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HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Singing!

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Satellite
Hi~

From Mod Request

All My Idea~

[lizsig' insane]
00:21:465 ここのCicleをスライダーにし、00:21:631まで伸ばして作ってみてはどうでしょうか。
00:26:463 ここのスライダーをサークルにし、00:26:630~00:26:963でスライダーを作ったほうが好きです 
01:13:617 clap
01:14:450 -^
01:14:617 clap delete
01:14:783 clap

[singing]
00:24:297 note?
00:34:961 -^
00:37:625 -^
00:40:293 -^


gl~
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hi~

From Mod Request

All My Idea~

[lizsig' insane]
01:14:783 clap ~i thought clap was in japanese pon o3o

[singing]
00:24:297 note?
00:34:961 -^
00:37:625 -^
00:40:293 -^ ~no to all because it adds nothing to the beatmap :c ./its just some empty note that doesnt follow anything D:


gl~ ~thanks :3
-Nanase-
Sound quality is too poor :(
:cry:
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:cry:
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Kurokami
You send a message about taiko bg to my friend. I checked it instead of him since he have some real life issues now. I corrected your bg, please do not edit.
http://puu.sh/Kuih
zaczac

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hi~

From Mod Request

All My Idea~

[lizsig' insane]
00:21:465 ここのCicleをスライダーにし、00:21:631まで伸ばして作ってみてはどうでしょうか。  それだとちょっと叩きにくいから、違う形になるけど修正させてもらったよ!!! Fixed~!!
00:26:463 ここのスライダーをサークルにし、00:26:630~00:26:963でスライダーを作ったほうが好きです 
うーん こんな感じで綺麗に形作ってるからここはキープしたいかも!!

01:13:617 clap oops....付け忘れてました :?  Fixed~!!


01:14:450 -^
01:14:617 clap delete
01:14:783 clap    申し訳ないけど実際に試してみたけど、このClapはちょっとリズム崩してまで合うとは思わなかったのでKeeping!!

thanks Mod!! http://puu.sh/Kxqr
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

-Nanase- wrote:

Sound quality is too poor :(
:cry:
:cry:
:cry:
:cry:
:cry:
:cry:
:cry:
Cant find a better one sorry :C
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Kurokami wrote:

You send a message about taiko bg to my friend. I checked it instead of him since he have some real life issues now. I corrected your bg, please do not edit.
http://puu.sh/Kuih
Thank you!! :3 ./will be updating my map as soon as possible
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ SkyDevil ~ :)

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lizsing's Insane]


  1. 00:34:794 (8) - Try perfect stack on 00:34:128 (6) - end point.
  2. 01:01:454 (8) - Try perfect stack on 01:00:954 (7) - end point.

[Singing]


  1. 00:49:957 (5,6) - You can try perfect stack slider end point?
  2. 01:06:119 (8) - Add new combo,new parttern here.
  3. 01:23:614 - Don't use 5% volume here, up to 30-50% is better.

[Hard]


  1. 00:42:126 (4) - Try perfect stack on 00:41:626 (3) - end point.
  2. 00:42:792 (1) - Add finish sound better to me.
  3. 00:54:289 - ^
  4. 01:23:614 - Don't use 5% volume here, up to 30-50% is better.

[Kuri's Taiko Oni]


  1. Change setting to center pls.

[249's Normal]


  1. 00:26:463 - Add whistle sound better to me.
  2. 00:30:296 (1) - End to 00:31:629 and add a circle to 00:31:962.
  3. 01:15:616 (1) - Add finish sound better to me.
  4. 01:16:949 (1) - ^
  5. 01:23:614 - Volume up to 30-50% is better.

[BCI's Easy]


  1. 00:40:959 (1) - Add finish sound better to me.
  2. 01:23:614 - Volume up to 30-50% is better.

