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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1 октября 2017 г. at 22:59:34

Artist: Veritas Unae
Title: ~DISK 1~
Tags: experimental piano disc homestuck unofficialmspafans land of fans and music 2 Terton -Space-
BPM: 80
Filesize: 1051kb
Play Time: 00:30
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Download: Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~
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Thanks all who help me with this mapset,without your support and help, I could not complete this map.
Special thanks to my sensei ego_17 this guy help me since I started making maps, taught me a lot, taught me to do SB and also made me a good company when I played in a osu! Thank you bro :D
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hey, did an IRC <3

and also unintentionally IRC'ed your GD'er lol good misunderstanding XDDD

IRC
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20:53 Gordon123: can i ask u about mod for my 30s map?
20:53 Gordon123: ;w;
20:54 -Space-: np it pls
20:55 -Space-: i can do some nm's
20:55 -Space-: i need to get BN's on 2 maps xD
20:55 *Gordon123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~]
20:55 Gordon123: yay
20:55 Gordon123: good luck
20:55 -Space-: nice 30 seconds
20:56 Gordon123: haha
20:56 Gordon123: :D
20:56 -Space-: can I do IRC mod?
20:56 Gordon123: i like ur video
20:56 -Space-: ^^
20:56 -Space-: thanks
20:56 Gordon123: only for normal lol
20:56 Gordon123: ;w;
20:56 Gordon123: ?
20:56 -Space-: all diff
20:57 Gordon123: yah? LOL
20:57 *-Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1397492 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [Normal]]
20:57 Gordon123: so we can try
20:57 -Space-: 00:01:525 (2) - kinda nazi, but move the end anchor out to x:184 y:252 just so the blanket is consistent
20:58 Gordon123: screen?
20:58 -Space-: 00:03:025 (3) - ^ (x236 y84)
20:58 -Space-: screen?
20:58 Gordon123: shoot
20:58 Gordon123: xD
20:58 -Space-: 00:10:525 (4) - ^ (x:176 y:188)
20:59 -Space-: lol this mod is just gonna be blanket touchup xD
20:59 Gordon123: ;W;
20:59 -Space-: 00:12:025 (1) - move the middle anchor to (x:408 y:332) and the last anchor to (x:468 y:288)
21:00 -Space-: because the middle is too close makes the blanket look a bit odd
21:00 -Space-: 00:17:650 (1) - starting the slider on the red tick means you're missing the important beats, the important beats are emphasised on the white ticks through the timeline
21:01 -Space-: doing it as you've done means that you aren't making the player actively click the strongest chords on the piano which makes it feel like they're not connecting to the map as well
21:02 -Space-: 00:24:025 (5) - put a new combo :)
21:02 Gordon123: k
21:03 -Space-: alright, thats it for the normal :P
21:03 *-Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [advanced_17]]
21:03 -Space-: 00:03:587 (1) - remove the NC here and put it on 00:04:525 (3) - so its consistent with the normal
21:03 -Space-: 00:05:650 (2) - same as above, put the nc at 00:06:025 (1) - instead
21:04 -Space-: 00:07:337 - add a note here?
21:04 -Space-: 00:05:837 - ^ , and 00:08:837 - ^
21:04 -Space-: 00:16:525 (4) - why bezier slider type here?
21:05 -Space-: also, silence the sliderend on this because it has a sound on nothing
21:05 -Space-: 00:24:025 (4) - nc <3
21:05 -Space-: and that's about it for the advanced too, needs a few more mods to get it touched up but i can definitely see this getting to ranked status
21:06 -Space-: ill do some more in depth modding on the forum later too
21:06 Gordon123: okay
21:06 -Space-: also, if y ou have any questions about what I put in the chat just ask :)
21:06 Gordon123: sure
21:06 Gordon123: what about easy? :P
21:07 -Space-: it's not your map so I can't mod it with you :P
21:07 -Space-: I'd have to talk to the mapper themselves about it
21:07 Gordon123: advanced too not mine LOL
21:08 Gordon123: he by my friend ego_17
21:08 Gordon123: xDDDD
21:08 Gordon123: it*
21:08 Gordon123: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1063607
21:08 -Space-: rly?
21:08 Gordon123: HAHAHA
21:08 -Space-: You need to make it more obvious that it's his
21:08 Gordon123: advanced_17
21:08 -Space-: diff name isn't rankable XD
21:08 Gordon123: lmao
21:08 -Space-: yeah but people will not know it is hit
21:08 -Space-: his*
21:08 Gordon123: haha
21:08 -Space-: the rank criteria says a diff name can't be associated with a username
21:08 -Space-: ;-;
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hey, did an IRC <3

