JENNY ROM - WWW.BLONDE GIRL (MOMO MIX) · forum

Kaifin

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-03-21T15:49:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 8, 2018 at 4:47:54 PM

Artist: JENNY ROM
Title: http://WWW.BLONDE GIRL (MOMO MIX)
Source: DDRMAX -DanceDanceRevolution 6thMIX-
Tags: -_Yoshimaro_- Yoshimaro Doormat Underforest LowComboFC Sing blond cute ddr dance dance revolution dancemania
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7666kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

Another (4.79 stars, 459 notes)
Doormat's Insane ft. Kaifin (4.79 stars, 414 notes)
Forest's Hard (3.41 stars, 247 notes)
LCFC's Advanced (2.58 stars, 180 notes)
Sing's Insane ft. Kaifin (3.9 stars, 256 notes)
Yoshimaro's Normal (1.95 stars, 135 notes)

Download: JENNY ROM - http://WWW.BLONDE GIRL (MOMO MIX)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 of 5

Normal: - Yoshimaro -
Advanced: LowComboFC
Hard: Underforest
Insane: Sing featuring me
Insane: Doormat featuring me (he mapped blonde girl i mapped blonde man)
Another: me

CTB set by Ascendance

Last edited by Kaifin 2021-03-14T22:29:46+00:00, edited 50 times in total.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-06-10T06:19:46+00:00

3.42* ~ Not hitsounded

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33027
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)
TitleUnicode:WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)
Artist:Jenny Rom
ArtistUnicode:Jenny Rom
Creator:Kaifin
Version:Forest's Hard
Source:DDRMAX -DanceDanceRevolution 6thMIX-
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2017-06-12T21:05:19+00:00

