This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 26, 2018 at 12:19:18 AM

Artist: Streetlight Manifesto
Title: A Moment of Silence/A Moment Of Violence
Tags: Everything Goes Numb Ska Punk Jazz Catch 22 Marathon
BPM: 130
Filesize: 11223kb
Play Time: 07:12
Difficulties Available:

1. Contrast (5.92 stars, 1513 notes)
2. timing (5.92 stars, 1513 notes)

Download: Streetlight Manifesto - A Moment of Silence/A Moment Of Violence
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"Control, it's all about control. Every dictatorship has one obsession and that's it. In Ancient Rome, they gave the people bread and circuses. They kept the population busy with entertainment but other dictatorships used other strategies to control ideas, the knowledge... how do they do that? Lower education, they limit culture, censor information, they censor any means of individual expression and is important to remember this, that this is a pattern, that repeats itself through out history."


Please redownload if the map was downloaded before 4/20/18! Added some hitsounds

HS was stolen on Pishifat's Moment of Violence and his Moment of Silence

Thanks to Sinnoh for timing the Intro! Give him some love <3




Alternate BG #1 (which apparently jeir and aj likes)

Alternate BG #2 (thank daletto for this)

rip chaos is order yet undeciphered and jakey jakes

uploaded a test diff for timing

o ito na mod mo ser also 500th post!!!!


Hmmm cant really judge the 180 bpm section cos i cant play it what well lo but only complaints would be those wubbly sliders especially in the 180 bpm section
but overall its pretty nice gawa na to TB sa tourney sa december :^

JeirYagtama wrote:

o ito na mod mo ser also 500th post!!!!

kaaf

00:21:800 (3,4,5) - maybe increase more distance between 00:21:425 (2) - ? since theres that triple that maps the sort of strong guitar sound eyy i know u meant moRe movement so yej edited
00:24:050 - Suggesting you should add a break section here pls nO
00:38:300 (4) - would be more appropriate to end the slider over here 00:38:675 - lemme think
01:12:800 (3) - plays better if u remove the node imo what
01:57:800 (1) - I know that u said that these kinds of sliders are intentional but its honestly hard to follow nO those represents the vocal volUm crap but ill think about it
02:55:831 (2,3) - kinda feels underwhelming to play since it has that loud guitar sound but you'll only have to dash little to hit em imo. Maybe space em out a bit for sum more emhphasis on the guitar? i added emphasis to all of the snares so no
03:46:550 (1,2,3) - same as i mentioned above but this time just make 1 a bit more horizontally placed no
03:50:300 (4,5) - 5 feels a little bit too stacked maybe move it to x:162 for sum better flow here edited
04:18:050 (6) - prettty sure this should end here 04:18:425 - lemme think

Hmmm cant really judge the 180 bpm section cos i cant play it u succ lmao what well lo but only complaints would be those wubbly sliders especially in the 180 bpm section no vocals
but overall its pretty nice gawa na to TB sa tourney sa december :^

thnx for mod tnqena sana nga tb sa dec

edit: di tb sa tourna fucK

GL brodie

AJamez wrote:

ya like jazz?

