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The Winking Owl - Bloom

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Shmiklak
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 марта 2019 г. at 20:03:15

Artist: The Winking Owl
Title: Bloom
Tags: marvollo m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Lokidoki Marianna chalwa ザ ウィンキング オウル BLOOMING Luiza neoskylove Affirmation namki english japanese
BPM: 196
Filesize: 25949kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Affirmation's Hard (3,34 stars, 497 notes)
  2. Blossom (6,41 stars, 887 notes)
  3. Chalwa's Normal (2,27 stars, 368 notes)
  4. Easy (1,83 stars, 203 notes)
  5. Lokidoki's Another (5,12 stars, 810 notes)
  6. Marianna's Insane (4,43 stars, 675 notes)
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I wanna be drown at your embraces

#26

video - Shad0w1and
hs - Namki
Thanks to wajinshu for suggesting me this song owo
Last edited by Shmiklak , edited 94 times in total.
Djulus
570 posts
Joined September 2014
Djulus
хлеб
vanucik
484 posts
Joined December 2014
vanucik

Shmiklak wrote:

vanucik wrote:

Artem
10 posts
Joined March 2016
Artem
афтор узбек так что можно и на русском
карта вообще годная айм лайк дыс
я хз как там их в ранкед пихают но ты давай, пихай глубже :D
Lama Poluna
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Joined June 2014
Lama Poluna

Hello, from metadata help queue.


Artist and title is fine, but you can add in tags: ザ ウィンキング オウル BLOOMING Luiza
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Shmiklak
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Shmiklak
Thank you! Updated tags owo
Djulus
570 posts
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Djulus
Chalwa
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Joined August 2014
Chalwa
@Shmiklak

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Title:Bloom
TitleUnicode:Bloom
Artist:The Winking Owl
ArtistUnicode:The Winking Owl
Creator:M a r v o l l o
Version:Chalwa's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shmiklak marvollo m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Lokidoki Marianna chalwa ザ ウィンキング オウル BLOOMING Luiza
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HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/678399

My cut size Beatmap lol
Ayaice
Ayaice
Chalwa's Normal
01:33:235 (6) - maybe move it to 01:33:082 - ?
01:43:796 (3) - this slider looks ugly (for me)
Blossom
00:24:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - сделай с этим что нибудь, выглядит неочень.
00:55:276 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
безполезный мод, я знаю
а вообще м а р в о л л о, заставлять моддить не хорошо...

Update: сделай что нибудь с 00:17:163 (5,6) - (и этому подобное), я про то что песня реально быстрая и нажимать в одно место два раза неоч.
about 00:24:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3) Blossom
Last edited by Ayaice , edited 2 times in total.
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Topic Starter
Shmiklak
норм же выглядит, дай примеры
Chalwa
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Joined August 2014
Chalwa

Ayaice wrote:

Chalwa's Normal
01:33:235 (6) - maybe move it to 01:33:082 - ? this note is for vocal to catch the rhythm
01:43:796 (3) - this slider looks ugly (for me) k xD



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Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Shmiklak
All difficulties were finished. Getting mods!
chuuwon
227 posts
Joined May 2017
chuuwon
на джулусятинском изи:
00:06:449 (3,1) - межу этими нотами(и остальными,с таким же ритмом) можно вставить ноту
01:02:852 (3,4,5) - тут советую убрать ноты,передвинуть конец слайдера на красный тик(в право),и ревёрснуть его
01:18:694 (1) - этот слайдер можно на красный тик(влево) и ревёрснуть,снова,или между 01:18:694 (1,2) - поставить ноту
03:03:388 (4,5) - между этими объектами поставь ноту
всё
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
oh it was v1? lol good xD
imRitaka
118 posts
Joined June 2011
imRitaka
Holy crap, it's been a while since I've done a v1 mod.

