This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 4, 2018 at 7:38:16 PM

Artist: Mick Gordon
Title: The Mastermind
Source: DOOM
BPM: 140
Filesize: 8852kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:

1. Brainstorm - 4Key (5.24 stars, 1919 notes)

Download: Mick Gordon - The Mastermind
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Good luck!

Hp0 would be better

hp0 od6.66 lmao

fuck you

Setup: you can add some tags like ost ot something. Not really a thing but just if you want to make it perfect.
Also preview time is kinda boring, would you mind to replace it to 00:27:621 - so it will be like intro+kiai instead of intro+intro

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

BRAINSTORM

Everything I say it's just my personal opinion, not things that you need to fix, feel free to reject everything, but I want you to just consider it.

00:23:575 - this BPMs don't really make any effect for me, would be awesome to see zero-60k bpm thing

01:25:131 - 01:25:269 - these are very audible for me, everytime I play this moment I think "lol so random emptyness". I think moment is similar with 01:26:649 - but there are no the second 1/3 sound mapped. It's actually hard for me to get your intentions, looks like it is for memorisation effect (correct me if I'm wrong?) so you might want to add just first note ( 01:25:131 - ) be mapped just because it's too noticeable

01:37:755 - this is going to be the hardest part of the map (in compare with my replays), but the introduction (I mean this acceleration 01:37:407 ) for this part seems to be pretty poorly perfomanced. I think you can find out something more impressive, for example you can make the acceleration more faster or something. I can suggest my idea so you can compare with it:


01:38:721 - I think the effect of sudden falling of these sounds are a little bit inconspicuous. Everytime I watched this on auto I could see this effect, but while playing I can't notice this effect. You can try out to increase the 6.66x SVs (or 7x, or 7.5x, actually I don't really understand the logic of placing of choise the sv value here)

01:43:968 - why no sv here :O

As I understand you use gradual complication style for this map (if we compare first and last kiai parts, we can see that last one is much harder than first, that's what made me think like this). I like this style and it's pretty fun.
02:04:250 - seems to be a repeat of 01:51:009 (yeah there is difference but anyway), referencing to gradual complication style, you are making the repeat part harder to not let it be monotone, but I think it was failed, because the repeat part is much easier than first.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779117 - screenshot from first part (scrollspeed 8), by playing this I just panic because so many objects on the conveyor are falling with random stuttering speed
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779128 - screenshot from second (repeat) part (scrollspeed 8), this part lets me really relax because I remembered the main music structure of music (so I can predict SVs a bit) and there are a lot of empty spaces that give me a lot of time to analyze the SV and make easy accuracy farm.
And to see the repeat part is harder than original makes me feel bored.
(yeah I know you made that extra sounds be triples (or even qaud) but anyway that doesn't work, it's much easier than first part).

02:24:100 - as I said in discord this part lets you keep combo (not really much tho) by just mashing. The reason is that you place many chords on the same columns (example: 02:24:238 (144238|3,144238|2,144376|3,144376|2) - 02:24:652 (144652|2,144652|0,144790|0,144790|2) - and especially triples 02:25:895 (145895|0,145895|2,145895|1,146033|0,146033|1,146033|2) ). I suggest to rearrange patterning and don't place them on the same columns so it won't be mash-able and really harder than first kiai.

02:50:607 - the music part is really epic and impressive, so should be the patterns, but this pattern is really dissapointing for me because it is so easy to predict the next chord even with this SVs.
And I think it is not that pattern that can represent these sounds.
I'll leave my suggestion so you can compare with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779272 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779278




please mutual me

eyes wrote:

Setup: you can add some tags like ost ot something. Not really a thing but just if you want to make it perfect.
Also preview time is kinda boring, would you mind to replace it to 00:27:621 - so it will be like intro+kiai instead of intro+intro
i mainly put it there to include the transitioning swoop sound before the actual noise.

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

BRAINSTORM

Everything I say it's just my personal opinion, not things that you need to fix, feel free to reject everything, but I want you to just consider it.

