This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年6月28日 at 9:54:52

Artist: nano
Title: MY LIBERATION
Source: チェインクロニクル～ヘクセイタスの閃～
Tags: Taiko Chain Chronicle The Light of Haecceitas Opening WEST GROUND
BPM: 190
Filesize: 7566kb
Play Time: 03:36
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (2.25 stars, 575 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5.32 stars, 1302 notes)
3. Kantan (1.47 stars, 321 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.17 stars, 899 notes)
5. Oni (4.37 stars, 1162 notes)

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#33 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
Inner Oni - 100%

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Hi! Mod as requested on my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/579972. Remember they're all suggestions and I just hope this can help you!

[General]

• 
  Just want to point some suggestions about volume changes:

1. 00:00:660 - This section could be like 30% volume cause there's a really low pitch
2. 00:28:449 - 50% here maybe fits better if you're accepting the suggestion above
3. 00:36:660 - What about adding some greenlines to focus the ascendant sound?
4. 00:48:660 - 60% probably? Just a little less than the last one
5. 00:53:712 - Same about ascendant pitches
6. 02:46:133 - 40%? or 30%? It's like the same as the beginning one
   That's all by volumes I think ^^ are good anyways
   Also BG, Timing, SV multiplier are fine (Idk about metadata tbh lol)

[Kantan]

• 
  Mmm what about OD 3 OR HP 7? Song is a little long so HP could be great, and 190 bpm using 1,4 SV is a little hard for new players so OD 3 could fills good too. Using one of them or both works fine imo :3

1. 00:05:238 (7) - I feel like you're following hard-vocal sounds here so you could move this one to 00:04:923 (7) - ^^. The current one feels a little strange D:
2. 00:08:081 (1) - K fills fine :3
3. 00:13:133 (9,10) - ctrl+g works too I think k (also same comments on next section)
4. 00:33:502 (40) - hmm you're following the high pitch here but this note seems like doesn't fit at all. I really got you want to make the first note to emphatise the section but if you remove it isn't bad
5. 00:35:396 (42,43) - ctrl+g maybe?
6. 00:39:817 (49,50,51) - you made a triple here and 00:42:660 - there's a space that I think you could map. I think if you do this shouldn't be that overmapped considering the redline note after these
7. 01:32:871 (132,133,134) - what about k k d or k d d so making a descendant pattern then making a kat it's great (also d d d is good but I think this one fills better and isn't that hard for Kantan)
8. 01:43:923 (147) - D maybe to emphatise next K?
9. 01:47:396 (153,158) - what about deleting them (or making don) to let a 4/1 break here? Could be nice and these sounds are strange while playing :c. Maybe the second one is more overmapped than the first one and also could give you a consistency with 01:44:238 -
10. 02:27:502 (223) - maybe don here to make that d k k pattern not that repetitive?
11. 02:32:554 (233) - ^
12. 03:29:081 (38) - -> 03:28:923 (38) - maybe to follow the vocal?
13. 03:36:028 (49,50) - If you're following drums here you should make this k d instead. If you're following the high pitch you should make them K k or K K (also k k fills good but not sure :c) imo
    That's all what I think about Kantan. Nice diff tho ^^

[Futsuu]

1. 00:04:765 (9) - probably don to emphatise next kat?
2. 00:08:081 - what about including some dd or kk on doubles on this section? I feel them a little repetitive :c (well it's up to you)
3. 00:33:975 (74) - kat probably? To follow vocals (both sounds well but... just a little better lol)
4. 00:44:238 - you could delete the last double and make it here since you're making doubles to follow vocals (I suggest you a kd if you're agreeing)
5. 00:45:817 - well tbh I feel strange here, maybe you could make the double here but this could make that finish hard to hit ;;
6. 01:05:081 (158,159,160) - you could move this triple to here 01:05:396 - according to the song :3
7. 01:15:502 - ^
8. 01:36:028 (255) - hm this note is a little unnecesary imo, this break could be fine for the slow part :p
9. 01:45:028 (277) - I think these notes fills better on 01:45:186 - (if you agree with this maybe it could get a little dense so removing some notes is a good idea :p). Applies on notes through this section :3
   From here to end I just made a fast overall look and I enjoyed/liked it :d

