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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 13 de agosto de 2017 at 18:17:30

Artist: Nobuo Uematsu
Title: Faerie Battle
Source: ファイナルファンタジーIX
Tags: Gabe Veus ffix ff9 FINAL FANTASY squaresoft square enix ps1 playstation
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2252kb
Play Time: 01:04
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Yan: "Give me a diamond." (gives diamond)

Yan: "Thanks a lot"

Now you can reach the round guy!

Thanks to:
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  • Gabe: For his difficulty "Gabe's Easy"
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  • Gabe's Easy: 100%
  • Normal: 100%
  • Hard: 100%
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Gabe's Easy

00:16:667 (2) - I think you should put the slider to 00:17:556 skipped because too many sounds
00:24:223 and 00:25:556 - That prevents to put here notes? They should be here. Players at this level of the game you can get through this.
00:34:889 and 00:36:223 - again ^
00:43:334 (2) - There should be a slider.Sounds a long note on each tick, too, have sounds.Why is there no slider?

Normal

In some areas of disturbed flow,but overall fine.Only the speed sliders a little doubt.I think the speed is a bit high

Hard

In the map it should put the slider ticks to the rhythm.
Skipped notes on the red tick.For example you can put a note quietly then ->00:07:112
00:07:334 (1) - The breach flow. Adjust the start and end places
00:39:334 (2) - The breach flow.^ Players will be hard to pass it ^
00:48:223 (4) - Too far away from the last note. Use "Distance Snap".
00:50:445 (3) - Avoid such overlap. Players may not react to it.

That's all,good luck!
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Dinocrit wrote:
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Gabe's Easy

00:16:667 (2) - I think you should put the slider to 00:17:556 skipped because too many sounds
00:24:223 and 00:25:556 - That prevents to put here notes? They should be here. Players at this level of the game you can get through this.
00:34:889 and 00:36:223 - again ^
00:43:334 (2) - There should be a slider.Sounds a long note on each tick, too, have sounds.Why is there no slider?

Normal

In some areas of disturbed flow,but overall fine.Only the speed sliders a little doubt.I think the speed is a bit high

Hard

In the map it should put the slider ticks to the rhythm.
Skipped notes on the red tick.For example you can put a note quietly then ->00:07:112 Keeping the main melody of the song, so yeah
00:07:334 (1) - The breach flow. Adjust the start and end places just a mini-jump here, should be ok
00:39:334 (2) - The breach flow.^ Players will be hard to pass it ^ ^
00:48:223 (4) - Too far away from the last note. Use "Distance Snap". ^
00:50:445 (3) - Avoid such overlap. Players may not react to it.
Fixed
That's all,good luck!


Thanks for mod Dinocrit :)
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Hard NM
00:02:001 (1,2) - unreasonably high spacing.
00:30:000 (3,4) - ^
00:33:112 (6,7) - ^
Spacing should be the same as you used Distance Snap for every other objects. Spacing this high should be used for jump emphasis instead, like to a strong white tick.
00:56:223 (4) - ctrl + H for aesthetic
00:19:556 (4) - object is off screen, unrankable.
00:42:889 (4) - ^
00:50:000 (1,2,3,4) - uncomfortable movement
00:08:223 (3,4,5) - break circular flow. Maybe try something like this?
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Good luck!
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00:02:001 (1,2) - unreasonably high spacing. Nah, is not, only simply jumps
00:30:000 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:33:112 (6,7) - ^ ^
Spacing should be the same as you used Distance Snap for every other objects. Spacing this high should be used for jump emphasis instead, like to a strong white tick.
00:56:223 (4) - ctrl + H for aesthetic fixed
00:19:556 (4) - object is off screen, unrankable. fixed
00:42:889 (4) - ^
00:50:000 (1,2,3,4) - uncomfortable movement why? I don't see problem here
00:08:223 (3,4,5) - break circular flow. Maybe try something like this? fixed
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Good luck!


Thanks for mod :D

@milr_: Thank you for your comment :)
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Hello, m4m from #modreqs

  • umm, don't you think your red and blue combo colours are a bit too bright?

Hard:
Normal:
  • 00:40:445 (2,3) - are you sure you want this to be the only 1/2 stack through the whole diff?
  • 01:00:667 (1) - same thing, maybe map properly?

    woah, so simple and so clean..
Gabe's Easy
  • 00:16:667 - having this section empty doesn't feel natural to me

Hope I helped somehow. Good luck!
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h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello, m4m from #modreqs

  • umm, don't you think your red and blue combo colours are a bit too bright? I think is fine, combines with the BG imo

Hard:
Normal:
  • 00:40:445 (2,3) - are you sure you want this to be the only 1/2 stack through the whole diff? Fixed
  • 01:00:667 (1) - same thing, maybe map properly? same in hard
    woah, so simple and so clean..
Gabe's Easy
  • 00:16:667 - having this section empty doesn't feel natural to me

Hope I helped somehow. Good luck!


Thanks for mod :)
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Official metadata source, as per your request in my queue!
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OFFICIAL METADATA SOURCE:
- Square Enix (JP), FFIX OST's page: http://www.square-enix.co.jp/music/sem/page/cd/cd_003/
- Square Enix (NA), FFIX OST's page: https://na.square-enix.com/us/music/products/final-fantasy-ix-original-soundtrack
→ Disc 2, song number 12.

