1. The Path To A World Long Gone (7.13 stars, 2380 notes)

1. 00:01:716 (3,1) - stack 3 to 1 since that's the 1/1 gap concept.
2. 00:11:752 (1,2,3,4) - this flows really meh, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565394 try sth like this.
3. 00:12:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - should this be similar to 00:13:498 (1,2,1) - this since vocals? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565421 try this rhythm here, more consistent with vocals.
4. 00:18:952 (1,2,1,2) - what are those for? can't use it for vocals since it would be too inconsistent with other stream parts where you have vocals.
5. 00:28:989 (1) - you can't use this SV for normal sound while you use 00:27:243 (1) - the same SV for a distorted pitch.
6. 00:34:007 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - can't see the rhythm you're trying to make here, 00:34:225 - vocals start here, not the red tick. Vocals here utilise 3/2 rhythm as well https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565849 .
   Give the vocals more attention in that whole section
7. 00:57:570 (1,2) - suggest you follow the vocals here as well since you've been doing it.
8. 01:43:607 (1) - map a 1/2 jump here with decent spacing for the climax https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565874

LMT wrote:

1. 00:01:716 (3,1) - stack 3 to 1 since that's the 1/1 gap concept. - Yes, good idea !
2. 00:11:752 (1,2,3,4) - this flows really meh, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565394 try sth like this. - Ctrl+G'ed these sliders!
3. 00:12:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - should this be similar to 00:13:498 (1,2,1) - this since vocals? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565421 try this rhythm here, more consistent with vocals. - Good catch, fixed this !
4. 00:18:952 (1,2,1,2) - what are those for? can't use it for vocals since it would be too inconsistent with other stream parts where you have vocals. - Yeah.. I changed this to a normal 4 Note stream.
   Maybe a reverse slider will fit there better tho. I'll see what other people say!
5. 00:28:989 (1) - you can't use this SV for normal sound while you use 00:27:243 (1) - the same SV for a distorted pitch. - I changed the SV to 1.0
6. 00:34:007 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - can't see the rhythm you're trying to make here, 00:34:225 - vocals start here, not the red tick. Vocals here utilise 3/2 rhythm as well https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565849 . - I fixed that as well - thanks for the suggestion.
   I still have issues to grasp the correct rythm sometimes.
   Give the vocals more attention in that whole section
7. 00:57:570 (1,2) - suggest you follow the vocals here as well since you've been doing it. - I don't see how I am not following the vocals here.
   The bigger jumps emphasize the intensity of the vocals in that section.
   I slightly re-positioned them tho.
8. 01:43:607 (1) - map a 1/2 jump here with decent spacing for the climax https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8565874 - Alright, looks better then the slider.

