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kamome sano - </emotional> [CatchTheBeat|Osu]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August 19, 2017 at 2:10:39 PM

Artist: kamome sano
Title: </emotional>
Tags: drumstep dubstep neurofunk bass liliumx2 lilium records x2 freezer frozen system 2015 fii kaitlin -wwwww ascendance kalamitous storyboarder
BPM: 174
Filesize: 23035kb
Play Time: 05:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fiance's Catharsis (6.63 stars, 1629 notes)
  2. Serendipity (5.78 stars, 1437 notes)
Download: kamome sano - </emotional>
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Serendipity by: Girl
Fiance's Catharsis by: Ascendance and Fii
Storyboarder: Storyboarder
I really love </emotional>. Like, a lot. Like, a whole lot. You have no idea. I love it so much that it is inexplicable, and I'm ninety-nine percent sure that I have an unhealthy obsession. I will never get tired of listening to that sweet, angelic voice of bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-. It is my life goal to rank it and just let everyone play it. I fall asleep at night dreaming of it holding a personal concert for me, and then it would be so tired that it comes and cuddles up to me while we sleep together. If I could just hold it's slider for a brief moment, I could die happy. If given the opportunity, I would lightly nibble on its hit circles just to hear what kind of wub wub hitsounds it would let out. Then, I would play it while it clings to my slider hoping that I would stop, but I only continue as it bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu's louder and louder. I would give up almost anything just for it to be moved to the ranked section. No matter what I do, I am constantly thinking of it. When I wake up, ranking </emotional> is the first thing on my mind. When I go to school, I can only focus on it. When I go come home, I go on the computer to see if Xexxar has come out of the hot tub, only to be disappointed. When I go to sleep, I dream of </emotional> and I living a happy life together, being at the top of the charts. </emotional> is my pride, passion, and joy. If others were to call it "a fun map," I would probably get diabetes from their sweetness and die. I wish for nothing but </emotional>'s ranked status. If it were for it, I would give my life without any second thoughts. Without it, my life would serve no purpose. I really love </emotional>.
evth
lol nice hs ;)
Ascendance
soon
Dea ex machina
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Topic Starter
Girl

Fii wrote:

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Ascendance

Fii wrote:

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Topic Starter
Girl

Ascendance wrote:

Fii wrote:

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Topic Starter
Girl
mods plz
Ascendance

Adore wrote:

