LunarSakuya wrote:

hello ^^

General
- Cool background
- I'm guessing you're gonna add something between the unused (right now) timing points in the future There's no unused timing points though.

Normal
00:16:306 (2,3) - Spacing should be consistent in Normals Done.
00:20:306 (3) - ^ assuming you're using 1.0x distance This is perfectly spaced.
00:31:639 (1) - Add finish No, I only put the finishes on when they appear in the song.
01:24:639 (3) - Extend to a 1/1 slider, felt a bit odd because you had a long slider previously No, what I currently have follows the song. 1/1 slider doesn't follow.
01:34:305 (1) - why not use the same slider as before http://puu.sh/n8wT , and delete NC Changed the combo.
01:35:639 (1) - Put soft sample set at the end of the spinner Done.

Hard
00:07:306 (9) - NC? No, keeping for consistency.
00:09:306 - Something needs to be here Nice catch.
00:13:309 - Add note, ppl might hit it early and miss (1), same with the next combo Did something else.
00:16:972 (5) - NC to indicate distance change Done.
00:32:889 - Unnecessary speed change imo, if you keep it add NC to indicate speed change I think it's fun and intuitive, so I put the NC.
01:01:139 (9) - Spacing, move further away Done.
01:30:139 (5,6) - Put these closer together, or stack them Stacked.
01:34:472 (7) - NC Noo. The NC here follows whenever the violin slurs start.
01:34:805 (1) - Delete NC ^


Fun song, good luck!

[general]

1. I think you can do something in the long break time

[Normal]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:38:722 -
   02:13:629 -
   
   
2. 01:34:305 (2) - get it curve

[Hard]

1. In some places , you let it empty make rhythm be strange (I think ... )
   like 00:10:306 - , 00:58:305 -
   
   
2. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:08:972 -
   01:41:305 -
   
   
3. 00:10:306 - add something at this white,blue,red line
4. 00:58:305 - add something
5. 01:47:305 (4,5,6) - let them cover ?

l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

1. I think you can do something in the long break time

[Normal]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:38:722 -
   02:13:629 -
   
   
2. 01:34:305 (2) - get it curve

I like the straight slider though...

[Hard]

1. In some places , you let it empty make rhythm be strange (I think ... )
   like 00:10:306 - , 00:58:305 - Wait, what?
   
   
2. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:08:972 -
   01:41:305 -
   
   
3. 00:10:306 - add something at this white,blue,red line Nothing fits. Putting something there would just be overmap.
4. 00:58:305 - add something Same as above.
5. 01:47:305 (4,5,6) - let them cover ? What?

good song
and sorry to my poor English

Jacob wrote:

[*]01:47:305 (4,5,6) - let them cover ? What?

l1106188 wrote:

Um...! I forget change some words ( M4M )

Jacob wrote:

[*]01:47:305 (4,5,6) - let them cover ? What?

I think like this
sorry to my suggestion not help you ...

popner wrote:

Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[General]

I have same opinion with LKs that you need more diffs. And the music is really good for a Insane diff. >:(

[Normal]

1.3 SV is high for a lowest diff, maybe you need to lower it down. >:((!!!
Nothing found about patterns.

[Hard]

00:10:472 (x) - I'd like to add a note here so it is consistent with 00:09:139 (6) No. This time, the instruments start on the white tick instead of the red tick. Nothing is needed.
00:20:972 (1) - nazi - 1 grid down & 1 grid right (grid 3) This is barely noticeable.
00:27:306 (4,6) - stack them? Er, what?
00:58:472 (1) - the spacing here is 0.8x Fixed.
01:07:639 (3,4,5,6) - like this? http://puu.sh/nbqO Noo.
01:38:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - nazi - the star is not so symmetrical It is to me..
01:56:305 (5) - ctrl+r like 01:55:639 (3)? Fixed.

That's all I can find. GL~

Charles445 wrote:

If this is a work in progress, you should move it to WIP, not pending

Hushu wrote:

00:54:306 - Maybe more dramatic by higher volume rises, by like... 5% more? I feel like it is too quiet... Maybe, although I like it as it is. I'll consider it.
01:34:305 - No new combo here, the next note instead Actually, look closely at the timeline. The new combos are on the big white ticks.

