Byakugan249 wrote:

Mitsu:
00:54:399 (3) - maybe make this a wave slider like (1) because of the flow in the tune. the lyrics may be different but the tune sounds the same.　fixed
01:25:788 (6) - a NC here because of new lyrics. it follows "shite". fixed

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. I found this on #modreqs but i keep on forgetting that i have to mod this. anyways....

General:
I'm guessing that the diff names represent the girls' names. if that's the case how about a BG for each girl. an example would be that the girl in that BG is Nayu so that BG should be in the Nayu diff. maybe use this BG for Nayu? if you don't want to then that's fine by me. added BG for all heroines
I'm concerned about the video. remember that this is an all ages game. maybe put a warning that if you're *insert age here* or younger, don't download with the vid, or find a way to cover it up. added warning words
for my mod set the grid size to tiny or small.

Arisu:
00:20:788 (2) - i think it'd be easier for beginners if you can align (2) to the end of (1) like this. remember to move (3) if you do so. ok
00:29:677 (2) - hmm extend the slider till 00:30:788? if you can hear carefully you hear a sound, kind of like a guitar riff, that's what it's following. ok
00:35:603 (2) - same as above. end it at 00:36:714. the sliderticks should follow vocals, or add a circle at 00:36:714? feels empty when there's no note there IMO ok

Chiyuru:
00:50:418 (4,1) - I think it'd be easier if you can add a repeat on (4) and remove (1) remember to make (2) a NC if you do this. like this if you don't know what i'm saying. ok
00:53:381 (4,1) - same as above but add a circle at 00:55:233 ok

Maria:
00:24:770 (4) - replace this for a circle, but add a circle to where the slider ends like the other 3 circles in this combo. it looks like the beginning of the slider isn't following anything. keep
00:31:159 (5) - make this a NC because of vocals. 1-4 is following instrumental. ok sorry back

This is the best i can do. GL

hillaryzx wrote:

Kitsuneko　Mitsu

01:02:085(2) - add finish here. added
01:04:492(2) - remove finish here and substitute with clap ok
01:05:233(3) - ^ ok

hillaryzx wrote:

Here's your mod~

General

No problem to me...

Arisu

00:14:862 - I think it is unsuitable to put finish here, normal will do here.. ok, fixed
00:20:788 - same reason as above but clap here. ok
00:35:603 - add finish at here. oh, added
01:02:640 - why don't add a circle here? added
01:07:455 - shortening this slider like this? if you change, then add finish at slider's tail : changed~



01:17:085 - remove finish here and you can put clap here or normal fixed

Maria

00:15:418(3) - remove finish at slider's head and replace with clap or normal... sorry no change
01:32:455(3) - ^ same

Well, overall, this map is good...
Okay, I'll take my leave...

Leorda wrote:

Hello hi ( 'n')/


Maria
01:42:825 (1) - Covered by spinner-osu, could be hidden for players fixed

Good luck

Leorda wrote:

Mitsu
00:07:085 (4) - This seems overlapped by hitbursts, so it might be hard to read for advanced player (not sure enough) ok
00:11:899 (1) - Finish at head slider? added
01:13:381 (4,1) - This pauses seems confusing for me, because I was expecting that (1) is slow slider and snap at 01:13:751 (lol). Perhaps, unstack it to prevent of confusing? ok

Leorda wrote:

Nayu
01:23:010 (1) - This notes are almost offscreen (just a warning)fixed
01:25:233 (4) - Sudden slow slider are makes confusing for playerschanged
01:25:973 (2) - ^keep this

Regou wrote:

From #modreq
[Maria]
00:01:529 (1,2) - 1 grid up fixed
00:26:714 (1,2,3) - Weird keep
00:34:122 (1,2,3) - ^
00:35:603 (1,2,1) - Each slider change into 1 circle only. nope
00:57:825 (1,2,3,4) - Same spacing plz fixed
00:59:307 (1,2) - Same as 00:35:603 (1,2,1) no change
01:18:566 (1,2,1) - ^ no change
[Chiyuru]
00:58:566 (2,3) - Spacing no problem
[Arisu]
No Problem imo
That's all, good luck!

Regou wrote:

[Nayu]
00:12:085 (2,3,4,5) - Put them in same spacing will be better...? No but changed a little
00:29:214 (3) - 1 grid up fix
00:46:344 (2,3,4) - Same spacing plz Nope
00:47:455 (3,4,5) - Not equilateral triangle changed a little
01:00:047 (1,2) - Ctrl+r Nope
01:15:973 (3,4) - ^ Nope

Regou wrote:

[Mitsu]
00:33:381 (4) - 1 grid left & 1 grid up no change

remy11 wrote:

modding~

[General]
Fine!

