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Pop from here because if the map get it approve this information is going to appear on the genre of the map.
- Volume: In General, the Sample Volume sounds a bit low especially on Normal Hitsounds section. At least to these Sections increase the Volume by 10%. I think that sounds great with 10% more.
[Can't Touch:]• 00:00:978 (1): It gives an especial effect Start the map with a Finish hitsound, so would be Great if you add a Finish on the beginning of this Slider
• 00:08:512 (1,2): Looking your intention, that you want to increase the Spacing between the Notes after to the 'Can't Touch This' (on the Instrumental) this Stack between this Note and this Slider break your Idea, and also the Consistency and the Flow in the map, so it's better if you unstack the Note. I thought in move (2) to
x:280 y:184 because if you listen the music (2) is linked with (3,4) in the song so to keep that it's better to keep the distance between these Notes.
• 00:10:199 (9): Listen your previous patterns (and your Next one too.), you always has a Clap when the music sound like this. To keep consistency, is better if you add a Clap in this Note too.
• 00:11:774 (1): Listen that, on your first and second section (on the beginning) you have Sliders in 1/1 to start the section, on the third one you have a Slider in 1/2 followed by a Note, and in this one (on the fourth one) you have a 1/2 Slider with a Repetition, in this case would be better to keep consistency Removing the Repetition and then adding a Note on the blank Space (on 00:12:223). Also, following all your patterns since the beginning to here if you make that you can add more flow to the map because it's a 'moved' map and plays much better too, so you can add more flow with a better pattern if you do that.
• 00:12:898 (4): You should break your Clap's pattern here, because the highes sound in the music is not the same as before (you can prove that looking the lenght of you Combo comparing with your previous Combo'ing). In this case sounds much better if you Remove the Clap on the beginning of this Slider and just keep the Clap on the end of it.
• 00:14:023 (2): Sounds preety empty at the beginning listening a lot of Whistle and Finishes in this Section, and I also like how to sound the Clap on that, so would be an excellent idea if you add a Clap on the beginning of this Slider
• 00:14:922 (4): (^)
• 00:16:272 (3,4,5): This pattern flow preety bad, the way in which a player have to move the Tablet/mouse is preety bad, well you know, you have to move the mouse/tablet forwards and then you have to move it back on a quickly form. Is preety long to explain, so here is a Screenshoot because you know:
“A picture is worth a thousand words!” xD.
• 00:30:779 (4,5): You never used jumps on this kind of phrases, for this reason this jump works weird. Just keep the distance between these Notes and keep the distance to the next phrase
'Can't Touch This'• 00:33:366 (1): Again, as I said you in 00:11:774, Remove the repetition and add a Note on the blank Space (00:33:816) for a better flow.
• 00:35:503 (x): I think that this one should be a 5-plet instead of a 3-plet. The Vocal continue here, so a Note is needed.
• 00:41:463 (4,5): Would play better if you reduce this jump, plays weird here, so I would like to be reduced a bit. Plays better if you move (5) to
x:208 y:112 (Distance 1,76x between (4,5) (5,6)), it gives a better flow to this section, where you didn't add this kind of jumps.
• 00:43:263 (11,1,2): This 3-plet sounds preety awkward, doesn't fit at all this 3-plet here. Listening the music in 25% I could conclude that it's better if you Remove the Note (11), because the new Sound start where it is (1)
• 00:44:612 (2): (NAZI)- The shape that gave this Note with the previous (1) looks bad in my opinion. It's better if you do Flip Vertically, Horizontally and Reverse Selection (Ctrl +J, Ctrl + H and Ctrl + R) in this Slider, and then ubicate it where it was before, and you will have something like that:
• 00:54:509 (9): The vocal is present all the Time, for this reason I'm preety sure that you are missing another Repetition on this Slider. You should add a Repetition on 00:54:846
• 01:02:156 (8): I'm not total supporter on this kind of things that I'm going to mention right now, but I have to be sincere in this case
. The music change is marked exactly on this point, for this reason a New Combo is very useful
• 01:18:238 (6): I'm totally sure that this Note belongs at the same thing in the Vocal (as the same form that it belongs to the Stream), and I'm totally sure that you have to add the New Combo here and Remove it from the Next Note (and doesn't respect the downbeat in this case)
• 01:21:274 (4): Try to listen the music properly, you usually added Clap on these places, so for consistency you need a Clap in this Note too.
