ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone · forum

Mixagji

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

thank you for mod.
almost fixed.

ChickyChan wrote:
I suggest you to increase the drain rate for the Lunatic map. It's too easy to pass even with lots of misses.

keeping for now.

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 13 years ago

oo mixagji-san ha eigo wo dekimasu! suge desu.

I have wanted to ask you if I may give you my Taiko diff.?

Made it allready because the song is really cool~

Mixagji

625 posts

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Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

eigo dekine-desu

okay I’ll accept your diff~

unyuho~

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 13 years ago

Unyuu~
Taiko guest diff. finished. Thank you for accepting it!
Please add my name into the Tag's.~

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (Mixagji) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

winber1

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winber1 13 years ago

kinda late sorry lol :/

Lunatic

00:17:303 (11,1) - would be better imo if you had a jump here. or maybe from 00:17:130 (10,11) -
00:20:078 (11,1) - ^
00:30:916 - idk why but adding a note here just sounds better to me ._.
01:14:355 (1) - would be more fitting to end this slider at 01:14:615 -
01:14:615 - i would delete this note and add a new combo to 01:19:384 (2) -
01:30:482 (1,2,3) - gahh it bothers me that it isn't evenly spaced

01:33:257 - add a note here and 01:33:344 - ?
01:42:361 - why not add a note?

02:16:089 (1) - similar to before, delete note? it just doesn't imo.
02:49:904 - hmm i would rather have a note here, and then start the spinner at 02:49:991. I feel empty, like something is missing, if you don't map this note.
03:06:032 (1) - similar to before.
03:12:274 (1) - well if you changed this in the other kiai time, I would do the same here for consistency purposes.
03:17:130 (1) - similar to before.

Hard

00:36:552 (1,2) - the jump doesn't make sense at all imo.
02:01:523 - good place for a spinner.
02:09:847 (1,2) - hmm, i don't like this as much as i like

Normal

00:21:638 (4) - would work better if this was one long slider like at 00:22:506 (1) - idk maybe something like http://puu.sh/jBUp. or you could have two repeat sliders, but that could be a little confusing for begginers.
00:56:321 (4) - fits better if this was one long 2/1 tick slider http://puu.sh/jBW7 I know this overlaps with 00:57:708 (1), so you may want to move that a bit as well.
01:12:968 (3,4) - do th same thing as 01:01:870 (1,2,3,4) -
02:04:297 (4) - same thing as earlier.
02:20:945 (3,4) - same thing as earlier. four notes work better imo.
03:10:887 (3,4) - ^
03:17:823 (1,2) - could be alittle confusing. It would be better if the slider end actually face the next note or else it looks as if the slide ronly repeats once.
03:20:078 - add note. Well, actually I'd do this http://puu.sh/jBXF, but if you want to, it's ok.

Easy willl go over my time limit, but the diff itself looks fine

Hope this helps. Good luck~~

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 13 years ago

Lazy Mod . Sorry for delay

[General:]

-Tags: In Easy/Normal/Hard OnosakiHito appear at the beginning on tags, but in Ono's Taiko Oni and Lunatic appear at the end of that. I think that would be at the same place in all difficulties, Try to fix that
-Letterbox During Breaks: Looking your BG, I think that works better without it. It's better if you disable this option
-Kiai Time: --> 01:08:460 (T): Unsnapped Kiai by 1ms. This Kiai must finish in 01:08:459.
--> 02:27:535 (T): Unsnapped Kiai by 1ms. This Kiai must finish in 02:27:534
--> 03:17:824 (T): Unsnapped Kiai by 1ms. This Flash Kiai must Start in 03:17:823
--> I think that it's better if you finish your first long Kiai in 01:19:904 (On a Downbeat)
--> I think that it's better if you finish your second long Kiai in 02:27:881 (On a Downbeat)
-Break: Drag the First Break to 01:19:904, because starts the Instrumental here.

