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Megpoid GUMI - Chocolate

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Topic Starter
Chewin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 8 settembre 2012 at 19:37:11

Artist: Megpoid GUMI
Title: Chocolate
Source: otetsu
Tags: Vocaloid Vocaloid2 cRyo cRyo[iceeicee] Reisen Udongein -kevincela- OnosakiHito
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3608kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chocolate (4,96 stars, 649 notes)
  2. cRyo's Hard (4,95 stars, 362 notes)
  3. -kevincela-'s Easy (3,1 stars, 145 notes)
  4. Normal (4,2 stars, 198 notes)
  5. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,78 stars, 888 notes)
  6. Reisen's Insane (5 stars, 580 notes)
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Chocolate
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Who wants chocolate? <3
Awesome song *-* I love Gumi :3

Chocolate diff: 100%
Normal: 100%
Easy: 100% By -kevincela-
Taiko: 100% By OnosakiHito
Reisen's Insane: 100% By Reisen Udongein
cRyo's Hard: 100% By cRyo[iceeicee]

Finally moved to pending, ready for mod and changed BGs! 08/18/2012
MP3 From: s/26652
Reisen Udongein
Can i make a diff you want :3?
Topic Starter
Chewin

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Can i make a diff you want :3?
Aw which diff?
Reisen Udongein

Chewin wrote:

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Can i make a diff you want :3?
Aw which diff?
Maybe easy or hard or insane are good to me
Topic Starter
Chewin
You can make an easy or insane, choose it <3
Reisen Udongein

Chewin wrote:

You can make an easy or insane, choose it <3
Insane will be more fun to map! I'll take insane <3
Topic Starter
Chewin
Okay, make it awesome <3
Mirage
IRC mod, will post log in a bit.
Topic Starter
Chewin

Maddy wrote:

IRC mod, will post log in a bit.
SPOILER
12:16 <Maddy> : intanto HP8 è troppo alto imo
12:16 <Maddy> : HR non so se tiene
12:17 <Chewin> : Cavoli di chi usa hr .w.
12:17 <Maddy> : no asp
12:18 <Maddy> : tiene perfettamente
12:18 <Chewin> : si D: la giocò maid lol
12:18 <Maddy> : 00:17:634 (1) - questa NC non ha senso
12:18 <Maddy> : mettila sul 5 o il 7 di prima
12:18 <Maddy> : :C
12:19 <Chewin> : okay
12:19 <Chewin> : messa sul 7
12:19 <Maddy> : 00:42:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
12:19 <Maddy> : un pattern troppo lunga
12:19 <Maddy> : aggiungi una NC?
12:19 <Maddy> : o*
12:20 <Chewin> : ma dove lo vedi 10? rofl
12:20 <Chewin> : ah k
12:20 <Maddy> : LOL
12:20 <Chewin> : done
12:21 <Maddy> : 01:04:717 (1,2,3) - Qua dovresti mettere le note anche sui red tick
12:21 <Maddy> : se metti i jump sarebbe molto + figa
12:21 <Chewin> : nah
12:22 <Maddy> : ok
12:23 <Chewin> : va bene cosi posto il log
12:23 <Maddy> : ma nu
12:23 <Maddy> : asp
12:23 <Maddy> : lol
12:23 <Chewin> : k
12:24 <Maddy> : 01:59:384 (1) - NON HAI MAPPATO IL BASSO
12:24 <Maddy> : WTF
12:24 <Maddy> : sarebbe una figata con degli sliders
12:24 <Maddy> : =_=
12:24 <Chewin> : no D:
12:24 <Maddy> : vbb
12:24 <Maddy> : thats all
12:24 <Maddy> : xD
12:24 <Chewin> : ty :3
12:24 <Maddy> : BG color hai messo nero?
12:25 <Maddy> : togli letterbox during breaks
12:25 <Chewin> : si
12:25 <Maddy> : che il break è piccolissimo
12:25 <Chewin> : k

Updated thanks maddy
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko diff. finished, hopw you like it!
Download: http://puu.sh/F2nI (yei for 888 notes)
Topic Starter
Chewin
Just awesome.

Thanks ono *__*
Milkshake
chocolate ga tabetai dareka kudasai
\o\

moe chewin
-kevincela-
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Chocolate!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52557
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 87051
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chocolate
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Vocaloid
Tags:

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"eadf65f3-c1e3-4984-a179-4fe92f464846.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,65583,75157
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
718,333.333333333333,4,2,0,50,1,0
1384,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
52717,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
63384,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
87384,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
97967,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
98051,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
108717,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 98,49,49
Combo3 : 183,183,183
Combo4 : 219,114,254
Combo5 : 255,0,0
Combo6 : 234,88,0

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Topic Starter
Chewin
pro °w° updated
Reisen Udongein
http://puu.sh/IaCs Completed :3
Topic Starter
Chewin

Reisen Udongein wrote:

http://puu.sh/IaCs Completed :3
Updated! But.. you mapped the 1.50x part too hard <.<
Okay, updated.
Topic Starter
Chewin
Working on the hard atm. çç'
lolcubes
I like chocolate.
Stefan
huuurrr huuuurrrrr finally someone for a Re-Map :3
Topic Starter
Chewin
Hi Stefan, thank you for the star ♥
I will move it in pending beatmaps when the hard is completed!
Topic Starter
Chewin
Finally moved to pending and ready for mod! >w<
threenash
Great Insanes guys, fun and challenging. Really nice. :D

Now Chewin give me my banana ring for our wedding. <3
Topic Starter
Chewin
Oh my.. banana.
Mirage
Mod requested by you.

Easy
  1. 00:51:384 (6,7) - This sounds bad, try http://puu.sh/WLMS
  2. 01:24:384 (4) - Remove this note, there is no need for it in an easy. (And because of consistency with the pauses before)
Very nice difficulty.

Normal
  1. 00:02:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All these beats are placed bad, they have to be on the previous red tick o.0 (even if it's a normal).
    This applies to every part that has this kind of pattern.
  2. 00:12:051 (4) - 1 grid left
  3. 00:20:717 (1,2,3) - This spacing is pretty bad for a Normal.
  4. 00:22:051 (4,5,6) - This is kind of weird after the previous pattern...
  5. 00:49:384 (4) - New combo
  6. 00:50:717 (5) - Dont overlap on the next slider and add a note on the white tick. http://puu.sh/WLTQ
  7. 01:03:051 (1) - Remove new combo for the next beat problem.
  8. 01:03:884 (2) - New combo.
  9. 01:04:717 (1) - No need for newcombo anymore.
  10. 01:10:718 (4) - As previously. 1 grid right.
  11. 01:22:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Red tick please ._.
  12. 01:31:384 (3) - I hate nazi modding but... xD
  13. 01:39:051 (3) - Just use another repeat, remember that its a normal.
  14. 01:43:717 (2) - ^
  15. 01:53:384 (4) - 1 grid right.
  16. 01:59:051 (5) - Add slider http://puu.sh/WLW3
A bit chaotic diff, but it's ok.

Hard

  1. 00:17:217 (6) - This slider has less repeats than the next one and it will be hard to recognize so I suggest the following pattern: http://puu.sh/WLYY
    It's a lot better.
  2. 01:22:051 (3) - I suggest new combo on this one rather than on the beginning of the triple.
  3. 01:30:717 (4) - New combo on this one and add a note on 01:31:217 (5) - right at the center of the playground.
  4. 01:58:551 (4) - Same problem as before. Make a triple.
Cool diff.

Insane
  1. Remove letterbox.
  2. 00:07:384 (3) - New combo here instead of triple, I'd say, but you made everything your way, so you can leave it.
  3. 00:50:717 (2) - New combo.
  4. 00:51:051 (3) - ^
  5. 01:01:551 (6) - Please try avoiding this :X
  6. 01:22:717 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. 01:24:051 (1) - ^
  8. 01:34:049 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
  9. 01:38:051 (1) - If I'm not wrong all the other diffs begin with a red combo? Put red please.
  10. 01:47:967 (3,4) - I don't think it fits, try putting a normal slider for 2 ticks.
Looks like a fun difficulty, but it has too many overlaps.

Chocolate
  1. 00:19:384 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo spam is unnecessary because there are no spacing problems, don't put it just because "it looks cool".
  2. 00:51:717 (6,1,1) - New combo on (6) and remove all the other combos. Same as before ^
  3. 01:15:384 (3,4) - Bad spacing.
  4. 01:28:049 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
Please fix these things, its a good map.

Oh, nice BG.
Phish_old
1st mod? ;_;
just some suggestions, mapset looks kinda perfect D: i hate it when they need mods for already rankable maps
i really love the mapset and the insanes have great playflow, they're rly fun to play, but i don't like the copy paste thingys :c

Folder looks fine!

[Normal]
> i think the hitsounds are awesome, but maybe 50% is a little bit too low :0 increase all sections with 10-20?
00:07:051 - add note?
00:12:717 (1) - instead of putting a clap on the reverse arrow, i would clap the end of the slider, also the ends of this sliders: 00:13:384 (2) - , 00:14:051 (3) -
00:52:717 - please use more claps for kiai time D:
01:11:384 (1,2,3) - this is the same part as 00:12:717 (1), same thing with the claps pls :3
01:48:717 - 3rd time copy pasted part ._.
02:01:051 (2) - clap? 02:01:384 (3) - finish?
nice diff!

[Chocolate]
> same as in normal, i think the hitsounds could be louder ;_;
00:06:717 (5) - clap
00:08:717 (3,6,1) - ^
00:14:050 (3,6,1) - ^
00:19:884 (1) - move to x384 y272 ?
00:48:551 - put a circle on the sliderend?
00:51:551 (4,5,6,1,1) - don't like this :x
00:57:551 (7,8) - this is unfitting and weird to play :0 why not just a circle and start the stack on a regular white tick?
01:04:551 - delete note
01:04:717 (1,2,3) - claps here and add note 01:04:884 - here and 01:05:217 - here D:
01:07:384 (3,6,1) - claps
01:12:717 (3,6,1) - ^
01:21:551 (5,6) - we had that before..
01:32:217 (7,8) - ^ :x
01:37:467 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i know the next part is speed up, but please don't make different streamspacing in 1 stream
01:42:884 (5,6) - even if it fits to the song, i still dont like this
02:01:384 (3) - clap/finish?
veeery nice diff, the playflow is soo sexy n_n good work!

[cRyo's Hard]
> this is such a nice diff, but i would'nt think it's a hard.. it's.. nearly insane.. how do you like 'Hyper'? would fit better <3
00:19:551 - , 00:19:884 - , 00:20:051 (3) - i know there are whistles, but i fell in love with those custom claps, so pls claps here :D
00:42:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - i interpret this as a stream ;_; maybe kinda hard to read for hard diff (haha that sentence..)
00:52:551 - add note?
01:37:884 - i totally like how the colours change ;_; it's so beautiful.. didn't even notice it in Normal and Chocolate..
awesome diff! as i said, i can't really find any issues, these are just suggestions, you can ignore everything if you want xD

[Reisen's Insane]
00:16:384 (8) - NC here and delete NC 00:16:717 (1) - there?
00:17:217 (4) - clap?
00:25:384 (3,4,5,6) - never seen something like this anywhere o,o but it feels nice to play
00:31:884 (4) - this slider does not fit somehow, maybe try this:

00:54:884 (7,9) - this whistles are a lil bit pushy :0 maybe delete (7) whistle?
01:00:217 (7,9) - ^
01:17:551 - y is there no clap?
01:24:884 - ^
01:29:550 (7) - delete whistle pls
01:32:217 (6) - ^
01:34:883 (7) - ^
02:01:384 (3) - any hitsound? :D

This mapset is sooo great o,o go go rank, totally worth a star ~*
Topic Starter
Chewin

Maddy wrote:

Mod requested by you.