Hushu wrote:

Hello, my mod4mod, all suggestions! Hope you like!

[Easy:]

SPOILER

00:10:639 (4) - I think this should be also an angle slider, but going from one point to another like the.. chasing sound of the song, is that what I hear..? I think that it would be ugly and break the flow here.

00:12:639 - You may like to keep a single note (5) to keep it smartneasy but I think a note here stacked would add a lot to the beatmap. I did something.
00:23:639 (1) - I think you should stack it with (7). Also, I'd like to go a step futher and say that next combo should be on the fallowing note, not on this one ^^' Nothing changed. I keep NCs on the long white ticks.
00:26:972 (3) - Make (3) in the shadow of (1), or the other way around. Could be better if you actualy at the same time had it diagonally with (2) as you have now... Like this: ?????

01:27:639 (1) - It doesn't look nice stacked to me, try some other snapping..? Maybe combo 90o or something like that? Looks fine to me..?
01:54:972 (2) - A grid down sure

[Normal:]
00:16:306 (2) - Isn't identical to (1), can you make it be ? Just to be symmetrical~ Looks fine to me.
01:03:305 (2) - Make it a slider like the previous (2) I originally had it this way, but I changed it because it wasn't fun for players of "normal" experience.
01:55:639 (1) - Maybe no new combo, I don't really feel like there is a need to Missed that one.

[Hard:]
01:01:139 (9) - Don't stuck? I'll get more opinions

[Insane:]
Makes me think of Llamas.
00:54:306 - Maybe more dramatic by higher volume rises, by like... 5% more? I feel like it is too quiet...
01:34:305 - No new combo here, the next note instead

• 00:02:972 (3,4) - these don't end exactly on 1,2
  00:03:639 (1) - not perfectly on 3's end
  00:05:639 (3,4) - these feel somehow uneven when mirroring them + don't lay perfectly on 1,2
  00:09:639 (9) - this slider is kinda straight, a little more bowy shape or at least directed in the same way as the stream would make it feel better imo
  00:09:972 (10) - suggesting a mirrored version of redesigned 9 here
  00:10:972 (9,10,11,12) - these feel better when set as diagonal lines
  
  short example

  
  00:14:306 (1,2,3) - these feel a little uneven compared to the rest of the stream, feels like it has to go more down instead of left
  
  this looks better imo

  
  00:15:639 (1,2,3) - these feel like they have to go up the bit to give the stream a more even feeling
  00:23:139 - I don't see the reason behind this finish
  00:32:639 (13,14,15,16,1) - the ending of the stream along with the slider feels too straight when compared to the previous path of stream; make it more bowy
  01:11:139 - yet again, I don't see the reason for a finish here
  01:27:722 (2) - 1 grid up to make the following bow go more down
  01:28:222 (8) - 1 grid left to keep the streams bowyness
  01:28:305 (9) - 2 grids left to align with 8, maybe change the slider's direction a bit to fit the stream better
  01:34:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - that's a long thing of a stream and a reason for me to not play this map, I'd suggest variating with sliders in the green combo
  01:53:639 (5) - moving this 4-5 grids up feels better imo
  01:56:639 (13,14,15,16) - 2 1/4-sliders would to great here (imo)

• 00:06:306 (4,5,6,7,8) - I remember from the time I played hard-maps (and now), I hate/d such bows... hard to explain, they are awkward
  
  this feels better

  
  00:14:806 (1,2,3) - little wide spaced for 1/4s here, use 0.8x instead
  00:15:639 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.3x snap for these; right now it's too close to certainly declare these are 1-time-reverses and not a row of kicksliders
  00:19:639 (5,6,7,8) - these have an inconsistent spacing + don't make 8 a straight slider (moving the end 1-2 grids down is enough)
  00:57:472 (1,2,3) - use 0.8x snap?
  01:19:639 (1,2,3,4) - don't let these overlap
  01:34:472 (7) - 1 grid up and 1 left, don't let it be that close to 5 (adjust 8 after that)
  01:46:639 (2,3,4,5,6) - sliderpoint mess ;w; rearrange these with just 1 point and let the paired ones end exactly in each other (2,4,6 and 3,5)
  01:49:639 (3) - 1 grid right and 1 down, it's too close to 2's beginning atm (then adjust 4)
  01:50:305 (5) - 1 down, 1 left, same reason as 3