i

LOVE

anime

Einja

652 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-06-12T23:03:03+00:00

hahahahahah

18:28 Kaifin: hi please mod my map
18:28 Kaifin: i can m4m
18:28 Einja: which one
18:28 *Kaifin is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1319682 Jenny Rom - WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)]
18:28 Einja: ok
18:30 Einja: can we irc
18:31 Kaifin: sure
18:31 Kaifin: oh i have a change sec
18:32 Kaifin: this is really hard lol
18:32 Kaifin: this is NOT pp
18:32 Einja: ik that
18:32 Einja: haven't got a b on a 5 stars in ages
18:34 Kaifin: cant fc 5 stars
18:34 Kaifin: gg
18:34 Kaifin: at least not right now
18:34 Einja: :think:
18:34 Kaifin: ok irc
18:34 Einja: ok
18:34 Einja: first
18:34 Kaifin: could you write mod for the gds
18:34 Einja: yeah
18:34 Einja: on the forum
18:34 Kaifin: i was more concerned about getting mods for the gds than my diff
18:34 Kaifin: ok
18:34 Kaifin: appreciated
18:34 Einja: ok first
18:34 Einja: add tags
18:34 Kaifin: O SHIt
18:34 Kaifin: i knew i forgot something
18:34 Einja: .lol
18:35 Einja: and since you used different bgs for every single diff>
18:35 Einja: maybe it would be a better idea to use different combo colours?
18:36 Kaifin: tags added
18:36 Kaifin: no combo colours are colour haxed
18:36 Einja: o
18:36 Kaifin: they are yellow and pink
18:36 Kaifin: blond
18:36 Kaifin: and girl
18:36 Kaifin: innovative
18:36 Einja: oh 
18:36 Einja: that makes sense for the dark colours i guess
18:36 Kaifin: and then they get darker for the dude
18:36 Einja: mk
18:36 Einja: i thought of something like taht
18:36 Einja: that8
18:37 Einja: 00:56:136 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this part
18:37 Einja: was so painful to read compared to the rest of the song
18:38 Kaifin: it is the most intense part of the song
18:39 Kaifin: maybe i'll add dark combo colours there
18:39 Kaifin: for the 12s
18:39 Kaifin: i had dark colours there before but wasnt sure
18:39 Einja: it's pretty different
18:39 Einja: and intense
18:39 Einja: so i think you should do some kind of signal instead of just a square pattern
18:39 Kaifin: the pattern is the best pattern in the map
18:39 Einja: you can keep the square
18:40 Einja: but like do something
18:40 Einja: as a signal
18:40 Kaifin: i'll just change the colour combos
18:40 Einja: ok that works
18:40 Kaifin: combo colours there then
18:40 Einja: 00:19:430 (2,3) - ncs?
18:40 Kaifin: ncd
18:41 Einja: 00:42:019 (1,2) - for patterns like these
18:41 Einja: wouldn't it add more emphasis if you made the 2nd circle a kick slider?
18:41 Kaifin: no that would play really badly
18:42 Kaifin: since its circles its more stop and go which is what i want
18:42 Einja: ah
18:42 Einja: that makes sense
18:44 Einja: 00:49:607 (1,1,1) - suggestion for patterns like these during kiai
18:44 Einja: you could increase volume on sliders overtime
18:46 Kaifin: maybe
18:46 Kaifin: it sounds kinda
18:46 Kaifin: idk the word
18:46 Kaifin: ear grating
18:46 Kaifin: lemme see how it sounds playing
18:48 Kaifin: i didnt notice a difference playing but i'll add it
18:48 Kaifin: seems like a fun addition
18:48 Einja: ok
18:48 Einja: 00:52:430 (1,2,3) - why didn't you make these sliders
18:49 Kaifin: the instrumental cuts out
18:49 Kaifin: so more emphasis on this with just circles
18:49 Kaifin: holding wouldnt give same emphasis
18:49 Einja: you could space them out a lot more
18:49 Einja: or make them a 1/1 jump
18:50 Kaifin: no
18:50 Kaifin: like i said, more emphasis on them being low spacing
18:50 Kaifin: if i made them 1/1 jumps itd just feel awkward
18:51 Einja: really? cuz it feels more comfortable playing it spaced jump wise for me
18:51 Kaifin: nah that would be bad i think
18:51 Kaifin: i dont think it fits the sound to have spacing
18:52 Kaifin: there is extra emphasis in going over a place you just were at a different rhythm
18:52 Einja: alright
18:52 Kaifin: 01:14:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
18:53 Einja: 00:38:666 (2,3) - ncs?
18:53 Einja: 01:01:254 (2,3) - 
18:54 Kaifin: i did this on purpose but i cant remember why
18:54 Kaifin: i think that it looks funny ncd but i can nc them
18:55 Einja: it looks nicer to me c:
18:55 Einja: 00:53:754 (4) - also nc
18:56 Kaifin: fixed
18:56 Kaifin: all fix
18:56 Einja: k
18:57 Einja: 00:17:313 (1,2,3) - if you lined these up instead of making a jump
18:57 Einja: i think it would add more emphasis
18:57 Kaifin: i want back and forth because of the vocal
18:57 Kaifin: im gonna slightly change the angle/spacing
18:58 Einja: 00:20:313 (2,3) - ctrl + g
18:58 Kaifin: no lol
18:58 Kaifin: that flow really bad
18:58 Kaifin: 00:20:136 (1,2,3,1) -
18:58 Kaifin: this is circle
18:58 Einja: and a slider
18:59 Kaifin: no like
18:59 Kaifin: its circular flow
18:59 Kaifin: is what i mean
18:59 Einja: http://prntscr.com/fj1f6z
18:59 Einja: this might be better
18:59 Kaifin: NO
18:59 Kaifin: LOL
19:00 Einja: oh well
19:00 Kaifin: wait what is the issue you have with the current patterN?
19:00 Einja: the overlap with 00:19:783 (3) - 
19:00 Einja: i have to go eat dinner soon btw
19:00 Kaifin: its readable and gives strucutr
19:00 Kaifin: the flow is really good to the pattern
19:01 Kaifin: imo
19:01 Kaifin: for the sound
19:01 Kaifin: plus it keeps the back and forth meme
19:01 Kaifin: established at 00:17:313 (1,2,3,1) -
19:01 Einja: mhm
19:01 Kaifin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8330449
19:01 Kaifin: i changed that one to be like this btw
19:01 Kaifin: better flow this way
19:01 Einja: that works
19:01 Kaifin: also no worries i'll be on for a while
19:01 Einja: alright 
19:02 Einja: i'll brb for the other gd mods
19:02 Kaifin: okay
19:02 Einja: posting on your thread
19:02 Kaifin: do you have anything else
19:02 Einja: for kds
19:02 Einja: no not really
19:02 Kaifin: thank you for the mod
19:02 Einja: np
19:02 Kaifin: i forgot so many ncs lOL