Normal
  1. 00:02:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All these beats are placed bad, they have to be on the previous red tick o.0 (even if it's a normal).
    This applies to every part that has this kind of pattern. Sono ok in questo modo invece, sennò dovrei modificare tutta la mappa, come ad esempio anche qui 00:12:717 (1) e nelle altre parti. Sto seguendo un ritmo 1/1 quindi va bene
  2. 00:12:051 (4) - 1 grid left k
  3. 00:20:717 (1,2,3) - This spacing is pretty bad for a Normal. Non è la difficoltà più facile, sto usando distance snap con una SV bassa, quindi è ok e specialmente uniforme s:
  4. 00:22:051 (4,5,6) - This is kind of weird after the previous pattern... nope o.o
  5. 00:49:384 (4) - New combo k
  6. 00:50:717 (5) - Dont overlap on the next slider and add a note on the white tick. http://puu.sh/WLTQ Aggiunto circle ma tenuto l'overlap
  7. 01:03:051 (1) - Remove new combo for the next beat problem. nope
  8. 01:03:884 (2) - New combo. no, vedi che sto seguendo vocal
  9. 01:04:717 (1) - No need for newcombo anymore. ^ nuovo ritmo
  10. 01:10:718 (4) - As previously. 1 grid right. k
  11. 01:22:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Red tick please ._. why, 1/1 con 1/2 sliders che seguono la musica è ok :\
  12. 01:31:384 (3) - I hate nazi modding but... xD
  13. 01:39:051 (3) - Just use another repeat, remember that its a normal. Ma non la difficoltà più facile
  14. 01:43:717 (2) - ^ ^
  15. 01:53:384 (4) - 1 grid right. k
  16. 01:59:051 (5) - Add slider http://puu.sh/WLW3 why, no D:
A bit chaotic diff, but it's ok.

Insane
  1. Remove letterbox. fixed
  2. 01:34:049 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). fixed


    Chocolate
    1. 00:19:384 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo spam is unnecessary because there are no spacing problems, don't put it just because "it looks cool". it looks cool [cit] sorry
    2. 00:51:717 (6,1,1) - New combo on (6) and remove all the other combos. Same as before ^ No, I like this pattern.. C'è anche una logica in questo pattern, ovvero qui ho usato uno spacing particolare e quindi per avvertire che non è più un 1/4 ma un 1/2 ho usato le combo
    3. 01:15:384 (3,4) - Bad spacing. ok
    4. 01:28:049 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). ok
Please fix these things, its a good map.

Oh, nice BG. yea
Thank you my luv ♥
Topic Starter
Chewin

Dick wrote:

1st mod? ;_;
just some suggestions, mapset looks kinda perfect D: i hate it when they need mods for already rankable maps
i really love the mapset and the insanes have great playflow, they're rly fun to play, but i don't like the copy paste thingys :c I don't like it too but I'm too lazy çç

Folder looks fine!

[Normal]
> i think the hitsounds are awesome, but maybe 50% is a little bit too low :0 increase all sections with 10-20? I'm just keeping consistency with other diffs çwç And mh, I think it's fine in this way too :3
00:07:051 - add note? Nah, because a circle should be on 00:06:884 to fit the finish hitsound from the BG music but I didn't add it to make the diff easier to play. I think that adding a 1/1 circle as you suggested me isn't a good idea, it breaks the flow with the song
00:12:717 (1) - instead of putting a clap on the reverse arrow, i would clap the end of the slider, also the ends of this sliders: 00:13:384 (2) - , 00:14:051 (3) - Awesome *-* With this suggestion I added claps on 00:15:384 (1,2,3) too! Thanks u3u
00:52:717 - please use more claps for kiai time D: I agree with this >w< Added claps, thanks!
01:11:384 (1,2,3) - this is the same part as 00:12:717 (1), same thing with the claps pls :3 yes fixed
01:48:717 - 3rd time copy pasted part ._.
02:01:051 (2) - clap? 02:01:384 (3) - finish? h yes
nice diff!

[Chocolate]
> same as in normal, i think the hitsounds could be louder ;_; same reply xD
00:06:717 (5) - clap k
00:08:717 (3,6,1) - ^ Awesome!
00:14:050 (3,6,1) - ^ ^
00:19:884 (1) - move to x384 y272 ? nu
00:48:551 - put a circle on the sliderend? nah i'm following a low rhythm here
00:51:551 (4,5,6,1,1) - don't like this :x I like it D:
00:57:551 (7,8) - this is unfitting and weird to play :0 why not just a circle and start the stack on a regular white tick? Test more and more times, and it is really ok to play and read
01:04:551 - delete note nah
01:04:717 (1,2,3) - claps here and add note 01:04:884 - here and 01:05:217 - here D: added claps but no circles
01:07:384 (3,6,1) - claps Yea çç
01:12:717 (3,6,1) - ^ ^
01:21:551 (5,6) - we had that before.. Same.. tested more times and it's ok
01:32:217 (7,8) - ^ :x ^
01:37:467 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i know the next part is speed up, but please don't make different streamspacing in 1 stream I did it on purpouse, it's cool in this way o.o
01:42:884 (5,6) - even if it fits to the song, i still dont like this sorry ;_; I have no problem to play this
02:01:384 (3) - clap/finish? finish
veeery nice diff, the playflow is soo sexy n_n good work! Thank you :3

This mapset is sooo great o,o go go rank, totally worth a star ~*
Very useful modding!
Thank you really much dude :3 It helped me a lot :3 Updated!
cRyo[iceeicee]
Maddy

Maddy wrote:

  1. 00:17:217 (6) - This slider has less repeats than the next one and it will be hard to recognize so I suggest the following pattern: http://puu.sh/WLYY
    It's a lot better. hmm, if i used this 2 sliders in the middle of pattern that would be quite confusing or i used long one first, but this plays fine since last slider is ending pattern part, so player simply will hold it until he didnt see other notes, and time limit between this slider and next note is quite big, so dont see any confusing stuff here o:
  2. 01:22:051 (3) - I suggest new combo on this one rather than on the beginning of the triple. stacks with different colors doesnt make any sense for me .x.
  3. 01:30:717 (4) - New combo on this one and add a note on 01:31:217 (5) - right at the center of the playground. it was intended to make pattern *little bit easier* also this perfectly following vocal.
  4. 01:58:551 (4) - Same problem as before. Make a triple. :o
Cool diff. thx~ :>
Dick

Dick wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]
> this is such a nice diff, but i would'nt think it's a hard.. it's.. nearly insane.. how do you like 'Hyper'? would fit better <3 idk i will leave it to Chewin www
00:19:551 - , 00:19:884 - , 00:20:051 (3) - i know there are whistles, but i fell in love with those custom claps, so pls claps here :D added but little bit different way :3
00:42:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - i interpret this as a stream ;_; maybe kinda hard to read for hard diff (haha that sentence..) i was thinking the same, probably will use 0.0x stack or will change pattern if other moders will point at this
00:52:551 - add note? i feels like it plays better without this note o:
01:37:884 - i totally like how the colours change ;_; it's so beautiful.. didn't even notice it in Normal and Chocolate.. copied from Chewin www
awesome diff! as i said, i can't really find any issues, these are just suggestions, you can ignore everything if you want xD thank you ✿
Thx for mods :>

---> Chewin ST-2 for both insanes ? cause in music clap sound correctly appears in the middle of the long sliders
http://puu.sh/WN4K
Topic Starter
Chewin

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

---> Chewin ST-2 for both insanes ? cause in music clap sound correctly appears in the middle of the long sliders
http://puu.sh/WN4K
No or I have to fix all sliders ç_ç
About the diff's name I will keep as it is now. Hyper is used in a different mapset songs.
Updated! :3
-kevincela-
Ti lascio la libertà di fixare la mia diff se non l'hai fatto,visto che in questi giorni sto su un pc che non ha osu xD
Topic Starter
Chewin

-kevincela- wrote:

Ti lascio la libertà di fixare la mia diff se non l'hai fatto,visto che in questi giorni sto su un pc che non ha osu xD
Dopo controllo allora, grazie per avermi avvertito xD
Reisen Udongein
Gonna fix my diff 1~2 days later and edit this post. (bcuz new semester begins , can't turn my computer on frequently x_x)

oh and, take my star too
Topic Starter
Chewin
Okay, and thank you for the star bro ♥
crabovan
Hello, I from you modding queue. (mod4mod)

Chocolate

Here is lot a copypaste, why? :c Make this diff more originally, remap copypaste perts!
Dat sharp switches of DS disturb me. VERY disturb. Maybe you reduce their number?

00:14:550 (7) - Move little left, because it's have little discrepancy with 00:13:217 (5,6).
00:15:717 (2,3) - Maybe better move away 2 from 3?
00:19:384 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make a star from this.
00:22:967 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe Ctrl+C 00:22:967 (4,5) and make 6,7 symmetrycally to 4,5? And then move 00:23:384 (1) nearer to 7.
00:39:717 (2) - Move little right and up, because it's have little discrepancy with start of 00:38:384 (2).
00:46:384 (4,5,6) - Make from that part this.
00:48:051 (3) - You can move it to the 00:46:384 (4).
00:51:717 (6,1,1) - Too sharp switch of DS.
01:13:217 (7) - Move little left and up, because it's have little discrepancy with 01:11:884 (5,6).

Reisen's Insane

Like your mapping style. <3
Diff are fine, it's nothing to mod here. Checked.

cRyo's Hard

Your maps I like too. <3

00:33:551 (6,7) - You can make this.
01:06:051 (1) - Maybe move to x:200 y:328?
02:00:717 (1,2) - Delete soft-whistles from red ticks.

That's all now. All what I can say about Chocolate diff:
-More creativity.
-Less copypaste.
I say this to half of all mappers, lol.
Wait for your mod. :3
Topic Starter
Chewin
Fixed some stuff and edited copy pasted part.
Thank you °ç°
Poggo
Hi hi ^^

Insane

00:06:717 - http://puu.sh/X77f it's sounds better
01:21:634(4,6) - delete this notes, not sound here
01:38:051 - here put volume 70%
01:41:384(4,5,6) - stack better
02:00:717 - here better put speed 1.5 or 1.25 it will be more effectively

Normal

00:08:717(3,4) - stack better
01:07:384(3,4) - ^
01:50:051(3,4) - ^
00:29:217 - add note here, sounds better

copypast frrrr looks boringly

Chocolate

00:26:717(3) - http://puu.sh/X7mk
00:34:717(3) - ^
00:41:801 - add note and add claps on all notes in this stream (without note 1 with finish on big white tick)

again copypast... no comments~

good luck~
Topic Starter
Chewin
So nazi °ç°
Thank you anyways, fixed some. (:
pyransc
Sorry i cant find anything. Your map is to good. Only this:

[easy]
00:41:051 - add slider, end at 00:41:384, delete circle at 00:41:384
01:00:717 (1) - finish on first circle?
01:27:384 (1) - ^
01:32:717 (1) - ^
01:35:384 (1) - ^
01:40:717 (1) - ^

[normal]
00:12:051 (4) - whistle
00:14:717 (4) - ^
00:17:384 (4) - ^

[hard]

01:41:384 (4) - http://puu.sh/X8Kd
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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General

Sorry I couldn't find much, they are both good maps! :oops:

-kevincela-'s Easy

00:40:384 (2,3) - Stacks could be too difficult for beginner!
00:51:384 (6) - New Combo
01:48:717 (1) - I don't think this circle fits in here, and why New Combo?
01:47:384 (4) - Maybe delete slider and replace it with a spinner to 01:48:717 and a Inhertied Point with the Volume you want?

