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Feint & Boyinaband - Time Bomb (feat. Veela)

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Topic Starter
Frostium
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 31, 2018 at 7:52:58 PM

Artist: Feint & Boyinaband
Title: Time Bomb (feat. Veela)
Tags: dnb d&b d'n'b drum and n' bass monstercat 007 solace ft. icebolt
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6732kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.66 stars, 201 notes)
  2. Normal (2.2 stars, 274 notes)
  3. Hard (3.03 stars, 421 notes)
  4. Hyper (3.77 stars, 483 notes)
  5. Insane (4.6 stars, 556 notes)
  6. Time Freeze (5.35 stars, 575 notes)
Download: Feint & Boyinaband - Time Bomb (feat. Veela)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Background by Uribaani

Wishkey - 04/07/2018
Namki - 04/25/2018
-Mo- - 04/25/2018
Wishkey - 05/30/2018
-Mo- - 05/31/2018

Changelog/Thanks
02/12/2018 - Applied Alexsander's mod.
02/13/2018 - Applied StarrStyx's mod.
02/13/2018 - Applied non-one's mod.
02/14/2018 - Applied _orange's mod.
02/17/2018 - Added an Advanced.
02/17/2018 - Applied Xayler's mod.
02/18/2018 - Applied PeterEU's mod.
02/18/2018 - Applied Yahuri's mod.
02/19/2018 - Applied Half's mod.
02/21/2018 - Applied Crissa's mod.
02/21/2018 - Applied Milar001's mod.
02/22/2018 - Applied Ritaka's mod.
02/22/2018 - Applied Chalwa's mod.
03/17/2018 - Applied nextplay's mod.
03/17/2018 - Applied Mordred's mod.
04/07/2018 - Applied Wishkey's mod.
04/24/2018 - Applied Namki's mod.
Qualified (04/25/2018)
Disqualified (04/25/2018)
05/05/2018 - Extension complete.
05/26/2018 - Applied _orange's mod.
05/27/2018 - Applied -Mo-'s mod.
05/30/2018 - Applied Wishkey's mod.
Qualified (05/31/2018)

Also thanks to MaCastillo for being my hitsound copier.
Alexsander
Hello

  • [Time Freeze]
  1. 00:24:871 (1) - maybe go down that slider a bit to leave 00:24:700 (6,1) - more fluid?
  2. 00:30:186 (7,1) - this distance is very large compared to 00:27:443 (6,1) -, 00:24:700 (6,1) - being the same beat, I recommend leaving the same distance
  3. 00:30:014 (6,1) - could make a flat blanket (make the circle stay in the middle of the slider) would make it better visually

  4. 00:31:728 (1) - needed an emphasis like you did on 00:32:757 (8,1) - The slider head is very spaced compared to 00:31:386 (2,1) -
  5. 00:34:128 (8,1) - ^
  6. 00:41:843 (2) - leave a distance greater than 00: 42: 357 (3) - the vocal is more intense 00:41:843 (2) -
  7. 00:44:586 (3) - the distance is a bit confusing, here you emphasized that sound but the same sound at 00:44:928 (4) - you used a shorter distance and emphasized 00:45:100 (5) - being the same sound at 00:44:414 (2) - you did not emphasize, you should leave more consistent because the same thing happens in this kiai like in 00:46:471 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you represented very well and gave the necessary emphasis 00:45:786 (2) -, 00:46:471 (4) -, 00:47:157 (2) -, 00:48:528 (3) -.
  8. 00:49:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  9. 00:49:043 (4,5,6) - a random jump like that doesn't get good 00:49:214 (5,6) - can be a slider since the sound at 00:49:386 - is not important
  10. 00:58:814 (4,4,6) - I didn't understand why you stopped making the 1/1 breaks were very good and make more sense since the red ticks 01: 00: 186 (5) - is irrelevant
  11. 01:23:671 (7,1) - You did not stack in the whole kiai, doing it now doesn't get cool
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:31:728 (1,2) -, 00:30:357 (1,2) - etcs... Can improve blanket
  2. 01:05:500 (3) - could change to 3 circles would get the better sound
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:49:043 (4,5,6) - I didn't understand the distance increase.
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:46:300 (2,2,3) - I know you wanted to vary, but I think it would be more consistent to choose between one of them
The map is good but I didn't like the last diff because the kiai is very confusing
I hope my mod helped =)
and sorry for any english error
Topic Starter
Frostium

