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Serebro - Mama Luba

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ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7 июля 2013 г. at 20:58:27

Artist: Serebro
Title: Mama Luba
Tags: Russian FoxShift tiper
BPM: 127,5
Filesize: 4328kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. FoxShift's Normal (2,71 stars, 209 notes)
  2. Insane (4,92 stars, 482 notes)
  3. tiper's Hard (4,26 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Serebro - Mama Luba
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Russian Pop (2011)
Serebro - Mama Luba (Official Video)
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Sh1ni
182 posts
Joined March 2010
Sh1ni
staaaaar~ ^^
p.s. Awesome SB : 3
Legalist
Legalist
Nice :3 Go go rank.
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
star ^^
riffy
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
riffy
star, da
davai~davai~
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
done!!
Thanks! :)
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
IchiGUN
FoxShift's Krovatka
00:25:882 (2) - Возможно стоит разбить на 2 слайдера?

или так

01:12:470 (1) - ^
01:33:647 (2) - ^
02:16:470 (1) - ^
02:45:647 (2) - y:312 для симметрии, ну или 02:46:117 (3,4,5,6) - чуть-чуть поднять до y:304 (по нижним)

ShikShik
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Классная мапа! Троллфейсы порадовали :D
Last edited by IchiGUN , edited 1 time in total.
Natsume
Natsume
Если ты не уберёшь этот ебанутыйне совсем подходящий СБ, то, мне кажется, "Конец Света" наступит несколько ранее.
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
IchiGUN спасибо,исправлено.
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
привет ещё раз о/
FoxShift's Krovatka
одна дистанционная (или как ещё сказать) ошибка. в аимоде посмотри и исправь
00:15:529 (4) - неплохо бы анстакнуть, а то лёгкая карта всё же, новички не справятся
00:19:764 (5) - точку, которую посередине, переместить на х:160 y:144
00:42:823 (1) - удалить новое комбо
00:44:235 (2) - спейсинг
01:12:470 (1) - удалить новое комбо
01:13:882 (2) - а сюда бы его поставить
01:30:823 (3) - анстакнуть
02:22:588 (4) - запихни этот слайдер хотя бы под 02:21:647 (2);
нижнюю красную точку поставь на х:344 y:200, верхнюю на х:368 y:184, а последнюю на х:456 y:184
02:24:941 (1) стакни под конец слайдера, если предыдущее сделаешь
02:40:000 (1) - верхняя красная точка - x:256 y:232, нижняя - х:272 y:264, конечная - х:272 y:304
02:44:235 (1) - верхняя точка х:344 y:88, точка посередине - х:384 y:160
02:58:823 (5) - ревёрсов многовато, по моему
03:12:941 (5) - а здесь можно и лишний ревёрс

ShikShik
более трёх разных скоростей использовано. насколько я помню, это анранкабельно
01:11:294 (8) - новое комбо может?
02:24:823 (10) - одну клеточку вправо и одну вниз

ну и всё. звезду уже кинула, удачи вам :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
==General==
Quite "WASH BRING" ORZ

==ShikShik==
-- Combo Problem --
00:50:352 (5) - I think you can new combo this note (To tell others the speed changed in this note)
01:56:705 (1,1) - Remove this two X_X (Useless)
02:00:235 (1,1,1) - ^
03:07:529 (6) - New combo and remove 03:07:764 (1) (The spacing changed)
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
01:50:117 (5,6,7,8) - Not a good idea to put like this.I think you can fix the spacing here.
-- Other(S) --
FROM AI MOD More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map.
02:45:647 (1) - Put this note on 3 and cirl+h (Coz 02:45:647 (1,2,3,4) are not beautiful enough, and the first note is too strange...)