Normal

00:50:717 (2,3,1) - This stack could be too difficult for Normal.
01:04:717 (1) - Remove New Combo
-kevincela-
Sorry,no fix for both the mods. :(
wmfchris
- You can compress the size of the background images a bit.

[Taiko]
- The taiko BG does not look very good as the face is partially "cut". You can move the pic up a bit.
01:59:551 - I would still prefer putting nothing here so promote the breaking effect, otherwise you can simply stream it through without 1/1 break.

I don't have much to point out as you followed the drum closely.
Alltur
From the queue..

My modding's not good sorry XP..

[General]
Check AIMod for spacing infringements if the inconsistent spacing is not intended for easy~normal diffs.

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
I hope the end part is mapped also (it's mapable imo.)
00:58:051 (1) - same vertical position as 00:56:717 (3) <y=196>
00:59:051 (2,3) - if you applied the mod above, check spacing.

[Normal]
Fine.

Unable to mod 4.50+ star rating

[chocolate]
01:02:884 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - stream rather than stack? too many stacked circles imo.

good map~ star :D
Topic Starter
Chewin
I think the spacing in the normal is ok.. I don't need to check it with AIMod D:
Thank you anyways for your mod and star :)
Reisen Udongein

Maddy wrote:

Mod requested by you.

Insane
  1. 00:07:384 (3) - New combo here instead of triple, I'd say, but you made everything your way, so you can leave it. - I'll leave it :3
  2. 00:50:717 (2) - New combo. - ^
  3. 00:51:051 (3) - ^ -^
  4. 01:01:551 (6) - Please try avoiding this :X - think it's okay ;3
  5. 01:22:717 (1) - Remove new combo. - for not being confusing sliders, i'll leave these
  6. 01:24:051 (1) - ^ -^
  7. 01:47:967 (3,4) - I don't think it fits, try putting a normal slider for 2 ticks. - considering :3
thanks maddy :D/

Dick wrote:

[Reisen's Insane]
00:16:384 (8) - NC here and delete NC 00:16:717 (1) - there? - i'll leave this since it looks good to me :3
00:17:217 (4) - clap? - i think it is little bit weird :3
00:25:384 (3,4,5,6) - never seen something like this anywhere o,o but it feels nice to play - thanks <3
00:31:884 (4) - this slider does not fit somehow, maybe try this: - i followed vocal there :3

00:54:884 (7,9) - this whistles are a lil bit pushy :0 maybe delete (7) whistle? - for being regularly-hitsounded map , i'll let this not changed :3
01:00:217 (7,9) - ^ - ^
01:29:550 (7) - delete whistle pls - ^
01:32:217 (6) - ^ - ^
01:34:883 (7) - ^ - ^
02:01:384 (3) - any hitsound? :D - added finish :3


Thanks dick :3

crabovan wrote:

Reisen's Insane

Like your mapping style. <3
Diff are fine, it's nothing to mod here. Checked. - Thanks~ <3

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi hi ^^

Insane

00:06:717 - http://puu.sh/X77f it's sounds better - No change~ :3
01:21:634(4,6) - delete this notes, not sound here - i followed drum sounds :3
01:41:384(4,5,6) - stack better - X
02:00:717 - here better put speed 1.5 or 1.25 it will be more effectively - X
thanks katty~ :D

(Not mentioned suggestions are fixed :3)

Thanks you guys all~ :D

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Topic Starter
Chewin
Updated thanks bro >w<
Sonnyc
For m4m~

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:16:384 (2) - 1 grid down?

[Normal]
01:20:384 (3) - 1 grid left
01:25:384 (2) - Consider ctrl+R

[cRyo's Hard]
01:49:884 (8,1) - Swap New combo
01:55:217 (7,1) - ^
01:52:217 (1) - Delete New combo

[Chocolate]
01:05:884 (4) - New combo
01:06:051 (1) - Delete New combo
01:59:384 (1) - ^?

[reisen's Insane]
00:57:551 (6,8) - Whistle (Also add timeline too)
01:04:717 (1) - Delete New combo?
01:59:385 (1) - ^

Good Luck~
popner
Hi Chewin~ I want a M4M. This is my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55951

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
01:24:051 (4) - ctrl+r to keep consistent spacing?

[cRyo's Hard]
Fine~

[Chocolate]
00:32:717 (1,2) - make a symmetry?

[Reisen's Insane]
00:09:884 (1,2,3) - nazi - not exactly in a line
00:10:551 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:717 (1) - there is a vocal at 01:01:884, so change the slider to catch the vocal?
01:26:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer to use gradual decline in volume here, because the volume change is a little sudden while no big change is made in music.
01:59:385 (1) - I suggest to increase the volume a little because 'Hitsounds from hitcircles and sliders must be audible.'. This means hitcircles should be heard by player (not just need to over 0%)
02:01:384 (3) - ^


That's all I can find. Star and GL~
Topic Starter
Chewin

popner wrote:

[Normal]
01:24:051 (4) - ctrl+r to keep consistent spacing? yea

[Chocolate]
00:32:717 (1,2) - make a symmetry? nah I did it on purpouse


That's all I can find. Star and GL~
Thank you popner, I will mod your map >w<
Frostmourne
!!!!!!Chocolate ~~~~~~~~~

-kevincela-'s Easy
01:28:384 (2) - for better distance, move down 1 grid so it will become more center

Normal
01:39:051 (3) - quite surprising for me. just adding repeat to 01:38:717 (2) - would be great enough
01:43:717 (2) - ^
01:58:717 (4) - feel empty and not complete , I would rather see you add repeated slider here instead, end at 01:59:051 and add 10% volume greenline at 01:59:384 , also don't forget to add finish at repeated point (01:59:051)
02:00:717 (1) - should be finish here !

cRyo's Hard
fine

Chocolate
fine

Reisen's Insane
fine

can't point out insane diff and hard diff much , they are great !

Good luck :D
Reisen Udongein

popner wrote:

[Reisen's Insane]
00:09:884 (1,2,3) - nazi - not exactly in a line
00:10:551 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:717 (1) - there is a vocal at 01:01:884, so change the slider to catch the vocal?
01:26:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer to use gradual decline in volume here, because the volume change is a little sudden while no big change is made in music.
01:59:385 (1) - I suggest to increase the volume a little because 'Hitsounds from hitcircles and sliders must be audible.'. This means hitcircles should be heard by player (not just need to over 0%)
02:01:384 (3) - ^
all fixed. thanks popner :3

Sonnyc wrote:

[reisen's Insane]
01:04:717 (1) - Delete New combo?
01:59:385 (1) - ^

Good Luck~
fixed except those. thx :3

EDIT :
notepad
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Chocolate!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52557
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7717,20051,87051,98551,108717
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chocolate
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Chewin
Version:Reisen's Insane
Source:Vocaloid
Tags:cRyo cRyo[iceeicee] Reisen Udongein -kevincela- OnosakiHito

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[Colours]
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Topic Starter
Chewin

Frostmourne wrote:

!!!!!!Chocolate ~~~~~~~~~

-kevincela-'s Easy
01:28:384 (2) - for better distance, move down 1 grid so it will become more center

Normal
01:39:051 (3) - quite surprising for me. just adding repeat to 01:38:717 (2) - would be great enough As I already told in the previous mods I'm going to keep it because it is the speed up part and since this isn't the easiest diff of the mapset I think it can be ok anyways. It isn't so hard to play :\
01:43:717 (2) - ^ Same
01:58:717 (4) - feel empty and not complete , I would rather see you add repeated slider here instead, end at 01:59:051 and add 10% volume greenline at 01:59:384 , also don't forget to add finish at repeated point (01:59:051) Well I added 2 circles on 01:59:051 (5,1) instead, I want to keep this "hole" to keep consistency with other diffs
02:00:717 (1) - should be finish here ! Awesome

cRyo's Hard
fine

Chocolate
fine

Reisen's Insane
fine

can't point out insane diff and hard diff much , they are great !

Good luck :D
Thank you <3
NatsumeRin
emm just mention here:
1. your BG doesn't fit, it belongs to another song by buzzG: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14083643
2. and for this song, the composer is otetsu, add it to tags (if not source) plz.

no kud.
Topic Starter
Chewin
Talked via IRC with natsumerin to find a new BG and nothing, for the moment I will keep it.
Unfortunately there isn't a gumi's video for this song, so.. I think this BG fits better than others.

About the tag I added it, thank you natsumerin for your help ♥
-kevincela-
SPOILER
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Chocolate
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Vocaloid
Tags:cRyo cRyo[iceeicee] Reisen Udongein -kevincela- OnosakiHito otetsu

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
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Topic Starter
Chewin
Okay lol
cRyo[iceeicee]
crabovan

crabovan wrote:

cRyo's Hard

Your maps I like too. <3 ✿ Thank youuuuuu ✿

00:33:551 (6,7) - You can make this. i think its too far o:
01:06:051 (1) - Maybe move to x:200 y:328? prefer to end pattern in the middle ww
02:00:717 (1,2) - Delete soft-whistles from red ticks. but they sounds fine ^^
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]
01:49:884 (8,1) - Swap New combo
01:55:217 (7,1) - ^
01:52:217 (1) - Delete New combo
Dont like how they looking o:
pyransc

pyransc wrote:

[hard]

01:41:384 (4) - http://puu.sh/X8Kd but it looks funnyyyy \^^/
Thx for mod's :)
link
empty \o.o/
Topic Starter
Chewin
lol thanks for checkin' cryo :3
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue

Easy/Normal/Hard, I found nothing.
I didn't mod Insanes because I'm not enough good to mod them, same goes for Taiko.

Good luck~
YTYuyu
alright i'm bored so let's get started. mod requested in-game

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
otetsu should be the source instead since he made this song. Vocaloid should be in the tags since Gumi's singing it. now since there are a lot of vocaloids, add "vocaloid2" in the tags since that's the engine Gumi's in.
ooh the filesize for this BG is too big. perhaps you can decrease the filesize somehow?

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
IMO, there is no flow given off in this song with a low AR like this. increase it by 1 for a smoother flow to the song.
00:00:718 (1) - perhaps you can add a whistle at the beginning to match the soft clash of the cymbals?
00:04:717 (4) - add a finish here. the cymbals go off here so adding it would emphasize the cymbals in the song.
00:10:384 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern. i feel that this kind of pattern doesn't follow the piano correctly. instead i suggest adding a circle, 2 1/1 sliders and a 2/1 slider. i think this selection would follow the piano a lot smoother during gameplay. oh and it should look like this.
00:24:384 (2,3,4) - i think it'd be easier if you can remove (3,4) and extend (2) by 2/1. the sliderticks take a big part as they follow the change in the vocals. if you do this, remember to add timing points on 1 of them dso that the consistency doesn't break.
00:31:384 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend (1) by 1/1. i feel that it'd be easier to follow since there's a hold in the vocals at the end, so that end will emphasize that part during gameplay IMO.
00:34:717 (2,3,4,5) - i suggest that you replace this for a 1/1 slider and a 1/1 repeat slider. here too, i feel that it'd flow to the vocals smoothly during gameplay, or you can keep (2,3) and replace (4,5) for a 1/1 repeat slider.
00:40:717 (3,4) - maybe you can replace this for a 2/1 slider since to follows the hold in the vocals?
00:51:384 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the guitar, vocals, and the instrumental in the song changes.
00:57:051 (4) - remove the repeat on this slider. you're following the vocals for this, not the BGM.
01:31:718 (4) - ^
hmm? why don't you map the whole song for consistency with the other diffs? i highly suggest that you do that for consistency.
i think that if you can follow some of these suggestions, the star rating should be less then 3 IMO.

