:18:228 (5) - New Combo
00:18:805 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:112 (1) - ^
00:29:189 (1) - ^
00:35:343 (1) - ^
00:55:535 (1) - ^
00:56:497 (4) - New Combo
00:56:882 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:07:458 (1) - Make this more symmetrical
01:07:458 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:08:228 (3) - Also more symmetrical
01:08:805 (4) - New Combo
01:09:189 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:19:958 (1) - ^
01:35:343 (1) - ^
01:41:304 (4,5,1) - Remove this stack or just make it less heavy because it doesn't fit.
02:04:381 (1) - Remove NC
02:05:727 (5) - New Combo
02:06:112 (1) - Remove NC
02:12:458 (1) - Remove NC
02:13:612 (4) - New Combo
02:18:035 (8) - New Combo
02:18:419 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:20:535 (2,3,4) - mhh a bit confusing :S
02:32:073 (5) - New Combo
02:32:266 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:073 (6) - New Combo
02:37:265 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:39:573 (7) - New Combo
03:09:188 (1) - Remove NC
04:01:496 (1) - Add Hitsound here?

That's it.
Contact me Ingame if you have any questions!

sorry I'm not follow the combo suggestion ><
I try to make combo consistent and some rhythm in bg music..
other than that was fix~ thanks for mod :3~

hi from #modreq
General
love this song 3==
Normal
Placement
00:50:920(2) 音取りと配置の提案です
Rythem
00:39:382(4,1) 赤線のボーカルを拾ってみては？
00:45:920 ボーカルが強いので　noteを置いてみては？
02:00:150 ^
02:26:496(2,3) 以下の様な音取りはどうですか？
02:59:958(2) 一つ前の赤線(02:59:765)から始めてみては？
Hit Sonud
01:55:150(1) 始点のwhistle→finish ( 00:46:112ではfinishだったので、合わせた方が？）

Hard
Rythem
00:56:112(3) delete a note?
03:03:419(1) delete this note and make spinner longer 03:03:419?
Hit Sonud
01:55:343(3) remove whistle at the head and add finish? ( you already used this as 00:46:112)

Insane
Rythem
02:31:881 add a note?
03:08:419~ space? you already placed notes in Hard diff, so I think you can put some note this part like this.

sorry for poor English and modding. I can't find problems on your mapset
good luck and star~

hi-hi~ as requested. ok. i think i won't find anything wrong here

[alacat's Normal]
04:01:303 (1) - try to end it at 04:04:573 (to keep consistency with other diffs)

don't kd this

oh.. Yasora is so pro

thank you all~ fixed some~
I will give kd if alacat using your mod, bakari~

>kajiyatta , Deni

kajiyatta wrote:

Hit Sonud
01:55:150(1) 始点のwhistle→finish ( 00:46:112ではfinishだったので、合わせた方が？） fixed !! ><

Thanks modding :3

>-Bakari-

fixed ></

Thanks ^^

http://puu.sh/12oui

From the queue..
I'm a newbie at modding XP so bear with me.
If not helpful, don't give me kds..

[General]
If you are not planning to insert a storyboard, delete .osb file.
I think the mapset would be better if the hard diff is around 4.0~4.2 stars.
[alacat's Normal]
00:49:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here is confusing imo.
00:53:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:06:881 (2,3,4) - ^
01:59:189 (1) - The rhythm for this combo is confusing imo.
03:21:304 (1) - ^
03:36:496 (5) - Add note?

[Hard]
00:11:689 (3,4) - Better to keep the distance here imo.
00:14:382 (2,3) - ^
02:11:881 (2) - Add repeat?
03:34:957 (1,2,3) - Keep consistent spacing: it definitely looks like 1 and 2 are further away compare to 2 and 3.

[Insane]
00:27:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi. if possible, better pentagon?
00:56:882 (1,2) - 2nd slider follows more the arc of 1st slider?
01:37:266 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmmm I think you can make the arrangement neater..
03:27:650 (1,2) - if possible, perfect symmetry of these sliders?

Good luck~ and star~

thank you ~ fixed think in insane :3

>Akashi_S

sry , no change >_< Thanks

mod req from Scorpiour's Queue.
what an awesome beatmap so hard to modOAO☆
here's a little suggestions OAO

[General]

1. Remove all bookmarks

[alacat's Normal]

1. 01:05:343 (3) - +clap
2. 02:14:573 (4) - ^
3. 04:01:303 (1) - remove whistle

[Hard]

1. 03:00:342 (2,3) - remove whistle(?
2. 03:48:996 (5) - why normal hitsound here? i'm wondering if here is a soft-whistle
3. 03:56:880 (1) - add finish at start

[Insane]

1. 01:41:400 (4) - delete(?
2. 04:01:303 (3) - spinner should start at here (?

GL
long live Rewrite

Hi, Yasora-chan

My mod from your request






That's all that I can find them.
Nice map and moe song, give a star

Good luck~

thank you all~
fixed some :3

Hey Yasora >w< Request from my queue~

[General]

1. fine

[Hard]

1. 00:11:882 (4) - (nazi) why change DS?
2. 01:21:112 (4) - change to a slider and end at 01:21:497 - (finish at the end)
3. 01:40:535 (2) - Try this to make more blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:23:419 (6) - put on x:412, y:260 to make more blanket
5. 03:54:380 (3) - why change DS D:?

I've checked Normal and anything is well imo I think this will be bubbled... 3 days later? or less? xD

good luck~

Thanks modding~^^

http://puu.sh/139xI

thanks for mod~
fixed something :3

Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

Insane

That's all :3

k fixed that part but in another way
thank you~

We shouldn't allow Yasora for posting great maps on queues

Yasora posts autorank maps orz

hi yasora~

[Insane]
General: nice and clean, mention somethin...i found that drum hitsound pack is nice to use in this song, if you wanna make some changes? donno ._.

00:23:805 (3) - i prefer delete last repeat and end it white tick, this allow some calm down before the lyrics actually start and the effect is quite awesome
00:35:920 (4,1) - this makes the flow not so good to me, DT players may be annoyed
00:49:958 (1,2,3) - instead of bigger spacing i feel like places before kiai should be smaller spacing , this, more ...calm? in contrast that makes kiai feel more exciting :3
00:53:420 (5) - tail finish
00:53:805 (1) - break in to 1 note + slider? cause when the lyrics start in the middle of slider....well, does sound not so comfortable to me
01:21:112 (4) - volume 60 or less
01:44:574 (1) - ctrl+R? right now head is covered a little by combo burst, and it flows better for me ctrl+R
01:58:131 (1) - silence this spinner
02:02:843 (1) - head finish
02:24:189 (9,1) - swap finish? i mean finish in 9's tail
03:00:150 (2,5) - delete whistle (feels a bit spamming haha)
03:01:111 - silence tail?
03:51:496 - silence


wow this song is very nice!

cant find stuff in Hard and Easy, gambateh and good luck on ranking this.
can i request a mod from you?

fixed some
thanks for mod~

random mod ~

[alacat's normal]
01:07:458 maybe move to 01:07:266
01:32:651 add circle and clap
02:16:689 move to 02:16:496
02:21:881 add circle

[Hard]
00:16:497 maybe Ctrl+G
01:47:650 add circle
02:19:573 Ctrl+G
03:20:534 make end to 03:20:150 to make same as her voice

Insane is okay
sorry just small mod that i can give to you
good luck alacat and yasora

ty modding ~

http://puu.sh/1ouH2

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