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M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)

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Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Syph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 18, 2018 at 11:53:10

Artist: M2U
Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Source: Deemo
Tags: rayark magnolia myosotis alternate story symphonic boss song piano violin dnb drum'n'bass drum and bass Samsara Collection Diversity forgotten hourglass 3.0 chrononig asaiga moecho moeri sulfur
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6144kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asaiga's Insane (4.31 stars, 459 notes)
  2. ChronoN's Easy (1.44 stars, 161 notes)
  3. Despair (5.17 stars, 543 notes)
  4. Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme (4.66 stars, 449 notes)
  5. Normal (2.12 stars, 241 notes)
  6. Sulfur's Hard (3.33 stars, 305 notes)
Download: M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - ChronoNig
Normal - me
Hard - Sulfur
Insane - Asaiga
Extra - Moecho, me

Hitsounds by Classwork!
Last edited by Syph , edited 19 times in total.
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
=w=b
19:34 Syph: testplay pls
19:34 Kalibe: yehak
19:34 Kalibe: j
19:34 *Syph is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1259280 M2U feat. Guriri - Marigold]
19:34 Syph: yhjoe hknjoka
19:35 Syph: dont be fooled by sr btw xd
19:35 Kalibe: is this
19:35 Kalibe: danganronpa bg?
19:35 Kalibe: xdd
19:35 Syph: yep
19:35 Syph: xd
19:35 Kalibe: despair huh?
19:35 Kalibe: :thinking:
19:35 Syph: yea
19:35 Syph: seems fitting
19:35 Syph: :thinking:
19:38 Kalibe: pretty nice
19:38 Syph: nice play owo
19:38 Kalibe: though u could lower od
19:38 Kalibe: 8.5 feels too much for this
19:38 Kalibe: 8 is cool
19:38 Syph: really?
19:38 Kalibe: yea
19:38 Syph: i wanna keep acc a bit challenging
19:39 Syph: since most of stuff is sliders
19:39 Syph: so its already easy to acc
19:39 Kalibe: 01:11:905 (6) - ctrl g
19:39 Syph: maybe 8,3? xd
19:39 Kalibe: more like 8.2 then
19:40 Syph: oko
19:40 Syph: ctrlg'd
19:40 Kalibe: 01:14:905 (1) - u don't need this nc
19:40 Syph: removed
19:41 Kalibe: 01:58:218 (1) - same
19:42 Syph: that one feels more neccesary tho
19:42 Syph: sounds a lot like a new secion
19:42 Syph: section
19:42 Kalibe: hmm
19:42 Kalibe: up to you
19:42 Syph: =w=
19:43 Kalibe: 00:45:843 (1) - ?
19:43 Kalibe: its like the same as 00:41:343 (3) -
19:43 Syph: whoops
19:43 Syph: accidental
19:44 Kalibe: i like it :3
19:44 Kalibe: song is awesome
19:44 Syph: song is amazinggg
19:45 Kalibe: 00:51:843 (1) -
19:45 Kalibe: this is offscreen btw
19:45 Syph: except
19:45 Syph: https://sy.phic.al/i/gpcibvb.png
19:45 Syph: its not
19:45 Syph: i think?
19:46 Syph: idk why aimod says it is
19:46 Kalibe: `00:59:343 (5) -
19:46 Kalibe: would be cool
19:46 Kalibe: if you make it this a slider
19:46 Kalibe: with low SV
19:46 Kalibe: to follow vocal
19:47 Kalibe: =w=
19:47 Syph: hmm
19:48 Kalibe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7762085
19:48 Kalibe: :thinking:
19:48 Syph: https://sy.phic.al/i/fqxzbmt.png
19:48 Syph: better
19:48 Syph: i think
19:48 Syph: xd
19:49 Kalibe: ya
19:51 Syph: i need to do hs
19:51 Syph: zzzz
19:51 Syph: post log on thread btw
19:51 Kalibe: okie
Nakano Itsuki
1,218 posts
Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki
stuff
2017-04-07 23:14 Syph: hiii
2017-04-07 23:16 StarrStyx: hi
2017-04-07 23:16 Syph: could u testplay something
2017-04-07 23:16 StarrStyx: sure
2017-04-07 23:16 Syph: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1259280 M2U feat. Guriri - Marigold]
2017-04-07 23:16 StarrStyx: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1259280 M2U feat. Guriri - Marigold [Despair]]