13:24 AJamez: HOW2MAP POH
13:24 Crowley: lAh
13:26 AJamez: ganda pota
13:26 Crowley: xSMh
13:27 AJamez: pramis ang smooth pre wala akong mamod 
13:27 AJamez: will ask my bn frens to check this soon
13:28 Crowley: OM
13:28 Crowley: hEy
13:28 Crowley: thNKAS
13:29 AJamez: kahit d ako gaanong kagaling sa ctb the flow is really guuuuud man wtf nasasalo ko
13:29 Crowley: reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 10q papi
13:31 AJamez: 00:00:425 (1,2) - ik this is just the intro but the spacing here is too close 
13:31 AJamez: hope u did something like 00:06:425 (1,2,3) - 
13:31 AJamez: atleast add a dash 
13:31 AJamez: or nah
13:32 Crowley: i added
13:32 Crowley: dash
13:37 AJamez: 00:21:800 (3) - this has a strong guitar sound imo 
13:38 AJamez: 00:21:425 (2) - this should have hdash
13:38 AJamez: 00:21:050 (1) - ctrlg this and 00:21:425 (2) - perhaps?
13:38 AJamez: to be 00:19:175 (5,6) - consistent here
13:40 AJamez: 00:31:550 (1,2,3,4) - idk there's just something here
13:42 Crowley: sorry i was playing xdd
13:42 AJamez: move 2 closer and give 4 more spacing
13:43 AJamez: 00:47:018 - i kinda hear a sound here
13:44 Crowley: edited the hdash thing
13:44 AJamez: extend that slider and 00:47:112 (2) - ctrl g this 
13:45 Crowley: the stong gutar sound is ok
13:45 Crowley: the hdash is a no
13:45 Crowley: what u mean consistent on 00:19:175 (5,6) -
13:46 Crowley: consistent distance?
13:46 AJamez: yea smth liek that
13:46 Crowley: 00:31:550 (1,2,3,4) - vocals
13:46 Crowley: edited the consistent thig
13:46 Crowley: the 1-4 is vocals
13:47 Crowley: 00:18:425 (2,3) - why ctrl g this
13:48 Crowley: o ok ctrl g ed
13:49 AJamez: 01:31:362 (4,5) - i'd delet these and make a repeat slider instead
13:50 Crowley: aaaa lemme think i cant hear properly rn
13:51 Crowley: also u can skip some parts on the 2nd stanza some of them are copypasted
13:51 Crowley: 01:31:362 (4,5) - abt this idk rn lemme add a bookmark bc i dont have earphones rn
13:51 Crowley: same with the sound thing
13:53 AJamez: 02:20:300 - aaaa what's with these 
13:53 AJamez: hArd
13:54 AJamez: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9237973 smth like this is more comfy]
13:54 AJamez: 02:21:612 (2,3) - awkward distance
13:55 Crowley: it is meant
13:55 Crowley: bc end of kiai
13:55 AJamez: make it consistent with others
13:55 Crowley: fixed
13:55 AJamez: imo it'd be moar comfortable for players if you'd follow my suggestion D:
13:56 Crowley: itll be comfortable but it removes the fact that its 5.5 stars
13:56 Crowley: like
13:56 Crowley: diff spike**
13:56 Crowley: the pp part is only on the 5th minute
13:59 AJamez: 03:12:675 (2) - remove hdash 
13:59 AJamez: drum aint rlly that strong imo
14:00 Crowley: eeeeeee i add hdashes on snares there
14:00 Crowley: so yejs no
14:02 AJamez: 04:03:799 (3,4) - distance
14:02 Crowley: less or more
14:02 AJamez: what's with the blanket lul
14:02 Crowley: OM
14:02 Crowley: LHAHAHAHAA
14:02 Crowley: DI KO SINADYA YAN
14:02 Crowley: HAHAHAHA
14:03 AJamez: LMAOOOOOO XD
14:06 AJamez: 05:07:925 (4,5) - gib space?
14:07 Crowley: done paps
14:11 AJamez: 05:24:693 - really really undermapped man