Jenny wrote:

Hard:

• 00:06:306 (4,5,6,7,8) - I remember from the time I played hard-maps (and now), I hate/d such bows... hard to explain, they are awkward changed.
  
  this feels better

  
  00:14:806 (1,2,3) - little wide spaced for 1/4s here, use 0.8x instead I like them how they are.
  00:15:639 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.3x snap for these; right now it's too close to certainly declare these are 1-time-reverses and not a row of kicksliders I use these all the time throughout the map. Nobody ever complains. Maybe it's because you've just played Charles's diff? I'll get more opinions.
  00:19:639 (5,6,7,8) - these have an inconsistent spacing + don't make 8 a straight slider (moving the end 1-2 grids down is enough) kay.
  00:57:472 (1,2,3) - use 0.8x snap? no
  01:19:639 (1,2,3,4) - don't let these overlap I'll get more opinions
  01:34:472 (7) - 1 grid up and 1 left, don't let it be that close to 5 (adjust 8 after that)meheheheh
  01:46:639 (2,3,4,5,6) - sliderpoint mess ;w; rearrange these with just 1 point and let the paired ones end exactly in each other (2,4,6 and 3,5) did the last one. didn't change sliderpoints because IT BARELY MATTERS heuheuhe
  01:49:639 (3) - 1 grid right and 1 down, it's too close to 2's beginning atm (then adjust 4)
  01:50:305 (5) - 1 down, 1 left, same reason as 3

Now mod my map /o/
Lazy me only mods high diffs because... I like it better~

Jenny wrote:

445:

• 00:02:972 (3,4) - these don't end exactly on 1,2 Too minor to bother. (you really have to be looking hard)
  00:03:639 (1) - not perfectly on 3's end Same
  00:05:639 (3,4) - these feel somehow uneven when mirroring them + don't lay perfectly on 1,2 Huh? And same
  00:09:639 (9) - this slider is kinda straight, a little more bowy shape or at least directed in the same way as the stream would make it feel better imo It'd look better but I doubt it'd change the feel. I mean, you only hold onto the beginning to play them.
  00:09:972 (10) - suggesting a mirrored version of redesigned 9 here Same
  00:10:972 (9,10,11,12) - these feel better when set as diagonal lines Uh... that wouldn't change how they're played very much, also their visible separation makes it easier to read.l
  00:14:306 (1,2,3) - these feel a little uneven compared to the rest of the stream, feels like it has to go more down instead of left
  00:15:639 (1,2,3) - these feel like they have to go up the bit to give the stream a more even feeling That's impossible, this stream is symmetrical on the x axis.
  00:23:139 - I don't see the reason behind this finish Listen to the music!
  00:32:639 (13,14,15,16,1) - the ending of the stream along with the slider feels too straight when compared to the previous path of stream; make it more bowy Nah
  01:11:139 - yet again, I don't see the reason for a finish here musicmusicmusicmusic
  01:27:722 (2) - 1 grid up to make the following bow go more down No, the object is in optimal position to catch the player
  01:28:222 (8) - 1 grid left to keep the streams bowyness No.
  01:28:305 (9) - 2 grids left to align with 8, maybe change the slider's direction a bit to fit the stream better I want it to straighten out.
  01:34:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - that's a long thing of a stream and a reason for me to not play this map, I'd suggest variating with sliders in the green combo It's 180, cmon.
  01:53:639 (5) - moving this 4-5 grids up feels better imo Yeah it does. Moved the 1 as well to make it symmetrical.
  01:56:639 (13,14,15,16) - 2 1/4-sliders would to great here (imo) I want this to be the final stretch to really make the player tired w/o killing them.