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-06-12T23:26:58+00:00

m4merino

Yoshimaro's Normal
00:02:489 (4,3) - bad overlap :c
00:05:313 (4) - angle so it fits slanted structure?
00:08:136 (4,2) - not perfectly stacked/locked
00:11:666 (1,5) - bad overlap
00:13:783 (4) - blanket is off
00:14:136 (5,3) - another weird overlap
00:15:901 (3) - why straight? should be slanted imo (because 00:20:136 (1) - )
00:19:783 (3) - blanket is off

LCFC's Advanced
nice map

Forest's Hard
00:01:783 (1) - blanket is off
00:05:666 (5) - not sure about this one, you click on the subtle note and the slider ends on a louder note, should be opposite imo
00:14:489 (1,2,3) - this is tapped, but 00:20:136 (1) - is a return slider. Inconsistent considering the notes sound the same.
00:24:724 (2) - blanket slightly off
00:38:136 (5,3) - bad overlap
00:38:313 (1,2,3) - dope pattern my dude
00:51:195 (1) - make this more slanted to fit structure
00:52:254 (3) - same^
01:03:195 (3) - blanket is off
01:13:783 (1,3) - make this more slanted to fit structure

Doormat's Insane ft. Kaifin
i like name kaidoor better change ty Kappa

00:00:901 (4) - poor blanket between 00:00:372 (1,2,3) -
00:00:548 (2,3,7) - not evenly spaced
00:03:548 (3,1) - poor overlap
00:03:724 (4) - poor blanket between 00:03:195 (1,2,3) -
00:04:077 (5,6,7) - move to X:207 Y:265
00:16:607 (1) - blanket is off
00:35:224 (5) - blanket
00:38:313 (1,1,1) - this is fkn RAD YO
01:04:607 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - off blanket
01:09:724 (2,5,6,7,8,9) - blanket is off
01:11:666 (5,1) - poor overlap
01:15:724 (3,2) - bad overlap

Another
00:13:077 (6,7,8) - move slightly to the right away from 00:12:548 (2) -
00:35:224 (3,4) - um what?? what are you mapping here lmao
00:55:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - also this is so fkn cool gj

im not sure if i can mod this, its very peculiar and im not sure what sounds you are even mapping after analyzing multiple times. Other than kiai very good map tho <3

01:19:166 also how come there are no notes here on any of the maps? I hear a beat, could be used as a triple slider instead of just a triple

nice maps, gl with rank c:

Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-06-12T23:40:00+00:00

Zel wrote:
m4merino
[notice]Another
00:13:077 (6,7,8) - move slightly to the right away from 00:12:548 (2) - its a line
00:35:224 (3,4) - um what?? what are you mapping here lmao
00:55:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - also this is so fkn cool gj thank you!

im not sure if i can mod this, its very peculiar and im not sure what sounds you are even mapping after analyzing multiple times. Other than kiai very good map tho <3you must listen to the song my son

01:19:166 also how come there are no notes here on any of the maps? I hear a beat, could be used as a triple slider instead of just a triple there is nothing here

nice maps, gl with rank c: thanks

Einja

652 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-06-13T00:23:04+00:00

ok modding rest of diffs now (no kds) my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/619973
[general stuff]
add more tags (ddr dance dance revolution dancemania) cuz that's where the music's from.

[Yoshimaro]
00:05:313 (4) - wouldn't it be better if this slider had no reverse, becasuse it will add emphasis on the F and F# it's hitting.