[Easy:]

00:36:552 (4): The vocal change here, also a Combo with 7 notes is a bit much on an Easy Diff., so it's better if you add a New Combo here
00:59:269 (3): Expand this Slider in 1/2 to finish in 00:59:962 (Red Tick), because fit with vocal perfectly
01:10:367 (3): (^)
01:12:968 (1): Following the instrumental, I think that you have to add a Clap at the end of this Slider
01:13:662 (2): (^)
02:07:245 (3): Expand it by 1/2
02:18:344 (3): (^)
02:27:881 (x): In the other difficulties, I saw that you have a note here. To be consistent in all difficulties would be better if you add a note in this difficulty too.
02:53:546 (3): Maybe you can add a New Combo here, because you start to map the Instrumental
02:54:240 (4): I think that you can add a Hitfinish at the end of this Slider to complement the music sound
02:57:188 (3): Expand it by 1/2
03:08:286 (3): (^)

[Normal:]

-Settings:
--> The Overall Difficulty it's a bit low, it's better if you increase it by 1 Tick (OD+1)

00:37:245 (x): Add a Note, fit fine with Vocal and it's not difficult in Normal Difficulty.
00:56:321 (4): Hmm... This Slider doesn't fit very well with music, especially when the Ball hit in Reverse Arrow. It's better if you short this Slider by 1/4 and after that add a note in 00:57:014, because works better with the Instrumental
00:59:269 (3): Expand it by 1/2 (same reason as Easy diff.)
01:04:818 (3): (^)
01:10:367 (3): (^)
01:15:916 (3): (^)
02:04:297 (4): Here, I suggest the same as 00:56:321
02:07:245 (3): Expand it by 1/2
02:12:795 (3): (^)
02:18:344 (3): (^)
02:23:893 (3): (^)
02:57:188 (3): (^)
03:02:737 (3): (^)
03:08:286 (3): (^)
03:13:835 (3): (^)
03:20:078 (x): If you follow the music, you can add a note perfectly

[Hard:]

-Settings:
--> The Overall Difficulty looks a bit low in this difficulty too. Increase it by 1 Tick (OD+1)

00:53:459 (x): I think that you have to add a Spinner because this section sounds a little empty. If you add it, this Spinner have to finish in 00:54:586
02:01:436 (x): (^)
02:49:991 (x): (^)

[Lunatic & Ono's Taiko Oni:]

--> Nice Difficulties

Well, That's all for now. Nice map in General
Star and Good Luck with your map

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

thank you for mod and star.
almost fixed~

nanashi2_old

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nanashi2_old 13 years ago

val0108

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Joined January 2010

val0108 13 years ago

awesome

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

star thx!

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 13 years ago

Hello

Easy
00:27:188 (3) - Move 2nd sliderpoint to 2 grid left for good blanket combo (Nazi)
00:59:095 (x) - I suggest you to add note here. Otherwise, beginners will click next object earlier or later
01:10:193 (x) - ^
01:44:875 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider for good flow?
02:07:072 (x) - Same issue as 00:59:095 (x)
02:18:170 (x) - ^
02:57:014 (x) - ^
03:08:112 (x) - ^

Normal
00:43:141 (6) - Move to 00:42:968, remove 1 repeating slider and extend it to 00:43:835 for following vocal?
01:41:581 (x) - Add a slider here and end it at 01:41:928? Like 01:52:679 (1)?

Hard
00:54:933 (1,2) - Don't put this on center of spinner, because it'll overlapped by hitbursts and makes hidden for players
01:51:118 (1,1,2) - ^
02:02:910 (1,2) - ^
02:51:465 (1,2) - ^

Insane
00:55:107 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:54:933 (1,2) in Hard diff
02:03:084 (1,2) - ^

Sorry for picky

wmfchris

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Joined March 2008

wmfchris 13 years ago

This is extra boss is not moe desu D:

[General]
delete letterbox in breaks for all diffs

[Taiko]
00:05:511 - d k d d?
00:45:222 - refer to vocal starting with d sounds a bit odd, try k
00:53:199 - as usual I don't recommend slider over long vocal...
01:28:401 - kdkdd?
02:40:020 - may work well with K to make a contrast with the coming D
03:20:251 - not recommended for slider
03:23:026 - start ddk here

mainly suggestion, well I don't support that acceleration : x

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

thank you for mod~
>Leorda
all fixed~

>wmfchris
yes,Mamizou is....
waiting Ono~

OnosakiHito

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Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 13 years ago

Changed, thank you chris! o7

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (Mixagji) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

val0108

1,430 posts

Joined January 2010

val0108 13 years ago

とりあえずおぶじぇくとだけ。音つけます
Edit:ちょっと修正です

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (Mixagji) [0108].osu

Mixagji

625 posts

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Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

awesome!