mods plz
delete std diff

we made things less cancer.
2017-03-21 17:29 Adore: carthasis
2017-03-21 17:29 Ascendance: u need to fix this
2017-03-21 17:29 Ascendance: ur hitsounds conflict with ours and it makes it sound really fuking bad
2017-03-21 17:30 Adore: FUK
2017-03-21 17:30 Ascendance: just look at the hitsounds from my mapset and make sure they dont conflict
2017-03-21 17:30 Adore: okay
2017-03-21 17:31 Adore: are there any unrankable stuff
2017-03-21 17:31 Adore: like bg size
2017-03-21 17:31 Adore: and such
2017-03-21 17:31 Ascendance: uh i can check
2017-03-21 17:32 Ascendance: our diff doesnt need mods :d
2017-03-21 17:32 Adore: :d
2017-03-21 17:33 Ascendance: its perfect as always
2017-03-21 17:33 Adore: mine diff too
2017-03-21 17:33 Ascendance: besides the hitsounds u fukt up
2017-03-21 17:33 Ascendance: : )
2017-03-21 17:35 Ascendance: 04:36:919 (2) - can you move this to x:272 and tilt it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7624049
2017-03-21 17:36 Adore: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7624056
2017-03-21 17:36 Adore: is this gud
2017-03-21 17:37 Ascendance: maybe tilt 1 or 2 more grids downwards
2017-03-21 17:37 Ascendance: just make sure it makes an hdash between 04:36:919 (2,3) -
2017-03-21 17:37 Adore: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7624062
2017-03-21 17:37 Adore: how about now
2017-03-21 17:37 Ascendance: yea
2017-03-21 17:37 Adore: yea
2017-03-21 17:37 Ascendance: it keeps the hdash?
2017-03-21 17:38 Adore: yus
2017-03-21 17:38 Adore: glowing red fruit
2017-03-21 17:38 Ascendance: kk
2017-03-21 17:38 Ascendance: yea
2017-03-21 17:38 Ascendance: you've got some unrankable stuff
2017-03-21 17:38 Ascendance: 1: the preview points are inconsistent
2017-03-21 17:38 Adore: y do u guys not want the BUBUBUBUUBUBUBU
2017-03-21 17:38 Ascendance: we have ours at 04:13:988 -
2017-03-21 17:39 Adore: ok fixed
2017-03-21 17:39 Adore: are diffs
2017-03-21 17:39 Adore: are 6ms off from each other
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: unused hitsounds
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: 04:13:988 -
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: oop
2017-03-21 17:39 Adore: our*
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: normal-slidertick.wav
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: normal-slidertick2.wav
2017-03-21 17:39 Ascendance: soft-slidertick3.wav
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: ending time is irrelevant
2017-03-21 17:40 Adore: are you sure
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: yes
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: not unrankable
2017-03-21 17:40 Adore: why is it even offset to begin with
2017-03-21 17:40 Adore: didn't we both take from naitoshi
2017-03-21 17:40 Adore: ? ? ?
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: ohhh
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: the whole thing is off
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: yeah we adjusted our offset to be more accurate
2017-03-21 17:40 Ascendance: use ours
2017-03-21 17:40 Adore: yes
2017-03-21 17:41 Adore: sheeit
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: while ur at it
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: 00:00:871 -
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: in your diff
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: is unrankable
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: the two timing lines need to be the same volume
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: or else u break osu
2017-03-21 17:41 Adore: o what the hell
2017-03-21 17:41 Adore: that wasn't intended
2017-03-21 17:41 Ascendance: ye XD
2017-03-21 17:42 Ascendance: ur map gives 290pp
2017-03-21 17:42 Adore: :gun:
2017-03-21 17:42 Ascendance: ours gives 630
2017-03-21 17:42 Ascendance: LOL
2017-03-21 17:42 Adore: nice one
2017-03-21 17:42 Ascendance: whoops
2017-03-21 17:42 Adore: uhh
2017-03-21 17:42 Adore: whats the fastest way
2017-03-21 17:42 Adore: to fix my offset
2017-03-21 17:42 Ascendance: select all timing points
2017-03-21 17:43 Adore: o true
2017-03-21 17:43 Ascendance: and move -6
2017-03-21 17:43 Ascendance: and then switch to 1/8 snap and click "resnap all objects"
2017-03-21 17:43 Ascendance: unless you used 1/3
2017-03-21 17:43 Ascendance: then ur fucked
2017-03-21 17:44 Adore: 00:00:871 00:00:885
2017-03-21 17:44 Adore: its actually 14 ms
2017-03-21 17:44 Adore: wtf
2017-03-21 17:44 Ascendance: well adjust it as needed
2017-03-21 17:45 Ascendance: until it matches ours
2017-03-21 17:45 Adore: OK
2017-03-21 17:45 Ascendance: 01:19:146 (7) - intimate with offscreen
2017-03-21 17:45 Ascendance: 01:20:871 (1) - intimate with my dik
2017-03-21 17:46 Adore: did you mean resnap all notes
2017-03-21 17:46 Adore: instead of resnap all objects
2017-03-21 17:46 Adore: dont want to click the wrong thing just making sure
2017-03-21 17:46 Ascendance: yes
2017-03-21 17:46 Adore: ok
2017-03-21 17:46 Ascendance: thef irst red option
2017-03-21 17:50 Adore: ok timing should be good
2017-03-21 17:50 Adore: off screen.
2017-03-21 17:50 Ascendance: intimate with anime
2017-03-21 17:51 Adore: post this in thread after i want sp
2017-03-21 17:51 Adore: sp looks good
2017-03-21 17:51 Ascendance: ok.
Dea ex machina
Topic Starter
Girl
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Ascendance
290pp vs. 630pp who will get flamed more for this map
Dawns
someone say free iphone 4

yeet
00:00:885 (1,2) - distance between slider and note is 1.27x here but 1.26x for every other time. fix it
also fix the spacing between each (2,1) since they switch a lot 00:01:229 (2) - is 2.68x for example whereas 00:01:747 (2) - is 2.65x

00:06:057 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - this plays fucking dreadfully why is 00:06:229 (1) - this spaced after 00:06:287 (1) - but hits before it AASSSDASF

