18:00 <LoliSora> : I'm coming
18:02 <Niva> : aaaah sorry for my lateness orz >_< my mother called me
18:02 *Niva is listening to Kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura
18:02 <Niva> : it's downloaded now
18:03 <LoliSora> : lol
18:03 <LoliSora> : That's fine
18:03 <LoliSora> : oh, you're only 17
18:03 <Niva> : o.o?
18:03 <Niva> : do you think how old I am >_<
18:04 <LoliSora> : You're a college student in my mind ( I don't know that before, just a guess
18:04 <Niva> : ah... many people said that, idk why >_<
18:04 <LoliSora> : Orz....
18:05 <LoliSora> : Just feel about you're ripe enough
18:06 <Niva> : err... o.o
18:06 <Niva> : first
18:06 <LoliSora> : Oh!
18:06 <Niva> : there's this file : Kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (LoliABC).osb
18:06 <LoliSora> : ....hmmmm
18:06 <LoliSora> : hahahah~
18:06 <Niva> : LoliABC o.o
18:07 <LoliSora> : Hmmm......don't tell the truth for ppy
18:07 <LoliSora> : XD
18:07 <Niva> :
18:08 <Niva> : idk... i'm still thinking about enddoor-l and enddoor-r.jpg
18:08 <Niva> : I know it's ending on 138997 already, but...
18:09 <Niva> : idk how to explain... it crashes with the bg in the end o.o
18:09 <LoliSora> : lol
18:09 <Niva> : uh... don't mind that
18:09 <LoliSora> : Anyway....I'm not the creator of this SB lol
18:10 <LoliSora> : I'll tell him about that
18:10 <Niva> : oh... okay
18:10 <Niva> : ~
18:10 <Niva> : anyway... you don't need lead-in 2000 lol, 1000 is enough
18:10 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:10 <Niva> : also I'm thinking about using this preview time : PreviewTime: 102098
18:11 <Niva> : hmm, now...
18:11 <LoliSora> : en! let me fix the code
18:11 <Niva> : oh ok~
18:11 <LoliSora> : now?
18:12 <Niva> : 00:01:068 (1) - why whistle+clap here, not finish instead :3
18:12 <Niva> : oh, finish + clap fits more imo xD
18:12 <LoliSora> : Ok!
18:13 <LoliSora> : I'm sick at hitsound and NC
18:14 <Niva> : you can use the music to aid hitsounding, actually...
18:14 <Niva> : for example, if you listen to the music on 00:03:186 (1,2,3,4) - here
18:15 <Niva> : the instrument hits high note on (1)'s start, (2), and (4)'s start
18:15 <Niva> : there's where your custom clap fits~ xD
18:15 <LoliSora> : let me do that
18:16 <LoliSora> : Hmmm, but not strong enough
18:16 <Niva> : yep...
18:17 <Niva> : 00:07:068 (8) - copy-paste (5) here and CTRL+R? xD
18:18 <LoliSora> : XD
18:18 <LoliSora> : of course a lazy way
18:18 <LoliSora> : I always overlap the preview position
18:18 <Niva> :
18:19 <LoliSora> : previous =.=
18:19 <LoliSora> : OMG...
18:19 <Niva> : 00:10:598 (6) - stack the start with 00:09:186 (6)'s start? xD
18:20 <Niva> : (the jump here is basically easy to catch)
18:20 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:20 <LoliSora> : yes!
18:20 <Niva> : 00:11:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is quite random o.o
18:21 <LoliSora> : Hmmm, yes....I don't know, just feel it can be easy to pass
18:21 <LoliSora> : or a smooth playing?
18:21 <Niva> : yep, let me try to do something with this though
18:22 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:22 <Niva> :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310339 ?
18:22 <Niva> : can't think of any better ideas lol
18:23 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:23 <LoliSora> : let's move it
18:24 <Niva> : well, if you want to keep the "randomness" it's fine as well though, it's still rankable and not hard to read
18:25 <LoliSora> : XD
18:25 <LoliSora> : I just try to play itXD
18:25 <Niva> : 00:14:833 (1) - remove the hitsounds on slider start?
18:25 <Niva> : to let it same with 00:13:773 (2) -
18:26 <LoliSora> : 00:13:773 (2) -
18:26 <LoliSora> : no hitsound here
18:27 <Niva> : yep~ so that's why it's better to remove on 00:14:833's start xD
18:27 <Niva> : ...imo xD
18:27 <LoliSora> : lol
18:27 <LoliSora> : OK
18:29 <Niva> : 00:21:009 (4) - whistle here should be on 5's start imo xD
18:31 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:31 <Niva> : 00:27:185 (5) - I'd add a slight curve here to let it flow together with (6)...
