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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月15日 at 1:17:43

Artist: AiRI
Title: Kimi to Tsukuru Mou Hitotsu no Mirai
Source: ここから夏のイノセンス!
Tags: my angel azusa narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BPM: 134
Filesize: 6118kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

Download: AiRI - Kimi to Tsukuru Mou Hitotsu no Mirai
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Hi~
From your Q
Future


Kaedeka's Insane


Narcissu's Hard


Mei's Normal


joker's Easy


That’s all. I like the high voice of AiRI :) gl
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咋回事啊 这就12sp了
M4M:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641285


General
  • EN的spread会比较危险.normal的大ds本身倒还不是问题,但同时加上很多连续1/2的需要移动的clickable物件以及一些过于复杂的节奏就比较难了.


Easy
  • 00:28:439 - add some hitsound would give player more feed back


Normal
  • 见General
  • ar5 spread会更好,并且这是比较难的normal,4稍微低了
  • hitsound过少.这个难度很多地方可以根据跟的音轨来加一些音效,强调所跟的内容,给玩家更强的反馈.比如00:02:917 - 00:03:365 - 00:04:708 - ……这类滑条头没有音效会欠缺一点.
  • 00:28:439 (1,2,3,4) - 这种地方缺得就更加明显.
  • 00:30:454 - 到00:42:992 - 这一段则是finish鼓点过于喧宾夺主,这段音乐比前后两段都轻很多,却用的一样音量,实在有点违和.顺便00:43:663 - 这种地方又是很需要音效但是没有的.
  • 建议再check下整个难度,多考虑一下hitsound,后面音效问题不再说了基本都是类似的
  • 00:54:409 (2) - 不是很有必要跟(至少不需要用clickable的东西跟)的音,过于加大了复杂度
  • 00:58:215 (3) - 换成一个1/1折返或许比较好
  • 01:17:021 (1,2) - 过于弯曲有点不好看
  • 01:33:812 (3) - 这形状在整个难度里看似乎有点突兀
  • 01:41:424 (3,4,5) - 这样的就实在过难了,尤其是easy非常非常简单的情况下,这个东西可以说完全是hard的级别了


Hard
  • 00:15:678 (6) - hard里不是很有必要放的东西.虽说是打头就可以和1/2区别不大,但实际上会给这难度的玩家带来读图上的疑惑.而且我不觉得这个音真的有必要放这种特殊梗
  • 00:16:798 (2,3,4) - 00:20:380 (2,3) - 00:23:962 (2,3,4) - 00:27:544 (2,3) - 虽说是三二三二有规律的顺序,但还是建议统一节奏,因为本来00:20:603 - 等地的音其实就比较响,如果不跟的话也应该统一否则会很奇怪.最好还是全都放上三连,一定要用二连的话也应该在00:20:492 - 等地加上音效,以强调你所跟的轨给玩家以反馈
  • 00:58:215 (3,1) - 这自动堆叠导致的overlap很难看
  • 01:00:230 (6) - 01:03:813 (6) - 01:07:395 (6) - 前面提过,并且这个音我觉得听得很清楚他时值是半拍,蓝线的时候明显还没结束,哪怕不说难度的问题,我也不觉得1/4合适


Insane
  • 开头音效太小了几乎听不到,稍微调大到能听到的程度吧
  • 00:28:439 (8,1,2) - 一个滑条后1/4跳之后是一个3次折返滑条,结尾落在重音上,而00:29:335 - 这里又很轻,这读起来打起来都不太舒服,感觉还是把00:29:111 - 这里拆出来个单点好,毕竟前面你都用了滑条跳
  • 00:41:200 (1,2) - sv很慢,3/4长度本身就不太明显,ds又用跟1/2差不多得,这就比较难读出3/4容易放早,建议近点
  • 00:58:663 (6,1) - 反向感觉这样稍微远了一点(跟后面几个比)
  • 01:42:096 (5) - 感觉还是nc下比较好,毕竟类似地方01:27:768 (1) - 也nc(虽然这里肯定得nc)