Alexsander wrote:

Hello

  • [Time Freeze]
  1. 00:24:871 (1) - maybe go down that slider a bit to leave 00:24:700 (6,1) - more fluid? It seems fine.
  2. 00:30:186 (7,1) - this distance is very large compared to 00:27:443 (6,1) -, 00:24:700 (6,1) - being the same beat, I recommend leaving the same distance Fixed.
  3. 00:30:014 (6,1) - could make a flat blanket (make the circle stay in the middle of the slider) would make it better visually. I had to do something else so I can fix the emphasis.

  4. 00:31:728 (1) - needed an emphasis like you did on 00:32:757 (8,1) - The slider head is very spaced compared to 00:31:386 (2,1) - Fixed.
  5. 00:34:128 (8,1) - ^ Fixed.
  6. 00:41:843 (2) - leave a distance greater than 00: 42: 357 (3) - the vocal is more intense 00:41:843 (2) - I tried. Nothing I can do much here because I don't really want to put specific emphasis for these notes.
  7. 00:44:586 (3) - the distance is a bit confusing, here you emphasized that sound but the same sound at 00:44:928 (4) - you used a shorter distance and emphasized 00:45:100 (5) - being the same sound at 00:44:414 (2) - you did not emphasize, you should leave more consistent because the same thing happens in this kiai like in 00:46:471 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you represented very well and gave the necessary emphasis 00:45:786 (2) -, 00:46:471 (4) -, 00:47:157 (2) -, 00:48:528 (3) -. 00:44:414 (2,3) - This jump is supposed to represent the background noise on 00:44:586 (3) - I think I did improve this pattern. I decided to give 00:44:586 (3,5) - the emphasis. 00:44:414 (2) - Does not have a melody, so I left this not emphasized.
  8. 00:49:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed, hopefully.
  9. 00:49:043 (4,5,6) - a random jump like that doesn't get good 00:49:214 (5,6) - can be a slider since the sound at 00:49:386 - is not important I think I need something different, like a jump, to represent that sound, considering there are both sounds on the 1/2 ticks.
  10. 00:58:814 (4,4,6) - I didn't understand why you stopped making the 1/1 breaks were very good and make more sense since the red ticks 01: 00: 186 (5) - is irrelevant. I stopped the 1/1 because: 00:55:043 (1,2,3) - 00:56:414 (1,2,3) - each of these notes is mapped to the melody instrument, whatever it's called. As you can see, there are three. But, at 00:57:786 (1,2,3,4) - now there are 4. So, to represent this difference, it is best that I stop the 1/1. Also, if you're wondering why I didn't do any 1/1 for the first half of the kiai, it's because it's much more noticeable in the second half. I explain this better in the reply below.
  11. 01:23:671 (7,1) - You did not stack in the whole kiai, doing it now doesn't get cool. I did - 01:12:357 (4,6)
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:31:728 (1,2) -, 00:30:357 (1,2) - etcs... Can improve blanket Fixed, though the latter is negligible.
  2. 01:05:500 (3) - could change to 3 circles would get the better sound Okay.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:49:043 (4,5,6) - I didn't understand the distance increase. Fixed, I knew someone would mention this lol.
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:46:300 (2,2,3) - I know you wanted to vary, but I think it would be more consistent to choose between one of them Well, 00:46:300 (2) - mapped to one melody note + snare. 00:47:671 (2,3) - mapped to two melody notes + snare.
The map is good but I didn't like the last diff because the kiai is very confusing
I hope my mod helped =) It did.
and sorry for any english error Agora é que eu notei que voce e brasileiro...
That was a really fast mod lol. Thanks!
NOIN
mod