14:11 AJamez: yung drums pre sayang
14:11 AJamez: hmmmm imake the pattern like
14:11 Crowley: decreasing
14:11 Crowley: uhh
14:12 Crowley: wait eto lang ba
14:12 Crowley: 05:24:860 (4,5,6,7) -
14:12 AJamez: ya
14:12 AJamez: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9238012 idk smth like this pls]
14:13 Crowley: kasi uhh
14:13 Crowley: puro ano siya
14:13 AJamez: nooooo
14:13 Crowley: lemme check
14:13 AJamez: sayang yung part nayun
14:13 Crowley: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9238015
14:13 Crowley: how bout this
14:13 AJamez: gawin mong intense
14:13 AJamez: lemme check
14:13 Crowley: OH OK
14:13 Crowley: GETS KO NA
14:14 Crowley: kasi sa trumpets
14:14 Crowley: gegegege
14:14 AJamez: niecniec
14:14 Crowley: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9238019
14:14 Crowley: ????
14:15 AJamez: OKE NARIN
14:15 AJamez: ops caps
14:15 Crowley: oke
14:15 AJamez: 05:37:527 (1,2) - what's with the small distance her
14:16 AJamez: 05:42:860 (1,2) - ^
14:17 Crowley: fixed
14:18 AJamez: 05:46:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - could've done more than this
14:18 AJamez: 05:51:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - <333333
14:19 Crowley: feels fine 05:46:193 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
14:19 AJamez: 05:54:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - could've done smth like 05:48:860 (3,4,5) - 
14:20 Crowley: 05:54:193 (3,4,5,6,7) -
14:20 Crowley: is
14:20 AJamez: 05:56:026 (4) - quite overspaced
14:20 Crowley: increasing distance
14:21 AJamez: 05:57:860 (2) - vocal stronk
14:21 AJamez: 05:59:193 (2) - same
14:22 Crowley: wait shit HAHAHA
14:22 AJamez: 06:00:526 (2,3) - somth is wrong about this idk
14:23 Crowley: 05:56:026 (4) - i meant this to be overspaced so itll creat a hyperdash to 1
14:23 Crowley: 05:57:860 (2) - hdashes are on eveery 2nd white tick on thiss
14:23 Crowley: ill try to increase distance w/o hdash tho
14:24 AJamez: 06:12:026 (5,1) - aaa
14:24 Crowley: 06:00:526 (2,3) - seems fin
14:25 AJamez: 06:13:193 (11) - anti flow aaaaa
14:25 Crowley: decreased distance on 2,3
14:25 Crowley: 06:13:193 (11) - what  u men antiflow
14:25 Crowley: tilted it a bit
14:25 Crowley: is that ok]
14:26 AJamez: tilt me moar
14:26 Crowley: sure
14:26 Crowley: more on the kiai
14:27 AJamez: 06:20:026 (5) - eh id elet
14:27 Crowley: y 2
14:27 Crowley: y tho
14:28 AJamez: 06:21:860 (3,5) - 2be consistent with 06:21:860 (3,5) -  perhaps
14:29 Crowley: editfd
14:30 Crowley: oh wait nooooo
14:30 Crowley: thats 4 varietion
14:31 AJamez: 07:12:526 (2) - ctrl g is more comfy xd
14:31 AJamez: oke yun lang naman o/
14:31 AJamez: im running out of things to say
14:31 AJamez: nice song
14:31 AJamez: also what is that diff name
14:31 Crowley: REEEEEE
14:32 Crowley: 07:12:526 (2) - this is meant to b like that
14:32 Crowley: bc the sound is getting
14:32 Crowley: higher
14:32 Crowley: oh thats a reference
14:32 Crowley: if theres silence/violence theres chaos
14:32 Crowley: thingy
14:32 Crowley: yes
14:32 Crowley: thanks for mod
14:32 Crowley: uplod on foorums for kds xD

