Melophobia wrote:

Chata <3

[General]
volume is too boring and should be more intoned imo. try these volume to make more exciting in all diffs.
00:00:850 - 60% fixed
00:15:850 - 50% fixed
00:36:662 - 60% fixed
00:53:350 - 70% fixed

[Easy]
00:18:850 (4) - felt empty, how about whistle at the repeat of this slider? fixed
00:42:100 (3) - add finish at the end? meh, i guess
00:48:850 (2) - sounds weird and doesnt fit here, end this at 00:49:412 - instead, because accent is there. fixed
01:02:350 (4) - end this at 01:03:662 - instead fixed
01:18:100 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/vIH4 fixed
01:31:600 (3) - 1.5 rhythm may be hard for beginner, delete this note and add a repeat to previous spinner? and it will look better because it'll be symmetrical fixed hopefully

nice, but too easy and boring imo. and difficulty gap between Easy and Normal is too huge. Yeah, that would be a problem wouldn't it?

also about putting whistle pattern, i disagree with you. you should put them at 1st white tick (downbeat) I might try it to see if it's better.

[Normal]
00:38:350 (3,5) - remove claps, they start suddenly and doesnt fit here. if you remove them, next part will be emphasized a lot fixed
01:01:975 (1,2,3) - they dont fit music well, try something like this
http://puu.sh/vIKO Nah, It will mess up my pattern.
01:18:100 (3,4,5,6) - ^ same reason. Same as above
http://puu.sh/vILn

[Insane]
00:09:850 (1) - this clap is not suitable here, since you dont add clap in next part lol wow. How did that get there? XD
00:42:850 (1) - add finish at the beginning fixed
01:18:662 (4) - ^ fixed
01:19:975 (7) - add clap at the beginning It sounds weird to me.
01:29:537 (2,2,2,2) - add finishes fixed
01:31:975 (5,6) - add finish to 6 and remove it from 5 fixed

that's all~ good luck!

• Delete .osb file and full upload
  0KB custom hitsound is unrankable as i know, you must use this instead http://puu.sh/vK6M

1. 00:30:850 (3) - curve more soft
   
   SPOILER

   

   392,88,30850,2,0,B|300:108|328:192|328:192|256:256|256:256|184:192|184:192|212:108|120:88,1,480

2. 00:49:412 - finish?
3. 00:59:350 (1) - don't curve so much, it looks pretty ugly, fix it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:350 (1) - grid up the 2nd tick, looks more good

1. 00:03:100 (4) - pretty simple now, i'd use 1/2 slider with 1 arrow, and add clap on arrow and end and add a circle after this
2. 00:06:100 (4) - ^
3. 00:08:725 (3) - ^ but a circle first, and 1/2 slider
4. 00:27:100 (6) - same as 00:03:100 (4) - but no clap
5. 00:40:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - too simple, try other way?
6. 01:03:100 - finish
7. 01:03:850 - ^
8. 01:04:600 (5) - ^ and if you accept the 3 finish, they will be really exciting sounds

1. 00:03:662 - clap
2. 00:05:162 (6) - NC to warn the jump?
3. 00:26:725 (4,5,6,7) - no, it's kinda really confusing pattern, especially low AR. i highly recommend fix the notes

1. it's good, but i recommend make easier Insane diff, it's pretty hard with the jumps imo

1. Seems good. Continue~

1. 01:14:350 (3) - Hmm, please add a finish on this slider end since it's has heavy rythim for the change of rythim. So it very feat for finish sound. If you want, you can delete the finish on the repeat because i don't think whistle and finish is fit together.
2. 01:20:350 (1) - I think the whistle on this slider end is breaking your whistle consistencies. It would be good if you can delete it.
3. 01:27:100 (2) - ^ but now it's on the start and the end.
4. 01:29:350 (1) - I think you can split this slider into 2. 1 1/2 slider with many repeat can be too monotone.