00:05:842 - i think a slider end or circle should hit this area, since it's covering one of the big notes (a high G)

00:25:783 (1,2) - 1.09 ds between these notes is a large gap

00:53:136 (4,1) - imperfect stack (probably doesn't matter though lol)

00:55:430 (1) - no hitsound on the reverse arrow

[lowcombofc]
ar5 and od5 are very low for a 2.6* (maybe not the od, but probably the ar)

00:04:607 (6,7) - the slider end of 6 should be clickable since it's a major beat. here's a rhythm i composed http://prntscr.com/fj1tc6

00:38:136 (5,1) - stack these 2 for greater emphasis?

00:39:371 (2,3,4) - add whistles and claps? this felt awkward to play w/o any hitsound to it

[forest]
00:07:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - how come this doesn't have the same pattern as the previous patterns? the music is still the same.

00:12:195 (3,4) - it would be better if you made this a whole slider to follow vocals more.

00:17:842 (3,4) - ^

00:20:666 (2) - you do follow the vocals here with this slider though, so i think the sliders that i pointed out should follow them as well

00:49:430 (5,1) - that's a pretty big gap for a 1/2 jump compared to 00:49:077 (3,4,5) - . It could be pretty hard for players to hit.

00:57:548 (3,4) - make this a 1/1 slider (for vocal following) and slider 4's end be a hit circle.

[doormat x kaifin]
00:18:724 (1,2,1,1) - if you're gonna NC the notes remove the NC on 00:18:724 (1) - and add it back on slider 2, so it can follow the vocals http://prntscr.com/fj22dp (made a pattern up if you're gonna do this suggestion)

00:37:783 (5,6) - since you didn't emphasize the 1/4 sounds with streams (because a stronger 1/2 is playing,) I think you should also make those notes kicksliders to emphasize both sounds.
00:49:077 (5,6) - ^
01:11:666 (5,6) - ^

01:00:901 (1,1,1) - the triangle isn't even with the slider heads, move 01:01:607 (1) - a little close to 01:01:254 (1) - to form a better blanket. (and adjust the slider while you're at it)

that's all from me, thank you!

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2017-06-13T06:20:05+00:00

Einja wrote:
[lowcombofc]
ar5 and od5 are very low for a 2.6* (maybe not the od, but probably the ar) increased ar

00:04:607 (6,7) - the slider end of 6 should be clickable since it's a major beat. here's a rhythm i composed http://prntscr.com/fj1tc6 hmm about this rhythm I'm not quite sure about, because the standalone circles aren't met anywhere else in the map so I think it would feel weird and inconsistent at most. Not to mention "clickable objects" are more lenient in lower diffs so I believe this can be overlooked and not taken into account thus I'll keep it simplified.

00:38:136 (5,1) - stack these 2 for greater emphasis? won't stacking them lower the emphasis though? as the "jump from 5-1 emphasizes the sound on 1"

00:39:371 (2,3,4) - add whistles and claps? this felt awkward to play w/o any hitsound to it imma leave this one to kaifin

thank you for modding!

diff

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Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2017-06-13T06:52:13+00:00

Zel

Yoshimaro's Normal
00:02:489 (4,3) - bad overlap :c THANK GOD FOR AR :pray: no but really tho its ok, turn on hit animations and 25% and there is no overlap
00:05:313 (4) - angle so it fits slanted structure? not a bad idea but since 00:04:607 (3,1) - are symmetric, slanting 00:05:313 (4) - would ruin the symmetric structure of 00:04:607 (3,4,1) -
00:08:136 (4,2) - not perfectly stacked/locked woops mb thanks, also i fixed the blanket
00:11:666 (1,5) - bad overlap again, not visible in play and even in the editor it doesn't really clutter anything
00:13:783 (4) - blanket is off thank u sir
00:14:136 (5,3) - another weird overlap mfw face when my face ?
00:15:901 (3) - why straight? should be slanted imo (because 00:20:136 (1) - ) if those elements were closer to eachother, enough to get a visual impact during play time, i would slant it but by the time of 00:20:136 (1) - , i feel like 00:15:901 (3) - is pretty irrelevant. also, they already share the same shape.
00:19:783 (3) - blanket is off o shit thanks my dude

