M2U - Myosotis [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

JierYagtama

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-07-21T08:55:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 18, 2018 at 9:43:44 AM

Artist: M2U
Title: Myosotis
Source: Deemo
Tags: NICODE Guriri Lucy rayark Mobile collection Vol. 2 Magnolia forget-me-not Razor Sharp Finshie Album Diversity
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5981kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:

Finshie's LV 5 (1.95 stars, 208 notes)
LV 11 (4.62 stars, 457 notes)
LV 9 (3.34 stars, 325 notes)
Rain (4.44 stars, 443 notes)
Razor's Si Nos Amas, Serva Nos (5.72 stars, 457 notes)

Download: M2U - Myosotis
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Thanks to AJamezzzz for helping out alot on the ctb diffs

Hitsounds, Metadata, and MP3 taken from Deif's Mapset also took the ctb bgs over here https://hans-the-deemo.tumblr.com/image/128293723829
Also the spread on the std diffs are glitched out lo https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1366250&m=0

If you're asking about the diff names then its from Deemo.

Difficulties

LV 5 - Finshie senpai
LV 9 - Me
LV 11 - Me
Rain - Me
Overdose - Razor senpai

Last edited by JierYagtama 2018-02-18T01:44:14+00:00, edited 127 times in total.

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-07-23T12:56:06+00:00

a

14:17 JeirYagtama: would u mind if u can chek the insane of the map I sent earlier?
14:17 My Angel Kanan: i check it 
14:17 My Angel Kanan: owo
14:18 JeirYagtama: owo
14:19 My Angel Kanan: 00:16:517 (1) - 
14:19 My Angel Kanan: i mean
14:19 My Angel Kanan: you make a lot of nice rhythms with it
14:19 My Angel Kanan: or
14:19 My Angel Kanan: at this point
14:20 My Angel Kanan: but I would understand if you want to keep it
14:20 My Angel Kanan: 00:19:517 (1,2) - 
14:20 JeirYagtama: ill keep it cos i dun wanna increase the sr
14:20 My Angel Kanan: the high spacing is unexpected af
14:21 My Angel Kanan: at least making it linear would be better while playing 
14:21 JeirYagtama: didnt really affect gameplay according to testplays
14:22 JeirYagtama: also 2 is really loud piano sound
14:22 JeirYagtama: so its kind of objective
14:22 My Angel Kanan: 00:24:298 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
14:22 My Angel Kanan: this should be consistent with 
14:23 My Angel Kanan: 00:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
14:23 My Angel Kanan: and
14:23 My Angel Kanan: 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
14:23 My Angel Kanan: i mean 
14:23 My Angel Kanan: in last from the 3
14:23 My Angel Kanan: you priority the 3 
14:23 JeirYagtama: which one
14:23 My Angel Kanan: 00:24:298 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
14:24 My Angel Kanan: while other 2 streams
14:24 My Angel Kanan: emphasize 2
14:24 JeirYagtama: hmm
14:24 JeirYagtama: ill take it
14:24 My Angel Kanan: 00:25:517 (1) - 
14:24 My Angel Kanan: chinese 
14:25 My Angel Kanan: :eyes:
14:25 My Angel Kanan: 00:25:517 (1,2) - 
14:25 My Angel Kanan: blanket
14:25 JeirYagtama: fixed desu
14:28 My Angel Kanan:   00:27:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
14:28 My Angel Kanan: Hi kroytz
14:28 JeirYagtama: o wat
14:29 My Angel Kanan: lol
14:30 My Angel Kanan: the actual wubs are undermapped
14:30 JeirYagtama: wer?
14:30 My Angel Kanan: 01:23:267 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - 
14:30 My Angel Kanan: xd
14:30 My Angel Kanan: like
14:30 My Angel Kanan: the 1/2 
14:31 My Angel Kanan: some of them can be emphasised as 1/4
14:32 JeirYagtama: 01:23:267 (1,2,1,2) - likw these?
14:32 My Angel Kanan: ye
14:32 JeirYagtama: on that part
14:32 JeirYagtama: not sure what rhythm to use
14:34 My Angel Kanan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8663092
14:34 My Angel Kanan: something like this
14:34 My Angel Kanan: from rhythm
14:34 My Angel Kanan: not placement 
14:35 JeirYagtama: rafis skin
14:35 JeirYagtama: lo
14:36 My Angel Kanan: lo
14:36 JeirYagtama: uhhh can u hl the part?
14:36 My Angel Kanan:  01:23:267 (8,9,10,11) - 
14:37 JeirYagtama: I mean in le screenshot
14:37 JeirYagtama: can u hl what rhythm u changed
14:37 My Angel Kanan: this is the one 
14:37 My Angel Kanan: the timestep is the same time from the ss
14:38 JeirYagtama: hmm
14:41 JeirYagtama: fak this
14:43 JeirYagtama: yea
14:43 JeirYagtama: its better
14:43 JeirYagtama: ill take it
14:44 My Angel Kanan:  idk
14:44 My Angel Kanan: liek
14:44 My Angel Kanan: the strimm shapes
14:44 My Angel Kanan: are pretty messy
14:48 JeirYagtama: ofc it is
14:48 JeirYagtama: its mapped according to the pitches and intensity of le sound
14:49 My Angel Kanan: okay
14:49 My Angel Kanan: owo
14:50 My Angel Kanan: boi
14:50 My Angel Kanan: n,h,i set?
14:50 JeirYagtama: besides its more on the piano and wubs that the stream shapes are leik dat
14:50 My Angel Kanan: or e,n,h,i set?
14:50 JeirYagtama: welp if someone is willing to make e also
14:50 My Angel Kanan: hi
14:51 My Angel Kanan: im the dud
14:51 My Angel Kanan: for a e
14:51 JeirYagtama: guess I'll ask aki for the normal
14:51 JeirYagtama: and memes :^
14:52 My Angel Kanan: A R I G A T O  F O R  P P  A K I T O S H I S  N O R M A L 
14:52 JeirYagtama: welp thats all?
14:52 My Angel Kanan: Ye
14:53 My Angel Kanan: I suck at modding insane
14:53 My Angel Kanan: i can't even map them properly 
14:53 JeirYagtama: o
14:53 JeirYagtama: u can send this in le forums if ye want