[Normal]
00:09:384 (4) - hitsounding mistake? remove the whistle here because it sounds unfitting with this part of the song, also i think that a repeat fits here since there's a change in the piano at the middle of the slider. i also think that doing this would flow smoother during gameplay. that circle breaks the flow in this part since it might surprise players IMO.
00:11:384 (3) - ^
00:14:051 (3) - ^
00:16:717 (3) - ^
00:19:384 (3,4,5) - maybe you can make this interesting by replacing this for a 1/2 repeat slider and a 1/2 slider to follow every bit of the guitar in this part of the song?
00:24:718 (4,5,6) - similar as above, but i feel that this should be a 1/1 repeat slider. i can see a possible pattern from this part in this song.
00:25:051 (5,6) - maybe a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the vocals accurately? again, i think that the flow would continue from here during gameplay IMO.
00:27:717 (5,6) - i suggest that you remove this and add a 2/2 slider starting at 00:27:551. same reason as above.
00:38:051 (3) - same as 00:09:384.
00:41:717 (5) - i think a finish should be here to match that clash in the cymbals.
01:07:384 (3) - same as 00:09:384.
01:10:051 (3) - ^
01:12:717 (3) - ^
01:15:384 (3) - ^
01:21:051 (5) - that finish at the beginning bothered me during gameplay. remove it because it sounds unfitting with this part of the song IMO.
01:26:051 (3) - same as 00:41:717.
01:50:051 (3) - same as 00:09:384.
01:52:717 (3) - ^
01:55:384 (3) - ^
01:58:050 (3) - ^

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
01:16:717 (1) - i feel that this should be a K to not only match the drums, but the cymbals as well. you did a similar pattern at 1 of the previous patterns, so how about doing it here?
01:19:384 (1) - a K would fit here to emphasize the cymbals, if you don't like the K, make this a D instead.
01:24:717 (1) - ^
02:00:884 (2) - i can hear the drums, but how about making this a D since the guitar slightly decreases?

[cRyo's Hard]
00:56:551 - add a circle here. there's another "i" in this part of the song. players might think that the rhythm might continue and that might lead to hitting the next note too early because they think that it's following this part.
01:31:217 - ^
01:41:884 - ^

[Chocolate]
00:44:551 - add a circle here? the vocals are still going in this part of the song.
01:03:884 - ^
01:30:050 (1,2) - there 2 sliders look completely different compared to the other 2 sliders in this combo. make them the same for a smoother flow during gameplay.
02:00:717 (1,2,3) - i'm guessing that since this is an extra diff, i feel that there should be something more challenging for players. i suggest that you do something like this for a challenging ending for players. it'll be interesting and fun for them during gameplay IMO.

[Udon's Insane]
00:29:051 (2) - maybe Ctrl+R for a smooth transition from (1)? i think doing this will flow a lot smoother to the next note during gameplay as it makes a fluent motion in this part.
01:21:384 (3) - replace the clap for a finish. it'll match the cymbals in this part of the song.
01:21:634 (4,5,6,7,8) - i highly suggest that you re-do this clap pattern, or add/remove the claps. as of now, it sounds unfitting and it sounds as if the clap are added randomly IMO.
02:00:717 (1,2,3) - same as Chocolate.

I guess that's it. GL :D
Topic Starter
Chewin
Thank you byakugan! *-*
I will check it later :3
Topic Starter
Chewin

Byakugan249 wrote:

[General]
otetsu should be the source instead since he made this song. Vocaloid should be in the tags since Gumi's singing it. now since there are a lot of vocaloids, add "vocaloid2" in the tags since that's the engine Gumi's in.
ooh the filesize for this BG is too big. perhaps you can decrease the filesize somehow? Fixed both, it should be fine now

[Normal]
00:09:384 (4) - hitsounding mistake? remove the whistle here because it sounds unfitting with this part of the song, also i think that a repeat fits here since there's a change in the piano at the middle of the slider. i also think that doing this would flow smoother during gameplay. that circle breaks the flow in this part since it might surprise players IMO. You are right on the whistle but I don't agree about the circle. It fits good in my opinion especially because it's the start to keep the consistency with next patterns you have mentioned later :3
00:11:384 (3) - ^
00:14:051 (3) - ^
00:16:717 (3) - ^
00:19:384 (3,4,5) - maybe you can make this interesting by replacing this for a 1/2 repeat slider and a 1/2 slider to follow every bit of the guitar in this part of the song? I really don't know, I used this rhythm to make it less monotonous.. So I decided to keep it, also because I want to make it not too much hard
00:24:718 (4,5,6) - similar as above, but i feel that this should be a 1/1 repeat slider. i can see a possible pattern from this part in this song.
00:25:051 (5,6) - maybe a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the vocals accurately? again, i think that the flow would continue from here during gameplay IMO. Same above.. My intention was that to close every "harder" patterns (for example 00:20:717 (1,2,3) or 00:23:384 (1,2,3) with an easier one using just 1/1 circles :3 I think it's a good idea for a normal diff >w<
00:27:717 (5,6) - i suggest that you remove this and add a 2/2 slider starting at 00:27:551. same reason as above. The reason is still the same :3 Closing harder patterns with an easier one xD
00:38:051 (3) - same as 00:09:384. I think it's fine in this way :3
00:41:717 (5) - i think a finish should be here to match that clash in the cymbals. Fine!
01:07:384 (3) - same as 00:09:384.
01:10:051 (3) - ^
01:12:717 (3) - ^
01:15:384 (3) - ^
01:21:051 (5) - that finish at the beginning bothered me during gameplay. remove it because it sounds unfitting with this part of the song IMO. ahah yes it has been my mistake because I copied/pasted the 01:19:384 (1) forgotting to remove finish from it xD Thank you, removed
01:26:051 (3) - same as 00:41:717. Agree >ww<
01:50:051 (3) - same as 00:09:384.
01:52:717 (3) - ^
01:55:384 (3) - ^
01:58:050 (3) - ^

[Chocolate]
00:44:551 - add a circle here? the vocals are still going in this part of the song.
01:03:884 - ^ These 2 patterns are intentional to keep a calmer rhythm on the calmer song's moment, so I keep it like it is now
01:30:050 (1,2) - there 2 sliders look completely different compared to the other 2 sliders in this combo. make them the same for a smoother flow during gameplay. They are the same sliders rotated :\ so.. what do you mean precisely? Show me some screens D:
02:00:717 (1,2,3) - i'm guessing that since this is an extra diff, i feel that there should be something more challenging for players. i suggest that you do something like this for a challenging ending for players. it'll be interesting and fun for them during gameplay IMO. I agree :O But I fixed using a different pattern :3

I guess that's it. GL :D
Thank you byakugan *-* Waiting for kevin, cryo, reisen and ono's too o.o
Reisen Udongein

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright i'm bored so let's get started. mod requested in-game

[Udon's Insane] - <3
00:29:051 (2) - maybe Ctrl+R for a smooth transition from (1)? i think doing this will flow a lot smoother to the next note during gameplay as it makes a fluent motion in this part. - I prefer no change here :D
01:21:634 (4,5,6,7,8) - i highly suggest that you re-do this clap pattern, or add/remove the claps. as of now, it sounds unfitting and it sounds as if the clap are added randomly IMO. - it's not random! i set those according to drum sounds :3
02:00:717 (1,2,3) - same as Chocolate. - Arranged into inclined polygon circles
thanks byakugan as always~ :D

(Not mentioned suggestions are perfectly changed)

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Topic Starter
Chewin
Updated, thank you reisen ♥
-kevincela-

Byakugan249 wrote:

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
IMO, there is no flow given off in this song with a low AR like this. increase it by 1 for a smoother flow to the song. You're right,done
00:00:718 (1) - perhaps you can add a whistle at the beginning to match the soft clash of the cymbals? Done,too
00:04:717 (4) - add a finish here. the cymbals go off here so adding it would emphasize the cymbals in the song.
00:10:384 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern. i feel that this kind of pattern doesn't follow the piano correctly. instead i suggest adding a circle, 2 1/1 sliders and a 2/1 slider. i think this selection would follow the piano a lot smoother during gameplay. oh and it should look like this. Sorry,I think this pattern works better for now
00:24:384 (2,3,4) - i think it'd be easier if you can remove (3,4) and extend (2) by 2/1. the sliderticks take a big part as they follow the change in the vocals. if you do this, remember to add timing points on 1 of them dso that the consistency doesn't break. Sorry,I want to leave it like this
00:31:384 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend (1) by 1/1. i feel that it'd be easier to follow since there's a hold in the vocals at the end, so that end will emphasize that part during gameplay IMO. Done
00:34:717 (2,3,4,5) - i suggest that you replace this for a 1/1 slider and a 1/1 repeat slider. here too, i feel that it'd flow to the vocals smoothly during gameplay, or you can keep (2,3) and replace (4,5) for a 1/1 repeat slider. I don't see really the reason to change that
00:40:717 (3,4) - maybe you can replace this for a 2/1 slider since to follows the hold in the vocals? ^
00:51:384 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the guitar, vocals, and the instrumental in the song changes. Done
00:57:051 (4) - remove the repeat on this slider. you're following the vocals for this, not the BGM. Not changing for now,later will see
01:31:718 (4) - ^ ^
hmm? why don't you map the whole song for consistency with the other diffs? i highly suggest that you do that for consistency. Done
i think that if you can follow some of these suggestions, the star rating should be less then 3 IMO.
Thanks for the mod! :D

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Chocolate!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52557
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 87051
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chocolate
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:otetsu
Tags:Vocaloid Vocaloid2 cRyo cRyo[iceeicee] Reisen Udongein -kevincela- OnosakiHito

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
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Topic Starter
Chewin
Kevin *-* Grazie mille ♥
Updated! :3
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]
00:56:551 - add a circle here. there's another "i" in this part of the song. players might think that the rhythm might continue and that might lead to hitting the next note too early because they think that it's following this part. umm, i think current one is fine, small pause for small recover, all similar parts have same pause
01:31:217 - ^
01:41:884 - ^
Thx for mod!
Topic Starter
Chewin

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Thx for mod!
/ded
OnosakiHito
God damn it, how I'm not able to post the update of the map. Will do it in the next hours.
Had something to do in real. Sorry. -w-
OnosakiHito

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
01:16:717 (1) - i feel that this should be a K to not only match the drums, but the cymbals as well. you did a similar pattern at 1 of the previous patterns, so how about doing it here? :arrow: I would need to do the same at 01:22:051 (1) - for example, but I don't want to break the stream. Also overall it plays better as small notes.
01:19:384 (1) - a K would fit here to emphasize the cymbals, if you don't like the K, make this a D instead. :arrow: I didn't used it else where in this part.
01:24:717 (1) - ^ :arrow: same^
02:00:884 (2) - i can hear the drums, but how about making this a D since the guitar slightly decreases? :arrow: Changed~
Didn't took chris suggestion because the drum is playing at said timeline. Thank you guys.