That's all ~ Funny map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
YTYuyu

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ SkyDevil ~ :)

M4M here ~



[249's Normal]


  1. 00:26:463 - Add whistle sound better to me. it'll ruin the consistency in whistles so no.
  2. 00:30:296 (1) - End to 00:31:629 and add a circle to 00:31:962. i'm not following the vocals. it looks like it, but what i'm really following is the instrumental.
  3. 01:15:616 (1) - Add finish sound better to me.
  4. 01:16:949 (1) - ^ both fixed...i guess they emphasize the vocals.
  5. 01:23:614 - Volume up to 30-50% is better. this is 100% intentional because since song fades out at the end of this, decreasing the volume would fit here. it just sounds unfitting and too loud for me.

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
Ty for the mod Rewrite Fanatic Rika-chan ;)

SPOILER
osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Singing!
Artist:HO-KAGO TEA TIME
Creator:SkyDevil
Version:249's Normal
Source:K-ON!!
Tags:houkago htt yoko hikasa hisaka aki toyosaki satomi sato minako kotobuki ayana taketatsu yui hirasawa mio akiyama ritsu tainaka mugi kotobuki azusa nakano keion keionbu bu movie black_cherry_ita Byakugan249 Kurisuchianu Lizsig sherrie__fay

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NOTE: don't change the kiai because the kiai time can be different if there's a guest diff in the map.
Topic Starter
SkyDevil
:oops:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ SkyDevil ~

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lizsing's Insane]

~Lizsing XDDDDDD

[Singing]


  1. 00:49:957 (5,6) - You can try perfect stack slider end point? ~I thought it was :o Fixed :3
  2. 01:06:119 (8) - Add new combo,new parttern here. ~Fix
  3. 01:23:614 - Don't use 5% volume here, up to 30-50% is better. ~30 is too loud ;; how about 25?

[Hard]


  1. 00:42:126 (4) - Try perfect stack on 00:41:626 (3) - end point. ~Fix o3o
  2. 00:42:792 (1) - Add finish sound better to me.
  3. 00:54:289 - ^ ~Both fixed ^
  4. 01:23:614 - Don't use 5% volume here, up to 30-50% is better. ~same as at singing o3o

[Kuri's Taiko Oni]


  1. Change setting to center pls.
~I think I can do that how to do this O.o

That's all ~ Funny map and song ~ ~hehe

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;) ~ :OOOOO
Btw Thanks for Mod and star thingy :3
YTYuyu
Rika's asking you to do this to make the diff centered...settings like these are used commonly in taiko diffs.
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Byakugan249 wrote:

Rika's asking you to do this to make the diff centered...settings like these are used commonly in taiko diffs.
OOOHHH ./now i get it ./i will update soon (when i can reach a computer with osu!)

EDIT: FIXED
zaczac

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ SkyDevil ~ :)

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lizsing's Insane]

Lizsing!?( ゚Д゚)nice idea!! (`・ω・´)good job!!

  1. 00:34:794 (8) - Try perfect stack on 00:34:128 (6) - end point.
  2. 01:01:454 (8) - Try perfect stack on 01:00:954 (7) - end point.
sorry for late....

All fixed!!


http://puu.sh/VpjW
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Lizsig wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Lizsing's Insane]

Lizsing!?( ゚Д゚)nice idea!! (`・ω・´)good job!!
LOL.

Now waiting for Black_Cherry_Ita
BCI

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[BCI's Easy]


  1. 00:40:959 (1) - Add finish sound better to me. but not by me sorry
  2. 01:23:614 - Volume up to 30-50% is better.silent end is much better~
sorry for delay SkyDevil, i have a trouble in irl ;www; and sorry Rika, I don't fix anything ;w;
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[BCI's Easy]


  1. 00:40:959 (1) - Add finish sound better to me. but not by me sorry
  2. 01:23:614 - Volume up to 30-50% is better.silent end is much better~
sorry for delay SkyDevil, i have a trouble in irl ;www; and sorry Rika, I don't fix anything ;w;
Its okay o3o
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~

You are forgot load SB file.