Einja

[Yoshimaro]
00:05:313 (4) - wouldn't it be better if this slider had no reverse, becasuse it will add emphasis on the F and F# it's hitting. yeah im definitely going to change it although im waiting for doormat to go over this difficulty with me, he didnt have time earlier but he linked this part in particular... it would probably end up being 2 1/2 sliders idk but dw ill fix this when doormat goes over the diff

00:05:842 - i think a slider end or circle should hit this area, since it's covering one of the big notes (a high G) wow fuck me i replied to first point before this, yeah i guess ill just stick this here in the mean time. I didn't know how to cover that part without breaking 1/1 for the section, even though it felt gross to skip over that beat lmfao

00:25:783 (1,2) - 1.09 ds between these notes is a large gap o shit woops hand probably slipped

00:53:136 (4,1) - imperfect stack (probably doesn't matter though lol) those 2 sliders aren't supposed to be stacked (?) i may be missing the point on this one l ol

00:55:430 (1) - no hitsound on the reverse arrow im not in charge of those

thanks guys

i love anime

osu file format v14

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Title:WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)
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Artist:Jenny Rom
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Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-06-13T18:27:23+00:00

both hitsounds are intentional no change

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-06-14T03:12:46+00:00

kaifin told me to apply mods for his parts as well

mod response

Zel wrote:
Doormat's Insane ft. Kaifin
i like name kaidoor better change ty Kappa that sounds worse tbh, technically the current diff name is more accurate as to what this diff is

00:00:901 (4) - poor blanket between 00:00:372 (1,2,3) - this isn't a blanket
00:00:548 (2,3,7) - not evenly spaced oops
00:03:548 (3,1) - poor overlap they're not overlapping each other; one fades out by the time the next one comes into play
00:03:724 (4) - poor blanket between 00:03:195 (1,2,3) - this is the wrong definition of what a blanket is
00:04:077 (5,6,7) - move to X:207 Y:265 no
00:16:607 (1) - blanket is off k
00:35:224 (5) - blanket fine
00:38:313 (1,1,1) - this is fkn RAD YO
01:04:607 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - off blanket ya
01:09:724 (2,5,6,7,8,9) - blanket is off uh huh
01:11:666 (5,1) - poor overlap they're not overlapping in gameplay
01:15:724 (3,2) - bad overlap turn on hit animations to check if they're actually overlapping or not cause all the overlaps you pointed out aren't actually overlapping during gameplay

Einja wrote:
[doormat x kaifin]
00:18:724 (1,2,1,1) - if you're gonna NC the notes remove the NC on 00:18:724 (1) - and add it back on slider 2, so it can follow the vocals http://prntscr.com/fj22dp (made a pattern up if you're gonna do this suggestion) the reason 00:19:430 (1,1) - have NCs and are 3/4 because of the unique clap sounds; the vocals aren't the main point of emphasis here

00:37:783 (5,6) - since you didn't emphasize the 1/4 sounds with streams (because a stronger 1/2 is playing,) I think you should also make those notes kicksliders to emphasize both sounds. putting too many 1/4 sounds every bar like that makes the map monotonous and boring, so these rhythm variations are to make it more varied. current pattern also fits vocals more nicely
00:49:077 (5,6) - ^
01:11:666 (5,6) - ^

01:00:901 (1,1,1) - the triangle isn't even with the slider heads, move 01:01:607 (1) - a little close to 01:01:254 (1) - to form a better blanket. (and adjust the slider while you're at it) good point

thanks~ https://drmt.s-ul.eu/jguCJeeP

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-06-14T06:41:20+00:00

hi

[Yoshimaro's Normal]
- 00:18:724 (1) - remove nc?
- 00:32:842 (1) - ^
- 00:55:430 (1) - ^ i don't see why you'd NC these it kinda just breaks your nc patterning.. for a diff this low it doesn't really add anything to the map imo but i'll stop mentioning these

this diff is actually fine otherwise

[LCFC's Advanced]
- 00:12:901 (3,4) - not too much of a fan of this recurring rhythm. a slider on the white would do fine or just a circle on white but the red tick is really weak so mapping it is kinda sub-optimal imo
- 00:16:254 (6) - rip strong sounds on reverse and slider-end. it gives the same feel as 00:19:077 (6) - but they're clearly different

