1. Easy (2.62 stars, 99 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 256 notes)
3. Normal (4.2 stars, 144 notes)
4. Snowy (4.86 stars, 227 notes)

Snowy Dream wrote:

http://puu.sh/MTGU
done

哇。。。这个不能给kds的....只有mod才能给...瞎了我就来看下..
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- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Snowy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:602

kiai应该在01:17:602 结束 乃提前了1/4拍..感觉不准=-=

• fine

• the distance between notes are a little large and all notes are separated.
  consider the BPM is not so low, how about set distance snap to 0.7x or so.
  00:26:146 - nazi. how about put spinner from here to 00:28:235 ?
  00:49:501 (4) - hit at score display.

• 00:00:134 (1,2) - nazi. I don't like to put short slider at the head of song. because this map doesn't have intro, so we can't expect the speed of not only slider but also the song. how about replace these sliders with 1/1 sliders.
  00:26:146 - same as Easy.
  00:47:222 (1) - hit at score display.
  00:54:817 (5) - ^
  overall, there are a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this diff. I think it is a little difficult and want you to consider to reduce them,
  but it seems that this is the first mod of this map, so I just only say it may be difficult.

• 00:51:209 (2,3,4,5) - to put a circle on red tick after long interval seems hard to read the timing.
  how about replace them like this?
  SPOILER

  
  00:53:868 (2) - cover with HP bar a little, move to below if you can.

• 00:11:146 (2,3) - according to the previous flow, I think this jump is too large and it may cause misread of the rhythm.
  00:26:146 - how about add spinner at here like as Snowy to follow the guidline?
  00:53:298 (1,2,3) - you made the stream after the large jump, it seems hard to follow. how about put more close them? but this is Insane, so it's up to you.
  01:01:083 (3,4) - it seems hard to follow, because you make jump immediately after stream, so between them, there is less interval. also, the angle of jump and slider are different.
  how about put them closer, or rotate (4) to anti-clockwise to get better flow.
  01:02:032 (5,1) - too close imo. put them more farther
  01:08:298 (8,1) - almost same as 00:53:298
  01:17:602 (1) ~ it doesn't look like Insane. we hit almost same point at regular intervals, and it will make us bored. consider to change the placement.

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• fine

[Easy]

• the distance between notes are a little large and all notes are separated.
  consider the BPM is not so low, how about set distance snap to 0.7x or so.1.0x is not very difficult,and I think 0.7x is crowd
  00:26:146 - nazi. how about put spinner from here to 00:28:235 ?Fixed
  00:49:501 (4) - hit at score display.Fixed

[Normal]

• 00:00:134 (1,2) - nazi. I don't like to put short slider at the head of song. because this map doesn't have intro, so we can't expect the speed of not only slider but also the song. how about replace these sliders with 1/1 sliders.Fixed
  00:26:146 - same as Easy.Fixed
  00:47:222 (1) - hit at score display.Fixed
  00:54:817 (5) - ^Fixed
  overall, there are a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this diff. I think it is a little difficult and want you to consider to reduce them,
  but it seems that this is the first mod of this map, so I just only say it may be difficult.

[Snowy]

• 00:51:209 (2,3,4,5) - to put a circle on red tick after long interval seems hard to read the timing.
  how about replace them like this?Try but no change,I think this is not a big problem for a hard diff
  SPOILER

  
  00:53:868 (2) - cover with HP bar a little, move to below if you can.Fixed

[Insane]

• 00:11:146 (2,3) - according to the previous flow, I think this jump is too large and it may cause misread of the rhythm.No change
  00:26:146 - how about add spinner at here like as Snowy to follow the guidline?Fixed
  00:53:298 (1,2,3) - you made the stream after the large jump, it seems hard to follow. how about put more close them? but this is Insane, so it's up to you.No change,this is Insane diff,so I think this jump no need to change
  01:01:083 (3,4) - it seems hard to follow, because you make jump immediately after stream, so between them, there is less interval. also, the angle of jump and slider are different.
  how about put them closer, or rotate (4) to anti-clockwise to get better flow.No change
  01:02:032 (5,1) - too close imo. put them more fartherNo change
  01:08:298 (8,1) - almost same as 00:53:298No change
  01:17:602 (1) ~ it doesn't look like Insane. we hit almost same point at regular intervals, and it will make us bored. consider to change the placement.I'll change if I find some good idea

that's all. nice maps
good luck

• 00:19:501 (1) - remove NC
  00:52:539 (1) - remove NC
  01:04:690 (4) - NC (must be fixed)
  01:12:475 - add note?
  01:12:665 (5) - add NC instead of 01:13:045 (1)