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:186 (113) - hmm since you're following vocals I think this note is a little too high for the voice pitch, maybe deleting or making it don could be better
2. 01:32:238 (372,373,374,375,376) - yeah there's a section rhythm change but I think this quintuple feels a little strange on a total-quarters and doubles section
3. 01:37:765 (396,399) - ctrl+g these probably cuz pitches
4. 02:03:028 - maybe add some note here? shouldn't be a problem cuz there's a slider after this one
5. 02:43:923 (715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722,723,724,725,726,727,728,729,730,731,732) - isn't this a little hard? I really got what you want to do but it's a little dense imo... Still fun tho :d
6. 03:12:817 (37,38,39) - start the triple on 03:12:975 - I think it's better since you're following vocals
7. 03:23:238 - ^
8. 03:36:028 (150,151,152,153) - kkkk maybe sounds better (also kdkk)

Nice mapset, song is great tho ^^ but I need to leave it here for now, I'll be back when I got a little more time cause I need to manage some tourney stuff and I'll try to make some suggestions at higher diffs. I rly hope it can be helpful on the set! Best of luck!

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! Mod as requested on my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/579972. Remember they're all suggestions and I just hope this can help you!

[General]

• 
  Just want to point some suggestions about volume changes:

1. 00:00:660 - This section could be like 30% volume cause there's a really low pitch
2. 00:28:449 - 50% here maybe fits better if you're accepting the suggestion above
3. 00:36:660 - What about adding some greenlines to focus the ascendant sound?
4. 00:48:660 - 60% probably? Just a little less than the last one
5. 00:53:712 - Same about ascendant pitches
6. 02:46:133 - 40%? or 30%? It's like the same as the beginning one
   That's all by volumes I think ^^ are good anyways -> Hmm no change for now, but still thanks for suggesting ^^
   Also BG, Timing, SV multiplier are fine (Idk about metadata tbh lol)

[Kantan]

• 
  Mmm what about OD 3 OR HP 7? Song is a little long so HP could be great, and 190 bpm using 1,4 SV is a little hard for new players so OD 3 could fills good too. Using one of them or both works fine imo :3 -> I would prefer higher OD concept for this map. Owing to the relatively high note count, I think HP 6 would be okay.

1. 00:05:238 (7) - I feel like you're following hard-vocal sounds here so you could move this one to 00:04:923 (7) - ^^. The current one feels a little strange D: Retained to follow the more prominent vocal.
2. 00:08:081 (1) - K fills fine :3 D would be fine as the background pitch is not high enough.
3. 00:13:133 (9,10) - ctrl+g works too I think k (also same comments on next section) same as ^
4. 00:33:502 (40) - hmm you're following the high pitch here but this note seems like doesn't fit at all. I really got you want to make the first note to emphatise the section but if you remove it isn't bad Remain unchanged for the spread's sake.
5. 00:35:396 (42,43) - ctrl+g maybe? Refer to ^ for pattern coherence.
6. 00:39:817 (49,50,51) - you made a triple here and 00:42:660 - there's a space that I think you could map. I think if you do this shouldn't be that overmapped considering the redline note after these Again, this is regulated by the density arrangement in Futsuu.
7. 01:32:871 (132,133,134) - what about k k d or k d d so making a descendant pattern then making a kat it's great (also d d d is good but I think this one fills better and isn't that hard for Kantan) Retained to focus on drums.
8. 01:43:923 (147) - D maybe to emphatise next K? K could fit the vocal pitch well.
9. 01:47:396 (153,158) - what about deleting them (or making don) to let a 4/1 break here? Could be nice and these sounds are strange while playing :c. Maybe the second one is more overmapped than the first one and also could give you a consistency with 01:44:238 - Hmm, no change as the pace is relatively fast here.
10. 02:27:502 (223) - maybe don here to make that d k k pattern not that repetitive? fixed
11. 02:32:554 (233) - ^ ^
12. 03:29:081 (38) - -> 03:28:923 (38) - maybe to follow the vocal? I would prefer pattern simplicity here.
13. 03:36:028 (49,50) - If you're following drums here you should make this k d instead. If you're following the high pitch you should make them K k or K K (also k k fills good but not sure :c) imo Retained for pattern consistency across the set.
    That's all what I think about Kantan. Nice diff tho ^^