00:12:264 (2,3,4) - aids to read

00:23:298 (2,3,4) - stop

01:17:781 (1) - spacing from 1,2 is 2.04x 01:17:436 (1) - this is 2.03x pixel nazi #2

01:38:126 (5) - nc?


i cba to look at the rest of this but it's good keep it up cirl su
Topic Starter
Girl

Dawnsday wrote:

someone say free iphone 4

ya

yeet
00:00:885 (1,2) - distance between slider and note is 1.27x here but 1.26x for every other time. fix it OK
also fix the spacing between each (2,1) since they switch a lot 00:01:229 (2) - is 2.68x for example whereas 00:01:747 (2) - is 2.65x OK

00:06:057 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - this plays fucking dreadfully why is 00:06:229 (1) - this spaced after 00:06:287 (1) - but hits before it AASSSDASF Changed the stream into a repeat slider and fixed spinner yaya

00:12:264 (2,3,4) - aids to read moved it down

00:23:298 (2,3,4) - stop okay dad

01:17:781 (1) - spacing from 1,2 is 2.04x 01:17:436 (1) - this is 2.03x pixel nazi #2 thx

01:38:126 (5) - nc? probably


i cba to look at the rest of this but it's good keep it up cirl su
thanks for the mod!!
Skeep
mod
00:01:402 (1,2) - 00:01:919 (1,2) - 00:02:436 (1,2) - sound is EVer SO slightly getting a little louder on these so u could maybe increase spacing and sv on each of them just a little if u want
00:23:298 (2) - NC?
00:31:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why are these getting smaller whnn the sound is getn ing louder??
00:55:367 (9,10,11,12) - sound is getting increasingly louder on these and it might start on the note beforei dk if im deaf but yh. also u should NC when u increase the spcaing!!
01:46:057 (1) - remove NC here mby bcz it sounds like it's just a continutation of the sound in thep revious slider so u ccould have them obth on the same combo butidk
02:33:816 (1) - idk fi it's a good idea bu t u could make this into a red anchor point cos the sound is prertty sHARP
02:45:540 (1) - u should amake the SV slower bcz it sounds to me like the slidr is oln a weaker sound.
02:51:057 - 02:53:643 - 02:53:816 - ur missing sounds in these parts and a lot of other similar parts later on but it's intentional so. i dont mind but ij ust want to know why if u dont mind !
03:22:953 (3) - 03:23:643 (6) - 03:24:505 (10) - imo i'd put an NC on these to emphasise the sounds
03:42:953 (1) - 03:44:333 (1) - 03:45:712 (1) - i think these should all hvae sepearte higher svs cos the sound is getting loudER
ok i tyhink that's it hopefull y i could hlep and btw send free iphone to 10 downing street in london i'll be wating thx
Kaifin

