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chano & 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi

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Net0
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Net0
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sexta-feira, 25 de maio de 2018 at 02:29:05

Artist: chano & 40mP
Title: Natsukoi Hanabi
Tags: sugar panoram a note summer festival fireworks chano Trynna Mun MkGuh Shizuku- Mirash Delis Ataraxia Bariton
BPM: 158
Filesize: 15085kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,33 stars, 194 notes)
  2. Ataraxia's Easy (1,42 stars, 104 notes)
  3. Bariton's Insane (3,88 stars, 226 notes)
  4. Collab Normal (1,88 stars, 138 notes)
  5. Delis' Insane (4,1 stars, 314 notes)
  6. Extra (4,9 stars, 371 notes)
  7. Mirash's Extra (4,34 stars, 358 notes)
  8. Mk's Hard (3,33 stars, 250 notes)
  9. Mun's Extra (5,05 stars, 337 notes)
  10. Shizuku's Extra (4,75 stars, 323 notes)
  11. Trynna's Insane (4,2 stars, 333 notes)
Download: chano & 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi
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Thanks bossandy and Hailie <3
no pp mapset, have fun!
Last edited by Net0 , edited 131 times in total.
Nikakis
769 posts
Joined May 2014
Nikakis
not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first
Net0
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Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Net0

Nikakis wrote:

not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first
Not sure if I should care about this comment or not...
Donovan
5 posts
Joined November 2014
Donovan

Nikakis wrote:

not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first
You should've at least seen the map or been at least nicer instead of just straight up calling the map a meme, hope you don't do this on a daily basis.
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

Nikakis wrote:

not sure if this is a meme map or a serious one. hope the first
not sure vai toma no seu cu

oiii net0
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
i love mirash
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
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osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Natsukoi Hanabi
TitleUnicode:夏恋花火
Artist:chano & 40mP
ArtistUnicode:シャノ & 40mP
Creator:Net0
Version:Bariton's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1390609
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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
i love @mirash

Os cara nem é macho so pega esses desenho n pega mulhe de vdd :p
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna

Net0 wrote:

The point here is fun, not pp. Enjoy!
not pp
enjoy
choose one
peaceGiant
91 posts
Joined November 2016
peaceGiant
Nostalgic Festival
• 00:12:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This just shows poor execution imo, maybe it's a theme, but I would rather not have it copied and pasted. (Nvm i see the concept behind it)
• 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NC's seem inconsistent and i don't think they are following the music,00:25:980 (2) - NC this, 00:26:740 (1) - and this stays NC'd, else remove.
♥ 00:57:120 (1,2,3,1) - I love this!
• 01:01:107 (2) - NC?
• 01:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poor emphasis choice imo, 01:07:563 (3,5) - These could be emphasized better with sharp angles.
♥ 01:09:272 (3) - Neto{tm}
If you do decide to apply these suggestions, fix other simmlar stuff cuz consistency
Shizuku's Extra
• 00:51:993 - Remove the timing point because it conflicts with every other diff and makes me and AImod Angery>
• 00:04:715 (3) - This isn't emphasized with larger spacing :(.
• 01:22:372 (3) - ?????Fflp://v impostor slider
Mirash's Extra

• 00:06:993 (3) - This slider isnt ignoring anything. (00:07:753 - This is worth a click imo)
• 00:21:708 - I don't hear a sound here.
• 01:01:677 (2,3,1,2,1) - I don't feel like this fits with the concept of the map, You are overall ignoring a lot of sounds and its just a pattern that just appears out of no where.
Delis' Insane
• 00:04:715 (3) - This deserves better emphasis.
• The combo colours are... Unique.
• 00:23:512 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - This could be improved visually
• 01:08:512 - There is a strong vocal here though, Slider would fit better.
• 01:16:866 (2) - skips a lot of important sounds.
= I'm going to be honest, but I really dislike this diff, It needs a lot of polishing, a lot of work with rhythm and emphasis, and aesthetics aren't the best, but it might just be me!
Trynna's Insane
• 00:04:715 (5) - I wish this was emphasized more.
• 00:12:689 - slider end 00:12:879 - circle?
• 00:24:272 (1,2,3,4) - I don't find this appropriate for an insane, but at the same time its so fun to playlol
• 01:09:272 (3) - Can you give me an explanation for these sliders snapped to blue tick?