1. Well, just like Melo said, you can either make the easy diff more harder or make this diff more easier. I think the gap is not very good. To make this diff easier, you can reduce the number of 1/1 rythim because you spam 1/1 rythin often in this diff. Some slider can be changed to 2/1 and it still fit with the music.
2. 00:40:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can reduce the number of circle here and change it some to slider since it can be quite difficult for beginner to pass many 1/1 circle like this.
3. 01:01:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, since i still can hear the cymbal sound overher i think this rythim can still be improvise by finish rythim. I would like to suggest you add a finish sound every 2/1 start from 01:03:100- to 01:05:350-. For example :
   
   1. 01:02:725 (2) - end
   2. 01:03:850 (4) - start
   3. etc
4. 01:17:350 (1) - Just like easy, i think it would be good if you add finish here.
5. 01:31:037 (4) - I think you can put a new combo here to reduce the combo length.

1. OD 5 is low for the hard diff. Please raise it by 1.
2. 00:28:412 (2,3,4,5,6) - This jump is not consistant with your previous rythim at 00:16:225 (2,3,4,5,6) - since there's no jump like this at that time. This can surprising many player. Either make this note not jump, or the previous note jumpy.
3. 00:35:350 (5) - Add a new combo here? I think this combo is longer than your other combo.
4. 00:42:850 (7,1) - Switch combo please. The new stanza start at 00:42:850 (7) -
5. 01:01:225 (5,1) - ^
6. 01:13:412- Hmm, adding a note here can make the fllow more good. Besides that, the new note is really fit with the song. Well, just stack it beneath 01:13:225 (1) -
7. 01:31:412 (3) - Put a new combo overhere so combo at 01:31:037 (1,2) - can be consistant with previous note.

1. Ouch, since you have a jumpy map and very high SV, AR 8 is not a good way to play this diff. Raise it please to AR 9 so it can be more enjoyable to play. Really, i can play more better at AR 9 than AR 8.
2. 00:05:350 (5) - This combo is not consistant, please add a new combo here then remove new combo at 00:06:100 (1) -
3. 00:32:350 (5,1) - For combo consistencies, switch combo please.
4. 00:49:975 (1,2) - This one too. Remove new combo at 1 and then add new combo at 2.
5. 00:52:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - This whistle rythim is very loud imo. Please add a timing section at 00:52:037- then reduce the volume by 10%-20%.
6. 01:03:850 (3,1) - Switch new combo again please.
7. 01:06:850 (5,1) - This one too. Switch new combo please.
8. 01:17:350 (1) - Like previous diff, how about a finish at this slider start?

Miya wrote:

Hi there :3

General

1. Seems good. Continue~

Yay!

Easy

1. 01:14:350 (3) - Hmm, please add a finish on this slider end since it's has heavy rythim for the change of rythim. So it very feat for finish sound. If you want, you can delete the finish on the repeat because i don't think whistle and finish is fit together. Fixed
2. 01:20:350 (1) - I think the whistle on this slider end is breaking your whistle consistencies. It would be good if you can delete it. Fixed
3. 01:27:100 (2) - ^ but now it's on the start and the end.Fixed
4. 01:29:350 (1) - I think you can split this slider into 2. 1 1/2 slider with many repeat can be too monotone. Didn't fix, but I changed the hitsounds to finsh-whistle-finish-whistle-finish, instead of all finishes.

Normal

1. Well, just like Melo said, you can either make the easy diff more harder or make this diff more easier. I think the gap is not very good. To make this diff easier, you can reduce the number of 1/1 rythim because you spam 1/1 rythin often in this diff. Some slider can be changed to 2/1 and it still fit with the music. Didn't you download the map before May 21? (it's in my map description) It includes an "Easy+" difficulty.
2. 00:40:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can reduce the number of circle here and change it some to slider since it can be quite difficult for beginner to pass many 1/1 circle like this. It's normal difficulty, not easy difficulty. Normal difficulties are for basic skilled players, not for beginners imo.
3. 01:01:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, since i still can hear the cymbal sound overher i think this rythim can still be improvise by finish rythim. I would like to suggest you add a finish sound every 2/1 start from 01:03:100- to 01:05:350-. For example :
   
