1. Delete an .osb file in your song folder please, since you doesn't have a storyboard.
2. Impressive stuff on combo colours there, very delicate.
3. Won't you use soft-sliderslide as a silent sound? Like most of the maps did.

1. 00:08:332 (2,3) - Feels weird here because ds here is jumped to 1.7 for no reason imo.
2. 00:47:214 (5,6) - Visually it's very close. (It's not really bad or that much a problem but I think in terms of visual it can be improved.)
3. 00:55:701 (3,4,5) - The flow feels weird here.
4. 01:01:030 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I find it very hard here to follow the rhythm, maybe you should just keep this in mind until others mention this again.
5. 01:02:214 (3,4) - The spacing here's very small and it's hard to follow.
6. 01:03:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - lol I understand what you're trying, but the flow's not completely smooth here, because 01:04:582 (1) 's angle doesn't support the flow from 01:04:385 (5) . Same applies to 02:50:372 (4,5) -
7. 01:09:714 (3,4,5) - The flow here can be improved imo. Because you have to move your cursor sharply from 01:09:911 (4) to 01:10:109 (5) .
8. 01:22:148 (5,6) - Shouldn't be a small jump here imo, I think the jump here 01:21:161 (3,4) makes much more sense.
9. 01:34:385 (4) - Maybe move this to the top-right a bit? So the flow can be better (Not sure what words to say instead of top-right lol, sry for my nub English)
10. 01:36:161 (1,2) - A jump here feels too sudden imo.
11. 02:10:701 (8) - I would move this to x:484 y:108 , but it's up to you.
12. 02:22:148 (4) - If will be much better if spacing here is balanced,
13. 02:22:148 (4) - Try x:384 y:52? So the spacing would be more balanced when playing.
14. 02:50:964 (5,6) - Spacing is kinda a bit bigger imo.
15. 03:18:003 (3,4,5) - Weird spacing imo.
16. 03:23:530 (1) - lol nice trap.
17. 04:35:669 (3,4,5) - Spacing looks unbalanced in terms of visual imo. > http://puu.sh/lOtiD/310807738d.jpg
18. 04:37:291 (7) - How about make this a curve slider? Just a random suggestion though.
19. 05:16:286 (2,1) - I wouldn't prefer this overlap though.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ we meet again. - I thought the name sounded familiar! ^.^ Thanks for yet another mod~! ♥

[General]

1. Delete an .osb file in your song folder please, since you doesn't have a storyboard. - my folder doesnt have one?
2. Impressive stuff on combo colours there, very delicate. - thank you~!
3. Won't you use soft-sliderslide as a silent sound? Like most of the maps did. added!

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1. 00:08:332 (2,3) - Feels weird here because ds here is jumped to 1.7 for no reason imo. - made gap smaller
2. 00:47:214 (5,6) - Visually it's very close. (It's not really bad or that much a problem but I think in terms of visual it can be improved.) - I think it's fine
3. 00:55:701 (3,4,5) - The flow feels weird here. - You're right! Fixed
4. 01:01:030 (4,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but I find it very hard here to follow the rhythm, maybe you should just keep this in mind until others mention this again. - i'll keep it noted but im not sure how to make it simpler
5. 01:02:214 (3,4) - The spacing here's very small and it's hard to follow. - fixed
6. 01:03:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - lol I understand what you're trying, but the flow's not completely smooth here, because 01:04:582 (1) 's angle doesn't support the flow from 01:04:385 (5) . Same applies to 02:50:372 (4,5) - fixed all that > <
7. 01:09:714 (3,4,5) - The flow here can be improved imo. Because you have to move your cursor sharply from 01:09:911 (4) to 01:10:109 (5) . - made it flow more
8. 01:22:148 (5,6) - Shouldn't be a small jump here imo, I think the jump here 01:21:161 (3,4) makes much more sense. - i prefer to keep it this way
9. 01:34:385 (4) - Maybe move this to the top-right a bit? So the flow can be better (Not sure what words to say instead of top-right lol, sry for my nub English) - maybe more towards the center? or closer to the other notes? cx i got what you meant though and did it
10. 01:36:161 (1,2) - A jump here feels too sudden imo. - tested and fixed
11. 02:10:701 (8) - I would move this to x:484 y:108 , but it's up to you. - i like it more where it is
12. 02:22:148 (4) - If will be much better if spacing here is balanced, - ah, nice catch!
13. 02:22:148 (4) - Try x:384 y:52? So the spacing would be more balanced when playing.
14. 02:50:964 (5,6) - Spacing is kinda a bit bigger imo. - fixed
15. 03:18:003 (3,4,5) - Weird spacing imo. - another nice catch!
16. 03:23:530 (1) - lol nice trap. - I hope to brings combo breaks to all those who are tempted. pure evil
17. 04:35:669 (3,4,5) - Spacing looks unbalanced in terms of visual imo. > http://puu.sh/lOtiD/310807738d.jpg - another nice catch!
18. 04:37:291 (7) - How about make this a curve slider? Just a random suggestion though. - yeah i guess it looks nice
19. 05:16:286 (2,1) - I wouldn't prefer this overlap though. - agreed, fixed

