1. Poltergeist (4,92 stars, 938 notes)

OzzyOzrock wrote:

01:32:320 (1) - This was very hard to read on that playread.

artpiggo wrote:

01:15:430 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - rotate 180

That's all

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I FEEL BAD RECEVING SOMETHING FOR THAT

I'll make sure to add more stuff to it to make myself feel better or something

Mustaash wrote:

SS, easiest map ever imo..



nono, i love this ♥

EDIT : 01:13:153 - add a note. sure
01:16:542 (12) - Reverse arrow? no thanks
01:31:875 (9) - New Combo? removed the nc from that note due to ozzy's mod.. oh well, I feel more natural with NC on it anyway
01:34:986 (12) - New Combo NC'd 01:34:542 (10) - instead
02:16:208 (8) - New Combo yeah
02:17:208 (1) - Remove New Combo mm not so sure about that
02:21:097 (5) - What about replace by a slider? try to follow the vocal. added a new slider after the note, flipped the upcoming combo horizontally
02:22:319 (9) - Reverse Arrowmmkay
02:28:430 (x) - Add slider will end to : 02:28:653 - replaced the note with a slider instead
02:42:541 (2) - New Combo kay
02:42:986 (3) - New Combo ^[/color]

EBAWER123 wrote:

Awesome map, that was very fun, got a C here, orz. It is really well made. Usually I hate AR10 but here it was puuurfect.

01:35:764 (3) - maybe swap this with this? 01:35:875 (4) I missed there 4 out of 5 times, even when I knew it was coming :<

I want to star but I can't ._.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

I Don't know why you used a break after 02:34:986. Well, it's so short... It's mainly used there because of the "get ready -arrows"
Plus, Stacking killed many patterns actually ( the patterns with longs stacks especially ) less stack leninency and manual stacking IS better. I'll look into this

That's only actual thing I can suggest.

Consistency things:
-Remove "shimau" from tags, as it is in the Artist name.
-You could add Tags like "Astrosexy, Jiraya, Naruto" for the motives i'm saying down:

The voices in the break... semmed Jiraya's voice. I didn't closely follow the ANime, so i don't remember...
There seems to be some part of Astrosexy too...

EDIT: because this surely don't deserve 2 kds

Shiirn wrote:

Used sound samples do not belong in tags. As such, remove

SPOILER

18:14 *Shiirn is editing (sHimaU - Slotcore is Dead)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37065]
18:14 <Shiirn> : what's with the breaks
18:14 <Zapy> : huh
18:14 <Zapy> : what do you mean
18:14 <Shiirn> : 00:23:113 - they're dragged out and not even snapped at that <
18:15 <Zapy> : hmm
18:15 <Shiirn> : also, why were you asking for a mat o.0
18:15 <Shiirn> : 00:38:501 (1) - this is a nono <
18:16 <Zapy> : hah didn't even notice that
18:16 <Shiirn> : 00:55:875 - that break... <
18:16 <Zapy> : fits with the music..?
18:17 <Shiirn> : not really...?
18:17 <Shiirn> : at that point you might as well use a spinner.
18:17 <Zapy> : well yes really perhaps?
18:17 <Zapy> : or not
18:17 <Shiirn> : several second long freeze
18:17 <Zapy> : i don't find it fits there
18:17 <Shiirn> : well then
18:17 <Shiirn> : we have a problem
18:17 <Shiirn> : 01:02:653 - what is it with you and these breaks... just start it normally <
18:18 <Zapy> : mmk<y
18:18 <Shiirn> : ending breaks late and early are only for special cases, and in a song like this, you screw up people's reactions
18:18 <Zapy> : mmkay*
18:18 <Shiirn> : it's not for throwing around at random
18:19 <Shiirn> : 01:23:486 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - you got pretty lucky here
18:19 <Shiirn> : looks like 8 to 13 perfectly match with 7
18:20 <Shiirn> : 01:35:764 (3,4) - sudden hops this large are absurdly mean, especially on a song this fast. < Changed the pattern...
18:21 <Zapy> : mmhm
18:22 <Shiirn> : 02:21:208 (1) - it's extremely hard to tell this slider's path, especially when the hitburst of the (2) has barely faded Replaced the slider with a note as it was originally done anyway
18:24 <Zapy> : so
18:24 <Zapy> : nothing else?
18:25 <Shiirn> : i doubt this maps ability to be ranked simply due to the silliness, but ehhhhh i'm not going there
18:25 <Shiirn> : last thing:
18:25 <Shiirn> : sound samples used in the song do =NOT= belong in the tags like Hakunowhateverheis said
18:25 <Shiirn> : so remove astrosexy and naruto or whatever
18:25 <Zapy> : yeah thanks for that then
18:25 <Shiirn> : although yes, there are astrosexy soundsamles in there
18:26 <Shiirn> : it's not like we constantly put IIDX in tags of there's a 123456DOIT sound sample
18:26 <Shiirn> : meh, i'll post a chatlog since this ended up being more kd-worthy than i expected it to be