00:44:071 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - isnt really any different than 00:55:043 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but its mapped differently, also there is clearly a sound at 00:56:243 - and 00:57:614 - that should be mapped
01:16:471 (2) - make this into a reverse slider
01:39:786 (4,5) - the rhythm is not right here, sounds like 1/3 to me

gl
Topic Starter
Frostium

non-one wrote:

mod

00:44:071 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - isnt really any different than 00:55:043 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but its mapped differently, also there is clearly a sound at 00:56:243 - and 00:57:614 - that should be mapped i explained the first part already, but i'd like to reexplain better. the background vocals are another reason for not using 1/1 pauses. the vocals make the song a lot more saturated if you know what i mean, so i use sliders. 00:50:928 the vocals stop playing a significant role here since they are no longer heard. however, the melodic instrument is still being played at least 4 times per measure, so we still use sliders. when we get to 00:55:043, the second half of the kiai, the melodic instrument only plays 3 times per measure for two measures, thus there are two 1/1 gaps. everything after 00:57:786, the melodic instrument plays 4 times in a measure, so now we go back to using sliders. hopefully you see what i mean.

the second point: yes theres a sound there but i'd rather keep the 1/1 because these sounds arent significant.


01:16:471 (2) - make this into a reverse slider that reduces the significance of the vocals tho ok

01:39:786 (4,5) - the rhythm is not right here, sounds like 1/3 to me you are right, but if i map it 1/3 i'd miss equally important sounds

gl
ty
Nakano Itsuki
mod

[General]
In the kiai sections you used the normal sampleset which is not needed at all since it is really noisy and kinda drowns out the music, especially for a rather calm dnb song. Considering changing back to soft samplesets. Or, if you still want to keep the normal sampleset, please lower the volume at least (at least to 60% or lower)
However for the part after kiai you don't need normal sampleset as well, so please change that to soft.

[Time Freeze]
At the start of the map you have a lot of 5 note streams like 00:22:643 (3,4,5,6,7) - which, according to the song are mapped to literally nothing, and mapping to the 1/2 rhythm only would be enough. Same could be said for the other 5 note streams.
00:37:386 (2,3) - 00:37:729 (4,5) - these two sets of objects have way too large spacing considering that in the same calm intro, your overall spacing isn't that big and therefore does not warrant it.
00:56:243 - 00:57:614 - There is no reason to leave these two blank considering you mapped the same repeating sounds in the section. If you really don't want to put a circle at least map a sliderend to it.
01:02:671 (3) - there is no sound to map to, remove this circle
01:25:900 - 01:26:586 (2) - 01:27:271 - I would highly suggest not leaving these spots blank considering it is the top diff; at least use sliderends if you don't really want them clickable
Same thing can be said about the end for the same point above
01:49:900 (2) - Could use a finish here


[Insane]
Same thing with the top diff about those 5 note streams
00:51:700 (3) - no sound, please remove this circle
00:56:243 - 00:57:614 - Same with top diff
01:02:671 (3) - no need for this circle as well
01:04:643 (1,2,1) - Can understand which sounds you are mapping to, but this is really intuitive for a basic dnb insane. Consider this instead https://starrstyx.s-ul.eu/hzDyFs5u
01:25:386 - 01:25:900 - 01:26:586 (2) - 01:27:271 - same thing as the top diff
And the same thing for the end for the top diff as well
01:49:900 (2) - finish (applies for other diffs)

gl
Topic Starter
Frostium

StarrStyx wrote:

mod

[General]
In the kiai sections you used the normal sampleset which is not needed at all since it is really noisy and kinda drowns out the music, especially for a rather calm dnb song. Considering changing back to soft samplesets. Or, if you still want to keep the normal sampleset, please lower the volume at least (at least to 60% or lower)
However for the part after kiai you don't need normal sampleset as well, so please change that to soft. I lowered the volume, but that's it.