[Futsuu]

1. 00:04:765 (9) - probably don to emphatise next kat? I would like to keep it for the vocal.
2. 00:08:081 - what about including some dd or kk on doubles on this section? I feel them a little repetitive :c (well it's up to you) Hmm... No change then.
3. 00:33:975 (74) - kat probably? To follow vocals (both sounds well but... just a little better lol) d would work better as the vocal pitch is still not high.
4. 00:44:238 - you could delete the last double and make it here since you're making doubles to follow vocals (I suggest you a kd if you're agreeing) Remain unchanged for regular breaks.
5. 00:45:817 - well tbh I feel strange here, maybe you could make the double here but this could make that finish hard to hit ;; same as ^
6. 01:05:081 (158,159,160) - you could move this triple to here 01:05:396 - according to the song :3 Retained for vocals.
7. 01:15:502 - ^ ^
8. 01:36:028 (255) - hm this note is a little unnecesary imo, this break could be fine for the slow part :p It is necessary for the guitar there.
9. 01:45:028 (277) - I think these notes fills better on 01:45:186 - (if you agree with this maybe it could get a little dense so removing some notes is a good idea :p). Applies on notes through this section :3 No change for instrumental consistency.
   From here to end I just made a fast overall look and I enjoyed/liked it :d

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:186 (113) - hmm since you're following vocals I think this note is a little too high for the voice pitch, maybe deleting or making it don could be better The pitch is decreasing so I think k would still work here.
2. 01:32:238 (372,373,374,375,376) - yeah there's a section rhythm change but I think this quintuple feels a little strange on a total-quarters and doubles section As said for the rhythm change, I think it fits the background instrument well.
3. 01:37:765 (396,399) - ctrl+g these probably cuz pitches The current arrangement could take care of both vocal and guitar.
4. 02:03:028 - maybe add some note here? shouldn't be a problem cuz there's a slider after this one No change for difficulty concern.
5. 02:43:923 (715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722,723,724,725,726,727,728,729,730,731,732) - isn't this a little hard? I really got what you want to do but it's a little dense imo... Still fun tho :d Yes, this is the difficulty spike across the set.
6. 03:12:817 (37,38,39) - start the triple on 03:12:975 - I think it's better since you're following vocals Both positions are fine imo.
7. 03:23:238 - ^ ^
8. 03:36:028 (150,151,152,153) - kkkk maybe sounds better (also kdkk) Refer to Kantan

Nice mapset, song is great tho ^^ but I need to leave it here for now, I'll be back when I got a little more time cause I need to manage some tourney stuff and I'll try to make some suggestions at higher diffs. I rly hope it can be helpful on the set! Best of luck!

Thanks for your mod~

I am here because I love to mod your maps :3 Feel free to give kudosu or not,I had free time and modded it >_>

[Kantan]

1. 00:15:817 (14) - This note should be at 00:15:660 - or am I deaf? :U 01:26:554 (122) - for consistency.
2. 01:22:607 (116) - Sounds like this note is awkward,as if it ignores 01:22:765 -.So you should move this note here,03:30:186 (40) - for consistency.
   Nothing else to say,looks good.

[Futsuu]

1. I guess you didn't add finisher where you added on Muzukashii,Oni and Inner Oni.Is the reason keeping it easy or you forgot?
2. 00:40:133 (88) - Vocal pitch is same as 00:40:449 (89) -.I don't know if these are different but I heard them same.
3. 01:06:028 (162) - How about moving to 01:05:870 - for vocal?03:13:607 (26) - for consistency.
4. 01:07:607 (167,168) - I heard snare sounds at these two times.If you change as kk,beginner players would not die 03:15:186 (31,32) - for consistency.
5. 02:45:502 (460,461,462,463,464) - This quintuplet and finisher at the end don't seem friendly ;w; kkk D can highlight drum as well.

[Muzukashii]

• 00:08:396 - Why isn't there note here and all parts like that?It is not consistent to 00:10:923 (15,16) -.01:24:186 - for consistency.