Update: http://puu.sh/118SA
Topic Starter
Chewin
Updated, thank you Ono -w-
Loctav
As requested by Chewin.
God, this needed time. Sorry for the HUGE delay.

[General]

Well, it can be just me, but I dislike the huge difficulty jump from the Hard to the two insanes. The Hard was fine, but the difficulty increased VERY much. The spread felt awkward so far because of this. D:

Combocolor 4 and 5 blend too much with the BG. Especially 4. You may replace the color of 4 with some soft blue (like in GUMI's eyes). This would fit the BG but not blend, since the blue doesnt dominate the BG (like the red tones)

Even if the set doesn't fall under the new Taiko rule, I'd like to see a Muzukashii on it at least. Ono should totally capable of providing one. :S

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

Star Rating is above 3,10. As in ranking criteria, this is apparantly the easiest diff. You need to tone it down below 3,0 to make the whole set rankable.

00:02:051 (1,2) - (2) ends on a downbeat while (1) begins on one. This results in a weird "press-hold" rhythm according to the music. This would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/11pNU
00:09:384 (4) - because it ends on a downbeat, this feels awkward again. The downbeat demands to be pressed. Also upcoming sliders and hitcircles feel awkward due to this forced rhythm of the song. I know you tried to create syncopes and variety, but the song is pretty constant to me. Try this: http://puu.sh/11pRF
00:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - same here as ^
00:13:051 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:384 (3) - this is just my personal taste, but: this bow is way too sharp to me. You did nice bows around hitobjects before, too (like in 00:44:717 (1) - ). I'd like to see one of these here, too, if you want.
01:02:051 (3) - ^ same applies for all of their appearances.
02:00:717 (1) - yes, please. This shape follows the song ;w;

[Normal]

Why you use 0,8x spacing? This makes feel the sliders too fast. If you would stay with 1,0x distance spacing in hitcircle patterns, parts like this wouldn't need unneccessarely slowmoted: 00:18:051 (1,2,3,4,5) -

00:09:384 (4) - why is here a whistle? There is no whistle at 00:12:051 (4) - or 00:14:717 (4) - , too D:
00:19:384 (3,4,5) - if you increase spacing from 3-5 to each 1,0x, it wouldnt feel so slowmoted
00:22:051 (4,5,6) - ^
00:24:717 (4,5,6) - ^ (I think you got it now, lol)
00:58:051 (1,2,3) - this is inconsistent compared to 00:52:717 (1,2,3,4) - . Choose of one of this variations to make similiar-sounding music parts being mapped similiar. It's not about the pattern self, but about the hitobject's timing (slider, slider, repeatslider, hitcircle. you know..)
01:38:717 (2,3) - this feels unintuitive and is inconsistent compared to previous repeat sliders you placed on similiar spots (like right before 01:38:051 (1) - ) Please do a repeat slider here.
01:43:384 (1,2,3) - even if you refused the previous suggestion, I strongly suggest to stay consistent with 01:38:717 (2,3) -. So replace 01:43:384 (1,2) - with a repeat / or swap (3) and (1) (2) (if you refused previous suggestion)

[cRyo's Hard]

00:07:551 (2,3) - stack them. Due to prime interval in the music, it introduces a stop-motion pattern here. (like you did in 00:10:217 (2,3) - )
00:08:217 (5,6) - ^
00:10:217 (2,3) - if you refuse to stack previous ones, unstack these ones. Else it's inconsistent.
00:12:884 (2,3) - stack? (as suggested before)
00:13:551 (5,6) - ^
00:13:718 (6,2,3) - ^ (I think you got it. This stack suggestion applies for every upcoming unstacked pattern on same musical sound)
00:43:051 (1,2) - this is hard to read because 00:42:051 (1,2,3,4) - makes you expect something else. Stacking them or reduce spacing could solve it. I'd prefer stacking.
00:44:384 (4,5) - same as above, but I would replace this two with a slider instead.
00:45:717 (1,2) - as mentioned before
01:25:384 (3,4,5,6,1) - I see no musical reason for the smaller spacing. Do common spacing as you did before. Instead, you can increase spacing from (1) to 01:26:384 (2) - from (2) to (3). A jump fits more than a slowdown.

[Chocolate]

00:02:467 (4) - removing this one would result in a better followup to the music and especially the guitar and drums. Else it appears to be overmapped to me.
00:03:133 (8) - ^
00:03:801 (5) - ^
00:04:468 (10) - ^
00:05:134 (4) - ^
00:07:217 (1,2,3) - first of all, the bow of the introducing doublet is too straight. Compared to the bowed slider, the doublet doesnt introduce the movement of the slider properly. Also you did stack on 00:07:884 (5,6,7) - . Consider bowing the stream accordingly to the slider or stack the doublet on the stream beginning
00:08:884 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unfortunately I see no reason for the spacing increase. If you put jumps between the triplets, then it's okay. But increasing the spacing, no, because the music doesn't fell more fast or accelerated or amplified or something. Consider keeping the spacing within the triplet constant and maybe increase the spacing BETWEEN the triplets.
00:09:551 (2,3) - Because of the previous spacing issue and the hitbursts, this one is extremly hard to estimate. Consider unstacking it. Maybe it doesn't feel so awkward anymore if you fix the issue mentioned before.
00:13:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - same as the two lines above.
00:15:217 (4,5) - stack on (1)'s beginning, for consistency with 00:15:884 (3,4,5) -
00:15:717 (2) - stack under the end of 00:15:384 (1) - , because the stop-motion fits here more musicalwise.
00:19:384 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't NC spam this. They feel as one musical group and as one pattern group, so only have the NC on 00:19:384 (1) -
00:23:217 (6,7) - why is this spacing increased, if the music sounds exactly like in 00:22:967 (4,5) - ? COnsider keep the spacing constantly with 00:22:967 (4,5) - .
00:25:884 (7,8) - same here, compared to 00:25:551 (4,5,6) -
00:28:551 (7,8,1) - same here, compared to 00:28:217 (4,5,6) -
00:43:717 (1) - remove NC and add NC on 00:44:051 (2) - . This provides a better readability for the suddenjump.
00:51:884 (1,1) - don't NC spam this. remove NC on 00:52:051 (1) - .
00:52:551 (1,2) - I don't understand why you put slider-sliiider here, if you put circle-circle-slider on 00:09:884 (4,5,1) - and 01:31:383 (1,9,10,11,1) - , even if this has the same rhythm. Consider doing a doublet instead of the kickslider, for consistency.
01:05:884 (4,5,1) - as in 00:07:217 (1,2,3) -
01:07:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I already mentioned this and I won't point this pattern up anymore.
01:11:884 (5,6,7,8,1) - move this down, since 01:12:884 (4,5,6,2) - introduces a downward movement instead of a straight left directed one.
01:37:884 (7,8) - sudden increased spacing. Maybe this was an accident, maybe because of the vocal. If it's the vocal, consider moving the NC to 01:37:884 (7) - . Else, keep spacing constant (I prefer latter option for playability)
01:53:801 (10) - this is overmapped :X Remove this one and stack 01:53:884 (11,12) - on (1)'s beginning.
01:56:551 (4,5) - stack on (1)'s beginning, consistency, compared to 01:57:217 (3,4,5) -

[Reisen's Insane]


00:09:551 (6,7) - I don't see a reason for this jump. I don't even a see a reason why these two are hitcircles. Well, this can be personal taste, but I would prefer seeing them stacked or replaced by a slider.
00:10:301 (4) - huh? first, this is a 1/4 jump. I dislike it very much. second, the piano only plays a single tone instead of something short-holded or kicked-off or something similiar. If you only place a hitcircle on the whitetick, it would be way better and readable. Else, it's only overmapped and weird to me. This applies for all weird 1/4 kicksliders you did on similiar spots.
00:13:051 (4) - I would not expect a prime interval as a jump. The tone holds, the music calls for stopmotion and this is a jump. Consider stacking this one under the end of (3) and let the jump begin after that one.
00:13:717 (4) - ^
00:14:884 (8,9) - as in 00:09:551 (6,7) -
00:30:551 (2,3) - this hitcircles are so confusing. I see no reason for this hold movement. Also you placed an alternating slider stream in 00:30:717 (4,5,6,7) - , when the song calls for a drumroll/normal hitcircle stream. I suggest only doing a normal stream.
00:53:051 (4) - same as at 00:13:051 (4) -
00:53:717 (4) - ^
00:58:384 (2) - ^
01:11:717 (4) - ^
01:24:717 (1) - maybe shape like this? http://puu.sh/11KvH The straight one looks so strange on this spot to me :S
01:27:717 (4) - okay, I won't point this up anymore. Still I would like to see all of this appearing jumps to be fixed D:
01:13:884 (1,2) - for the sake of consistency, replace (1) with two hitcircles, like you mapped the same part of the song at 01:11:217 (1,2,3) - and many other spots.
01:32:550 (9,10) - stack on (1), consistency with 01:27:217 (1,2,3) -
01:43:134 (8,9,10) - this looks weird compared with the upcoming slider. Consider directing the triplet in the same direction as the slider or bow slider & stream.
01:44:551 (7,8) - same issue as there ^

[Ono's Taiko Oni]

OD 5, LD 5 - the song doesn't focus on detail imo. Also OD makes it pretty hard on such kind of BPM. If you want, LD 6 can stay, but please do OD 5. Especially because this set has no Muzukashii.

00:08:384 (1) - The piano stays at constant height. Also you did a kat on 00:13:717 (3) - . Do a kat here.
01:26:217 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this appears unreasonable to me. There is no vibrato or music wave movement. THis fits better imo: http://puu.sh/11KI5

Rest seems fine for me on the Oni. Maybe it need more rechecks, but generally it's okay.
Kenezz


[-kevincela-'s Easy]
  • Settings
  1. For me AR-1 be better.
  2. Why you don't use the same colorhax like the others diffs? 01:38:051 to 01:48:717 time to orange, red and yellow only, fix this.

    Beatmap Suggestions
  3. 00:00:718 (1) - A bit nazi, change the red control point to a withe and extend the last, just to make a best shape of the slider. Before//After.
  4. 00:51:384 (1,2,3) - Some reason for the change in the distance spacing?, is 1.3 here and the rest of the map 1.1, not is a big problem but try to be constant.
  5. 01:16:717 (1) - Ctr+R here to improves the flow of sliders, you know, to right, left, right, up, down, etc.
[Normal]
  • Hitsound
  1. 00:19:384 (3) - Finish or whistle here.

    Beatmap Suggestions
  2. 00:12:051 (4) - Stack this with the end of the before slider like the previous pattern like this, just if you want sure, if you agree after this rotate by 45° anti-clockwise and move properly with the distance spacing, check my suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421704, the rotate is only to maintain certain distance with the next slider.
  3. 00:17:384 (4) - Same as above, stack with the previous slider.
  4. 01:03:051 (1) - Combo suggestion, remove this new combo, add here the nc 01:03:884 (7) and remove here 01:04:717 (1), because the new combo should start here 01:03:384 no? obviously if you agree fix the colorhax.
  5. 01:10:718 (4) - Same as 00:12:051 (4) just copy pasta because finally is the same pattern.
  6. 01:16:051 (4) - o3o
  7. 01:53:384 (4) - Haha you use the same pattern three times.
I'll continue the mod after you check the loctav's mod.
mancuso_JM_

Kenezz wrote:

I'll continue the mod after you check the loctav's mod.
And then will be my turn to mod this :P
I don't know if I'll edit this or post again xD
Topic Starter
Chewin
omg loctav's mod o.o
I'll check it later :3
Topic Starter
Chewin

Loctav wrote:

As requested by Chewin.
God, this needed time. Sorry for the HUGE delay.