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-07-24T16:08:28+00:00

normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43517
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Myosotis
TitleUnicode:Myosotis
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:JeirYagtama
Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:Deemo
Tags:NICODE Guriri Lucy rayark Mobile collection Vol. 2 Magnolia forget-me-not
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-07-29T09:22:43+00:00

Hi, as you helped me so here's my return :3
[General]
• Why count down on Finshie's and Hard diff D:
[Insane]
• You have 2 overlapping timing points on 01:18:017 - and 01:41:267- tho. Consider deleting them
• 00:01:517 (1) - I'd like to see some slider shape improvement here, like this maybe? http://puu.sh/wW4at/2e12e4d98b.jpg
• 00:04:517 (1) - Same. The first curve is a bit too much, which makes the slider path look bad tho
• 00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - I don't get why you have the spacing increase while pitch going down. Maybe change them
• 00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same, both vocal and piano were going down, that's why I'm confused
• 00:12:017 (1,2) - hmm ok symmetrical is good, but the way they overlap each other feels pretty bad.
• 00:19:517 - to 00:21:392 - you used a very confusing spacing here. Except for aesthetics, any other specific reason for it? I think just aesthetics won't convince me tho, as there're many easier ways to read than this
• 00:33:767 (3,4,5,6) - ewww have a proper square please
• 00:37:142 (2) - 00:41:642 (4) - This should be 2 circles for sure, if youre trying to follow the vocal
• 01:00:298 (1,4) - Ok I don't think creating your own rhythm using hitsound is a good idea, as it brings different feedback for players than what they should have imo
• 01:19:423 (4,5) - 1/4 slider? I think it fits the music more
• 01:19:892 (1,2,1,2) - those should be ctrl+g like this http://puu.sh/wW4oX/f160bbce63.jpg as the pitch goes down but you made spacing goes up instead
• 01:26:267 (3) - right above, you NCed, but not here?
• 01:43:517 (1) - 01:46:517 (5,2,3,4) - stacking please uwu

Insane contains very much edgy stream shape, which I don't think are nice, as you might have to struggle tapping them. I see some edgy streams you made early was for piano am I right? But eventho, you should make them less edgy, and sometimes smooth instead, only the edgy wubs would be enough. That's it I guess. It'd be great to see you polish this map more. Good luck :3

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-07-30T11:59:31+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi, as you helped me so here's my return :3
[General]
• Why count down on Finshie's and Hard diff D:
[Insane]
• You have 2 overlapping timing points on 01:18:017 - and 01:41:267- tho. Consider deleting them w e l p
• 00:01:517 (1) - I'd like to see some slider shape improvement here, like this maybe? http://puu.sh/wW4at/2e12e4d98b.jpg Sure xd
• 00:04:517 (1) - Same. The first curve is a bit too much, which makes the slider path look bad tho adjusted the curve a bit
• 00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - I don't get why you have the spacing increase while pitch going down. Maybe change them ops fixed
• 00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same, both vocal and piano were going down, that's why I'm confused Its more on the intensity of the sound than the pitch this time sooo im keepin this
• 00:12:017 (1,2) - hmm ok symmetrical is good, but the way they overlap each other feels pretty bad. hmm kinda overlapped the start of the sliders instead
• 00:19:517 - to 00:21:392 - you used a very confusing spacing here. Except for aesthetics, any other specific reason for it? I think just aesthetics won't convince me tho, as there're many easier ways to read than this Yes its for aesthetics but the spacing is based on how strong the note is like 00:21:392 (4,5,6,1) - after 4 comes on a really strong sound thus i made the spacing stand out more
• 00:33:767 (3,4,5,6) - ewww have a proper square please ops fixed xd
• 00:37:142 (2) - 00:41:642 (4) - This should be 2 circles for sure, if youre trying to follow the vocal kinda followin piano here more than vocals soo yea
• 01:00:298 (1,4) - Ok I don't think creating your own rhythm using hitsound is a good idea, as it brings different feedback for players than what they should have imo I dont see any problem with this since so far my testplays didnt have any problems playing that stream
• 01:19:423 (4,5) - 1/4 slider? I think it fits the music more Hmmm I think the 2 circles fit more for me than the 1/4
• 01:19:892 (1,2,1,2) - those should be ctrl+g like this http://puu.sh/wW4oX/f160bbce63.jpg as the pitch goes down but you made spacing goes up instead Sure ill take it xd
• 01:26:267 (3) - right above, you NCed, but not here? [color=#0040FF0]ops fixed xd [/color]
• 01:43:517 (1) - 01:46:517 (5,2,3,4) - stacking please uwu wew

Insane contains very much edgy stream shape, which I don't think are nice, as you might have to struggle tapping them. I see some edgy streams you made early was for piano am I right? But eventho, you should make them less edgy, and sometimes smooth instead, only the edgy wubs would be enough. That's it I guess. It'd be great to see you polish this map more. Good luck :3

About the edgy stream shapes the concept for that is in the game where this song came from siiiinnncceee those streams are mooorreee edgy in the game via the Hard diff for Deemo Im keepin the shapes as they are since Im trying to make this diff a little bit similar to Deemo's diff in this Insane diff also I'll just rename this as LV 11 since its the hardest diff in the song for Deemo xd

