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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 12, 2017 at 2:21:34 PM

Artist: DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu
Title: Uchiage Hanabi
Source: 打ち上げ花火、下から見るか?横から見るか?
Tags: Shita kara Miru ka? Yoko kara Miru ka? Movie hachi ハチ summer shaft
BPM: 96
Filesize: 5241kb
Play Time: 01:20
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Download: DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi
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映画『打ち上げ花火、下から見るか?横から見るか?』主題歌
DAOKO × 米津玄師『打上花火』

Short version by alacat (osu!)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651825
Full version by Monstrata (osu!)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/654473


#122 Mapset / Ranked #24
DAOKO x Kenshi Yonezu - Uchiage Hanabi

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Pending on August 16, 2017
Image Bubbled on September 12, 2017 by Electoz
Image Qualified on September 13, 2017 by Monstrata


Image Cup : By Ascendance
Image Salad : By Ascendance
Image Platter : By Ascendance
Image Fireworks : By Ascendance
Last edited by Ascendance on , edited 15 times in total.
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mod thing


General
  • All diffs except Fireworks have Widescreen Storyboard turned on, yet there is no storyboard to be seen. Turn those off :>
  • The song's mp3 file bitrate is higher than the 192kbps standard value, and according to the rules, this is unrankable. Use this one instead!: mp3 audio file
  • Your diffs do not have any combo colours whatsoever. Add some!


Cup


Salad


Platter


Fireworks
  • 00:19:365 (1) - x:200? Same reason as in platter.
  • 01:06:083 (4) - Move to x:277? Seems you forgot a HDash here, seeing that you placed one 01:16:240 (4) - here.
  • 01:19:052 (5) - Move this note to x:328 to smooth out the curve, looks better to me this way, don't know about what you think ^^
  • 01:18:896 (4,5,6) - Moving these to x:361 after you move the previous one also works wonders


Good Luck!
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Hareimu wrote:
mod thing


General
  • All diffs except Fireworks have Widescreen Storyboard turned on, yet there is no storyboard to be seen. Turn those off :> Fixed!
  • The song's mp3 file bitrate is higher than the 192kbps standard value, and according to the rules, this is unrankable. Use this one instead!: mp3 audio file nice catch wao
  • Your diffs do not have any combo colours whatsoever. Add some! added!


Cup


Salad
  • 00:34:990 (1) - I can still catch this with the border of my catcher while walking (Is this even a dash or a hard walk? Can't tell, but either way, increase distance a bit more). yeet
  • 00:39:990 (1) - ^, Increase Distancing (00:49:365 (3,1) - Like this can work nicely) It's already pretty far, probably keeping this oen
  • 01:07:490 (1) - ^, a bit more (2,5x) doesn't hurt. 2.3x
  • 01:17:490 (1) - ^ ^


Platter
  • 00:19:365 (1) - Move this slider to x:80? Better emphasizes beginning c: okok
  • 00:37:490 (1) - x:407? dab
  • 01:04:677 (6) - This is a weird antiflowing movement to a complete stop at 01:04:990 (1) - , dunno what to suggest here but at least I'd point it out. Important noise = sharper pattern!


Fireworks
  • 00:19:365 (1) - x:200? Same reason as in platter. yepyep
  • 01:06:083 (4) - Move to x:277? Seems you forgot a HDash here, seeing that you placed one 01:16:240 (4) - here. bebop
  • 01:19:052 (5) - Move this note to x:328 to smooth out the curve, looks better to me this way, don't know about what you think ^^ aesthetic
  • 01:18:896 (4,5,6) - Moving these to x:361 after you move the previous one also works wonders okay desu


Good Luck!


Thanks for modding!
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t90p diff
    honestly the fact you dont map the beginning especially on the hardest diff tilts me
    is st4 necessary cuz st2 seems to do the job just fine, there's not rly any noticeable notes on the 1/4 ticks lol

    00:26:552 (3,4) - isnt this kind of a big jump for a platter
    00:40:458 (2,3) - shouldn't 3 be given more emphasis cuz of the clap / 2 given less emphasis?
    00:49:990 (1,2,3) - ^ idk it feels rly out of place and awkward
    00:54:990 - u can add a note here tbh
    00:57:177 (1) - plz sielnce spinner
    01:19:521 (8,9) - wait y does this increase in emphasis when its less emphasized the fuck u doin

plat
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fieryrage wrote:
http://puu.sh/xeygu/7b50421b62.png

t90p diff
    honestly the fact you dont map the beginning especially on the hardest diff tilts me alacat didnt do it and since i steal hs from her im fukt LOl
    is st4 necessary cuz st2 seems to do the job just fine, there's not rly any noticeable notes on the 1/4 ticks lol mostly 4 aes lol