yea

  1. why use stack leniency so high when you have so many stack >:( if you use like 3 itll make a lot of the stacks look so much better
  2. 00:27:781 (5) - NC cause u NCd here 00:17:091 or just dont NC at that one, i know theres a different amount of time between them but i noticed it while playing so it seems inconsistent
  3. 00:52:781 (5) - NC this one too for consistency with 00:47:264 (1) -
  4. 01:04:333 (1,1) - not like this
  5. 01:07:091 (1,1) - gah
  6. 01:16:402 (3) - i dont think this counts as burai especially with the new RC but im not sure
  7. 01:17:609 (2) and 01:18:298 (2) - can u avoid this cause ur structure is good until its not with this
  8. 01:19:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could make this a proper triangle or make 01:20:022 (4,5,6) - go straight down from 01:19:850 (3) - for a cleaner look rn its off
  9. 01:21:229 (3,6,2) - WTF HAPPENEd
  10. 01:26:574 (2,3,4) - this flow is weird and also isnt a proper line, if you're keeping the line make it a proper line but maybe just change it to be a zig zag like the others and move the 01:27:436 (7,8) to correspond with this
  11. 01:31:919 - why do you NC spam here? i get that the velocity is slightly different for each one but NC spam isn't needed to read it and it would look a lot better with pairs of 2
  12. 01:38:126 (1,2,3,4) - surprised this doesnt increase in spacing as well, maybe you could keep this spacing the same and make the 01:37:781 (1,2,3,4) - spacing less to transition it a bit better? then you could also seperate the 01:38:471 (1) - even further for emphasis
  13. theres a lot of NC suggestions in this part because i think the NC spam ruins the emphasis if you do it a lot
  14. 01:43:471 (1) - if your stack leniency was just higher shit like this would look way nicer
  15. 01:43:471 (1) - also for consistency you shouldnt NC this
  16. 01:46:057 (1) - imo this NC is unnecessary
  17. 01:47:091 (1) - same
  18. 01:49:333 (1) - personally i think this one could be not NC'd too for more emphasis on the 01:49:505 (1) -
  19. 01:50:885 (1,2,1) - cute but it would be cuter if you could set it up so 01:51:229 (1) - stacks on the slider end of 01:49:505 (1) - im not sure if that would make the stream spacing weird but it feels a little high for the angle rn regardless
  20. 01:51:574 (1) - no NC if you took the other one for consistency
  21. 01:52:609 (2,2) - actually stack these
  22. go through the NCs and make sure they're consistent if you change them: NC spam lowers emphasis so much unless literally everything needs it to be readable: which it really doesnt here because you have intuitive slider design
  23. 01:56:402 - is it just me or are these hitsounds a little loud compared to the others? kind of jarring and weird sounding
  24. 02:00:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - see what you did here is what i was talking about at 01:38:126 (1,2,3,4) in the earlier point if you didnt get it from my explanation
  25. 02:02:609 (1,2) - these aren't the same angle
  26. 02:03:988 (1) - or 02:04:160 (1) - no NC
  27. 02:05:540 (1) - no NC
  28. 02:06:919 (1) - 02:07:264 (1) - 02:07:609 (1) - this would be more emphasis if NCd in pairs of 2, so no NC on these notes imo
  29. 02:07:781 (1,1) -
  30. 02:08:126 (1) - no NC
  31. 02:08:298 (1,1,2,3) - why not structure this as a proper shape? like make the rectangle even so it doesnt look fuckd
  32. 02:11:574 (3) - this SHOuld be NC'd if you applied the point at 02:06:919
  33. 02:13:643 (1) - 02:13:816 (2) - swap these NCs for consistency if you applied before
  34. 02:15:022 (2) - no NC
  35. 02:16:402 (1,1) - this flow is pretty ???? to me, also no NC on 02:16:402 (1) -
  36. 02:18:126 (1) - same as before with these 3
  37. 02:22:609 (3) - NC
  38. 02:23:298 (1,2,1) - this flow is kind of gross, moving 02:23:643 (1,2) - down and to the left would improve it a lot, maybe something like this
  39. 02:28:471 (1,2) - really nazi one
  40. 02:31:229 (3) - NC this and no NC 02:31:919 (1) - this for consistency
  41. 02:31:574 (2) - is there a reason this specific slider isnt extended? the same sound has an extended slider when it occurs later and this is the only non extended slider
  42. 02:33:298 - consider not using the NC spam until 02:33:988 - for emphasis
  43. 02:34:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is icky i know you wanna stack it but like doing this or something similar is 10x better flow
  44. 02:43:643 - can you unfuck the structure in this part? here is an example of a structured possible solution cause ur current pattern kinda ruins your whole structure you have going on through all the slider wubs see it makes a triangle just do some shit lik that so its not icky as heLL
  45. 02:57:953 (2,3) - move this 2 up a bit so the overlap is better? i also moved the whole pattern including 02:57:953 (2,3,4) - to the side a little in the screenshot to keep the same flow
  46. 03:00:195 (1,2,3) - triangle
  47. 03:05:195 (7,2) - >:( avoid this overlap u have all the space in the world to avoid it
  48. 03:10:712 (9,1) - pretty surprised this isnt a blanket, i know suggesting blankets where they arent is a bad suggestion but like this seems pretty obvious considering the structure/patterning of the last 15 seconds
  49. 03:13:298 (4,5) - nazi
  50. 03:14:505 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - if ur gonna do this hexagon grid shit please make it a proper grid with proper spacing
  51. 03:15:712 (3,4) -
  52. 03:17:091 - the note is clearly here if you want it to be extended then just make it a triplet
  53. 03:18:816 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is fuckd
  54. 03:20:885 - should be NCd
  55. 03:33:988 (5,6,7,8,9) -
  56. 03:34:678 (1,2) - make straight because the line and flow of 03:35:367 (5) - makes it look really off cause its not straight
  57. 03:36:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is not a proper line, how i noticed i will never know but its not right LOL
  58. 03:37:436 (1,2) - this one is much more straight than the last
  59. 03:53:298 - im not sure why throughout this section you ignore this note, its like the most important note in the whole rhythm and its not clickable ever, and since its never clickable the whole section feels fuckd rhythm wise
  60. 03:55:367 - why is this stream kinda fucked up like this when all the others aren't? since its the first one its super weird to read, i think you should make it just like any of the other ones like at 04:05:712 -
  61. 03:57:264 (3,1) - i know you're blanketing but it would just look a lot better if you fully seperated 03:57:436 (1,2,3,4) - from 03:57:005 (2) - (the 1 is stacked on the slider end of 03:55:540 (3) - in the screenshot for reference
  62. 03:58:816 - these should def be clickable
  63. 04:04:419 - see the note you're trying to hold for with 04:04:333 (4) - actually starts here, which is why there is that awkward disconnect and it feels funny to play
  64. 04:08:729 (1) - no NC
  65. 04:08:816 (2) - NC (this was probably a mistake)
  66. 04:09:936 - how come u do it properly here >:(
  67. 04:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing higher if you're gonna not stack them because it just kinda looks fucked by accident like this, not cool
  68. 04:14:678 - NCing stuff applies here too, but i think maybe the NC spam is okay in this kiai? idk just use your own discretion and look over it for what you'd change for consistency
  69. 04:24:333 - when u copy ur streams from lesjuh
  70. 04:34:333 (1) - can u nudge this up so it doesnt have the overlap with 04:33:643 (1,2,3,4)
  71. 04:35:195 (2) - and 04:34:505 (2) - why whenever u do 1-2 jumps does it ruin your structure :? please make this good structur
  72. 04:37:436 - same not clickable complaint
  73. 04:42:953 - these slider ends are just as important as the held note cause if you make it not lead in with it being clickable the held note feels so bad lol
  74. 04:48:471 - you do it correct here
  75. 04:53:988 - a
  76. 05:07:781 (7) - this should be NC'd based on your other NCs

