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EARPHONES - Ikken Rakuchaku Goyoujin

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Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月2日 at 23:31:43

Artist: EARPHONES
Title: Ikken Rakuchaku Goyoujin
Source: AKIBA'S TRIP -THE ANIMATION-
Tags: kawaiwkyik chaoslitz karen Kagamine Ren anime opening op tv size akihabara アキバズトリップ 高橋李依 高野麻里佳 長久友紀 RIE TAKAHASHI YUKI NAGAKU MARIKA KOUNO
BPM: 166
Filesize: 17438kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chaoz's AKIBA (5.03 stars, 371 notes)
  2. Easy (1.49 stars, 86 notes)
  3. Hard (3.34 stars, 255 notes)
  4. Insane (4.99 stars, 349 notes)
  5. Karen's Insane (4.18 stars, 364 notes)
  6. Normal (2.11 stars, 150 notes)
Download: EARPHONES - Ikken Rakuchaku Goyoujin
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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pp map
bg pic edit by Chaoslitz
mp3 changed on 2017/03/02 19:04 UTC+9, plz redownload to get latest mp3 file for the map

Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - me
Insane - me
Insane - Karen
AKIBA - Chaoslitz
Hicool
Meyrink
how to teach be strong ok
Little
:o
so fast
xxdeathx
Euro Mapping Machine Simulator 2
GIDZ

Little wrote:

:o
so fast
Rizia.exe
Kalibe
that anime
Karen
Nakano Itsuki

YoonA- wrote:

Edit:800th post LUL
EncoreW
[Chaoz's AKIBA]

這種類型的歌vocal 的優先順序都比較高嗎我不太瞭解,00:12:688 - 00:14:134 - 不過這種鼓點都不要了感覺有點傷心

00:47:387 (5,6,1,2) - 這地方打起來感覺有點卡手,不過我好像也不會打這種串

01:27:146 (1) - 結尾來個這種牛逼音效啊這麼簡單的一個finish說明不了問題 http://puu.sh/tgS2f/360e1a14fd.wav

[Insane]

00:00:399 (1) - 這地方感覺可以塞個1/8滑條,然後看著他彈來彈去

00:03:652 - 這地方的音效給我的感覺是我的電腦被拔了電源。。

01:18:110 (1,2,3) - 個人比較傾向三個都疊或者三個都不疊

[Karen's Insane]

00:05:279 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个滑条尾听上去就有点吵。。

00:07:628 (3,4) - ctrl+g?因为 00:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:158 (3,4,5,6) - 这里

00:17:206 (7,1,2,3,4) - 1.4-1.0.0.6-0.5的变距根本没规律啊

01:27:146 (4) - finish还不nc


Fushimi Rio
狗币字好大

[General]
00:11:785 (2) - 这个地方的节奏其实更接近这样 两个Insane用三连我觉得不是特别妥

[Easy]
00:10:881 (1) - 是不是应该停在这 白线并没有音
00:57:688 - 这个音放掉了有点可惜 正好前面3也用滑条尾压了个音 这样好一些

[Normal]
00:11:722 - Easy还放了个滑条 normal不放感觉怪怪的

[Hard]
00:11:604 (3) - 感觉节奏应该是这样 或者拖到红线结束
00:51:544 (2) - 不知道是不是想做blanket但是歪了 不是的话这个弧度有点大

[Karen's Insane]
你最后的kiai没结束 一泻千里
00:17:387 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么看着像1接了个三连似的……
00:45:941 (2,3,4,5) - 我更倾向于把234放到一条直线上 比较贴合人声
00:49:917 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这种节奏放这里其实不是特别舒服 用在01:06:544 (3,4,5,6) - 反倒比较好

[Insane]
00:34:014 (4) - 这个应该跟后面三个滑条做成一组……

[Chaoz's AKIBA]
00:26:604 (1) - 这个nc其实没什么必要
01:09:254 (4,5,1) - 感觉这个间距可以更小一点
01:13:592 - 这个重音放掉了怪可惜的 感觉是不是可以调整一下节奏

结尾音效我推荐:
http://puu.sh/tiBvh/82479d699e.wav
http://puu.sh/tiBtC/29ba3a834d.wav
Starfy
Hi M4M

[Geeneral]
-Countdown should be disable

[Easy]
-OD1 seems too extreme... OD2 would fit maybe
-Please check AIMod, it shows some problem of distance snap
-00:02:206 (2) - For me, ctrl+g it can make the flow becomes smoother, but ya you need to regulate the distance if you apply this point
-00:16:664 (3) - Why not move to x:138,y:318 to fit both two blanket :v
-00:48:471 (3) - Isn't the slider tail of the slider is off-screen?
-01:06:543 (5,6) - Just opinion, seems the density of notes is too high in this part even it has intense amplitude. Maybe convert this two notes to slider in order to lower the difficulty for newbies to play?

