12:10 iloveyou4ever: Hey,are you free to do irc mod >_< ?
12:10 iloveyou4ever: want some advices for consistency issue again/flow
12:11 Kazaze: Hey! Yes of course :3
12:11 iloveyou4ever: Thanks!!
12:11 iloveyou4ever: Let me submit the map first XD,just got supporter from my fds
12:11 Kazaze: oh c:
12:14 *iloveyou4ever is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1418603 Nanahira - Petals [Fragment]]
12:14 iloveyou4ever: Here it's
12:14 Kazaze: Another map with very long streams? :3
12:15 iloveyou4ever: short stream
12:15 iloveyou4ever: but with 1/6 burst
12:15 iloveyou4ever: (dddkkkkkkkd) 1/6 XD
12:15 iloveyou4ever: *dddkkkkkkd
12:16 Kazaze: Ok, I should be able to help a lot more than with your previous map I modded, where there was huuuuuge streams x)
12:17 iloveyou4ever: but this song is a bit faster than last song
12:17 iloveyou4ever: 192bpm
12:17 Kazaze: Change 00:03:582 (15) - to a d since it's lower pitched than the previous note and would emphasize 00:04:051 (16) -
12:18 Kazaze: it's fine :3
12:18 iloveyou4ever: hmm I think 00:03:113 (14,15,16) - have similar pitches
12:19 iloveyou4ever: tried changing it to d but sound a bit weird imo
12:20 Kazaze: 00:02:801 (12,13,14,15,16) - are all k and it could bring some variation though
12:20 Kazaze: changing 00:02:801 (12) - to a d could work too
12:21 iloveyou4ever: yeah you're right
12:21 iloveyou4ever: changed!
12:21 Kazaze: don't forget to change 00:07:801 (34) - too :3
12:23 Kazaze: I feel like something is missing on 00:25:301 - ; I would recommand moving 00:24:988 (83) - to 00:25:301 -
12:24 iloveyou4ever: changed 00:07:801 - too
12:25 iloveyou4ever: I map to piano sound here but I don't think 00:25:301 - is so obvious
12:25 Kazaze: A 5 note 1/2 piano "melody" clearly begins on 00:25:145 - so it would emphasize that
12:25 Kazaze: 00:25:301 - sounds just as loud to me as 00:25:145 (84) -
12:27 iloveyou4ever: hmm I have to think about that..
12:27 iloveyou4ever: I'll leave it first currently
12:27 Kazaze: Ok
12:31 Kazaze: what are you following here exactly? 03:09:051 (294,295,296) - I don't feel like it fits anything really
12:32 iloveyou4ever: following drum+piano
12:33 iloveyou4ever: I feel strange when I follow only one of the elements,so I follow both
12:33 Kazaze: Oh I see now ok
12:33 iloveyou4ever: the part sucks in your opinion?
12:33 iloveyou4ever: or unclear
12:33 iloveyou4ever: if yes,please tell me o.o
12:33 Kazaze: I was only focusing on the drums here and didn't understand why it was that way
12:34 Kazaze: lol i don't know I would personally focus on the drums here, so 03:09:051 (294) - change to d and remove 03:09:363 (296) -
12:35 Kazaze: felt pretty weird when I first saw this part, but maybe it's just maybe
12:35 Kazaze: me*
12:35 iloveyou4ever: but I feel strange if 03:09:363 - has space
12:35 iloveyou4ever: that'll leave a 3/2 space there
12:36 iloveyou4ever: but the music is progressing
12:36 iloveyou4ever: leaving a space doesn't fit the music imo
12:36 Kazaze: yeah it's pretty weird
12:37 Kazaze: just change 03:09:051 (294) - to a d then so it highlights the drums better
12:37 iloveyou4ever: I'll ask for others' opinion about this part cuz I am a little bit confused
12:37 iloveyou4ever: too
12:37 Kazaze: ok x)
12:37 iloveyou4ever: hmm would it be better to change 03:09:676 - to d instead?
12:37 iloveyou4ever: a bit bored 03:08:426 (291,292,293,294,295,296) - dkd dkd
12:38 Kazaze: that's a good compromise
12:39 iloveyou4ever: ok then I'll change in that way!
12:40 Kazaze: ok! keep an eye on that part, maybe it can be even more improved
12:40 iloveyou4ever: yeah
12:42 iloveyou4ever: I removed 05:16:316 - this and changed 05:16:395 (590,591,592,593) - to ddkk btw
12:42 iloveyou4ever: also 05:13:582 (572,573,574,575,576) - to ddkkk for consistency
12:43 Kazaze: any reasons why 04:04:520 (2,3,4,5) - is k d k d and 04:09:520 (11,12,13,14) - is k k k d? these parts sound the same to me
12:44 iloveyou4ever: oh my mistake...
12:44 iloveyou4ever: it should be d k k k d fot both parts
12:44 iloveyou4ever: changed
12:44 Kazaze: 05:15:145 (582) - change to a k also?
12:44 Kazaze: I think it would just follow the piano pitch a bit better
12:45 iloveyou4ever: hmm keep to remain consistency for 00:21:395 -
12:45 Kazaze: or you could change on both :b
12:46 iloveyou4ever: keeping d here can emphasize outstanding high-pitched piano for 00:21:551 (63,67) -
12:47 Kazaze: both options work fine, no need for a change then :p
12:48 iloveyou4ever: oh wait
12:48 iloveyou4ever: changed a little bit
12:49 Kazaze: oh
12:49 iloveyou4ever: changed 05:20:145 - to k
12:49 Kazaze: works nicely
12:50 iloveyou4ever: 05:21:238 (617,618) - also invert these
12:50 iloveyou4ever: keep consistency again
12:50 Kazaze: nice nice
12:51 Kazaze: I'm afraid that's all I have to suggest
12:51 iloveyou4ever: nothing about the stream or other issues?
12:52 iloveyou4ever: not pushing you XD
12:53 Kazaze: I didn't really check the streams in details but looks fine to me, the kiai time follow a structure
12:53 Kazaze: Looks fine to me :3
12:54 Kazaze: I would probably only have minor suggestions for the streams if I really looked into it but I'm not sure if it is necessary at all :b
12:54 iloveyou4ever: working on minor stuffs is enough :D
12:55 iloveyou4ever: I'll leave the stream to skilled players
12:55 Kazaze: yeah xD
12:55 Kazaze: hope I helped anyway :>