short mod
Topic Starter
Girl

Skeep wrote:

mod
00:01:402 (1,2) - 00:01:919 (1,2) - 00:02:436 (1,2) - sound is EVer SO slightly getting a little louder on these so u could maybe increase spacing and sv on each of them just a little if u want no need
00:23:298 (2) - NC? Nope it belongs on 00:22:953 (1) -
00:31:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why are these getting smaller whnn the sound is getn ing louder?? ur write. fixedx
00:55:367 (9,10,11,12) - sound is getting increasingly louder on these and it might start on the note beforei dk if im deaf but yh. also u should NC when u increase the spcaing!! spacing is fine :o
01:46:057 (1) - remove NC here mby bcz it sounds like it's just a continutation of the sound in thep revious slider so u ccould have them obth on the same combo butidk
02:33:816 (1) - idk fi it's a good idea bu t u could make this into a red anchor point cos the sound is prertty sHARP sure
02:45:540 (1) - u should amake the SV slower bcz it sounds to me like the slidr is oln a weaker sound. its a lower note in the song and the intensity is about the same so no changes
02:51:057 - 02:53:643 - 02:53:816 - ur missing sounds in these parts and a lot of other similar parts later on but it's intentional so. i dont mind but ij ust want to know why if u dont mind ! the beats are barely audible and i like having the pauses
03:22:953 (3) - 03:23:643 (6) - 03:24:505 (10) - imo i'd put an NC on these to emphasise the sounds okey
03:42:953 (1) - 03:44:333 (1) - 03:45:712 (1) - i think these should all hvae sepearte higher svs cos the sound is getting loudER nah
ok i tyhink that's it hopefull y i could hlep and btw send free iphone to 10 downing street in london i'll be wating thx
thanks for the mod! heres ur iphone
Topic Starter
Girl
holy shet

