1. Sadistic Insane (4,6 stars, 409 notes)
2. Sister Advanced Collab (3,61 stars, 262 notes)
3. Smiling Easy (1,31 stars, 84 notes)
4. Surprise (5,26 stars, 440 notes)
5. Sweet Normal (1,92 stars, 132 notes)

Meouxe- wrote:

Genegal
Remove the tick near Widescreen Support done except in sweet collab because of storyboard

Smile
00:36:151 (2,4) - Stockings done
00:50:361 (5) - - Sweep it slightly to the left

Try it like this

done
00:51:940 (1) - copy this slider and put 00:52:730 (2) - instead - and make a reverse from it

So

done
01:02:993 (2) - Level it like 01:02:203 (1) fixed
01:04:967 (2,3) - do a little more spacing fixed
01:07:335 (1) - Overlap fixed

Sister
00:01:809 (2,3) - Speaking wtf google translate is crazy, but if you mean spacing, its done
00:03:388 (4,6) - Stockings done
00:14:835 (2) - Do it the same way 00:14:046 (1) fix
00:24:309 (3) - Stocks from 00:22:730 (2) fix
00:27:467 (4) - NC fix
00:30:624 (7,8) - Speaking if you mean spacing, its done
00:35:361 (1,2) - Move slightly upwards fix
00:39:309 (2,3) - Speaking if you mean spacing, its done
00:57:467 (3) - NC fix
01:03:782 (5,1) - Just do more spacing done
01:15:230 (3,4) - Slightly less spacing done
01:25:098 (3) - Do it like that 01:24:309 (2) fix

Sweet Collab
00:11:677 (1,2,3,4) - Pick them up a little bit so that 00:12:072 (2) - stuck with с 00:11:480 (3) i think i understand, and fixed
00:11:480 (3) - more spacing fixed
00:18:782 (2) - Round done
00:21:151 (1) - NC? and here 00:22:730 (2) - no? oops, fixed
00:47:993 (1) - Overlap fixed
00:58:256 (1,2,3) - Better reflect it

So

nice idea
01:02:796 (5,7) - Stack them up fixed

ALL
You have problems with spacing all over and over with NC I'm not very good at spacing, but the NC's was accidental lol

From myself: I'm sorry that I wrote a mod in Russian (I do not know how else: D)
I wish you good luck with your card;) Thanks ♥

Underforest wrote:

nice way to hide credits~

proof

your map vs my map

reencoding stolen files != being yours
if you're gonna take my mp3, video or stuff from my mapset, please credit me in description and rather revert the comment removal in mp3 details
i don't think it's a coincidence because my mp3 and video were encoded by myself from anime's ep1 raw so yeah

Underforest wrote:

nice way to hide credits~

proof

your map vs my map

reencoding stolen files != being yours
if you're gonna take my mp3, video or stuff from my mapset, please credit me in description and rather revert the comment removal in mp3 details
i don't think it's a coincidence because my mp3 and video were encoded by myself from anime's ep1 raw so yeah

1. Change OD to 5.
2. Change SV to 1.4 can not be changed sv in taiko by the effect of bpm according to the ranking criteria.
3. At least should have 2 diff in taiko (muzu and oni) according to the rules.

1. Should add word name "taiko" since is unranke.. maybe "Taiko Service" with name gd ye.
2. 00:00:625 - to 00:04:769 - is so dense and rare to start like this, you should simplify following some vowel 1/2 so I suggest changing patterns.
3. 00:11:677 (17,18) - you could add finish to emphasize that part.
4. 00:13:651 - add note to complement 1/1 this makes following the game of notes and improve the interface according to the background rhythm fits well
5. 00:16:019 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - these notes do not match since you follow the trumpet, so you should change that. maybe like: 00:16:414 (32,36) - add finish and 00:16:611 (33,37) - remove, also add note in 00:16:019 - to reference next 3 notes same better to break here imo.
6. 00:18:190 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - same, this note 00:18:289 (41,42,44,45) - should remove no sound here and better follow trumpet.
7. 00:31:414 (91) - add finish sound is strong there, better for this diff tbh
8. 00:33:585 - add note sound here and 00:33:782 - same considering that you follow the vowel, it fits very well.
9. 00:42:072 (139,140) - add finish?
10. 00:57:269 (204) - change to kat sound vocal is high here.
11. 01:26:282 (335,336) - make control + g, sound high in 01:26:677 (336) - vocal similar that 01:27:072 (337) - since note low is this 01:26:282 (335) - so i suggest control + g .