1. 00:40:449 (139,140) - Vocal pitches are same as 00:40:133 (137,138) -.If you change it as dkdk,vocal will be more consistent and flow will be better.
2. 00:48:107 (174) - There is no drum sound.Consider to delete this please.
3. 00:57:817 (210,211,212) - As I pointed out on Inner Oni,I think vocal emphasize is unnecessary for here because there's no music sound.In my opinion,you should keep here calm.03:05:396 (1,2,3) - for consistency.
4. 01:05:870 - You missed that vocal sound.Seems like you followed vocal at the whole map.It seems awkward because there is vocal sound but no note.03:13:449 - for consistency.
5. 01:23:081 (332,333,334) - Same suggestion as 00:57:817 (210,211,212) -.03:30:660 (127,128,129) - for consistency.
6. 02:05:081 (512,513) - 1/6 notes..Using 1/4 triplet is the best way to emphasize them.02:04:607 - If you leave space between slider and note,feel free to keep here empty but consider to add 1/4 notes for second 1/6 sound.

[Inner Oni]

1. My suggestions for Inner Oni is for Oni as well if you used same notes.Because I am afraid of giving inconsistent suggestions :'(
2. 00:00:660 - I am not sure if piano sound or breath sound is worthy to add note.
3. 00:12:028 (30) - Why not kat to emphasize extended guitar sound? 01:27:817 (496) - for consistency.
4. 00:19:923 (85) - When guitar goes high pitch,but suddenly it gets low at 00:20:081 (86) - So I suggest to change 00:19:923 (85) - to kat.The another reason is snare sound. 01:30:660 (514) - for consistency.
5. 00:28:370 (146) - I suggest you to delete this note and add finisher to 00:28:449 (147) -.Finisher would be better for transition between these two parts.
6. 00:40:291 (195) - Vocal sound disappears here.I don't think kat is good idea.Also I wonder why did you use kat.
7. 00:48:581 (249,250) - Transition issue as I explained.
8. 01:07:607 (362,363,364,365,366) - Since drum sound is too strong for here,you should follow drum.I don't think you followed drum or didn't get what did you follow.01:17:712 (439,440,441,442,443) - for consistency.
9. 01:23:081 (467,468,469) - This is just a suggestion,no need to apply.I think these notes are unnecessary.Although vocal sounds are too loud,there is no guitar sound.
10. 01:34:133 (544) - Same as what I said about transition but drum sounds like isn't strong at all.So you may keep it.If you think it is inconsistency,you may keep even my suggestions about transition.
11. 03:15:186 (80,81,82,83,84) - Same suggestions about what I said about strong drum.If you followed vocal,forget my suggestions about strong drum,it looks fine according to vocal.
12. 03:30:660 (192,193,194) - Same suggestions as 01:23:081 (467,468,469) -.

I hope my mod will help,good luck

zigizigiefe wrote:

I am here because I love to mod your maps :3 Feel free to give kudosu or not,I had free time and modded it >_>

[Kantan]

1. 00:15:817 (14) - This note should be at 00:15:660 - or am I deaf? :U 01:26:554 (122) - for consistency. Retained for pattern simplicity.
2. 01:22:607 (116) - Sounds like this note is awkward,as if it ignores 01:22:765 -.So you should move this note here,03:30:186 (40) - for consistency. Fixed by forming a 1/1 triplet.
   Nothing else to say,looks good.

[Futsuu]

1. I guess you didn't add finisher where you added on Muzukashii,Oni and Inner Oni.Is the reason keeping it easy or you forgot? -> Yes, the former.
2. 00:40:133 (88) - Vocal pitch is same as 00:40:449 (89) -.I don't know if these are different but I heard them same. No change as the background snare could be followed by k.
3. 01:06:028 (162) - How about moving to 01:05:870 - for vocal?03:13:607 (26) - for consistency. I would prefer keeping the 1/2 kd dk complex for a better structure in contrast to the previous chain of patterns.
4. 01:07:607 (167,168) - I heard snare sounds at these two times.If you change as kk,beginner players would not die 03:15:186 (31,32) - for consistency. Remain unchanged for pattern consistency with higher difficulties.
5. 02:45:502 (460,461,462,463,464) - This quintuplet and finisher at the end don't seem friendly ;w; kkk D can highlight drum as well. This part is the difficulty spike across the set, so I would like to keep it as it is.

