Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

Asaka - Edelweiss [Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
10
vrnl
743 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vrnl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 23, 2017 at 01:01:42 PM

Artist: Asaka
Title: Edelweiss
Source: セントールの悩み
Tags: centaur no nayami ed ending theme tv size yassu- yuzu__rinrin
BPM: 164
Filesize: 2273kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (4.03 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Muzukashii (2.5 stars, 274 notes)
  3. Oni (3.62 stars, 445 notes)
  4. yassu-'s Futsuu (2.12 stars, 174 notes)
  5. yzrin's Kantan (1.47 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Asaka - Edelweiss
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Last edited by vrnl , edited 10 times in total.
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
yassu-
prease add tag "centaur no nayami ed ending theme tv size yassu- yuzu__rinrin"

yassu-'s Futsuu
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53575
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41501,53940
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Edelweiss
TitleUnicode:Edelweiss
Artist:Asaka
ArtistUnicode:亜咲花
Creator:Astolfo
Version:yassu-'s Futsuu
Source:セントールの悩み
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:665840

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1258,365.853658536585,4,1,0,60,1,0
7111,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
11501,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
12416,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
53940,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
74428,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
80282,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
85953,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0


[HitObjects]
255,155,1258,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,163,2172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,163,2721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,149,4184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,4733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,5282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,143,5648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,155,7111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,163,8026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,163,8574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,149,10037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,143,10586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,143,11135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,11501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,12050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12965,1,4,0:0:0:0:
221,159,13697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,14428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,14794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,15160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,122,15892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,16440,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,16989,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,17538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,18087,1,6,0:0:0:0:
218,117,18818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,19550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,157,20282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,20648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,21014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,117,21745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,127,22477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,23209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,23575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,23940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,117,24672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,25404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,26136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,26501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,26867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,157,27233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,98,27599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,28148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,98,28331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,65,29062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,121,29611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,65,29794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,121,30526,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,160,30892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,31257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,31623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,152,31989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,134,32721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,148,33453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,148,33818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34916,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,35648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,121,36379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,95,37111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,152,37842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,38575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,38940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,148,39306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,40038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,40221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,40587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,150,42599,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,160,43331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,115,43697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,115,44062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,115,44428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,120,45160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,95,45526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,120,45892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,120,46257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,177,48453,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,160,49184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,132,49550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,132,49916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,132,50282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,48,52111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,48,52294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,52660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,52843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,53026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,57,53940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
300,158,54306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,96,54855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,55221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,55587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,151,55770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,56501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,56867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,103,58697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,121,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,121,59794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,121,60160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
274,121,60709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,155,61075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,155,61440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,68,61623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,160,62355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,150,62721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,63453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,150,64183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,64550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,64916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,65648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,139,66014,1,12,0:0:0:0:
177,169,66562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,169,66928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
245,100,67294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,100,67477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,68209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,173,68575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,173,68940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,173,69123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,173,69489,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,69672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,130,70404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,97,70770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,71136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,71318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,71867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,72416,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,72599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,113,72782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,113,73148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,113,73331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,74062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,113,74428,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,197,75160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,136,75892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,76257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,76623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,76989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,136,77355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,78087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79001,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,80282,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,80831,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,106,81379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,81745,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,82294,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,82843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,106,83209,1,12,0:0:0:0:
306,124,83757,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,148,84306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,84489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,148,84672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,108,85038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,108,85404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85953,12,8,87599,0:0:0:0:
vrnl
743 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vrnl
edit i fix problem w
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
[Kantan]
HP Drain is a little bit low, you can do like 7 I think. OD 4 please.
00:38:575 - Change to kat and delete 00:38:940 - ,I think that note is definitely unnecessary and probably this makes it easier for a newer player to understand the rhythm.
00:47:721 - Kind of unnecessary as well
01:14:428 (47) - I think this can be a D, there is a nice sound for it.
01:24:672 - Maybe add a slider that ends at 01:25:770 -

[Futsuu]
00:17:538 - I understand why you don't make it finisher, but it's really better if it is, listen to the guitar.
00:44:062 (78,79) - ctrl+g, I don't like how the kat sounds on the end there. There is clear snare sounds in the back.
00:47:172 - probably ddk, I don't think kkd is necessary. For some parts, you don't have to mix them up.
01:16:989 (12,13) - ctrl+g here too? I think it fits the vocals better.