GL brodie

10q for star end mod xDDDDDDDd mahal qita

Seija wrote:

Hi hi~
i really like this song so i decided to mod this c: (First time modding, hope i can help D:)
my english sucks btw xdd

ayy

-01:40:925 (2) - so here... can you apply ctrl + h and put it like this?, it adds more flow because it emphasize the vocals(? noooo it will make the distance too far. i ctrl + g ed it tho

-02:01:925 (2) - ctrl + h to this slider and move it to x:185 (can you make the slider like a straight line? it feels weird in curve D:) 04:22:925 (2) same here~ edited both

-04:01:175 (5) - same at the first point, ctrl + h like this done

-04:27:425 (3) - ctrl + h to this slider nooo its too much. antiflow + high ds

-04:33:424 (2) - Create an hyperdash here and move the next slider to the right~ fixed

-04:56:300 (4) - Move that slider to the left~ i think its ok there

-05:43:193 (2) - Can you create an hyperdash in this slider? nope. i only add hdashes on every 2nd white tick/ snares in that section

-06:00:526 (2,3) - that pattern is so weird, can you increase the distance between the slider and the following triplets? fixed i think????

Omg, this mod sucks... i tried my best :c nooo its good!
as i say in the beginning, hope i can help with this useless mod, good luck c:

thanks for the mod~

NM
from my queue

chaos is order yet undeciphered.

1. 00:00:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - Undoubtfully out-of-tune. Move all of them to the blue tick.
2. Magtatagalog na lang ako rito, hahaha. 00:06:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Masyadong sagad sa may right part. I suggest na i-move mo sila a little bit to the left. Para rin hindi kumaparehas sa notes na to: 00:10:973 (1,2,3) - .
3. 00:08:348 (1) - Not a good pattern choice; pilit yung pag-catch. I suggest na i-move mo yung note sa may left ng tail ng 00:07:598 (5) - . In addition, add mo na rin ng kaunting distance yung dalawa para mag-dash yung players--to satisfy the sound of trumpet.
4. 00:09:098 (2) - Pagsinunod mo yung previous mod, do something with this. Ngunit para sa akin, siguro masmaganda kung 'S' yung pattern nito kaysa 'zigzag'. Sa tingin mo? Same with this one 00:03:754 (3) - . It's up to you to decide.
5. 00:14:629 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Sagad ulit sa right.
6. 00:20:723 (4,5,6,7,8) - Conflict with the music: I-delete mo yung 6 and 8 para parallel yung notes sa sound.
7. 00:21:848 (3,4,5) - And since lumalakas na yung sound dito, why not add more distance?
8. 00:23:348 (5) - Not recommending this. Make it 'C' shape.
9. 00:25:973 - to 00:26:910 - why not add notes on this part para hindi mabigla yung players from this slider 00:27:004 (1) - , lalo nang wala ito sa white tick.
10. 00:27:848 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another conflict: Sa palagay ko sinusunod mo rito yung vocals, so i suggest you have to consult a good time checker. Yung ibang notes ay wala sa tono, apparently. Or is it just me?
11. Your mapping style is hell'a good! That's a compliment. Ang haba, hahaha. Focus na lang ako sa patterns.
12. 00:49:223 (6) - NC
13. 01:04:598 (6) - NC
14. 01:06:848 (3,4,5) - Move mo to malapit sa 01:06:473 (2) - . Hindi bagay hdash rito. Mas maganda kung sa 5 yung hdash papunta sa 01:07:410 (1) - .
15. 01:15:848 (2) - Masmaganda siguro horizontal slider na lang 'to. Mahirap kasi kung kung ganyan, tapos na sa soft part pa ng kanta.
16. 01:17:629 (8) - Ctrl+G.
17. 01:18:098 (1) - Doesn't have to be a repeat slider. Gawin mo lang 'tong normal slider tapos mag-add ka ng note sa 01:18:566 - . Masmaayos pakinggan.
18. 01:19:504 (3,4) - Not recommending this. 1/4 hdash sa soft part???!!! Move mo na lang si 01:19:598 (4) - sa x:384.
19. 01:19:785 (5) - NC
20. 01:23:348 (6,7) - Masmaganda kung vertical sliders 'to. Masdama yung pattern.
21. Pansin ko lang: Maraming timing issues sa map. I highly recommend, magconsult ka sa timing gurus dito sa community para maayos nila yung timing. Medyo, out of tune kasi yung iba.
22. 01:31:785 - Potential 1/4 slider here.
23. Pag-okay na, contact-in mo ulit ako.

Overall: Yun nga. Pero masaya laruin!
Good luck.

"Pag-okay na, contact-in mo ulit ako. "

Hi_Hello wrote:

NM
from my queue

chaos is order yet undeciphered.