18:31 <Niva> : it'll flow better with (9) as well~
18:32 <LoliSora> : then up a little
18:32 <Niva> : yep~
18:33 <Niva> : 00:29:833 (5,6,7) - this is just my idea... because (7) almost touches (4), I think you can arrange like this:
18:33 <Niva> :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31034718:33 <Niva> : it's good with AR9 anyway~
18:35 <LoliSora> :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31035118:35 <LoliSora> : ....just a bad internet
18:35 <Niva> : oh...
18:35 <Niva> : 00:34:598 (6) -
18:35 <Niva> : is this... 1/8? not really sure...
18:35 <Niva> : it's just not 1/4 I guess
18:36 <LoliSora> : yes
18:36 <Niva> : anyway.... here's what I said when you got disconnected :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31035718:37 <LoliSora> : it's 1/8 patten
18:37 <Niva> : ^^
18:37 <LoliSora> : let those player get more score!
18:40 <Niva> : 00:40:068 (1) - i think it's better to put this in the center of 1,2,3,4,5 lol
18:41 <LoliSora> : nice
18:41 <Niva> : 00:40:951 (6) - put this below 00:39:892 (5) - so the star pattern is completed
18:41 <Niva> : and put 00:41:127 (7) - in the center of 2,3,4,5,6 (:
18:43 <Niva> : ------------------------
18:43 <Niva> : 00:42:362 (1,2,3) - as this is another 1/8 part, I think this will be better:
18:43 <Niva> :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31036318:47 <LoliSora> : OK
18:47 <LoliSora> : all done
18:47 <LoliSora> : have test
18:48 <Niva> : oh, ok~
18:48 <Niva> : anyway 00:47:657 (1,2,3) - not sure if this is rankable orz >_<
18:49 <Niva> : 00:51:186 (9) - i personally don't like the silence here... imo using a slow slider here (maybe 0.75x) plays better~
18:50 <LoliSora> : then
18:50 <LoliSora> : until00:51:186 (9) - ?
18:51 <LoliSora> : because here is 1/8
18:51 <LoliSora> : so I just try to ignore it
18:51 <Niva> : no, I mean... use slow slider from 00:51:186 to 00:51:892
18:51 <Niva> : with 0.75 inherit section~
18:52 <Niva> : 01:00:362 (11) - add nc here, remove nc on 01:01:421 (1) lol xD
18:53 <Niva> : 01:08:833 - drag the break here? xD
18:54 <LoliSora> : pretty long slider
18:54 <LoliSora> : 0.75
18:54 <LoliSora> : let me find a way to set it
18:54 <Niva> : yeah~ it's optional though, I just personally it's better instead of silence >_<
18:56 <Niva> : ---------------------------------
18:56 <Niva> : 01:21:539 (1) - hitsound should be like this:
18:56 <Niva> : clap on slider's end
18:56 <Niva> : 01:22:421 (2) - clap here
18:56 <Niva> : 01:22:598 (3) - finish on start, clap on end
18:57 <Niva> : 01:23:480 (x) - Add note with clap here if you want, and add finish on 01:23:657 (1)'s start~
19:00 <LoliSora> : OK
19:00 <Niva> : 01:31:598 (9,10) - should be like this imo :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31038119:01 <Niva> : 01:37:421 (6) - you don't need clap on the sldier's end here, the music goes silent here
19:01 <Niva> : 01:41:657 (4) - hmm, imo it's better to add a new combo here to let players know this is a slowdown slider...
19:05 <Niva> : 01:47:304 (4,5) - again it's quite random here.. try this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31038719:07 <Niva> : 01:50:304 (1,6) - try this maybe? will be fancier imo :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31039019:08 <Niva> : 01:59:083 (1) - i think you can still map this 1/8 here, end the 1/8 slider on 01:59:568
19:09 <Niva> : with that, you can try to add a gradual volume increase on the 1/8 slider~
19:09 <Niva> : 02:07:598 (7) - stack below (4) instead to make this part tidier?
19:10 <Niva> : also, on this sequence the claps should be on 02:07:069 (4,7)
19:11 <Niva> : 02:14:480 (3) - why whistle here? Finish is better imo because of the finish you used on 02:12:362 (3) -
19:11 <Niva> : and finally, 02:15:539 (1) -
19:11 <Niva> : start the spinner 1/4 later and add a note with custom clap here ^^
19:12 <Niva> : ...that's it >_<
19:12 <LoliSora> : Thx!!!!!
19:12 <LoliSora> : a lot
19:12 <Niva> :
19:12 <LoliSora> : I just fix here01:50:304 (1,6) -
19:12 <LoliSora> : too much mod at same time
19:12 <Niva> : ah... >_<