    00:26:552 (3,4) - isnt this kind of a big jump for a platter it isnt pakltter
    00:40:458 (2,3) - shouldn't 3 be given more emphasis cuz of the clap / 2 given less emphasis? you're right
    00:49:990 (1,2,3) - ^ idk it feels rly out of place and awkward i fix again
    00:54:990 - u can add a note here tbh i donut hear anything but maybe im retard
    00:57:177 (1) - plz sielnce spinner absolutely
    01:19:521 (8,9) - wait y does this increase in emphasis when its less emphasized the fuck u doin lag

plat


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ur offset is 2 years early use 70


cup
00:59:445 (1) - ctrl g
01:05:070 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:12:570 (1) - move up to avoid overlap
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Fser wrote:
ur offset is 2 years early use 70


cup
00:59:445 (1) - ctrl g
01:05:070 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:12:570 (1) - move up to avoid overlap


fixed the offset and the non-meme comment lul

thanks!
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  • 00:17:570 - why not add spinner here until 00:19:132 - for all diffs
  • add custom combo colours perhaps, i would suggest
    Code:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,155,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,128
    Combo3 : 255,172,89
    Combo4 : 122,145,250


Fireworks
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AJamez wrote:
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  • 00:17:570 - why not add spinner here until 00:19:132 - for all diffs I find the silence to be a better fit at the beginning
  • add custom combo colours perhaps, i would suggest
    Code:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,155,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,128
    Combo3 : 255,172,89
    Combo4 : 122,145,250
    Nice


Fireworks


The rest I declined mostly because I don't want the jumps to be too high / too many hdashes. Just a stylistic thing. Thanks for modding!
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Cup



Salad



Platter

  • 00:29:445 (4) - 2 circles instead? Would differentiate this better from 00:27:570 (1,2,3) . Considering that in the highest diff you did 00:29:445 (4,5,6) different from 3 previous sliders, then the similar rhythm idea can be applied here too.
  • 00:55:070 (1) - ok so why the spinner starts here unlike other diffs helloooooo
  • 01:19:757 (6) - This beat is nothing and then you added a hyperdash on it?

And like you used a lower volume on the spinner 00:57:257 (1) in the highest diff but then it didn't happen in other diffs also


Fireworks


Disagreeing stuff I pointed out above is fine as long as your reason is conceptual enough
mmm if you can get a few more mods then I'll see what I want to do with the set
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Electoz wrote:

Cup



Salad

  • 00:34:132 (3,1) - Is the only spot where you spaced things big which you didn't do this anywhere else in this calm section (before 00:40:070 - ) Well, 00:34:132 (3,1) - has a higher pitched noise on it that gives it a leadin to the next section
  • 01:17:570 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - No dash at all? Plays very anti-climatic tbh added distances


Platter

  • 00:29:445 (4) - 2 circles instead? Would differentiate this better from 00:27:570 (1,2,3) . Considering that in the highest diff you did 00:29:445 (4,5,6) different from 3 previous sliders, then the similar rhythm idea can be applied here too. okay!
  • 00:55:070 (1) - ok so why the spinner starts here unlike other diffs helloooooo o wtf fixed
  • 01:19:757 (6) - This beat is nothing and then you added a hyperdash on it? im idiot

And like you used a lower volume on the spinner 00:57:257 (1) in the highest diff but then it didn't happen in other diffs also


Fireworks

  • 00:39:601 - Could add a circle here like 00:29:601 (5) . Want to accentuate vocals here more rather than instrumental
  • 00:42:570 (1) - 00:45:070 (1) - 00:47:570 (1) - Was expecting these downbeat stuff to have a dash like what you did in Platter tho not huge dashes but i increased them
  • 00:51:320 (1,2) - 00:51:945 (3,4) - Hyperdashes here kinda devalues the emphasis on the build-up 00:53:741 (6,1,2) and it's not like the rhythm here is much different from the rest of the section 00:40:070 - anyways. Imo they have important sounds but I reduced their distance a bit
  • 00:53:741 (6,1,2) - Actually isn't this unrankable to begin with cuz the beat snap thing with consecutive hyperdashes Nope, cause they aren't consecutive. The head of 00:53:820 - counts as an object, meaning that the hypersnaps are not consecutive.
  • 00:54:601 (4,5) - mmm was expecting a hyperdash here but whatever I guess I don't think it's strong enough for an hdash ;;
  • 01:14:445 (7,8,9,10) - Spacings should be decreased a bit tho (like 0.1-0.2) cuz the way they are atm is ambiguous on whether it is walkable. okay~
  • 01:19:757 (9) - Why finishhhhhhhhhhhh blame alacat ;;