Future
  • 00:15:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wokao这里音乐有点unsnap啊……如果修不了的话建议换个音效,因为这个鼓会让unsnap听得更清楚……或者干脆还是删掉00:15:790 (6,7,8) - 这overmap
  • 哇ar8分离串还真是一点良心都没 不过我喜欢
  • 01:45:678 (3) - 加个nc?毕竟你白线前三连都在白线上加了,这里nc能方便读出开始时的节奏

GL
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map is already solid as is so I'm going to be a bit subjective if you don't mind

joker's easy

  • 00:14:335 (3,4) - make slider end clickable? Piano starts there so it sounded like a click is needed
  • 00:23:290 (1) - I don't know if the red anchor is needed. A straight slider is better here, or make it curved like 00:16:126 (1) - since both sounded the same.
  • 00:28:439 (2) - Probably NC. The fact that you use an offbeat out of nowhere might confuse the players. But spamming NC on Easy is not recommended, so your call
  • 00:44:783 (1,2) - Does not look intuitive(maybe the body that made it look like bad flow so i don't know)
  • 01:12:544 (4,5) - Probably zig-zag since the song is at the peak before kiai? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8727735


Mei's Normal


Narcissu Hard
  • Not a fan of these inconsistent spacing. But with the low BPM, I guess this can be tolerated
  • 00:04:484 (3) - Decrease spacing. The vocals pitch is lower there so increasing the spacing sounded absurd
  • 00:11:648 (3) - ^
  • 00:15:678 (6) - I don't know if the blue tick deserves to be a passive beat. A circle fits better here
  • 00:20:380 (2,3) - A bit unexpected when you suddenly use two notes instead of three like you always did before


didn't notice something wrong with the other diffs that deserves a change.

map for m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/623515
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@kunka
super thanks for your mod!!! almost all fixed except adding the two circles because i feel the jumps are fine.
@patamon fixed
@MashaSG it will be too hard lol
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#1 nazi mod

General:


  • Choose different combo colours for every diff

joker's Easy:

  • 00:28:439 (2) - This feels kinda strange, since you wasn't following other sounds than drums in previous section of music at all, I recommend you to place 1/1 reverse slider on 00:28:215 - here
  • 00:55:529 (1) -Better to be consistent here and place red anchor on 00:55:977 - here, because there is a drum + vocal
  • 01:21:947 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is broken here because you placed slider tail on the down beat, fix plz

Everything else is fine I think

Mei's Normal:

  • 00:06:947 (1,2) - Fix blanket plz, it's really weird atm
  • 00:21:051 (4,1) - Why is this stacked, when no other circles stacked in same situations?
  • 00:40:753 (4) - 2 circles is better here since there are 2 strong extra vocal sounds here, not like on previous sliders
  • 01:22:171 (1,2,3) - If you follow strong vocals like you do on first slider, then you should place 3rd slider on 01:23:066 - here and make 01:22:842 (2) - just one circle ( Same here 01:36:499 (1,2,3) - )
  • 01:33:812 (3) - Through the whole KIAI you didn't use sliders like, so be consistent here and make sonething smooth here, like your all previous sliders

Narcissu's Hard:

  • 00:05:156 (4,1) - 00:12:320 (5,1) - Too small spacing in compare with your other spacing to the same slider on down beats
  • 00:20:380 (2,3) - ehh something goes wrong here, I think you forgot to add one circle lul ok this is not an error, but this is really strange and awkward to play, especially in Hard difficulty, I think you should just make triple here and follow actual beats or drums whatever
  • 01:20:156 (5,6) - Too small spacing here, seems too close to each other and clumsy at all

Some of your spacing choices seem not good for me, like it's pretty random I would say: somewhere you do jumps on certain sliders, somewhere not, somewhere you do jumps on non-extra circles etc, but in general seems fine so good job!!

Kaedeka's Insane:

Pretty clean and save mapping, gj!

Future:


Everything else is fine too!



Now you see why I choosed 2 maps at once xd

GL!
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@kunka
im keeping the stuff about 1/2 rhythm pattern now since i dont have any good ideas than present one.