SPOILER
beatmap_by_black_cherry_ita.png
beatmap_by_byakugan249.png
beatmap_by_skydevil.png
storyboard_by_amn3sys.png
taiko_made_by_kurisuchianu.png

No kd pls ~
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~

You are forgot load SB file.

SPOILER
beatmap_by_black_cherry_ita.png
beatmap_by_byakugan249.png
beatmap_by_skydevil.png
storyboard_by_amn3sys.png
taiko_made_by_kurisuchianu.png

No kd pls ~
Oh I deleted them because i didnt like them >< ill delete those things when i can reach a computer with osu! >3<

EDIT: Done~ Should I ask now for recheck? o3o becaause you didnt said that in your post Dx
YTYuyu
yea try to ask her 1 more time...it's just that and it should be ready.
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Byakugan249 wrote:

yea try to ask her 1 more time...it's just that and it should be ready.
Yeah xD Okay, Last time I annoy her. xD
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~


YTYuyu

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~


Yay that bubble is so bubbly...congratz on your 1st bubble ;). now don't re-update it because it'll get popped if you do :P
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Byakugan249 wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~


Yay that bubble is so bubbly...congratz on your 1st bubble ;). now don't re-update it because it'll get popped if you do :P
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH EEEEEEEEM GEEEEEEEE omg bubble o3o

btw thanks for the tip byaku and THANKS FOR THE BUBBLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :DD
Cygnus
Can you give me a copy of Jumping diff? That diff was awesome x.x
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SkyDevil

Philippines wrote:

Can you give me a copy of Jumping diff? That diff was awesome x.x
you liked it? o3o Imma ask people if they still have it o3o
bossandy
I remember mod this map , good luck with rank! SD ^_^
Cygnus

SkyDevil wrote:

Philippines wrote:

Can you give me a copy of Jumping diff? That diff was awesome x.x
you liked it? o3o Imma ask people if they still have it o3o
I don't like it, I love it. Good jump patterns<3
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

bossandy wrote:

I remember mod this map , good luck with rank! SD ^_^
Thaanksss :3 + I remember you too XD

Philippines wrote:

I don't like it, I love it. Good jump patterns<3
then i did a good job then o3o ./still searching
YTYuyu
are you 2 talking about this diff?
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SkyDevil

Byakugan249 wrote:

are you 2 talking about this diff?
YES. imma add it in the beatmap description~ (because its not the first time someone asks if i still have the jumping diff) xD

EDIT: Until i suddenly remember that i may not update my map.
Cygnus
yes yes! THANK YOU! :D
those
[General]
  1. Many of your default numbers (e.g. default-9.png) are not vertically centered, as seen here: http://puu.sh/XyEE
  2. BPM 180 is a closer timing for this song. It is very audible that the bpm is too fast at about 01:20:865 - .
[SB]
  1. You will have to get rid of all unnecessary transparency around your storyboard images, in compliance with the ranking criteria.
  2. You'll want to get rid of (ひと) in sb6.png; just the kanji is fine, no need for the furigana.
  3. When these are done, I'd like to talk about some of the move events, as well as the flashes.
[Singing]
  1. 00:24:297 - You will want to find something to fill in this gap. It's the third downbeat of the measure, and the break that you have between 00:23:964 (6,1) - is really awkward to wait for.
  2. 00:29:629 - The same applies for this, and a few other points like 00:34:961 - and 00:37:627 - , and from these you should be able to pick up what I'm trying to say here.
  3. 00:43:625 - The choice of using N:C1 clap on 00:44:292 (3) - and the third beat of each measure suggests that this section is in half-tempo, while it is actually just as fast. Instead, you should have the clap on the second and fourth beat of each measure, much like what you have in the beginning. The scarcity in hitsounding here is counter-intuitive to this section, since it is supposed to be building up toward the chorus.
  4. 00:58:288 (5) - This is in symmetry to 00:57:955 (4) - , but the music is very, very different. I would suggest the use of two circles instead, so as to differentiate between (4) much clearer.
  5. 01:13:950 (6,7,8,1,2) - This rhythm pattern doesn't really work out too well. I suggest something more like this.
PM me when all the above has been addressed.
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

those wrote:

[General]
  1. Many of your default numbers (e.g. default-9.png) are not vertically centered, as seen here: http://puu.sh/XyEE ill ask sherrie EDIT: fixed :3
  2. BPM 180 is a closer timing for this song. It is very audible that the bpm is too fast at about 01:20:865 - . ~Kay
[SB]
  1. You will have to get rid of all unnecessary transparency around your storyboard images, in compliance with the ranking criteria. ~Fixed
  2. You'll want to get rid of (ひと) in sb6.png; just the kanji is fine, no need for the furigana.Though i dont understand exactly what you mean (what's furigana?), the romaji lyrics of sb6 are ''daiji na hito no mae de'' and the sentences of the storyboard are lyrics of what she's singing (ひと = hito), though I should remove the ( ) but I can't ;;
  3. When these are done, I'd like to talk about some of the move events, as well as the flashes. ~kay, btw the white flash is already fixed so only the moving stuff~
[Singing]
  1. 00:24:297 - You will want to find something to fill in this gap. It's the third downbeat of the measure, and the break that you have between 00:23:964 (6,1) - is really awkward to wait for. ~fixed
  2. 00:29:629 - The same applies for this, and a few other points like 00:34:961 - and 00:37:627 - , and from these you should be able to pick up what I'm trying to say here. 00:29:629 - & 00:34:961 - sounds kinda bad if you add something and at 00:37:627 - sounds good
  3. 00:43:625 - The choice of using N:C1 clap on 00:44:292 (3) - and the third beat of each measure suggests that this section is in half-tempo, while it is actually just as fast. Instead, you should have the clap on the second and fourth beat of each measure, much like what you have in the beginning. The scarcity in hitsounding here is counter-intuitive to this section, since it is supposed to be building up toward the chorus. With the current placement of the circles and sliders, it will sound horrible, so the only conclusion is to remap this part while this is such a great part ;;
  4. 00:58:288 (5) - This is in symmetry to 00:57:955 (4) - , but the music is very, very different. I would suggest the use of two circles instead, so as to differentiate between (4) much clearer. ~made them all circles~ so fixed
  5. 01:13:950 (6,7,8,1,2) - This rhythm pattern doesn't really work out too well. I suggest something more like this.
    ~It does not sound great here, because I wanted to keep the finishes here to put alot of effect in this part ~
PM me when all the above has been addressed. ~Sorry but I did not agree with every statement you put here >< though i tried to fix most of the things
will upload the beatmap later~ okay o3o
-Napoleon-
Hey! Sherie__fay the scrip of the "White" image wasn't the better here is a better one:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"White.png",320,240
S,0,32962,,1
F,0,32962,33295,1,0
F,0,58954,59621,0,1
F,0,59621,60954,1,0
F,0,78282,79615,1,0

The lyrics were badly cuted out here's a version without many transparent pixels: http://puu.sh/XJTR
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Xavier18488 wrote:

Hey! Sherie__fay the scrip of the "White" image wasn't the better here is a better one:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"White.png",320,240
S,0,32962,,1
F,0,32962,33295,1,0
F,0,58954,59621,0,1
F,0,59621,60954,1,0
F,0,78282,79615,1,0

The lyrics were badly cuted out here's a version without many transparent pixels: http://puu.sh/XJTR
Thaankss :3

btw:
skin => sherrie_fay
SB => me
SB Letters => ayu

KUDO'D

EDIT: THE WHITE THINGY IS AWESOOMEEE
Azure
The Artist should be HTT .... 0.0 ?
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SkyDevil

Azure wrote:

The Artist should be HTT .... 0.0 ?
HTT => HO-KAGO TEA TIME xD
Jayel
Good luck with getting rank! Your goal is near!! So another star here! :D
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Jayel wrote:

Good luck with getting rank! Your goal is near!! So another star here! :D
Thank you so muucchh! :D
Niko-nyan
the artist must HTT xD
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