• 00:33:836 (2) - remove whistle? sounds better for me..
  00:41:146 - finish? o.o

• 00:04:690 (2) - add NC instead of 00:04:311 (1)

Lizellota wrote:

[Insane]

Mapping:

• 00:19:501 (1) - remove NCFixed
  00:52:539 (1) - remove NCFixed
  01:04:690 (4) - NC (must be fixed)Fixed
  01:12:475 - add note?No change
  01:12:665 (5) - add NC instead of 01:13:045 (1) No change

Hitsounds:No change

• 00:33:836 (2) - remove whistle? sounds better for me..
  00:41:146 - finish? o.o

[Snowy]

• 00:04:690 (2) - add NC instead of 00:04:311 (1)Fixed

Nice diffs~

That's all ><~ great map and song, i like it, star~ GL~ sorry ._.

1491625364981 wrote:

HI! 這裡是CLANNAD Modding Queue的MOD

EASY修改了Normal里提到的音量问题,其他地方没有修改

00:03:171 - 這裡加個點
00:06:209 - ^
00:12:285 - ^
01:04:311 - ^

NORMAL

與EASY相同没有修改
還有從這個難度開始
從00:47:222 - 到00:50:260 - 以及01:16:652 - 到01:17:602 - 建議音量用漸增的方式
例如隔兩個note增加5%之類的已修改~

HARD[GD]没有修改

00:25:007 - 不加點有漏拍感
01:05:070 (3,4,5) - 建議合併成滑條 會順一些
01:16:652 - 感覺漏拍

INSANE

基本上前面有得這裡也有 所以我就不多加贅述了修改了Normal里提到的音量问题


基本上這張圖我打得非常順暢 我很喜歡 在此留下我的心星

祝RANK!!

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
* AR +1?No change

00:28:994 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read object)
Fixed

[Normal]
00:22:539 (5) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginnersFixed


[Snowy]
* Hey! Snowy is my pet name!
* The hitsound volume is too low. I can't hear it.... Maybe max out a bit?Fixed


[Insane]No change
00:19:501 (5) - These pauses makes me confusing while gameplay...
00:52:918 (4,1) - Sudden jump is suprsing... I guess?
01:20:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spread these stacks, this stacks are lot
01:26:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


That's all I got, hope it's help!

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, thou bad~ :3

mod here...


Easy

00:09:247 - I feel weird here. Its like a circle missing here... I don't think putting a blank here would be a good idea cause the vocal still singing. Generally, put a circle to fit in the blank...No change,this time point have nothing in music,so I think put a blank here have no problem


Normal

00:03:171 - A circle is missing here. I recommend to put a circle here to maintain the flow of the song. Same as easy diff
00:09:247 - Same the reason as above..Same as easy diff
00:12:475(1) - The slider here is not sync with the music. Just shorten it by one beat and placed it at 12:665. Try but feel strange



00:48:741(3) - Just add another repeat for slider to make the slider sounds good with the song.May be hard for beginner,so no change


Snowy

00:16:083(8) - Add a finish here, I feel it is better if finish add here. It sounds good after add it...I think there is no reason to add a finish
00:51:020 - Why don't you put a circle here, making the song not so weird when some note delayed. :3I think add a note here is weird
01:16:273(4) - I think you don't need this circle cause the circle making the beat sounds bad. Just remove it and let the circle(5) stay cause it sounds okay. No change,this note here have no problem


Insane

00:03:171 - By just adding a circle would make the whole stream sounds nice, put one. Same as easy diff
00:09:247 - Same reason as above ^
00:12:285 - Also the same reason as above^
00:50:260(1) - Add hitsound "clap" here to make it sounds nice.Fixed~


Overall, this map good, but try let others mod it to make it better.
And so, I'll take my leave...

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Hi~

在看时发现soft-hitfinish2 声音太小,放进游戏时没有起到什么效果..
可以考虑提升文件本身的音量..(我忘了什么时候下载的这图了,不知道更新文件了没
不过就当提示看下吧..没别的什么了.

Good luck!