[Normal]
-This difficulty desevers AR5 ;w;...
-00:12:327 (1,2) - Hmmm Blanket
-00:40:520 (6) - Maybe lower the red anchor the form a smoother shape to make a better transition between the previous and next slider
-00:45:760 (1,2,3) - Just opinion, the flow of this pattern seems a bit awkward xD. At least try to curve 00:46:303 (3) - to make a neater flow (?
-00:58:592 (1) - Move it upper to fit the blanket
-01:17:387 (4) - Problem of distance snap o.O

[Hard]
-00:01:664 (3) - The distance deserves high distance to match more the music.. anyway just personal opinion~
-00:22:267 (1) - Blanket
-00:28:592 (2,3) - Blanket
-00:32:929 (2) - Not reallu sure that this is off-screen or not, but a kindly reminder
-01:20:098 (1) - A bit off-screen, the red anchor

[Karen]
-00:04:917 (1) - Why not blanket 00:04:556 (4) - :vv You may move the slider to x:312,y:344 to fit the blanket
-00:06:453 (6,1) - Maybe stack them directly? Not really understand the placing of this two elements
-00:22:267 (1) - That "hook" of the slider looks a little bitttt weird, maybe lower the anchor to make a smoother slider? Totally personal thought
-01:21:544 (1) - The flow of this slider is kinda awkward for me. The flow of previous notes is a anti-clockrise circular flow. But this slider forces to change the flow rigidly to clockrise circular flow. Not really cool and fun when playing this part o.o
-01:25:881 (7,1) - Maybe move them a bit upper to emphasize better the intense beat?

[Insane]
-Maybe rename it to Another or something? xD
-00:15:218 (1,2) - Blanket :P
-00:54:254 (1) - Hmm I suggest using a slider + note pattern here.. Since there is a spacestream before the slider. And the reverse slider looks just stop the flow that you are keeping suddenly.

[Chaoz]
-00:02:206 (1) - Maybe move it a bit closer, the intensity of this part doesn't deserve that large distance
-00:30:580 (4) - idk but ctrl+g it makes the flow becomes funnier
-00:32:929 (3) - This slider may curve more to emphasize the shape and the flow. Maybe move the middle anchor upper to accentuate the shape
-00:47:658 (6,1) - This is really hard to read even though the map is AR9 but I don't have any solution to solve it lol 01:11:965 (2,3) -
-00:59:315 (1) - It looks not good...There is a spacestream before the slider and it gives a really intense and rigid flow. But the slider suddenly slow down, it breaks the flow that those spacestream constructed previously and it gives an awkward transition...So I suggest keeping the original sv otherwise it would look a bitttt strange
-01:11:965 (2,3) - Blanket :< I mean the slider tail of 01:12:327 (3) -

Good luck Rizia~ Top三個Diff都好好玩 xD
lit120
HAHAHA

call me if u need sth free for mod lel
lambilly
沒 video,建議加上
Topic Starter
Rizia
updated with video
i will check the mod soon
Doormat
m4m from your queue, sorry it's a bit late lol