• 01:26:447 (7,8,9,10,11): After the Stream, the jump between (7,8) (8,9) looks forced at the hour to play the map. To keep the flow you should reduce (just a bit) the spacing between these Notes.
• 01:28:472 (4): This section sound empty without hitsounds, if you listen the music the sound that appear here is the same as the next (5) where you have a Clap. Looking that, you should add a Clap in this Note too.
• 01:34:545 (1): I don't know why, but in all the cases that appear a 1/2 Slider with a Repetition doesn't work at all with the Instrumental. As I suggest before, it's better if you Remove the repetition and add a Note on 01:34:994
• 01:37:469 (2): You never used Sliders on these Section, and also you used jumps in when appear 'Can't Touch This'. So, it's better if you replace this Slider to 2 Notes. Also, this works better than the Slider since the Vocal is not united at all, so with 2 Notes you can emphatisize that on a better way.
• 01:46:016 (3,4,5,6,7): I really don't like how to play the Stack between (3,4), doesn't work fine and flow bad. So, would be better if you unstack (3,4) and then you continue the sequence like (5,6,7).
- Well, you have a lot of this kind of things in these Kiai and on the other ones too, i'm not going to mention this stuff anymore, but would be better if you fix all these things to have a better flow.• 01:55:462 (1,2,3): I really don't like the Spacing between these Notes, the spacing is very big and it's uncomfortable at the hour to do the 3-plet, the position of notes is bad, works really bad when you play the map. You should reposisionate these Notes.
• 01:59:736 (1): The Vocal needs an emphatisize here, so you can add a Finish on the Slider beginning
• 02:08:170 (x): If you want to respect your Stream patterns, you should add a Note here
• 02:10:532 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12): Are you sure that these 3-plets work fine with the music? There are only sound on White and Red Ticks, so it's better if you replace these 3-plets to Sliders in 1/2. On the previous (1,2,3) is good enough because act the Instrumental, but sounds bad here because it doesn't act it.
• 02:11:882 (x): Sounds noisy here, and you can play with the instrumental too. To make that, you should add a Note with Clap here.
• 02:38:647 (1,2,3): This position of Notes again, reposicionate them please
• 02:46:519 (1): Looking that it's an approval map, you can risk the rhythm a bit more. In this case sounds better if you remove the Repetition and then add 2 Notes. The first one on 02:47:194 and the second one on 02:47:419
• 02:48:319 (1): (^)
• 02:50:118 (1): (^)
• 02:51:917 (1): (^)
• 02:59:902 (11): This seems overmapped, there is no sound here. It's better if you remove this Note
• 03:00:240 (1,2,3): Wait, simple spacing and a huge jump then? This plays really awkward. So, reduce the jump between (2,3) and then if you want increase the spacing between (1,2) to have a better flow
• 03:21:157 (12): I prefer a Clap instead of a Finish on Slider Beginning
• 03:21:832 (1,2,3): As I said you before, reposicionate these Notes for a better flow.
• 03:23:631 (6): Clap on the beginning for consistency. You always added Claps on this Instrumental section
• 03:29:704 (1): I can listen a sound like a Finish hitsound in the Song, to emphatisize that, is better if you add a Finish on this Slider beginning
• 03:35:102 (7): There is a recess in the music (so would be better an antijump between (7,8,9) instead of a jump, but I didn't went to suggest you that, made it if you feel to do it), a Rhythmycal change, for this reason it's a good idea if you add a New Combo here
• 03:46:686 (10): This note feels unnecesary, because there is no sound in this place and the overmap is really unnecesary. Remove this Note, please
• 03:50:622 (1): It's better if you replace this Slider in 1/8 to a Note For 2 Reasons, you never added Sliders on this section and also this 1/8 Slider doesn't fit at all.
- I'd like to listen some Normal Whistles, but it's Ok Well, at the moment it still needs more mods to fix some jumps and stuff (especially because it's your first map aiming for Approval, and it's ok if you have problem with that), but it's going on a good way I think.
I wish the best of luck with this map, Yli 