That's it, I might mod the lower diffs (but I'm tired now), I am trying to improve in modding so sorry if my points weren't valid, Good luck!!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

Trynna wrote:

Net0 wrote:

The point here is fun, not pp. Enjoy!
not pp
enjoy
choose one
manda vc se fude lixooooooo
Net0
1,238 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Net0

peaceGiant wrote:

Nostalgic Festival
• 00:12:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - This just shows poor execution imo, maybe it's a theme, but I would rather not have it copied and pasted. (Nvm i see the concept behind it)Glad you noticed :)
• 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - NC's seem inconsistent and i don't think they are following the music,00:25:980 (2) - NC this, 00:26:740 (1) - and this stays NC'd, else remove.Improved NC
♥ 00:57:120 (1,2,3,1) - I love this!Thx
• 01:01:107 (2) - NC?There isn't sv changing there, so why NCing there?
• 01:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poor emphasis choice imo, 01:07:563 (3,5) - These could be emphasized better with sharp angles.The circles are mostly linear only at the end of each phrase of the strong emphasized drum/vocal I changed spacing for a bigger moviment.
♥ 01:09:272 (3) - Neto{tm}lmao
If you do decide to apply these suggestions, fix other simmlar stuff cuz consistency

That's it, I might mod the lower diffs (but I'm tired now), I am trying to improve in modding so sorry if my points weren't valid, Good luck!!No worries, thanks for modding.
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk
Hello from my que
[Ataraxia's Easy ]
  • 00:07:373 (2,3) - hmm, i think you can better do blanket
    00:13:259 (1,2,3,4) - About this, 3 slider need start here 00:13:259 (2,3) - stong vocal, in my opinon this looks better! I will not write about this anymore. pls check all map
    00:31:677 - hmm, maybe add note? imo
    00:33:196 - ^
    00:53:512 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
    01:17:816 (1,2,3) - pls do so
[advanced]
  • 00:14:588 (6,7) - hmm maybe try do so? looks better
[Mk's Hard ]
  • 00:13:069 (3,4) - maybe do good blanket?
    00:16:107 (2) - Hmm,ctrl j and make evenly to note 3 i think it's better overlap
    00:18:575 (1,2) - Just slightly correct blanket
    00:51:613 (5) - Move to the left to make a smoother line
    01:01:107 (1,2,3) - make a more acute angle
    01:05:474 (1) - maybe do stack with 5 note, triangle patter looks better
    01:07:563 (2,3,4) - make a more acute angle?
[Mirash's Extra]
  • 00:09:461 (2,3) - Не хочешь замутить бланкет с началом слайдера?
    00:10:411 (4) - Ну и так же можно с концом
    00:17:721 (1,2) - По моему это очень трудно прочитать, может убрать стак?
    00:21:613 - Очень странно что ты не решил замапать этот сильный звук, может тогда сделать там мини стрим?
    00:30:727 (1) - не знаю как другим, но мне очень трудно прочитать эту ноту, может быть ее поставить в вверх?
    00:42:879 (1) - ^ хотя ее уже было легче прочитать
    01:16:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Жесткая херовинаXD, по моему 01:16:677 (1,2,3,4,1) - тут можно было сделать флоу получше
Sorry it's all
Good luck with mappset
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
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Ideal
Nomination Assessment Team
627 posts
Joined January 2014
Ideal
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rikia
202 posts
Joined December 2015
rikia
[Nostalgic Festival]
00:04:714 (6) - this lands on a stong sound, maybe emphasize it by increasing spacing or changing the angle?
00:07:373 (5,6) - it doesnt make sense to me that these are sliders but 00:08:132 (1,2,3,4) - are not