2017-04-07 23:19 StarrStyx: looks good
2017-04-07 23:19 Syph: owo
2017-04-07 23:19 Syph: anything that tilted u or smth
2017-04-07 23:20 StarrStyx: not much
2017-04-07 23:20 StarrStyx: 00:13:218 (3,4) - dont think this should be stacked tho
2017-04-07 23:20 StarrStyx: nearly threw me off
2017-04-07 23:20 Syph: https://sy.phic.al/i/ccgwhgg.png this instead maybe?
2017-04-07 23:20 Syph: yeah ive seen some people misread it
2017-04-07 23:20 StarrStyx: could work
2017-04-07 23:21 Syph: ill go with that then
2017-04-07 23:21 StarrStyx: 01:23:343 (7,1,2,3) - might be me just being a scrub but this is kinda awkward to aim
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: hmm
2017-04-07 23:22 StarrStyx: 01:26:530 (7) - and might as well nc this since the chain is a bit long
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: ive tried my best to make it flow properly
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: because it was a lot worse at first
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: and since then havent really heard anything about it
2017-04-07 23:22 StarrStyx: oh
2017-04-07 23:22 StarrStyx: it isnt that bad actually, just pointing it out
2017-04-07 23:22 StarrStyx: if its fine then w/e
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: mm okay
2017-04-07 23:22 Syph: nc'd
2017-04-07 23:23 StarrStyx: lemme see
2017-04-07 23:24 StarrStyx: dont think theres anything else unless nazi
2017-04-07 23:24 StarrStyx: 01:50:343 (1,2) - could be same shape :/
2017-04-07 23:24 Syph: i mean
2017-04-07 23:24 Syph: nazi is fine
2017-04-07 23:24 Syph: :d
2017-04-07 23:24 StarrStyx: guess thats it i think
2017-04-07 23:25 Syph: uhh
2017-04-07 23:25 Syph: theyre different shape cuz
2017-04-07 23:25 Syph: theres pretty strong sound on 1st slider
2017-04-07 23:25 Syph: so i did straight instead of curved
2017-04-07 23:25 StarrStyx: ic
2017-04-07 23:26 StarrStyx: lol is stack leniency 0.2
2017-04-07 23:27 Syph: yeah
2017-04-07 23:27 Syph: it is :d
2017-04-07 23:27 StarrStyx: :d
2017-04-07 23:27 StarrStyx: nice map
2017-04-07 23:27 StarrStyx: think im done then
2017-04-07 23:27 Syph: thanks owo
2017-04-07 23:27 StarrStyx: owo
2017-04-07 23:27 Syph: feel free to post log or smth
2017-04-07 23:27 StarrStyx: k
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
Just a couple of suggestions here.
01:04 Nyukai: btw, you want me to full-mod the mapset you gave me before? xD
01:05 Syph: modding extra's is so easy
01:05 Syph: because everyone makes rhythm mistakes
01:05 Syph: and
01:05 Nyukai: xDD
01:05 Syph: that would be awesome owo
01:05 Syph: when it's done tho
01:05 Nyukai: i assume its not completed xD
01:05 Syph: waiting for yuii to do his hard gd
01:05 Syph: and two insane's
01:06 Syph: @@
01:06 Nyukai: i saw it
01:06 Syph: wait
01:06 Syph: what the heck
01:06 Syph: doormat already ranked hitorigoto
01:06 Nyukai: yes
01:07 Nyukai: xDDDDD
01:07 Syph: that song makes me happy
01:07 Syph: idk why
01:07 Nyukai: its claris
01:08 Syph: i like claris
01:08 Nyukai: 00:09:843 (2,3) - this is weird to see in normal but dunno how to fix XD
01:08 Nyukai: same
01:09 Syph: is it really weird
01:09 Syph: fuk
01:09 Syph: you should see my normal in soundscape
01:09 Nyukai: xDD
01:09 Syph: its full of stuff like that
01:09 Nyukai: looks good anyway
01:09 Nyukai: fix hp in easy diff
01:09 *Syph is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1109186 TRUE - Soundscape [Normal]]
01:09 Nyukai: please
01:09 Nyukai: xD
01:09 Syph: o
01:09 Syph: what should it be
01:09 *Nyukai is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1260802 M2U feat. Guriri - Marigold [ChronoN's Easy]]
01:10 Nyukai: i guess 2? its 6 lol
01:11 Syph: yeah i didnt even check hp before
01:11 Syph: lol
01:11 Nyukai: xDD
