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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月1日 at 下午 08:31:53

Artist: the pillows
Title: Comic Sonic (TV Size)
Source: SKET DANCE
Tags: gina91189 winber1 bossandy boss ending ed1
BPM: 150
Filesize: 9728kb
Play Time: 01:26
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ED1 of SKET DANCE - Comic Sonic

10/05/11 - Submitted
11/10/11 - Sorry, I changed my username, so you guys need to redownload
06/11/12 - I changed my mind, this is TV Size right now and added some stuffs. Also, taking Insane guess diff
06/12/12 - Added video (Removed it on 06/17/12)
06/17/12 - Changed some images (including BG)
07/03/12 - Added an Insane and moved to pending
07/21/12 - Changed the name of bg to test if the preview image will show or not
01/01/13 - Added video, thanks to lovhin456 :D


Done
Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Winber1's Insane - 100% by winber1
Boss Taiko Oni - 100% by bossandy
Last edited by GiNa on , edited 30 times in total.
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SKET DANCE<3
Random mod!


overall:

  • looks fine~


Insane:



Hard:



Normal:

  • looks fine.


Easy:


Fight>A<
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SKET DANCE<3
Random mod!

overall:

  • looks fine~

Insane:


Hard:


Normal:

  • looks fine.

Easy:

Fight>A< Thanks for your mod >w</
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this map is so awesome!!! hope it gets to be ranked!!! :D
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Hi~! Here's my mod as you requested! :3


    General


  • If you're not gonna make a SB, delete the .osb file and do a full submission.


Easy


This difficulty feels like a Normal diff. You should make easier this. I'll leave you some suggestions to make this difficulty more simple and easy.

00:33:200 (1) - I think this part is hard for a Easy. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/atxO
00:36:400 (1) - ^ Again. Try this: http://puu.sh/aty5
00:46:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyv
00:49:200 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyE
00:58:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyU
01:02:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyV
01:10:400 (1) - I think you should copy the previous slider (1) here, so It will be something like this: http://puu.sh/atz1. Also you can try this spacing with these notes: http://puu.sh/atz3 ~
01:24:400 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/atzi
01:43:600 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzu
01:46:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzC
01:56:400 (1) - Don't place notes like this in a Easy difficulty.
02:04:200 - This break feels weird since it starts all of a sudden. Maybe think of mapping this break?
02:15:600 (1) - Try something more simple here like I told you above.
02:28:400 (1) - And here.
02:31:600 (1) - ^
02:44:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard. Try using long sliders to make it more simple :3


Normal


When I told you to delete a note or something it's because I think it makes some parts a bit too difficult.

00:14:000 (1,2,3) - Maybe try a spacing like this: http://puu.sh/atAn ?
00:19:000 (4) - Delete?
00:21:000 (2) - ^
00:22:000 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger and delete (4)?
00:24:200 (2) - Delete?
00:41:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)?
00:44:200 (3) - Delete?
01:30:800 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing: http://puu.sh/atAW
01:35:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)
02:04:400 - Same as in
Easy
.
02:24:000 (2) - I think you shouldnt hide sliders like this in a Normal Diff.


Hard


00:15:600 (7) - Remove new combo.
00:16:400 (1) - New combo.
00:34:600 (7) - New combo.
00:34:800 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:800 (4) - New combo.
00:38:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:200 (1) - New combo.
00:52:000 (3) - Move this note somewhere because its being behind 00:50:800 (1). Try this: http://puu.sh/atBP ?
00:54:000 (4) - Remove new combo.
01:00:400 (1) - ^
01:06:800 (4) - ^
01:22:800 (1) - New combo.
02:04:200 - Same as in
Normal
and
Easy
. I think you should map this break. At least map it in this difficulty because it's a
Hard
.
02:27:600 (1) - New combo.
02:29:000 (2,3) - Move this notes somewhere because they're placed where the previous notes were.
02:30:000 (5) - Remove new combo.


Insane


00:03:100 (4) - Add a note.
00:07:600 (1) - Jump?
00:26:800 (1) - ^
01:40:200 (11) - New combo.
01:40:400 (1) - Remove new combo.