[General]
  1. 01:27:146 - really strong sound here, using regular finish is kind of boring. why not try switching to normal sample and finish?
[Easy]
  1. NC usage seems a bit random before the kiai, actually. why not try every two bars or something
  2. 00:23:170 - there's more emphasis here than on 00:23:532 (2) - tbh (louder sound), i think you should place a 1/1 slider here like 00:26:062 (3) -
  3. 00:52:809 (1,2) - blankets could be better if you care about that sort of thing
  4. 01:13:230 (1,1) - a little worried about recovery time between spinner and note. why not try a rhythm like this instead of a spinner?
    SPOILER
    yes, RC guideline technically says 3-4 beats, but everyone uses 4 beats as the standard, so idk if you'll be able to get away with this. if it was 3.5 beats, you could most likely get away with it, but 3 beats might be pushing it
  5. 01:22:086 (1) - i think the long spinner here is kind of dumbing down the ending too much. still a lot of strong beats you can use
[Normal]
  1. again, NC usage before kiai could be a bit more consistent, seems a bit random right now
  2. 00:42:688 (3,4) - blankets if you care
  3. 00:49:194 (4) - i think moving this to red tick at 00:49:014 - for vocal emphasis would be better here, since it's louder sound and you literally do this everywhere else in the kiai
  4. 01:00:038 (1) - nc here breaks your consistency in comboing
  5. 01:21:544 (1) - similar to Easy, spinner ending is dumbing down too much imo; would rather see this part mapped out
[Hard]
  1. something something NC before kiai something something consistent usage something something
  2. 00:04:736 (4) - strongest beat here on a repeat lol why, would rather see more emphasis here by making it clickable
  3. 01:04:014 (4,5) - i'm not hearing any notes on 01:04:104 - might be better to stick to using a 1/2 slider instead of two 1/4s
  4. 01:27:146 (3) - could use more spacing to give it more emphasis, it's literally the the loudest note in the song. you could try moving it to bottom left sector of the map
[Karen]
  1. 00:11:875 (5,6) - i think it would be better if you Ctrl + G the rhythm here, drums actually skip over the white tick so something like this would be appropriate imo
  2. 00:12:688 (2,3,4) - shouldn't jump be from 3->4 instead of 2->3? new word emphasis is on the white tick
  3. 00:17:387 (1,2,3,4) - the 1.0x -> 0.6x -> 0.4x ds drop looks a bit weird, maybe try 0.8x -> 0.6x -> 0.4x or 0.9x -> 0.6x -> 0.3x instead?
  4. 00:29:134 (4,5,6) - 00:32:026 (5,6,7) - 00:36:724 (5,6) - 00:43:592 (5,6,7) - claps are kind of too loud and stand out too much; maybe try whistles instead
  5. 00:35:459 (1) - overlaps with hp bar and nearly off screen. i'd move this down
  6. 01:25:339 (4,5) - i think 4->5 should have a bit larger spacing, since music is getting louder and then this has even lower spacing than 01:24:977 (2,3) -
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:875 (3,4) - similar comment to what i pointed out in Karen's Insane, i think you should Ctrl + G this to better represent drums
  2. 00:58:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - spaced stream here seems a bit too extreme coming from 00:57:688 (1,2,3) - . maybe try some kick sliders to help with movement acceleration?
  3. 01:04:104 (5) - i don't really hear a sound here, sounds a bit overmapped to me. maybe try 1/2 slider like Karen did here?
  4. 01:13:592 (3,4,5,6) - kind of expected 3->4 to have more spacing than 5->6 since the 4 is the loudest note here
  5. 01:22:628 (5,6) - why kick sliders here and then circles here 01:24:074 (2,3) - and then back to kick sliders here 01:25:339 (1,2,3) - ? some consistency would be nice
[Chaoz]
  1. 00:01:845 (5,6,7,1) - if you're going to space it out like this i think using same distance from 5->6 and 7->1 would look aesthetically nicer
  2. 00:17:206 (3,4,5) - wrong snap; this is pretty obviously 1/6. why not replace (3,4) with a 1/6 repeat slider
  3. 00:47:387 (5,6,1) - idk if it's just me, but this back-and-forth spaced stream might feel really awkward to play. just wanted to make a note of it
  4. 00:53:441 (4,5) - i think this should have slightly different spacing like 00:53:802 (8,1) - since vocal emphasis
  5. 01:18:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - why is this part easier than 01:12:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - when it's the same musically?
i'd say to call me back, but i failed so tough luck ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Atrue
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitnormal2.wav
省事就没查meta,见谅。
00:12:327 - 整个set都有的音效问题,从这里开始的一段,音效不太够,打着软绵绵的。参见00:21:001 类似这种的地方,鼓声找不到了。
[Easy]
01:11:965 - 这里的节奏应该是这个样子的, 不然你跟的vocal也抢拍了。[Normal]
老生常谈的diff spread,没有很严重但是其实也不是很好的分布。
这个diff有些stacking 挺难打的。
00:37:989 (4,1,2) - 比如这里其实觉得这个堆叠挺出人意料的,前边差不多的vocal就用slider,这里就stack了。
01:09:074 - 这还不如cover上,又有特色鼓点又有vocal,直接用1/2 slider可能更合适。 况且是白线。
[Hard]
00:17:206 (3) - 这挺容易读错成1/4折返的, 不太好处理。 建议简化节奏。
00:21:001 (1) - 尤其是类似于这种地方,音效没有下,明明有重音但是踩不上去。 这个不是soft whistle 能解决的问题。
01:06:544 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这个在这种ar下还挺难打的。虽然也比较合曲。 一个很主要的问题在于跟01:05:821 (1,2) - 这里一混,ar低的情况下搞不清楚flow的走向是可能的。
01:15:941 - 缺音效,可以考虑给finish+clap。
[Karen's Insane]
论永恒的kiai(你的kiai end呢)
00:35:459 (1) - 这个太高了,碰hp bar而且穿过去了。
00:51:363 (1,2) - 不建议叠,你前边的一堆梗都是滑条+note成组,距离恒定。 这里如果这样摆可能会更合适00:53:532 - 我觉得这里少的clap很重要,还是加上更能读懂梗。
[Insane]
HP7 OD8有点高了。至少HP没有必要这么高。
00:48:291 - 按说我觉得这里也应该放短滑条的。
00:53:532 - 少了个NC。
00:53:712 (6) - 跳的有点过了,后边接这种串子的话前边的跳太大会后边不好控制。
00:58:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这在这种难度里面有点吓人。改的话也不麻烦,就用正常串就好了,但是跟原来的意图就不一样了吧。
01:04:375 (1) - 这个flow有点突兀啊,考虑顺顺flow,把前边的串子叠上来么,或者换个方向?总之这样的话是有点难打。
01:22:628 (5,6) - 应该能用一样的slider style。[Chaoz's AKIBA]
有些地方flow应该还能改改
00:02:026 (6,7,1) - 前不着村后不着店,这两个note的位置很尴尬,个人觉得应该可以放在1上面,这样就和3,4,5的flow有类比了。
00:12:146 (8) - 放的稍微远一点会更好打。 现在叠起来反而卡手。
00:26:604 (1) - 这里我的处理应该是ctrl+G,因为拖完上边的滑条会直接来拖这一个,这样如果头朝下的话跳会完全逆flow。
00:25:520 (1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要spam NC,反而觉得乱。
00:47:387 (5,6,1,2) - 这flow太卡手了,考虑一个其他方法不那么来回跳。像是特意去打6然后折回来锐角减速进stream这种,很容易miss 6。
01:09:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不如换成短滑条强调vocal。这种下法有点含混了。仅作建议:
Karen