01:11 Nyukai: ok
01:11 Nyukai: 00:17:530 (1) - as i said remove this, just reminding, 'cause I will post the mod
01:11 Syph: my lower diffs
01:11 Syph: are so edgy
01:11 Nyukai: xDD
01:11 Syph: yeah i removed it
01:11 Nyukai: 00:26:905 (3) - stack with (4) maybe to avoid the overlap?
01:11 Nyukai: with (1)
01:12 Syph: oh
01:12 Syph: i went for triangle
01:12 Syph: but thats probably better
01:12 Nyukai: triangles are cute, its just a suggestion
01:12 Syph: actually yea if i change that
01:12 Syph: 00:25:405 (6,1) -
01:12 Syph: i would have to stack this too
01:12 Syph: zz
01:12 Syph: idk
01:13 Nyukai: not necessary
01:13 Nyukai: 01:00:843 (4,1,2) - quite weird xD
01:14 Nyukai: or idk
01:14 Syph: i really dont know what else to do in stuff like this cuz
01:14 Syph: i have 0 experience with lower diffs
01:14 Syph: so i just do whatever
01:14 Syph: and hope it works
01:14 Nyukai: i know
01:14 Nyukai: 01:09:093 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary cause it makes the combo shorter than you used to do
01:15 Nyukai: maybe should be here 01:10:593 (4) -
01:15 Nyukai: or just remove
01:15 Syph: oh yea true
01:16 Syph: ill remove
01:16 Nyukai: tbh
01:16 Nyukai: i would add another diff between easy and normal
01:16 Nyukai: this looks like advanced
01:17 Nyukai: imo
01:17 Syph: omg if i get this issue again
01:17 Syph: i'll kms
01:17 Syph: i had this with soundscape
01:17 Nyukai: oh rip
01:17 Syph: ill just try to push it without one
01:17 Nyukai: hopefully you will be ok xDD
01:18 *Nyukai is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1259280 M2U feat. Guriri - Marigold [Despair]]
01:18 Syph: but yea i'll do that if i really need one
01:18 Syph: LOL
01:18 Nyukai: 00:01:593 (1) - don't you think a 1/6 (or 1/8, i dont even know) slider before this would fit the song nicely in this kind of diff?
01:18 Nyukai: ""Extra""
01:18 Nyukai: 00:17:093 (1) - like here
01:19 Syph: idk if i can do that
01:19 Syph: because like
01:19 Syph: i would have to do a 1/6 slider
01:19 Syph: not a repeat like that other one
01:19 Syph: feels weird when its only once in the map
01:19 Nyukai: ah i see
01:19 Syph: and on like the most calm part
01:20 Nyukai: 00:22:499 (4,1) - this is fine, but somehow i feel this 00:22:968 (3,4,1) - harder to read
01:20 Syph: like it would be something like this xd https://sy.phic.al/i/otmcpdq.png
01:20 Syph: is weird
01:20 Nyukai: okok
01:20 Syph: o i had testplays for that
01:20 Syph: i think everyone hit it on sightread
01:21 Syph: well i had it different first
01:21 Syph: so i changed it
01:21 Nyukai: hm
01:21 Nyukai: i can see the blanket pattern before, that's why i think that's fine, but the other one...
01:21 Nyukai: doesn't feel like a triplet
01:21 Nyukai: but whatever
01:21 Syph: i think people hit it because
01:21 Syph: they basically got introduced to it right before
01:22 Syph: so they see smth similar and know its the same thing
01:22 Nyukai: i see
01:22 Nyukai: 00:32:530 (1,2,3) - maybe make the spacing bigger to make it easier to read?
01:22 Nyukai: stacks are fine, but they are not always visible
01:22 Nyukai: and they are overlapped similar
01:22 Syph: sure
01:22 Nyukai: see im bad modding extra xD
01:22 Syph: increased it a bit
01:22 Nyukai: nice
01:23 Syph: owo
01:23 Syph: it's fine
01:23 Nyukai: 00:43:593 (1,2,3) - i can't get the triplet here
01:23 Nyukai: 00:44:155 (3,4) - should be there imo
01:24 Syph: this part is so weird
01:24 Syph: a lot of people messed this up
01:24 Syph: maybe i should just remove 1/4 here all together
01:24 Nyukai: yeah its hard to hear it well
01:24 Nyukai: as you wish
01:25 Syph: ill just remove the 1/4
01:25 Syph: even better i think
01:25 Nyukai: well that's all
01:25 Nyukai: its cool
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-