[Muzukashii]

• 00:08:396 - Why isn't there note here and all parts like that?It is not consistent to 00:10:923 (15,16) -.01:24:186 - for consistency. This is made intentionally to reduce the overall note density for the spread's sake. Same reason for 00:13:449 - 00:18:502 - 00:23:554 -

1. 00:40:449 (139,140) - Vocal pitches are same as 00:40:133 (137,138) -.If you change it as dkdk,vocal will be more consistent and flow will be better. The vocal at 00:40:133 (137,138,139) - has the same lower pitch than that at 00:40:607 - . The current pattern is the resultant compromise between vocal and drum.
2. 00:48:107 (174) - There is no drum sound.Consider to delete this please. fixed
3. 00:57:817 (210,211,212) - As I pointed out on Inner Oni,I think vocal emphasize is unnecessary for here because there's no music sound.In my opinion,you should keep here calm.03:05:396 (1,2,3) - for consistency. No change. As an intermediate difficulty, I would introduce more vocal-related patterns for smoother difficulty progression.
4. 01:05:870 - You missed that vocal sound.Seems like you followed vocal at the whole map.It seems awkward because there is vocal sound but no note.03:13:449 - for consistency. The break here is intentional owing to spread concern.
5. 01:23:081 (332,333,334) - Same suggestion as 00:57:817 (210,211,212) -.03:30:660 (127,128,129) - for consistency. same as 00:57:817 (210,211,212) -
6. 02:05:081 (512,513) - 1/6 notes..Using 1/4 triplet is the best way to emphasize them.02:04:607 - If you leave space between slider and note,feel free to keep here empty but consider to add 1/4 notes for second 1/6 sound. Same reason as 01:05:870 -

[Inner Oni]

1. My suggestions for Inner Oni is for Oni as well if you used same notes.Because I am afraid of giving inconsistent suggestions :'(
2. 00:00:660 - I am not sure if piano sound or breath sound is worthy to add note. Not worthy to induce inconsistency of vocal accompaniment here.
3. 00:12:028 (30) - Why not kat to emphasize extended guitar sound? 01:27:817 (496) - for consistency. It is d because of the decreased pitch.
4. 00:19:923 (85) - When guitar goes high pitch,but suddenly it gets low at 00:20:081 (86) - So I suggest to change 00:19:923 (85) - to kat.The another reason is snare sound. 01:30:660 (514) - for consistency. The guitar pitch at that spot is in fact low, which is the reason why I used d here.
5. 00:28:370 (146) - I suggest you to delete this note and add finisher to 00:28:449 (147) -.Finisher would be better for transition between these two parts. I would prefer pattern complexity over finishes in higher difficulties.
6. 00:40:291 (195) - Vocal sound disappears here.I don't think kat is good idea.Also I wonder why did you use kat. It does not disappear as evidenced by the presence of vocal syllable. As explained in Muzukashii.
7. 00:48:581 (249,250) - Transition issue as I explained. same as 00:28:370 (146) -
8. 01:07:607 (362,363,364,365,366) - Since drum sound is too strong for here,you should follow drum.I don't think you followed drum or didn't get what did you follow.01:17:712 (439,440,441,442,443) - for consistency. I think 1/4 kkddd could accompany the vocal pattern well, which is my prime rationale of patterning.
9. 01:23:081 (467,468,469) - This is just a suggestion,no need to apply.I think these notes are unnecessary.Although vocal sounds are too loud,there is no guitar sound. same as Muzukashii
10. 01:34:133 (544) - Same as what I said about transition but drum sounds like isn't strong at all.So you may keep it.If you think it is inconsistency,you may keep even my suggestions about transition. same as 00:28:370 (146) -
11. 03:15:186 (80,81,82,83,84) - Same suggestions about what I said about strong drum.If you followed vocal,forget my suggestions about strong drum,it looks fine according to vocal. same as 01:07:607 (362,363,364,365,366) -
12. 03:30:660 (192,193,194) - Same suggestions as 01:23:081 (467,468,469) -. same as above