Kaifin wrote:

yea

  1. why use stack leniency so high when you have so many stack >:( if you use like 3 itll make a lot of the stacks look so much better stack leniency daddy :weary:
  2. 00:27:781 (5) - NC cause u NCd here 00:17:091 or just dont NC at that one, i know theres a different amount of time between them but i noticed it while playing so it seems inconsistent OKAY
  3. 00:52:781 (5) - NC this one too for consistency with 00:47:264 (1) - OKAY
  4. 01:04:333 (1,1) - not like this ya
  5. 01:07:091 (1,1) - gah yah
  6. 01:16:402 (3) - i dont think this counts as burai especially with the new RC but im not sure
  7. 01:17:609 (2) and 01:18:298 (2) - can u avoid this cause ur structure is good until its not with this sure made them overlap cuz i tried other methods but they all look bad :d
  8. 01:19:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could make this a proper triangle or make 01:20:022 (4,5,6) - go straight down from 01:19:850 (3) - for a cleaner look rn its off triangle
  9. 01:21:229 (3,6,2) - WTF HAPPENEd life
  10. 01:26:574 (2,3,4) - this flow is weird and also isnt a proper line, if you're keeping the line make it a proper line but maybe just change it to be a zig zag like the others and move the 01:27:436 (7,8) to correspond with this made it a zig zag and moved things to correspond with it
  11. 01:31:919 - why do you NC spam here? i get that the velocity is slightly different for each one but NC spam isn't needed to read it and it would look a lot better with pairs of 2 i really like the rainbow coloured rice krispys
  12. 01:38:126 (1,2,3,4) - surprised this doesnt increase in spacing as well, maybe you could keep this spacing the same and make the 01:37:781 (1,2,3,4) - spacing less to transition it a bit better? then you could also seperate the 01:38:471 (1) - even further for emphasis I will go with your suggestion
  13. theres a lot of NC suggestions in this part because i think the NC spam ruins the emphasis if you do it a lot
  14. 01:43:471 (1) - if your stack leniency was just higher shit like this would look way nicer it is now!
  15. 01:43:471 (1) - also for consistency you shouldnt NC this ok
  16. 01:46:057 (1) - imo this NC is unnecessary ok
  17. 01:47:091 (1) - same ok
  18. 01:49:333 (1) - personally i think this one could be not NC'd too for more emphasis on the 01:49:505 (1) - ok
  19. 01:50:885 (1,2,1) - cute but it would be cuter if you could set it up so 01:51:229 (1) - stacks on the slider end of 01:49:505 (1) - im not sure if that would make the stream spacing weird but it feels a little high for the angle rn regardless stacked and also moved 01:51:143 (2) - to the left a bit to form a < pattern, ur cute too btw
  20. 01:51:574 (1) - no NC if you took the other one for consistency ya
  21. 01:52:609 (2,2) - actually stack these they were stacked idk why they fell apart like my life lol.
  22. go through the NCs and make sure they're consistent if you change them: NC spam lowers emphasis so much unless literally everything needs it to be readable: which it really doesnt here because you have intuitive slider design
  23. 01:56:402 - is it just me or are these hitsounds a little loud compared to the others? kind of jarring and weird sounding its the same volume but its probably cuz i hitsounded the entire stream
  24. 02:00:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - see what you did here is what i was talking about at 01:38:126 (1,2,3,4) in the earlier point if you didnt get it from my explanation got it now :o
  25. 02:02:609 (1,2) - these aren't the same angle shit
  26. 02:03:988 (1) - or 02:04:160 (1) - no NC removed NC on 02:03:988 (2) -
  27. 02:05:540 (1) - no NC okey
  28. 02:06:919 (1) - 02:07:264 (1) - 02:07:609 (1) - this would be more emphasis if NCd in pairs of 2, so no NC on these notes imo ye
  29. 02:07:781 (1,1) - nut
  30. 02:08:126 (1) - no NC okey
  31. 02:08:298 (1,1,2,3) - why not structure this as a proper shape? like make the rectangle even so it doesnt look fuckd
  32. 02:11:574 (3) - this SHOuld be NC'd if you applied the point at 02:06:919
  33. 02:13:643 (1) - 02:13:816 (2) - swap these NCs for consistency if you applied before
  34. 02:15:022 (2) - no NC
  35. 02:16:402 (1,1) - this flow is pretty ???? to me, also no NC on 02:16:402 (1) -
  36. 02:18:126 (1) - same as before with these 3 yes
  37. 02:22:609 (3) - NC done
  38. 02:23:298 (1,2,1) - this flow is kind of gross, moving 02:23:643 (1,2) - down and to the left would improve it a lot, maybe something like this used your suggestion
  39. 02:28:471 (1,2) - really nazi one reminds me of the time when my calc teacher gave me 39.75/40 on a quiz