Didnt expect you to mod this buuuuttt thank you thank you sooooo much for the mod Yami~

Hecs

13 posts

Joined September 2015

Hecs 2017-07-30T14:10:15+00:00

noob mod sry
sC0rP1on GrASS

00:03:017 (2) - since this circle starts where the slider ended 00:05:642 (2) - i prefer this one to do the same
00:10:517 (3) - I'd ctrl g
00:12:579 - 00:13:329 - mute these sliderends
00:16:423 - mute this spinner end as well
00:21:767 (1,2) - these could use some more velocity. I hear intanse saounds
00:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I get the messy stream gimmick but tidy this one up a bit
00:24:767 (1,2,3,4) - lil bit more velocity
00:25:329 (4) - jumping from this slider to this one 00:25:517 (1) - doesn't feel comfortable. try to improve the flow here
00:36:579 (5,6,1) - I don't really get where this triple is coming from. What's worse is that it'll easily be noticed cuz there's an upcoming triple that actually has sounds supporting it 00:38:079 (6,7,8) -
00:41:267 (3) - idk but i think it looks and feels a lot better facing right instead of left
00:51:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part seems bland despite having the singer reach those high notes.... although I think you left it on purpose for the sake of overlaps and neatness and stuff. Still, I think this part needs more versatility. Maybe increase velocity or spacing
01:02:267 (3) - needs moar curve
01:18:017 (1) - https://puu.sh/wWZHe/983c8ca8b4.PNG u can make it cleaner https://puu.sh/wWZHg/3eb95decb5.PNG
01:18:767 (1) - ^
01:22:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why a stream? I hear three kicksliders
01:31:329 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8719191 this type of pattern suits the song better imo
01:34:235 (6) - this circle doesn't really need to be here. you only hear up to 5 of those lil synthesizer sounds. they stop there
01:34:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - once again I hear three kicksliders instead of stream
01:35:923 (4) - circle doesn't need to be there
01:36:017 (5,6) - let these two sliders have the same velocity as 01:33:017 (1,2) -
01:39:954 (5) - this is not enough to represent that wub xd
01:40:704 (1,4) - you can improve on slider shapes
01:57:017 (1,2) - cool visuals but jumping to the next slider is reaaaally itchy
You usually let the objects stop a half beat before the spinner. just like in 00:13:517 (1) and 01:15:017 (1)
so why not place a circle here 01:15:017 (1) - and then start the spinner here 02:07:610 (1) for a good finale

i leik ur map
yo r n1ce mapper
keep it up pogi

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-07-30T15:03:40+00:00

Hecs wrote:
noob mod sry
sC0rP1on GrASS

00:03:017 (2) - since this circle starts where the slider ended 00:05:642 (2) - i prefer this one to do the same The intensity from 00:03:017 (2) - to here 00:05:642 (2) - has a noticable difference in intensity so thats why I made it like that
00:10:517 (3) - I'd ctrl g Kinda think this fits more for me soo
00:12:579 - 00:13:329 - mute these sliderends hmm sure
00:16:423 - mute this spinner end as well color=#0040FF]hmm sure [/color]
00:21:767 (1,2) - these could use some more velocity. I hear intanse saounds sure why not
00:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I get the messy stream gimmick but tidy this one up a bit adjusted it a bit
00:24:767 (1,2,3,4) - lil bit more velocity oke
00:25:329 (4) - jumping from this slider to this one 00:25:517 (1) - doesn't feel comfortable. try to improve the flow here adjusted it a bit
00:36:579 (5,6,1) - I don't really get where this triple is coming from. What's worse is that it'll easily be noticed cuz there's an upcoming triple that actually has sounds supporting it 00:38:079 (6,7,8) - faint piano boi
00:41:267 (3) - idk but i think it looks and feels a lot better facing right instead of left that would kind of make the symmetrical pattern im goin to for to fall apart
00:51:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part seems bland despite having the singer reach those high notes.... although I think you left it on purpose for the sake of overlaps and neatness and stuff. Still, I think this part needs more versatility. Maybe increase velocity or spacing I think the pattern is ok as it is since I think it clearly emphasizes the vocals well
01:02:267 (3) - needs moar curve again would kind of break the symmetrical pattern im goin for soo
01:18:017 (1) - https://puu.sh/wWZHe/983c8ca8b4.PNG u can make it cleaner https://puu.sh/wWZHg/3eb95decb5.PNG oke
01:18:767 (1) - ^ oke
01:22:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why a stream? I hear three kicksliders to make 01:23:267 (1,2,3) - stand out more
01:31:329 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8719191 this type of pattern suits the song better imo that would ruin consistency of rhythm with what I did with 01:19:329 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:34:235 (6) - this circle doesn't really need to be here. you only hear up to 5 of those lil synthesizer sounds. they stop there for consistency with 01:22:048 (3,4,5,1) -
01:34:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - once again I hear three kicksliders instead of stream same reason on what I did above
01:35:923 (4) - circle doesn't need to be there forconsistency on rhythm
01:36:017 (5,6) - let these two sliders have the same velocity as 01:33:017 (1,2) - its a low wubzz sound thus low sv
01:39:954 (5) - this is not enough to represent that wub xd added another kickslider
01:40:704 (1,4) - you can improve on slider shapes Improved it a bit
01:57:017 (1,2) - cool visuals but jumping to the next slider is reaaaally itchy On purpose since I think itll let u feel the sound of the violin
You usually let the objects stop a half beat before the spinner. just like in 00:13:517 (1) and 01:15:017 (1)
so why not place a circle here 01:15:017 (1) - and then start the spinner here 02:07:610 (1) for a good finale sure why not xd

i leik ur map
yo r n1ce mapper thx u poe koya xd
keep it up pogi

Mordred

532 posts

Joined October 2015

Mordred 2017-07-30T15:57:28+00:00

nazi mod inc

top diff

ar9 - _ -

00:01:517 (1,2) - this stack is off by a pixel and it triggers me

00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - looks nicer if all of those have 0.5x DS

00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - should be more like 00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - if you're not gonna change those

00:13:517 (1) - could end the spinner at 00:16:517 - instead so you can hitsound that, or at least have that beat some feedback

00:21:767 (1) - higher SV pls, right now it's the same as 00:22:142 (2) -

00:27:767 (1,2) - circles are fit better here imo

00:30:017 (7) - NC

00:30:110 (1) - silence spinner end pls

00:51:017 (1,3) - reeeee

01:06:017 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - all of these should be 1/2 sliders, there are still beats on the red ticks

01:15:017 - add a circle

01:15:017 (1) - silence spinner pls

01:17:923 - this timing section doesn't do anything?