I hope my mod will help,good luck

Thanks for your mod~

Halo~ Nardo~ :3

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat






you always make perfect map. It's really hard to mod this.
I hope this map ranked soon.
GL~ Nardo~! :3

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Halo~ Nardo~ :3

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

• [General]

1. Fine. :3

• [Kantan]

1. 00:27:186 (32) - change to k~? (we can make a difference with drum sound in (33),(34). and consistent k sound.) I think keeping this note as d would help emphasize the k at 00:28:449 (35) -
2. 01:32:870 (133) - How about change to k~? (accompaniment pitch is high.) same as ^
3. 01:41:081 (144) - change to k~? (pitch is higher than (143). and scratched sound here.) Retained to focus on the pitch change of vocal.
4. 01:21:502 (115) - How about move to 01:19:607~? and change to k. (I know you make a simple rhythm for beginners here. but I feel little offbeat this note. because exactly vocal sound in 03:28:923. so just suggest another place. :3) Hmm,
   no change for both pattern simplicity and a longer rest after the vocal climax.
5. 03:29:081 (38) - same suggestion with above. move to 03:27:186, and change to k~? same as ^

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:13:133 (17) - change to k~? (weak burst sound here. so we can make a difference with 00:10:607 and 00:18:186.) Remain unchanged for colour consistency with 00:08:081 -
2. 00:23:238 (48) - same suggestion. same as ^
3. 00:27:817 (62) - change to k~? (pitch is high this point.) The higher-pitched sound occurs at 00:27:186 - , so I think it would be fine to have d here to focus on the drums.
4. 01:28:923 (234) - ^ same as 00:13:133 (17) -
5. 01:38:870 (261, 262) - how about swap this~? (I feel vocal pitch is almost same. so maybe we can express electronic sound pitch. (262) and (264) is high. and (261) and (263) is low pitch.) Nope, the former note has a higher vocal pitch.
6. 01:55:449 (309) - change to d~? (I think (307, 308) is same pitch, but (309) is lower than previous two notes.) Changed to something easier for a better spread.
7. 01:57:975 (316) - same suggestion. change to d~? same as ^
8. 02:01:449 (327, 328) - swap this~? so kd. and change 02:01:923 (329) - k~? (I think 02:01:923 (329) should be a k. It's pitch is highest in this part. (327, 328) - swap is a optional. I feel 'kd k' and 'dk k' good both.) No change for pattern consistency across the set.
9. 02:26:870 (399, 400, 401) - how about change to kdk~? (I feel this part all used dkd pattern. we can follow electronic pitch for pattern diversity. (399, 401) are have high electronic pitch.) Hmm, I find it a bit unnatural to have different pattern at this spot.
10. 02:31:923 (413, 414, 415) - same suggestion. same as ^
    
    maybe we can change next similar part too.

• [Muzukashii]

1. Fine for me. really fun map.

• [Oni & Inner Oni]

1. 03:09:817 (31) - how about change to k~? (vocal & instrument pitch is high. and I think flow is better.) No change as 03:10:133 (33) - has a higher vocal pitch while the pitch at 03:09:817 (31,32) - stays the same.
2. 03:17:396 (87) - change to k~? same reason. same as ^
3. 03:19:923 (106) - same thing. change to k~? ^

you always make perfect map. It's really hard to mod this.
I hope this map ranked soon.
GL~ Nardo~! :3

Thanks for your mod Akemi~

[Inner Oni]
01:05:238 (341) - Hmm, maybe I am wrong but if you intend to give the vocals the intention then I'd go with dkk, the two kat notes seems stronger then.
01:06:186 (349) - I'd suggest kkd here so it adds a nice tone together with the bgm.
01:15:423 (417,418) - dkd at this triplet would be really good if the follow is similar to 01:05:238 (341,342,343) - .
02:35:317 (954,955) - to the similar tone 02:33:975 (941,942,943) - has, I don't find that dkd works well for that case. I'd change to ddk.

[Oni]
01:49:449 (560,561,562) - You kept it consistent to map the guitar riffs like on 01:49:765 - with kat notes, except here. 01:49:923 (562) - could be moved to 01:49:765 - and switched with 01:49:607 (561) - afterwards. Unless you have a good intention to make such a consistency break, you should change that, alternatively on your own.
02:34:923 (843,844,845,846,847,848,849,850,851,852,853,854,855) - pattern itself are okay but quite tough to play, considering you sticked to fivelets until now and pattern complexity may not fit in this scheme. I have no ideas on my own for now, so it's rather a feedback than a suggestion. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
02:43:923 - 02:46:133 - same problem occurs here too.