and also unintentionally IRC'ed your GD'er lol good misunderstanding XDDD

IRC
Code:
20:53 Gordon123: can i ask u about mod for my 30s map?
20:53 Gordon123: ;w;
20:54 -Space-: np it pls
20:55 -Space-: i can do some nm's
20:55 -Space-: i need to get BN's on 2 maps xD
20:55 *Gordon123 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~]
20:55 Gordon123: yay
20:55 Gordon123: good luck
20:55 -Space-: nice 30 seconds
20:56 Gordon123: haha
20:56 Gordon123: :D
20:56 -Space-: can I do IRC mod?
20:56 Gordon123: i like ur video
20:56 -Space-: ^^
20:56 -Space-: thanks
20:56 Gordon123: only for normal lol
20:56 Gordon123: ;w;
20:56 Gordon123: ?
20:56 -Space-: all diff
20:57 Gordon123: yah? LOL
20:57 *-Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1397492 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [Normal]]
20:57 Gordon123: so we can try
20:57 -Space-: 00:01:525 (2) - kinda nazi, but move the end anchor out to x:184 y:252 just so the blanket is consistent
20:58 Gordon123: screen?
20:58 -Space-: 00:03:025 (3) - ^ (x236 y84)
20:58 -Space-: screen?
20:58 Gordon123: shoot
20:58 Gordon123: xD
20:58 -Space-: 00:10:525 (4) - ^ (x:176 y:188)
20:59 -Space-: lol this mod is just gonna be blanket touchup xD
20:59 Gordon123: ;W;
20:59 -Space-: 00:12:025 (1) - move the middle anchor to (x:408 y:332) and the last anchor to (x:468 y:288)
21:00 -Space-: because the middle is too close makes the blanket look a bit odd
21:00 -Space-: 00:17:650 (1) - starting the slider on the red tick means you're missing the important beats, the important beats are emphasised on the white ticks through the timeline
21:01 -Space-: doing it as you've done means that you aren't making the player actively click the strongest chords on the piano which makes it feel like they're not connecting to the map as well
21:02 -Space-: 00:24:025 (5) - put a new combo :)
21:02 Gordon123: k
21:03 -Space-: alright, thats it for the normal :P
21:03 *-Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [advanced_17]]
21:03 -Space-: 00:03:587 (1) - remove the NC here and put it on 00:04:525 (3) - so its consistent with the normal
21:03 -Space-: 00:05:650 (2) - same as above, put the nc at 00:06:025 (1) - instead
21:04 -Space-: 00:07:337 - add a note here?
21:04 -Space-: 00:05:837 - ^ , and 00:08:837 - ^
21:04 -Space-: 00:16:525 (4) - why bezier slider type here?
21:05 -Space-: also, silence the sliderend on this because it has a sound on nothing
21:05 -Space-: 00:24:025 (4) - nc <3
21:05 -Space-: and that's about it for the advanced too, needs a few more mods to get it touched up but i can definitely see this getting to ranked status
21:06 -Space-: ill do some more in depth modding on the forum later too
21:06 Gordon123: okay
21:06 -Space-: also, if y ou have any questions about what I put in the chat just ask :)
21:06 Gordon123: sure
21:06 Gordon123: what about easy? :P
21:07 -Space-: it's not your map so I can't mod it with you :P
21:07 -Space-: I'd have to talk to the mapper themselves about it
21:07 Gordon123: advanced too not mine LOL
21:08 Gordon123: he by my friend ego_17
21:08 Gordon123: xDDDD
21:08 Gordon123: it*
21:08 Gordon123: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1063607
21:08 -Space-: rly?
21:08 Gordon123: HAHAHA
21:08 -Space-: You need to make it more obvious that it's his
21:08 Gordon123: advanced_17
21:08 -Space-: diff name isn't rankable XD
21:08 Gordon123: lmao
21:08 -Space-: yeah but people will not know it is hit
21:08 -Space-: his*
21:08 Gordon123: haha
21:08 -Space-: the rank criteria says a diff name can't be associated with a username
21:08 -Space-: ;-;

