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Source should be "ココロコネクト" with "Kokoro Connect" in the tags.
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KPY & Gu's Insane
00:03:669 (4,1,2) - Space these more evenly,
like so.
00:06:857 (4,5,1) - I think you should rework this so 5 isn't so far under 4. 5 is a pretty powerful slider but right now the player hovers over it for so long that power isn't showing itself.
00:07:607 (1,2,1) -
This would be a better rhythm.
00:08:544 (1,2) - Swap NC so it's following the violin, matches up with your rhythm choices better.
00:15:107 (1,2) - This spacing is visually the same as 00:12:857 (1,2,3,4) - , but now it's 1/1. The slowdown isn't apparent enough after the spinner. Change 00:15:107 (1,2) - into a 1/1 slider.
00:22:982 (1,2,3) - feels disjointed from 00:21:482 (1,2,3) - , try
this layout.
00:25:419 (4) - Don't skip over the downbeat.
00:29:919 (1,2,3) -
Something like this would be a nicer rhythm, it fits the musical emphasis better and matches up more with your other rhythm choices. As for placement, maybe
something like this would be good? The way you have that circle stacked underneath the previous slidertail makes for a really awkward 00:29:544 (4,1,2) - angle.
00:35:919 (4) - This feels like it's separate from the rest of the map. After the 00:36:107 (1,2) - gap, the player will be moving to the right, but this note doesn't suggest this at all. Maybe stack it on 00:36:669 (3) - 's head? Or move it so it forms a blanket with 00:36:669 (3) - .
00:43:419 (3,4) - These are strangely far apart when compared to how close the other 3/4 sliders were in the earlier parts of the map.
00:51:857 (4,5,1) - This is a really awkward angle to play, especially coming out of the 00:51:294 (1,2,3,4) - motion. Try stacking 00:52:232 (1) - onto 00:51:294 (1) - instead?
Also, if you change 00:52:232 (1) - into a 1/2 or a 3/4 slider, it'll make 00:52:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - feel more connected.
00:53:732 (1) - Hmm, maybe make this a 3/4 slider, and have a circle start the kiai off.
00:58:419 (5,1,2,3) - This all seems too far apart, and the motion is pretty awkward as well.
01:06:294 (2) - Drop it to
around here so the 01:05:825 (11,12,13,1,2) - angle is sharper and more snappy.
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Hard
Don't use such a low Stack Leniency for a Hard difficulty, it makes things like 00:12:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:37:054 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - really hard to read for players of this level. Bump it up to 4 or so.
00:11:554 (4,5) - Would probably be better to just follow the violin, since that's what happens in the Insane.
00:31:242 (3,4,1) - The spacing here seems really high for what's happening in the music.
00:37:054 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:242 (3,4,1) - Rework this part, this is almost a straight line so this plays pretty awkwardly with all the DS inconsistencies.
00:47:367 (3) - If you move this
up to hereyou can repeat this once more and map all of the violin.
00:48:867 (3,4,1) - The spacing here seems really high for what's happening in the music.
Yeah, idk about this diff, the DS inconsistencies seem like they're pushing what can count as a Hard diff...
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Net's Hard
I think you should bump Stack Leniency up to at least 4, for reasons similar to what I gave for Gu's hard. It's not as big of an issue in this difficulty, though.
00:37:054 (3,1) - Swap NC?
00:59:742 (1,2) - ^
01:02:179 (7,1) - Angle seems a bit steep, maybe try a blanket?
01:04:617 (6) - It'd be nice if the red tick beat wasn't being skipped here.
01:11:929 (2,3) - Rework this rhythm so the downbeat isn't landing on a slidertail.
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Melo's Normal
00:01:429 (2,3,1,2,3) - This entire motion is really clunky. 00:03:117 (1,2,3) - feels really disjointed from 00:01:429 (2,3) - due to the awkward 00:02:554 (3,1,2) - angle. A quick and dirty fix would be to do
something like this but I think you should rework this entire pattern, addressing other issues, like the ugly 00:01:429 (2,3) - blanket, and the overall disconnected feeling your current pattern is giving.
00:13:429 (2,3) - Another ugly blanket,
this slider bowing so far out does not look good. Don't use symmetries if things aren't going to end up pretty.
00:36:117 (1,2) - If you use
this rhythm, the vocals/overall rhythm will be mapped better, and 00:37:429 (3,4,5,6) - will have more impact.
01:14:179 (5) - Curve this to be consistent with all the previous sliders.
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Nymph's Easy
Have the break end at 01:22:429 by dragging the end of the break over [url=http://puu.sh/j09UF/5003155604.jpg]like so[url].
I guess there's nothing really wrong with this diff, but especially for the beginning, I really wish you tried to follow the violin more when there weren't any vocals.