Etsu wrote:

hi there, mod from #modreqs, just i mod taiko and mania so in this case taiko.

[General]

1. Change OD to 5. ok
2. Change SV to 1.4 can not be changed sv in taiko by the effect of bpm according to the ranking criteria. i didnt know that, thanks
3. At least should have 2 diff in taiko (muzu and oni) according to the rules.

[Pixel's Service]

1. Should add word name "taiko" since is unranke.. maybe "Taiko Service" with name gd ye.I will change later when i make the new diff
2. 00:00:625 - to 00:04:769 - is so dense and rare to start like this, you should simplify following some vowel 1/2 so I suggest changing patterns.i try follow all the instrumental but i really dont like the way it was
3. 00:11:677 (17,18) - you could add finish to emphasize that part.okay
4. 00:13:651 - add note to complement 1/1 this makes following the game of notes and improve the interface according to the background rhythm fits welli add an katsu sound good for me
5. 00:16:019 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - these notes do not match since you follow the trumpet, so you should change that. maybe like: 00:16:414 (32,36) - add finish and 00:16:611 (33,37) - remove, also add note in 00:16:019 - to reference next 3 notes same better to break here imo.i remove all you asked but the note in 00:16:019 sound strange for me,but without its stranger
6. 00:18:190 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - same, this note 00:18:289 (41,42,44,45) - should remove no sound here and better follow trumpet.okay
7. 00:31:414 (91) - add finish sound is strong there, better for this diff tbhdone, nice suggestion
8. 00:33:585 - add note sound here and 00:33:782 - same considering that you follow the vowel, it fits very well.done
9. 00:42:072 (139,140) - add finish?okay
10. 00:57:269 (204) - change to kat sound vocal is high here.okay
11. 01:26:282 (335,336) - make control + g, sound high in 01:26:677 (336) - vocal similar that 01:27:072 (337) - since note low is this 01:26:282 (335) - so i suggest control + g i think i did it right lol

In general the map still needs to be more adjusted and more consistency since some parts were somewhat random should consider more about the structure and especially the break so make more selfmod, gl

• 1. 00:04:572 (6) - New combo

• 2. 00:18:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Plays weird with the music, two circles and two reverse sliders fit better with the song
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• 3. 00:20:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Up the volume a bit

• 4. Same here 00:21:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and here 00:23:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

• 5. 00:30:822 - Fill this empty space with something, e.g. 1 circle and reverse slider
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• 6. 00:32:006 (5,6,1,2) - Spacing here is confusing, you should bring 5 and 1 closer together or make a new combo and make those 4 circles into a stream

• 7. 00:32:302 (2,3) - Make the spacing here the same as between 00:32:203 (1,2)

• 8. 01:06:940 - Reverse slider fits the rhythym better and doesn't leave void space. Same here 01:08:519
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Pan Jezus wrote:

Mod from #modreq
Sadistic diff

• 1. 00:04:572 (6) - New combofixed

• 2. 00:18:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Plays weird with the music, two circles and two reverse sliders fit better with the song
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  nice idea

• 3. 00:20:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Up the volume a bitfixed

• 4. Same here 00:21:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and here 00:23:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fixed too

• 5. 00:30:822 - Fill this empty space with something, e.g. 1 circle and reverse slider
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  i havent noticed that empty space, but fixed

• 6. 00:32:006 (5,6,1,2) - Spacing here is confusing, you should bring 5 and 1 closer together or make a new combo and make those 4 circles into a streamthe song have a sudden change, so i was thinking a sudden spacing change would be better to the flow of the map, put i've created a stream and it sounds good