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/

00:01:498 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - 00:04:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing should be equal. Fixed.
00:01:607 (2,3) - this jump it's longer than 00:06:079 (1,2) - 00:04:334 (1,2) - and some others which.. doesn't make sense to me, these sliders should be more emphasized. Did some minor adjustments.
00:06:952 (2,1) - this is kinda.. weird, maybe if you set the volume to 5% at the end of the slider that would be better (hmm this map isnt finished so I guess you haven't doing all this stuff). I silenced the sliderend now.
00:07:825 (1,3) - shouldnt be these stacked? I corrected this and some other circles in that section where the overlaps were not properly done.
00:16:989 (1,2,3,1) - this doesn't really looks like 1/3, the 1/3 rythm was not introduced yet you use this 1/3 stream, spacing it's a little bit different but the player will not notice that change, because it was never introduced so I recommend using some 1/3 sliders first and interleave them with some streams to a point where the rythm and spacing it's well defined. That's probably the biggest issue in my map for now. I still need to think about concepts to visualize the difference between 1/3rd and 1/4th sections. For now the main difference is that the streams are splitted in triplets for 1/3rd sections and for 1/4ths it's quadruplets, mainly.
Still awaiting feedback from other players regarding this issue tho.
00:18:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this also looks like 1/4. No, the drums are 1/3rd here. It's clearly audible.
00:21:789 (1,2,3,1) - 00:23:316 (1,2,3,4,1) - one being 1/3 and the other 1/3 but they have soo similar shapes, really hard to know when a stream is 1/3 or 1/4. It's visible. The distance spacing for 1/4th's is very small (Mostly 0.1), whereas for 1/3rd's its more (0.3+). However I still need to work on it as I mentioned.
00:25:607 (4) - I think that this circle should be placed under 00:25:279 (1) - since it's sound its quite less intense, so it should not be over it, in terms of screen placement this is kinda nazi I know but I hope you get what I mean. I get what you mean, I consider changing it but I need to think about it.
00:25:716 (1,1,2) - awkward flow, maybe rotate this whole thing like 110° or so, that would flow a LOT better + would make more sense with 00:26:589 (1,2,3) - movement. Can you provide a screenshot. To me rotating it by 110° looks very off. Did some minor changes tho.
00:37:716 (7,8) - really bad flow considering the reverse slider which makes you go up, but the next circle is down so.. this is really awkward, you didn't used such flow before so change this. Fixed.
00:38:152 (1,2,3) - why is spacing here less than this for example 00:33:570 (1,2,3,4) - song builds up intensity before next section so the spacing should be less in the beginning than the end of it. Fixed.
00:38:970 (4,1) - something similar should be done here 00:39:407 (4,1) - otherwise it would have no sense. I reworked that part slightly, I don't see a spacing issue tho, I'd kept the spacing for the burst at 0.1 so they can still be distinguished from 1/3rd sections.
00:43:170 (1,2,3,4) - I love these stacks in other ways then the usual. Thanks, I guess? I eventually space them out a bit tho we'll see.
00:45:243 (4,1) - kinda... idk, I know you keep changing spacing there and using sliders for consistency, but since there's no guitar like 00:43:607 (5,6) - and 00:44:479 (1,2) - I'd say to stack 00:45:243 (4,1) . Hmm I guess I am okay with that. I stacked them.
00:48:771 (6,1) - feel like changing this into a sharp angle? like 00:47:024 (11,1) - not as sharpy as the first one tho. No, I think the way it is right now is fine, won't change it unless someone else mentions it.
00:49:934 (4,5,6) - why don't change the direction of the stream or make smth to reflect that change. Reworked the stream a bit and also increase spacing to empashize the 1/3rd.
00:50:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overspaced imo, compared to other streams and how the song goes at this point, this feel overspaced. I think spacing fit's the intensity here, also keep in mind we are in a kiai section.
00:57:243 - this gap kinda kills the flow (?) idk whats the word im looking for but you know what I mean right? like.. player won't expect this pause here so why not just make 00:57:134 (3) - a slider. Wasn't satisfied at first but agreed then because the slider goes hand in hand with the slider here : 00:56:698 (1) .
01:01:279 (1,2) - is there something to justify this spacing? feel like 01:01:061 (1,1,2) - should have equal spacing. Yes this is justified. The first slider has the guitar go with it, the other two don't therefore the intensity decreases and with it the spacing between the sliders. I slightly adjusted it tho.
01:03:789 (1,2) - hmmm this rythm choice here was not the best imo, since you left this strong beat unclickable 01:03:679 . Totally agree with you here. Fixed!
01:04:552 (1) - out of place, something similar should be done here or change it into 3 circles? Changed reverse slider into a circle pattern. Looks and plays better now.]
01:07:607 (3,1) - should have less spacing since you never expect that reverse slider as a 1/3. Removed reverse slider and reworked entire section.
01:08:916 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo this stream should have more spacing in the beginning and less in the end since the sound it's like decreasing it's pitch. Reworked spacing.
01:18:952 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think that less spacing here would fit better, right now it just feels like the rest of the map smh. The spacing fits perfectly fine. I won't change this.
01:25:716 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - BLUE DRAGON GET OUT OF THAT BODY DDDDDDDDD: *raise a cross* Haha, the squares are fitting here tho.
01:45:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cmon what happened to you here? I mean.. this is just too normal, you can think of something better. I feel like the sliders here play extremly well and the increasing spacing fits the increasing intensity. If you consider it not good enough at least bring up an example/screenshot how you would map it, so I can get a better idea what you mean.
I feel like you should increase spacing from 01:51:679 - to 02:03:025 - to a better buildup, right now it's like.. too weak. Increased the spacing a bit
and this 02:03:025 (1,2,1,2) - came in like a monster truck on a wall of glass.Haha, well the song goes really crazy here. I don't think I'd change this much, but I need to add a kiai section here probably.

MrKosiej wrote:

[AiMod]
Look at it cuz you have some technical problems there, inculding bitrate, timing points and bg Will fix that at the end

[Mod]
01:08:698 (1) - move to the left so the head of 01:08:043 (1) - is in the middle Fixed

01:14:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - i feel like this should be more spaced. The beginning is fine, but it should catch a bit of speed later on. I remapped the entire stream, seems much better now.