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Nice beatmap overall :3 Good luck!
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Easy
the only thing i can say is that some red tick notes could make the rhythmn better like this at 00:15:600 (1,2,3) - or similiar, but as now is just fine :3
01:44:400 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - a symmetric pattern like
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could do tha work :3
02:44:400 (1) - New Combo bug, manually add New Combo

Normal
-Rhythmn
01:01:400 (x) - Adding a circle here could make a cool rhythmn ;3 (01:00:800 (4,5,x,6)) with Clap-Normal Normal-Clap)
-Graphic
00:23:000 (6,1,2) - Curving the pattern look surely better :3
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00:24:400 (3,4,5,6) - ^
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00:34:000 (2) - A nice blanket work
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01:18:000 (1,2,3) - Could curve them for an illusionary simmetry with the slider :3
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01:19:800 (2) - A very small curve :3
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Hard
00:04:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - curvize
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00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - an hex? tower stacks don't look so good >.<
collapsed text
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00:16:400 (4) - try deleting it and see if the rhythmn gain something :3(you did use the rhythmn you'll obtain afterward too :3)
00:23:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Octagonize
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00:50:800 (1,2,3,1) - the(3) of the group was overlapped by an hitburst... so... do this?
collapsed text
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01:23:200 (9) - Use a blanket?
collapsed text
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01:43:600 (1) - remove the overlapping by making it a little curvy :D
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01:45:200 (1) - You may as well copypaste ^ to make the pattern symmetrical (but flip horizontally and vertically :3)



Insane
00:01:500 (x) - Add a Circle, even if you partially mapped some other streams at the start too... but well those circle will make some patterns more repeated, so that part will become more readable...
00:04:500 (x) - ^
00:17:800 (2,4) - Fully Blanketize
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00:35:000 (6) - Blanket ?.?
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00:35:600 (8) - Seems offbeat, Suggestion
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Kei wrote:
Hi~! Here's my mod as you requested! :3


    General


  • If you're not gonna make a SB, delete the .osb file and do a full submission.


Easy


This difficulty feels like a Normal diff. You should make easier this. I'll leave you some suggestions to make this difficulty more simple and easy.

00:33:200 (1) - I think this part is hard for a Easy. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/atxO
00:36:400 (1) - ^ Again. Try this: http://puu.sh/aty5
00:46:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyv
00:49:200 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyE
00:58:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyU
01:02:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyV
01:10:400 (1) - I think you should copy the previous slider (1) here, so It will be something like this: http://puu.sh/atz1. Also you can try this spacing with these notes: http://puu.sh/atz3 ~
01:24:400 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/atzi
01:43:600 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzu
01:46:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzC
01:56:400 (1) - Don't place notes like this in a Easy difficulty.
02:04:200 - This break feels weird since it starts all of a sudden. Maybe think of mapping this break?
02:15:600 (1) - Try something more simple here like I told you above.
02:28:400 (1) - And here.
02:31:600 (1) - ^
02:44:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard. Try using long sliders to make it more simple :3


Normal


When I told you to delete a note or something it's because I think it makes some parts a bit too difficult.

00:14:000 (1,2,3) - Maybe try a spacing like this: http://puu.sh/atAn ?
00:19:000 (4) - Delete?
00:21:000 (2) - ^
00:22:000 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger and delete (4)?
00:24:200 (2) - Delete?
00:41:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)?
00:44:200 (3) - Delete?
01:30:800 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing: http://puu.sh/atAW
01:35:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)
02:04:400 - Same as in
Easy
.
02:24:000 (2) - I think you shouldnt hide sliders like this in a Normal Diff.


Hard


00:15:600 (7) - Remove new combo.
00:16:400 (1) - New combo.
00:34:600 (7) - New combo.
00:34:800 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:800 (4) - New combo.
00:38:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:200 (1) - New combo.
00:52:000 (3) - Move this note somewhere because its being behind 00:50:800 (1). Try this: http://puu.sh/atBP ?
00:54:000 (4) - Remove new combo.
01:00:400 (1) - ^
01:06:800 (4) - ^
01:22:800 (1) - New combo.
02:04:200 - Same as in
Normal
and
Easy
. I think you should map this break. At least map it in this difficulty because it's a
Hard
.
02:27:600 (1) - New combo.
02:29:000 (2,3) - Move this notes somewhere because they're placed where the previous notes were.
02:30:000 (5) - Remove new combo.


Insane


00:03:100 (4) - Add a note.
00:07:600 (1) - Jump?
00:26:800 (1) - ^
01:40:200 (11) - New combo.
01:40:400 (1) - Remove new combo.

________________________


Nice beatmap overall :3 Good luck!


Fixed almost everything (except NC).
Thanks for your mod :3.
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HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Easy
the only thing i can say is that some red tick notes could make the rhythmn better like this at 00:15:600 (1,2,3) - or similiar, but as now is just fine :3
01:44:400 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - a symmetric pattern like
collapsed text
Image

could do tha work :3
02:44:400 (1) - New Combo bug, manually add New Combo

Normal
-Rhythmn
01:01:400 (x) - Adding a circle here could make a cool rhythmn ;3 (01:00:800 (4,5,x,6)) with Clap-Normal Normal-Clap)
-Graphic
00:23:000 (6,1,2) - Curving the pattern look surely better :3
collapsed text
Image

00:24:400 (3,4,5,6) - ^
collapsed text
Image

00:34:000 (2) - A nice blanket work
collapsed text
Image

01:18:000 (1,2,3) - Could curve them for an illusionary simmetry with the slider :3
collapsed text
Image