@Pota-Mon
applied it

@Winter Story
fixed only first mention, as i think dont need to fix them since they are not my preference

@MashaSG
fixed only first one. but im not sure about 01:21:947 (3,4,5) - . probably like this rhythm pattern isnt permitted on easy diff?

thanks all!!!

change log
- chose combo colors on my diff
- raised DS from x0.95 to x1.00 for adjustment of diff spread

*1.41
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16126,30454,59111,73439,87768,102096
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:My Angel Azusa
Version:joker's Easy
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス!
Tags:sahuang narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1366198
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.95
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 255,121,188
Combo3 : 66,255,66
Combo4 : 43,255,255

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@kunka:i want to use jump, so i skip 1/4

Pata-Mon wrote:


Hard
  • 00:15:678 (6) - hard里不是很有必要放的东西.虽说是打头就可以和1/2区别不大,但实际上会给这难度的玩家带来读图上的疑惑.而且我不觉得这个音真的有必要放这种特殊梗…… 這很普通 。。
  • 00:16:798 (2,3,4) - 00:20:380 (2,3) - 00:23:962 (2,3,4) - 00:27:544 (2,3) - 虽说是三二三二有规律的顺序,但还是建议统一节奏,因为本来00:20:603 - 等地的音其实就比较响,如果不跟的话也应该统一否则会很奇怪.最好还是全都放上三连,一定要用二连的话也应该在00:20:492 - 等地加上音效,以强调你所跟的轨给玩家以反馈 …… 都一樣太單調
  • 00:58:215 (3,1) - 这自动堆叠导致的overlap很难看……都隔兩秒了早看不見了
  • 01:00:230 (6) - 01:03:813 (6) - 01:07:395 (6) - 前面提过,并且这个音我觉得听得很清楚他时值是半拍,蓝线的时候明显还没结束,哪怕不说难度的问题,我也不觉得1/4合适


Winter Story wrote:

Narcissu Hard
  • Not a fan of these inconsistent spacing. But with the low BPM, I guess this can be tolerated
  • 00:04:484 (3) - Decrease spacing. The vocals pitch is lower there so increasing the spacing sounded absurd……slider-slider is easy
  • 00:11:648 (3) - ^
  • 00:15:678 (6) - I don't know if the blue tick deserves to be a passive beat. A circle fits better here
  • 00:20:380 (2,3) - A bit unexpected when you suddenly use two notes instead of three like you always did before …… fix




MashaSG wrote:
Narcissu's Hard:

  • 00:05:156 (4,1) - 00:12:320 (5,1) - Too small spacing in compare with your other spacing to the same slider on down beats …… In the beginning, I think so
  • 00:20:380 (2,3) - ehh something goes wrong here, I think you forgot to add one circle lul ok this is not an error, but this is really strange and awkward to play, especially in Hard difficulty, I think you should just make triple here and follow actual beats or drums whatever …… ok
  • 01:20:156 (5,6) - Too small spacing here, seems too close to each other and clumsy at all …… fix

Some of your spacing choices seem not good for me, like it's pretty random I would say: somewhere you do jumps on certain sliders, somewhere not, somewhere you do jumps on non-extra circles etc, but in general seems fine so good job!!


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kunka wrote:
Mei's Normal




Pata-Mon wrote:


General
  • EN的spread会比较危险.normal的大ds本身倒还不是问题,但同时加上很多连续1/2的需要移动的clickable物件以及一些过于复杂的节奏就比较难了.




Normal
  • 见General bpm这么低而且1.3也不大
  • ar5 spread会更好,并且这是比较难的normal,4稍微低了
  • hitsound过少.这个难度很多地方可以根据跟的音轨来加一些音效,强调所跟的内容,给玩家更强的反馈.比如00:02:917 - 00:03:365 - 00:04:708 - ……这类滑条头没有音效会欠缺一点.
  • 00:28:439 (1,2,3,4) - 这种地方缺得就更加明显.
  • 00:30:454 - 到00:42:992 - 这一段则是finish鼓点过于喧宾夺主,这段音乐比前后两段都轻很多,却用的一样音量,实在有点违和.顺便00:43:663 - 这种地方又是很需要音效但是没有的.
  • 建议再check下整个难度,多考虑一下hitsound,后面音效问题不再说了基本都是类似的
  • 00:54:409 (2) - 不是很有必要跟(至少不需要用clickable的东西跟)的音,过于加大了复杂度
  • 00:58:215 (3) - 换成一个1/1折返或许比较好长滑条好些
  • 01:17:021 (1,2) - 过于弯曲有点不好看还行
  • 01:33:812 (3) - 这形状在整个难度里看似乎有点突兀
  • 01:41:424 (3,4,5) - 这样的就实在过难了,尤其是easy非常非常简单的情况下,这个东西可以说完全是hard的级别了考虑到后面hard的摆法,我觉得这里并不过分