That's it from me, good luck! I'm sorry for spams on spacing.

1. 03:29:994 - there is something wrong with the volume. Please, make sure that both red and green line use the same volume. It's important as they are located at the same point of time.
2. The amount of black/grey and their shades you use is unreasonably high. I'd recommend to go for more colourful set of colors.
   
   Example

   
   [img]Combo1 : 158,181,153
   Combo2 : 140,154,189
   Combo3 : 128,64,64
   Combo4 : 181,155,138
   Combo5 : 253,104,104[/img]

1. 00:08:530 - as the drum beat is strong, emphasizing it might be a good idea. Try to place two circles, instead of 00:08:332 (2)?
   Note: 01:40:109 - 01:51:161 - same here. A few more similar patterns might appear, so if you are up to fix them, pleae fix them all.
2. 00:31:227 - I have a feeling it is better if you put a circle here. Vocals/guitar are asking for it.
   Note: 01:28:069 - something similar happens here.
3. 00:55:109 (1,2,3,4) - this feels overdone, consider using some more sliders to map the vocals properly here.
4. 01:48:003 (7) - minor - moving (7) further from (5) would be a great idea, so players don't click it too early and the pattern itself looks neater.Example
5. 01:53:924 (1,2,3) - I get the increasing volume thing, but can you start with 30-35% instead of 20%? I really can't hear the hitsounds there.
   Note: 03:53:912 - same.
6. 02:24:319 (2) - the guitar sound that suddenly pops up 02:24:714 - should be made clickable for the sake of gameplay. Example
   Note: 02:26:688 - same, I suppose.
7. 03:16:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a great star-shaped pattern. Hit Ctrl+Shift+D and see what you can do.
8. 03:22:938 (6,1,1) - distance spacing gets broken here. Probably a stack could help us. example
9. 03:44:183 (4,5) - thetransition between those two appears rough. I'd try something like this.
10. 04:19:858 - this thing should be finished 1/2 earlier, I suppose. 04:20:061 - a circle can be added here afterwards.
11. 05:22:488 (1) - might be just me, but i feel like this one is unnecessary here. It is almost inaudible, too. So, it is pretty much unrakable, anyway.
    
    Impressive!

Bakari wrote:

As requested via #modreqs

[General]

1. 03:29:994 - there is something wrong with the volume. Please, make sure that both red and green line use the same volume. It's important as they are located at the same point of time. - Nice catch
2. The amount of black/grey and their shades you use is unreasonably high. I'd recommend to go for more colourful set of colors. - Love the color suggestions! c/p into the osu file cx
   
   Example

   
   [img]Combo1 : 158,181,153
   Combo2 : 140,154,189
   Combo3 : 128,64,64
   Combo4 : 181,155,138
   Combo5 : 253,104,104[/img]