1. fine

1. fine. but I thought a little longer NC. Since this is Easy diff,the one that put a little more constantly is easy for a beginner.
   if I put in this way NC. ↓(you can ignore this)
2. 00:10:639 (4) -
3. 00:20:972 (4) -
4. 00:26:972 (4) -
5. 00:58:639 (4) -
6. 01:08:972 (4) -
7. 01:14:972 (4) -
8. 01:25:305 (4) -
9. 01:40:972 (3) -

1. 00:16:306 (2,3) - spacing too close. Is this intentional?
2. 00:27:639 (2) - The one that you put in the center is beautiful & make symmetric slider http://puu.sh/o1jS ↓code (if you use it, please do not forget adjustment of DS)
   

   440,260,27639,2,0,B|348:200|256:256|256:256|164:200|72:260,1,390,4|0

3. 01:00:972 (x) - add note. It is easy to hear the sound here imo.
4. 01:03:305 (2,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/o1od
   
   good. but slider speed is very fast for me

1. 00:06:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/o1wH to 00:07:472 had better put a note at least imo.
2. 00:09:139 (6) - add NC and 00:09:472 (1) - remove NC is better. ( In the same way 00:07:639 (1,2,3,4,5) )
3. 01:31:639 (1) - remove NC ( In the same way 01:26:305 (6,7) )
4. 01:34:306 (7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm&NC: http://puu.sh/o1EO
5. 01:55:972 (8) - add NC

1. 00:20:639 (4) - remove finish to start of the slider( i think quiet sounds just here like other diff )
2. 00:25:972 (4) - ^
3. 01:08:639 (4) - ^
4. 01:13:972 (4) - ^
   
   oh.. beautiful crazy map TAT

1. all diff.osu - http://puu.sh/o0W7 You do not have a 11390062(800x600).jpg because do not have a meaning, you should delete this in all diff?
2. .osb - You will be able to simplify this more　↓my suggestion

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Jacob :3

from m4m queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. fine. but I thought a little longer NC. Since this is Easy diff,the one that put a little more constantly is easy for a beginner.
   if I put in this way NC. ↓(you can ignore this) Nothing changed.
2. 00:10:639 (4) -
3. 00:20:972 (4) -
4. 00:26:972 (4) -
5. 00:58:639 (4) -
6. 01:08:972 (4) -
7. 01:14:972 (4) -
8. 01:25:305 (4) -
9. 01:40:972 (3) -

[Normal]

1. 00:16:306 (2,3) - spacing too close. Is this intentional? No idea how that happened.
2. 00:27:639 (2) - The one that you put in the center is beautiful & make symmetric slider http://puu.sh/o1jS ↓code (if you use it, please do not forget adjustment of DS) Done!
   

   440,260,27639,2,0,B|348:200|256:256|256:256|164:200|72:260,1,390,4|0

3. 01:00:972 (x) - add note. It is easy to hear the sound here imo. No.
4. 01:03:305 (2,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/o1od Nah.
   
   good. but slider speed is very fast for me

[Hard]

1. 00:06:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/o1wH to 00:07:472 had better put a note at least imo. No. I like it how it is.
2. 00:09:139 (6) - add NC and 00:09:472 (1) - remove NC is better. ( In the same way 00:07:639 (1,2,3,4,5) )
3. 01:31:639 (1) - remove NC ( In the same way 01:26:305 (6,7) )
4. 01:34:306 (7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm&NC: http://puu.sh/o1EO
5. 01:55:972 (8) - add NC

k

[Insane445]

1. 00:20:639 (4) - remove finish to start of the slider( i think quiet sounds just here like other diff )
2. 00:25:972 (4) - ^
3. 01:08:639 (4) - ^
4. 01:13:972 (4) - ^
   
   oh.. beautiful crazy map TAT

[SB]

1. all diff.osu - http://puu.sh/o0W7 You do not have a 11390062(800x600).jpg because do not have a meaning, you should delete this in all diff?
2. .osb - You will be able to simplify this more　↓my suggestion

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG1.jpg",320,240
F,0,64972,65139,0,0.05
S,0,64972,66139,0.8,0.82
F,0,65139,65305,0.05,0.1
F,0,65305,65472,0.1,0.2
F,0,65472,65639,0.2,0.3
F,0,65639,65805,0.3,0.45
F,0,65805,65972,0.45,0.6
F,0,65972,66139,0.6,0.8
F,0,66139,66305,0.8,1
S,0,66139,66305,0.82,0.9
F,0,66305,66972,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

sorry, poor mod ;x; Please do not throw kudosu if worthless ><!

very good map ~ star☆~

Good luck ~

Jacob wrote:

Thanks.