01:24:579 (2) - nc

01:34:329 (7) - nc, this is the only time the slider after a 1/4 jump doesn't have a new combo

01:40:329 (8) - objects end not snapped, remember to check AImod kids

01:41:267 (4) - nc

01:51:017 (4) - and 01:51:767 (2) - should stand out a bit more, as they are stronger beats than the rest of 01:50:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -

01:55:048 (4,5) - the jump here is unnecessary, the kickslider already adds enough emphasis

02:07:517 - where is my circle - _ -

02:07:517 (1) - silence spinner end

dont really like how the 1/4 jumps are done, 01:19:704 (7,1) - shit like this is 1/2 but has less spacing than 01:23:173 (7,1) - for example, so ye

rest is nice

some of the stuff I mentioned also applies to lv11
also AImod is complaining about DS in Finshie's diff

gl with your set

Ashmar

54 posts

Joined August 2015

Ashmar 2017-07-30T17:35:47+00:00

LV 11
00:25:517 (1) - I am kinda triggered about how this slider isn't symmetrical.
00:29:267 (2) - This has too much of a curve which makes it look a bit weird. Having it like this might look better: https://puu.sh/wX7Hq/7bf3b5db0f.png
00:34:142 (4) - having this slider face into 00:34:517 (5) instead of 00:33:767 (3) would look better and not so random imo: https://puu.sh/wX7IF/7f1747e107.png
00:35:267 (1,2) - (OPTIONAL) These 2 sliders could use more curve, but this is optional so you could just ignore this one: https://puu.sh/wX7JK/501811a601.png
00:36:767 (5) - The vocals here are long and you can as well put a slider there till 00:37:048 rather than clicking once holding would play better.
00:40:517 (1,2,3) - Even though I understand the reasoning behind this. the spacing might be too high for a hard map.
It doesn't have to go anyways.
00:45:767 (7) - Why is this slider higher than 00:45:017 (5) >.<
00:46:329 (8) - Fix blanket with 00:45:767 (7)
00:46:517 (1) - I think ctrl+h and blanketing it with 00:46:329 (8) might look and play better.
00:50:267 (3) - Same as 00:46:517 (1) but I guess changing it requires too much work to be done, so let it be I guess.
00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These look better without the small curve. Just let them be straight sliders.
00:57:017 (5) - ctrl+g this was such a chance for a nice flow, but it can't be helped now.
01:02:079 (2) - I demand blanket.
01:02:267 (3) - ctrl+h again, but this one would work if you blanket 01:02:829 (4,1) - behind it, but same as always a lot would have to be remapped then.
So just leave it be.
01:09:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I get that this is a wub map, but the spacing doesn't really appeal. ofc this is just an opinion.
01:20:642 (1) - This slider doesn't have the same space between the sliderbody as 01:19:892 (1,2) do.
If you don't understand my bad english then these sliders are a good example of well done spacing 01:24:017 (1,1,1)
01:36:860 (2) - having a circle here would make it more comfortable to play, cause of the sound on the blue tick before 01:36:954 (2)
01:54:954 (1,2,3,4) - might this not be a bit confusing for players?

The ending is nice so that was that for this diff
Nice map. I know most of the things I listed above have a reason, but I have no further experience with modding than this shit mod :^>

Scorpion Grass
00:10:142 (2) - I am mad you see why...blanket the circle with slider 00:09:017 (1) check approach circle to see whether it is correct.
00:19:892 (2) - I'll overlook the blanket on this one >.<
00:21:017 (3) - straight slider looks good.
00:21:767 (1,2,1) - Straight slider looks good.
00:33:392 (2) - using ctrl+g to reverse this slider might play better.
00:38:267 (8,9,1) - If these sliders were in a pattern they would have looked good together(sliderends could have made nice triangle)
00:46:329 (2) - check blanket.
00:58:329 (4) - ^
01:08:267 (3) - spacing doesn't match other sliders. mainly the blanket of the sliderend in the curve. This explanation was a bit butchered, so here a picture: https://puu.sh/wX7FH/84ea4ba676.png
01:31:892 (1,2,1,2) - would look better if they spaced the same.
01:46:892 (6) - Having this slider be the same as 01:46:517 (5) looks better. In short..copy paste.
01:52:517 (3) - This slider doesn't blanket 01:51:954 (3) very well.
01:57:017 (1) - Blanket issues with 01:56:642 (2) check approach circle.

Not really related to any maps, but having the black box in the storyboard that appears at the kiai part slowly fade away might look nicer than suddenly go away.

Also a lot of streams could have been spaced higher to emphasize intensity of a part.

Never agree with an amateur tho.
Since I was already stalking your maps I have nothing to say..
(good map)
Bye.