1. 00:00:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - Undoubtfully out-of-tune. Move all of them to the blue tick. seems fine to me???
2. Magtatagalog na lang ako rito, hahaha. 00:06:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Masyadong sagad sa may right part. I suggest na i-move mo sila a little bit to the left. Para rin hindi kumaparehas sa notes na to: 00:10:973 (1,2,3) - . edited
3. 00:08:348 (1) - Not a good pattern choice; pilit yung pag-catch. I suggest na i-move mo yung note sa may left ng tail ng 00:07:598 (5) - . In addition, add mo na rin ng kaunting distance yung dalawa para mag-dash yung players--to satisfy the sound of trumpet. edited pero di ko nilagyan masyado ng dash.
4. 00:09:098 (2) - Pagsinunod mo yung previous mod, do something with this. Ngunit para sa akin, siguro masmaganda kung 'S' yung pattern nito kaysa 'zigzag'. Sa tingin mo? Same with this one 00:03:754 (3) - . It's up for you to decide. ill think about it
5. 00:14:629 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Sagad ulit sa right. ok na i think? HAHAHHA
6. 00:20:723 (4,5,6,7,8) - Conflict with the music: I-delete mo yung 6 and 8 para parallel yung notes sa sound. removed the excess notes
7. 00:21:848 (3,4,5) - And since lumalakas na yung sound dito, why not add more distance? should be fine now
8. 00:23:348 (5) - Not recommending this. Make it 'C' shape. changed it but i made it as an S instead.
9. 00:25:973 - to 00:26:910 - why not add notes on this part para hindi mabigla yung players from this slider 00:27:004 (1) - , lalo nang wala ito sa white tick. followed the vocals.
10. 00:27:848 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another conflict: Sa palagay ko sinusunod mo rito yung vocals, so i suggest you have to consult a good time checker. Yung ibang notes ay wala sa tono, apparently. Or is it just me? seems fine to me. but ye i followed the vocals xdd
11. Your mapping style is hell'a good! That's a compliment. Ang haba, hahaha. Focus na lang ako sa patterns. thanks ily dady
12. 00:49:223 (6) - NC done
13. 01:04:598 (6) - NC done
14. 01:06:848 (3,4,5) - Move mo to malapit sa 01:06:473 (2) - . Hindi bagay hdash rito. Mas maganda kung sa 5 yung hdash papunta sa 01:07:410 (1) - . no kasi i added hdashes when there are snares (except if they are on slider ends)
15. 01:15:848 (2) - Masmaganda siguro horizontal slider na lang 'to. Mahirap kasi kung kung ganyan, tapos na sa soft part pa ng kanta. i flipped the slider instead.
16. 01:17:629 (8) - Ctrl+G. no itll contradict what you said before that its the song's soft part. itll make it harder too
17. 01:18:098 (1) - Doesn't have to be a repeat slider. Gawin mo lang 'tong normal slider tapos mag-add ka ng note sa 01:18:566 - . Masmaayos pakinggan. didnt notice it thanks~ edited!
18. 01:19:504 (3,4) - Not recommending this. 1/4 hdash sa soft part???!!! Move mo na lang si 01:19:598 (4) - sa x:384. fixed
19. 01:19:785 (5) - NC fixed
20. 01:23:348 (6,7) - Masmaganda kung vertical sliders 'to. Masdama yung pattern. edited
21. Pansin ko lang: Maraming timing issues sa map. I highly recommend, magconsult ka sa timing gurus dito sa community para maayos nila yung timing. Medyo, out of tune kasi yung iba. ee
22. 01:31:785 - Potential 1/4 slider here. fixed
23. Pag-okay na, contact-in mo ulit ako.

Overall: Yun nga. Pero masaya laruin!
Good luck.

"Pag-okay na, contact-in mo ulit ako. "

thanks sa mod!

I'm finally here! Let's see what I can find.