00:09:461 (5) - maybe you could NC this to show that it's a part of a new phrase (that isnt as calm)
00:10:791 (1) - this could be a different shape to show that its not the same length as 00:10:031 (2,3) - is
00:11:170 (2,3) - you could increase the spacing here since they are both drums
00:13:449 (4) - the slider tail ends on a drum beat which i think should be a circle instead
00:16:487 (4) - ^
00:13:829 (5,6) - this could be a slider since 6 is a barely noticable sound
00:15:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - could you find a better way to make this look different without repeating the same thing but flipping it horizontally?
00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - can the spacings here not vary so much? it feels weird seeing them vary so much when nothing in the song changed.
00:24:272 (7) - NC, it feels to long
00:25:031 (2,3) - maybe these could have a different spacing so players wont be confused because of it?
00:27:310 (3,4) - the spacing here could be smaller to indicate that the sounds are less strong here
00:30:158 (2,1) - pls fix overlap
00:33:196 (1,1) - ^
00:42:310 (2,1) - ^
00:41:360 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1) - again with the copy and pasting :V
00:58:449 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ??? arent these just 2 triples
01:11:550 (1,1) - i dont think the spacing here has to be so big, but it is D:
01:18:765 (5) - NC?
to be honest this entire kiai feels too random, i dont know what to say.
[Shizuku's Insane]
00:05:854 (1,2) - why is there a huge jump here? and to what sound is it even jumping onto?
00:18:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,1,2) - would be nice if you didn't ignore the drum beat here but i guess its fine xD
00:31:677 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why do these have different spacing? they are practically the same :v
00:43:829 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:32:436 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3) - ^
00:46:866 (1,2,3) - I feel like the spacing here is too large, could you make it similar to 00:48:385 (1,2,3) - ?
01:25:410 (1) - this passes through a noticeable sound, can you make it end on it instead? (1/2)
01:36:233 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I think these should have lower spacing because it is more calm
[Mirash's Insane]
00:00:727 (2,1) - this feels way too spaced, holy.
00:03:385 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is the same as the one before but its so different!
nevermind i give up im not even going to try for this one.
[Delis' Insane]
Combo color: can u make the kiai different colors instead of both red?
00:06:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern could be made better tbh but its fine and perfectly playable
00:10:031 (3,4) - because this was directly overlapped like 1 and 2 were people could misread this for a 1/1 beat gap but it could be fine
00:10:980 (2,1) - the 1(NC) should be futher away from 2 because its a drum beat on a large sound
00:17:626 (7) - can you NC this pls?
00:22:183 (3) - this slider goes through a drum beat, can u make it like a reverse slider or something?
00:23:512 (1,2,1,2) - can you make it so these all have the same spacing?
00:30:348 (3,2) - please fix this ugly overlap
00:32:626 (5) - NC?
00:50:284 (1,2,3,4) - pls make this square look better
01:07:183 (1) - where is the kiai
01:11:360 (3,1) - this is spaced too closely imo compared to the other jumps
To be honest for the entire kiai the jumps feel pretty random in spacing and angles but thats just me, the diff is great overall :D
[Trynna-