thank you
for ego_17 :
    Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [advanced_17]]
    21:03 -Space-: 00:03:587 (1) - remove the NC here and put it on 00:04:525 (3) - so its consistent with the normal
    21:03 -Space-: 00:05:650 (2) - same as above, put the nc at 00:06:025 (1) - instead
    21:04 -Space-: 00:07:337 - add a note here?
    21:04 -Space-: 00:05:837 - ^ , and 00:08:837 - ^
    21:04 -Space-: 00:16:525 (4) - why bezier slider type here?
    21:05 -Space-: also, silence the sliderend on this because it has a sound on nothing
    21:05 -Space-: 00:24:025 (4) - nc <3
    21:05 -Space-: and that's about it for the advanced too, needs a few more mods to get it touched up but i can definitely see this getting to ranked status
    21:06 -Space-: ill do some more in depth modding on the forum later too
    21:06 Gordon123: okay
    21:07 Gordon123: advanced too not mine LOL
    21:08 Gordon123: he by my friend ego_17
    21:08 Gordon123: xDDDD
    21:08 Gordon123: it*
    21:08 Gordon123: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1063607
    21:08 -Space-: rly?
    21:08 Gordon123: HAHAHA
    21:08 -Space-: You need to make it more obvious that it's his
    21:08 Gordon123: advanced_17
    21:08 -Space-: diff name isn't rankable XD
    21:08 Gordon123: lmao
    21:08 -Space-: yeah but people will not know it is hit
    21:08 -Space-: his*
    21:08 Gordon123: haha
    21:08 -Space-: the rank criteria says a diff name can't be associated with a username
    21:08 -Space-: ;-;
он думал что это моя диффа тоже
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something something intro phrase here something

general
  • My main issue would be the hitwhistle sound that seems too generic and irrelevant to the song. I'd recommend the default soft-hitwhistle instead.

Terton's Easy
    I am not too happy with the inear transitions and the way they are mixed with the rest of the patterns. 00:00:775 (1,2,3) - 00:21:025 (3,4,5) - these are the only two patterns where sharp 90 degree angle is used and it feels a little too rough in cmparison with 00:18:025 (1,2,3) - 00:06:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - and just about every other pattern in the diffuculty. Wouldn't patterns with sharper angles make more sense with the style and song chosen? example

    Basically, I recommend you to keep the same flow/style concept throughout the difficulty and avoid patterns that stand out (since the song provides no dramatic alterations to the way it sounds)

    00:22:525 (4,5) - the slidertick is not visible in-game, anyway. Additionally, 00:22:525 (4,5) - this rhythm shift is pretty confusing and 00:23:650 - the beat here remains unmapped. Here is an example of the rhythm we could use to make it feel slightly more natural and simplistic.

    Fairly okayish difficulty with a bit of visual inconsistencies.

Normal
  • 00:12:025 (1) - the slider probably should be split into two circles as to highlight the piano beats better. let's try something like this?

    I can see the rhythm working, but I still disaree with the decision of leaving beats like 00:18:025 - unclickable. I would've preferred to have them clickable like this or so, to make the thing more ibtuitive for low-level players.

advanced_17
The difficulty name itself goes along the consistent naming structure used for every other difficulty and has no clear indication of the creator's name. I would highly recommend changing that into ego_17's Advanced to line up with the set's structure.
  • 00:19:900 (3,2) - (2) could've been placed lower to prevent the overlap, which appears to be uninentional/untidy. example
    Note: the jump here is somewhat difficult as the rest of the difficulty is spaced. There is no way to tell that the jumb would be there. // I am also unsure about leaving stronger beat on 00:19:900 (3) - unclickable. I'd prefer something like this

    I like the way you wanted it to be symmetrical, but the way you kind of broken the symmetrical structure for some of the patterns makes me less happy about it.