01:19:800 (2) - A very small curve :3
collapsed text
Image



Hard
00:04:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - curvize
collapsed text
Image

00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - an hex? tower stacks don't look so good >.<
collapsed text
Image

00:16:400 (4) - try deleting it and see if the rhythmn gain something :3(you did use the rhythmn you'll obtain afterward too :3)
00:23:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Octagonize
collapsed text
Image

00:50:800 (1,2,3,1) - the(3) of the group was overlapped by an hitburst... so... do this?
collapsed text
Image

01:23:200 (9) - Use a blanket?
collapsed text
Image

01:43:600 (1) - remove the overlapping by making it a little curvy :D
collapsed text
Image

01:45:200 (1) - You may as well copypaste ^ to make the pattern symmetrical (but flip horizontally and vertically :3)



Insane
00:01:500 (x) - Add a Circle, even if you partially mapped some other streams at the start too... but well those circle will make some patterns more repeated, so that part will become more readable...
00:04:500 (x) - ^
00:17:800 (2,4) - Fully Blanketize
collapsed text
Image

00:35:000 (6) - Blanket ?.?
collapsed text
Image

00:35:600 (8) - Seems offbeat, Suggestion
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Don't really remember what I changed, but thanks for your mod and star :D.
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Ahhh, the GiNa.... Haku-chan's wife.....

General
* Hmm, I feel the timing feels off for me. Try set the offset to 1210? You should check my timing, sometimes my timing is late or early

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Easy
00:37:600 (2) - End this slider to 00:38:600 for following vocal?
00:44:800 (3) - I don't think this slider is fit to music....
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....

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Normal
* AR +1? A bit slow for me.....

00:47:600 (1) - Remove new combo for following vocal? Like other combo pattern?
01:01:600 (1) - Remove new combo? It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo is single object, unless it has a good reason
01:35:200 (3) - I feel that repeating slider snap at red tick is not fit to the song..... Try snap it to white tick? Just my opinion
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....

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Hard

00:46:200 (2,3) - Replace this two object into one slider for a good flow?
00:51:600 (2,3) - This sudden 1/1 notes can makes player confusing. But, just my opinion
01:23:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider

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Insane
01:16:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with 01:15:000 (2) (Nazi)
01:37:200 (1) - I think this slider needs more waves (Nazi)
01:38:000 (2) - ^
01:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stacks are not stacked correctly in gameplay. Try to unstack or restack this stacks to fix this
01:52:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmmm, can you unstack this? When I was playing this pattern at first time, I feel it's hard to predict the beats.... since the timing on each notes are different. But, just my opinion.....

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Big apologize for long mod. I'm sorry D:
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Leorda wrote:
Ahhh, the GiNa.... Haku-chan's wife..... Eh !!!???

General
* Hmm, I feel the timing feels off for me. Try set the offset to 1210? You should check my timing, sometimes my timing is late or early 1210 feels better, changed.

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Easy
00:37:600 (2) - End this slider to 00:38:600 for following vocal? Fixed
00:44:800 (3) - I don't think this slider is fit to music.... Fixed
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks..... Sorry, I won't fill this break since this is an Easy.

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Normal
* AR +1? A bit slow for me..... Added

00:47:600 (1) - Remove new combo for following vocal? Like other combo pattern? Fixed
01:01:600 (1) - Remove new combo? It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo is single object, unless it has a good reason Fixed, I didn't know there's a NC lol
01:35:200 (3) - I feel that repeating slider snap at red tick is not fit to the song..... Try snap it to white tick? Just my opinion Fixed
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks..... Nope ><

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Hard

00:46:200 (2,3) - Replace this two object into one slider for a good flow? Fixed
00:51:600 (2,3) - This sudden 1/1 notes can makes player confusing. But, just my opinion No changed
01:23:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider Fixed

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Insane
01:16:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with 01:15:000 (2) (Nazi) Fixed
01:37:200 (1) - I think this slider needs more waves (Nazi) No, but thanks for your suggestion
01:38:000 (2) - ^ ^
01:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stacks are not stacked correctly in gameplay. Try to unstack or restack this stacks to fix this Fixed
01:52:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmmm, can you unstack this? When I was playing this pattern at first time, I feel it's hard to predict the beats.... since the timing on each notes are different. But, just my opinion..... Fixed

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Big apologize for long mod. I'm sorry D: No problam, as long as they help.
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Hi! As you requested in my modding queue.

Only suggestions.


General

Remove "Letterbox during breaks", i think it is not necessary.
This map has many whistles...I suggest you remove some. I'll take some from Easy as an example.
00:01:210 (1)
00:02:010 (2)
00:02:810 (3)
I think these whistles sound bad.