- 00:53:313 (4) - oof this kind of sounds weird, considering this follows drums and a held vocal you would normally map lands on 00:53:136 - ... maybe try playing around with something that works a bit more vocal-centered (since that's what you've been doing) cuz this seems out of place to me

[Forest's Hard]
- 00:05:489 (4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm to get this two bam bam's clickable?
- 00:10:960 (1) - aaa why not click both of these they're a lot stronger than the vague piano thing in the back you're following

- 00:11:666 - This section's rhythm is very stale compared to the section right after it: 00:22:960 - since you barely use 1/1 sliders or 1/2 reverses to capture held vocals like 00:12:195 (3,4) - then this vocal 00:14:842 (3) - lands on a slider end so that hurts a bit

BUT THEN YOU USE 00:20:136 (1,2) - and im like but why not use this from the start this rhythm is way more interesting than 1/2 everything x.x
- 00:46:783 - again avoidable slider-end downbeat if you ctrl+g 00:46:607 (4,1) -

generally your rhythm is kind of confusing.. cuz a lot of strong stuff ends up on slider ends like 00:57:901 (4) - 01:06:371 (4) - 01:09:195 (4) - and they make no sense to me cuz you can easily make these clickable so why not do it o.o

anyways that's probably what i'll be pointing out so i'll stop here

[Doormat's Insane ft. Kaifin]
unrelated bg nuke

- 00:24:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels like out-of-place rhythm because there are still vocals here and the song hasn't changed so i'm not really getting the switch to the background layer // 00:27:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - and it repeats once more
- 00:43:430 (1) - this rhythm is a bit underwhelming considering two distinct notes, maybe two circles instead? //01:06:019 (1) -

overall diff is actually fine but i really don't like how the 5 note quints in the kiai switch from following the vocal layer to the background layer when there are still vocals going on, it feels really out of place 00:46:254 (3,4,5,6,7) - one example since this repeats consistently. it's the only issue i have with this diff tbh

[Another]
first off what is this intro rhythm that kind of follows the song sometimes 00:00:724 (3,5) - but largely ignores important beats like 00:01:254 - and 00:01:430 - to be edgy this feels really unnecessary imo

secondly why call this another it's not related to bms and no other diffs have any similar names like hyper or whatever

- 00:34:960 (1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm seems conjured up out of nowhere. yes there are sounds on them but they're continuous 1/4 in the back i don't think it's appropriate to just "select" some 1/4 to use in your rhythm to create something like this at all. yes it's hitsounded but it's not in the song so i don't like it
- 00:52:430 (1,2,3) - this 1/1 gap with 1/2 spacing right after 1/2 gaps with same spacing concept was never introduced before so introducing it so late is kind of unfair especially when similar patterning was 1/2 and 1/4 00:06:724 (1,2,3,4,5) -

i really don't know about this diff it seems like you decided to do what you want instead of following the song with the rhythm you have and the constant weak 1/4 being mapped ignores most of the vocals going on and aaa this contains everything i dislike doing in mapping

good luck with the set and sorry for the somewhat abrasive mod at points

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2017-06-14T07:42:03+00:00

@Mir applied all, thanks

digimon is objectively the best marvel comic

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Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-06-14T19:04:19+00:00

Mir wrote:
hi

[Another]
first off what is this intro rhythm that kind of follows the song sometimes 00:00:724 (3,5) - but largely ignores important beats like 00:01:254 - and 00:01:430 - to be edgy this feels really unnecessary imo this is the rhythm of the song

secondly why call this another it's not related to bms and no other diffs have any similar names like hyper or whatever because it's edgy and to have a distinction between insane and another seeing as this diff is much more technically advanced, which i find "another" fits better for