EDIT - Your storyboard gave me an error, and now I can't even open my map. ....
EDIT2 - Had to delete the osb and make another one. >__>

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　
  Red : I think you must to fix.
  Blue : Need to discuss.
  Black : Just suggest or nazi.
  　
  [ General ]
  　

1. 00:54:306 around this time ,all diff's break are different , I think you must fix it >_<
   　
   [ Easy ]
   　
2. 01:12:972 (3) - About this 5 beat slider , I Suggetion change to a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat , it will confusion for some Newbie
   　
   [ Normal ]
   　
3. 00:16:306 (2) - Spacing issue
4. 01:31:639 (1) - Remove NC please , the same place with 01:26:305 (2) -
   　
   [ Hard ]
   　
5. 00:09:139 (6) - Add NC here
6. 00:09:472 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:34:306 (1) - Add finish
8. 00:59:639 (5) - NC here
9. 01:24:472 (4,5,6) - Spacing issue
   　
   [ Insane445 ]
   　
10. Amazing :O
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------

Philippines wrote:

CHARLESWASHEREXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXINSANE

1. 01:20:972 (1,2,3,4) - How about move them a bit more to the left? Nah, I think that makes it harder to read.
2. 01:21:639 (5,6,7,8) - ^ to the right. Same.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

- Why is there a tag called "fantasie"?

those wrote:

00:16:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should definitely not have a linear pattern. Made it so the movement is more jagged. I want to keep the sliders starting on the same spots
01:10:972 (3) - The Finish has reversed; should fix. Also, 01:11:305 (4) - has no finish, unless these two were intentional. So many people pointing this out. Listen to the music!
01:19:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The way you have this twice is rather uninteresting. Doing it the first time was fine, though I would try to be less linear about it too, but if you were to change anything, you'd probably want to change the second iteration of the pattern. Even increasing the distance spacing horizontally would make it more dramatic. Sure why the hell not it's in the kiai
01:36:472 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this part of the stream looks messy, maybe you want to make it more rounded on the outside as opposed to having a deflated circle. Nah
01:51:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seen enough of this, haven't we? If anything, this iteration of this pattern fits the music the most. Perhaps it should stay, if you consider changing the other ones. I like this one

I loved TOMOSUKE - Macuilxochitl, and I noticed a similar style, and it would be awesome if you could make F.I more interesting. I was hardcore trolling on that but it worked somehow. It's harder to work with a bigger circle size by the way.

Btw about the mafia thing, they wouldn't stop killing me night zero or lynching me. Was really annoying.

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

[Insane445]
01:36:347 - 01:37:972 - Change this Time Area to soft Hitsounds. Nah, song doesn't change too significantly here.

Charles445 wrote:

Btw about the mafia thing, they wouldn't stop killing me night zero or lynching me. Was really annoying.

1. This is a late mod. :U
2. Lots of slider nazi'ing. I just really like symmetrical sliders. =~=

CDFA wrote:

DID SOMEONE SAY "omg Jacob is so moe"? >3<~

Overall:
Your combo colors don't fit the background D:. fak
01:56:972 - Unneccesary timing point~ FAK

Insane:
THIS CIRCLE SIZE OH NO
00:16:473 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stuff like this might be hard for someone to logically play at this BPM :>. Same with all other patterns similar to this

Hurd:
00:32:972 (1,2,3,4,1) - OH NO THIS SECTION. There's a lot of things I don't like about it, mainly the randomness of it all as well as the 2X just suddenly appearing and being cut off. Maybe have the 2x kind of ease in, so players are prepared for a 2x section. yeah

Nurmul:
00:02:306 (1,2) - Boring pattern alert! feck off

Easy:
Tick rate 1? It looks kinda silly with tick rate 2 atm. i'm going to eat your babies

moe >3<~. I was tempted not to star this because Charles's diff made me wtf, but I'll star it~

SuperMICrophone wrote:

k i said free mod but no m4m. :3

---

[Timing]

Consider an off-set of 960. (-13 ms) This means the second red point would be 34293, the third 54293, and the fourth 116959. Before you change the timing, I'm modding in the old off-sets. This song has been ranked with this timing before.