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Nice map set
UNLIKE :OMG I know a new word MAMA LUBA LUBA LUBA.... But I dont know what it mean ... But liestened for 12 times or above X_X
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Привееет~
Эта карта слишком хороша для такого трека ==

[FoxShift's Krovatka]
Krovatka? WTF : D
00:37:176 (4) - бросилось в глаза, это же всё таки нормал.. Юзай снап
00:41:882 (6) - нк?
00:47:529 (3) - убрать из под слайда? Места много)
00:56:000 (3) - он немного кривоват : ( совсеееем чуть чуть
SPOILER
01:05:411 (4) - опять же спейсинг
01:09:176 (5) - не внезапно ли для нормала?
01:44:941 (1) - спейсинг
01:49:176 (1) - удалить нк
01:49:647 (2) - добавить нк
01:51:059 (2) - ^
01:52:000 (1) - удалить нк
02:02:823 (1) - ну писала уже по поводу этого
02:09:411 (4) - ну тоже писала
02:13:176 (5) - писала
03:10:117 (1) - ^

[ShikShik]
01:59:529 (1) - убрать из под кружков?
02:24:470 (7) - нк?
02:44:235 (5) - ^

И вот мне не нравится шрифт в сб :о
Но это я наверное просто привереда эдакая
текст песни ололопиздец ._.
Mantis
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Mantis
Модить не умею, но дам советик:
Посмотри медленные стримы - мне кажется, они тяжелоиграемые. А вот триплы и джампы классные.
И да, надеюсь, ты доделаешь сб, а то она кажется какой-то... Как черновик.

Hitomi May wrote:

текст песни ололопиздец ._.
^ \:D/
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
SB - доделано. Может быть по сравнению с моими предыдущими SBми и кажется черновиком,но оно тут доделано) просто очень лёгкое и слабое сб.
Mantis
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Mantis
Хотел поставить появившуюся звезду, а мапа уже на свалке. Печаль. :(
riffy
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riffy
ok~ as requested

[General]
битрейт мп3 192 или ниже. у тебя 320 http://puu.sh/IHws
киаи можно бы и одинаковые сделать
в описании укажи названия дифф
Derp's Derp = Normal
ShikShik = Hard ну и так далее


[Normal]
AR +1
03:03:058 (1) - there's no NC. it's a bug

00:19:764 (5,1) - overlap (i won't point out more of them. look throug your map and fix them if ya want to)
00:50:823 (1) - overlap with spinner's hitburst (300)
01:05:882 (1,1) - убирай свой спам новыми комбами
02:21:647 (2,3,4) - странноватый паттерн
02:44:235 (1,3) - не оценил. оверлап какой-то странный
02:48:000 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/IHoT
03:03:058 (1) - опять же покрыта последствиями спиннера

[Hard]
00:50:352 (5) - нк. замедление должно выделяться нк. вообще все смены скоростей выделять нк
01:48:470 - есть ритм, нот нет. :/
01:51:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nazi: красивая шестиугольная звезда + 2 ноты в центре выглядит лучше
02:21:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ох не нравится мне это. я бы сделал 1/2 слайдеры по большим белым тикам
02:41:411 (4,3) - стак
02:47:529 (1,1) - не-а. мне не нравится комбоинг
03:15:764 (1) - финиш

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


so.. m4m?
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
-Bakari- Помог,спасибо.кудосу!

всё исправила.
FoxShift
59 posts
Joined February 2011
FoxShift

-Bakari- wrote:

[Normal]
AR +1 Ок
03:03:058 (1) - there's no NC. it's a bug Ок

00:19:764 (5,1) - overlap (i won't point out more of them. look throug your map and fix them if ya want to)Ок
00:50:823 (1) - overlap with spinner's hitburst (300)
01:05:882 (1,1) - убирай свой спам новыми комбами Ок
02:21:647 (2,3,4) - странноватый паттерн
02:44:235 (1,3) - не оценил. оверлап какой-то странный
02:48:000 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/IHoT
03:03:058 (1) - опять же покрыта последствиями спиннера
Спасибо
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
Hi! come to m4m.
thank you for request

[General]
  1. the bitrate of mp3 is 320kbps. please use this one
    maybe offset is not changed.
  2. I want the diff between these two diffs(maybe like as hard).
  3. unify the Kiai Time
    SPOILER