• 7. 00:32:302 (2,3) - Make the spacing here the same as between 00:32:203 (1,2) i dont think ive dont this right but i've reduced the spacing

• 8. 01:06:940 - Reverse slider fits the rhythym better and doesn't leave void space. Same here 01:08:519
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  done, and ive transformed the doubles 01:09:210 (2,3) - into triples, and its nice

lilscribby wrote:

Ok, take my advice with a grain of salt because this is my first time, but:

00:17:993 (1) - I would consider taking this out and replacing it with three circles on beats 1, 2, and 3 so that you can have a bigger emphasis on when the main melody starts. It seemed sort of anticlimatic. i think this wont be possible because its a normal difficulty, and i have to map it in 1/2 divisor, these three beats are on 1/4 divisor

00:52:730 (3,4,5,6) - could you make these the same distance apart? I think 3 and 4 are closer together than the others. Just a minor thing fixed

01:16:414 (1,3) - If these are going to be sliders, you could probably make them fit more with the syncopated melody by making them 1/16 shorter, so it follows the vocals. That'll make it fit the song better. i've synchronized them, but in 1/4 i think this is not rankable, if it's not, i will undo this

01:27:467 (1) - This slider is a little short, especially for a newbie. Maybe make it a slider with a reverse? i've increased the spinner time,so i think it fits well now

I know it's an energetic song, but in my opinion, there's a bit too much Kiai time. Maybe take out the chunk at the end? the end kiai chunk is supposed to be synchronized with the video background, so it's fine.

Other than that, looks great by me! Good luck on your mapping :) thanks ♥

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

Wow, this map is good. :0

RShields wrote:

Chatlogs, as requested

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2017-10-20 12:06 RShields: I played the hardest diff and the song does not support a technical map
2017-10-20 12:06 Nekoraw: this song is supposed to be a technical map, because its supposed to be 304bpm
2017-10-20 12:07 RShields: Also if you select a sliderend and select it again (it should be a different color from the slider head) you can set the hitsound of the tail
2017-10-20 12:07 Nekoraw: hmmmmmm
2017-10-20 12:07 Nekoraw: are you checking surprise diff, right?
2017-10-20 12:07 RShields: yes
2017-10-20 12:08 Nekoraw: -Miyashiro- hitsounded his diff, i will say this to him
2017-10-20 12:08 Nekoraw: thanks for the tip
2017-10-20 12:09 RShields: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437343 Blend A - Bon Appetit S [Sadistic]]
2017-10-20 12:09 RShields: These hitsounds should be louder
2017-10-20 12:09 Nekoraw: louder? hmmm
2017-10-20 12:09 Nekoraw: i will take a look
2017-10-20 12:09 Nekoraw: yeah, you're right
2017-10-20 12:10 Nekoraw: its only 60% and 70% on kiai
2017-10-20 12:10 RShields: I use Relax as a rule of thumb. If I can't feel the notes with Relax, the hitsounds are too quiet
2017-10-20 12:10 Nekoraw: i will increase to 70% and 80%
2017-10-20 12:10 Nekoraw: thanks again
2017-10-20 12:11 RShields: Also why are 01:18:782 (1,2) - so slow?
2017-10-20 12:12 Nekoraw: its because the vocal is lower on that part, i think its fine
2017-10-20 12:13 Nekoraw: btw i've got some difficulties on this part
2017-10-20 12:13 Nekoraw: but i tried to get better
2017-10-20 12:14 RShields: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437340 Blend A - Bon Appetit S [Sweet Collab]]
2017-10-20 12:15 RShields: 01:00:624 (1) - Kiai section starting here, consider mapping on the beats more instead of purely to the vocals
2017-10-20 12:15 RShields: It creates a more pleasant rhythm
2017-10-20 12:17 RShields: 01:27:467 (1) - Consider a circle here. It lands on a strong drum beat on a white tick
2017-10-20 12:18 Nekoraw: three circles here instead of a slider?
2017-10-20 12:18 RShields: where?
2017-10-20 12:19 Nekoraw: 01:27:664 (1) -
2017-10-20 12:19 Nekoraw: or maybe not?
2017-10-20 12:19 Nekoraw: becaus its the last note of the song
2017-10-20 12:19 RShields: No, add a circle at the indicated time
2017-10-20 12:19 RShields: It's the white tick before the slider
2017-10-20 12:20 Nekoraw: oh okay
2017-10-20 12:20 RShields: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437344 Blend A - Bon Appetit S [Sister]]
2017-10-20 12:20 Nekoraw: 01:27:467 right?
2017-10-20 12:20 RShields: You need DS (distance snapping)
2017-10-20 12:20 RShields: Yeah, taht's the time
2017-10-20 12:20 Nekoraw: i will put a circle here
2017-10-20 12:20 Nekoraw: hmmmmm
2017-10-20 12:21 RShields: Basically you need to remap all of it with DS on
2017-10-20 12:21 Nekoraw: oh okay
2017-10-20 12:22 Nekoraw: i think i did the same thing with smile diff
2017-10-20 12:22 RShields: 00:43:059 (1) - You probably can't get away with this rhythm. Instead, make a slider from the white tick that ends on that note
2017-10-20 12:23 RShields: Also try not to stack if possible. Normal and Easy are generally palyed by players who may have trouble reading even minor overlaps, let alone stacks
2017-10-20 12:24 RShields: You may want to tone down SV on the Smile diff, as extremely new players have a hard time reading sliders
2017-10-20 12:28 Nekoraw: i think i havent changed the slider velocity on smile diff
2017-10-20 12:28 Nekoraw: yeah i didnt
2017-10-20 12:28 Nekoraw: https://puu.sh/y2XvU/d648f3fedd.png
2017-10-20 12:28 RShields: Yeah, you need it to be slower across the board
2017-10-20 12:28 Nekoraw: slower than 1x?
2017-10-20 12:28 RShields: At that BPM, yeah
2017-10-20 12:30 RShields: Go into Timing and chagne SV to 1.0 or maybe even 0.8
2017-10-20 12:30 Nekoraw: yeah i did
2017-10-20 12:30 Nekoraw: but i havent noticed anything different
2017-10-20 12:30 RShields: As in, the bar with "compose design timing song setup"
2017-10-20 12:30 Nekoraw: i think 1
2017-10-20 12:30 Nekoraw: 1.0 is fine
2017-10-20 12:31 RShields: It says 1.4
2017-10-20 12:31 RShields: You're looking in the wrong palce
2017-10-20 12:31 Nekoraw: i fixed
2017-10-20 12:31 Nekoraw: https://puu.sh/y2XDd/0da660b333.png
2017-10-20 12:31 Nekoraw: but i havent noticed anything different
2017-10-20 12:31 Nekoraw: or even unsnapped sliders
2017-10-20 12:31 RShields: Right, Uhh, save the map and reopen it
2017-10-20 12:32 Nekoraw: same thing
2017-10-20 12:32 Nekoraw: ill update the map and try
2017-10-20 12:32 RShields: The sliders get a lot shorter
2017-10-20 12:34 Nekoraw: yeah
2017-10-20 12:34 Nekoraw: i noticed
2017-10-20 12:34 Nekoraw: https://puu.sh/y2XJl/528944a409.png
2017-10-20 12:34 Nekoraw: that slider point
2017-10-20 12:34 Nekoraw: out of the slider
2017-10-20 12:35 Nekoraw: i think its fine now
2017-10-20 12:35 Nekoraw: thanks
2017-10-20 12:35 RShields: Best of luck to you, mate
2017-10-20 12:35 RShields: cya around
2017-10-20 12:35 Nekoraw: cya
2017-10-20 12:35 Nekoraw: remember to post on forum to give you a kudosu
2017-10-20 12:36 Nekoraw: you really helped me
2017-10-20 12:36 RShields: Aight

RShields wrote:

So, some sliders seemed to have hitsounds on their ends when they shouldn't and some should have different hitsounds on heads vs ends.

For example, 00:08:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sounds like a machine gun when it really shouldn't.