[Easy]

01:10:305 (6,7) - Hold slider concept might be confusing for beginners. I suggest either ctrl+r or move (7). ..Hold slider? Are you serious?
01:12:972 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:25:305 (4) - I find the slider overlap between (3) and this ugly. ctrl h+j+r this slider and just put it back in the same place, should flow better as well. It looks sexy.
01:27:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Where'd those dainty whistle hitsounds go? D: This was done for a reason.

[Normal]

00:10:639 (1) - Whistle on end? What? These seem random. I'm following the hitsound pattern in all other difficulties.
00:11:972 (3) - Whistle?
00:12:639 (5) - ^
00:15:639 (1) - Whistle on end?
00:27:639 (2) - The non-perfect asymmetricality of this slider bugs me. =3= Center it and use the scale tool to shrink until the end point is right on the end of the slider. D: This barely makes a difference. The end point is still on the end of the slider.
00:58:639 (1) - Whistle on end?
00:59:972 (3) - Whistle on start?
01:00:639 (4) - Whistle?
01:03:305 (2) - ^
01:25:305 (1) - Whistle on end?
01:26:639 (3) - Whistle?
01:26:972 (4) - Whistle on end?
01:27:972 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - No hitsounds makes this section sound boring. =3= Again, this was done for a reason.

umad at dem whistles?

[Hard]

00:13:972 (3) - Be a nice person and shorten by one repeat. :< You can also get charles to tell you about 3/4. :3 I've been confused about this. I'm really not sure. I'll need to ask someone.
01:16:972 (1,2,3) - I do not like this stack. Do something else with these hitcircles, you can get a better effect. I like it.
01:18:305 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:23:305 (5) - Shorten by one repeat. Confused about this one.
01:24:472 (4) - Found this semi-hidden. Missed it either way. I'd move it to the left of (3) and (5). This isn't hidden at all.
01:30:222 (6,1) - Technically this is okay because it's 5/4, but I expected (1) much earlier. I suggest this: Add a note at 01:30:305 so it's readable and then NC a new note at 01:30:472 and then RNC 01:30:639 (1). You could make the earlier triple a repeat slider if you want. I did my own thing.

so something like...

01:51:639 (1,2,3,4) - Make each one a slider that repeats 4 times, so it ends on the next white tick. As you may or may not have seen, I am not following that part of the music there.

Also congrats, that was pretty fun.

[Insane445]

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The st- no, no...

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Th- no, no...

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Chaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrlllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeessssss. :<

00:27:639 (1,2) - (1) move one grid left, (2) move one grid right.

These streams. Ahem. Also flawless. Except for that. ^ trollface.jpg

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Wonderful Jacob! Toss me a kudosu to receive your star. Also the m4m. c:

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those wrote:

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19:07 <Jacob> : ,yo
19:07 <those> : Kay.
19:07 <Jacob> : yaK.
19:08 <those> : 01:35:639 (1) - You need a circle before this spinner
19:08 <those> : it also needs Finish.
19:08 <those> : You'll want to finish the spinner at 01:38:305 -
19:08 <Jacob> : There is a circle before that spinner...
19:08 <Jacob> : o.o
19:08 <those> : You need a circle at that time.
19:09 <Jacob> : Oh.
19:09 <those> : at 01:35:639
19:09 <those> : With something like this, it's not so great to start the downbeat with a spinner
19:09 <Jacob> : Done.
19:09 <those> : 01:48:305 (1,2) - if you're going to antijump, do not stack 01:46:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
19:09 <those> : Very confusing.
19:10 <Jacob> : Hmm
19:10 <Jacob> : I'll re-arrange that. Just a minute
19:10 <those> : 01:14:972 (3) - hits HP bar
19:10 <Jacob> : Argh hold on
19:10 <Jacob> :
19:11 <those> : Sorry just mentioning everything now
19:12 <Jacob> : It barely grazes the HP bar
19:12 <Jacob> : So I won't change that.
19:13 <Jacob> : Thank you for checking for me!
19:13 <those> : You can see part of the circle under the HP bar, and I don't know about you http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310929
19:13 <those> : but you can fix that so easily by rotating 01:12:972 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - counter clockwise

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He said, "Bob Titsenbeer".