[Maria]
01:24:029 (2) - スタックさせない方がいいかなって思います changed

少ないmodごめんなさい
完成形にすごい近い良譜面だと思います ありがとう でもmodなかなかつかなくて困ってる;w;
Rank期待です

remy11 wrote:

[Mitsu]
OD-1 no change

1. After doing some research, I have found the title to be "YOu & ME = happy!". Please correct this, or back up your title with some credible source.
2. Nanakase Gizumo has had a name change; you should include his/her old name in the tags.
3. You may or may not want to include typical eroge op tags such as "hentai", "game", "visual novel", "vn", etc. Look for these in the tags of the beatmaps that have already been ranked.
4. maria.jpg is a background, but is not 1024x768 or one of the suggested sizes.
5. Diff "Nayu" has Kiai time set to end 01:25:696, which is different from the rest at 01:25:233, and there isn't reason to do that either, since the last object before in that Kiai is at 01:25:233.
6. If the diff names are names of characters in the game, then there's no way to tell just by looking at the names which diff is the hardest diff. Especially in a visual novel where all the characters are considered equal and not one is higher or harder to get than another, diff names should not be names of characters. Please consider changing the names.

• 00:08:196 (5,6) - What distance spacing are you using for these overlaps like this? I've seen 0.36x, 0.45x for 00:09:677 (4,5) - , 0.33x for 00:11:159 (3,4) - , 0.28x for 00:13:381 (1,2) - ... These range by over 0.1x, and while effect on gameplay may be small, it does look rather untidy. Choose one spacing and stick with it throughout, since all the times you're overlapping is mapping similar rhythm.

1. 00:37:085 (5) - NC should be here instead of 00:36:714 (1) - ; you're following NC for every measure in the verse, so it's good to begin with consistency.
2. 00:47:455 (3) - Likewise, NC here instead of 00:46:899 (1) -
3. 00:48:196 (1,2,3,4,1) - Played this like a stream, since it wasn't obvious enough. Consider using 0.45x to 0.60x spacing for these antijumps.
4. 00:49:492 (1) - Remove NC here; isn't "一人ぼっち" one idea? You have 01:03:751 (1) - "二人" as one entire combo even though it reaches (12).
5. 00:57:085 (1) - Remove NC here.
6. 00:58:381 (1) - And here too; is there a reason why you aren't using NC every measure now?
7. 01:05:233 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - This should match the rhythming of 01:03:751 (1,2,3) - and 01:04:492 (4,5,6) - . Each syllable of "futari" is sung in the same manner, and you shouldn't suddenly start mapping to the drums.
8. 01:12:825 (2,3,4,5) - For these, too, I'd consider using distance spacing 0.45x to 0.60x spacing (at x1.00 sv, so this means 0.90x to 1.20x at x0.50sv).
9. 01:20:047 (5) - NC should be here instead of 01:19:677 (1) - ; one, you're following "あげるよ", and two, 01:20:047 - is a start of a new measure.
10. 01:30:418 (5) - Likewise, NC here instead of 01:30:047 (1) -
11. 01:33:381 (5) - and NC here instead of 01:33:010 (1) -
12. 01:36:344 (5) - and NC here instead of 01:35:973 (1) -

1. 00:25:233 (1,2,3) - Are you going to represent this this way, or 00:26:714 (1,2,3) - ? Pick one and stick with it, this pattern appears six times. You're already using the same antijumps seen at 00:25:973 (1,2,3) - , so you should use one pattern instead of mixing it up when the music doesn't suggest you should change.
2. 00:31:159 (5,6) - Then you've got this, which you haven't seen before.
3. 01:04:770 (3) - Curved slider would make the most sense here. Copy 01:04:029 (3) - rotate it 18 degrees clockwise (that's about halfway between 01:04:029 (3) - and 01:05:510 (3) - then consider flipping it vertically, and replace it, stacking with 01:04:677 (2) - .
4. 01:21:529 (1,2) - Notice 01:14:122 (1,2,3) - and 01:15:603 (1,2,3) - and 01:20:048 (1,2,3) - . This should be a straight slider and two stacked circles, but instead you have a second slider. Fix it for consistency, since you've started a pattern. Alternatively, you can change 01:15:973 (2,3) - into a straight slider.
5. 01:38:566 (1,2,1) - Regulate spacing here. Consider moving 01:40:233 (1) - down, or if you want this to be centered, move 01:38:566 (1,2) - up, but then you'll have to move the other circles it stacks with, too.

1. 00:31:344 (2,3) - Stack these. All five other instances of this pattern have it stacked, and it's awkward that this one does not stack.

1. 00:29:677 (1,2,3,1) - Consider making this a regular diamond shape - also achieved by making 00:30:418 (2,3,1) - an equilateral triangle.
2. 00:45:973 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off here.