[General]Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768:
chaos is order yet undeciphered.: control.jpg (1803x1200)

[I don't understand the difficulty name because I don't watch anime]
00:12:848 (3,4,5) - The sound here isn't emphasized properly since it just looks like some oridinary flow. I suggest this kind of pattern.
00:22:035 (4,5) - circle (5) feels more appropriate to have a hyper for more impact on the next sound. (4) at x: 243 and (5) at x:52 (hyper is minimal)
00:33:848 (4) - A hyper would be nice to emphasize the "Liar" sound xd
00:34:598 (1,2,3) - This being walkable is awkward because of the intensity of the voice.
00:36:848 (6,7,8,9) - A hyper again would be nice at least to a minimal x:220
00:38:348 (4) - I would curve this just a bit since a standstill to the vocal feels awkward.
00:47:629 (4) - The spacing looks awkward here, I suggest having the same spacing like 00:46:223 (5) - .
00:49:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unecessary since there is no music supporting it. Trim it down to a 1/4 stream if you really want to have a stream here.
00:51:348 (2) - Dash necessary in this circle isnt necessary
01:12:848 (3) - It's weird that the juice drop and the fruit isnt aligned, make it like this to look more cleaner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474826
01:19:504 (4) - Unecessary note, there is no strong sound supporting and it just make this 01:19:785 (2,3,4) - and 01:18:848 (3,4,1) - look similar when they have different beats.
01:20:348 (6,7) - I like the old pattern better reeeee, it really emphasizes the trumpet.
01:24:098 (1) - same as 01:12:848 (3)
01:53:354 (3) - Making this a hyper for (4) would be nice for the vocal.
02:09:848 (1,2) - This is too awkward to catch
02:35:348 (4) - A triple isnt needed since its not emphasizing probably anything, vocal sure, but a 1/2 slider is enough.
02:54:104 (1,4) - Same scenario like before
02:55:979 (3,4) - This is walkable, which means the vocal isn't emphasizd properly qwq
02:57:666 (5) - A hyper on this one for 02:57:854 (6,7,8) - is nice
03:13:229 (4) - This doesn't look okay. I'd just make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9515770 to make it more cleaner. Just move the two notes away to trigger hyper again.
03:24:104 (1,2) - Why not emphasize the 1/2 beats? It feels more correct because of the vocal and to add more variation. This pattern should be fit nicely https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9515815.
03:25:979 (2) - 1/3 beat doesn't support anything, just make it 1/4 uwu
03:30:104 (1) - 1/4 beat on this one? The vocal in the next note is obviously shorter than this, yet they have the same slider uwu.
03:33:854 (2) - You missed a beat on 03:34:041 - and the vocal on 03:34:135 - I'd just put the necessary notes from there
03:46:229 (4) - Using the hyper to emphasize the next note isn't necessary since there is no loud sound uwu
03:50:635 (5,6) - The section here is pretty calm and having no hypers would be nice.
04:14:729 (4) - Same like before.
05:16:975 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really expected this to be a 1/4 long slider because of the sound uwu. I understand about the triples in 05:22:975 (1,2) - because of the intensity of the trumpet, unlike here.
05:30:308 (6,7,8) - This is too spaced out HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. make it closer until the fruits made contact uwu.
06:13:308 (11) - This one is a bit out of the blue imo. I thought its gonna be a simple c shape. Change something similar but definitely not a c shape again uwu

Nice job in the 2nd BPM, I like it

from my queue

I really want to take another look at this map before qualification too. So wont go too indepth on the mod.

00:11:588 - you are missing a strong beat here imo. why not add a note here, on the same position as the (2) slider tail? or at x192? It plays pretty nice with it imo.

01:08:354 (3,7) - these are hypers, and are on the very edge of the screen. They should not be that. It creates a very uncomfortable movement and snap motion here. Move them more to the right. If needed, move 01:08:541 (4,5,6) - more too the right too.

04:06:104 (1,2) - have seen several of these used on strong sounds. Why not add a hyper too them? Would fit very well. try ctrl+g 04:06:479 (2) - and move it too x32. Gives a bit of variety and also empathizes this part very well. Try to use different patterns on different places with this too.

Here is another part like the one above 04:07:604 (1,2) -

04:32:354 (4) - also like before, too close to the edge of the screen. Wont mention all the places, but try to move them away from the edge.

05:17:642 (1,1) - why is this whole section on the right side? I feel like there is so much more you could have done with this part, but using mostly left righting on the right side i feel like ruins much of the potential.