00:23:575 - this BPMs don't really make any effect for me, would be awesome to see zero-60k bpm thing
i'll see what i can do, although what's there does simply what i want it to. perhaps nivrad00 has some ideas :^)

01:25:131 - 01:25:269 - these are very audible for me, everytime I play this moment I think "lol so random emptyness". I think moment is similar with 01:26:649 - but there are no the second 1/3 sound mapped. It's actually hard for me to get your intentions, looks like it is for memorisation effect (correct me if I'm wrong?) so you might want to add just first note ( 01:25:131 - ) be mapped just because it's too noticeable
fair point, added, although i just wanted to ignore the background blips per 1/3 for the sake of simplicity

01:37:755 - this is going to be the hardest part of the map (in compare with my replays), but the introduction (I mean this acceleration 01:37:407 ) for this part seems to be pretty poorly perfomanced. I think you can find out something more impressive, for example you can make the acceleration more faster or something. I can suggest my idea so you can compare with it:

open

delete svs between 01:37:407 and 01:37:755 and past this:

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it's a neat suggestion but for this case specifically it's way too sudden and goes against the raw by-hand methods that i've used for the rest of the chart. granted the way it is now isn't greatly sightreadable, i think it's easy enough to learn that it isn't too big of a deal. in addition, the way it is now follows a pattern structure where it's three consecutive speedups in increments of 5, 10 and 15 respectively.

01:38:721 - I think the effect of sudden falling of these sounds are a little bit inconspicuous. Everytime I watched this on auto I could see this effect, but while playing I can't notice this effect. You can try out to increase the 6.66x SVs (or 7x, or 7.5x, actually I don't really understand the logic of placing of choise the sv value here)
bit of a messy area yeah, but the SV intensity is (hopefully) dependent on the kick pitches

01:43:968 - why no sv here :O
because that would be predictable hue
it's smooth enough that i think it's more effective that way anyway

As I understand you use gradual complication style for this map (if we compare first and last kiai parts, we can see that last one is much harder than first, that's what made me think like this). I like this style and it's pretty fun.
02:04:250 - seems to be a repeat of 01:51:009 (yeah there is difference but anyway), referencing to gradual complication style, you are making the repeat part harder to not let it be monotone, but I think it was failed, because the repeat part is much easier than first.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779117 - screenshot from first part (scrollspeed 8), by playing this I just panic because so many objects on the conveyor are falling with random stuttering speed
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779128 - screenshot from second (repeat) part (scrollspeed 8), this part lets me really relax because I remembered the main music structure of music (so I can predict SVs a bit) and there are a lot of empty spaces that give me a lot of time to analyze the SV and make easy accuracy farm.
And to see the repeat part is harder than original makes me feel bored.
(yeah I know you made that extra sounds be triples (or even qaud) but anyway that doesn't work, it's much easier than first part).
it's a fair criticism but i'm not sure how else to chart this section - i have to go with dense triplets otherwise it wouldn't follow the music.
i could change the svs but i'd like to think the beauty of this section is the repetition and iteration of it whilst changing note structures as much as possible, excluding LNs (which wouldn't fit)

02:24:100 - as I said in discord this part lets you keep combo (not really much tho) by just mashing. The reason is that you place many chords on the same columns (example: 02:24:238 (144238|3,144238|2,144376|3,144376|2) - 02:24:652 (144652|2,144652|0,144790|0,144790|2) - and especially triples 02:25:895 (145895|0,145895|2,145895|1,146033|0,146033|1,146033|2) ). I suggest to rearrange patterning and don't place them on the same columns so it won't be mash-able and really harder than first kiai.
the difficulty here is intended to be the variety rather than the actual patterning, as in, the player has to remember the rules they should have learnt with the mini LNs on each quad.

02:50:607 - the music part is really epic and impressive, so should be the patterns, but this pattern is really dissapointing for me because it is so easy to predict the next chord even with this SVs.

open

And I think it is not that pattern that can represent these sounds.
I'll leave my suggestion so you can compare with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779272 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9779278
this was intentional so that
1) the player can not quad-mash
2) the player would not complain about being given too little time to react during the final speed-up

the ideas shown are neat but seem to conflict with the points above

also, i think this section being comparably easier imo works better because it tests the player's nerves and self-control rather than reading like the rest of the chart, since they would most likely be using this section to realise what they've managed to achieve if they're on pace for a pb or perhaps even an fc. shitmisses would be fun to watch lol



please mutual me
k lol

huge thanks man, much appreciated!