- 00:34:960 (1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm seems conjured up out of nowhere. yes there are sounds on them but they're continuous 1/4 in the back i don't think it's appropriate to just "select" some 1/4 to use in your rhythm to create something like this at all. yes it's hitsounded but it's not in the song so i don't like it it's in the song and the most prominent part of the song to me : (
- 00:52:430 (1,2,3) - this 1/1 gap with 1/2 spacing right after 1/2 gaps with same spacing concept was never introduced before so introducing it so late is kind of unfair especially when similar patterning was 1/2 and 1/4 00:06:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is fine BECAUSE of the similar patterning:
structure like this inherently helps the player read 1/1 spacing and i love the emphasis it gives

i really don't know about this diff it seems like you decided to do what you want instead of following the song with the rhythm you have and the constant weak 1/4 being mapped ignores most of the vocals going on and aaa this contains everything i dislike doing in mapping me too

good luck with the set and sorry for the somewhat abrasive mod at points

thank you for the mod!

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-06-14T19:14:29+00:00

GL

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2017-06-14T19:24:18+00:00

Mir wrote:
[LCFC's Advanced]
- 00:12:901 (3,4) - not too much of a fan of this recurring rhythm. a slider on the white would do fine or just a circle on white but the red tick is really weak so mapping it is kinda sub-optimal imo I think it's fine cause it's way more hearable than the red tick that follows and there's also 1/4 in the back between the objects you mentioned so I think this emphasizes it pretty well.
- 00:16:254 (6) - rip strong sounds on reverse and slider-end. it gives the same feel as 00:19:077 (6) - but they're clearly different actually they're not as different as you think, 00:19:077 (6) - has a bit less loud but still dominant sounds lol, I purely followed vocals on this one though, and I think the way it's simplified is appropriate for this kind of diff
- 00:53:313 (4) - oof this kind of sounds weird, considering this follows drums and a held vocal you would normally map lands on 00:53:136 - ... maybe try playing around with something that works a bit more vocal-centered (since that's what you've been doing) cuz this seems out of place to me yeah true, fixed all identical patterns

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Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-06-14T19:28:13+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
GL

thank you

Kilabarus

999 posts

Joined May 2015

Kilabarus 2017-06-15T20:29:16+00:00

m4m
Normal

00:05:313 (4,5,1) - Not recommended rhythm for normal, hard to read

good
Advanced

00:05:842 (8,1) - That would be a better rhythm https://puu.sh/wl4ex/b5924a9c3f.png ( like here 00:07:077 (4,5) - )
00:32:136 (2) - 2 1/2 slider would fit here much better

Hard

00:05:666 (5) - Very strong sound on the tail of a slider fix plz
00:10:254 (1,2,1,2) - There are 3 similar sound and then 2 different, that must be mapped by circles to match the difference

Insane

00:13:783 (1,1,1) - Too much NC

good

Can't mod highest diff, there is too much undermapping, I think this is your gimmick, though I don't get it

Sorry for shitmod, map is rdy for rank

GL

Kaifin

745 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Kaifin 2017-06-15T20:36:18+00:00

MashaSG wrote:
m4m

Insane

00:13:783 (1,1,1) - Too much NC replying for doormat to say that all sliders of this rhythm are NCd this way
good

Can't mod highest diff, there is too much undermapping, I think this is your gimmick, though I don't get it mapping to song

Sorry for shitmod, map is rdy for rank

GL

thanks for the mod

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-06-15T22:39:08+00:00

fixed mods, not giving reply because major part of points were rejected because rhythm

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33027
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3.099999

[Metadata]
Title:WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)
TitleUnicode:WWW.Blonde Girl (MOMO Mix)
Artist:Jenny Rom
ArtistUnicode:Jenny Rom
Creator:Kaifin
Version:Forest's Hard
Source:DDRMAX -DanceDanceRevolution 6thMIX-
Tags:-_Yoshimaro_- Yoshimaro Doormat Underforest LowComboFC blond cute
BeatmapID:1319683
BeatmapSetID:588799

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"underforestbg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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5489,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
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72548,-100,4,2,0,40,0,1
72901,-100,4,2,0,40,0,1
78019,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0


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Combo3 : 255,168,255
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