imoutosan wrote:

[Karen's Insane]
00:49:917 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这种节奏放这里其实不是特别舒服 用在01:06:544 (3,4,5,6) - 反倒比较好 改起来好麻烦就算了

Starfy wrote:

[Karen]
-00:06:453 (6,1) - Maybe stack them directly? Not really understand the placing of this two elements want to make some difference, stacking would be boring
[/quote

[quote="Doormat"]

[Karen]
  1. 00:12:688 (2,3,4) - shouldn't jump be from 3->4 instead of 2->3? new word emphasis is on the white tick i think the vocal on 3 is kinda strong
  2. 00:29:134 (4,5,6) - 00:32:026 (5,6,7) - 00:36:724 (5,6) - 00:43:592 (5,6,7) - claps are kind of too loud and stand out too much; maybe try whistles instead hmm i dislike soft hitsounds on streams because streams need to give much more feedback than circles

everything else has been fixed, thanks for mods!

SPOILER
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[Metadata]
Title:Ikken Rakuchaku Goyoujin
TitleUnicode:一件落着ゴ用心
Artist:EARPHONES
ArtistUnicode:イヤホンズ
Creator:Rizia
Version:Karen's Insane
Source:AKIBA'S TRIP -THE ANIMATION-
Tags:kawaiwkyik chaoslitz karen Kagamine Ren anime opening op tv size akihabara アキバズトリップ 高橋李依 高野麻里佳 長久友紀 RIE TAKAHASHI YUKI NAGAKU MARIKA KOUNO
BeatmapID:1177311
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[Difficulty]
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Topic Starter
Rizia

Speechless wrote:

[Insane]

00:00:399 (1) - 這地方感覺可以塞個1/8滑條,然後看著他彈來彈去

00:03:652 - 這地方的音效給我的感覺是我的電腦被拔了電源。。

01:18:110 (1,2,3) - 個人比較傾向三個都疊或者三個都不疊 這樣挺好的 就留了



imoutosan wrote:

狗币字好大

[General]
00:11:785 (2) - 这个地方的节奏其实更接近这样 两个Insane用三连我觉得不是特别妥

[Easy]
00:10:881 (1) - 是不是应该停在这 白线并没有音
00:57:688 - 这个音放掉了有点可惜 正好前面3也用滑条尾压了个音 这样好一些

[Normal]
00:11:722 - Easy还放了个滑条 normal不放感觉怪怪的

[Hard]
00:11:604 (3) - 感觉节奏应该是这样 或者拖到红线结束 我覺得簡單易明的節奏會較好
00:51:544 (2) - 不知道是不是想做blanket但是歪了 不是的话这个弧度有点大


[Insane]
00:34:014 (4) - 这个应该跟后面三个滑条做成一组……



结尾音效我推荐:
http://puu.sh/tiBvh/82479d699e.wav
http://puu.sh/tiBtC/29ba3a834d.wav

Starfy wrote:

Hi M4M

[Geeneral]
-Countdown should be disable

[Easy]
-OD1 seems too extreme... OD2 would fit maybe
-Please check AIMod, it shows some problem of distance snap
-00:02:206 (2) - For me, ctrl+g it can make the flow becomes smoother, but ya you need to regulate the distance if you apply this point now is better imo
-00:16:664 (3) - Why not move to x:138,y:318 to fit both two blanket :v dont want to do
-00:48:471 (3) - Isn't the slider tail of the slider is off-screen? ok in 4:3= ok
-01:06:543 (5,6) - Just opinion, seems the density of notes is too high in this part even it has intense amplitude. Maybe convert this two notes to slider in order to lower the difficulty for newbies to play?

[Normal]
-This difficulty desevers AR5 ;w;...
-00:12:327 (1,2) - Hmmm Blanket
-00:40:520 (6) - Maybe lower the red anchor the form a smoother shape to make a better transition between the previous and next slider
-00:45:760 (1,2,3) - Just opinion, the flow of this pattern seems a bit awkward xD. At least try to curve 00:46:303 (3) - to make a neater flow (?
-00:58:592 (1) - Move it upper to fit the blanket
-01:17:387 (4) - Problem of distance snap o.O

[Hard]
-00:01:664 (3) - The distance deserves high distance to match more the music.. anyway just personal opinion~
-00:22:267 (1) - Blanket
-00:28:592 (2,3) - Blanket
-00:32:929 (2) - Not reallu sure that this is off-screen or not, but a kindly reminder
-01:20:098 (1) - A bit off-screen, the red anchor



[Insane]
-Maybe rename it to Another or something? xD
-00:15:218 (1,2) - Blanket :P
-00:54:254 (1) - Hmm I suggest using a slider + note pattern here.. Since there is a spacestream before the slider. And the reverse slider looks just stop the flow that you are keeping suddenly. i tried at the beginning, but bad, so i use slider only



Good luck Rizia~ Top三個Diff都好好玩 xD

Doormat wrote:

m4m from your queue, sorry it's a bit late lol

[General]
  1. 01:27:146 - really strong sound here, using regular finish is kind of boring. why not try switching to normal sample and finish?
[Easy]
  1. NC usage seems a bit random before the kiai, actually. why not try every two bars or something
  2. 00:23:170 - there's more emphasis here than on 00:23:532 (2) - tbh (louder sound), i think you should place a 1/1 slider here like 00:26:062 (3) -
  3. 00:52:809 (1,2) - blankets could be better if you care about that sort of thing
  4. 01:13:230 (1,1) - a little worried about recovery time between spinner and note. why not try a rhythm like this instead of a spinner?
    SPOILER
    yes, RC guideline technically says 3-4 beats, but everyone uses 4 beats as the standard, so idk if you'll be able to get away with this. if it was 3.5 beats, you could most likely get away with it, but 3 beats might be pushing it
  5. 01:22:086 (1) - i think the long spinner here is kind of dumbing down the ending too much. still a lot of strong beats you can use i think the last part rhythm are too complex so they are not fit low diff
[Normal]
  1. again, NC usage before kiai could be a bit more consistent, seems a bit random right now
  2. 00:42:688 (3,4) - blankets if you care
  3. 00:49:194 (4) - i think moving this to red tick at 00:49:014 - for vocal emphasis would be better here, since it's louder sound and you literally do this everywhere else in the kiai i like snap on 1/1
  4. 01:00:038 (1) - nc here breaks your consistency in comboing
  5. 01:21:544 (1) - similar to Easy, spinner ending is dumbing down too much imo; would rather see this part mapped out
[Hard]
  1. something something NC before kiai something something consistent usage something something
  2. 00:04:736 (4) - strongest beat here on a repeat lol why, would rather see more emphasis here by making it clickable
  3. 01:04:014 (4,5) - i'm not hearing any notes on 01:04:104 - might be better to stick to using a 1/2 slider instead of two 1/4s copy rhythm from insane, also overmap not so bad here
  4. 01:27:146 (3) - could use more spacing to give it more emphasis, it's literally the the loudest note in the song. you could try moving it to bottom left sector of the map