• Its ok ~

• 00:17:639 - without repeat.
  00:18:306 - Note + NC
  00:18:972 - RNC
  00:20:306 - without repeat
  00:20:972 - Note + NC
  00:21:639 - RNC
  00:23:639 - NC
  00:24:306 - RNC
  00:25:639 - without repeat
  00:26:306 - Note + NC
  00:26:972 - RNC
  00:26:972 - 00:28:306 - Slider 1 repeat
  00:28:639 - Note

• 01:34:139 - note
  01:34:305 - 01:34:472 - slider 1 repeat + NC
  01:43:972 - delete
  01:44:305 - ^
  01:44:639 - ^
  01:44:972 - ^
  01:45:305 - ^
  01:46:639 - ^
  01:46:972 - ^
  01:47:305 - ^
  01:47:639 - ^
  01:47:972 - ^

Ryu wrote:

From queue~ :3


Easy:

• Its ok ~

Normal:

• 00:17:639 - without repeat. It fits the music.
  00:18:306 - Note + NC Keeping my repeat.
  00:18:972 - RNC No. I've created a specific NC pattern.
  00:20:306 - without repeat It fits the music.
  00:20:972 - Note + NC Keeping my repeat.
  00:21:639 - RNC No.
  00:23:639 - NC Nope. Following the pattern.
  00:24:306 - RNC No.
  00:25:639 - without repeat Keeping my repeat.
  00:26:306 - Note + NC ^
  00:26:972 - RNC Keeping my pattern.
  00:26:972 - 00:28:306 - Slider 1 repeat No. My long, awesome, curvy slider is better.
  00:28:639 - Note No.

Hard:

• 01:34:139 - note
  01:34:305 - 01:34:472 - slider 1 repeat + NC This makes no sense.
  01:43:972 - delete ...no
  01:44:305 - ^
  01:44:639 - ^
  01:44:972 - ^
  01:45:305 - ^
  01:46:639 - ^
  01:46:972 - ^
  01:47:305 - ^
  01:47:639 - ^
  01:47:972 - ^

That's all.

I hope my mode was not wastin' time :>

Good luck ! :3/

wcx19911123 wrote:

hi

[General]
fine

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
omg, the slider speed.. There's a lot of other easy and normal maps with high slider velocity that are ranked. Have you ever seen DJPop's maps? lol
other seems fine

[Hard]
OD+1 plz, it's too low imo I agree.
AR+1? easier to read the pattern to me Sure.
00:10:139 (5,1) - the anti-jump is confusing, it makes people think the slider start at 00:10:472 - , I suggest to add a note ad 00:10:472 - stack on (1), or fix the spacing Done.
00:19:972 (4,5) - stack better plz Done.

[Insane445]
00:54:306 (1) - use soft hitsound here? sound better imo

that's all
diffs themselves are fine, but diff spread need to be improved, there is a huge difficulty distance between Hard and Insane445 The difficulty spread is fine to me. I've never gotten any complaints. I've seen maps with way worse spreads that got ranked.
good luck

Jacob wrote:

wcx19911123 wrote:

diffs themselves are fine, but diff spread need to be improved, there is a huge difficulty distance between Hard and Insane445 The difficulty spread is fine to me. I've never gotten any complaints. I've seen maps with way worse spreads that got ranked.

Jacob wrote:

I'm beginning to see what you guys mean. Fair enough. I'll rename Charles' diff to Extra445 and I'll make an insane difficulty. Thank you guys for your input!

I'm terribly sorry for not agreeing with wcx's suggestion before. I was denying it because I was lazy to map another difficulty. I'm sorry. I won't make these douche moves in the future. ;___;