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Big thanksmindmaster107 wrote:
[Hard]
Turn up the AR to 8.5 - You have a lot of jumps, so a lower AR would be harder to read. 8.5 is well within a 3 star player's abilities, so don't worry. was 8.5 before, but it's a low bpm 1/3 songs. Still, I agree with you, changed to 8.2
00:12:988 (2,1) - These 2 are so close together. Maybe have it begin on the other side of the screen.
00:14:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 4 5 and 6 do not follow the slider heads.
00:17:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same /\ all fixed
00:20:417 (1,2) - Have this further down to separate it from the previous jump. nah
00:20:845 (1) - Get rid of this. I believe it is ok to undermap the drum roll, as you did the same to 00:20:274 deleted
00:34:131 (1,2) - Move to separate. I try not to make it too difficult
00:46:845 (2) - This is covered partially by the kick slider. fixed
00:47:845 (1,2) - Move to separate.
00:52:702 (1,2) - Bit to far away, considering the spacing between these > 00:50:988 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) It may actually be correct, but it doesn't look like so. Fold the jump so this stack is closer to the middle of the play field. changed the pattern in my own way
01:20:702 (4,5,6) - Shouldn't this be in the middle of where the reverse of 01:19:417 (1,2,3) meet? pattern variation
01:22:131 (1) - Separate.
01:24:131 (4,5,6) - Doesn't follow the pattern of the sliderheads before it.
Thank you so much!srijanfromsd wrote:
M4M #modreqs
from srijanfromsd:
In general, you used quite a few different combinations and creativity, which is good. However, some patterns are not intuitive, be it for rhythm, or for spacing (especially in Normal Difficulty). This mod will try to address those issues, and some other points that come to my attention.Normal00:12:702: This was one of the counter intuitive pattern I was talking about. To click on this slider at the precise moment requires memorization instead of following the rhythm. I would recommend simplifying the beat by decreasing the slider return at 00:12:131 to one return instead of 2 returns, then place the next slider from 00:12:702 to 00:12:560 (Like this: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B34dX3Pb8MDLZGNZQUNBeDdhNlE/view?usp=sharing) Or you can space the slider at 00:12:702 a little further away from the previous slider. This would place more emphasis on the slider so players can more easily play it intuitively, and not get frustrated. I would personally prefer doing the former since Normal and Easy difficulties should have simple rhythms. But if you want to preserve the rhythm that you have, I would recommend the latter. You are totally right. I didn't really consider this thoroughly. Yet I will adopt the second solution cuz I don't really wanna change this section rhythm-wise
00:19:560: Same concept as at 00:12:702.
00:23:702: Remove the new combo here. Stay consistent with the rest of the song section. fixed
00:31:417 - 00:32:131: Just to change things up, you may want to split this slider into two different sliders like this: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B34dX3Pb8MDLaGJxTFBDdlVRazA/view?usp=sharing. That way, things don't become "bland" for a lack of better word. At the same time, the pattern isn't changed too much. nah this long repeated slider is exactly what I did in the beginning section
00:33:274: Same concept as at 00:12:702.
00:45:131: Again, maybe split it up into two?
01:14:274: I feel like this slider has one too many slider returns. The last beat is a strong one that you may want to end with a hitcircle. I would recommend reducing the slider from 2 slider returns to one, then placing a hitcircle at the center of the previous 3 sliders. good suggestion, done
00:48:560 - 01:00:417: If you notice, your slider flow is consistently counter clockwise. There is nothing wrong with that kind of flow, but it might be better to change the direction of cursor movement from time to time. yea you are right. I changed half of the slider flow into clockwise
Solid maphardOverall good stuff. The concept and flow are very similar to your other difficulty, which is excellent. I don't have much to say to this difficulty.
Just wanted to point out that between 00:21:131 and 00:27:560, the new combo should be on each slider, not on the hitcircle after. This is true for all combos similar to this since the sliders land on the downbeat of every measure/cycle.
Personal opinion: Hard difficulty is ready for ranking
fixed
Good luck mapping!!!!
Vanillas wrote:
Hi~ from my queueModGL~Normal
normal的問題有點大,給幾個建議好了,可能這個難度需要remap。
- normal難度不建議用1/6來做,會比較難。那裡????