    AIBat v2.0 wrote:

    Kiai
    Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

    - [Krovatka] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:823, ends on 01:21:176
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:54:823, ends on 02:09:764
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:09:882, ends on 02:24:823
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:24:941, ends on 02:25:058
    Kiai #5: Starts on 03:02:588, ends on 03:13:411

    - [ShikShik] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:823, ends on 01:05:764
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:882, ends on 01:20:941
    Kiai #3: Starts on 01:54:823, ends on 02:09:764
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:09:882, ends on 02:24:823
    Kiai #5: Starts on 02:24:941, ends on 02:25:058
    Kiai #6: Starts on 03:02:588, ends on 03:17:529
    Kiai #7: Starts on 03:17:647, ends on 03:17:764
    I don't know about SB a lot, but...
    what's this from 02:32:470! I can't pass this section because of this amusing SB lol
[Krovatka]
  • 02:24:941 (5) - one grit above?
    00:40:941 (4,5,6,7,1) - it seems too stacking. how about reduce stacking?
    00:46:588 (6) - 1 grid right?
    01:48:706 (5,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:40:941.
    01:54:353 (5) - 1 grid left?
nothing more to say...

[ShikShik]
  • 00:24:000 (8,1) - don't overlap? but it is nazi
    00:50:823 - hmm..I think this changing of SV is too much. 1.5x is enough imo.
    01:54:823 - ^
    03:02:588 - ^
why is the russian music so cool?
good maps and good luck.
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
h-728 , thank you. Done
Arnold0
1,675 posts
Joined February 2012
Arnold0
You asked me in the chat if I can try to mod, so here is my try to mod ...
As I say I'm newbie, I fond nothing.
(imo -> In My Opinion)

[General]
Your MP3 file is 320kbps (Now I understand why it takes 12min to download :o), rankable maximum is 192kbps

[Krovatka]
Fond nothing, sorry ...

[ShikShik]
00:33:647 (8) - Remove wistle ?
From 00:50:823 - to 01:20:941 - Slider spead x2 is too high the sliders are too fast imo.
From 01:54:823 - to 02:25:058 - ^
02:34:705 (2) - No reverse arrow slider end at 02:34:941 maybe ?

I'm sorry I can't fond anything else, I hope I don't say thing that can make the map worse :x
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
Thank you, Arnold0 :)
BCI
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Joined May 2011
BCI
серебро в тегах не нужно - уже в тайтле D: /me runs
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

серебро в тегах не нужно - уже в тайтле D: /me runs
я в курсе ._. незнаю как это туда попало,могла случайно скопировать.Спасибо :)
Genshin
228 posts
Joined July 2009
Genshin
i like this map :3 so star!
mod~

ShikShik:
OD 6
01:08:588 (2,3,4,5) - these notes a little closer to the next slider, like this http://puu.sh/JXuy
01:13:882 (1,2) - this positions perhaps? http://puu.sh/JXtw
what about a spinner from 01:32:235 - to 01:34:823 - ?


Krovatka:
00:48:000 (1) - move the end of this spinner here: 00:49:882 -

good luck :3
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Hello! Mod Rquest ;33

[Genera]

[Krovatka]
00:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376394 Shapes shapes :3
00:57:882 (5,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376397 ^
01:13:882 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Don't over lap on easy/normal diffs D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376399
02:17:882 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Vise versa http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376401
02:21:176 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376404

[ShikShik]
01:49:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - USe the same spacing and make a shape, this looks random :C

[Comments]
LOVEEE PURE LOVEEE. That SB is EPIC *-* Meme's ftw <33 :3 I'll give a star XD Get it ranked or I'll murder you!!! D:
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
KiyoshiX101, Genshin. Thank you.
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi from my queue, nice map and song~ :3

[Krovatka]

Try with AR 6, if too fast, keep it on 5.
All my mod was focused on spacing, it has a nice flow x3