just scroll down http://m2u.studio/ALBUM
Enon
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon
Marigold (feat. 구리리)
Asaiga
848 posts
Joined July 2013
Asaiga
sorry for delaying 4 months ọ A ọ
hitsound will be fixed later

simple insane
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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Title:Marigold
TitleUnicode:Marigold
Artist:M2U feat. Guriri
ArtistUnicode:M2U feat. Guriri
Creator:Syph
Version:Asaiga's Insane
Source:Deemo
Tags:
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MEK
66 posts
Joined September 2013
MEK
syph dyph
00:03:084 (1,2) - make it consistant with 00:05:334 (5,6) -
00:18:084 (1) - doesnt feel right to have spinner with no sound
00:19:396 (1,2) - feel like the spacing and ds to slider could be like 00:20:052 (2,3,4) -
00:20:802 (2,3,4) - looks weird or somethin idk
00:37:584 (1,2) - 00:39:834 (3,4) - 00:43:584 (1,2) - 00:53:709 (1,1) - if u wanna make this section consistant either change these so then the 2nd note is not stacked under slider or opposite for other stufz

theres some other inconsistancys ive prob missed but yeeeeeeee

edit; 00:32:896 (1,2,1) - seems a bit random
-Tochi
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
-Tochi
  • Despair
  1. 00:16:709 (1) - I recommend stacking this on 00:15:646 (2) - seems to fit better, than having three objects stacked on each other like this.
  2. 00:51:834 (1) - No need for NC here imo, because the combo here 00:52:584 (1,2,3) - is more than from here 00:51:084 - to 00:52:584 - and they're basically the same rhythm.
  3. 01:13:209 - You could add a small break here.

  • Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme
  1. 00:16:349 (2,3,4) - You should probably NC these since they're located in an iregular rhythm.
  2. 00:22:115 (2,3) - Please fix the stacking here, it's slightly off by a bit.
  3. 02:25:584 - This wasn't supposed to be 5% in volume right?
  • Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:08:709 (3) - I think you forgot to mute the slider end here.
  2. 00:20:709 (1) - Why did you NC this? Don't think it's necessary and it looks kinda random tbh (there's no SV changes too).
  3. 01:39:927 (2) - Please delete this circle. Muting it is not a good option, it's basically just overmapping.
good luck!
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme
  1. 00:16:349 (2,3,4) - Maybe avoid slight overlaps just for better visuals?
  2. 00:30:646 (4,4,4) - Just my opinion but maybe u could put NCs here for better reading since u had a 1/4 gap emphasized with large spacing at 00:29:615 (5,6) - just before the next part.
  3. 01:32:521 (1) - lol, doesnt visually look appealing. I think at least make the anchors more visible if u want to emphasize that death sound imo.
  4. 01:33:271 (2) - Why is this 5% volume at the end? Doesnt rly make sense to suddenly silence the HS when players are trying to listen and make sense of the rhythm.
  5. 01:48:834 (1) - lol wtf this feels so random and out of the blue when you have key changes at 01:50:334 - and its not 1 constant pitch. Also the shape isnt god for visuals imo.
  6. 01:57:927 - You can silence the slider end here imo

Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:15:646 - Missed quite an important key sound here, would make sense considering that you've followed the key sounds after
  2. 00:26:990 - Why is this at 5% volume? If there's no key sound there or anything then just dun put a note to avoid overmapping.. A triplet works too here since ur patterns after have many triplets as well..

