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Powerless - Frey's Philosophy

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年7月22日 at 20:55:26

Artist: Powerless
Title: Frey's Philosophy
Source: Lanota
Tags: sahuang pentori kalibe kanau hakurei yoru flask boss song rhythm game
BPM: 200
Filesize: 4412kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.71 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Extra (5.55 stars, 591 notes)
  3. Flask's Insane (5.03 stars, 534 notes)
  4. Kalibe's Advanced (2.71 stars, 308 notes)
  5. Kanau's Hard (3.4 stars, 370 notes)
  6. MASTER (6.18 stars, 667 notes)
  7. Pentori's Normal (2.33 stars, 223 notes)
  8. Yoru's Insane (4.54 stars, 467 notes)
Download: Powerless - Frey's Philosophy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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笨喵

Check out Lanota, a fantastic music game: http://lanota.wikia.com/wiki/Lanota

Also check out this song at http://lanota.wikia.com/wiki/Frey%27s_Philosophy

Frey's Philosophy is the only Boss Song in version 1.0, so it's also the first Boss Song in this game.
Frey
喵喵喵?
[ Drop ]
Luel Roseline
What the...Frey's Philosophy?
[ Drop ]
rip ..
-Atri-
Naxess
Checked through hitsounding, gave some suggestions.
log
2017-03-25 13:52 Naxess: Not going to hitsound the sounds on 00:12:787 - ?
2017-03-25 13:53 My Angel Azusa: idk how to hs these red tick notes, soft whistles might be too dense?
2017-03-25 13:53 My Angel Azusa: the hitnormal kinda have a sound that suits bgm so i didnt hs them
2017-03-25 13:54 Naxess: Well the hitnormal are on the other sounds too so there's nothing that makes them different
2017-03-25 13:54 My Angel Azusa: yeah/
2017-03-25 13:54 Naxess: I mean they land on downbeats and stuff as well, so feedback wise I'm sure they'd be good to have
2017-03-25 13:54 My Angel Azusa: but 00:12:787 - isnt downbeat imo,00:12:937 - 00:12:637 - are
2017-03-25 13:55 Naxess: In musical terms, a downbeat is the beat that starts a measure
2017-03-25 13:55 Naxess: aka large white ticks
2017-03-25 13:55 Naxess: 00:12:037 - 00:13:237 - 00:14:437 -
2017-03-25 13:55 Naxess: The latter one there is a drum-kick
2017-03-25 13:55 My Angel Azusa: yeah
2017-03-25 13:55 My Angel Azusa: oh wait wtf
2017-03-25 13:56 My Angel Azusa: i missed a few
2017-03-25 13:56 Naxess: btw don't hitsound all downbeats
2017-03-25 13:56 Naxess: Only the ones that are actually supported by the song obviously xD
2017-03-25 13:57 My Angel Azusa: true
2017-03-25 13:57 Naxess: so 00:16:837 - 00:14:437 - , but not 00:15:637 - , if you're going to add drum-kick hitsounds, that is
2017-03-25 13:58 My Angel Azusa: ah drum-kick?
2017-03-25 13:58 My Angel Azusa: not clap
2017-03-25 13:58 My Angel Azusa: ??
2017-03-25 13:58 Naxess: Yeah was thinking a custom hitsound would work well
2017-03-25 13:58 Naxess: Try changing your drum-hitnormal to a sound that matches the drums on those beats, and then change their samplesets to drum
2017-03-25 13:59 My Angel Azusa: ohyeah
2017-03-25 13:59 My Angel Azusa: that could work
2017-03-25 13:59 Naxess: Adding claps on them would be a bit counter-intuitive because you have claps for other sounds
2017-03-25 14:00 My Angel Azusa: yeah drum is cool
2017-03-25 14:00 Naxess: btw 00:31:687 -
2017-03-25 14:01 Naxess: you added normal samplesets
2017-03-25 14:01 Naxess: But the sampleset is already normal xD
2017-03-25 14:01 My Angel Azusa: oh yes
2017-03-25 14:01 Naxess: So in the end these make no difference atm, could change them to the same thing as the other drum-kicks
2017-03-25 14:01 My Angel Azusa: yeah, it was sc1 at this section later i changed to normal
2017-03-25 14:02 My Angel Azusa: drum could work here as well
2017-03-25 14:02 Naxess: btw add drums and that on 00:34:987 - and 00:22:237 - etc, not just a few of them
2017-03-25 14:03 Naxess: Because we're basically reflecting one sound with a specific hitsound so might as well cover all of them like that
2017-03-25 14:03 Naxess: I'm saying because you placed normal-samplesets on only a few sounds lol
2017-03-25 14:04 My Angel Azusa: yeah
2017-03-25 14:04 My Angel Azusa: i see
2017-03-25 14:05 Naxess: 00:50:737 - could add claps on these probably
2017-03-25 14:06 Naxess: 00:54:637 - According to what you did previously, this would be a finish?
2017-03-25 14:06 My Angel Azusa: yeah i just changed
2017-03-25 14:07 Naxess: 01:00:637 - drum-kicks seem to continue here
2017-03-25 14:07 Naxess: Could place on where you don't have claps already
2017-03-25 14:07 Naxess: so 01:01:237 - 01:01:837 - etc
2017-03-25 14:08 My Angel Azusa: yes
2017-03-25 14:08 Naxess: And then after kiai there's more drums and stuff, so be sure to check through for those lol
2017-03-25 14:09 My Angel Azusa: yes
2017-03-25 14:09 My Angel Azusa: missed a lot
2017-03-25 14:11 Naxess: 01:38:137 - Could add normal sampleset on this and then remove the whistle, same for 01:38:737 -
2017-03-25 14:11 Naxess: the claps are a bit odd because they've not been heard in the soft sampleset before
2017-03-25 14:12 My Angel Azusa: good idea
2017-03-25 14:13 Naxess: 01:39:562 - 01:39:637 - considering that these sounds are pretty much identical, could put soft-whistle on the first as well
2017-03-25 14:14 My Angel Azusa: i just did it tbh lool
2017-03-25 14:16 Naxess: Hmm something is odd about 02:04:237 -
2017-03-25 14:16 My Angel Azusa: different instruments
2017-03-25 14:16 Naxess: I see
2017-03-25 14:17 Naxess: Oh that's right, there's a drum as well
2017-03-25 14:17 My Angel Azusa: xd
2017-03-25 14:18 Naxess: So basically add some hitsounds for the drum-kicks
2017-03-25 14:18 Naxess: You can apply the drum sampleset now and then try messing around with some custom hitsound later, for example
2017-03-25 14:18 Naxess: The default drum-hitnormal is a bit faint lol
2017-03-25 14:19 Naxess: There's also tons of drum-kick hitsounds to find so should be pretty easy to find a fitting one
2017-03-25 14:19 My Angel Azusa: yeah
2017-03-25 14:19 Naxess: But yeah other than that, should be fine
Dilectus
m4m