00:18:823 (4) - 1 grid up

( 1 ) You can consider this, for a consistent spacing
00:35:764 (2) - 1 grid right
00:36:705 (3) - Change to x:152 y:248
Only if you do, do this too:
00:37:647 (5) - 1 grid left
00:38:117 (6) - Change to x:360 y:248
00:38:588 (7) - Change to x:416 y:160
00:39:529 (1) - 1 grid left
00:40:000 (2) - 1 grid up
00:40:470 (3) - 1 grid right
If don't, keep like it is. The result will be like this: http://puu.sh/KeiQ

( 2 ) 01:04:470 (3) - You can change to x:136 y: 240, new players usually "get trapped" by spacing and fail :?

01:12:000 (4) - 1 grid up

Same as before, same pattern in ( 1 )
01:44:000 (2) - 1 grid left
01:44:470 (3) - Change to x:360 y:136
01:45:412 (2) - 1 grid right
01:45:882 (3) - Change to x:152 y:136
01:46:353 (1) - Change to x:96 y:224
01:47:294 (2) - 1 grid right
01:47:765 (3) - 1 grid down
01:48:235 (4) - 1 grid left

02:08:470 (3) - Same reason as ( 2 ), change to x:376 y:144

02:16:000 (4) - 1 grid down
02:24:941 (5) - ^

For some of simetry and spacing you can do this:
02:49:882 (3) - Slider point 1 x:400 y:160; Silder point 2 x:424 y: 208
02:50:823 (4) - Change to x:296 y:280
If you do:
02:51:764 (1) - 1 grid down

That's all~
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin


General

-Enter the Song Setup and go to the tab, and select the option Storyborading (epilepsy warning display)
because of the flashes that are in some parts of the map or the White effect
(Good advice is just)

[Krovatka]

00:39:529 (1) - 1 grid left
01:32:705 (1) - Review the distance
02:56:470 (2) - unsymmetrical patters

[ShikShik]

01:20:941 (1) - Remove Finish and Add Whistle

Good Luck a Nice Map! :D
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi ^^

[Krovatka]
00:17:411 (1) - right 1 grid? x:240 y:192
00:37:176 (4) - a bit far from the previous circle, try to move it close a bit??
00:42:823 (7,1) - i suggest move both of this note to other grid is better.
01:50:588 (1,2) - ^
02:16:470 (1) - the last slider point move to grid x152 y:164 ?
02:58:823 (5) - too much repeating on this slider. try to make it like this? >> http://puu.sh/Kl9V

[ShikShik]
-Approach Rate -1?
-Overall Difficulty +1?
00:44:941 (2) - i think it slider is too far from the previous slider. Try to make it close a bit?
00:50:823 - I dont think start from here need to added fast speeding, or try to use in x1.5 instead of x2.0
01:44:470 (6) - ctrl+r ?
01:56:705 (1,1,1) - remove these New Combo? If you agree this, add a New Combo on 01:58:352 (4) ?
02:00:235 (1,1,1) - ^
02:44:000 (3) - remove this circle?
02:45:529 - add a circle?
02:45:882 - ^
02:46:000 - ^
02:46:352 - ^
02:46:470 - ^
02:46:823 - ^
02:46:941 - ^
02:47:294 - ^
02:47:411 - ^
02:55:529 (1) - too far from the previous slider. make it close a bit.
*too crazy jump on this difficult Orz*

----------
Just two difficult only?? Why not make one more hard difficult?
and you got a Nice mapset. ;)
Good Luck.
Btw, the SB is so..... xD
ZLOdeuka-
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Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
thanks,fixed
FoxShift
59 posts
Joined February 2011
FoxShift

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Krovatka]

Try with AR 6, if too fast, keep it on 5.
All my mod was focused on spacing, it has a nice flow x3