General
There seems to be an Inheriting Point at 03:04:766 (2) - in Blossom, Loki's Another, and Marianna's Insane that is not being used for anything from what I can tell. (No kiai start/end, no slider velocity adjustment (there are no sliders between this and 03:05:225 (1) ), and no volume level adjustments.) Please do correct me if I'm wrong.

Blossom
Any suggestions I would have made here would just be crazy-nitpicking. The dif is awesome. Great job!

Loki's Another
01:36:143 (2) - I think you accidentally put a clap here?
01:36:755 (2) - Same with this one ^

Marianna's Insane
02:03:082 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like the movement here is a little awkward. Instead of having 4 at the slidertail of 2, how about having 4 at the sliderhead of 2 instead? I feel the movement is smoother like this. (It also helps establish that there is a sharp-angle jump coming in the form of 02:03:847 (5,1) )

03:14:408 (1,2) - I know you put the slider here to emphasize that this jump was coming, but I still feel that these two notes are spaced too far apart for a 1/4th jump in the middle of a stream. To counteract this, maybe instead of having 03:14:408 (1) - as the only slider, make 03:14:561 (2) - a slider as well? The sudden need to adjust aim would be helped by the slider leniency.

NeoSL's Hard
This hard is definitely good, but it is a bit weird to me how it changes between mapping the important sounds of the music onto clickable objects and then having those same sounds mapped passively (for example, on slidertails or reverse arrows).

Chalwa's Normal
Nothing really wrong here, nice!

Djulus' Easy
01:27:266 (3) - Most of the 1 1/2 sliders that you were using throughout the diff had reverse arrows, which took away the burden of reading the 1/2 part of the slider. Since there is no reverse arrow here, newer players may have a hard time reading this shift from 1/1 into 1/2. Consider making this slider just a 1/1 slider instead? I also feel it would fit better in this section ( 01:26:041 (1,2,3,4) - ) as it would fit the group of 1/1 sliders.

Good luck! :)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
We're back bitches.

Extra:
02:45:633 (1,1,1,1,1) - Don't fucking do this lmfao. Also at the very least the hitnormal sounds REALLY out of place here. There's like a VERY soft emphasis, so maybe put like a drumfinish or something or softwhistle here idk.

Another:
00:15:021 (1) - Finish pls lmao
00:15:327 - This tilts me because the other diffs do this, plus it's REALLY weird sort of having a break in the 2nd half of the phrase lmaooo.
03:45:633 (1) - tell me about this.

Insane:
Nice

Hard:
NICE!!

Normal:
02:54:204 - For this section you should consider using some lighter hitsounds. The snare-drum texture of the hitnormals REALLY stands out here. It's there in the other diffs but for some reason this one stands out the most to me.

Easy:
03:04:000 (5) - Just remove this lmao it'd be more effective in the easy to have it just blank.

Sort-ass mod but this map is REALLY fucking good like if I were a BN I'd bubble it right now lmao
Lokidoki
374 posts
Joined June 2015
Lokidoki

CDFA wrote:

Another:
00:15:021 (1) - Finish pls lmao
00:15:327 - This tilts me because the other diffs do this, plus it's REALLY weird sort of having a break in the 2nd half of the phrase lmaooo. i was too lazy to map this, but i guess it can't be helped
03:45:633 (1) - tell me about this. it is art
also i renamed the diff to lokidoki's another, hope that's not too much trouble

Ritaka wrote:

Holy crap, it's been a while since I've done a v1 mod.