add your gders to tags

MASTER
00:07:687 (2,1,2,3) - aaaa square is off a bit
00:10:087 (3,4,5,6,1) - star is off ;-;
00:16:837 (1) - could use a bit of emphasize for how loud this piano beat is. perhaps put it at x335 y306 for a nice correlation with 00:16:987 (2,3,4) - ?

00:46:087 (2,3,4) - perhaps arrange these like this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057076 looks better visually and its easier to read cause its simular to what youve done previously
01:08:437 (3,4,5) - i feel like this is too weak for a finish. how about something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057094 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057103 ?

Extra
00:09:562 (5,1) - perhaps space these out for emphasize on the finish? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057125
00:28:537 (3,1,2) - ctrl+g for emphasize on the piano? even though the 2nd piano beat is on the 1/6 (smh)
01:08:437 (3,4,1) - same as master
01:11:137 (4) - ctrl+g for flow
01:33:637 (3,4,5,6) - form a diamond shape?

Flask's Insane
00:33:037 (1) - you lowered spacing on the only hard beat here. perhaps stack it on 00:32:587 (2) - ?
01:35:137 (3,4,5,6) - square can be improved
01:45:487 (2) - id rather snap this to red tick cause people at this lvl will most likely missread and get a 100. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057186 is maybe an alternative?

Yoru's Insane
00:21:337 (3) - this is kinda close to 00:20:887 (4) - , move it up slightly?
00:37:387 (2,3,4,1) - diamond pattern is off
01:16:237 (4,5,1) - triangle?
01:58:237 - all sliders feels unsnapped and awkward. they play like 1/3 when the song plays like 1/4. probably wasn't intentional though?