Easy


00:50:810 (3)End the slider in 00:51:410 to following vocal? Suggestion.
02:23:610Suggestion, move this slider to 02:33:410 and end in 02:34:010? I think follow more the vocal.
02:41:210 (1)Remove finish? Suggestion.
02:43:610Add a note here, and in 02:44:010? Another Suggestion.




Normal

Here I didn't see many problems with whistles...

00:19:210 (5,6,7)Like this?
Image
00:24:210Add a note here?
01:09:810Like this?
screenshot016.jpg

01:23:610 (3)Delete this note?
01:56:410 (1)Remove NC.
02:17:410Add a note here?
02:24:210 (3)Delete?
02:38:010 (1)Delete finish?


Hard


00:22:610 (3,4)I suggest this:
screenshot019.jpg

After, add clap in 00:23:410.
00:35:610 (4)Remove this note? and add note in 00:35:810 and 00:36:210.
00:38:810 (3)Move this slider to 00:39:010, end the slider in 00:39:210 and then add a note in 00:39:410.
00:41:810Same as I suggested in 00:22:610.
00:43:410Add a note here?
00:46:210 (2)Remove clap here.
00:51:610 (2)Remove this note. After, add a note in 00:51:810.
01:04:410 (8)Same as I suggested in 00:51:610.
01:20:410 (3,4)Remove this note? After, add a note in 01:20:610 and another note in 01:21:010.
01:26:810 (8)Same as I suggested in 01:20:410.
01:29:210 (7)Remove one repeat.
01:36:410 (8)Remove this note? After add a note in 01:36:610.
01:38:810 (4)End the slider in 01:39:210, and add note in 01:39:410.
01:46:010 (3)Delete slider. After, add notes in 01:46:210, in 01:46:410 and 01:46:610.
01:49:210 (4)Delete note.
01:53:210 (1)Add Finish?
02:18:210Add a note?
02:27:410^
02:24:410 (6)Same as 01:46:010
02:30:810 (3)^
02:34:010 (5)^
02:37:210 (5)Delete note.


Insane


Looks good for me.

Nice map!
And sorry for poor english ><


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suzutsukikanade wrote:
Hi! As you requested in my modding queue.

Only suggestions.


General

Remove "Letterbox during breaks", i think it is not necessary.
This map has many whistles...I suggest you remove some. I'll take some from Easy as an example.
00:01:210 (1)
00:02:010 (2)
00:02:810 (3)
I think these whistles sound bad.


Easy


00:50:810 (3)End the slider in 00:51:410 to following vocal? Suggestion.
02:23:610Suggestion, move this slider to 02:33:410 and end in 02:34:010? I think follow more the vocal.
02:41:210 (1)Remove finish? Suggestion.
02:43:610Add a note here, and in 02:44:010? Another Suggestion.




Normal

Here I didn't see many problems with whistles...

00:19:210 (5,6,7)Like this?
Image
00:24:210Add a note here?
01:09:810Like this?
screenshot016.jpg

01:23:610 (3)Delete this note?
01:56:410 (1)Remove NC.
02:17:410Add a note here?
02:24:210 (3)Delete?
02:38:010 (1)Delete finish?


Hard


00:22:610 (3,4)I suggest this:
screenshot019.jpg

After, add clap in 00:23:410.
00:35:610 (4)Remove this note? and add note in 00:35:810 and 00:36:210.
00:38:810 (3)Move this slider to 00:39:010, end the slider in 00:39:210 and then add a note in 00:39:410.
00:41:810Same as I suggested in 00:22:610.
00:43:410Add a note here?
00:46:210 (2)Remove clap here.
00:51:610 (2)Remove this note. After, add a note in 00:51:810.
01:04:410 (8)Same as I suggested in 00:51:610.
01:20:410 (3,4)Remove this note? After, add a note in 01:20:610 and another note in 01:21:010.
01:26:810 (8)Same as I suggested in 01:20:410.
01:29:210 (7)Remove one repeat.
01:36:410 (8)Remove this note? After add a note in 01:36:610.
01:38:810 (4)End the slider in 01:39:210, and add note in 01:39:410.
01:46:010 (3)Delete slider. After, add notes in 01:46:210, in 01:46:410 and 01:46:610.
01:49:210 (4)Delete note.
01:53:210 (1)Add Finish?
02:18:210Add a note?
02:27:410^
02:24:410 (6)Same as 01:46:010
02:30:810 (3)^
02:34:010 (5)^
02:37:210 (5)Delete note.


Insane


Looks good for me.

Nice map!
And sorry for poor english ><


I'll reply your mod during weekend, thanks for your mod & star for now <3
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kageven wrote:
very good!! :)

Thank you <3
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Oh, you changed to TV Size :D
take one star~
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suzutsukikanade wrote:
Oh, you changed to TV Size :D
take one star~

Yeah ... too lazy for Full Ver. xD
Thank you for the star <33333
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