Loki's Another
01:36:143 (2) - I think you accidentally put a clap here?
01:36:755 (2) - Same with this one ^
yeah, ig those were accidental, removed them
up
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222,250,210327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,361,210480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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366,116,211857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,212010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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343,324,212776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,163,213235,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,163,213311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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237,206,213694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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222,236,214230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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2,252,215072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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2,170,219817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Shmiklak
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Shmiklak
updated. will reply mods for my diffs later when frontier mods it
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- Frontier -
Greetings!
every mods are highly suggested, might not nominate if it was addressed unreasonably

[General]
  1. Widescreen support is inconsistent and your map doesn't have a storyboard, so disable it for all difficulties.
  2. 03:45:633 (1) - It seems like most of your difficulties have this slider as the end of the difficulty. I'd recommend to make the volume of this spinner decreased, to make the spinner corresponding to the song's intensity.
[Djulus' Easy]
  1. I understand that the song's rhythm is pretty fast, but using approach rate 5 is pretty overwhelming for newbie players to play. Keep in mind that this difficulty is Easy difficulty, and the easiest difficulty of this mapset, so this difficulty must be easy enough for players to play without any unfair reading difficulty. I'd highly suggest you to change the approach rate to 4 for the most appropriate to the difficulty.
  2. 00:33:388 (5,1) - I think this hitobject 00:33:388 (5) - should be added a new combo instead. As I looked the new combo pattern for several times, I noticed that you will add a new combo every 8/1 measures. So adding new combo to this hitobject 00:34:612 (1) - breaks the new combo pattern here. So you might be better to remove a new combo here away and add a new combo at 00:33:388 (5) - instead, for consistency thorough your difficulty. As same as 00:35:837 (3) -, 00:38:286 (3) - and the rest of your difficulty. (Actually, there are lots of them, but I won't point them out. -_-)
  3. 01:16:245 to 01:26:041 -This part could literally skip to map since the other difficulties don't map this part here, mapping this part only your difficulty can be inconsistent in your mapset.
  4. 01:27:266 (3,4) - Using 1/2 rhythm here doesn't seem to be appropriate to your difficulty tho. Since your difficulty hasn't been introduced the 1/2 rhythm, so using 1/2 rhythm here makes nonsense and could be really hard for newbie players to play. Keep in mind that this difficulty is Easy difficulty, and the easiest difficulty of this mapset, so this difficulty must be easy enough for players to play without any unfair playability challenge. So in order to keep the 1/2 rhythm here, you could make this slider 01:27:266 (3) - become a reverse slider
  5. 01:45:327 (2,3) - So since the instrumental's intensity changes at 01:45:633 -, using the hitobjects in this part as if nothing happened is literally unsuitable with the instrumental's intensity. In order to improve this error, at least you could make these hitobjects consistent with the hitobjects 00:55:123 (5,1,2) -.
  6. 02:06:449 - It looks like you have failed to make the hitobjects represent to the song's intensity. This cymbal sound at this spot is pretty dominant and it is the beginning of the new part, being just a slider's end doesn't emphasize the song's intensity really well. It would be more suitable with the song's intensity if you make this spot as where the active hitobject starts (for your information, the active hitobjects are the hitobjects that you actually take an active part in, aka. circles and slider starts.) So in order to improve this error, I'd suggest you to change this slider 02:05:837 (4) - into a 1/1-beat long slider and a hitcircle with 1/1-beat gap between each hitobjects, that could emphasize the rhythm better.
  7. 02:44:408 - tbh, there is no point to skip this spot to be mapped. the intensity of this part here is really intense, and there is no discernible sound to make you not to map this particular spot. It's like you made this spot be skipped to map so it is better to emphasize the vocal at 02:44:715 (4) -, and to readjust the slider here also. But keep in mind that the intensity of this part is actually pretty high, so skipping this spot to be mapped isn't suitable with the song's intensity. I'd highly recommend you to map his spot.
  8. 03:04:000 (5) - It seems like that you have failed to make this hitobject follows the song's intensity, since the song's intensity here is recessive and doesn't really dominant, adding the hitobject in this recessive spot makes the hitobject really stand out unreasonably. And this cymbal sound at 03:05:225 - is pretty dominant and it is the beginning of the most intense part, being just a slider's end doesn't emphasize the song's intensity really well. It would be more suitable with the song's intensity if you make this spot as where the active hitobject starts. I'd highly recommend to change the hitobject's rhythm to make it suitable with the intensity of the song.
  9. 03:26:959 - The vocal sound at this spot is pretty discernible and should not be skipped, and as you mapped the spot which has the same vocal sound but on different timeline 03:31:857 (5) -, so I think this spot should have been mapped also. I'd recommend you to add a hitcircle at this spot to make the hitobject follow the vocal sound.
I couldn't find many issues in you difficulty, the difficulty is pretty solid, as I expect from Djulus! ;)