[General]

Well, it can be just me, but I dislike the huge difficulty jump from the Hard to the two insanes. The Hard was fine, but the difficulty increased VERY much. The spread felt awkward so far because of this. D: Others told me that the hard diff was.. too hard to be a normal hard and not an insane/hyper diff, so if you think that and they think so, it means that the difficulty jump is ok lol

Combocolor 4 and 5 blend too much with the BG. Especially 4. You may replace the color of 4 with some soft blue (like in GUMI's eyes). This would fit the BG but not blend, since the blue doesnt dominate the BG (like the red tones) okay used blue color but not soft because I'm using it just on the last kiai time where the orange and yellow color are intense

Even if the set doesn't fall under the new Taiko rule, I'd like to see a Muzukashii on it at least. Ono should totally capable of providing one. :S He's really busy atm, it's ok to keep just the oni one.

[Normal]

Why you use 0,8x spacing? This makes feel the sliders too fast. If you would stay with 1,0x distance spacing in hitcircle patterns, parts like this wouldn't need unneccessarely slowmoted: 00:18:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that 0,8x spacing fits the normal diff better, I want to keep this, maybe adding AR+1 would be better, let's try

00:09:384 (4) - why is here a whistle? There is no whistle at 00:12:051 (4) - or 00:14:717 (4) - , too D: I removed it from byaku's mod o.o idk, fixed btw
00:19:384 (3,4,5) - if you increase spacing from 3-5 to each 1,0x, it wouldnt feel so slowmoted but I don't think it feels slowmoted.. I think it's fine as it is now >.<
00:22:051 (4,5,6) - ^
00:24:717 (4,5,6) - ^ (I think you got it now, lol)
00:58:051 (1,2,3) - this is inconsistent compared to 00:52:717 (1,2,3,4) - . Choose of one of this variations to make similiar-sounding music parts being mapped similiar. It's not about the pattern self, but about the hitobject's timing (slider, slider, repeatslider, hitcircle. you know..) Yes I know but I did it on purpose or the gameplay would be so.. monotonous
01:38:717 (2,3) - this feels unintuitive and is inconsistent compared to previous repeat sliders you placed on similiar spots (like right before 01:38:051 (1) - ) Please do a repeat slider here. Mh.. you are not the first that tell it me so I decided to fix this. I just wanted to make it harder like the chocolate and insane diff. But since this is a normal yea you are right, but I want to fix this using 3 1/2 circles.
01:43:384 (1,2,3) - even if you refused the previous suggestion, I strongly suggest to stay consistent with 01:38:717 (2,3) -. So replace 01:43:384 (1,2) - with a repeat / or swap (3) and (1) (2) (if you refused previous suggestion) Used repeat slider here :3

[Chocolate]

00:02:467 (4) - removing this one would result in a better followup to the music and especially the guitar and drums. Else it appears to be overmapped to me. I want to make this part a stream part, so I'll keep it.
00:03:133 (8) - ^
00:03:801 (5) - ^
00:04:468 (10) - ^
00:05:134 (4) - ^
00:07:217 (1,2,3) - first of all, the bow of the introducing doublet is too straight. Compared to the bowed slider, the doublet doesnt introduce the movement of the slider properly. Also you did stack on 00:07:884 (5,6,7) - . Consider bowing the stream accordingly to the slider or stack the doublet on the stream beginning Stacked 00:07:217 (1,2,3) and made a triangle between 00:06:717 (5) - 00:07:051 (8,1)
00:08:884 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unfortunately I see no reason for the spacing increase. If you put jumps between the triplets, then it's okay. But increasing the spacing, no, because the music doesn't fell more fast or accelerated or amplified or something. Consider keeping the spacing within the triplet constant and maybe increase the spacing BETWEEN the triplets. Nope I like it sorry :\
00:09:551 (2,3) - Because of the previous spacing issue and the hitbursts, this one is extremly hard to estimate. Consider unstacking it. Maybe it doesn't feel so awkward anymore if you fix the issue mentioned before. I didn't accept above so..
00:13:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - same as the two lines above.
00:15:217 (4,5) - stack on (1)'s beginning, for consistency with 00:15:884 (3,4,5) - I don't like how it flows
00:15:717 (2) - stack under the end of 00:15:384 (1) - , because the stop-motion fits here more musicalwise. oki
00:19:384 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't NC spam this. They feel as one musical group and as one pattern group, so only have the NC on 00:19:384 (1) - nope.
00:23:217 (6,7) - why is this spacing increased, if the music sounds exactly like in 00:22:967 (4,5) - ? COnsider keep the spacing constantly with 00:22:967 (4,5) - .This is the hardest diff of the mapset so I don't want to keep consistency between part. Playing the map making some changes with a spacing's increase flows much better, trust me
00:25:884 (7,8) - same here, compared to 00:25:551 (4,5,6) -
00:28:551 (7,8,1) - same here, compared to 00:28:217 (4,5,6) -
00:43:717 (1) - remove NC and add NC on 00:44:051 (2) - . This provides a better readability for the suddenjump. k
00:51:884 (1,1) - don't NC spam this. remove NC on 00:52:051 (1) - . nu
00:52:551 (1,2) - I don't understand why you put slider-sliiider here, if you put circle-circle-slider on 00:09:884 (4,5,1) - and 01:31:383 (1,9,10,11,1) - , even if this has the same rhythm. Consider doing a doublet instead of the kickslider, for consistency. It's right, also during the gameplay.
01:05:884 (4,5,1) - as in 00:07:217 (1,2,3) -
01:07:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I already mentioned this and I won't point this pattern up anymore.
01:11:884 (5,6,7,8,1) - move this down, since 01:12:884 (4,5,6,2) - introduces a downward movement instead of a straight left directed one. Rotated a bit
01:37:884 (7,8) - sudden increased spacing. Maybe this was an accident, maybe because of the vocal. If it's the vocal, consider moving the NC to 01:37:884 (7) - . Else, keep spacing constant (I prefer latter option for playability) I did it on purpose
01:53:801 (10) - this is overmapped :X Remove this one and stack 01:53:884 (11,12) - on (1)'s beginning. Same of first points above, I keep this
01:56:551 (4,5) - stack on (1)'s beginning, consistency, compared to 01:57:217 (3,4,5) - It's bad during gameplay
Thank you for the awesome mod <3
Topic Starter
Chewin

Kenezz wrote:

[Normal]
  • Hitsound
  1. 00:19:384 (3) - Finish or whistle here. Finish :3

    Beatmap Suggestions
  2. 00:12:051 (4) - Stack this with the end of the before slider like the previous pattern like this, just if you want sure, if you agree after this rotate by 45° anti-clockwise and move properly with the distance spacing, check my suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421704, the rotate is only to maintain certain distance with the next slider. Nope :\
  3. 00:17:384 (4) - Same as above, stack with the previous slider. ^
  4. 01:03:051 (1) - Combo suggestion, remove this new combo, add here the nc 01:03:884 (7) and remove here 01:04:717 (1), because the new combo should start here 01:03:384 no? obviously if you agree fix the colorhax. Nice
  5. 01:10:718 (4) - Same as 00:12:051 (4) just copy pasta because finally is the same pattern.
  6. 01:16:051 (4) - o3o
  7. 01:53:384 (4) - Haha you use the same pattern three times. Too lazy.
I'll continue the mod after you check the loctav's mod.
I'll wait
OnosakiHito
Will give you the update soon Chewin. hehe
Topic Starter
Chewin

OnosakiHito wrote:

Will give you the update soon Chewin. hehe
Thank you >w<
-kevincela-

Loctav wrote:

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

Star Rating is above 3,10. As in ranking criteria, this is apparantly the easiest diff. You need to tone it down below 3,0 to make the whole set rankable. Well,that's right,but there have been many exceptions out there. And you know,the star rating isn't that good >w<

00:02:051 (1,2) - (2) ends on a downbeat while (1) begins on one. This results in a weird "press-hold" rhythm according to the music. This would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/11pNU You're right,but I have yet to find a way to rearrange this pattern... D: Will fix when I have some ideas...
00:09:384 (4) - because it ends on a downbeat, this feels awkward again. The downbeat demands to be pressed. Also upcoming sliders and hitcircles feel awkward due to this forced rhythm of the song. I know you tried to create syncopes and variety, but the song is pretty constant to me. Try this: http://puu.sh/11pRF Sorry,but here as now I think it's okay
00:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - same here as ^ ^
00:13:051 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
00:59:384 (3) - this is just my personal taste, but: this bow is way too sharp to me. You did nice bows around hitobjects before, too (like in 00:44:717 (1) - ). I'd like to see one of these here, too, if you want. Made it a bit wider
01:02:051 (3) - ^ same applies for all of their appearances. Here I don't see why changing the shape... Sorry D:
02:00:717 (1) - yes, please. This shape follows the song ;w; Yeah,I love it too :P

Kenezz wrote:



[-kevincela-'s Easy]
  • Settings
  1. For me AR-1 be better. No,I like this AR atm. Sorry D:
  2. Why you don't use the same colorhax like the others diffs? 01:38:051 to 01:48:717 time to orange, red and yellow only, fix this.Hey,didn't notice that! Thanks for pointing that out ^^

    Beatmap Suggestions
  3. 00:00:718 (1) - A bit nazi, change the red control point to a withe and extend the last, just to make a best shape of the slider. Before//After. Sorry,but I like more this slider D:
  4. 00:51:384 (1,2,3) - Some reason for the change in the distance spacing?, is 1.3 here and the rest of the map 1.1, not is a big problem but try to be constant. It's to emphatize the drums just right before the kiai time.
  5. 01:16:717 (1) - Ctr+R here to improves the flow of sliders, you know, to right, left, right, up, down, etc. Seems good,done.
Thanks for the mods,guys! :D

SPOILER
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[General]
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[Editor]
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Title:Chocolate
Artist:Megpoid GUMI
Creator:Chewin
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:otetsu
Tags:Vocaloid Vocaloid2 cRyo cRyo[iceeicee] Reisen Udongein -kevincela- OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito

Loctav wrote:

[Ono's Taiko Oni]

00:08:384 (1) - The piano stays at constant height. :arrow: It was on purpose to have mirrored patterns kkd d k ddk k k d
Also you did a kat on 00:13:717 (3) - . Do a kat here. :arrow: There is allready one.
01:26:217 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this appears unreasonable to me. There is no vibrato or music wave movement. THis fits better imo: http://puu.sh/11KI5 :arrow: Oh, actually this would be a solution, yeah. But I want to keep this as well in this way because it's better to play as the other pattern since switching fingers is easier.
Thank you anyway.
Topic Starter
Chewin
Updated :3
Reisen Udongein

Loctav wrote:

[Reisen's Insane]