nevermind i have to go off the comp, i will finish this mod tomarrow! nevermind x2 i have no school tomarrow

[Trynna's Insane]
00:18:575 (1,2,3,4) - pls make same space
00:21:044 (5) - dis goes through a drum , pls fix
01:03:196 (6,7) - can u move the slider to the right so the angle is sharper
tbh i dont find alot of issues here, sorry.
[Bariton's Insane]
00:03:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this mapped so much differently then just before?
[ ]
i can't find anything else, low diffs are my weakness

Sorry.
Pulse
257 posts
Joined April 2015
Pulse


vindo da minha queue

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que eu vou moddar bem na sua cara



[General]
  1. Não lembro se é problema, mas os kiais são inconsistentes nas dificuldades. Não sei se isso é necessário, que tal padronizar?
  2. 00:51:993 (1) - Additional Timing Point on Shizuku's Extra is necessary?
[Ataraxia's Easy]
  1. 00:29:208 - Uma nota aqui seria legal. Não sei se foi intencional ou erro, já que o AiMod aponta como se tivesse uma nota aqui, mas ela simplesmente não aparece pra mim no editor.
  2. 00:10:411 (2) - Clap no lugar do Whistle?
  3. 00:45:537 (3) - Sei lá, eu acho que essa nota poderia estar pegando o som do tick vermelho anterior. Com o ritmo atual, creio que iniciantes possam clicar essa nota antes do tempo atual devido ao ritmo que a música tem.
[Collab Normal]
  1. Não sei se vai ser um problema por ser um desvio muito pequeno, mas chequem os DS apontados no AiMod.
  2. 01:28:449 (8) - NC?
[Mk's Hard]
Clean af
  1. 01:29:208 (1) - Acho melhor manter a direção desse slider pro próximo do que do anterior para esse. Ctrl+G?
[Bariton's Insane]
  1. 01:13:069 (4) - Essa nota me parece melhor stackada no começo do próximo slider em vez de no final do anterior.
[Trynna's Insane]
  1. 00:57:689 (6) - Esse stack aqui é putaria, bem ruim de ler.
  2. 01:02:816 (5) - Já falei disso num mapa do Natsu. Acho muito ruim ter notas que encostem na meter bar (apesar de ter sido alegado não ter problema), dá uma mudada se possível.

[Delis' Insane]
  1. Some overlaps looks bad playing, I'll list them if you think that you could do some changes:
    00:13:829 (1,4) - They overlap with slider body and I think that could be cleaner;
    00:31:297 (2) - Overlap with previous slider start;
    00:58:069 (1) - I think that you could move pattern down to prevent overlap and you wouldn't need to change next blue combo spacing;
    01:24:272 (8,1,2,3) - Isn't this unnecessarily confusing?
  2. 01:14:018 (1,2,3,4) - This flow hurts a bit, could you think about moving 3 and for a little bit up and make 4 less curved?
[Mirash's Extra]
  1. 00:21:423 (1,2,3,4) - Idk... Your hitsounding bring a new atmosphere to the song, but these doubles doesn't have much sense to me, even being playable. Could you explain?
[Shizuku's Extra]
  1. Check General section
  2. 00:06:423 (1) - Double timing point
  3. 00:33:765 (1) - That's a lot of stacking. Not much confusing, but annoying. Consider moving this slider down and adjust following notes.
[Nostalgic Festival]
  1. 00:06:423 (1) - Double timing point
  2. 00:21:993 (3) - Esse terceiro combo pode ser confuso durante o gameplay, já que antes você tinha combos de duas notas (sério isso realmente me confundiu umas três vezes). Considere deixar assim.
  3. 00:23:322 (2) - Acho que NC aqui é válido independente de seguir a sugestão acima.
  4. 00:58:069 (1) - Esse slider me parece melhor posicionado se der um Ctrl+G e stackar no 00:56:930 (3).
  5. 01:11:930 (1) - Na minha opinião isso aqui deveria ter menos SV pra você poder ter um slider menor e não forçar demais o movimento do player. A janela de tempo entre o slider anterior e esse é bem pequena, e nisso dá pra sair muitos 100s ai sem necessidade - tanto por largar o slider anterior mais cedo pra poder pegar o próximo slider quanto por break por seguir o slider anterior até o final e errar a mira tentando alcançar o slider em questão. Ao contrário do 01:23:702 (1,1), onde o movimento é mais favorável. Mesmo assim você poderia reduzir aqui também pra ser consistente (caso reduza o primeiro).
Boa sorte!
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
vipo

Viperial wrote:

[Bariton's Insane]
00:03:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this mapped so much differently then just before? fixed

pulso

Pulse wrote:

[Bariton's Insane]
  1. 01:13:069 (4) - Essa nota me parece melhor stackada no começo do próximo slider em vez de no final do anterior. concordo fixed

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Net0
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makisokk wrote:

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  • 00:14:588 (6,7) - hmm maybe try do so? looks betterI prefer how it looks now.
Good luck with mappsetThanks

Viperial wrote:

[Nostalgic Festival]
00:04:714 (6) - this lands on a stong sound, maybe emphasize it by increasing spacing or changing the angle?It's such a calm part in the intro I guess the pattern doesn't need bigger jumps or difficulty.
00:07:373 (5,6) - it doesnt make sense to me that these are sliders but 00:08:132 (1,2,3,4) - are notthey sound different..
00:09:461 (5) - maybe you could NC this to show that it's a part of a new phrase (that isnt as calm)Sure
00:10:791 (1) - this could be a different shape to show that its not the same length as 00:10:031 (2,3) - isThe slider there is poiting down for a reason, it's part of how I structured the main downbeats on the map. Doesn't require differet slider shape
00:11:170 (2,3) - you could increase the spacing here since they are both drumslol but they're not emphasized
00:13:449 (4) - the slider tail ends on a drum beat which i think should be a circle insteadmelody rhythm :/
00:16:487 (4) - ^
00:13:829 (5,6) - this could be a slider since 6 is a barely noticable soundThis contradicts your previous suggestion I'm not even sure what's your point now.
00:15:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - could you find a better way to make this look different without repeating the same thing but flipping it horizontally?what's the problem of flipping?
00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - can the spacings here not vary so much? it feels weird seeing them vary so much when nothing in the song changed.every single spacing variation as well as flow is supported by song...
00:24:272 (7) - NC, it feels to longok
00:25:031 (2,3) - maybe these could have a different spacing so players wont be confused because of it?The entire point here is reading in case you didn't notice 00:24:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - .
00:27:310 (3,4) - the spacing here could be smaller to indicate that the sounds are less strong here
00:30:158 (2,1) - pls fix overlap
00:33:196 (1,1) - ^
00:42:310 (2,1) - ^don't you think it's a bit weird that this specific two circles are overlapping? That's on purpose.
00:41:360 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1) - again with the copy and pasting :VAgain, what's the problem?
00:58:449 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ??? arent these just 2 triplesThere's only one triple section in this part of the song here 00:57:120 (1,2,3) - on the hi-hats, so I don't really agree in adding a triple there.
01:11:550 (1,1) - i dont think the spacing here has to be so big, but it is D:Nerfed
01:18:765 (5) - NC?Doesn't make any sense NCing there.
to be honest this entire kiai feels too random, i dont know what to say.:/ but it's not

Pulse wrote:

[Collab Normal]
  1. Não sei se vai ser um problema por ser um desvio muito pequeno, mas chequem os DS apontados no AiMod.https://puu.sh/xzBGe.png :thinking:
  2. 01:28:449 (8) - NC?Claro
[Nostalgic Festival]
  1. 00:06:423 (1) - Double timing pointArrumado
  2. 00:21:993 (3) - Esse terceiro combo pode ser confuso durante o gameplay, já que antes você tinha combos de duas notas (sério isso realmente me confundiu umas três vezes). Considere deixar assim.O combo em si eu não vou mudar porque a música realmente faz essa virada de 1-3 pra depois voltar com 1-2 na melodia, foi o que eu segui. Mas eu acho que mudar a posição do 00:21:993 (3) - é tranquilo, então vamos tentar sua sugestão.
  3. 00:23:322 (2) - Acho que NC aqui é válido independente de seguir a sugestão acima.O 2 continua fazendo parte da seção anterior não vejo um motivo além do gap de ritmo pra mudar isso, vou manter por enquanto
  4. 00:58:069 (1) - Esse slider me parece melhor posicionado se der um Ctrl+G e stackar no 00:56:930 (3).Essa posição faz parte de um conceito geral do mapa. Observa como esse slider 00:58:069 (1) - coincide com 00:51:993 (1) - que é o primeiro objeto da seção que por sua vez estava posicionado acima de 00:45:917 (1) - que era o som mais forte da section anterior e logo na sequência 01:02:436 (1) - vai subir mais ainda, etc.
  5. 01:11:930 (1) - Na minha opinião isso aqui deveria ter menos SV pra você poder ter um slider menor e não forçar demais o movimento do player. A janela de tempo entre o slider anterior e esse é bem pequena, e nisso dá pra sair muitos 100s ai sem necessidade - tanto por largar o slider anterior mais cedo pra poder pegar o próximo slider quanto por break por seguir o slider anterior até o final e errar a mira tentando alcançar o slider em questão. Ao contrário do 01:23:702 (1,1), onde o movimento é mais favorável. Mesmo assim você poderia reduzir aqui também pra ser consistente (caso reduza o primeiro).Eu nerfei essa parte dos sliders 3/4, mas só no primeiro caso.
Boa sorte!Muito obrigado <3
Chihara Minori
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1,2 pattern works, but the current not fit
(if you feel more open about this ill back and give some words)
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