   1. 01:02:725 (2) - end
   2. 01:03:850 (4) - start
   3. etc sounds weird to me, but I'll try it for now. Fixed.
4. 01:17:350 (1) - Just like easy, i think it would be good if you add finish here. Fixed
5. 01:31:037 (4) - I think you can put a new combo here to reduce the combo length. Fixed

Insane

1. Ouch, since you have a jumpy map and very high SV, AR 8 is not a good way to play this diff. Raise it please to AR 9 so it can be more enjoyable to play. Really, i can play more better at AR 9 than AR 8. What's with the AR9? How can players even read that? I can't even read AR9 that well. I'm no pro in osu! you know. (Look at my performance points XD). Anyway, I'll wait for more mods first before changing.
2. 00:05:350 (5) - This combo is not consistant, please add a new combo here then remove new combo at 00:06:100 (1) - Fixed
3. 00:32:350 (5,1) - For combo consistencies, switch combo please. Fixed
4. 00:49:975 (1,2) - This one too. Remove new combo at 1 and then add new combo at 2. That actually looks better. Fixed.
5. 00:52:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - This whistle rythim is very loud imo. Please add a timing section at 00:52:037- then reduce the volume by 10%-20%. Reduced it to 45%. Fixed.
6. 01:03:850 (3,1) - Switch new combo again please. Fixed. Also, I added a new combo at 01:00:850 (1) for combo consistency.
7. 01:06:850 (5,1) - This one too. Switch new combo please. Not this one though. This combo is based on the paterrn.
8. 01:17:350 (1) - Like previous diff, how about a finish at this slider start? Yes!

Ok, that's all from me. My suggestion for comboing is don't follow the vocal. Because it can ruin your combo consistencies. Instead follow the stanza steadily. Overall, this is good map. Well done :3
Good luck~

1. All clear.

1. 00:30:850 (3) - The first and last anchor aren't mapped to the music. These anchors should be at 00:31:600 - and 00:33:100 - respectively.
2. 00:34:600 (1) - This doesn't compliment 00:30:850 (3) - very well, but hopefully it'll be better when you fix the above.
3. 00:36:850 (3) - I'm sure symmetry was intended. You should fix this.

1. Er, what's with the difficulty name? Just make it Normal. Or, make this Easy and the above diff Beginner.
2. 00:04:225 - You should manipulate your S:C2 so that you get claps for sliderticks. Right now it feels really empty, and the improvement will be great if you add this.
3. 00:18:850 (1,2,3) - Given the music during the sliders, (3) should not be a Reverse of (1). In addition, your anchors aren't matching the music.
4. 00:36:100 (4) - Anchor this one at 00:36:475 - , then fix (6).
5. 00:38:725 (7) - I feel this should go at 00:39:100 - .
6. 00:54:475 - Importance of slidertick manipulation (and 00:57:475 - and others).
7. 01:23:350 (3) - New combo here instead of 01:21:850 (1) -

1. I feel you're leaving out a lot of more interesting rhythms; this is a normal diff, and apart from 01:29:350 (1,2,3,4) - (the most interesting part in your map), you're strictly using 1/1 only. I think this can be improved drastically. In addition, this diff is too similar to your Easy+; if this is just a score filler, you're better off removing a diff. I'll be looking to see that this diff utilizes more 1/2 when I come back for a recheck.
2. 00:06:850 (5) - New combo here instead of 00:07:225 (1) -

1. 00:39:662 (4,5,1) - You're better off making this triple a straight line to match 00:38:350 (1,2) - .
2. 00:49:787 - Expected another two circles here 1/2 apart before the spinner.
3. 01:13:225 (1,2) - Place these horizontal instead of stacking them, since 01:13:787 (3,4) - is stacked at a different pace and it may play awkwardly immediately after a spinner.

1. OD is the same as Hard! Love to see this go to 7. Even 8 is acceptable since this is following a strict symmetrical pattern throughout.

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[General]

1. All clear. Sweet!

[Easy]

1. 00:30:850 (3) - The first and last anchor aren't mapped to the music. These anchors should be at 00:31:600 - and 00:33:100 - respectively.
2. 00:34:600 (1) - This doesn't compliment 00:30:850 (3) - very well, but hopefully it'll be better when you fix the above.
3. 00:36:850 (3) - I'm sure symmetry was intended. You should fix this.
   