Artist: 植松 伸夫
Artist (romanised): Nobuo Uematsu
Title: フェアリーバトル
Title (romanised): Faerie Battle
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You have to change the title then as it is not "Fairy" but "Faerie". You should also add the katakana title as well!
Maybe add "Square Enix" in the tags as well?
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heyhey :) from M4m

Hard:

00:04:889 (1,2,3) - (looks kinda forcedin the edge with that overlap, buts only a minor suggestion to change that position)
00:08:889 (4,5) - that blanket could be cleaner
00:12:667 (1,2,3) - here too
00:18:889 (3,4) - and here too^^
00:30:000 (3,4) - that slider end is so intense it should be clickable, so make the slider shorter and place a circle

Normal:


00:10:223 (6) - 00:10:889 (8) - blanket
00:36:667 (1,2) - (optional blanket if u want)
01:00:667 (1) - why is here a spinner instead of this 00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern? that spinner feels kinda out of place and should be done after you repeated that pattern/rhythm again, like you did in your other diffs.

Easy:


On easy i only got a minor suggestion to add a circle here 00:24:223 - and here 00:25:556 -

anything else looks fine and clean.
Good Luck rank it fast and nice BG btw ;)
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Easy

01:03:334 (1) - Imo the spinner might be bit too short for an easy (3 beats or 1333ms) which is nearly 200ms below the lowest appropriate length considered for an easy (1500ms)


Normal

00:44:667 (1,2) - 00:55:334 (1,2,3) - Is there any reason why these are inconsistent? To me they sound roughly the same

01:00:667 (1,1,2) - I'll second the concern Rin Desu represented. It'd bring consistency to the set as all of the parts would have those two measures mapped "normally" and the last measure mapped as a spinner


Hard

00:16:223 (3,4,5,6,7) - I personally find the structure bit odd. Imo it could be improved by making a pentagon with the polygon generator thingy and re-arranging the objects into it's shape

00:21:556 - 00:22:000 - I think both of these beats should be clickable since it just doesn't feel right to me that when the beats are getting progressively stronger they are represented to be less stronger than something that is much less stronger than the those two beats ( 00:21:112 - ). My suggestion would be something like this https://puu.sh/wW7PN/067f7ab793.png possibly with increasing spacing throughout the pattern to accompany the beats getting stronger

00:42:667 - Consider adding a hitcircle here. It could bring up bit more intensity for the last pattern of that section and could make playing it, atleast imo, more satisfying

00:44:667 (1,2,3) - 00:52:667 (1,2,3) - 01:00:667 (1,2,3) - Is there some kind of reason you have some of these stacked while most of them form this 00:58:000 (1,2,3) - kind of a triangle? Just interested


good luck~
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@Kurai: Thanks for the metadata :)

@Rin Desu @DTM9 Nowa: Thanks for mod guys, fixed some parts :)
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Hi im the M4M guy from modreqs :D

Easy

00:59:334 (3,4) - convert this into a slider and track it towards the next slider ( so it should point southeast)
00:48:667 (3,4) - same
00:54:000 (2) - make this into a circle intstead (better reflects the music)
00:22:000 (2) - move this down next to where the slider leads. new players struggle with unconventional flow (i put it to x332 y76)
00:55:334 (1) - rotate this with selection sentre by -10° so it flows better.
try to focus more on flow and not overmapping (or undermap) as much as possible for ez diffs

Normal

Try to make tiny overlaps with 2 objects. Very common in normal diffs.

e.g put 00:02:445 (2) - to x64; y124 so its more intuitive for new players.
Same with every other 2 sliders (or circles) that occur.

00:10:000 (5,6,7) - same with these circles. Or make it a reverse slider.
00:55:334 (1,2) - maybe convert it into a slider. Either way this should overlap too
00:44:667 (1,2) - these are an exeption theyre blanketed so its readable. Nice job :D
00:47:334 (1,2) - same..

Hard
00:42:889 (5,6,7,8) - i would make 5 a 1/2 slider with 6 and 7 coming with 1/2 gaps inbetween and then on top of the 8 i would put another circle
http://imgur.com/a/gTwmc like so :D


overall for the most part its alright. But some flaws came in. Not terrible but definatly good enough for ranking standards if done correctly owo
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00:20:889 - Sugiero dos opciones:

1- Quitar el whistle en 00:20:889 - y colocar whistle en 00:20:667 - y 00:21:112 -
2- Agregar whistle en 00:21:334 - y 00:21:778 - y borrar whistle en 00:21:556 -

00:21:112 (2,3) - El salto parece ser muy repentino, haria ctrl+g a 00:21:556 (3) - (y reubicaria 00:22:000 (4) - ). Alternativamente, tambien podria hacer algo parecido a 00:07:334 (1,2) - (cabezas cercas en vez de cola cerca) pero no tienes espacio

00:33:556 (7) - Ponlo un poquito mas cerca al objeto anterior. Con 1.70x me conformo


Normal

00:02:001 (1,2,3,4) - Wow que buen uso de simetria y que quede bien encaje bien con la estructura de la cancion ;)
(Lo digo porque generalmente son forzados, pero este caso no)

00:21:556 - Agregaria whistle

00:34:000 (1,2,3,4) - Les daria una forma mucho mas diferente, para que se note que esto no es igual a 00:31:334 (1,2) - .
Hazlo por varios medios, como cambiando 00:34:000 (1) - por circulos (que lo haria muy dificil), stackeandolos, o algo.
Bueno, esto mismo aplicaria para las otras partes tambien como 00:23:334 (1,2) -


Easy

00:23:334 (1) - Considera en extender el slider hasta 00:24:223 - . Lo mismo para los demas (00:24:667 (2) - 00:34:000 (1,2) -
00:31:334 (1) - Considera extenderlo hasta 00:31:334 (1) -
00:49:112 (4) - Borraria esta nota, ya que la nota en 00:49:112 - no es muy fuerte que digamos, asi harias mas enfoque al otro ritmo que llevas siguiendo.

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