Sulfur's Hard
  1. 01:06:646 (2,3,4,1) - My eyes @_@ I think you should avoid these type of overlaps for better visuals, I get you want the reverse flow cuz of the vocals but visually it's not very appealing imo.
  2. 01:10:584 (1) - Why doesnt this blanket the note like the previous and next slider? Blanket 01:10:396 (4) - to make the structure more consistent?
  3. 01:22:115 (5) - Reverse slider should start at 01:22:021 - and end at 01:22:209 - . You can replace 01:21:834 (4) - with a note instead on white tick and drag reverse slider to the red tick.
  4. 01:33:365 - Why is this 5% volume???? I dun see any reason to almost silence the HS here..
  5. 01:36:084 (2) - aaaaa these type of pverlaps pls ;-;

other diffs look fine to me~ GL
Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Syph

MEK wrote:

syph dyph
00:03:084 (1,2) - make it consistant with 00:05:334 (5,6) - variation tho ):
00:18:084 (1) - doesnt feel right to have spinner with no sound there's a fadein
00:19:396 (1,2) - feel like the spacing and ds to slider could be like 00:20:052 (2,3,4) - did
00:20:802 (2,3,4) - looks weird or somethin idk !
00:37:584 (1,2) - 00:39:834 (3,4) - 00:43:584 (1,2) - 00:53:709 (1,1) - if u wanna make this section consistant either change these so then the 2nd note is not stacked under slider or opposite for other stufz i prefer this

theres some other inconsistancys ive prob missed but yeeeeeeee

edit; 00:32:896 (1,2,1) - seems a bit random thxx

-Tochi wrote:

  • Despair
  1. 00:16:709 (1) - I recommend stacking this on 00:15:646 (2) - seems to fit better, than having three objects stacked on each other like this. good idea
  2. 00:51:834 (1) - No need for NC here imo, because the combo here 00:52:584 (1,2,3) - is more than from here 00:51:084 - to 00:52:584 - and they're basically the same rhythm. i don't really get ur point but i felt like ncing here made sense with the vocal
  3. 01:13:209 - You could add a small break here. no need imo
thanks!
Cheesecake
729 posts
Joined December 2013
Cheesecake
[Easy]

00:09:084 (3,2) - fix the overlap?
00:21:084 (3,4,5) - this could possibly be a bit too confusing, the slider path kinda makes it look like 5 will be the next note but it's not

[Normal]

00:03:646 (4,5) - weird visual distance here
00:13:584 (4) - place a circle instead of slider? this feels really dense for a calm part
00:14:334 (5) - ^
01:21:084 (6) - remove nc
art
5 posts
Joined February 2015
art
[ChronoN's Easy]

02:06:834 (4) - shouldn't this be the same length as the other sliders? i didn't see you do 1/1 for these anywhere else
02:16:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - this feels really cluttered
02:21:834 (1) - a spinner would be a better idea imo, this is pretty hard to follow for new players

[Normal]

consider lowering the slider velocity since it's higher than the hard diff

00:38:896 (3) - remove this circle? i think you should keep this part as calm as possible rhythm wise

good luck! 8-)
Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Syph
fixed all in normal diff and changed a bunch of stuff myself, thanks
Asaiga
848 posts
Joined July 2013
Asaiga

-Tochi wrote:

  • Asaiga's Insane
  1. 00:08:709 (3) - I think you forgot to mute the slider end here. yes :'p
  2. 00:20:709 (1) - Why did you NC this? Don't think it's necessary and it looks kinda random tbh (there's no SV changes too). removed nc
  3. 01:39:927 (2) - Please delete this circle. Muting it is not a good option, it's basically just overmapping. agree, deleted that circle
[/notice]

- G I D Z - wrote:

  1. 00:15:646 - Missed quite an important key sound here, would make sense considering that you've followed the key sounds after okay, i overlooked it
  2. 00:26:990 - Why is this at 5% volume? If there's no key sound there or anything then just dun put a note to avoid overmapping.. A triplet works too here since ur patterns after have many triplets as well.. probably taken greenlines from top diffs with edgy stuff :v. deleted it anyway
Thanks! if you didn't ping me i wouldn't know there're mods.
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alden
206 posts
Joined November 2013
alden

Cheesecake wrote:

[Easy]

00:09:084 (3,2) - fix the overlap? fixed
00:21:084 (3,4,5) - this could possibly be a bit too confusing, the slider path kinda makes it look like 5 will be the next note but it's not fixed

art wrote:

[ChronoN's Easy]

02:06:834 (4) - shouldn't this be the same length as the other sliders? i didn't see you do 1/1 for these anywhere else already fixed
02:16:584 (1,2,3,4,1) - this feels really cluttered i made it an easy square
02:21:834 (1) - a spinner would be a better idea imo, this is pretty hard to follow for new players ok i can do that
updated
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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Title:Marigold
TitleUnicode:Marigold
Artist:M2U feat. Guriri
ArtistUnicode:M2U feat. Guriri
Creator:Syph
Version:ChronoN's Easy
Source:Deemo
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Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Syph

-Tochi wrote:

Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme
[*]00:16:349 (2,3,4) - You should probably NC these since they're located in an iregular rhythm. ye
[*]00:22:115 (2,3) - Please fix the stacking here, it's slightly off by a bit. y
[*]02:25:584 - This wasn't supposed to be 5% in volume right? moecho said oops

- G I D Z - wrote:

Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme
  1. 00:16:349 (2,3,4) - Maybe avoid slight overlaps just for better visuals? no need
  2. 00:30:646 (4,4,4) - Just my opinion but maybe u could put NCs here for better reading since u had a 1/4 gap emphasized with large spacing at 00:29:615 (5,6) - just before the next part. this isn't hard to read whatsoever
  3. 01:32:521 (1) - lol, doesnt visually look appealing. I think at least make the anchors more visible if u want to emphasize that death sound imo. looks pretty nice imo
  4. 01:33:271 (2) - Why is this 5% volume at the end? Doesnt rly make sense to suddenly silence the HS when players are trying to listen and make sense of the rhythm. hitsound copier
  5. 01:48:834 (1) - lol wtf this feels so random and out of the blue when you have key changes at 01:50:334 - and its not 1 constant pitch. Also the shape isnt god for visuals imo. i think it's fine tbh
  6. 01:57:927 - You can silence the slider end here imo didn't silence but lower volume
Sulfur's Hard
  1. 01:06:646 (2,3,4,1) - My eyes @_@ I think you should avoid these type of overlaps for better visuals, I get you want the reverse flow cuz of the vocals but visually it's not very appealing imo. they're fine
  2. 01:10:584 (1) - Why doesnt this blanket the note like the previous and next slider? Blanket 01:10:396 (4) - to make the structure more consistent? 01:09:646 (2,1) - .. lol
  3. 01:22:115 (5) - Reverse slider should start at 01:22:021 - and end at 01:22:209 - . You can replace 01:21:834 (4) - with a note instead on white tick and drag reverse slider to the red tick. the stronger sounds start on blue tick actually
  4. 01:33:365 - Why is this 5% volume???? I dun see any reason to almost silence the HS here.. y
  5. 01:36:084 (2) - aaaaa these type of pverlaps pls ;-; what's wrong with it
Realazy
Elite Mapper
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Joined June 2011
Realazy
[General]

a few of your hitsounds without >5ms delay

[ChronoN's Easy]

00:10:584 (1,2,3,4) - you shouldn't use those patterns in such calm parts of the song, it makes for weird spikes in intensity considering the more intense choruses and verses don't have such dense patterns.
00:21:084 (3,4,5,1) - could make a better square here, this one is pretty off
00:34:584 (1) - end this sooner to give more recovery time to players, 00:36:084 - would be nice
01:06:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is extremely long, shorten some of those sliders to have a few breaks between those. 1/2 gaps are already hard enough in easies, you don't need 8 of them in a row, especially when you also have to follow sliders at the same time. for example you could shorten 01:08:334 (4) -
01:20:896 - could add a circle here
01:37:584 (1) - 01:40:584 (1) - i don't think the NCs here are necessary at all, you might want to remove them since it could fuck up with drain
02:10:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is also very long, shortening 02:12:834 (4,4) - those would be nice