02:13:498 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9503914 ?I t just feels out of place when its not in that circle. Good idea !

02:16:988 (3) - i absolutely love that slider Thanks :3

02:25:279 (2,4) - stack with tail? and move 02:25:498 (3) - to the left #aesthetics I agree!

03:04:988 (1,2) - use sliders cuz its the same as 03:04:116 (1,2) -
it will look more consistent Yes you are right

03:42:443 (8,1) - that's weirdly off. Replaced with stream notes instead

03:45:134 - should the reverse sliders start here since its a strong tick? Yeah I mapped three reverse sliders there now

03:46:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - that's a mess. Not even following the rhytm in the second half Well, I have no idea how to change it up, feel free to make a suggetion. That guitar part isn't that eas yto map fitting imo.

03:53:861 (1) - the reverse arrow is barely visible. Rotated slightly

03:58:807 (9,1,2) - that turn is too sharp. Its emphasized by the vocals so I think its fine.

04:03:898 (3,5) - use ncs so the player wont get confused but the rhytm Okay

04:13:861 (6,1,2) - again, ths turn is too sharp, but maybe its just me. Turns are on the emphasized sections, looks fine too me, will wait for other mods on this.

04:51:243 - missing some emphasize but the vocals. You're using reverse sliders in the moments where there are no vocals, but now its is a strong sound and you completely ignore it NC#ed for now, will recheck later.
04:55:825 - same
i think you should work on the rhytm in last kiai ToDo : Will fix that later

[last words]
The map is pretty decent, love the artwork on sliders. I'd work on vocal emphasize if i were you tho. I'll play it when im warmed up and ill say if it flows xd. cheers

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1. 00:22:225 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - should be 1/4
   
2. 00:27:898 (1,2,3,1) - 1/3
   
3. 00:35:970 (1) - 1/3
4. 00:40:116 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 1/4
   
5. 00:47:970 (1,2) - 1/3
   
6. 01:16:116 (1) - 1/3
   
7. 01:20:479 (1,2,3) - 1/4
   
8. 01:21:788 (1,2,3,1) - 1/4
   
9. 01:23:534 (1,2,3) - 1/4
   
10. 01:25:279 (1,2,3,1) - 1/4
    
11. 01:27:461 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
12. 01:30:516 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
13. 01:30:734 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 notes don't exist, snap those to 1/2
    
14. 01:32:261 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
15. 01:34:225 (1) - 1/3
    
16. 01:35:752 (1,2,3,1) - 1/4
    
17. 01:37:279 (1) - 1/3
    
18. 01:39:243 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
19. 01:41:207 (1) - 1/3
    
20. 01:42:734 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
21. 01:42:952 (1,2,1,2) - guitar is 1/3
    
22. 01:52:552 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this whole section sounds like it's either 1/2 or 1/4 to me, can't find 1/3 rhythm here.
    
23. 01:55:170 (1,2,3) - like this is surely 1/4
24. 01:55:388 (1,2,3) - just 1/2
    
25. 01:56:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds like 1/4
    
26. 01:58:661 (1,2) - 1/3 though
    
27. 01:59:098 (1,2,3) - 1/4
    
28. 01:59:316 (1,2) - don't sound like 1/3 to me, probably 1/2
    
29. 02:00:188 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - either 1/2 or 1/4 , can't be 1/3 here
    
30. 02:01:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 1/2 or 1/4, can't be 1/3
    
31. 02:03:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/2
    
32. 02:03:898 (1,2) - no 1/4 beats, just 1/2
    
33. 02:11:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this whole part is 1/4
    
34. 02:14:588 (1) - 1/3
    
35. 02:15:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/4
    
36. 02:20:698 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4
    
37. 02:30:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/4
    
38. 02:32:698 (2) - 1/2
    
39. 02:34:443 (1,2,3,4) - 3/2 rhythm , so like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9535684
    
40. 02:53:425 (1) - 1/3
    
41. 03:33:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - 1/4
    
42. 03:37:351 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - 1/4
    
43. 03:40:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 1/4
    
44. 03:46:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i know guitar is drunk but it's playing 1/3
    
45. 03:53:861 (1,2) - 1/4
    
46. 03:56:043 (1,2,3,4) - vocals is not 1/2 and the drums is still 1/3
    
47. 03:57:788 (3,4) - no 1/3s , just 1/1
    
48. 04:03:570 (1,2) - actually start on the downbeat, not this red tick