[Time Freeze]
At the start of the map you have a lot of 5 note streams like 00:22:643 (3,4,5,6,7) - which, according to the song are mapped to literally nothing, and mapping to the 1/2 rhythm only would be enough. Same could be said for the other 5 note streams. There is a sound, but I will consider just replacing them with the vocals.
00:37:386 (2,3) - 00:37:729 (4,5) - these two sets of objects have way too large spacing considering that in the same calm intro, your overall spacing isn't that big and therefore does not warrant it. Reduced.
00:56:243 - 00:57:614 - There is no reason to leave these two blank considering you mapped the same repeating sounds in the section. If you really don't want to put a circle at least map a sliderend to it. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6495228
01:02:671 (3) - there is no sound to map to, remove this circle. I see what you mean, the moment you click the circle I do agree there isn't really a sound. However, less than 1/4 of a beat later, you can hear a sound, which means that what I am mapping to isn't really aligned with the 1/4 ticks. I still want to map these sounds because I believe they are important, so I did it in a playable way. In this case, I believe it's acceptable, because otherwise it would be rather unexpected.
01:25:900 - 01:26:586 (2) - 01:27:271 - I would highly suggest not leaving these spots blank considering it is the top diff; at least use sliderends if you don't really want them clickable. Same thing can be said about the end for the same point above. Using 1/1 here better represents what I am following.
01:49:900 (2) - Could use a finish here. There is no kick.


[Insane]
Same thing with the top diff about those 5 note streams. There's a sound, but I'll consider it.
00:51:700 (3) - no sound, please remove this circle.
00:56:243 - 00:57:614 - Same with top diff.
01:02:671 (3) - no need for this circle as well.
01:04:643 (1,2,1) - Can understand which sounds you are mapping to, but this is really intuitive for a basic dnb insane. Consider this instead https://starrstyx.s-ul.eu/hzDyFs5u Did something similar.
01:25:386 - 01:25:900 - 01:26:586 (2) - 01:27:271 - same thing as the top diff.
And the same thing for the end for the top diff as well.
01:49:900 (2) - finish (applies for other diffs).

gl
thank you
_orange
random mod!

[Easy]

00:49:557 (1,2) - Spaced a bit too far

[Normal]

01:27:443 (1,2,3,1) - It might be uncomfortable to click 4 1/2 circles for a new player
01:41:500 (3) - hp bar
01:34:300 (2) - spacing

[Hard]

00:26:928 (3,1) - You could move these closer together bc right now the visual spacing is a lot different from everything else (like this 00:29:328 (2,3) - )
01:05:500 (1) - Why NC this? Also, this non kiai part is undermapped imo. Notes like this 01:05:843 (1) - are pretty strong and should be mapped.
You could probably put more triples in hard diffs tbh

[Insane]

00:42:357 (3) - Maybe make this curve? feels better imo bc of all the curve sliders around this
01:48:357 (1) - The NC isn't necessary. It feels weird just having this 01:49:728 (3) - go up to 3 and nothing else

[Time Freeze]

00:37:557 (3) - Accidental whistle
00:59:500 (3) - Ctrl+g? feels much better imo
01:05:328 (3,4) - This stack ruins movement, I would make it a small jump
01:09:443 (1) - Why NC here? If you decide to keep it, I suggest swapping the NC 01:09:271 (4,1) - because it supports the vocals better
01:16:128 (1) - Remove NC bc 01:37:386 (1,2,3,4) -
01:26:414 (1) - Thing I said about NCs in Insane
01:36:186 (1,2,1) - It's kinda odd that you decide to use angled sliders here because you really haven't used them at all.
01:49:386 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent with other diffs. I prefer it with an NC on the last note

cool map, rank this pls
gl!!
Topic Starter
Frostium

_orange wrote:

random mod!

[Easy]

00:49:557 (1,2) - Spaced a bit too far 1.10x for one moment is pretty negligible.