1. Generally for an Easy diff, I like to use HP2, CZ5, AR3, and OD2 if there are more sliders than circles.
2. 00:29:677 (2) - Place anchor at exactly 00:30:603 - to match music the best. You can check by setting Slider Tick Rate 2, then placing the anchor at the last slider tick.
3. 00:48:196 - No need to set x0.75 sv. You can actually just delete this inherited point since it accomplishes nothing.

those wrote:

[Mitsu]

1. 00:31:344 (2,3) - Stack these. All five other instances of this pattern have it stacked, and it's awkward that this one does not stack. stacked

wmfchris wrote:

[Mitsu]
01:19:677 (4) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical ok
01:40:233 - I regard this as "Hard" so better add a note here and then start the spinner a bit later added a note

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.
Remember to tell me which mods you applied and which you rejected, along with the reason for rejecting them!

[General]

1. After doing some research, I have found the title to be "YOu & ME = happy!". Please correct this, or back up your title with some credible source. corrected title to "YOu & ME = Happy!"
2. Nanakase Gizumo has had a name change; you should include his/her old name in the tags. added
3. You may or may not want to include typical eroge op tags such as "hentai", "game", "visual novel", "vn", etc. Look for these in the tags of the beatmaps that have already been ranked. added
4. maria.jpg is a background, but is not 1024x768 or one of the suggested sizes. oh, it's easy miss. fixed
5. Diff "Nayu" has Kiai time set to end 01:25:696, which is different from the rest at 01:25:233, and there isn't reason to do that either, since the last object before in that Kiai is at 01:25:233.
6. If the diff names are names of characters in the game, then there's no way to tell just by looking at the names which diff is the hardest diff. Especially in a visual novel where all the characters are considered equal and not one is higher or harder to get than another, diff names should not be names of characters. Please consider changing the names. I think it's okay. now can see diff order as the real order. (E,N,H,I,I...

[Maria]

1. 00:25:233 (1,2,3) - Are you going to represent this this way, or 00:26:714 (1,2,3) - ? Pick one and stick with it, this pattern appears six times. You're already using the same antijumps seen at 00:25:973 (1,2,3) - , so you should use one pattern instead of mixing it up when the music doesn't suggest you should change. Changed
2. 00:31:159 (5,6) - Then you've got this, which you haven't seen before.it not good flow from stream
3. 01:04:770 (3) - Curved slider would make the most sense here. Copy 01:04:029 (3) - rotate it 18 degrees clockwise (that's about halfway between 01:04:029 (3) - and 01:05:510 (3) - then consider flipping it vertically, and replace it, stacking with 01:04:677 (2) - .
4. 01:21:529 (1,2) - Notice 01:14:122 (1,2,3) - and 01:15:603 (1,2,3) - and 01:20:048 (1,2,3) - . This should be a straight slider and two stacked circles, but instead you have a second slider. Fix it for consistency, since you've started a pattern. Alternatively, you can change 01:15:973 (2,3) - into a straight slider. Changed
5. 01:38:566 (1,2,1) - Regulate spacing here. Consider moving 01:40:233 (1) - down, or if you want this to be centered, move 01:38:566 (1,2) - up, but then you'll have to move the other circles it stacks with, too. moved according as spacing

[Chiyuru]

1. 00:29:677 (1,2,3,1) - Consider making this a regular diamond shape - also achieved by making 00:30:418 (2,3,1) - an equilateral triangle. Changed
2. 00:45:973 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off here. fixed

[Arisu]

1. Generally for an Easy diff, I like to use HP2, CZ5, AR3, and OD2 if there are more sliders than circles. Changed to AR3
2. 00:29:677 (2) - Place anchor at exactly 00:30:603 - to match music the best. You can check by setting Slider Tick Rate 2, then placing the anchor at the last slider tick. fixed
3. 00:48:196 - No need to set x0.75 sv. You can actually just delete this inherited point since it accomplishes nothing. deleted >.<

Overall, very solid mapset, good job. You can call me back for a recheck after I see you've applied these changes/provided reasons why you didn't accept these suggestions, and you've gotten 4 or 5 more mods after this one. I'll star this for now. Good luck :3

wmfchris wrote:

BG lol \ Nayu /
- Recommended to resize maria.jpg to exactly 1024*768. Done
- Just note that S:C1 is useless. It's okay
- Tag visual novel if it is? (tag hentai as well) added

[Maria]
00:24:770 (4) - you may make the beginning of the slider softer (40%) to produce a constrast, otherwise it's odd to hear two notes equally loud especially they didn't appear in the music. it's nice, Changed
01:21:529 (1,3) - stack properly fixed


well... I didn't identify many problems there(too tired), just a few points to note:
- for harder difficulties, you sticked close to the song but some streams in the song sounds odd to me like xxxxxxx x ... the break is too short to produce a break before climax...
- for easier difficulties, sometimes you may need to mute/change the slidertick because the music doesn't goes well with the slider tick like [Chiyuru] 01:25:973 (2) - . is your way okay? i think it not good for taiko mode...

That's all, good luck.

those wrote:

According to many, many sources, the title should not have a capital H. Where did you see that it should be "Happy" instead of "happy"?

The Tracklist for Yomehapi ~You make happy!~ yomehapi Disc at anime-sharing says "happy", and also at kawaiisound.blogspot.com. Unless you can provide a more reliable source, your title is still wrong.