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1. 00:08:530 - as the drum beat is strong, emphasizing it might be a good idea. Try to place two circles, instead of 00:08:332 (2)?
   Note: 01:40:109 - 01:51:161 - same here. A few more similar patterns might appear, so if you are up to fix them, pleae fix them all. - fixed suggested and went through entire map fixing up similar patterns
2. 00:31:227 - I have a feeling it is better if you put a circle here. Vocals/guitar are asking for it. - added note for vocal
   Note: 01:28:069 - something similar happens here. - ^
3. 00:55:109 (1,2,3,4) - this feels overdone, consider using some more sliders to map the vocals properly here. - agreed and fixed
4. 01:48:003 (7) - minor - moving (7) further from (5) would be a great idea, so players don't click it too early and the pattern itself looks neater.Example - I think i changed it but hadn't update it before the mod
5. 01:53:924 (1,2,3) - I get the increasing volume thing, but can you start with 30-35% instead of 20%? I really can't hear the hitsounds there. - fixed
   Note: 03:53:912 - same. - although i agree my hitsounds are quiet at the start, i think the tom drum in the song is a good "natural" hitsound
6. 02:24:319 (2) - the guitar sound that suddenly pops up 02:24:714 - should be made clickable for the sake of gameplay. Example - good idea
   Note: 02:26:688 - same, I suppose. - no thank you
7. 03:16:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a great star-shaped pattern. Hit Ctrl+Shift+D and see what you can do. - MY GOD. THIS IS A COMMAND AND IVE BEEN MAKING MY STARS BY MYSELF THIS WHOLE TIME??? ;-; Thank you so much
8. 03:22:938 (6,1,1) - distance spacing gets broken here. Probably a stack could help us. example - stacked
9. 03:44:183 (4,5) - the transition between those two appears rough. I'd try something like this. - looks nice. edited it
10. 04:19:858 - this thing should be finished 1/2 earlier, I suppose. 04:20:061 - a circle can be added here afterwards. - fixed
11. 05:22:488 (1) - might be just me, but i feel like this one is unnecessary here. It is almost inaudible, too. So, it is pretty much unrakable, anyway. - Oops, I must have added that by mistake. Thanks for informing me cx
    Impressive!

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Best of luck!

Thanks for the mod, short command, and compliment!

DylanSan wrote:

Hey from my queue

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00:07:740 (1,2) - Missed blanket opportunity imo - i agree
00:38:530 (8,9) - ^ - that was actually a really crappy blanket by me in the first place XD
01:28:069 - I feel like the "a" from away should be mapped too - fixed
01:53:924 (1) - I feel like the hitsounds start too soft - they do >.<
01:58:859 (1,2) - These could have blanketed each other - they could have, but i prefer them the way they are
02:10:109 (7,1) - ^ - ^^
02:25:503 (3,1) - These could be symmetrical - ?????
03:57:561 (3,4) - these are not the same shape, might look better if they are - I actually copied and rotated the slider so they're identical, it looks a bit deceiving though
04:41:345 (1) - This blanket is slightly off, You can move the slider starting point one tad bit to the left - fixed
04:59:385 (6,7) - Blanket opportunity - no thank you
05:00:804 (1,2) - ^ - I considered it for a while, but i couldn't re-map it in a way i liked so i decided to not blanket it and revert the changes
05:22:488 (1) - This is a silent note? - crap >.< I must have added it by accident when i was clicking around and stuff, i deleted that note

Bakari wrote:

Oh, I forgot to say: get 1-2 more mods and call me back, please!

1. 00:51:556 (7) - Personally, I feel that the positioning of this circle should come below 6, not above. Looking at your previous patterns, the flow has indicated that you place your objects in front of the last and never really backtrack on itself. Therefore, it makes more sense to have something like this.
2. 03:55:939 (1) - The flow here feels clipped, rather than carried onwards.
3. Lastly, there is a blank .osb in your folder that you can delete, since you're not using a storyboard.