[Normal]

01:27:443 (1,2,3,1) - It might be uncomfortable to click 4 1/2 circles for a new player I changed, but I'm not sure if it was necessary.
01:41:500 (3) - hp bar Doesn't really matter.
01:34:300 (2) - spacing Fixed.

[Hard]

00:26:928 (3,1) - You could move these closer together bc right now the visual spacing is a lot different from everything else (like this 00:29:328 (2,3) - ) I don't understand the suggestion, sorry.
01:05:500 (1) - Why NC this? Also, this non kiai part is undermapped imo. Notes like this 01:05:843 (1) - are pretty strong and should be mapped. Fixed.
You could probably put more triples in hard diffs tbh I added like two. Not a fan of triples when there are quints.

[Insane]

00:42:357 (3) - Maybe make this curve? feels better imo bc of all the curve sliders around this. Okay.
01:48:357 (1) - The NC isn't necessary. It feels weird just having this 01:49:728 (3) - go up to 3 and nothing else. Fixed.

[Time Freeze]

00:37:557 (3) - Accidental whistle Fixed.
00:59:500 (3) - Ctrl+g? feels much better imo Okay.
01:05:328 (3,4) - This stack ruins movement, I would make it a small jump I made these all small jumps.
01:09:443 (1) - Why NC here? If you decide to keep it, I suggest swapping the NC 01:09:271 (4,1) - because it supports the vocals better You are right, it makes more sense to delete the NC.
01:16:128 (1) - Remove NC bc 01:37:386 (1,2,3,4) - Made the latter 1-2 1-2.
01:26:414 (1) - Thing I said about NCs in Insane Fixed.
01:36:186 (1,2,1) - It's kinda odd that you decide to use angled sliders here because you really haven't used them at all. I don't really see them as unique.
01:49:386 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent with other diffs. I prefer it with an NC on the last note Fixed.

cool map, rank this pls
gl!!
thanks for the mod
Xayler
Hey, top diffs seem rather decent so I'll just mention some few things what came into my eye. NM from my queue.

Hard
00:22:643 (2) - You could add some variety to these 1/4 repeat ones before kiai by adding 2 circles 00:22:643 - here and 00:22:728 - here. As you do have only this kind of slider in the whole section.
01:30:014 (4,5,1) - It would make more sense if they would have 1/4 spacing here instead of general 1/2 when there really isn't 1/2 spacing. It makes most slider entrances like 01:30:357 (5,1) - these pretty awful to click. In lower bpms this kind of technique is rather acceptable, here it should be 1/4. Same goes to the next ones in this section until the end.

Advanced
01:07:900 (3,4,5) - This kind of stack is rather unwelcome in this kind of place, most would think that it's triple so I'd suggest to just move 01:08:243 (5) - on top of 01:08:414 (6) -
01:18:871 (3,4,5) - ^

Normal
00:35:843 (1,2) - What about just 1/2 repeatslider here? The song has just begun and it's pretty intense already. Makes more sense as 00:38:586 (1) - here it's the same and it's very simplified.
Topic Starter
Frostium

Xayler wrote:

Hey, top diffs seem rather decent so I'll just mention some few things what came into my eye. NM from my queue.

Hard
00:22:643 (2) - You could add some variety to these 1/4 repeat ones before kiai by adding 2 circles 00:22:643 - here and 00:22:728 - here. As you do have only this kind of slider in the whole section. Okay.
01:30:014 (4,5,1) - It would make more sense if they would have 1/4 spacing here instead of general 1/2 when there really isn't 1/2 spacing. It makes most slider entrances like 01:30:357 (5,1) - these pretty awful to click. In lower bpms this kind of technique is rather acceptable, here it should be 1/4. Same goes to the next ones in this section until the end. Yeah, I should have done it at this difficulty.

Advanced
01:07:900 (3,4,5) - This kind of stack is rather unwelcome in this kind of place, most would think that it's triple so I'd suggest to just move 01:08:243 (5) - on top of 01:08:414 (6) - Applied.
01:18:871 (3,4,5) - ^ Applied.