[Muzukashii]
00:19:550 (54,61,68,76) - These all sound and play so bland without a kat, really.
00:36:014 - kat here, listen to the snares, ik what you're doing but trust me on this one
00:53:575 (152,171) - this beginning of a vocal shouldn't be a finisher at all man, this sounds awkward.
Theres a section here that sounds bad 01:01:623 - turn to kat, 01:01:989 - don 01:02:721 - kat, just try that out and see how you like it. anything is better than the weird blank space.
01:10:770 - change this to don and put a kat here 01:11:136 - to eliminate ugly empty space
01:14:428 - finisher?

[Oni]
HP 6
00:00:526 (1) - Delete this nephew
00:23:392 - too much dons so put a kat here man pls
00:25:404 - kat here to also give it a little more rhythm less dons
00:28:331 - end of a vocal thingy put kat pls (idk how to explain that better)
00:53:575 - 00:59:428 - I dont like the finisher AHHH explained above
01:05:739 - deleteos
01:14:337 - delete and make 01:14:428 - finsihehrhreh?

[Inner Oni]
HP 7
00:00:526 - MY FRIEND
00:23:392 - like oni
00:28:331 - ^
00:29:428 - don please, theres no kat sound here my boy...
00:53:575 - 00:59:428 - I dont like the finisher AHHH explained above
01:05:739 - deleteos
01:14:337 - delete and make 01:14:428 - finsihehrhreh?
sorry for getting lazy
vrnl
743 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vrnl
[Muzukashii]
00:19:550 (54,61,68,76) - These all sound and play so bland without a kat, really.
00:36:014 - kat here, listen to the snares, ik what you're doing but trust me on this one
00:53:575 (152,171) - this beginning of a vocal shouldn't be a finisher at all man, this sounds awkward.
Theres a section here that sounds bad 01:01:623 - turn to kat, 01:01:989 - don 01:02:721 - kat, just try that out and see how you like it. anything is better than the weird blank space.
01:10:770 - change this to don and put a kat here 01:11:136 - to eliminate ugly empty space
01:14:428 - finisher? fix all these

[Oni]
HP 6
00:00:526 (1) - Delete this nephew h
00:23:392 - too much dons so put a kat here man pls h
00:25:404 - kat here to also give it a little more rhythm less dons following drum sound
00:28:331 - end of a vocal thingy put kat pls (idk how to explain that better) ^
00:53:575 - 00:59:428 - I dont like the finisher AHHH explained above fixed on all dif
01:05:739 - deleteos this is OK theres a clear sound here
01:14:337 - delete and make 01:14:428 - finsihehrhreh? changed in my own way

[Inner Oni]
HP 7
00:00:526 - MY FRIEND deletos
00:23:392 - like oni h
00:28:331 - ^ D R U M
00:29:428 - don please, theres no kat sound here my boy... fixos
00:53:575 - 00:59:428 - I dont like the finisher AHHH explained above j
01:05:739 - deleteos this is Fine brother
01:14:337 - delete and make 01:14:428 - finsihehrhreh? i didnt deletos but i added finisher bbecasue inner oni u should be able to do that
sorry for getting lazy frick u

jk thanks for mod Brother
Last edited by vrnl , edited 1 time in total.
yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
Joined July 2014
yuzu__rinrin

Backfire wrote:

[Kantan]
HP Drain is a little bit low, you can do like 7 I think. OD 4 please.
00:38:575 - Change to kat and delete 00:38:940 - ,I think that note is definitely unnecessary and probably this makes it easier for a newer player to understand the rhythm.
00:47:721 - Kind of unnecessary as well
01:14:428 (47) - I think this can be a D, there is a nice sound for it.
01:24:672 - Maybe add a slider that ends at 01:25:770 -

you are right ~:3 all fixed.
Thanks Backfire~ :)

up
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53575
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Edelweiss
TitleUnicode:Edelweiss
Artist:Asaka
ArtistUnicode:亜咲花
Creator:Astolfo
Version:yzrin's Kantan
Source:セントールの悩み
Tags:centaur no nayami ed ending theme tv size yassu- yuzu__rinrin
BeatmapID:1409575
BeatmapSetID:665840

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1258,365.853658536585,4,1,0,60,1,0
7111,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
11501,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
12416,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
53940,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
74428,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
80282,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
85953,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0


[HitObjects]
256,192,1258,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,2721,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,7111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,10038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12965,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,15160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,15892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16440,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,16989,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18087,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,23209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30526,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,33453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39306,12,8,40587,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42599,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,48453,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53026,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,60526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61989,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66014,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72782,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73331,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74428,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79001,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80282,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,192,80831,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81745,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82294,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83757,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84672,2,0,L|-192:192,1,420
256,192,85953,12,0,87599,0:0:0:0:
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
yassu-