[Muzukashii]
01:40:449 (406) - The note sounds to me like a filler since the vocals are really present here and seems to end properly on 01:40:133 - . I'd remove (406).

[Futsuu]
I've found nothing to nag about, the only concern I have is the fairly wide gap Futsuu has to Kantan. The rest of the mapset has a linear difficulty in-/decrease.

[Kantan]
No complains here. (-w-)b


If you think the map is ready (and have the SP), you can call me back. Won't icon it with a star for now but I'll leave this as reminder.

Stefan wrote:

[Inner Oni]
01:05:238 (341) - Hmm, maybe I am wrong but if you intend to give the vocals the intention then I'd go with dkk, the two kat notes seems stronger then. Vocal pitch is consistent across 01:05:238 (341,342,343) - , so I think kkk would represent that appropriately.
01:06:186 (349) - I'd suggest kkd here so it adds a nice tone together with the bgm. A good idea indeed, but I would prefer keeping 01:06:186 (349) - as d to highlight the vocal at 01:06:502 (352) - and keep it the same as other difficulties.
01:15:423 (417,418) - dkd at this triplet would be really good if the follow is similar to 01:05:238 (341,342,343) - . Different from the vocal pattern at 01:05:238 (341,342,343) - , the pitch of vocal is increasing, thus ddk would help reflect the change.
02:35:317 (954,955) - to the similar tone 02:33:975 (941,942,943) - has, I don't find that dkd works well for that case. I'd change to ddk. In spite of the similar tone, I found it suitable to start with dkddk here because of the underlying drums occurring at 02:35:396 -

[Oni]
01:49:449 (560,561,562) - You kept it consistent to map the guitar riffs like on 01:49:765 - with kat notes, except here. 01:49:923 (562) - could be moved to 01:49:765 - and switched with 01:49:607 (561) - afterwards. Unless you have a good intention to make such a consistency break, you should change that, alternatively on your own. Fixed in an alternative way.
02:34:923 (843,844,845,846,847,848,849,850,851,852,853,854,855) - pattern itself are okay but quite tough to play, considering you sticked to fivelets until now and pattern complexity may not fit in this scheme. I have no ideas on my own for now, so it's rather a feedback than a suggestion. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Deleted the note at 02:35:949 - and added finish at 02:36:028 -
02:43:923 - 02:46:133 - same problem occurs here too. No change here for difficulty spike across the set.

[Muzukashii]
01:40:449 (406) - The note sounds to me like a filler since the vocals are really present here and seems to end properly on 01:40:133 - . I'd remove (406). 01:36:028 (390,415) - also serve as the same purpose, so I would prefer keeping the note here for consistency as well as a better structure.

[Futsuu]
I've found nothing to nag about, the only concern I have is the fairly wide gap Futsuu has to Kantan. The rest of the mapset has a linear difficulty in-/decrease. I think the current transition from Kantan to Futsuu is quite similar to that from Futsuu to Muzukashii as Muzukashii has fairly harder 1/2+1/4 patterns throughout the difficulty.

[Kantan]
No complains here. (-w-)b >w</


If you think the map is ready (and have the SP), you can call me back. Won't icon it with a star for now but I'll leave this as reminder.

Thanks for your mod Stefan~ I will call you again when I get enough SP.

hi Nardo :3/
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[general]
add tag? : WEST GROUND

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[Kantan]
I think that I am in good condition. Great Kantan


[Fustuu]

1. 00:58:607 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) - I thought this pattern was long for Futsuu players.
   Although we will ignore vocal a bit, we recommend that you move the 01:00:817 (145) - to 01:00:975 - to create a little break.
   
2. 01:10:923 (179) - move to 01:11:081 - same^
   
   
   
3. 02:11:712 (351) - delete? Especially, there is no sound of drum, and the timing of 02:09:817 (347,348,349) - (k--k--d) is also difficult, so we want to suppress density.
4. 02:14:238 (359) - delete? Deleted as consistency if changed.
   