Normal
00:35:843 (1,2) - What about just 1/2 repeatslider here? The song has just begun and it's pretty intense already. Makes more sense as 00:38:586 (1) - here it's the same and it's very simplified. I agree.
thank you for the mod
Peter
General:
normal-hitclap is really loud try to make it quieter please because its annoying
also your hitsounds are inconsistent in diffs use hitsound copy program

Easy
Lot of inconsistency in new combos sometimes its every 2 downbeats and sometimes every 1 downbeat try to make it every 2 downbeats
00:41:328 (1,2) - i think those 2 could look better because 00:40:643 (4) end should be pointing at next objects in easy also 00:42:700 (2) looks weird you could
do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289430 so objects would've been more related to one another
01:19:728 (1,2,3,4) - 4 circles at once in easy looks bad and its confusing for beginner mappers try to make slider from 2 circles
01:37:386 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - sudden change to vocals is pretty bad you were following music not vocal whole time so keep objects on white ticks instead

Normal
01:01:043 (2) - on which sound is starting this object its literally starting on silence make 01:01:043 (2,3) the same as rest so 00:57:786 (1,2,3,1,2,3) or make 01:00:528 (1) 1/2 and start it on white tick but its better if you keep things consistent
01:16:128 (4) - if you decided to follow vocal here 01:15:957 here should be an object like here 01:15:271 (2) you do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289540

Advanced
01:30:014 (3) - Way too long also ignores 01:30:614 this blue tick you can split it into 2 sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289581

Hard
01:09:271 (4,1) - This looks off correct blanket

Insane
00:35:671 (6,1,2) - That jump is really weird it goes from really high spaced one to very low spaced try to reduce that

Time Freeze
00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - This jump and flow really could've been improved just ctr + g 00:37:386 (2,4) to swap those and reduce distance of 00:37:900 (5) like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289675
01:17:328 (2,3,4,5,6) - game goes for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289689

Thats all i guess GL map looks good
Topic Starter
Frostium

PeterEU wrote:

General:
normal-hitclap is really loud try to make it quieter please because its annoying Fine.
also your hitsounds are inconsistent in diffs use hitsound copy program I use a hitsound copier, but I fixed what I thought was inconsistent.

Easy
Lot of inconsistency in new combos sometimes its every 2 downbeats and sometimes every 1 downbeat try to make it every 2 downbeats
00:41:328 (1,2) - i think those 2 could look better because 00:40:643 (4) end should be pointing at next objects in easy also 00:42:700 (2) looks weird you could
do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289430 so objects would've been more related to one another Did that.
01:19:728 (1,2,3,4) - 4 circles at once in easy looks bad and its confusing for beginner mappers try to make slider from 2 circles I'm sure this won't cause any problems.
01:37:386 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - sudden change to vocals is pretty bad you were following music not vocal whole time so keep objects on white ticks instead I guess it's sudden because it's much more obvious that I am following vocals, but I was always following them.

Normal
01:01:043 (2) - on which sound is starting this object its literally starting on silence make 01:01:043 (2,3) the same as rest so 00:57:786 (1,2,3,1,2,3) or make 01:00:528 (1) 1/2 and start it on white tick but its better if you keep things consistent Listen to the background, you will clearly hear something.
01:16:128 (4) - if you decided to follow vocal here 01:15:957 here should be an object like here 01:15:271 (2) you do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289540 I don't hear a vocal there.

Advanced
01:30:014 (3) - Way too long also ignores 01:30:614 this blue tick you can split it into 2 sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289581 Okay.

Hard
01:09:271 (4,1) - This looks off correct blanket Okay.

Insane
00:35:671 (6,1,2) - That jump is really weird it goes from really high spaced one to very low spaced try to reduce that Emphasizing (1).

Time Freeze
00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - This jump and flow really could've been improved just ctr + g 00:37:386 (2,4) to swap those and reduce distance of 00:37:900 (5) like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289675 Okay.
01:17:328 (2,3,4,5,6) - game goes for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10289689 No problem here.