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-07-31T08:25:06+00:00

Mordred wrote:
nazi mod inc

top diff

ar9 - _ -

00:01:517 (1,2) - this stack is off by a pixel and it triggers me haha woah man

00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - looks nicer if all of those have 0.5x DS weellllpppp im keepin it cos Ithink it fits the song here

00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - should be more like 00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - if you're not gonna change those noticable change in intesity u kno

00:13:517 (1) - could end the spinner at 00:16:517 - instead so you can hitsound that, or at least have that beat some feedback hmmm I think this is a minor issue to deal with and doesnt affect gameplay that much sooo im keepin it

00:21:767 (1) - higher SV pls, right now it's the same as 00:22:142 (2) - hmmm I think I wanna keep this since I think I already made the sv for that section higher as suggested from th last mod

00:27:767 (1,2) - circles are fit better here imo would kind of break the consistency of rhythm im going for 00:21:767 (1,2) -

00:30:017 (7) - NC aight

00:30:110 (1) - silence spinner end pls kiiinndd of ended the slider with a faint piano sound like in Deif's map of it

00:51:017 (1,3) - reeeee that is hardly noticable in gameplay sooo no

01:06:017 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - all of these should be 1/2 sliders, there are still beats on the red ticks Im mapping the dropbeat not the paino and its kind of too faint to even map it for me

01:15:017 - add a circle syure

01:15:017 (1) - silence spinner pls syure

01:17:923 - this timing section doesn't do anything? fixed

01:24:579 (2) - nc fixed

01:34:329 (7) - nc, this is the only time the slider after a 1/4 jump doesn't have a new combo[ color=#0040FF]fixed [/color]

01:40:329 (8) - objects end not snapped, remember to check AImod kids fixed

01:41:267 (4) - nc [ color=#0040FF]fixed [/color]

01:51:017 (4) - and 01:51:767 (2) - should stand out a bit more, as they are stronger beats than the rest of 01:50:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think the already stand out fine since it indicates to the their next circles that the flow will change

01:55:048 (4,5) - the jump here is unnecessary, the kickslider already adds enough emphasis aight -

02:07:517 - where is my circle - _ -
fiinnnneee -

02:07:517 (1) - silence spinner end fiinnnneee -

dont really like how the 1/4 jumps are done, 01:19:704 (7,1) - shit like this is 1/2 but has less spacing than 01:23:173 (7,1) - for example, so ye
kind of removed the circles with the blue ticks to balance out the spacing a bit
rest is nice

some of the stuff I mentioned also applies to lv11
also AImod is complaining about DS in Finshie's diff

gl with your set

thx for le mod~

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-07-31T08:54:48+00:00

Ashmar wrote:
LV 11
00:25:517 (1) - I am kinda triggered about how this slider isn't symmetrical. not everything has to be symmetrical to emphasize the note im mappig here since the red node clearly empasizes the sudden loud sound then later on the sound kind of gets lower quickly
00:29:267 (2) - This has too much of a curve which makes it look a bit weird. Having it like this might look better: https://puu.sh/wX7Hq/7bf3b5db0f.png this is kind of a subjective thing to mod so im keeping this cos this works out more to emphasize the note im mapping here
00:34:142 (4) - having this slider face into 00:34:517 (5) instead of 00:33:767 (3) would look better and not so random imo: https://puu.sh/wX7IF/7f1747e107.png
ill take it
00:35:267 (1,2) - (OPTIONAL) These 2 sliders could use more curve, but this is optional so you could just ignore this one: https://puu.sh/wX7JK/501811a601.png low vocals sounds thus I mapped it only a little curve
00:36:767 (5) - The vocals here are long and you can as well put a slider there till 00:37:048 rather than clicking once holding would play better. mapping piano there so no
00:40:517 (1,2,3) - Even though I understand the reasoning behind this. the spacing might be too high for a hard map. might consider if more peeps point this out more
It doesn't have to go anyways.
00:45:767 (7) - Why is this slider higher than 00:45:017 (5) >.< really minor issue buuuttt intensity of vocals here boi lo
00:46:329 (8) - Fix blanket with 00:45:767 (7) Blanket is fine for me lo
00:46:517 (1) - I think ctrl+h and blanketing it with 00:46:329 (8) might look and play better. kiinndd of a spacing inconsistency if I take your suggestion here sorry : (
00:50:267 (3) - Same as 00:46:517 (1) but I guess changing it requires too much work to be done, so let it be I guess. same as above
00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These look better without the small curve. Just let them be straight sliders. another subjective thing to mod anndd ill say this again I think this fits more to me for the map
00:57:017 (5) - ctrl+g this was such a chance for a nice flow, but it can't be helped now. vocals gets a little lower there thus mapped and flows like that
01:02:079 (2) - I demand blanket. uhh not a blanket lo
01:02:267 (3) - ctrl+h again, but this one would work if you blanket 01:02:829 (4,1) - behind it, but same as always a lot would have to be remapped then.
So just leave it be. yea ill leave it be as you suggested it xd
01:09:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I get that this is a wub map, but the spacing doesn't really appeal. ofc this is just an opinion. Im not the type of mapper to always put equidistance all over the map sooo get used to it boi
01:20:642 (1) - This slider doesn't have the same space between the sliderbody as 01:19:892 (1,2) do. So what? what you mentioned had completely different sounds thus different spacing
If you don't understand my bad english then these sliders are a good example of well done spacing 01:24:017 (1,1,1)
01:36:860 (2) - having a circle here would make it more comfortable to play, cause of the sound on the blue tick before 01:36:954 (2) It hink the triple over here fits
01:54:954 (1,2,3,4) - might this not be a bit confusing for players? not really for me imo

The ending is nice so that was that for this diff
Nice map. I know most of the things I listed above have a reason, but I have no further experience with modding than this shit mod :^>