Backfire wrote:

[Futsuu]
00:17:538 - I understand why you don't make it finisher, but it's really better if it is, listen to the guitar. fixed
00:44:062 (78,79) - ctrl+g, I don't like how the kat sounds on the end there. There is clear snare sounds in the back. 00:51:014 (92,93,94,95) - swap pattern
00:47:172 - probably ddk, I don't think kkd is necessary. For some parts, you don't have to mix them up. i change kdk
01:16:989 (12,13) - ctrl+g here too? I think it fits the vocals better. fixed
thank you for modding :) :) :) :) :) :)

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53575
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41501,53940
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Edelweiss
TitleUnicode:Edelweiss
Artist:Asaka
ArtistUnicode:亜咲花
Creator:Astolfo
Version:yassu-'s Futsuu
Source:セントールの悩み
Tags:centaur no nayami ed ending theme tv size yassu- yuzu__rinrin
BeatmapID:1414809
BeatmapSetID:665840

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1258,365.853658536585,4,1,0,60,1,0
7111,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
11501,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
12416,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
53940,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
74428,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
80282,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
85953,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0


[HitObjects]
255,155,1258,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,163,2172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,163,2721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,149,4184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,4733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,5282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,143,5648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,155,7111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,163,8026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,163,8574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,149,10037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,143,10586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,143,11135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,143,11501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,12050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,103,12965,1,4,0:0:0:0:
221,159,13697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,14428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,14794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,15160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,122,15892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,16440,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,16989,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,122,17538,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,64,18087,1,6,0:0:0:0:
218,117,18818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,19550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,157,20282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,20648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,21014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,117,21745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,127,22477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,23209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,23575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,23940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,117,24672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,25404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,26136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,26501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,157,26867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,157,27233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,98,27599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,28148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,98,28331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,65,29062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,121,29611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,65,29794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,121,30526,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,160,30892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,31257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,31623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,152,31989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,134,32721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,148,33453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,148,33818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,34916,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,35648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,121,36379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,95,37111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,152,37842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,38575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,38940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,148,39306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,39672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,40038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,40221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,40587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,41684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,150,42599,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,160,43331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,115,43697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,115,44062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,115,44428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,120,45160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,95,45526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,120,45892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,120,46257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,100,47538,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,177,48453,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,160,49184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,132,49550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,132,49916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,132,50282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,132,51745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,48,52111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,48,52294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,52660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,52843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,53026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,57,53940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
300,158,54306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,96,54855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,55221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,128,55587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,151,55770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,56501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,56867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,103,57965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,103,58697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,121,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,121,59794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,121,60160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
274,121,60709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,155,61075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,155,61440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,68,61623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,160,62355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,150,62721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,63453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,150,64183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,64550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,139,64916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,65648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,139,66014,1,12,0:0:0:0:
177,169,66562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,169,66928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
245,100,67294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,100,67477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,68209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,173,68575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,173,68940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,173,69123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,173,69489,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,69672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,130,70404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,97,70770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,71136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,71318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,71867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,72416,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,72599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,113,72782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,113,73148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,113,73331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,74062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,113,74428,1,4,0:0:0:0:
281,197,75160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,136,75892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,76257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,76623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,136,76989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,77355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,77904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,136,78087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79001,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,106,79916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,80282,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,80831,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,106,81379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,106,81745,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,82294,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,106,82843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,106,83209,1,12,0:0:0:0:
306,124,83757,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,148,84306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,84489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,148,84672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,108,85038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,108,85404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85953,12,8,87599,0:0:0:0:
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
Hello there. M4M

[ Muzukashii]
  • 00:01:258 - ~ 00:12:965 -
  1. fine.


    00:12:965 - ~ 00:12:965 -
  2. This part doesn't need any breaks. You should add notes on 00:14:062 - 00:15:526 -.
  3. 00:16:257 (39,40,41,42) - I suggest that you use normal notes here, 39 and 41 are not strong enough to have finish in my opinion. Also try adding note on 00:17:538 - for consistency.


    00:18:818 - ~ 00:30:526 -
  4. fine.


    00:30:526 - ~ 00:42:233 -
  5. This part should have more notes and fewer breaks because previous part have much notes almost the same as that of this part.