[Normal]

i'm not sure what's going on with the NCing overall in that diff, i feel like you NC more based on object count, which causes NCs to be misplaced and not on the start of new musical sections. stuff like 00:06:084 (1,4) - 00:09:084 (1,3) - should be swapped in terms of NCing, imo sticking to one NC every other downbeat would work much better

00:15:084 (1) - offscreen, also i don't think the NC is necessary here? keep it for the next combo since there's 1/3
00:51:834 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think that's a pretty long chain of objects with only 1/2 gaps, maybe you could remove the repeat on 00:54:084 (5) - and make it 3/2?
00:59:334 (2,4) - not really a fan of this overlap tbh, maybe you could rework the pattern a bit to stack those 2?
01:20:334 - i strongly suggest you delete a few notes and/or shorten some sliders. there's only one 1/1 break in the next 22 seconds. this is still a normal, so don't go for too much density even if it's the kiai, especially when 1/2s don't overlap.
01:41:709 (1,2,3) - you should probably replace this by a repeat 1/2 slider. the kiai has ended and these notes really aren't strong enough to have 3 circles in a row

[Sulfur's Hard]

01:21:834 (4,5,6) - this rhythm feels pretty awkward for a hard diff imo, maybe try this instead? would be simpler to play
02:12:084 (2) - imo this feels pretty lame, that part is already sparse enough that you could maybe delete the repeat and add a 1/1 slider at 02:12:834 - to fully map the vocals?
02:21:646 (1) - i'm not sure what this repeat is following here

[Asaiga's Insane]

00:20:709 (1) - what's the point of NCing this if you're gonna NC right after that?
00:25:209 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk if it was intentional but that curve looks a bit fucked up due to how 00:25:584 (1) - is placed
00:42:834 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk this pattern doesn't feel justified to me, it doesn't feel that much stronger than 00:42:084 (1,2,3,4) - and there's nothing really building up in the song
01:28:959 (4,3) - you could maybe make those kicksliders? i feel this pattern could use a bit more intensity since it really stands out from the rest of the drop

[Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme]

01:15:834 (3) - shouldn't this be NC'd for consistency?
01:48:834 (1) - i think the higher SV can catch ppl off guard especially since this has pretty complex shapes, but holy fuck this is good
02:22:584 - maybe lower volume more here? the song starts becoming pretty quiet, and the sliders become way louder than the song itsef

[Despair]

00:29:709 (1,2,3,4,1) - you could make the spacing here bigger so there's more contrast, kinda like how 00:29:146 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - does it. or alternatively, lower spacing on 00:29:334 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:22:959 (5,6,7,1) - flow feels a bit awkward around here, it's playable for sure, but i think it'd be much more comfortable to play if you had something like this
01:23:896 (1,2,1) - you could lower spacing here, it definitely doesn't sound as intense as 01:23:521 (1,2,3) -
01:28:771 (2) - why is this a kickslider when 01:28:959 (1,2,3,4) - are circles? they're pretty much following the same instrument aren't they?
01:34:209 (1,2) - pretty sure this isn't 1/4, sounds like 1/6 to me
01:45:459 (2,3,1) - looks weird with stacking enabled
01:55:396 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - move this pattern a bit so the triple doesn't overlap with 01:54:834 (3) - due to stacking

i'll recheck depending on replies to normal and easy
also move to pending
Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Syph

Realazy wrote:

[General]

a few of your hitsounds without >5ms delay thanks

[Normal]

i'm not sure what's going on with the NCing overall in that diff, i feel like you NC more based on object count, which causes NCs to be misplaced and not on the start of new musical sections. stuff like 00:06:084 (1,4) - 00:09:084 (1,3) - should be swapped in terms of NCing, imo sticking to one NC every other downbeat would work much better fixed