   ***DELETED THIS DIFFICULTY***

[Easy+]

1. Er, what's with the difficulty name? Just make it Normal. Or, make this Easy and the above diff Beginner.
   I decided to just delete the Easy difficulty and change Easy+ to Easy, since having a Beginner difficulty is pointless. Originally, there was no Easy+ difficulty. The reason why I mapped an easy+ difficulty is because the difficulty gap between Easy and Normal was too high (according to Melophobia's mod).
   
2. 00:04:225 - You should manipulate your S:C2 so that you get claps for sliderticks. Right now it feels really empty, and the improvement will be great if you add this. Fixed.
   
3. 00:18:850 (1,2,3) - Given the music during the sliders, (3) should not be a Reverse of (1). In addition, your anchors aren't matching the music. Fixed.
   
4. 00:36:100 (4) - Anchor this one at 00:36:475 - , then fix (6). Fixed.
   
5. 00:38:725 (7) - I feel this should go at 00:39:100 - . Fixed.
   
6. 00:54:475 - Importance of slidertick manipulation (and 00:57:475 - and others). Fixed
   
7. 01:23:350 (3) - New combo here instead of 01:21:850 (1) - Fixed.

[Normal]

1. I feel you're leaving out a lot of more interesting rhythms; this is a normal diff, and apart from 01:29:350 (1,2,3,4) - (the most interesting part in your map), you're strictly using 1/1 only. I think this can be improved drastically. In addition, this diff is too similar to your Easy+; if this is just a score filler, you're better off removing a diff. I'll be looking to see that this diff utilizes more 1/2 when I come back for a recheck.
   
   I removed Easy Difficulty already, so I'm not removing any more difficulties. No, this is not a score fuller. I originally planned my normal difficulty to mostly have 1/1's on it. I think normal difficulty is fine imo, it's not that boring imo. I also love the symmetry I did and I really don't want to mess that up especially at 00:39:850 - 00:51:850 and 01:17:350 - 01:36:850. However, I will remap the areas that is not between those ranges. I recently noticed that my maximum combo for my Easy difficulty is higher than my Normal difficulty, which is also the problem.
   
   
2. 00:06:850 (5) - New combo here instead of 00:07:225 (1) - Fixed

[Insane]

1. OD is the same as Hard! Love to see this go to 7. Even 8 is acceptable since this is following a strict symmetrical pattern throughout. The overall difficulty for hard was 5, unless Nich95 changed it to 6. I personally hate insane difficulties with high overall difficulty and high drain rate. It's just too hard to get 300 and to pass the map. There's always the Hard Rock mod if you want stricter timing and drain rate anyway. I'll change it to 7 then since it's the most popular setting for insane difficulties. Just don't expect me to do so in my future maps.

Fairly well mapped, but I'd like to see a few more mods. Good luck :3

Thanks for the mod. Time to re-check those maps.

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[Nich's Hard]

1. 00:39:662 (4,5,1) - You're better off making this triple a straight line to match 00:38:350 (1,2) - . I fixed, but made triple a straight line to match with 00:39:850 (1) - .
2. 00:49:787 - Expected another two circles here 1/2 apart before the spinner. added
3. 01:13:225 (1,2) - Place these horizontal instead of stacking them, since 01:13:787 (3,4) - is stacked at a different pace and it may play awkwardly immediately after a spinner. I change (1,2) to slider, but don't place these horizontal. Parts of (3,4), I fixed by making them symmetrical.

Fairly well mapped, but I'd like to see a few more mods. Good luck :3

SPOILER

96,324,34600,2,0,B|48:328|24:284,2,80,0|2|0

SPOILER

392,96,77350,6,0,B|344:140|368:208,1,120,4|0

Yasora wrote:

from challenge queue
my mod in here:
t/81919/start=30

I'm gonna die =w=

Yasora wrote:

from challenge queue
my mod in here:
t/81919/start=30

I'm gonna die =w=