others are fixed, thanks for modding!
sikao
Code:
osu file format v14

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Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:My Angel Azusa
Version:Mei's Normal
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス!
Tags:sahuang narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
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[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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30454,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
59111,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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116424,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 66,193,255
Combo3 : 164,0,82
Combo4 : 48,62,109

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  • 00:15:230 (4) - Because the 00:15:678 - is strong sound, clickable is desirable. I recommend addition of 3/4slider https://puu.sh/wXPjg.jpg that's really a tempting proposal, but here is a demarcation point of prelude, I want a pause
  • 00:24:186 (6) - I recommend a copy of the 00:24:633 (7) - for symmetry. sure
  • 00:26:424 (6) - ^ copy of 00:25:977 (5) - no thank you
  • 00:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - I feel rhythm to be like hard diff. Because there are many sounds, I recommend the change that is suitable for insane diff. For example https://puu.sh/wXPNi.jpg hmmm, in fact my diff is light insane so you see I can't map too hard, thank you
  • 01:27:432 (2,3,4,1) - tbh, I can watch almost none of the slider :o Because the recognition of the slider is not easy, I recommend a change of the placement. I need more thought , maybe I'll move out for a bit (I can read here maybe because of I'm the creator? lol
  • 01:46:350 (4,5) - why stack? stack is not used in remaining notes. the same with beginning


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  • 开头音效太小了几乎听不到,稍微调大到能听到的程度吧 我觉得完全OK啊233
  • 00:28:439 (8,1,2) - 一个滑条后1/4跳之后是一个3次折返滑条,结尾落在重音上,而00:29:335 - 这里又很轻,这读起来打起来都不太舒服,感觉还是把00:29:111 - 这里拆出来个单点好,毕竟前面你都用了滑条跳
  • 00:41:200 (1,2) - sv很慢,3/4长度本身就不太明显,ds又用跟1/2差不多得,这就比较难读出3/4容易放早,建议近点 改回1/2 本来也很犹豫到底放不放3/4
  • 00:58:663 (6,1) - 反向感觉这样稍微远了一点(跟后面几个比) 当kick无所谓啦超简单的随便一甩就接上了
  • 01:42:096 (5) - 感觉还是nc下比较好,毕竟类似地方01:27:768 (1) - 也nc(虽然这里肯定得nc)


thank you for mod
*add combo colour
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joker's Easy :

Narcissu's Hard :
  • 00:15:678 (6) - Are you sure about that ? I would see more a 1/2 slider here. A 1/4 just cut the song in the middle of that 1/4 rhythm.
  • 00:21:499 (1,2,3,4) - This should use the same spacing than 00:17:917 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:25:081 (1,2,3,4) - , they map the same musical section and should be consistent.
  • 01:00:230 (6) - Same here about the 1/4, you end on nothing enough strong else than the end of the drum, and 01:00:454 - vocal is way more important to map than this. Also sounds a bit off when you play it. Same for 01:03:812 (6) - / 01:07:395 (6) - .
  • Maybe some of your triplet could be changed for reverse slider, imo there's a lot of them, a bit too much.


Kaedeka's Insane :
  • 00:01:126 (1) - That's super disturbing to map this who is really quiet and weak, and then skip all the sounds starting 00:01:350 - from here who are much more important. You don't expect that when you play the diff.
  • The only major issue on this diff is how you handle spacing for your 1/4 jumps on kiai. They looks too much like some of your 1/2 spacing like 01:15:230 (1,2) - . Imo you should reduce a bit them in order to get a better reading about what is 1/4 and 1/2 (look at Future diff too see an example). Also they're super inconsistent (just look at 01:13:439 (1,2) - / 01:14:335 (4,5) - , there's 1.40x difference between them for no reason).
  • 01:42:208 (1) - Could you end that spinner at 01:45:454 - to give some room before restart the next section ? 1/4 recover is a bit short here imo.