Space's Crescendo
  • 00:01:525 (2,3,1) - swapping them on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would make more sense. As this way, you'd be introducing the 3/4 rhythm first, and then asking players to actually click it.
  • 00:08:837 - isn't it strange to have a weaker beat here clickable, whereas a much stronger one on 00:08:650 - has no clickable object at all? this might work better for the patterns like this one
  • 00:12:775 - this beat here actually feels like something that needs a clickable object. So, I would shorten (1) till 00:12:400 - this point and have a circle for 00:12:775 - to match the piano beats.

    I disagree with the way you missed out on some pretty strong things by making them unclickable. Apart from that there isn't much to comment on, though.

I'd say that the set feels a bit rushed. Getting more mods and looking into the music more attentively might improve it a lot.
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Bakari wrote:
something something intro phrase here something

general
  • My main issue would be the hitwhistle sound that seems too generic and irrelevant to the song. I'd recommend the default soft-hitwhistle instead. oh,okay

Normal
  • 00:12:025 (1) - the slider probably should be split into two circles as to highlight the piano beats better. let's try something like this? sure,nice idea

    I can see the rhythm working, but I still disaree with the decision of leaving beats like 00:18:025 - unclickable. I would've preferred to have them clickable like this or so, to make the thing more intuitive for low-level players.
ok,i fix it too


I'd say that the set feels a bit rushed. Getting more mods and looking into the music more attentively might improve it a lot. yeah~

EDIT : guys pls redownload map,because was removed soft-hitwhistle. thx

Thank you Bakari for mod ;)
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Bakari wrote:
something something intro phrase here something

Terton's Easy
    I am not too happy with the inear transitions and the way they are mixed with the rest of the patterns. 00:00:775 (1,2,3) - 00:21:025 (3,4,5) - these are the only two patterns where sharp 90 degree angle is used and it feels a little too rough in cmparison with 00:18:025 (1,2,3) - 00:06:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - and just about every other pattern in the diffuculty. Wouldn't patterns with sharper angles make more sense with the style and song chosen? example

    Basically, I recommend you to keep the same flow/style concept throughout the difficulty and avoid patterns that stand out (since the song provides no dramatic alterations to the way it sounds)

    00:22:525 (4,5) - the slidertick is not visible in-game, anyway. Additionally, 00:22:525 (4,5) - this rhythm shift is pretty confusing and 00:23:650 - the beat here remains unmapped. Here is an example of the rhythm we could use to make it feel slightly more natural and simplistic.


    Yes, a few patterns have changed a bit, I hope I understood you correctly

    Fairly okayish difficulty with a bit of visual inconsistencies.



I'd say that the set feels a bit rushed. Getting more mods and looking into the music more attentively might improve it a lot.


Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5650
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:~DISK 1~
TitleUnicode:•~DISK 1~•
Artist:Veritas Unae
ArtistUnicode:Veritas Unae
Creator:Gordon123
Version:Terton's Easy
Source:
Tags:experimental piano disc homestuck unofficialmspafans land of fans and music 2 Terton ego_17 -Space-
BeatmapID:1399064
BeatmapSetID:659934

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1525,750,4,2,1,30,1,0
6025,750,4,2,1,30,1,0
18025,-100,4,2,1,30,0,1
24775,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
25525,-100,4,2,1,26,0,0
26275,-100,4,2,1,22,0,0
27025,-100,4,2,1,18,0,0
27775,-100,4,2,1,14,0,0
28525,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
29275,-100,4,2,1,6,0,0
30025,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 191,191,106
Combo2 : 170,85,0
Combo3 : 180,103,103