03:16:783(4) - ノートがだぶっていたので修正しときましたー

val0108

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val0108 13 years ago

Mixagji wrote:
awesome!

03:16:783(4) - ノートがだぶっていたので修正しときましたー

あざーっす！

val0108

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Joined January 2010

val0108 13 years ago

完成です。

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (Mixagji) [0108].osu

TorNis

102 posts

Joined April 2011

TorNis 13 years ago

Hi, this is ~ TorNis's Live Stream Queue ~

Your map is being modding live right now: http://www.twitch.tv/tornis
I will be editing in real time when I found something for modding in this post.

[General]
00:11:407 (1,2,3) are snapped before first timing section, I am pretty sure some MAT/BATs will say that it is a problem. Futhermore, first object is snapped on red tick.
02:27:881 - This Break on Easy/Normal/Hard diffs have different endings, while Insane have no gap there at all. Probably something snapping there.

[Easy]
Flawless, the only thing I can comment on is:
02:57:014 (3,4) - double notes for Easy? maybe it's ok there since it's the song's ending and player should already get used to song's rhythm.

[Normal]
00:56:667 (4) - kinda unfitting, maybe remove?

[Hard]
00:44:355 (2) - maybe put there timing section so you decrease volume of hitsounds? That slider isn't fitting with hitsounds there.
00:50:425 (1) - remove NC and put on the next object

[Lunatic]
00:43:141 (1) - This note is little bit off. It fits more in previous red tick. Also at 00:43:488 seems object missing, probably better to place there slider and rework 00:44:008 (2,3) these as well
01:51:118 (1) - ^
02:48:691 (1) - surprisingly, here, there is no such problem
01:30:916 - delete timing section since it isn't doing anything (same in 0108 diff)

[0108]
Good job on this diff. Nice usage of kiai fountains and slider instensity.
00:25:454 (5) - NC and at 00:25:800 (1) Remove NC
00:27:534 (3) - Remove NC?
00:36:032 (8,1,2,3,1) - there is mess with combos, especially if you follow the vocals. I suggest to replace 00:36:378 (2) slider into 2 circles and put at 00:36:552 NC and of course then remove NC at 00:36:899 (1)
00:39:673 (4) - NC is missing due to previous pattern
01:33:430 (6) - NC and 01:33:951 (1) Remove NC
01:41:754 (2,3,4) - Unfortunately, no NC combo here because (4) slider, maybe you can replace it also with 2 circles then, for the sake of previous pattern.
01:30:916 - delete timing section

Mod is complete.

Awesome map, I am hoping this will be ranked as soon as possible. Come on, more mods.

Last edited by TorNis 13 years ago, edited 7 times in total.

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Mixagji 13 years ago

oh It sounds like fun :>

Edit: Thank you for mod. some fixed~　valさんのは必要ない緑線だけ消しておきました

val0108

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val0108 13 years ago

http://puu.sh/t3Wf
thanks!!

緑線無かったのは消したからなのね。了解

NoHitter

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NoHitter 13 years ago

From my mod queue...

[General]
Section copy-paste is kind of overused IMO. Especially the choruses.
Some sliders (like 00:18:864 (4) on Normal) could be made neater.

[Easy]
The many 1/2's here can be confusing for an Easy IMO.
00:59:095 (3,4) - Don't add 1/2's that aren't sliders on an Easy. Make this one long slider perhaps?
01:10:193 (3,4) - Same as above.
01:19:904 () - Drag the break to here?
02:07:072 (3,4) - Don't add 1/2's that aren't sliders on an Easy. Make this one long slider perhaps?
02:18:170 (3,4) - Same as above.
02:29:269 () - Drag the break to here?
02:57:014 (3,4) - Don't add 1/2's that aren't sliders on an Easy. Make this one long slider perhaps?
03:08:112 (3,4) - Same as above.

