1. Easy (1.93 stars, 111 notes)
2. Insane (4.5 stars, 901 notes)

1. 00:17:683 (6,1,2,3) - I don't think this looks good. Just move something a bit.
2. 00:27:016 (5,6) - ?? Rework this!! XD
3. 00:26:683 (3,5) - Hmm, again imo these overlaps are not lookin good.
4. 00:27:516 (2,1) - Maybe directly overlap these, or just larger spacing between them.
5. 00:28:850 (4,6) - and 00:28:683 (3,5) - they are too close to the other circle, move them a little bit farther.
6. 00:35:850 (2,5) - hmmm..
7. 00:46:850 (3,5) - Just a little bit farther.
8. 00:51:016 - Is a strong sound, you have to emphasize it, 00:50:683 (1,2) - imo replace this with two 1/2 sliders!
9. 01:12:350 (9,2) - HMM
10. 01:35:350 (5,8) - ^
11. 02:10:850 (4,1) - Larger spacing, or directly overlap.
12. 03:03:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would slowly increase the spacing here, but since you've done these overlaps, some sounds are emphasized without larger spacing. But you can increase a bit this jump: 03:04:183 (6,7) - , and then here 03:04:350 (7,8) - to finish off the pattern. Try something cool!
13. 03:10:683 (3,4,5,6) - hmm
14. 03:14:850 (4) - I would put this somewhere at the bottom of the playfield ( https://puu.sh/xXMwr/d2e82f9659.jpg ), so then I have free space to increase spacing on this: 03:14:850 (4,1) -

1. Ok since this is an easy diff, you have to use the same spacing, because beginner players don't really know how to play, and the easy diffs are meant to teach them the basics of osu. Start with rearranging everything with distance snap enabled! I think 1.0x is ok.
2. 00:16:016 (4,1) - It's an easy. Don't map hard things. (Yes this is very hard for beginners!)
3. 00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - Too many overlaps! You have to make it clear, so everyone can read it! (Don't worry, distance snap will help u with these XD)
4. So it's not really finished, so I don't know. Good luck, don't give up!

Lorkee wrote:

Hey m4m

Insane

1. 00:17:683 (6,1,2,3) - I don't think this looks good. Just move something a bit.fix!
2. 00:27:016 (5,6) - ?? Rework this!! XD
3. 00:26:683 (3,5) - Hmm, again imo these overlaps are not lookin good.fixed
4. 00:27:516 (2,1) - Maybe directly overlap these, or just larger spacing between them.
5. 00:28:850 (4,6) - and 00:28:683 (3,5) - they are too close to the other circle, move them a little bit farther.
6. 00:35:850 (2,5) - hmmm..I know! fix
7. 00:46:850 (3,5) - Just a little bit farther.^
8. 00:51:016 - Is a strong sound, you have to emphasize it, 00:50:683 (1,2) - imo replace this with two 1/2 sliders!
9. 01:12:350 (9,2) - HMM
10. 01:35:350 (5,8) - ^
11. 02:10:850 (4,1) - Larger spacing, or directly overlap.
12. 03:03:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would slowly increase the spacing here, but since you've done these overlaps, some sounds are emphasized without larger spacing. But you can increase a bit this jump: 03:04:183 (6,7) - , and then here 03:04:350 (7,8) - to finish off the pattern. Try something cool!
13. 03:10:683 (3,4,5,6) - hmm
14. 03:14:850 (4) - I would put this somewhere at the bottom of the playfield ( https://puu.sh/xXMwr/d2e82f9659.jpg ), so then I have free space to increase spacing on this: 03:14:850 (4,1) -

Easy

1. Ok since this is an easy diff, you have to use the same spacing, because beginner players don't really know how to play, and the easy diffs are meant to teach them the basics of osu. Start with rearranging everything with distance snap enabled! I think 1.0x is ok.
2. 00:16:016 (4,1) - It's an easy. Don't map hard things. (Yes this is very hard for beginners!)
3. 00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - Too many overlaps! You have to make it clear, so everyone can read it! (Don't worry, distance snap will help u with these XD)
4. So it's not really finished, so I don't know. Good luck, don't give up!

Catch me in game when you're done with the mapset, and maybe i'll look at it once more! Lookin' good!