Future :
  • 00:58:551 (4,1) - Could you avoid the small gap ? Imo that's not necessary, the rhythm don't call for it and it don't really fit that type of song.
  • 01:03:141 (1) - End it on 01:03:365 - , the vocal beat is way more strong and intuitive to play here, and you did a 1/2 here 01:06:723 (1) - for the same sound.
  • 01:12:320 (4,5) - Vocal stoped to have increasing intensity, so spacing should be the same than 01:12:096 (3,4) - (also feels a bit forced imo but meh).
  • 01:55:864 (4,1) - Can I ask for a bit less spaced ? ;w;


The video seems a bit edgy at some points, maybe get confirmation it's fine ?
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joker's Easy :
  • 00:29:559 (4) - Clap should be on the end. removed sumpleset:d then added clap
  • 00:30:454 - I disagree a lot with the rhythm you choosed to use here. You missing a lot of stong beats like 00:32:245 - / 00:35:827 - / etc... who shouldn't be passive due to vocal and drum on them. Also I don't understand why 00:30:454 (1,2) - should have a different rhythm than 00:34:036 (1,2) - , that's inconsistent on it structure. I personnally prefer smth like https://puu.sh/x4gM3/4370c607f6.png who fit more the song overall. Hmm... i preferred current rhythm patterns although as you said, it's more suitable in term of readable by intuition. i changed that you suggested the rhythm on the whole(00:30:454 - 00:44:335 - ). And at the next section(00:44:783 - 00:58:663 - ), i used another rhythm that is placed alternately 1/2 reverse slider and 1/1 slider to avoid monotonousness
  • Also if you don't plan to change it for x reasons, at least swap stuff like 00:39:857 (3,4) - to get the vocal beat on 00:40:753 - clickable. same as above
  • 01:47:469 (3,3) - Why they're different ? They cover the same type of sound. since they are consistency with first section (00:07:171 (3,3) - )



thanks for checking Nozhomi~
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Nozhomi wrote:


Kaedeka's Insane :
  • 00:01:126 (1) - That's super disturbing to map this who is really quiet and weak, and then skip all the sounds starting 00:01:350 - from here who are much more important. You don't expect that when you play the diff. so here does anything matter?
  • The only major issue on this diff is how you handle spacing for your 1/4 jumps on kiai. They looks too much like some of your 1/2 spacing like 01:15:230 (1,2) - . Imo you should reduce a bit them in order to get a better reading about what is 1/4 and 1/2 (look at Future diff too see an example). Also they're super inconsistent (just look at 01:13:439 (1,2) - / 01:14:335 (4,5) - , there's 1.40x difference between them for no reason). check the KIAI part and almost fixed, my bad
  • 01:42:208 (1) - Could you end that spinner at 01:45:454 - to give some room before restart the next section ? 1/4 recover is a bit short here imo. I don't think here is any problem in insane diff

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Narcissu's Hard :
  • 00:15:678 (6) - Are you sure about that ? I would see more a 1/2 slider here. A 1/4 just cut the song in the middle of that 1/4 rhythm. …… no, i follow drum .. . ..
  • 00:21:499 (1,2,3,4) - This should use the same spacing than 00:17:917 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:25:081 (1,2,3,4) - , they map the same musical section and should be consistent. …… i made them more like each other, i think “same” is unnecessary ...
  • 01:00:230 (6) - Same here about the 1/4, you end on nothing enough strong else than the end of the drum, and 01:00:454 - vocal is way more important to map than this. Also sounds a bit off when you play it. Same for 01:03:812 (6) - / 01:07:395 (6) - .
  • Maybe some of your triplet could be changed for reverse slider, imo there's a lot of them, a bit too much. …… i agree .. i replace some, but most triplet is 2note + slider, i want to keep dense rhythm :?



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All fixed and updated. Also deleted video because it's NSFW....................it's so fking sad
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