Thats all i guess GL map looks good
thanks
Yahuri
NM from my q

Normal (extra mod bc i was looking at the wrong request lol)
00:24:186 (2,3,1) - looks weird due to the close visual spacing between 2 and 1. try this instead?
00:31:728 (1,1) - fix blanket. would also look better if it has equal visual spacing as DS (0.9x)
01:07:214 (4,5) - close visual spacing looks awkward since other places are more spaced out
01:18:186 (4,5) - blanket?

Advanced
00:24:700 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:32:243 (2,3) - ^
00:43:386 (1,1) - spacing looks too high here, especially compared to Hard

Hard
01:04:643 (1,2,3) - spacing might throw off ppl, make the contrast bigger
01:16:128 (3) - add NC (like advanced)

it looks pretty clean and solid tbh so not much to say, good luck
Topic Starter
Frostium

Yahuri wrote:

NM from my q

Normal (extra mod bc i was looking at the wrong request lol)
00:24:186 (2,3,1) - looks weird due to the close visual spacing between 2 and 1. try this instead? Did something similar.
00:31:728 (1,1) - fix blanket. would also look better if it has equal visual spacing as DS (0.9x) I think I fixed it.
01:07:214 (4,5) - close visual spacing looks awkward since other places are more spaced out Yeah.
01:18:186 (4,5) - blanket? I think I fixed it.

Advanced
00:24:700 (4,1) - fix blanket Ok.
00:32:243 (2,3) - ^
00:43:386 (1,1) - spacing looks too high here, especially compared to Hard Yeah, especially considering the slow slider.

Hard
01:04:643 (1,2,3) - spacing might throw off ppl, make the contrast bigger Lol it was at 0.77x before, fixed.
01:16:128 (3) - add NC (like advanced) Okay.

it looks pretty clean and solid tbh so not much to say, good luck
thank you for the mod
Half
Insane

00:23:500 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0mI/90961cc257.jpg think it matches well with the next pattern 00:26:243 (1,2,3,4)

Hard

00:40:300 (3,4,5) - the straight line pattern is not good. how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0Fc/1d6cf330b6.jpg

01:06:357 (2,3) - same. how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0JU/b9eb628f0e.jpg or https://puu.sh/zr0KO/165215350a.jpg

other difficulty is really perfect i think
Topic Starter
Frostium

Half wrote:

Insane

00:23:500 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0mI/90961cc257.jpg think it matches well with the next pattern 00:26:243 (1,2,3,4) Yes, it is better.

Hard

00:40:300 (3,4,5) - the straight line pattern is not good. how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0Fc/1d6cf330b6.jpg I actually do like this one.

01:06:357 (2,3) - same. how about this? https://puu.sh/zr0JU/b9eb628f0e.jpg or https://puu.sh/zr0KO/165215350a.jpg I chose the first one, I did not understand the second picture.

other difficulty is really perfect i think
thank you :)
Crissa
Hey, from q
i forgot how to mod in v1

Time Freeze
01:05:328 (3) - this spacing is too low compared to the rest, considering your sv change is not that noticeable, you could try to start the same pattern from the bottom instead of here

01:16:471 (2) - i like the vocal emphasis here, but ignoring this strong beat doesn't feel that good 'here' since there's a pause after it

01:23:328 (5) - ignoring your previous vocal emphasis for some jumps doesn't seem accurate for me, i would consider to keep the same pattern as before

01:32:414 (1,2,3,4) - might be a bit sudden taking un count you never used something like this before, you could try to lower distance between 1-3 and 2-4

01:38:414 (2) - if you applied the one before, you should change this too for consistency

01:39:786 (2,3) - feels a bit out of place, it's overmapped, i think a triple feels much better, keeping consistency with others in this section

01:45:271 (3) - same beat thing

Insane
01:12:357 (5,6) - try to keep your rhythm choice clear, ignoring vocals here is inconsistent, it repeats again later

Hard
i like this diff, you could try to improve some patterns aesthetics like 01:32:414 (2,3,4,5) - or 00:39:957 (1,2,3,4)