    00:42:233 - ~ 00:53:940 -
  6. ^ This part also needs more notes.


    00:53:940 - ~ 01:14:428 -
  7. 00:53:940 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - 00:59:794 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) -
    It can be seen as random pattern. In latter part, I recommend that you make similar pattern to former.
  8. 01:06:014 (195) - can be finish. just suggestion


    01:14:428 - ~ 01:20:282 -
  9. I think that this part also overuses 2/1 breaks. I suggest that you add notes on 01:15:526 - and 01:16:989 -, and make some 1/2 patterns in addition. If you feel the pattern long, try removing 01:14:794 (225) -.


    01:20:282 - ~ 01:25:953 -
  10. fine.



[ Oni]
  1. 00:03:087 - I'm sure there needs a note.
  2. 00:18:087 (59) - Though I can understand why you made finish here, I recommend that you change it to Normal note. Big notes in 1/4 are very hard to hit (and poor looks) and can't be used in low difficulties.
  3. 00:27:050 (96) - should be moved 1/2 left for consistency.
  4. 00:30:038 (107,108) - I recommend that you remove those notes. No many people will notice the sound during playing.
Good luck on ranking. :D
vrnl
743 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vrnl

tasuke912 wrote:

mod
Hello there. M4M

[ Muzukashii]
  • 00:01:258 - ~ 00:12:965 -
  1. fine.


    00:12:965 - ~ 00:12:965 -
  2. This part doesn't need any breaks. You should add notes on 00:14:062 - 00:15:526 -.
  3. 00:16:257 (39,40,41,42) - I suggest that you use normal notes here, 39 and 41 are not strong enough to have finish in my opinion. Also try adding note on 00:17:538 - for consistency.


    00:18:818 - ~ 00:30:526 -
  4. fine.


    00:30:526 - ~ 00:42:233 -
  5. This part should have more notes and fewer breaks because previous part have much notes almost the same as that of this part.


    00:42:233 - ~ 00:53:940 -
  6. ^ This part also needs more notes.


    00:53:940 - ~ 01:14:428 -
  7. 00:53:940 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - 00:59:794 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) -
    It can be seen as random pattern. In latter part, I recommend that you make similar pattern to former.
  8. 01:06:014 (195) - can be finish. just suggestion


    01:14:428 - ~ 01:20:282 -
  9. I think that this part also overuses 2/1 breaks. I suggest that you add notes on 01:15:526 - and 01:16:989 -, and make some 1/2 patterns in addition. If you feel the pattern long, try removing 01:14:794 (225) -.


    01:20:282 - ~ 01:25:953 -
  10. fine.



[ Oni]
  1. 00:03:087 - I'm sure there needs a note.
  2. 00:18:087 (59) - Though I can understand why you made finish here, I recommend that you change it to Normal note. Big notes in 1/4 are very hard to hit (and poor looks) and can't be used in low difficulties.
  3. 00:27:050 (96) - should be moved 1/2 left for consistency.
  4. 00:30:038 (107,108) - I recommend that you remove those notes. No many people will notice the sound during playing.
Good luck on ranking. :D
fixed everything, thanks for mod :)
Nifty
Beatmap Nominator
898 posts
Joined September 2014
Nifty
From that nifty queue~

yassu-'s Futsuu


◾ 01:15:526 - Either add a k or move the previous k to here because you've been mapping all the vocals up to here.

Muzukashii


◾ 00:30:160 (83) - No noise here, delete.
◽ 00:30:526 - This whole section could be less boring (the k d k d k d k stuff) if you mapped with the vocal in mind, there's a lot of red tick usage here you're missing.
◾ 00:37:111 - This is the k d k d k d k stuff, but the k should be on the vocals, since it's the emphasized part.
◽ 00:46:623 (135) - Move this note 00:46:989 - here to map to the vocals a bit more, and fit the drums in that section.
◾ 00:47:538 - You can add a d here to fill that drum section.
◽ 00:49:916 (145) - Whistle does nothing but annoy modders, your usage of the sound makes me uncomfortable. Not an actual point, just weird.

Oni


◾ 00:17:904 - These three patterns back to back are uncomfortable to play, since this is improv here you can make it into something more comfortable, like ddk dkd kdk or something.
◽ 00:59:062 - These d's are gross, make them better ty.

Inner Oni




◾ It got hecked up, but why is is od6 hp7? Wait, why is the muzu 5/5? Don't you think these values are a little too high for the difficulty of the map?

ye
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
34,830 posts
Here since the beginning
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 10