[Normal]
AR -1?
00:12:274 (2) - New combo for consistency with other diffs.
00:56:667 (4) - This slider itself is out of time, as the beat starts on the 1/4, at 00:56:581.Just delete it and place a note at 00:57:014?
01:19:904 () - Drag the break to here?
01:51:118 (6) - Slider here should be something like this instead.
02:04:644 (4) - This slider itself is out of time, as the beat starts on the 1/4, at 02:04:558.Just delete it and place a note at 02:04:991?
02:29:269 () - Drag the break to here?

[Hard]
AR -1?
00:25:800 (1) - I suggest you not place the slider start under the slidertrack of a previous slider. It looks ugly and may be difficult to read.
00:47:303 (2) - Looks ugly IMO. Change the pattern?
00:50:425 (4) - Add notes on 00:50:251 () and 00:50:598 () IMO. To make it not sound as empty.
01:12:968 (1,2,3,4) - Not too sure about this anti-jump here.
01:19:904 () - Drag the break to here?
01:33:777 (2) - I suggest you not place the slider start under the slidertrack of a previous slider.
01:49:124 (1) - Map this like 00:41:060 (5) instead?
01:51:118 (1) - This note doesn't sound quite right. The pattern here should be like this IMO.
01:55:280 (2) - Looks ugly IMO. Change the pattern?
02:04:991 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
02:20:945 (1,2,3,4) - Not too sure about this anti-jump here.
02:29:269 () - Drag the break to here?
03:10:887 (1,2,3,4) - Not too sure about this anti-jump here.

[Lunatic]
00:22:852 (3) - This could be arranged better to make the pattern look neater. Like this?
00:33:604 (1,2,3) - Spacing could be confusing given that it's similar to 00:33:257 (6,1).
00:38:286 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you space these nearer to each other. They have around the same spacing as 00:35:511 (1,2,3) and is confusing.
00:41:060 (1) - This spinner really feels out of place. Map this part instead.
00:43:141 (1) - This note doesn't sound quite right. The pattern here should be like this IMO.
00:55:800 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems unnecessary.
01:01:870 (1,2,3,4) - This could be arranged better to make the pattern look neater. Like this? (Also do this for 02:59:789 (1,2,3,4))
01:18:691 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe make the pattern here more symmetric? Like this? (Also do this for 03:16:610 (4,5,6,7,8))
01:19:904 () - Drag the break to here?
01:46:263 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you space these closer to each other.
01:49:037 (1) - Same as 00:41:060 (1).
01:51:118 (1) - This note doesn't sound quite right. The pattern here should be like this IMO.
02:27:188 (1) - Remove this note. It sounds out of place.
02:27:534 (3) - I suggest you position this on 02:27:361 (2) then H-flip and V-flip it.
02:29:269 () - Drag the break to here?
03:17:130 (1) - Delete this note.

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Concerned with these speedups: 00:57:361 (1), 02:05:338 (1), 02:55:280 (1).
03:20:251 (1) - IMO a spinner would fit this part better.

[0108]
A lot of sliders here could be made more aesthetically appealing. (Like 01:07:072 (4), 02:27:534 (2), 02:40:367 (1))
I also dislike how you map parts by ending sliders 1/4 before the part then adding another hitobject after instead of letting the slider just end normally. It works on some parts, but on parts like 01:04:818 (2,3) and 01:34:297 (2,3), it sounds very off.
00:12:621 (1,2,3,4) - I find this part to sound very noisy.
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:18:170 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:20:945 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:53:373 (1) - Make this into a Pre-Spinner note instead?
01:01:870 (1,2,3,4) - IMO don't anti-jump.
02:02:910 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - This spacing is confusing. Move 02:03:430 (1) away?
02:16:436 (2) - This slowdown doesn't fit IMO.
03:20:251 (1) - Make this into a Pre-Spinner note instead?
I'm sorry, but I don't feel comfortable with this difficulty at all.

spboxer3

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Joined November 2009

spboxer3 13 years ago

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

set red timing at 00:00:829 - . because in Ono's Taiko Oni. the first object it's before the red timing

Easy

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)

03:05:338 (3,2) -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

02:04:644 - remove whistle? because 02:04:297 - to 02:04:991 - it's ↓. It's haven't a beat at 02:04:644 - .
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