00:15:084 (1) - offscreen, also i don't think the NC is necessary here? keep it for the next combo since there's 1/3 fixed
00:51:834 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think that's a pretty long chain of objects with only 1/2 gaps, maybe you could remove the repeat on 00:54:084 (5) - and make it 3/2? i tried something else
00:59:334 (2,4) - not really a fan of this overlap tbh, maybe you could rework the pattern a bit to stack those 2? i like it tho
01:20:334 - i strongly suggest you delete a few notes and/or shorten some sliders. there's only one 1/1 break in the next 22 seconds. this is still a normal, so don't go for too much density even if it's the kiai, especially when 1/2s don't overlap. -- yeah i did something else here now
01:41:709 (1,2,3) - you should probably replace this by a repeat 1/2 slider. the kiai has ended and these notes really aren't strong enough to have 3 circles in a row okay

[Sulfur's Hard]

01:21:834 (4,5,6) - this rhythm feels pretty awkward for a hard diff imo, maybe try this instead? would be simpler to play yeah
02:12:084 (2) - imo this feels pretty lame, that part is already sparse enough that you could maybe delete the repeat and add a 1/1 slider at 02:12:834 - to fully map the vocals? yeah
02:21:646 (1) - i'm not sure what this repeat is following here vocal pretty sure

[Moecho's Fluorescent Extreme]

01:15:834 (3) - shouldn't this be NC'd for consistency? ya
01:48:834 (1) - i think the higher SV can catch ppl off guard especially since this has pretty complex shapes, but holy fuck this is good it doesn't have to be sightreadable on first try tho, theyll either get it first time or get it second time after seeing it once
02:22:584 - maybe lower volume more here? the song starts becoming pretty quiet, and the sliders become way louder than the song itsef yup

[Despair]

00:29:709 (1,2,3,4,1) - you could make the spacing here bigger so there's more contrast, kinda like how 00:29:146 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - does it. or alternatively, lower spacing on 00:29:334 (1,2,3,4,1) - it is bigger already
01:22:959 (5,6,7,1) - flow feels a bit awkward around here, it's playable for sure, but i think it'd be much more comfortable to play if you had something like this much better now thank you for the suggestion
01:23:896 (1,2,1) - you could lower spacing here, it definitely doesn't sound as intense as 01:23:521 (1,2,3) - it sounds just as intense if not more intense to me
01:28:771 (2) - why is this a kickslider when 01:28:959 (1,2,3,4) - are circles? they're pretty much following the same instrument aren't they? just variety to make it more fun, i think it's fine
01:34:209 (1,2) - pretty sure this isn't 1/4, sounds like 1/6 to me it's not exactly 1/4 but it's not 1/6 either i think, 1/4 is the best to go with here imo since its not rly noticable and since the entire map is basically 1/4 only it'd be weird to suddenly go with some other weird complicated snapping
01:45:459 (2,3,1) - looks weird with stacking enabled oops
01:55:396 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - move this pattern a bit so the triple doesn't overlap with 01:54:834 (3) - due to stacking ye

i'll recheck depending on replies to normal and easy
also move to pending !
thanks~
Asaiga
848 posts
Joined July 2013
Asaiga

Realazy wrote:

[Asaiga's Insane]

00:20:709 (1) - what's the point of NCing this if you're gonna NC right after that? mistake was made
00:25:209 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk if it was intentional but that curve looks a bit fucked up due to how 00:25:584 (1) - is placed ctrl+h the slider, not very appealing indeed
00:42:834 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk this pattern doesn't feel justified to me, it doesn't feel that much stronger than 00:42:084 (1,2,3,4) - and there's nothing really building up in the song there is. I follow my intuintion :3
01:28:959 (4,3) - you could maybe make those kicksliders? i feel this pattern could use a bit more intensity since it really stands out from the rest of the drop yes
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422,143,131146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,311,131334,6,0,B|439:327|439:327|367:312|367:312|331:327,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,219,131896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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259,283,132646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,220,132834,6,0,B|92:181|92:181|145:141|126:62,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,217,133584,6,0,B|339:200|339:200|276:249,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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347,169,141084,6,0,L|322:297,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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