DahplA wrote:

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1. 00:51:556 (7) - Personally, I feel that the positioning of this circle should come below 6, not above. Looking at your previous patterns, the flow has indicated that you place your objects in front of the last and never really backtrack on itself. Therefore, it makes more sense to have something like this. - fixed it
2. 03:55:939 (1) - The flow here feels clipped, rather than carried onwards. - I agree somewhat, but I don't think it's worth it to re-mapping
3. Lastly, there is a blank .osb in your folder that you can delete, since you're not using a storyboard. - I keep deleting the osb from my folder before i upload, why does it keep reappearing!!

-

Very well done. I'd imagine seeing this ranked soon. Good luck. - oh yay!

Thank you for the mod! Greatly appreciate showing me what exactly it is that is wrong!

Sync wrote:

02:38:924 (5,1) - Watch out, this is spaced as if it were half a beat apart from each other; players will hit the slider too early here. - oh yeah, i moved it, thanks!
03:07:740 (9) - I'd add a new combo here instead of the slider a few beats later. - good idea, it also helps extinguish any confusion with the overlap

altkyo wrote:

Hi! I'm just passing here to suggest that you swap the slider at 03:23:530 (1) - to put a simple hitcircle, followed by a Spinner, considering that its a hard diff and a long map, this slider can be really tiring to hold, and your map have no spinners , a good place to put one! - I was holding off on changing this since it was only suggested once to change it, but I will change it to a spinner cx

In general, your map is really good, I had fun playing it, also asked some friends to play it, and they liked - Yay!!
Hope that gets ranked soon, Good Luck!

I'm glad they enjoyed it!

I had a lot of fun making it and I hope so too! ^^ Thank you for the mod!!

FCL wrote:

M4M
Tbh this map looks clean, just a few suggestions to do it better

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1. I'm sure your map does not require three first kiai times, music is also calm. However you can add kiai fountains if you understand me (If not just ask me in-game)
2. 00:01:425 (1) - hm, maybe triple, it's fine here? - I wanted the map to start up simple and build up to the first chorus so i made it a single note
3. 00:10:503 (8) - move up a bit for better triangle - okee
4. 00:39:911 (2,4) - bad overlap, fix it - okee
5. 00:50:372 (4) - try to make a symmetrical form, like this http://puu.sh/lWq7t/f182dfbc1b.jpg - okee
6. 01:06:556 (6) - probably fix this overlap will be okay - okee
7. 01:32:214 (7) - move on 144 116 for create a good triangle - okee
8. 01:34:385 (4) - spacing error? distance looks not correct - i think its fine
9. 01:39:911 (2) - try to stack with end of 01:38:530 (8) - no thank you
10. 01:40:109 (3,4,5) - flow it bad for me, my suggestion http://puu.sh/lWqmt/dbf065324b.jpg - no thank you
11. 02:17:214 (1) - i think you should make more spacing here imo - fixed
12. 02:19:977 (9) - not clear now, move on 212 332 - made more clear and readjusted them in my own way
13. 02:58:859 (2,6) - try to stack - okee
14. 03:05:372 (3) - add red dot at centre of slider, will look nice - didnt add red point but fixed that slider up
15. 03:20:174 (8,3) - stack - okee
16. 04:02:223 (6,7) - maybe stack? Now it looks weird, although... - no thanks
17. 04:07:899 (6) - again space error? - fixed
18. 04:45:602 (4,7) - meh, fix it, looks bad now - fixed
19. 04:46:818 (8,9,10,11,12) - looks really bad, make a pentagon it fine - made more pentagonal

uh, really like this song. Good luck! - Thanks a bunch!

Thank you for the mods! The map is now a lot more prettier and less bad

1. 00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example
2. 02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that.
3. 03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on...
   Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible
4. 04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song.
5. 04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example
   Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here.

Bakari wrote:

Hi again!