Scorpion Grass
00:10:142 (2) - I am mad you see why...blanket the circle with slider 00:09:017 (1) check approach circle to see whether it is correct. I dont get your defnition of blankets lo
00:19:892 (2) - I'll overlook the blanket on this one >.< fixed
00:21:017 (3) - straight slider looks good. subjeeecttiivveee
00:21:767 (1,2,1) - Straight slider looks good. subjeeecttiivveee
00:33:392 (2) - using ctrl+g to reverse this slider might play better. sure
00:38:267 (8,9,1) - If these sliders were in a pattern they would have looked good together(sliderends could have made nice triangle) but they arent
00:46:329 (2) - check blanket. blanket looks fine to me
00:58:329 (4) - ^ ^
01:08:267 (3) - spacing doesn't match other sliders. mainly the blanket of the sliderend in the curve. This explanation was a bit butchered, so here a picture: https://puu.sh/wX7FH/84ea4ba676.png wew thats hardly noticable in gameplay anyways soo
01:31:892 (1,2,1,2) - would look better if they spaced the same. I have that feeling the the next kicksliders feel more intense than the last ones sooo
01:46:892 (6) - Having this slider be the same as 01:46:517 (5) looks better. In short..copy paste. oke
01:52:517 (3) - This slider doesn't blanket 01:51:954 (3) very well. fixed
01:57:017 (1) - Blanket issues with 01:56:642 (2) check approach circle. you really had no other stuff to point out than blankets do ya? and that is really unoticable in gameplay lmao

Not really related to any maps, but having the black box in the storyboard that appears at the kiai part slowly fade away might look nicer than suddenly go away.

Also a lot of streams could have been spaced higher to emphasize intensity of a part.

Never agree with an amateur tho.
Since I was already stalking your maps I have nothing to say..
(good map)
Bye.

thx for the mod bud

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2017-07-31T12:18:22+00:00

how2mod

[Scorpio Glass]

00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - is there any reason this should be decreasing in ds.. even so it looks wonky
00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:10:517 (3) - following the pattern, there should be a NC here
00:28:517 (3) - mb copy and rotate this to make it neat
00:37:517 (3,4,5) - there's no strong sound between or among this three.. make them equally spaced(like 00:39:767 (3,4,5) - )
00:57:767 (3) - i dunno. either copy and rotate 00:57:017 (1) - to this or do it the other way around. i thought it's weird visually that the shape suddenly changed
01:09:767 (5) - sound again doesn't change and this went short on spacing.. why not keep the back-forth motion with this one too
02:00:767 (4) - this slider emphasizes the same sound with 01:58:517 (1,1,1) - but why is it underemphasized here. mb ctrl+g or smth and while u did that add nc as well

the stream shapes looks no ugly but rather weird. i would point things out in the kiai more but i dunno how to word it and it would just be me enforcing my own mapping style.

[Lv 11]

00:03:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same thing i've mentioned in scorpion glass
01:23:267 (1,2,3,4) - for the target audience of this diff, this is definitely a no-go lol. just make it a 1/4 return
01:35:267 (1,2,1,2) - and these too
01:40:517 (9) - and this. just make this into 2 circles

i don't know or map Hards but im p sure 1/4 wizardries are a no-go there.

[Finshie's Lv 9]

00:30:017 (1) - maybe nc for readability. you did it with 00:13:517 (1) - anyway
01:03:767 (3) - dsnap this

nothing much to find ~~or i just don't know how to mod normals~~

dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Finshie

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Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-07-31T13:49:26+00:00

domSaur wrote:
how2mod

[Finshie's Lv 9]
00:30:017 (1) - maybe nc for readability. you did it with 00:13:517 (1) - anyway doing nc every 2 measures thats why i nc'd at 00:13:517 (1) - . moved down 00:30:017 (3) - for readability instead.
01:03:767 (3) - dsnap this whoops fixed

nothing much to find ~~or i just don't know how to mod normals~~
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

update

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JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-08-01T09:35:15+00:00

domSaur wrote:
how2mod

[Scorpio Glass]
00:03:017 (2,3,4,5) - is there any reason this should be decreasing in ds.. even so it looks wonky - to emphasize vocals on intensity
00:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:10:517 (3) - following the pattern, there should be a NC here aight
00:28:517 (3) - mb copy and rotate this to make it neat aight
00:37:517 (3,4,5) - there's no strong sound between or among this three.. make them equally spaced(like 00:39:767 (3,4,5) - ) piano boi
00:57:767 (3) - i dunno. either copy and rotate 00:57:017 (1) - to this or do it the other way around. i thought it's weird visually that the shape suddenly changed hmmm Ill keep this since I think the curve represents the sudden increase of volume of the vocals
01:09:767 (5) - sound again doesn't change and this went short on spacing.. why not keep the back-forth motion with this one too it does to me doe listen closely its a big white tick and drops on a strong sound unlike the other beats
02:00:767 (4) - this slider emphasizes the same sound with 01:58:517 (1,1,1) - but why is it underemphasized here. mb ctrl+g or smth and while u did that add nc as well not really since those two sliders emphasizes vocals annnddd I dont think an NC is needed here cos 02:01:517 (1) - a more prominent sound to NC

the stream shapes looks no ugly but rather weird. i would point things out in the kiai more but i dunno how to word it and it would just be me enforcing my own mapping style.
[Lv 11]
00:03:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same thing i've mentioned in scorpion glass same stuff I meantioned from scorpion grass
01:23:267 (1,2,3,4) - for the target audience of this diff, this is definitely a no-go lol. just make it a 1/4 return hmm ill keep this since this is a hard diff and the sv manipulation in the wubs isnt enuf for me to emphasize the wub part of the song
01:35:267 (1,2,1,2) - and these too ^
01:40:517 (9) - and this. just make this into 2 circles
sure

i don't know or map Hards but im p sure 1/4 wizardries are a no-go there.
[Finshie's Lv 9]
00:30:017 (1) - maybe nc for readability. you did it with 00:13:517 (1) - anyway
01:03:767 (3) - dsnap this

nothing much to find ~~or i just don't know how to mod normals~~
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

thx for le mod dom~!