[Chalwa's Normal]
  1. I think you could adjust the difficulty settings to be harder, since the song has fast rhythm and it's Normal difficulty after all.
  2. 00:17:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... this part is exactly same as 00:07:674 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part in terms of guitar's rhythm, so why are they mapped too much differently? For the sake of consistency, please make it the same.
  3. 00:27:266 (3,4,5) - I'm not really sure which sound do these hitobjects are followed, but the hitobjects don't seem to follow the vocal's rhythm at all. Keep in mind that osu! is a rhythm game, that means making the main purpose of making a map to play in osu! is to make the hitobjects in the mp corresponding to the song's rhythm, so it means that rhythm is the most prioritized aspect of the game. Making these hitobjects follow the incomprehensible rhythm in the song is inappropriate to the game's concept. Since most of the hitobjects are followed the vocal's rhythm, so I'd recommend you to make these hitobjects represent the vocal's rhythm better also, by using this pattern or you could use the same rhythm as 00:32:163 (3,4,5) - to make the hitobjects in the map corresponding to the vocal's rhythm better, as it is the main concept of the game.
  4. 00:39:204 (3) - I understand what you're trying to make this hitcircle follows the vocal's rhythm at here, but since the vocal's sound at here is quite recessive and it's the sound between ら and さ, It would be more suitable to the vocal if you make this spot as where the slider ends. So I'd recommend you to change the hitcircles at 00:38:898 (2,3) - to a 1/2-beat long slider in order to make the hitobject be more suitable to the vocal.
  5. 01:39:204 - It seems like you have failed to make the hitobject corresponding to the vocal's intensity here. You could easily notice that this vocal sound at here is pretty dominant, while the sound at 01:39:510 - doesn't really dominant and seems to be only instrumental sound. Having a slider end at the dominant sound doesn't seem to be appropriate with the vocal's intensity at all. So I'd highly recommend you to swap the rhythm 01:38:898 (3,4) - (from a 1/1-beat long slider and a circle with 1/1-beat long gap between each hitobjects, to a circle and a 1/1-beat long slider with 1/1-beat long gap between each hitobject.) to make the hitobjects follows the vocal's intensity better. As same as 01:39:817 (5,6) - which has the same issue as this issue.
  6. 02:43:260 (1) - I'm not pretty sure what you're trying to pull off here, but the spinner doesn't really need to be added. The spinner here seems to be added just for the sake of building up to the break time, which doesn't seem to make sense at all.
[NeoSL's Hard]
  1. 00:12:189 (4,5) - In my perspective, players could easily misunderstand that these hitobjects have 1/2-beat long gap between each hitobjects since the previous stacked hitobjects have 1/2-beat gap between each hitobjects, (like 00:11:653 (2,3) - ) making players gathering 100s or even a miss here. So I'd recommend to unstack these hitobjects to avoid having an unfair reading difficulty to players.
  2. 00:12:572 (1,3) - Since the slider 00:12:572 (1) - hasn't fully disappeared while the hitcircle 00:13:490 (3) - is appearing, it makes these hitobject overlapped to each other. It's necessary for the hitobject to be visible in gameplay, otherwise it will affect as an unfair reading difficulty to players. So I'd recommend to move the hitcircle further away to avoid making the gitobjects here ambiguous to read, which could make an unfair reading difficulty for players.
  3. 00:44:944 - After I carefully listened to this particular spot for several times, I noticed that this spot here literally has a drum sound. So I'd recommend to map this spot by adding a hitcircle here.
  4. 01:16:245 - It looks like you have failed to make the hitobjects represent to the song's intensity. This cymbal sound at this spot is pretty dominant and it is the beginning of the new part, being just a slider's end doesn't emphasize the song's intensity really well. It would be more suitable with the song's intensity if you make this spot as where the active hitobject starts. So in order to improve this, I'd suggest you to add a hitcircle here, which could emphasize the rhythm better. As same as 03:24:817 -
  5. 02:46:857 - Hmm.. doesn't seem to make sense here that you make the break starts here.
  6. 03:28:184 - It might be better if you add a hitcircle or a 1/2-beat long slider at this spot, this could represent the vocal's sound at here.
Pretty good difficulty! :)