00:09:551 (6,7) - I don't see a reason for this jump. I don't even a see a reason why these two are hitcircles. Well, this can be personal taste, but I would prefer seeing them stacked or replaced by a slider. - since i like these patterns and it's quite unique and enjoyable (according to sudden spacing change) , i'll just let it not changed.
00:10:301 (4) - huh? first, this is a 1/4 jump. I dislike it very much. second, the piano only plays a single tone instead of something short-holded or kicked-off or something similiar. If you only place a hitcircle on the whitetick, it would be way better and readable. Else, it's only overmapped and weird to me. This applies for all weird 1/4 kicksliders you did on similiar spots.- i understand what you mean and somebody will agree your opinion, but since it's insane diff, it can be little bit overmapped imo :3
00:13:051 (4) - I would not expect a prime interval as a jump. The tone holds, the music calls for stopmotion and this is a jump. Consider stacking this one under the end of (3) and let the jump begin after that one. - i also tried that style when i was mapping this, but i like 'Jump - Sudden Stop - Jump - Sudden Stop' this pattern :3
00:13:717 (4) - ^ - ^
00:14:884 (8,9) - as in 00:09:551 (6,7) - - same opinion
00:30:551 (2,3) - this hitcircles are so confusing. I see no reason for this hold movement. Also you placed an alternating slider stream in 00:30:717 (4,5,6,7) - , when the song calls for a drumroll/normal hitcircle stream. I suggest only doing a normal stream.
00:53:051 (4) - same as at 00:13:051 (4) - same opinion
00:53:717 (4) - ^ - same opinion
00:58:384 (2) - ^ - same opinion
01:11:717 (4) - ^ - same opinion
01:27:717 (4) - okay, I won't point this up anymore. Still I would like to see all of this appearing jumps to be fixed D: - same opinion
01:13:884 (1,2) - for the sake of consistency, replace (1) with two hitcircles, like you mapped the same part of the song at 01:11:217 (1,2,3) - and many other spots. - for not being always-same-patterned map, i tried somthing different here :3
01:32:550 (9,10) - stack on (1), consistency with 01:27:217 (1,2,3) - - shorten spacing
01:43:134 (8,9,10) - this looks weird compared with the upcoming slider. Consider directing the triplet in the same direction as the slider or bow slider & stream. - just arranged to 0.3x spacing in order to decreasing difficulty here.
01:44:551 (7,8) - same issue as there ^ - shorten spacing
thanks for the mod~ (not mentioned suggestion is perfectly fixed)

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Topic Starter
Chewin
updated

EDIT: cRyo told me to check his beatmap because he can't at the moment.
Just fixed a stack on his diff. Updated.
MMzz
/o/

[Reisen's Insane]
00:15:884 (5) - NC here? To follow your previous pattern with the melody.
00:55:217 (10) - Start the combo here instead of 00:55:384 (1) - ? The combos will looked cleaner following the vocals because most of your down beats are in stacks anyways.
00:57:884 (9) - ^ Same situation with switching the combos around.
01:00:551 (10) - ^ maybe here too, but i'm not sure because of the new combo representing the upcoming jumps. Your choice.
01:25:217 (3) - I think if you move this note over a little you could make the pattern look a bit cleaner. I'm not a big fan of linear stuff. something like this looks a bit more aesthetically pleasing and makes a small jump that fits quite nice. http://puu.sh/12Ihu
01:27:217 (1) - Looks like you used copy paste so my combo suggestions apply like the kiai before.~
01:42:884 (7) - This was really awkward to understand especially at the speed of the slider velocity. Even though the velocity is notable higher some players could get confused (like I did) and think it was just a normal 1/2 slider instead of the 1/4 it is. consider making this a stack? Easier to read and play in my opinion.
01:47:967 (3,4) - Even though these were a lot easier to understand and I didn't have much trouble with them making them stacks wouldn't be a bad idea. Your choice.
01:57:218 (5) - Just like my very first suggestion add a NC here?
01:59:385 (1) - There is no beat here from what I can hear so this note doesn't really fit even though it's pretty easy to understand because it's basic. consider deleting it.

[Chocolate]
00:09:884 (4) - Just like reisen's diff, start the combo here instead of 00:10:051 (1) -
00:15:217 (4) - ^
00:17:217 (5) - ^
00:44:717 (1,2,3) - This part feels really undermapped for an insane diff. consider adding some notes in? Just following the vocals will keep it up to par with everything else in this part of the song.
01:08:551 (4) - Just like before on this section
01:13:884 (4) - ^
01:15:884 (5) - ^
01:21:551 (5) - This caught me off guard every time I played because of the distance. The fact that the player has to recognize this is just a short 1/4 slider then jump all the way over into the small stack starting on the blue tick might be too much for most players. Make this just a little bit smaller of a jump?
01:32:217 (7,8) - On the kiai before this was a slider not a stack, because you are copy pasting here you should probably just stick to 1 instead of a different one each time for the sake of consistency. I think the stack works better but it's your choice.
01:37:217 (1) - Make this 4 beats instead of 3? I couldn't understand this while playing because you are forcing the player to start on the blue tick, it would be a lot easier to understand if it were 4 beats like most streams commonly have. You'll end up starting the notes on the red tick.
01:42:884 (5) - Just like in reisen's diff I highly suggest a stack.
01:51:217 (4) - Just like before in this section.
01:56:551 (4) - ^
01:59:384 (1) - Just like in reisen's diff I don't hear the beat here but it works fine either way.

[cRyo's Hard]
00:17:551 (1) - there is a bit of an issue here with readability, let me explain. For most of the 1/4 triplets you have before this point you use kick-back sliders and they are all triplets, then you have this kick-back slider that is longer than the rest. The majority of the players playing this being non-experienced and not expecting this like this will assume it's a triplet and let go too early! Just a little thing to think about. So to fix this you could make some sort of note and kick-back combo like this. http://puu.sh/12IMM 4 notes stacked and then the triplet kickback slider. You can point the slider in any direction I just chose that at random.
01:58:884 (5) - ^

Easy, Normal, and Taiko are all good to me.
Call me back when you've looked over the mod!
Topic Starter
Chewin

MMzz wrote:

/o/

[Chocolate]
00:09:884 (4) - Just like reisen's diff, start the combo here instead of 00:10:051 (1) - I'll keep this because I'm following the hitsound pattern >w< The new combo fits the cymbals on 00:15:384 (1)
00:15:217 (4) - ^
00:17:217 (5) - ^
00:44:717 (1,2,3) - This part feels really undermapped for an insane diff. consider adding some notes in? Just following the vocals will keep it up to par with everything else in this part of the song. awesome! Added some 1/2 sliders :3
01:08:551 (4) - Just like before on this section you already know ;P
01:13:884 (4) - ^
01:15:884 (5) - ^
01:21:551 (5) - This caught me off guard every time I played because of the distance. The fact that the player has to recognize this is just a short 1/4 slider then jump all the way over into the small stack starting on the blue tick might be too much for most players. Make this just a little bit smaller of a jump? you're right, now I think it's fine
01:32:217 (7,8) - On the kiai before this was a slider not a stack, because you are copy pasting here you should probably just stick to 1 instead of a different one each time for the sake of consistency. I think the stack works better but it's your choice. I don't want to use the same pattern on kiai time, I decided to make this small change so.. I'll keep it
01:37:217 (1) - Make this 4 beats instead of 3? I couldn't understand this while playing because you are forcing the player to start on the blue tick, it would be a lot easier to understand if it were 4 beats like most streams commonly have. You'll end up starting the notes on the red tick. I think it's fine as it is now .-. I decided to make it also because to advice players about speed up
01:42:884 (5) - Just like in reisen's diff I highly suggest a stack. I don't like it :\
01:51:217 (4) - Just like before in this section.
01:56:551 (4) - ^
01:59:384 (1) - Just like in reisen's diff I don't hear the beat here but it works fine either way. The stream is still going so to use a circle with new combo on a long white tick isn't an issue for the highest diff D:

[cRyo's Hard]
00:17:551 (1) - there is a bit of an issue here with readability, let me explain. For most of the 1/4 triplets you have before this point you use kick-back sliders and they are all triplets, then you have this kick-back slider that is longer than the rest. The majority of the players playing this being non-experienced and not expecting this like this will assume it's a triplet and let go too early! Just a little thing to think about. So to fix this you could make some sort of note and kick-back combo like this. http://puu.sh/12IMM 4 notes stacked and then the triplet kickback slider. You can point the slider in any direction I just chose that at random. Agree
01:58:884 (5) - ^ k

Easy, Normal, and Taiko are all good to me.
Call me back when you've looked over the mod!
Thank you MMzz for the nice mod!
Btw I decided to change again the blue combo colour with an other one.
Updated!
Reisen Udongein

MMzz wrote:

/o/

[Reisen's Insane]
00:15:884 (5) - NC here? To follow your previous pattern with the melody. - i think it's not that good:3
01:25:217 (3) - I think if you move this note over a little you could make the pattern look a bit cleaner. I'm not a big fan of linear stuff. something like this looks a bit more aesthetically pleasing and makes a small jump that fits quite nice. http://puu.sh/12Ihu - since 01:25:717 (5) - has no jump there, i'll let this not changed :3
01:27:217 (1) - Looks like you used copy paste so my combo suggestions apply like the kiai before.~ - don't understand what this means @_@
01:47:967 (3,4) - Even though these were a lot easier to understand and I didn't have much trouble with them making them stacks wouldn't be a bad idea. Your choice. - Arranged to 1/4 return slider and also deleted 1 note next.
01:57:218 (5) - Just like my very first suggestion add a NC here? -same opinion
thanks MMzz :D (not mentioned suggestions are perfectly fixed)