Advanced
01:38:586 - 01:40:643 - i don't think ignoring those is correct, i know you did it to emphasize vocals, but seems out of place since it's the first time you do this, almost at the end of the map
ShinodaYuu
Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
00:49:900 (2,3) - Rhythm here should be like 00:47:157 (2,3) -
01:00:871 (2,3) - ^
01:04:814 - I don't understand why did you leave this red tick empty, while it's same as 01:05:157 (2) -
01:42:100 (7) - There's no need for this note imo

[Extra]
Since it's an extra diff I would make something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10312514
01:31:128 (4) - There's no need for this note imo
01:35:157 (2,3,4,5) - Since it's same vocal "operation" as the ones you mappes as streams consider something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10312532

That's all, hope you'll find it good
Topic Starter
Frostium

Crissa wrote:

Hey, from q
i forgot how to mod in v1

01:05:328 (3) - this spacing is too low compared to the rest, considering your sv change is not that noticeable, you could try to start the same pattern from the bottom instead of here Changed this pattern.

01:16:471 (2) - i like the vocal emphasis here, but ignoring this strong beat doesn't feel that good 'here' since there's a pause after it I made it repeat.

01:23:328 (5) - ignoring your previous vocal emphasis for some jumps doesn't seem accurate for me, i would consider to keep the same pattern as before I wanted to deny this but it makes more sense to do vocal emphasis since that's what is being focused on. Did this for all four or five patterns.

01:32:414 (1,2,3,4) - might be a bit sudden taking in count you never used something like this before, you could try to lower distance between 1-3 and 2-4 It might be sudden but I want to represent the music well and I think this does a good job. Besides, kicksliders aren't hard to read, especially considering it's an Extra. Also I don't see how lowering the distance really helps.

01:38:414 (2) - if you applied the one before, you should change this too for consistency Applied what before? I don't see how this section is a problem either.

01:39:786 (2,3) - feels a bit out of place, it's overmapped, i think a triple feels much better, keeping consistency with others in this section Actually this is 1/3, so the sounds actually last a bit longer than a 1/4 triple. I tried making this a triple, but it's a bit more obvious that a sound is not being mapped, so I think 2 kicksliders works better here. Why not 1/3? For playability, and so I don't ignore equally important sounds.

01:45:271 (3) - same beat thing Don't understand what you mean exactly, but there are vocals on all the notes.

01:12:357 (5,6) - try to keep your rhythm choice clear, ignoring vocals here is inconsistent, it repeats again later Unlike Time Freeze, I think this is more acceptable.

i like this diff, you could try to improve some patterns aesthetics like 01:32:414 (2,3,4,5) - or 00:39:957 (1,2,3,4) Thanks, but I like those two patterns. First one I don't see what needs to be improved, second one I like the branching out motion.

01:38:586 - 01:40:643 - i don't think ignoring those is correct, i know you did it to emphasize vocals, but seems out of place since it's the first time you do this, almost at the end of the map I think this section can be improved, but I can't think of a solution right now. If you have a solution without making it too rhythmically dense (like there are no 1/1 breaks), follow the vocals, and follow those snares, that would be awesome.

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Insane]
00:49:900 (2,3) - Rhythm here should be like 00:47:157 (2,3) - There is a sound that should be mapped on 00:50:071
01:00:871 (2,3) - ^
01:04:814 - I don't understand why did you leave this red tick empty, while it's same as 01:05:157 (2) - The song has gotten much calmer so it's appropriate to make your rhythm less dense.
01:42:100 (7) - There's no need for this note imo There's a clear oscillation.

[Extra]
Since it's an extra diff I would make something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10312514 I don't think that's a good rhythm to separate the kiai from the intro.
01:31:128 (4) - There's no need for this note imo You are right.
01:35:157 (2,3,4,5) - Since it's same vocal "operation" as the ones you mappes as streams consider something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10312532 I don't hear anything that warrants that.

That's all, hope you'll find it good
thanks for the mods both of you
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