05:24:975 (4,5,6,7) - why not try this? http://prntscr.com/h9ioj1 i feel it becomes more interesting like this. Not only does it give some variety, but it also fits imo.

the map is pretty clean. Really like it. The song is also very interesting. Im glad you chose this!

-Nicotine wrote:

I'm finally here! Let's see what I can find.

[General]Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum - exceed rankable limitation of 1366x768:
chaos is order yet undeciphered.: control.jpg (1803x1200) w00ps lmao gonn change later

[I don't understand the difficulty name because I don't watch anime]
00:12:848 (3,4,5) - The sound here isn't emphasized properly since it just looks like some oridinary flow. I suggest this kind of pattern. fixed i think
00:22:035 (4,5) - circle (5) feels more appropriate to have a hyper for more impact on the next sound. (4) at x: 243 and (5) at x:52 (hyper is minimal) added hdash to 4 and 5
00:33:848 (4) - A hyper would be nice to emphasize the "Liar" sound xd hyper is too much but i increased ds a bit
00:34:598 (1,2,3) - This being walkable is awkward because of the intensity of the voice. should be fixed by now
00:36:848 (6,7,8,9) - A hyper again would be nice at least to a minimal x:220 i try to keep this part as calm as possible since there are no snares so no
00:38:348 (4) - I would curve this just a bit since a standstill to the vocal feels awkward. doen
00:47:629 (4) - The spacing looks awkward here, I suggest having the same spacing like 00:46:223 (5) - . fixed
00:49:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unecessary since there is no music supporting it. Trim it down to a 1/4 stream if you really want to have a stream here. edited
00:51:348 (2) - Dash necessary in this circle isnt necessary reduced ds
01:12:848 (3) - It's weird that the juice drop and the fruit isnt aligned, make it like this to look more cleaner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474826 lol fRUIT JUICE XDDDDDDD but ye fixed
01:19:504 (4) - Unecessary note, there is no strong sound supporting and it just make this 01:19:785 (2,3,4) - and 01:18:848 (3,4,1) - look similar when they have different beats. removed
01:20:348 (6,7) - I like the old pattern better reeeee, it really emphasizes the trumpet. its back bois have fun
01:24:098 (1) - same as 01:12:848 (3) done
01:53:354 (3) - Making this a hyper for (4) would be nice for the vocal. i add hypers per 2 sliders on chorus so no
02:09:848 (1,2) - This is too awkward to catch oh no not this slider again ok for everyone saying this slider sux i changed it now yay
02:35:348 (4) - A triple isnt needed since its not emphasizing probably anything, vocal sure, but a 1/2 slider is enough. wot there is lUl
02:54:104 (1,4) - Same scenario like before doen
02:55:979 (3,4) - This is walkable, which means the vocal isn't emphasizd properly qwq doen i tighnk
02:57:666 (5) - A hyper on this one for 02:57:854 (6,7,8) - is nice as ive said before im trying to maintain the calmness of this part
03:13:229 (4) - This doesn't look okay. I'd just make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9515770 to make it more cleaner. Just move the two notes away to trigger hyper again. doen
03:24:104 (1,2) - Why not emphasize the 1/2 beats? It feels more correct because of the vocal and to add more variation. This pattern should be fit nicely https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9515815. i only added the 1/2 on 1 bc 2 is a 1/3 for the vocals
03:25:979 (2) - 1/3 beat doesn't support anything, just make it 1/4 uwu done
03:30:104 (1) - 1/4 beat on this one? The vocal in the next note is obviously shorter than this, yet they have the same slider uwu. is it a 3/4 beat you mean? if it is then its edited
03:33:854 (2) - You missed a beat on 03:34:041 - and the vocal on 03:34:135 - I'd just put the necessary notes from there followed the vocals then the drum thing so no
03:46:229 (4) - Using the hyper to emphasize the next note isn't necessary since there is no loud sound uwu should be fine now or smthn
03:50:635 (5,6) - The section here is pretty calm and having no hypers would be nice. made it consistent on earlier bridge to chorus. check 01:30:104 (1) -
04:14:729 (4) - Same like before. same like before. i added hdashes per 2 sliders
05:16:975 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really expected this to be a 1/4 long slider because of the sound uwu. I understand about the triples in 05:22:975 (1,2) - because of the intensity of the trumpet, unlike here. followed pishi's rhythm placement on his map but ye ill think abt it
05:30:308 (6,7,8) - This is too spaced out HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. make it closer until the fruits made contact uwu. shouuuld be fin now
06:13:308 (11) - This one is a bit out of the blue imo. I thought its gonna be a simple c shape. Change something similar but definitely not a c shape again uwu made it an inward c shape suck it lmAO jk ily its edited

