1. Voice of Shouko (4.33 stars, 967 notes)

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YinyinMeiDaiZi wrote:

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

嘻嘻，弱弱的问一下这是要和谁collab啊

1. 00:12:288 (2,3) - just a small thing but would you mind moving this to 312|276 for blanket purpose with 00:11:740 (1) -
2. 00:13:203 (5) - 1/2 reverse isn't fit nicely when you mapped the 1/4 part on 00:12:288 (2) - or just make 00:11:740 (1) - 1/2 reverse as well lul
3. 00:49:422 (5,6) - 01:06:983 (4,5) - convert to slider is more natural to play in calm section imo
4. 00:55:276 (6) - pls dont stack to emphasize the 00:55:642 (1) - something same with 01:00:764 (4,5,1) - would work i guess
5. 02:02:227 (4,5,6,7) - woah man this jump is way too spooky, since you used 1/2 rhythm before with small spacing, consider to nerf this jump as well
6. 04:07:166 (3,1) - there's a 1/8 sound so consider to make this as triples
7. 04:23:447 (1,2,3,4) - w
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - maybe overmap, also why u didn't used this earlier (1st kiai) lul
9. 04:51:252 (5,6) - maybe overmap too
10. 05:17:593 (1,2) - idk why u hold back to 1/2 again from 1/4 spams on 05:14:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , the strong vocals is still there and ur kiai isn't ended yet so ye spam more
11. also you can just boost your spacings on 1/2 rhythm patterns to less confusing on your rhythm switch like on 02:49:788 (1,2,3,4) - 03:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - etc

Akitoshi wrote:

1. 00:12:288 (2,3) - just a small thing but would you mind moving this to 312|276 for blanket purpose with 00:11:740 (1) - fixed
2. 00:13:203 (5) - 1/2 reverse isn't fit nicely when you mapped the 1/4 part on 00:12:288 (2) - or just make 00:11:740 (1) - 1/2 reverse as well lulI think this fit is okay D:
3. 00:49:422 (5,6) - 01:06:983 (4,5) - convert to slider is more natural to play in calm section imo fix
4. 00:55:276 (6) - pls dont stack to emphasize the 00:55:642 (1) - something same with 01:00:764 (4,5,1) - would work i guessokay
5. 02:02:227 (4,5,6,7) - woah man this jump is way too spooky, since you used 1/2 rhythm before with small spacing, consider to nerf this jump as wellnerfed
6. 04:07:166 (3,1) - there's a 1/8 sound so consider to make this as triplesno:D...
7. 04:23:447 (1,2,3,4) - ww
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - maybe overmap, also why u didn't used this earlier (1st kiai) lul remap
9. 04:51:252 (5,6) - maybe overmap too fixed
10. 05:17:593 (1,2) - idk why u hold back to 1/2 again from 1/4 spams on 05:14:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , the strong vocals is still there and ur kiai isn't ended yet so ye spam more I think 1/2 slider is just for finish the end
11. also you can just boost your spacings on 1/2 rhythm patterns to less confusing on your rhythm switch like on 02:49:788 (1,2,3,4) - 03:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - etcw..

kk gl

Wikozo wrote:

From my modding queues M4M.

My Voice
00:31:496 (1) - removewhy...this is very important
02:02:593 (5) - get this circle next to the slider that was beforefixed
03:48:142 (7) - removethis is very important too
03:55:459 (4) - ^^
Bonus = This diff name is "My Voicce". Should be "My Voice"what the fuck am I doing xddd

~Wikozo

Dyl-Byl wrote:

great manga. finished it.

cried

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3
M4M mod

[My Voice]
01:43:569 (2) You can move the circle a little closer to the next sliderfixed
02:34:422 (2) move the circle a little closer to the previous sliderno
03:29:118 (4) Do it in the center of the previous and next circlesfixed
05:20:154 (2) move the circle a little closer to the next sliderfixed
05:36:618 (1,3) you can add Whistle soundno
05:39:544 (1,3) ^no
05:42:471 (1,3,5,7) ^no


Nice song

[Jenn] wrote:

• My Voice- lame testplay i fucked up at end

1. 00:45:398 (3,4,5,6) - 我认为你把1-2-3-4便成1-3-2-4（像这打的跟舒服間距會變太大，而且我覺得這樣怪怪的ww
2. 00:53:813 (3) - 红点放在滑条中间是不是好看一点不用吧，這樣也不錯
3. 01:10:276 (1,2) - 也可以试试^
4. 02:12:837 - 应该放点东西， 有一点空不太舒服 （但是没声呃）因為沒聲音就不放了
5. 02:14:300 - 一样^
6. 02:15:764 - 也是^
7. 02:33:325 (3) - 自己觉得滑条s 形装不太好看耶稍改一下
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - 四分钟里都没1/8实在放有一点太突然了，我的replay里我好像也没打到依照歌曲做的，實在沒辦法qq
9. 04:51:069 (3,4,5) - 把音调到50听，不大对劲不了
10. 05:01:496 (1,2) - 好像有.001 的没有overlap可不可以fix一夏 修了
11. 05:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - 方形不太好看會嗎xd
12. 05:20:520 (3,4) - 歌慢下了w好看一点，也reflect歌稍慢下来的几秒
13. 05:51:343 - ♥滑条在这里结束先保留因為我不太確定是不是這樣，等多一點mod再看看

Ametrin wrote:

M4M from my q
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/568305

你还投什么q啊直接游戏里喊一句或pm啥的这摸不就给你了(

mod

00:20:154 (5) - 感觉这横的太直接了 可以考虑和00:18:691 (3,4) - 摆个对称
00:21:527 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:51:252 (3) - 向上一点 到205|207
01:07:349 (1) - 高了 和 01:06:983 (4) - 组合起来不好看 到312|285
01:29:849 (4) - 有点远 ctrl+g
02:20:154 (6) - 3、4不一样高5、6就别一样高啦 下来点
02:33:325 (3) - 中间加红点干啥
02:34:788 (3) - 这个音弱 别放这么远 205|170差不多
03:02:959 (3) - 太高 410|115
03:19:057 (1) - ctrl+g 强调后面2
03:21:252 (1,2,3,1) - 这个空拍有点难读 2放左边3叠1上把
03:53:996 (8) - 这位置有点尴尬 干脆再右边点 306|31
04:08:813 (1) - 这里之后音乐变的比以前激烈了一点 感觉你还是在用前面的节奏在做 空的太多了 以及音效大声一点
04:24:179 (2) - 不i好看 前面直的部分也往下扭吧
05:06:618 (7) - NC
05:13:203 (1,2) - 这里节奏下复杂点 后面连续1/4跳感觉太突兀了
05:41:740 (1,2) - 怎么突然这么远

太好听了

mod after remap

General
stack leniency不能低於0.3啊 會被搞事的
全圖的節奏基本沒變，塞滿1/3滑條……倒不是不可以，只是感覺有些單調，連長滑條都沒幾個。曲子是1/6不代表你不能放1/4啊……合曲就行。
各個part的區別基本只有SV，滑條也基本沒有新奇的排列，就順著flow轉啊轉突然換個方向然後繼續轉……玩到後面很無聊啊
建議看看Lan Wings那張宵暗花火
總而言之，以你放滑條的水平基本不會出問題……然後這圖 全是四個滑條或者三滑條帶二連 我摸個什麼勁=_=

mod
沒啥好摸的 水幾個
00:30:651 (3) - ctrl+g体现下音乐 這裡音弱這樣會太遠
01:58:212 (4) - 改成兩個note 這樣結尾就能體現vocalk
02:30:041 (3,4) - 太近了，體現不出1/2k
03:21:627 (5,1) - 這個距離不合理……倒不是容易讀錯，但是確實近了。不如疊上，或者ctrl+g把flow反過來k
03:24:188 (3) - 說實話我不太喜歡這種滑條……看著有點笨（個人意見）呃...
03:42:480 (1,2,3,4) - 雖說是為了stack變整潔，但不放正中間強迫症很難受(x強迫正+1
03:53:639 (4,5) - ctrl+g，不然連續縱跳後接到03:54:188 (1) - 還向下太詭異了這還行
04:42:480 (1,2) - 包好k

美麗 GL

Shishou wrote:

hi
From my mod q
m4m

01:10:651 (2,3) - fix blanketk

01:17:968 (2,3) - ^k

00:19:797 (3,1,2) - ^wtf..

01:49:066 (3,4) - ^k

02:05:895 (7) - your missing a note hereNo missing a note it's blank

02:26:017 (4,1) - fix blanketummm I blanket here

02:49:797 (1,2) - ^^

03:02:602 (4) - Use ds. this slider is too far from the previous noteIt's no far

03:04:797 (2) - ctrl+g?nope

03:25:285 (2) - fix blanketk

02:57:114 (1) - drum hit clap?will add after there is very weird

02:57:846 (3) - ^^

03:49:066 (3) - put this a little lower like x443 y237 to make the flow better I think this follow is fine

03:53:090 (2,3) - put this a little lower nope

04:30:041 (4) - finish?nope

05:01:870 (2) - move this a little to the rightnope

05:27:846 (1,2) - fix blanketk

the rhythm is repetitive I guess. Hear the song I guess.xD
that's all good luck