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336,60,58384,1,0
336,60,58551,5,0
336,60,58634,1,0
336,60,58717,2,0,B|305:150,1,95,8|8
132,232,59051,1,0
132,232,59217,5,0
132,232,59300,1,0
132,232,59383,2,0,B|162:141,1,95,8|0
256,308,59717,2,0,B|256:208,1,95,8|0
380,232,60051,1,8
372,212,60134,1,0
364,188,60217,1,2
356,164,60301,1,0
349,141,60384,1,2
444,124,60551,53,0
436,100,60635,1,0
429,77,60717,1,4
292,40,60884,1,8
160,100,61051,1,0
32,40,61217,1,8
36,184,61384,1,0
136,288,61551,1,8
256,360,61717,2,0,B|308:352|328:300,1,95,0|8
236,196,62051,6,0,B|186:189|161:145,1,95,0|8
252,92,62384,2,0,B|302:99|327:143,1,95,0|8
412,104,62717,2,0,B|430:151|404:195,1,95,0|8
492,236,63051,2,0,B|472:282|422:295,1,95,0|8
332,328,63384,6,0,B|251:327|251:327|223:311|223:311|146:311,1,190,4|8
116,171,63884,1,0
25,151,64051,2,0,B|6:201|46:237,1,95,4|0
209,197,64384,2,0,B|228:147|188:111,1,95,8|0
324,64,64717,54,0,B|427:6|488:109,2,190,4|8|0
112,256,65884,6,0,B|68:284,2,47.5,0|0|12
252,288,66217,2,0,B|340:256,1,95,8|0
420,136,66551,2,0,B|460:168,2,47.5,0|0|8
296,64,66884,2,0,B|204:48,1,95,8|0
12,72,67217,5,0
36,64,67300,1,0
60,56,67384,1,8
92,152,67551,1,0
116,144,67634,1,0
140,136,67718,1,8
172,232,67884,1,0
196,224,67967,1,0
220,216,68051,2,0,B|288:172|336:220|336:220|356:160,1,190,8|0
468,72,68551,53,0
464,96,68634,1,0
460,120,68717,2,0,B|440:216,1,95,12|8
484,352,69051,1,0
344,324,69217,1,0
320,328,69301,1,0
296,332,69384,2,0,B|192:348,1,95,8|8
60,352,69717,2,0,B|48:288|48:288|28:268,1,95
62,54,70051,6,0,B|74:118|74:118|96:140,1,95,8|0
228,196,70384,2,0,B|180:204,1,47.5,8|0
252,192,70551,1,0
276,188,70634,1,0
300,184,70717,1,8
412,92,70884,2,0,B|436:48,2,47.5,2|0|2
440,232,71217,5,0
440,232,71301,1,0
440,232,71384,2,0,B|460:328,1,95,12|8
304,340,71717,1,0
304,340,71884,53,0
304,340,71967,1,0
304,340,72051,2,0,B|256:348|256:348|208:340,1,95,8|8
52,324,72384,1,0
52,324,72551,5,0
52,324,72635,1,0
52,325,72718,2,0,B|72:232,1,95,8|0
164,264,73051,2,0,B|183:170,1,95,8|0
448,115,73384,2,0,B|372:184|272:132,1,190,8|0
144,68,73884,6,0,B|180:32,1,47.5
128,88,74051,2,0,B|88:120|32:104,1,95,12|8
256,192,74384,1,0
144,316,74551,2,0,B|180:352,1,47.5
128,296,74718,2,0,B|88:264|32:280,1,95,8|8
256,192,75051,2,0,B|356:192,1,95
408,116,75384,53,8
464,192,75551,1,0
408,268,75717,1,8
332,328,75884,1,0
332,328,75967,1,0
332,328,76051,2,0,B|301:370|253:390|205:370|172:325,1,190,8|0
160,308,76467,1,8
148,288,76551,1,8
136,268,76634,1,8
124,248,76717,6,0,B|124:152,1,95,4|8
208,101,77051,2,0,B|208:196,1,95,0|8
292,244,77384,2,0,B|292:148,1,95,0|8
376,97,77718,2,0,B|376:192,1,95,0|8
456,244,78051,6,0,B|456:292|456:292|480:340,1,95,0|8
341,283,78384,2,0,B|356:236|328:192,1,95,0|8
184,192,78717,2,0,B|156:236|172:288,1,95,0|8
34,334,79051,2,0,B|56:292|56:292|56:244,1,95,0|8
56,220,79301,1,8
56,196,79384,54,0,B|32:104,1,95,4|8
157,28,79717,2,0,B|176:72|176:72|172:120,1,95,0|8
340,120,80051,2,0,B|336:72|336:72|354:28,1,95,0|8
480,104,80384,2,0,B|456:196,1,95,0|8
464,220,80634,1,8
472,244,80717,6,0,B|448:288|448:288|404:312,1,95,0|8
256,208,81051,2,0,B|256:113,1,95,0|8
103,309,81384,2,0,B|64:288|64:288|40:244,1,95,0|4
40,220,81634,1,8
40,196,81717,1,0
40,172,81801,1,8
40,148,81884,1,8
40,124,81967,1,8
40,100,82051,6,0,B|88:88|88:88|136:100,1,95,4|8
220,287,82384,2,0,B|172:299|172:299|128:288,1,95,0|8
40,124,82717,54,0,B|88:112|88:112|136:124,1,95,0|8
220,264,83051,2,0,B|172:276|172:276|128:264,1,95,0|8
292,120,83384,6,0,B|340:108|340:108|384:120,1,95,0|8
472,260,83717,2,0,B|424:272|424:272|376:260,1,95,0|8
292,97,84051,6,0,B|340:85|340:85|384:96,1,95,0|8
472,284,84384,2,0,B|424:296|424:296|376:284,1,95,0|8
356,288,84634,1,8
332,296,84717,54,0,B|287:284|287:284|239:296,1,95,4|8
160,352,85051,1,0
148,260,85217,1,8
140,164,85384,2,0,B|236:164,1,95,0|8
320,116,85717,1,0
408,148,85884,1,8
488,100,86051,5,0
408,148,86217,1,0
368,236,86384,1,0
420,316,86551,1,0
504,356,86717,1,0
44,60,87217,5,0
44,60,87300,1,0
44,60,87383,2,0,B|144:72,1,95,12|8
320,148,87717,1,0
320,148,87884,53,0
320,148,87967,1,0
320,148,88051,2,0,B|220:160,1,95,8|8
56,248,88383,1,0
56,248,88550,5,0
56,248,88634,1,0
56,248,88716,2,0,B|156:260,1,95,8|0
191,347,89050,2,0,B|96:336,1,95,8|0
280,320,89383,1,8
328,324,89467,1,0
376,316,89550,1,2
412,288,89633,1,0
432,244,89717,1,2
368,176,89883,1,0
368,176,89967,1,0
368,176,90050,6,0,B|384:84,1,95,12|8
309,14,90383,2,0,B|292:108,1,95
33,184,90717,1,8
33,184,90884,1,8
33,184,91050,54,0,B|133:227|200:140,1,190,0|8
288,108,91550,1,0
466,136,91717,2,0,B|416:128|416:128|376:148,1,95,8|0
368,244,92050,1,8
344,248,92133,1,0
320,252,92217,1,2
296,256,92300,1,0
272,260,92383,1,2
160,324,92550,1,0
136,320,92634,1,0
112,316,92717,6,0,B|80:220,1,95,12|8
176,60,93050,1,0
176,60,93217,5,0
176,60,93300,1,0
176,60,93383,2,0,B|207:150,1,95,8|8
380,232,93717,1,0
380,232,93883,53,0
380,232,93966,1,0
380,232,94051,2,0,B|350:141,1,95,8|0
256,308,94383,2,0,B|256:208,1,95,8|0
132,232,94717,1,8
140,212,94800,1,0
148,188,94883,1,2
156,164,94967,1,0
163,141,95050,1,2
68,124,95217,1,0
76,100,95301,1,0
83,77,95384,5,4
220,40,95550,1,8
352,100,95717,1,0
480,40,95883,1,8
476,184,96050,1,0
376,288,96217,1,8
256,360,96384,2,0,B|204:352|184:300,1,95,0|8
276,196,96718,6,0,B|326:189|351:145,1,95,0|8
260,92,97050,2,0,B|210:99|185:143,1,95,0|8
100,104,97383,2,0,B|82:151|108:195,1,95
20,236,97717,2,0,B|40:282|90:295,1,95,0|8
136,288,97967,1,8
184,300,98051,6,0,B|256:308|256:308|328:300,1,142.499995753169,6|2
476,192,98384,1,8
328,84,98551,1,0
328,84,98634,1,0
328,84,98717,2,0,B|256:76|256:76|184:84,1,142.499995753169,2|2
36,192,99051,1,8
128,352,99217,5,0
128,352,99301,1,0
128,352,99384,2,0,B|176:280|256:312,1,142.499995753169,2|8
284,324,99634,1,8
320,332,99717,2,0,B|387:286|382:201,1,142.499995753169,2|8
388,176,99967,1,8
396,140,100051,2,0,B|416:72|416:72|476:24,1,142.499995753169,2|8
40,27,100384,2,0,B|96:72|96:72|116:140,1,142.499995753169,8|0
116,176,100634,1,0
116,212,100717,6,0,B|56:212|56:212|40:220|40:220|-28:220,1,142.499995753169,4|8
88,308,101051,2,0,B|148:308|148:308|164:300|164:300|232:300,1,142.499995753169,0|8
264,300,101301,1,8
300,300,101384,2,0,B|384:296|412:208,1,142.499995753169,0|8
407,220,101634,1,8
407,220,101717,1,8
476,48,101884,53,8
476,48,101967,1,8
476,48,102051,2,0,B|420:96|336:64,1,142.499995753169,0|8
36,48,102384,2,0,B|92:96|176:64,1,142.499995753169,0|8
170,66,102634,1,0
170,66,102717,1,0
44,252,102884,2,0,B|196:264,1,142.500005435944,8|8
208,268,103134,1,8
228,272,103217,1,8
248,276,103301,1,8
264,280,103384,6,0,B|408:256,1,142.499995753169,6|2
468,28,103717,1,8
332,72,103884,1,0
332,72,103967,1,0
332,72,104051,2,0,B|188:96,1,142.499995753169,2|2
48,104,104384,1,8
128,252,104551,1,0
132,272,104634,1,0
136,292,104717,6,0,B|208:308|208:308|280:292,1,142.499995753169,2|0
376,92,105051,2,0,B|304:76|304:76|232:92,1,142.499995753169,2|0
236,90,105301,1,8
236,90,105384,1,2
104,40,105551,1,8
96,76,105634,1,8
88,112,105717,1,8
80,148,105801,1,8
72,184,105884,1,8
64,220,105967,1,8
56,256,106051,53,4
164,348,106217,1,8
256,176,106384,1,0
348,348,106551,1,8
456,256,106717,1,0
476,116,106884,1,8
256,36,107051,1,0
36,116,107217,1,8
192,236,107384,6,0,B|256:292|320:236,1,142.499995753169,0|8
320,116,107717,2,0,B|256:60|192:116,1,142.499995753169,0|8
256,176,108051,2,0,B|256:324,2,142.500005435944,0|8|8
68,344,108551,1,0
72,320,108635,1,0
76,296,108718,22,0,B|92:200,1,95,12|8
224,23,109051,2,0,B|208:116,1,95
212,164,109301,1,0
244,200,109385,2,0,B|280:232|280:232|332:228,1,95,8|8
436,136,109718,2,0,B|400:104|400:104|348:108,1,95
354,108,109968,1,0
354,108,110051,5,8
280,168,110218,1,0
188,196,110385,1,8
104,156,110551,1,0
52,76,110718,1,8
28,216,110885,1,2
0,356,111051,1,2
140,384,111218,5,0
164,380,111301,1,0
188,376,111385,2,0,B|288:352,1,95,12|8
336,308,111635,2,0,B|388:296,1,47.5
452,172,111885,53,0
428,168,111968,1,0
404,164,112052,2,0,B|304:140,1,95,8|8
256,96,112302,2,0,B|204:84,1,47.5,0|0
116,96,112551,5,0
84,128,112635,1,0
72,172,112718,1,8
84,288,112885,1,0
208,356,113051,6,0,B|236:316,1,47.5,8|0
272,288,113218,1,0
320,280,113301,1,0
360,304,113385,1,8
436,248,113551,2,0,B|480:276,2,47.5,2|0|2
428,104,113885,53,0
404,100,113968,1,0
380,96,114051,2,0,B|284:80,1,95,12|8
47,208,114385,1,0
47,208,114551,5,0
71,204,114634,1,0
95,200,114717,2,0,B|188:184,1,95,8|8
429,312,115051,1,0
429,312,115218,5,0
405,308,115301,1,0
382,304,115385,1,8
312,236,115551,1,0
220,216,115718,1,8
136,260,115885,1,0
92,344,116051,1,8
68,204,116218,1,2
44,64,116385,1,2
184,84,116551,53,0
224,60,116635,1,0
272,68,116718,2,0,B|320:56|368:80,1,95,12|8
488,160,117051,1,0
380,252,117218,1,0
380,300,117301,1,0
404,340,117385,2,0,B|308:360,1,95,8|8
91,284,117718,2,0,B|184:264,1,95
214,177,118051,6,0,B|120:196,1,95,8|0
152,104,118385,1,8
176,100,118468,1,0
200,96,118551,1,0
224,92,118635,1,0
248,88,118718,1,8
440,96,118885,2,8,B|480:60,1,47.5,12|0
456,144,119051,2,0,B|508:133,1,47.5,8|8
456,204,119218,2,0,B|507:221,1,47.5,8|8
136,192,120717,5,8
355,120,120884,1,0
219,307,121051,1,8
219,76,121217,1,0
355,263,121384,1,4
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