00:18:823 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed

( 1 ) You can consider this, for a consistent spacing
00:35:764 (2) - 1 grid right
00:36:705 (3) - Change to x:152 y:248 Fixed
Only if you do, do this too:
00:37:647 (5) - 1 grid left Fixed
00:38:117 (6) - Change to x:360 y:248 Fixed
00:38:588 (7) - Change to x:416 y:160 Fixed
00:39:529 (1) - 1 grid left Fixed
00:40:000 (2) - 1 grid up Fixed
00:40:470 (3) - 1 grid right Fixed
If don't, keep like it is. The result will be like this: http://puu.sh/KeiQ

( 2 ) 01:04:470 (3) - You can change to x:136 y: 240, new players usually "get trapped" by spacing and fail :? Fixed

01:12:000 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed

Same as before, same pattern in ( 1 )
01:44:000 (2) - 1 grid left Fixed
01:44:470 (3) - Change to x:360 y:136 Fixed
01:45:412 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed
01:45:882 (3) - Change to x:152 y:136 Fixed
01:46:353 (1) - Change to x:96 y:224 Fixed
01:47:294 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed
01:47:765 (3) - 1 grid down Fixed
01:48:235 (4) - 1 grid left Fixed

02:08:470 (3) - Same reason as ( 2 ), change to x:376 y:144 Fixed

02:16:000 (4) - 1 grid down Fixed
02:24:941 (5) - ^ Fixed

For some of simetry and spacing you can do this:
02:49:882 (3) - Slider point 1 x:400 y:160; Silder point 2 x:424 y: 208 Fixed
02:50:823 (4) - Change to x:296 y:280 Fixed
If you do:
02:51:764 (1) - 1 grid down Fixed

That's all~
Thank You :3


Xin-Kun wrote:

[Krovatka]

00:39:529 (1) - 1 grid left
01:32:705 (1) - Review the distance Fixed
02:56:470 (2) - unsymmetrical patters
thx)

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

[Krovatka]
00:17:411 (1) - right 1 grid? x:240 y:192 Fixed
00:37:176 (4) - a bit far from the previous circle, try to move it close a bit??
00:42:823 (7,1) - i suggest move both of this note to other grid is better.
01:50:588 (1,2) - ^
02:16:470 (1) - the last slider point move to grid x152 y:164 ? Fixed
02:58:823 (5) - too much repeating on this slider. try to make it like this? >> http://puu.sh/Kl9V Fixed
Thanks :3

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Done
--= http://puu.sh/KpkG =--
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
I'll mod this because I like the song, but you posted the mod request when my modding queue was in not finished. Don't worry, you won't get blacklisted, next time be sure to read the rules.
[Krovatka]
00:25:882 (2) - Move the fourth grid one grid to the left and the slider will be simetric.
01:33:647 (2) - Move the fourth grid one grid to the right and the slider will be simetric.
01:40:235 (1) - looks better like this:
SPOILER
01:42:117 (3) - ^ just flip it horizontally..
02:22:588 (4) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER
02:40:000 (1) - It looks strange..

ShikShik
00:35:058 (1) - Remove New combo
01:02:823 (1) - ^
01:56:705 (1) - ^
01:57:176 (1) - ^
02:11:294 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Repiting the same thing looks ugly...
02:15:059 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
03:04:235 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
03:07:764 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
thank you
Lizellota
467 posts
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Lizellota
ох,вальирую с вас
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-

KersiTyan wrote:

ох,вальирую с вас
Thank you.baby :3
Lizellota
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Lizellota
ZLOdeuka хочет w rote
:3
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

KersiTyan wrote:

ZLOdeuka хочет w rote
:3
^^ yea I want you to write me.
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
АНАНАНАНА LOOOOOOOOL
ты сделала мой день, ты охуенна вместе с бакари AHAHAH
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oh hi there


[General]
* If you have only Normal and Insane only, the diff spread looks unbalanced. Consider to add the Hard diff to make diff spread balanced
* Your diff name makes confuse people. Please replace with difficult name in your diff name