Bluekrait

202 posts

Joined March 2014

Bluekrait 2017-08-01T23:38:24+00:00

Mod for JeirYagtama
PM me in game or through forum for any questions regarding my mod!

[General]

Unused files:
sb\lyrics\lrics11.png
sb\lyrics\lrics12.png

[Finshie's LV 9]

00:19:517 (1,2,3) - Make the blanket gaps even:
00:25:517 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:517 (4,5,1) - ^
01:07:892 (1,4) - Move NC to 4
01:10:517 (1,4) - ^
01:13:517 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:517 (1,3) - Move NC to 3

[LV 11]

00:04:142 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:10:142 (4,2,4) - Are these suppose to be stacked?
00:36:767 (1) - Remove NC lol
00:40:892 (2,3,1) - Decrease DS
00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Blankets are one of the most important things you need to focus on. Especially when making lower difficulties like this one.
00:55:517 (1,2,3) - Flow is another thing. Here's a quick flow diagram dictating cursor movement according to the way you oriented your sliders:

Green = Flow following slider bodies
Orange = Obtuse flow
Red = Uncomfortable direction change
Yellow = Place slider 3 anywhere in here for smooth transition from 2
As an example, I just moved slider 3 up:
00:33:767 (3,4,5) - ^ This chain can be improved flow wise by curving 4 up towards the 5
01:15:017 (1,1) - Increase spinner recovery time or move 01:18:017 (1) closer to the center.
01:35:642 (1) - Remove NC (same as 01:23:642 (3) )
01:43:142 (1) - Map this break
01:57:017 (1,1) - Increase spinner recovery time or remove spinner.

[Scorpion Grass]

00:07:517 (1,2) - Suggestion:

or blanket 1 around slider 2's body instead of slider 2's end.
00:22:517 (1,1) - Remove NC on the start of the stream if it's 1/4 distance from slider end. It makes it a tad bit easier to read. I'd also recommend decreasing DS between the start of stream and slider end. This goes for all instances of this pattern in the map.
01:00:017 (5,1) - For this, start NC on 5.
01:04:517 (5) - NC
01:11:642 (1) - No need to NC this since the SV difference is minuscule.
01:13:517 (5) - You're NC'ing every measure or every two measures?
Kiai breaks in the chorus were distracting. Same with the combos :/

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-02T03:57:09+00:00

Bluekrait wrote:
Mod for JeirYagtama

[Finshie's LV 9]
00:19:517 (1,2,3) - Make the blanket gaps even: sure
00:25:517 (1,2,3) - ^ looks fine as it is.
00:46:517 (4,5,1) - ^ sure
01:07:892 (1,4) - Move NC to 4 fixed
01:10:517 (1,4) - ^ fixed
01:13:517 (1) - Remove NC fixed
02:01:517 (1,3) - Move NC to 3

thanks for mod.

update

osu file format v14

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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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Title:Myosotis
TitleUnicode:Myosotis
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:JeirYagtama
Version:Finshie's LV 9
Source:Deemo
Tags:NICODE Guriri Lucy rayark Mobile collection Vol. 2 Magnolia forget-me-not
BeatmapID:1366250
BeatmapSetID:642896

[Difficulty]
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JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-08-02T12:41:53+00:00

Bluekrait wrote:
Mod for JeirYagtama
PM me in game or through forum for any questions regarding my mod!

[General]
Unused files:
sb\lyrics\lrics11.png
sb\lyrics\lrics12.png
[Finshie's LV 9]
00:19:517 (1,2,3) - Make the blanket gaps even:
00:25:517 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:517 (4,5,1) - ^
01:07:892 (1,4) - Move NC to 4
01:10:517 (1,4) - ^
01:13:517 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:517 (1,3) - Move NC to 3
[LV 11]
00:04:142 (4,1) - Fix blanket blanket looks fien brO
00:10:142 (4,2,4) - Are these suppose to be stacked? yea and wew nazi mod
00:36:767 (1) - Remove NC lol fixed
00:40:892 (2,3,1) - Decrease DS Im keeping this since I think the spacing is fine here lo
00:51:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Blankets are one of the most important things you need to focus on. Especially when making lower difficulties like this one. not really since blankets these days are a really minor thing to check on lo and those are not blankets except for the last one lo
00:55:517 (1,2,3) - Flow is another thing. Here's a quick flow diagram dictating cursor movement according to the way you oriented your sliders:

Green = Flow following slider bodies
Orange = Obtuse flow
Red = Uncomfortable direction change
Yellow = Place slider 3 anywhere in here for smooth transition from 2
As an example, I just moved slider 3 up:
ill take it
00:33:767 (3,4,5) - ^ This chain can be improved flow wise by curving 4 up towards the 5 Im keeping this since I think the flow here is fine as it is
01:15:017 (1,1) - Increase spinner recovery time or move 01:18:017 (1) closer to the center. testplayers with this level of skill didnt really have a hard time with this so im keeping this
01:35:642 (1) - Remove NC (same as 01:23:642 (3) ) keeping this to emphasize that technical pattern
01:43:142 (1) - Map this break Would increase sr so no
01:57:017 (1,1) - Increase spinner recovery time or remove spinner. same as what i've mentioned above
[Scorpion Grass]
00:07:517 (1,2) - Suggestion:
Subjective soo keeping this cos I think this fits more to the song
or blanket 1 around slider 2's body instead of slider 2's end.
00:22:517 (1,1) - Remove NC on the start of the stream if it's 1/4 distance from slider end. It makes it a tad bit easier to read. I'd also recommend decreasing DS between the start of stream and slider end. This goes for all instances of this pattern in the map. Welp no since its for emphasizing the piano here and this is a wub map not a pp map xd
01:00:017 (5,1) - For this, start NC on 5. oke
01:04:517 (5) - NC oke
01:11:642 (1) - No need to NC this since the SV difference is minuscule. uhh its clearly noticable on theres gonna be a sv change here so im keeping the NC
01:13:517 (5) - You're NC'ing every measure or every two measures?
Kiai breaks in the chorus were distracting. Same with the combos :/ - duh this is what I intended to makein the first place also the you know how other tech maps used this methods of kiais right and got ranked right?