  40. 02:31:229 (3) - NC this and no NC 02:31:919 (1) - this for consistency ok
  41. 02:31:574 (2) - is there a reason this specific slider isnt extended? the same sound has an extended slider when it occurs later and this is the only non extended slider not really. changed the slider
  42. 02:33:298 - consider not using the NC spam until 02:33:988 - for emphasis ok
  43. 02:34:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is icky i know you wanna stack it but like doing this or something similar is 10x better flow yeah, it probably plays bad. fixed it
  44. 02:43:643 - can you unfuck the structure in this part? here is an example of a structured possible solution cause ur current pattern kinda ruins your whole structure you have going on through all the slider wubs see it makes a triangle just do some shit lik that so its not icky as heLL done
  45. 02:57:953 (2,3) - move this 2 up a bit so the overlap is better? i also moved the whole pattern including 02:57:953 (2,3,4) - to the side a little in the screenshot to keep the same flow okay
  46. 03:00:195 (1,2,3) - triangle ▶
  47. 03:05:195 (7,2) - >:( avoid this overlap u have all the space in the world to avoid it
  48. 03:10:712 (9,1) - pretty surprised this isnt a blanket, i know suggesting blankets where they arent is a bad suggestion but like this seems pretty obvious considering the structure/patterning of the last 15 seconds blanketed
  49. 03:13:298 (4,5) - nazi not rlly nazi thats pretty visible but thanks!
  50. 03:14:505 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - if ur gonna do this hexagon grid shit please make it a proper grid with proper spacing remapped this part
  51. 03:15:712 (3,4) - ded
  52. 03:17:091 - the note is clearly here if you want it to be extended then just make it a triplet im deaf
  53. 03:18:816 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is fuckd unfuckd
  54. 03:20:885 - should be NCd ye
  55. 03:33:988 (5,6,7,8,9) - ya
  56. 03:34:678 (1,2) - make straight because the line and flow of 03:35:367 (5) - makes it look really off cause its not straight okay!
  57. 03:36:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is not a proper line, how i noticed i will never know but its not right LOL fixd
  58. 03:37:436 (1,2) - this one is much more straight than the last i say that about my friends too
  59. 03:53:298 - im not sure why throughout this section you ignore this note, its like the most important note in the whole rhythm and its not clickable ever, and since its never clickable the whole section feels fuckd rhythm wise ez solution
  60. 03:55:367 - why is this stream kinda fucked up like this when all the others aren't? since its the first one its super weird to read, i think you should make it just like any of the other ones like at 04:05:712 - fixed
  61. 03:57:264 (3,1) - i know you're blanketing but it would just look a lot better if you fully seperated 03:57:436 (1,2,3,4) - from 03:57:005 (2) - (the 1 is stacked on the slider end of 03:55:540 (3) - in the screenshot for reference done
  62. 03:58:816 - these should def be clickablethey are now
  63. 04:04:419 - see the note you're trying to hold for with 04:04:333 (4) - actually starts here, which is why there is that awkward disconnect and it feels funny to play fixed!
  64. 04:08:729 (1) - no NC ok
  65. 04:08:816 (2) - NC (this was probably a mistake) indeed
  66. 04:09:936 - how come u do it properly here >:( i'll fix the others using this rhythm :0
  67. 04:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing higher if you're gonna not stack them because it just kinda looks fucked by accident like this, not cool sorrie it was meant to be stacked
  68. 04:14:678 - NCing stuff applies here too, but i think maybe the NC spam is okay in this kiai? idk just use your own discretion and look over it for what you'd change for consistency nah i'll fix the NC spams
  69. 04:24:333 - when u copy ur streams from lesjuh lesjuh is blu dragon backwards
  70. 04:34:333 (1) - can u nudge this up so it doesnt have the overlap with 04:33:643 (1,2,3,4) yes
  71. 04:35:195 (2) - and 04:34:505 (2) - why whenever u do 1-2 jumps does it ruin your structure :? please make this good structur suk at jumpz
  72. 04:37:436 - same not clickable complaint clickable now
  73. 04:42:953 - these slider ends are just as important as the held note cause if you make it not lead in with it being clickable the held note feels so bad lol ^
  74. 04:48:471 - you do it correct here
  75. 04:53:988 - a b
  76. 05:07:781 (7) - this should be NC'd based on your other NCs
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