[Krovatka]
00:41:882 (6,7,1) - These stacks are quite not beginner-friendly. Try something else?
00:50:823 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:58:823 (1) - Stack at head slider makes confuse the beginners
01:09:176 (6) - ^
01:31:294 (4) - Why finish at end slider?
01:44:941 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:48:706 (5,1,2,2) - Same issue as 00:41:882 (6,7,1)
02:13:176 (6) - Same issue as 00:58:823 (1)
02:58:823 (5) - New combo?
03:03:058 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. Makes hidden for beginners


[ShikShik]
00:50:352 (1) - 0,5x slider after streams makes players are confusing. Please change it something else?
01:42:352 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
01:58:588 (5,1) - Swap new combo


Well, this map needs an improvement before consider to bubble it. Sorry
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Leorda, thank you, Fixed
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
A few things I'm pointing out now:

[Hard]
  1. This difficulty is closer to an Insane than a Hard diff. Normal>Insane is not a good enough difficulty spread; please have an actual Hard difficulty mapped.
  2. The map is full of seemingly random symmetrical jumps. There is no sense of any distance spacing at all.
  3. 00:50:823 - 2.00x slider velocity is unjustified and is unreasonable.
  4. 02:24:941 - Please explain to me why you think these storyboarded images are appropriate.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

those wrote:

A few things I'm pointing out now:

[Hard]
  1. This difficulty is closer to an Insane than a Hard diff. Normal>Insane is not a good enough difficulty spread; please have an actual Hard difficulty mapped.
  2. The map is full of seemingly random symmetrical jumps. There is no sense of any distance spacing at all.
  3. 00:50:823 - 2.00x slider velocity is unjustified and is unreasonable.
  4. 02:24:941 - Please explain to me why you think these storyboarded images are appropriate.
fixed. and mems SB delete. do Hard
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
m4m Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

All

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [FoxShift's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:823, ends on 01:05:764
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:882, ends on 01:20:941
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:54:823, ends on 02:09:764
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:09:882, ends on 02:24:823
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:24:941, ends on 02:25:058
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:02:588, ends on 03:17:529
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:17:647, ends on 03:17:764

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:823, ends on 01:05:764
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:882, ends on 01:20:941
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:54:823, ends on 02:09:764
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:09:882, ends on 02:24:823
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:24:941, ends on 02:25:058
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:02:588, ends on 03:17:529
Kiai #7: Starts on 03:17:647, ends on 03:17:764

- [tiper's Hard] : ←
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:823, ends on 01:21:058
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:54:823, ends on 02:24:941
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:02:588, ends on 03:17:529
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:17:647, ends on 03:17:764

Tags
Consider adding "tiper" to all of your tags
Russian FoxShift tiper


[tiper's Hard]

Spinner New Combo
03:03:058 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:17:411 (1) - Remove node #4.
00:18:352 (2) - Remove node #4.
00:38:352 (6) - Move node #4 to {x:424 y:184}, remove node #5.
00:52:470 (4) - Add NC. Move node #2 to {x:100 y:200}, remove node #3.
00:53:176 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:100 y:120}, remove node #3.
00:54:117 (6) - Move node #2 to {x:100 y:276}, remove node #3.
00:56:234 (3) - Add NC.
00:56:940 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:328 y:20}, remove node #3.
00:57:882 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:172 y:20}, remove node #3.
00:59:999 (3) - Add NC.
01:00:000 (1) - Add NC
01:00:705 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:428 y:264}, remove node #3.
01:01:647 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:428 y:108}, remove node #3.
01:05:882 (1) - Add a finish.
01:07:529 (4) - add NC.
01:11:294 (3) - Add NC.
01:15:058 (1) - Add NC.
01:15:059 (3) - Add NC.
01:45:411 (1) - Move node #4 to {x:256 y:188}, remove node #5.
01:47:058 (3) - Add NC.
01:54:823 (1) - Add a finish.
01:56:470 (4) - Add NC.
02:00:235 (3) - Add NC.
02:04:000 (3) - Add NC.
02:09:882 (1) - Add a finish.
02:11:529 (4) - Add NC.
02:15:294 (3) - Add NC.
02:19:059 (3) - add NC.
02:23:294 (1) - Add a finish.
02:40:000 (3) - Add a finish.
02:48:000 (2) - Move node #4 to {x:420 y:164}, move node #5 to {x:376 y:172}.
02:48:941 (3) - Add NC.
02:52:705 (3) - Add NC.
02:56:470 (5) - Add NC.
03:02:588 - Add a circle at {x:312 y:76}, with a NC.
03:04:235 (4) - Add NC.
03:08:000 (3) - Add NC.
03:11:765 (3) - Add NC.
03:16:000 (1) - Add a finish.