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128,152,775,6,0,L|64:152,2,60
244,220,2087,2,0,L|328:284,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,3025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,228,3587,2,0,L|488:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,88,4525,2,0,P|312:64|228:96,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,6025,6,0,L|184:300,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,7525,2,0,L|328:76,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,164,9025,2,0,L|480:284,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,10525,2,0,P|291:314|279:272,2,90
408,336,12025,2,0,P|436:284|420:224,1,120,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,112,13525,6,0,L|300:16,2,90
216,112,15025,2,0,L|216:16,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,16525,2,0,B|124:248|176:248|144:344,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,348,18025,6,0,L|360:348,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,236,19525,2,0,L|344:236,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,21025,2,0,L|336:128,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,4,22525,2,0,L|324:4,2,90
504,60,24025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,148,24775,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25150,12,0,30775,0:0:0:0:


Thanks a lot for your help!
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that diff name was a mess from the start )
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Space- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402613 Veritas Unae - ~DISK 1~ [advanced_17]]

21:03 -Space-: 00:03:587 (1) - remove the NC here and put it on 00:04:525 (3) - so its consistent with the normal
listen to the song - there must be NC there 00:05:650 (1) - , so i just divided fist part in two sections
21:03 -Space-: 00:05:650 (2) - same as above, put the nc at 00:06:025 (1) - instead
21:04 -Space-: 00:07:337 - add a note here?
i decided to not add notes there to mace it easier and reduce star raring a litle, in kiai i made it repiting sliders for a same reason
21:04 -Space-: 00:05:837 - ^ , and 00:08:837 - ^
21:04 -Space-: 00:16:525 (4) - why bezier slider type here?
what does this suposed to mean ?) (i changed it to stright one)
21:05 -Space-: also, silence the sliderend on this because it has a sound on nothing
all hitsounds alredy so quiet, there is no reason to doing that ( i cant hear anuthing while playing)
21:05 -Space-: 00:24:025 (4) - nc <3
ok let it be like in normal

^thanks (=
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The difficulty name itself goes along the consistent naming structure used for every other difficulty and has no clear indication of the creator's name. I would highly recommend changing that into ego_17's Advanced to line up with the set's structure.

00:19:900 (3,2) - (2) could've been placed lower to prevent the overlap, which appears to be uninentional/untidy. example
placed it a little lower (a little) - only overlaps in redactor and barely seen while playing i think it ok now

Note: the jump here is somewhat difficult as the rest of the difficulty is spaced. There is no way to tell that the jumb would be there. // I am also unsure about leaving stronger beat on 00:19:900 (3) - unclickable. I'd prefer something like this
repeating slider gives a lot of time to react to this distance change, i can't call it jump

I like the way you wanted it to be symmetrical, but the way you kind of broken the symmetrical structure for some of the patterns makes me less happy about it.
thats how its always done - symmetrical pattern - some random stuff - symmetrical pattern - some random stuff...

спасибо что замодил !

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something something intro phrase here something



Space's Crescendo
  • 00:01:525 (2,3,1) - swapping them on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would make more sense. As this way, you'd be introducing the 3/4 rhythm first, and then asking players to actually click it. yeah, sounds and played nicer. thanks for spotting this
  • 00:08:837 - isn't it strange to have a weaker beat here clickable, whereas a much stronger one on 00:08:650 - has no clickable object at all? nah, I feel they both have the same intensity and this on a 1/4 knits together the combos nicely since the sound is similarthis might work better for the patterns like this one
  • 00:12:775 - this beat here actually feels like something that needs a clickable object. So, I would shorten (1) till 00:12:400 - this point and have a circle for 00:12:775 - to match the piano beats. similar reason as above in that they are both the same key, so intensity is shared between them

    I disagree with the way you missed out on some pretty strong things by making them unclickable. Apart from that there isn't much to comment on, though. insert obligatory its my style reply



