00:11:601 (4) - i think you should give a NC here to give an impact about the slow slider.
01:30:299 (4,5,6) - make this right.
01:58:381 (8) - the distance is not right. I prefer to stack 7 and 8. If you can handle it, you can use it if you like the previous one, but i think there are not much people who can make this beautiful as it looks like.
02:08:313 (4) - Why don't you make this a circle and place it far from 3 and 5? (and give 5 a NC)
02:10:778 (1) - push it a bit left to make a straight line with 3, 4 and 5
02:11:909 (6,7,8,1,2) - I'm not sure about this. I'd rather give bigger DS to these and place notes without stacking.
02:17:559 (10) - No Finish here
02:25:778 (6,7,8,9) - the distance between these are too small. please make DS larger, and i prefer using sliders here.
02:26:600 (2) - this should be in an extended line of 1, considering the map.
02:27:011 (3,4,5) - make this symmetric; you used 0, 60, and 240 degrees, but i prefer 0, 120, and 240.
02:29:477 (4,5,6) - the vocal is yell?ing at this point, so I strongly recommend you use a 1/2 slider instead of these circles.
02:33:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is using 1/6.
02:50:025 (3,4,5) - Use slider instead. You might want to mimic the pattern just before, but I don't think the triplet with different DS will be accepted.
04:03:998 (1,2,3) - place these apart, at least a bit. This actually ruins the pattern.
04:32:148 (3,4) - ctrl + g, please. this doesn't make sense unless DS is big.
04:42:011 (2,3,4,5) - this can be better
04:44:683 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think stacking 3 and 5 is right; i could only see such things in old maps.
04:46:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^
04:49:511 - there's no note here, not like others.
04:51:258 (3,4,5,6) - select these, and move 3 to the right of 2. only this is not placed like others before. or, move 2 a bit farther from 3 and 6, and give same distance from 3 and 6
04:54:854 (1,2,3) - make these linear. it does not harm the map when it starts from 1 and moves to right(and a bit up).
04:55:778 (1) - place it on the line of 5, 6, and 7 (it means, place on the line which is made by 5, 6, and 7). Do not move 2 if you do.
05:22:902 (1,2,3,4) - same as above 04:44:683 -
05:33:585 (2,3,1,2) - I don't think this makes sense. Head of 2 should not be on 1 imo, and considering the movement, 3, 1, and 2 should be on somewhere that's not leaned too much to the edge.
05:33:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also, this is very unstable.