:3
tiper
tiper
some irc mod from Bakari which will be check later
15:03 -Bakari-: : 00:39:294 (1) -
15:04 -Bakari-: : продли
15:04 -Bakari-: : или дет брейк
15:04 -Bakari-: : делит
15:04 -Bakari-: : Никого не убъет
15:04 -Bakari-: : 00:50:185 - спиннер
15:05 -Bakari-: : 01:48:941 (6,1,2,3) - стак
15:06 -Bakari-: : 02:59:764 (1) - клэп
15:06 tiper: : закинешь потом в тред, я чуть после посмотрю
15:06 tiper: : только проснулся
15:06 -Bakari-: : сэйвлогни, а? сам потом кинешь.
15:07 tiper: : ну ок
15:07 -Bakari-: : и пока вроде все.
15:08 -Bakari-: : Оверлапы я не выделяю, они не такие уж олололоадовые.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
thank you eLtigreXXx. fixed
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
привет)
песня конечно.. .... ...
но сложности неплохие да и SB здоровская :3

General
поставь оффсет где-нибудь 7529раз у тебя карта начинается не с самого начала
и респар нотес

Hard
00:39:294 (1) - зачем?
00:50:823 (1) - по-моему можно и не ускорять припев

в остальном меня всё устраивает на самом деле, хоть я и не могла нормально моддить потому что не любитель такой музыки
в общем звёдчока так-то :3
tiper
tiper
eLtigreXXx and -Bakari- mode added
Nagisawa, no changes, but thx. Waiting for ZLOdeuka`s respond about offset
tiper`s Hard
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Serebro - mama Luba.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50823
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73882
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mama Luba
Artist:Serebro
Creator:ZLOdeuka
Version:tiper's Hard
Source:
Tags:Russian FoxShift tiper

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,81141,87420
2,128200,128832
2,160200,166479
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo1 : 251,0,125
Combo2 : 220,185,126
Combo3 : 0,0,117
Combo4 : 245,168,116

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ZLOdeuka-
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Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Nagisawa wrote:

привет)
песня конечно.. .... ...
но сложности неплохие да и SB здоровская :3

General
поставь оффсет где-нибудь 7529раз у тебя карта начинается не с самого начала
и респар нотес

Hard
00:39:294 (1) - зачем?
00:50:823 (1) - по-моему можно и не ускорять припев

в остальном меня всё устраивает на самом деле, хоть я и не могла нормально моддить потому что не любитель такой музыки
в общем звёдчока так-то :3
как приятно получать русский мод )
спасибо Nagisawa. оффсет главное что правильный. пусть будет так :) а тебе кудосу
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi from queue M4M

[Hard]
00:45:647 - You could add a circle here and move the timing section from 00:45:294 - to 00:45:764 -
00:48:470 - You could add a circle here, too.

And in my opinion, this part is too repetitive >_<
http://puu.sh/LF3H
The 1st blue slider (in this case), I'm not sure if it should be a circle, sounds better to me, but try different combinations, like this http://puu.sh/LF7i and more x3

02:25:529 - You could try this http://puu.sh/LFyW
02:32:470 - And this http://puu.sh/LFpV
02:48:941 - 02:52:705 - 02:56:470 - And in this parts http://puu.sh/LFC2
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