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i haven't modded in like a month though >_<


general
  • i think whistles landing on these 00:06:025 - would be better to better match the different piano pitch thing in the background thing (i.e do something like how space hitsounded their diff


terton
  • 00:12:025 (5) - missed nc? :d
  • 00:16:525 (3) - i'd rather there be a note on the slidertail since this part is a teeny tiny bit more intense than the latter, thus i think adding a note 00:17:650 - here encompasses that better (plus it gets rid of the monotony you have building up from the first section)
  • 00:16:525 (3) - odd how this is the only super curvy sldier in the map, a bit odd visual wise imo
relatively nice diff :'o


normal
careful with blanketeese :<
  • 00:13:525 (4) - this is really personal but maybe make this curvier so it matches with 00:01:525 (2,3) - these, thus kinda mitigating a bit of confusion on this blue tick rhythm
simple stuff nice rhythm consistent yesyes


advance owo
  • 00:04:571 - was this green line supposed to be snapped to the white tick?
  • 00:04:150 (2,3) - maybe stack these two for stack consistency with 00:02:650 (5,6) - ? they're the same sound tbh i see no need for ds (can apply 00:16:150 (3,4) - here too)
  • 00:06:025 (2,5,2) - REALLY personal but the fact that these aren't the same sliders but rotated really rubs me the wrong way since it really looks like you tried to make them all look the same but it really seems like you just freehanded the sliders and aaaaa you coulda taken one slider and rotated it a few degrees or ctrl >'d them or something if that was your intentiopion
  • 00:20:650 (1,2,3) - changing rhythm all of a sudden on the last kiai section maybe be a bit odd to handle for players in this diff you're marketing to, i don't think you need to change, but pretty odd imo since this kinda feels like a copy paste of the previous section, music-wise
not bad imo


southern constellations
i was gonna comment on seemingly the same things bakari mentioned that you denied but you have a reason for doing what you do, i suppose
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southern constellations



Thank you for mod

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Terton's Easy
  • I'm not a fan of how you've stylised all the sliders on this map. Due to how straight they are, it doesn't feel all that modern. You should ctrl+a and then rotate the entire map by 1-5°
  • 00:00:775 (1,2,3,4) - New players will struggle to hit these notes because of how some of them start on a blue tick. Keep in mind that these players are completely new to rhythm games as a whole, and they probably won't know about these kinds of rhythms either. Do something like what was done in the normal; because the blue ticks were expressed through passive sounds (ie. reverse arrows), the player hasn't got to concern themselves with clicking the notes on time.


Normal
  • Same kind of deal as in the easy. You should rotate the whole difficulty by a small amount for a more modern atmosphere.
  • 00:09:025 (2) - Assuming that you're mapping to the high pitched piano; the music here is identical to the music at 00:06:025 (2) - , so you should rotate this by 90° so that the slider travels up, making it consistent with the previous note and better representing the music.


Ego's Advanced
  • 00:10:150 (4,5,6) - I feel like the head of (6) deserves much more emphasis than the previous two notes, because the sound it's on is much stronger in comparison. Perhaps you could replace (4,5) with a 1/4 slider? (timeline) This will create contrast regarding the strength of (5) and (6) due to the unclickable slider-end, making it more faithful to the music.
  • 00:17:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Interesting symmetry, but I think this pattern needs a serious rework due to the rhythmic issues that this pattern presents. Namely, this problem arises from the last repeat slider of each combo, like 00:18:400 (3) - . The repeat slider ends on a very powerful beat, so it would be better to get rid of this repeat and place a circle there instead (timeline). This is better, since the last beat is getting the correct emphasis. Now repeat this until the end of the song, because there is no reason for 00:20:650 (1,2,3) - to be inconsistent, the music is the same here.


Space's Crescendo
  • 00:13:525 (3,1) - You can make this oval look nicer. I would ctrl+G (1) and then move it to an area like x:276 y:160 (keep in mind you'll have to adjust the notes after because of distance snap). The good thing about this is that it doesn't only look nicer, but it flows nicer too thanks to the advent of the circular motion provided by ctrl+G.
  • 00:21:025 (1,2,3) - Likewise, why stop the circular flow here? The music is still very intense, and you expressed this intensity through the jumps at 00:19:525 (1,2,3) - . The problem with this pattern though is that you've reduced the spacing and stopped the circular momentum, which doesn't feel all that good to play. To remedy this, I would try a pattern such as this. The distance snap feels larger, which is appropriate considering the intensity of the song, and you've kept the circular motion from the previous pattern, meaning it'll flow much nicer.