[Marianna's Insane]
I'm not really sure which rhythm you mostly focus on actually, it's like some hitobjects follows vocals and some follows instruments. That really makes me confused af.
And you just blatantly copy paste from first kiai to the second kiai lol. I understand that both parts are mostly the same but copy-pasting is kinda discouraged because it looks sloppy and uninteresting. It's subjective and not unrankable I know, but I don't think this is appropriate enough to push this into ranking process. Please pay more attention to the mapping.

[Lokidoki's Another]
  1. 00:33:465 (2) - After I carefully listened to this particular spot for multiple times, I noticed that there is literally no sound at here. Keep in mind that osu! is a rhythm game, that means making the main purpose of making a map to play in osu! is to make the hitobjects in the mp corresponding to the song's rhythm, so it means that rhythm is the most prioritized aspect of the game. Making these hitobjects follow the incomprehensible rhythm in the song is inappropriate to the game's concept. It's just like you are mapping this spot just for the sake of emphasizing the atmosphere of the difficulty's intensity, which doesn't seem to make sense at all. So I'd highly suggest you to delete this hitcircle, in order to avoid mapping to any discernible sound in the song, which is inappropriate to the game's concept. As same as 00:43:260 (2) -
  2. 00:42:419 - I noticed that most of your hitobjects are followed the vocal's rhythm, but why does this spot has been skipped from mapping? The vocal here is pretty dominant, so you shouldn't skip this spot. Consider mapping this spot by removing the reverse of the slider 00:41:959 (1) - and adding a hitcircle here or whatever, in order to represent the vocal's rhyth,.
  3. 02:06:449 (1) - There is literally no point in adding this slider. Even if you said "it's to emphasize the bass guitar sound here.", it's still unreasonable since this bass guitar sound stops at 02:07:368 -. It's just like you added this slider just because you want to add it, by not focusing on song's rhythm at all. So in order to improve this, I'd suggest you to change this slider to a hitcircle, that would be enough.
  4. 02:29:332 - While this spot literally has a sound, why this spot hasn't been mapped by a hitcircle? As same as 02:40:046 -
  5. 02:41:959 (1) - The song's rhythm here is pretty intense, using just a 1/1-beat long slider doesn't really seem to be suitable with the song's intensity. I'd recommend you to use consecutive 1/2-beat long sliders instead of a 1/1-beat long slider with a reverse.
  6. 02:45:021 (1) - Using a long buzz slider here doesn't really give much feedback for players. Try to add some movement here since the song is pretty intense here.
  7. 03:00:174 (1) - This new combo here doesn't really necessary here since this hitobject 03:00:327 (1) - also has new combo. -_-
[Blossom]
  1. Using health point drain rate 4 here doesn't really seem to be suitable with the difficulty. I understand that it is to prevent players from failing the map, but that's also nonsense lmao. Try to increase it.
  2. 01:27:266 (1) - Both of the vocal's sounds at slider start and slider tail are pretty dominant. It might be better if you change this 1/2-beat long slider into 2 circles with 1/2-beat long gap between each hitcircles instead, in order to emphasize the vocal's sounds here.
  3. 03:03:847 (1) - It might be better if you silent the spinner end here, because it is irritating af to hear that.
the best map of shmoklok!

That's all.
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