First of all, please make volume level on the green and red lines here 03:29:994 - equal. - oops. fixed

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1. 00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example - okee. followed the example
2. 02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that. - i think i forgot to move it when i was re-mapping. fixed
3. 03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on... - I decided to take the tom sound from Cry Thunder for the first two notes
   Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible - :3
4. 04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song. - replaced with a single note and remapped slider
5. 04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example - okee
   Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here. - same okee

You did great job! - Thank you!

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Poke me once this is adressed, and I'll bubble.

Thanks again for some finishing touches! I'll poke you asap

Weegle wrote:

hype!

Bakari wrote:

Oh my, hope it gets ranked soon. ;_;

Neoskylove wrote:

#modreqs.

00:19:188 (2,1) - I think this is overlap. - its fine
00:33:793 (3,4) - blanket - fixed
00:40:109 (3,4) - this jump is awkward - i dont mind it
00:51:951 (1,3) - blanket - fixed
01:38:924 (1) - http://puu.sh/mqdNp/742f520a3f.jpg - nice suggestion
02:27:477 (2,5) - overlap - fixed
04:36:480 (5) - ctrl G - no thank you

thanks for the mod!

1. 01:56:293 (3) - there is no sound at the sliderend. Maybe replace this slider with the one at 01:55:109 (1) - (just flipped around so it looks like a '}') - and then youd obviously need to change 01:56:885 (4).
2. 02:17:214 (1) - Maybe replace this slider with just a single circle?
3. 05:08:912 (3) - theres SOMETHING not right with this slider - i dont think its placed directly in the middle of the sliderhead/end of 05:08:102 (2) - or cutting directly through the middle of it. It just be my eyes playing tricks on me (which does happen >.>) but something just feels off about the placement of this slider.

NucleaRaven wrote:

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1. 01:56:293 (3) - there is no sound at the sliderend. - cause there is no hitsound necessary
   Maybe replace this slider with the one at 01:55:109 (1) - (just flipped around so it looks like a '}') - and then youd obviously need to change 01:56:885 (4).
2. 02:17:214 (1) - Maybe replace this slider with just a single circle? - I prefer the slider, I tested the circle note but in the end I reverted the changes, thanks for the suggestion though ^^
3. 05:08:912 (3) - theres SOMETHING not right with this slider - i dont think its placed directly in the middle of the sliderhead/end of 05:08:102 (2) - or cutting directly through the middle of it. It just be my eyes playing tricks on me (which does happen >.>) but something just feels off about the placement of this slider. - You're right!! The blanket was off just a tad so i adjusted it and i aligned the straight slider to go through the direct middle of the curved slider, nice catch! It also helped me remap a few shady spots that might ruin the flow so thanks a bunch! X)

This was literally all i could find as its basically a flawless map - amazing hitsounds - amazing flow and spacing... and an AWESOME song from an awesome band.
Heaps of luck to you!! - thank you for the kind words ^.^ and yeah avenged fucking rocks! >:D

1. 01:44:451 (6,7) - this blanket is weird and forced, please use 1,3x DS here for consistency.
2. 02:43:661 - i suggest to not ignore this beat, try to change 02:43:267 (2) - this into a 1/1 slider?
3. 03:42:966 (1,2) - increase the spacing here since it's a bit confusing when reading with 03:42:156 (6,7,1) - these 1/1 spacings

Karen wrote:

Hello from forum PM

1. 01:44:451 (6,7) - this blanket is weird and forced, please use 1,3x DS here for consistency. - fixed
2. 02:43:661 - i suggest to not ignore this beat, try to change 02:43:267 (2) - this into a 1/1 slider? - good idea
3. 03:42:966 (1,2) - increase the spacing here since it's a bit confusing when reading with 03:42:156 (6,7,1) - these 1/1 spacings - fixed

map is fine i think, but i feel really uncomfortable with those random spacing changes, so i won't give bubble sorry. - aww okay
btw you need to ask Bakari for a rebubble since you changed quite a lot stuff from those mods. - alright thank you

Maakkeli wrote:

hey but wasn't Mike Portnoy playing the drums in nightmare so you might wanna add him in the tags or something
just correct me if i'm wrong

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Avenged Sevenfold♥