5. 02:21:817 (381) - delete?
6. 02:24:344 (389) - delete?
   
   
7. 03:08:396 (9) - move to 03:08:554 - same reason written first.
8. 03:18:502 (43) - move to 03:18:660 -

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:502 (114,115) - ctrl+g. drum follow? (If you are the along vocal, think ctrl+g and then 00:33:975 (116) - to k.)

[Oni]

1. 02:29:081 (804) - k? vocal pitch higher. and consistency with 02:34:133 (836) -

[Inner Oni]

1. 02:29:081 (907) - k? vocal follow. It also serves as a natural flow.

Your map is always perfect so it's difficult to modding. lol
good luck for Ranked ~

Take my stars Nardo (ノ･ω･)ノ

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi Nardo :3/
mod req from in-game chat

[general]
add tag? : WEST GROUND Okay, added.

http://chronicle-anime.com/music/


[Kantan]
I think that I am in good condition. Great Kantan


[Fustuu]

1. 00:58:607 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) - I thought this pattern was long for Futsuu players.
   Although we will ignore vocal a bit, we recommend that you move the 01:00:817 (145) - to 01:00:975 - to create a little break. Hmm,
   retained for a better spread with Muzukashii.
   
2. 01:10:923 (179) - move to 01:11:081 - same^ same as ^
   
   
   
3. 02:11:712 (351) - delete? Especially, there is no sound of drum, and the timing of 02:09:817 (347,348,349) - (k--k--d) is also difficult, so we want to suppress density. Remain unchanged for better transition from Kantan to Muzukashii.
4. 02:14:238 (359) - delete? Deleted as consistency if changed. same as ^
   
5. 02:21:817 (381) - delete? ^
6. 02:24:344 (389) - delete? ^
   
   
7. 03:08:396 (9) - move to 03:08:554 - same reason written first. same as 00:58:607 -
8. 03:18:502 (43) - move to 03:18:660 - ^

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:502 (114,115) - ctrl+g. drum follow? (If you are the along vocal, think ctrl+g and then 00:33:975 (116) - to k.) I think keeping 00:33:502 (114) - this note as d would help reflect the pitch increase of vocal across 00:33:502 (114,116,118) -

[Oni]

1. 02:29:081 (804) - k? vocal pitch higher. and consistency with 02:34:133 (836) - No change in order to focus on the identical vocal pitch like 02:26:554 (789,796,812,821,828) -

[Inner Oni]

1. 02:29:081 (907) - k? vocal follow. It also serves as a natural flow. same as Oni

Your map is always perfect so it's difficult to modding. lol
good luck for Ranked ~

Thanks for your mod yzrin~

zigizigiefe wrote:

Take my stars Nardo (ノ･ω･)ノ

Oh, thank you very much! I am surprised~

Free double starz~

Pachiru wrote:

Free double starz~

Thank you. I am really happy~

(´・ω ・｀)

random suggestion

Inner Oni
* 00:37:291 (177,178,179,180) - similar in the range of sounds, try to change 00:37:449 (178) - this kat?
* 00:53:002 - add here, such as 00:53:317 -
* 01:17:949 - & 03:15:423 - kat this to give more emphasizes with the flow pitch

Futsuu
* 00:48:186 - change kat and move 00:48:502 - here? I think in here more accurate to layering with drum.

Surono wrote:

random suggestion

Inner Oni
* 00:37:291 (177,178,179,180) - similar in the range of sounds, try to change 00:37:449 (178) - this kat? Remain unchanged as the intensity propagation suggests k d k k.
* 00:53:002 - add here, such as 00:53:317 - fixed
* 01:17:949 - & 03:15:423 - kat this to give more emphasizes with the flow pitch Changed at 01:17:949 and 03:25:528 - instead.

Futsuu
* 00:48:186 - change kat and move 00:48:502 - here? I think in here more accurate to layering with drum. Hmm... Retained to follow the vocal. This would also result in a good variation with 00:39:502 (85,86,87) -

Thanks for your mod Surono~

recheck as reqs, everything looks fine.

Qualified

ninja'd by Uzumaki Surono.
gratz~