Nice job in the 2nd BPM, I like it thnx ily

ty 4 mod ilovu

Razor Sharp wrote:

from my queue

I really want to take another look at this map before qualification too. So wont go too indepth on the mod.

00:11:588 - you are missing a strong beat here imo. why not add a note here, on the same position as the (2) slider tail? or at x192? It plays pretty nice with it imo. added

01:08:354 (3,7) - these are hypers, and are on the very edge of the screen. They should not be that. It creates a very uncomfortable movement and snap motion here. Move them more to the right. If needed, move 01:08:541 (4,5,6) - more too the right too. fixed

04:06:104 (1,2) - have seen several of these used on strong sounds. Why not add a hyper too them? Would fit very well. try ctrl+g 04:06:479 (2) - and move it too x32. Gives a bit of variety and also empathizes this part very well. Try to use different patterns on different places with this too. it is to emphasize 04:06:854 (3) - more so no.

Here is another part like the one above 04:07:604 (1,2) -

04:32:354 (4) - also like before, too close to the edge of the screen. Wont mention all the places, but try to move them away from the edge. i think its a bit far from the left side now. also moved 04:32:605 (5) - a bit closer to 4

05:17:642 (1,1) - why is this whole section on the right side? I feel like there is so much more you could have done with this part, but using mostly left righting on the right side i feel like ruins much of the potential. i think there are now a bit more notes on the left side. would remap if it needs more xDDDDD

05:24:975 (4,5,6,7) - why not try this? http://prntscr.com/h9ioj1 i feel it becomes more interesting like this. Not only does it give some variety, but it also fits imo. blame ajamez he said its fine fixed.

the map is pretty clean. Really like it. The song is also very interesting. Im glad you chose this! first time someone said my music taste is good LUL. thanks!

WOOPS ACCIDENTALLY POSTED WITHOUT REPLIES LMAO thanks for the mod anyways <3

darn it razor took the 2kd :<

_wwwww wrote:

Hi from queue

Mod

In general, everything is okay
Aesthetics and patterns are good.

00:30:760 (4) - Move to x:38, distant a bit with (5) because the sound seems dense for a dash eeee sorry but like i said on the previous mods, i try to make this section as calm as possible with the less usage of hfruits
00:58:604 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9569317 edited oWo
01:20:354 (6) - Make something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9569342, the sounds are differents, so remove reverse slider and make a different mouvement. edited but i didnt follow ur suggestion. made it something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9573624 if thats fine xd
01:29:354 (6,7,8) - For this part, I suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9569363 'cuz I feel that the music is more dense than the sound, and so for that, the (7) should be horizontal to emphasize. edited
01:53:354 (3) - Curve after HDash? (Then you could also curve (4) to make an aesthetic play) edited
04:29:354 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9569510 Emphasize the hitsounds by making a bit more mouvement here. ur pattern is a bit too hard xd. made it a reverse instead
05:30:308 (6,7,8) - I would distant them a bit doen


That's all, great map! and gl

thnkx for the mod!!!!!

whomsteve

ya just letting you know that for songs that have tonnes of 1/3, you can't use slider tick 2. Tick rate 3 would be cool, but it needs to be tick rate 1 since there's also a lot of rhythm in 1/2.

Sinnoh wrote:

ya just letting you know that for songs that have tonnes of 1/3, you can't use slider tick 2. Tick rate 3 would be cool, but it needs to be tick rate 1 since there's also a lot of rhythm in 1/2.

o i didnt know that LOL. thanks ill change it right away <3

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