- 檢查一下DS normal難度確保DS相同: https://puu.sh/ua8k6/ed08ae8491.png 據我所知即使是normal也不一定要全部constant ds
- normal難度下一般最大的折返次數是4次,超過的話unrankable,比如00:07:417 (1) - 00:09:131 (1) - 00:10:845 (1) - 00:14:274 (1) - 這種在normal難度下不允許。 這些slider全改了
- 00:08:702 (3,1,2) - normal難度下不一定每一個音都要跟,如果跟了每一個音同時兼顧DS的問題就容易造成Note擠在一起不好看也不好讀圖。Normal難度建議直接把一串折返換成一個滑條。Kiai time的節奏挺好的。
Hard
同樣是給一些建議:
- 00:21:131 (1,2,3) - 發現整張圖大部分是這樣的節奏,這樣重複的話對於一個hard來說有點簡單。可以在不改變節奏型的情況下換用短條配置,擺放也可以多點變化,比如:https://puu.sh/ua9ln/484fdfe571.png 不了這個我是故意的
- 00:46:631這個位置沒有音,然後01:27:631和00:20:274這裡漏了音 fixed
- 總之節奏沒有什麼問題,就是擺放還需要多考慮下。畢竟是個hard diff盡量嘗試下多種擺放配置。
yaleufeu wrote:
NM from my modding queue
Normal1/6 mapping is not allowed where?????
AIMod Issues about spacing
00:07:417 (1,1,1,3,1,1,1,3) - Theses are not allowed in a normal diff fixed
00:48:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really hard to read nah it's fine
01:00:560 (1,2,3,4) - not allowed, 2 maximum stacks on a Normal diff k fixed
01:23:702 (2,3) - avoid theses kind of sliders, they look bad D: kinda adjusted
Hard00:44:845 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2) - This is too hard for a hard diff
00:48:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:54:560 (2,3) - It feels bad to play this
00:58:274 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is too hard for a hard diff
01:00:560 (1,2,3,4) - Distance is too high
01:29:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
all fixed
Gl
yaleufeu wrote:
NM from my modding queue
Normal
1/6 mapping is not allowed where????? nvm it was mapped on 1/3, but i'm not sure if it is allowed in a normal diff tho
osu file format v14
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all fixed huge thanksP A N wrote:
m4m as requested
[Kancho][Hard]
- 00:07:417 (1,2,3) I think it would be better if you make t heir spacing consistent. it will make them looks more aesthetic and more professional like http://puu.sh/uN6p4/f9a20d3898.jpg
- how you use NC is still inconsistent. such as you add NC on every 3 notes here 00:10:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3) meanwhile you didn't on 00:14:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and so on. make them consistent.
- 00:15:131 (1,2) - this is also inconsistent with other in term of spacing. you overlapped them here while you use jump on other such as 00:18:560 (1,2). change it to jump like other for consistent will be better imo.
- 00:19:560 (1,2) - they are too close to each other imo, doesn't emphasize the cymbal that well. considering move them further.
- 00:14:274 (1) - you can add finish here.
- you could also add finish on 00:12:702 (1,2) and 00:13:631 (2,3).
- 00:26:274 (7,1) - switch NC to follow what you did.
- 00:27:702 (3,4,1) - there is cymbal on 1 so I think make the spacing from 4 to 1 bigger than spacing from 3 to 4 is more decent and give impact to the cymbal. (might apply to the similar case)
- 00:29:702 (7,1) - same reason as above (about NC) there might have more so this apply to the similar case.
- 00:32:560 (2,3,4) - make these spacing bigger would be nice because it's stronger than other part.
- 00:34:845 - after this part, NC is messing. make them consistent.
- 01:09:131 (2) - add finish on head.
- there are the same problem like on the first part.
- could add note 00:34:560 and 00:34:702
[Normal]
- 00:45:988 (4) - better avoid overlapped here.
- 00:46:417 (1) - if you prefer to emphasize stream here, emphasize 00:20:274 too?
- 00:34:560 - could add umm 2/6 slider? from purple tick to purple. there are sounds there.
- 00:48:560 - this part is more dense than hardest diff, consider reduce the rhythm or increase on hardest diff instead.
- 01:06:131 (2,3,4) - this part is more dense than hardest diff, please reduce the rhythm.
- I think combo is too short, consider use NC on every 2 big white ticks instead?
- still lacks of many hitsounds, please check them o.o
good luck!
- 00:09:988 (3,4) - umm please avoid overlapped like this. make it simple like http://puu.sh/uN87a/2af1afffce.jpg is better and easier to play for normal player.
- 00:08:274 (3,4) - these sliders are hard to read for normal player imo. make the shape simple?
- 00:48:560 (1,1,1,1) - omg no, don't spam NC on easiest diff.
- consider use NC on every 2 big white tick instead, there is just 1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2. it somehow abuse the drain and might cause normal player to fail.
- 00:59:988 (2) - 2 reverse is pretty hard for normal diff I should say, I suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uN8jX/670cf59af5.jpg
- 00:57:560 (2) - same reason as above. I don't recommend useing 2 reverses on normal diff (easiest diff)
- and so on, problem is similar with the first part.