Disagreeing stuff I pointed out above is fine as long as your reason is conceptual enough
mmm if you can get a few more mods then I'll see what I want to do with the set


Thank you~
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Combo colors?

Fireworks

00:26:632 (3,4) - You don't use this structure in any other diff, just change it to 1/1 for consistency?
00:44:757 (8,9,10) - I think turning this into a repeat slider shape would be much better for the flow between 00:44:445 (7,8,9,10,1) -
00:57:257 (1) - Silence?
01:13:038 (2,3,4) - Reduce this cuz its kinda distant from each other
01:19:757 (9,1) - No need for hyper imo, the note has no sound to be emphasized by the hyper. A normal dash or a walk would be more acceptable.

Platter

00:33:115 (3,4) - If this is intended to be a dash, it isn't D:
00:55:070 (1) - inconsistent spinner start tho
00:57:257 (1) - Silence?
01:19:208 (4,5) - Even the top diff doesn't have an hdash between here. I'd suggest making them consistent

Salad

00:27:490 (1) - A curve would be nice here, even though it's kind of a calmer section
00:49:990 (1) - Kind of hard to catch at this angle, either angle it more or curve the slider to make it an easier dash
00:57:490 (1) - Silence the spinner?
01:02:490 (1,2,3) - Distance is kind of high... better to reduce here
01:13:115 (2,3) - A bit cramped here xdd

Cup

00:28:740 (2,3) - Seems a bit close together, moving them both to x:366 and then 00:29:365 (3) - more to the left would be nicer
00:32:490 (1) - Curve is a bit weird, you could probably make this more circular
00:35:070 (3) - forgot an NC here
00:53:115 (2,3) - More distance between here for the downbeat?
00:57:490 (1) - Silence this one?
00:59:365 (1,1) - Again, more distance for the downbeat




Good song. Someone should map this for standard!
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Monstrata wrote:
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Combo colors? Oops I forgot to add them to a diff, fixed it

Fireworks

00:26:632 (3,4) - You don't use this structure in any other diff, just change it to 1/1 for consistency? sure
00:44:757 (8,9,10) - I think turning this into a repeat slider shape would be much better for the flow between 00:44:445 (7,8,9,10,1) - Oh nice, changed
00:57:257 (1) - Silence? did
01:13:038 (2,3,4) - Reduce this cuz its kinda distant from each other err I don't think it's that bad
01:19:757 (9,1) - No need for hyper imo, the note has no sound to be emphasized by the hyper. A normal dash or a walk would be more acceptable. you right

Platter

00:33:115 (3,4) - If this is intended to be a dash, it isn't D: unintended anyways, no other sounds had it like this :D
00:55:070 (1) - inconsistent spinner start tho fix
00:57:257 (1) - Silence? yep
01:19:208 (4,5) - Even the top diff doesn't have an hdash between here. I'd suggest making them consistent The top diff has an hdash here now B)

Salad

00:27:490 (1) - A curve would be nice here, even though it's kind of a calmer section okok
00:49:990 (1) - Kind of hard to catch at this angle, either angle it more or curve the slider to make it an easier dash agreed
00:57:490 (1) - Silence the spinner? yeaaaaaaa
01:02:490 (1,2,3) - Distance is kind of high... better to reduce here oh wtf fixed
01:13:115 (2,3) - A bit cramped here xdd consistent with my other structure so imo it's ok

Cup

00:28:740 (2,3) - Seems a bit close together, moving them both to x:366 and then 00:29:365 (3) - more to the left would be nicer sure
00:32:490 (1) - Curve is a bit weird, you could probably make this more circular aes
00:35:070 (3) - forgot an NC here applied with electoz' mod
00:53:115 (2,3) - More distance between here for the downbeat? sure
00:57:490 (1) - Silence this one? yes
00:59:365 (1,1) - Again, more distance for the downbeat agree




Good song. Someone should map this for standard!


Thank you!
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