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:875 (3,4) - similar comment to what i pointed out in Karen's Insane, i think you should Ctrl + G this to better represent drums
  2. 00:58:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - spaced stream here seems a bit too extreme coming from 00:57:688 (1,2,3) - . maybe try some kick sliders to help with movement acceleration? its my original idea for the song, not too want to change it
  3. 01:04:104 (5) - i don't really hear a sound here, sounds a bit overmapped to me. maybe try 1/2 slider like Karen did here? ^
  4. 01:13:592 (3,4,5,6) - kind of expected 3->4 to have more spacing than 5->6 since the 4 is the loudest note here
  5. 01:22:628 (5,6) - why kick sliders here and then circles here 01:24:074 (2,3) - and then back to kick sliders here 01:25:339 (1,2,3) - ? some consistency would be nice cuz i feel 01:23:893 (1,2,3) - not strong than other

i'd say to call me back, but i failed so tough luck ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Atrue wrote:

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitnormal2.wav
省事就没查meta,见谅。
00:12:327 - 整个set都有的音效问题,从这里开始的一段,音效不太够,打着软绵绵的。参见00:21:001 类似这种的地方,鼓声找不到了。
[Easy]
01:11:965 - 这里的节奏应该是这个样子的, 不然你跟的vocal也抢拍了。[Normal]
老生常谈的diff spread,没有很严重但是其实也不是很好的分布。
这个diff有些stacking 挺难打的。
00:37:989 (4,1,2) - 比如这里其实觉得这个堆叠挺出人意料的,前边差不多的vocal就用slider,这里就stack了。鼓吧
01:09:074 - 这还不如cover上,又有特色鼓点又有vocal,直接用1/2 slider可能更合适。 况且是白线。
[Hard]
00:17:206 (3) - 这挺容易读错成1/4折返的, 不太好处理。 建议简化节奏。其實我挺喜歡這個1/6的 以後有問題在考慮改吧
00:21:001 (1) - 尤其是类似于这种地方,音效没有下,明明有重音但是踩不上去。 这个不是soft whistle 能解决的问题。
01:06:544 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这个在这种ar下还挺难打的。虽然也比较合曲。 一个很主要的问题在于跟01:05:821 (1,2) - 这里一混,ar低的情况下搞不清楚flow的走向是可能的。挑戰性挺好的(
01:15:941 - 缺音效,可以考虑给finish+clap。

[Insane]
HP7 OD8有点高了。至少HP没有必要这么高。
00:48:291 - 按说我觉得这里也应该放短滑条的。填滿1/4的話有點太FULL了
00:53:532 - 少了个NC。
00:53:712 (6) - 跳的有点过了,后边接这种串子的话前边的跳太大会后边不好控制。 test過不少次我覺得還可以的
00:58:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这在这种难度里面有点吓人。改的话也不麻烦,就用正常串就好了,但是跟原来的意图就不一样了吧。原本就是想這樣的
01:04:375 (1) - 这个flow有点突兀啊,考虑顺顺flow,把前边的串子叠上来么,或者换个方向?总之这样的话是有点难打。 ^
01:22:628 (5,6) - 应该能用一样的slider style。
no comment = fixed
thx for mod!
Chaoslitz

Speechless wrote:

[size=150][Chaoz's AKIBA]

這種類型的歌vocal 的優先順序都比較高嗎我不太瞭解,00:12:688 - 00:14:134 - 不過這種鼓點都不要了感覺有點傷心 不想全部節奏都是1/2 =.=

00:47:387 (5,6,1,2) - 這地方打起來感覺有點卡手,不過我好像也不會打這種串 沒問題啊

01:27:146 (1) - 結尾來個這種牛逼音效啊這麼簡單的一個finish說明不了問題 http://puu.sh/tgS2f/360e1a14fd.wav @柚子

imoutosan wrote:

[Chaoz's AKIBA]
00:26:604 (1) - 这个nc其实没什么必要 ok
01:09:254 (4,5,1) - 感觉这个间距可以更小一点 還好吧, 因為是cs3
01:13:592 - 这个重音放掉了怪可惜的 感觉是不是可以调整一下节奏 考慮到01:13:773 (4) - 比較強所以就不兩個都clickable了

结尾音效我推荐:
http://puu.sh/tiBvh/82479d699e.wav
http://puu.sh/tiBtC/29ba3a834d.wav

Starfy wrote:

[Chaoz]
-00:02:206 (1) - Maybe move it a bit closer, the intensity of this part doesn't deserve that large distance 00:00:399 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is asymmetrical pattern, i think the jump is still necessary, I tried to move 00:00:761 (1) for consistency in both same sound
-00:30:580 (4) - idk but ctrl+g it makes the flow becomes funnier 00:30:399 (3,4) - distance will become too small
-00:32:929 (3) - This slider may curve more to emphasize the shape and the flow. Maybe move the middle anchor upper to accentuate the shape i will just remove the middle anchor lol orz
-00:47:658 (6,1) - This is really hard to read even though the map is AR9 but I don't have any solution to solve it lol I found no problem is reading this 01:11:965 (2,3) -
-00:59:315 (1) - It looks not good...There is a spacestream before the slider and it gives a really intense and rigid flow. But the slider suddenly slow down, it breaks the flow that those spacestream constructed previously and it gives an awkward transition...So I suggest keeping the original sv otherwise it would look a bitttt strange ok
-01:11:965 (2,3) - Blanket :< I mean the slider tail of 01:12:327 (3) - fixed

Doormat wrote:

[Chaoz]
  1. 00:01:845 (5,6,7,1) - if you're going to space it out like this i think using same distance from 5->6 and 7->1 would look aesthetically nicer as explained in previous mod it is a symmetrical pattern and I think the jump 00:02:116 (7,1) is necessary to emphasize the sound
  2. 00:17:206 (3,4,5) - wrong snap; this is pretty obviously 1/6. why not replace (3,4) with a 1/6 repeat slider ye
  3. 00:47:387 (5,6,1) - idk if it's just me, but this back-and-forth spaced stream might feel really awkward to play. just wanted to make a note of it You have to know that hitting 00:47:387 (5,6) and 00:47:658 (6,1) is not only about its reverse flow, the latter one needs a large movement into the next stream cause they are two notes, while 00:47:387 (5,6) is normally spaced 3/4 pattern like what i have done in the entire map
  4. 00:53:441 (4,5) - i think this should have slightly different spacing like 00:53:802 (8,1) - since vocal emphasis ok
  5. 01:18:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - why is this part easier than 01:12:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - when it's the same musically? for me it soudns calmer since it is near to the end lol

Atrue wrote:

[Chaoz's AKIBA]
有些地方flow应该还能改改
00:02:026 (6,7,1) - 前不着村后不着店,这两个note的位置很尴尬,个人觉得应该可以放在1上面,这样就和3,4,5的flow有类比了。上面解釋過了
"00:00:399 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is asymmetrical pattern, i think the jump is still necessary, I tried to move 00:00:761 (1) for consistency in both same sound"
00:12:146 (8) - 放的稍微远一点会更好打。 现在叠起来反而卡手。ok
00:26:604 (1) - 这里我的处理应该是ctrl+G,因为拖完上边的滑条会直接来拖这一个,这样如果头朝下的话跳会完全逆flow。
00:25:520 (1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要spam NC,反而觉得乱。ok
00:47:387 (5,6,1,2) - 这flow太卡手了,考虑一个其他方法不那么来回跳。像是特意去打6然后折回来锐角减速进stream这种,很容易miss 6。上面也解釋過了 "You have to know that hitting 00:47:387 (5,6) and 00:47:658 (6,1) is not only about its reverse flow, the latter one needs a large movement into the next stream cause they are two notes, while 00:47:387 (5,6) is normally spaced 3/4 pattern like what i have done in the entire map"
01:09:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不如换成短滑条强调vocal。这种下法有点含混了。仅作建议:這就當是同時突顯vocal+bgm吧,只有這兒用滑條感覺不consistense
Thanks for mod

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