Nice map. I particularly enjoyed Space's Crescendo, and I feel that the easier difficulties are very neat as well. Good luck with this ~
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Space's Crescendo
  • 00:13:525 (3,1) - You can make this oval look nicer. I would ctrl+G (1) and then move it to an area like x:276 y:160 (keep in mind you'll have to adjust the notes after because of distance snap). The good thing about this is that it doesn't only look nicer, but it flows nicer too thanks to the advent of the circular motion provided by ctrl+G.
  • 00:21:025 (1,2,3) - Likewise, why stop the circular flow here? The music is still very intense, and you expressed this intensity through the jumps at 00:19:525 (1,2,3) - . The problem with this pattern though is that you've reduced the spacing and stopped the circular momentum, which doesn't feel all that good to play. To remedy this, I would try a pattern such as this. The distance snap feels larger, which is appropriate considering the intensity of the song, and you've kept the circular motion from the previous pattern, meaning it'll flow much nicer.

Nice map. I particularly enjoyed Space's Crescendo, and I feel that the easier difficulties are very neat as well. Good luck with this ~


Such a helpful and engaging mod! It really pointed out some big things in terms of pattern and difficulty consistency through some important and pivotal parts of my map. I feel as if it works much better and the whole thing is much more consistent as a result. Fixed all mentioned above.

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Renumi wrote:

terton
  • 00:12:025 (5) - missed nc? :d
  • 00:16:525 (3) - i'd rather there be a note on the slidertail since this part is a teeny tiny bit more intense than the latter, thus i think adding a note 00:17:650 - here encompasses that better (plus it gets rid of the monotony you have building up from the first section)
  • 00:16:525 (3) - odd how this is the only super curvy sldier in the map, a bit odd visual wise imo
relatively nice diff :'o



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Terton's Easy
  • I'm not a fan of how you've stylised all the sliders on this map. Due to how straight they are, it doesn't feel all that modern. You should ctrl+a and then rotate the entire map by 1-5°
  • 00:00:775 (1,2,3,4) - New players will struggle to hit these notes because of how some of them start on a blue tick. Keep in mind that these players are completely new to rhythm games as a whole, and they probably won't know about these kinds of rhythms either. Do something like what was done in the normal; because the blue ticks were expressed through passive sounds (ie. reverse arrows), the player hasn't got to concern themselves with clicking the notes on time.


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Renumi wrote:


normal
careful with blanketeese :<
  • 00:13:525 (4) - this is really personal but maybe make this curvier so it matches with 00:01:525 (2,3) - these, thus kinda mitigating a bit of confusion on this blue tick rhythm ah no,sorry,because (4) well conveys the straightness of the song, as well as it is convenient for the circles standing before the slider
simple stuff nice rhythm consistent yesyes
>i'll fix blaketeese heh


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hey


Normal
  • Same kind of deal as in the easy. You should rotate the whole difficulty by a small amount for a more modern atmosphere. >.> I hope you understand me, since I can not do much on a 30s map. Yes, and I think that on this diff, I made quite a few turns, as well as a slider art that are considered with my style and understanding of the mapping/
  • 00:09:025 (2) - Assuming that you're mapping to the high pitched piano; the music here is identical to the music at 00:06:025 (2) - , so you should rotate this by 90° so that the slider travels up, making it consistent with the previous note and better representing the music. > 00:09:025 (2) - this moment repeated 00:21:025 (2) - here ,I did not just put it on, not even comparing it to the fact that it's a song under the piano, and not to mention any aesthetics of the mage that you're taking advantage of, that so similar a rhythm and you have to rotate them 90 degrees. I did it based on my imagination, I did not want to do that monotonous and show what I can do exactly like that, then I saw the same rhythm in another version of the map, I just do not want to see what some people can write : "o so he just stole the patterns from ranked version"/ + i like this pattern,i really dont know why i need to fix it,if this in rhythm. so,thank you/



thank you Renumi and -Faded- ;)
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