also I said the storyboard isnt even near done yet so please dont mod it juuussstt yet thx
thanks for le mod~

timemon

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Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-08-02T13:42:07+00:00

mod
[Scorpion Grass]

00:22:423 - could add a note here because you did before
00:25:892 (2) - why is this circle so close from the last object move it more for spacing emphasis
00:36:673 (6) - this note feels unsupported, it's silent.
00:41:642 (4,5) - this is a new pattern in sound not actually the same pattern from before at 00:40:517 (1,2,3) - . atm it feels like 00:41:267 (3,4,5) - are grouped together when they come from different sound patterns. You should group up 00:40:517 (1,2,3) - together and 00:41:642 (4,5) - together.
Also please change this slider 00:41:642 (4) - to 2 circles, you're undermapping it.
it's very hard to differentiate between 1/4 and 1/2 gaps in your maps other than relying on the approach circle which is not good.
00:54:017 (1,2) - is 1/4 gap but right after at 00:55:517 (1,2) - it's 1/2 gap. they are too visually similar
01:09:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - visual spacing, 01:09:579 (4,5,7) - are pixel overlapping each other, stick with one way of putting down objects in a pattern and make it visually consistent is a good way of making the map look tidy and neat
01:15:017 (9) - NC to indicate the spinner is coming
01:48:954 (4,5) - is given bigger spacing emphasis than 01:49:142 (5,6) - when 6 is louder. move 6 to stack under 4
01:50:079 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this can use some visual spacing. hovering them all together make them look so random make them visually consistent.
02:05:267 (1) - why you dont give this slider any spacing emphasis? dont stack it, move it away same applies for 02:06:017 (1) -
02:07:517 (5) - NC

[lv 11]
00:30:017 - make this clickable and move the spinner back a tick
00:40:517 (1,2,3) - spacing is large for hard diff btw
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - large spacing again
01:15:017 - make it clickable
01:17:642 - reduce the spinner to this please, the guideline says you should have at least 1 beat to recover from spinner
01:43:517 - clickable!
01:55:235 (4) - reduce the reverse by one and add a circle at the end of the slider applies to 01:55:985 (7) - as well
01:57:017 - clickable again and reduce the spinner length to 1 beat recovery
02:07:517 (1) - c l i c k a b l e

good luck reeee

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

JierYagtama 2017-08-02T14:12:39+00:00

timemon wrote:
mod
[Scorpion Grass]
00:22:423 - could add a note here because you did before thaatt would be kind of overmapping so im keepin that blue tick empty
00:25:892 (2) - why is this circle so close from the last object move it more for spacing emphasis ops fixed
00:36:673 (6) - this note feels unsupported, it's silent. kind of hear a faint piano sound der
00:41:642 (4,5) - this is a new pattern in sound not actually the same pattern from before at 00:40:517 (1,2,3) - . atm it feels like 00:41:267 (3,4,5) - are grouped together when they come from different sound patterns. You should group up 00:40:517 (1,2,3) - together and 00:41:642 (4,5) - together. Kindaa changed it with the last irc mod xd
Also please change this slider 00:41:642 (4) - to 2 circles, you're undermapping it. the end of the slider kinda has a faint vocal sound so im keepin it for that reason
it's very hard to differentiate between 1/4 and 1/2 gaps in your maps other than relying on the approach circle which is not good.
00:54:017 (1,2) - is 1/4 gap but right after at 00:55:517 (1,2) - it's 1/2 gap. they are too visually similar ctrl g'ed stuff
01:09:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - visual spacing, 01:09:579 (4,5,7) - are pixel overlapping each other, stick with one way of putting down objects in a pattern and make it visually consistent is a good way of making the map look tidy and neat yeah polished the jump with the irc mod i've taken just earlier xd
01:15:017 (9) - NC to indicate the spinner is coming syure
01:48:954 (4,5) - is given bigger spacing emphasis than 01:49:142 (5,6) - when 6 is louder. move 6 to stack under 4 ill just move 4 over 6 instead
01:50:079 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this can use some visual spacing. hovering them all together make them look so random make them visually consistent. adjusted the pattern a bit
02:05:267 (1) - why you dont give this slider any spacing emphasis? dont stack it, move it away same applies for 02:06:017 (1) - kinda weak vocals soo yea
02:07:517 (5) - NC syure
[lv 11]
00:30:017 - make this clickable and move the spinner back a tick aight
00:40:517 (1,2,3) - spacing is large for hard diff btw real strong vocals thus I made the spacing likethat
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - large spacing again real strong drops thus I made the spacing likethat
01:15:017 - make it clickable aight
01:17:642 - reduce the spinner to this please, the guideline says you should have at least 1 beat to recover from spinner oke
01:43:517 - clickable! yea ik but ill keep it as it is since i already put a large spike on the hard diff so why not give le player a little bit of a break here?
01:55:235 (4) - reduce the reverse by one and add a circle at the end of the slider applies to 01:55:985 (7) - as well
01:57:017 - clickable again and reduce the spinner length to 1 beat recovery aight
02:07:517 (1) - c l i c k a b l e

good luck reeee

thx for the mod mon~

Chihara Minori

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Chihara Minori 2017-08-03T07:25:47+00:00

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