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lower diffs are clean ;_;

nice mapset. good luck!
Kaine
Normal
01:38:437 (4) - I think rotating this slider a couple degrees anticlockwise works better
01:42:637 (3) - Move the red node so that the slider's "edge" is on the red tick? the sound changes a bit on the red node, and moving it there would accentuate that a bit imo

Advanced
01:27:037 (1) - piano changes pitch the most on the blue tick here, might want to change the shape of the slider to emphasize that - personally i would just make it a curve since you make a lot of high intensity sounds curves in the kiai as well

Hard
00:59:437 (1) - might want to change how this slider looks to show that it's a 1/3 slider
01:37:837 (1,2) - same here

Yoru's Insane
00:37:237 (1,2,3,4,1) - diamond is off here, and 00:32:437 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - here as well

Flask's Insane
A lot of the squares in this diff aren't perfect, might be intentional but they look much better when they're geometrical
00:55:687 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - instead of just stacking the circles, why not do something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057574 it shows the increasing intensity a bit better
01:07:237 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - kinda going on that concept, decreasing the distance between each slider and circle would show the decreasing intensity

EXTRA
great diff

MASTER
00:16:837 (1) - this note needs more emphasis
00:27:637 (1) - why is this slider angled? before this slider, all "sharp" sliders were on special sounds, which made me think this was a special sound too but nope. make it a smooth slider like 00:18:037 (1) -
00:30:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - replace these with sliders to serve as an introduction to the 1/3 sound? the way this pattern comes up is very sudden
01:32:286 (2,4) - ctrl-g?
01:35:737 (1,2,3) - i think increasing the slider velocity on each slider here would be cool


there's basically nothing of value in this mod, sorry - godlike mapset
Regou
[Master]
00:02:437 (1,2) - 前面這四組就這麼放好像有點單調啊,考慮到調一直在變高 要不要試著每一組的間距都分別放大一點啊
00:07:837 (3,4) - 這組節奏試著換成1/1滑條+圈圈?
00:30:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這..........................這人玩的這曲子200bpm啊啊啊啊
00:31:237 - 說實話我不是很滿意這段(到kiai之前)的節奏,既然這是最高難度我覺得節奏可以填的更滿更豐富,可是這裡大部分比較突出的鋼琴1/3音都被省略了(因為只跟了鼓),相對來說好像單調了一點點 要不要試著把鋼琴音補上去?
00:59:437 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這個可以試著把每一個note都ctrl+G? 感覺這樣打起來比就這麼疊著爽啊
01:31:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個相對前面速度很快的滑條來說間距有點小了打起來可能不太順
01:34:237 (1,1,1) - 這個是故意的嗎?感覺每條滑條之間間距一樣會更好看
01:45:337 (2,1) - 這兩個感覺應該換一換,因為兩個鋼琴音是分別落在01:45:337 - 跟01:45:637 - 上 感覺這兩個位置有能點的東西會比較合曲

[Extra]
00:59:437 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 跟Master一樣,200bpm的圖放這種梗 是人???;w;
01:19:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 換成1/3跟鋼琴吧?
好圖

[F醬]
00:13:387 (6) - 如果要跟後面的話NC應該是要下在這裡而不是00:13:687 (1) - 上吧
00:20:587 (2,3,4) - 這是故意的嗎...在打的時候應該不好讀啊 乾脆三個疊在一起吧
01:25:537 - 在這邊突然出現幾個幾個default的clap好像怪怪的...感覺換回custom的clap好一點
01:34:237 (1,2) - (nazi) 疊的太少略醜
01:40:837 (2,3) - sampleset換成soft? 這裡音樂又沒鼓聲, normal sampleset好像不太搭

[Yoru]
00:09:037 (5,6,1) - 在稍低的難度裡頭要玩家能接住由圈圈組成的1/3+1/4節奏其實很難啊,我覺得直接把00:09:037 (5,6) -組成一個折返滑條會比較好
00:27:487 (1) - 這裡沒有任何突出的音卻下了加速感覺比較奇怪,真要跟前面的話其實應該直接在00:26:737 (1) - 放1.2x sv
00:33:637 (3) - NC?
00:38:437 (1) - ^
後面好像還有幾個類似的就不一個一個挑出來了
00:50:437 - 01:00:037 這段NC感覺也是感覺有點問題, 你要是每兩個重音(e.g. 00:50:437 - 00:50:887 -)或者每四個重音放一個NC感覺還比較規整,現在我看上去好像並沒有跟到什麼規律...感覺有點亂了
01:06:637 (5) - 多放一個折返? 打起來比較直觀
01:39:037 (3,1,1) - 這個我覺得你可以跟著鋼琴音把尾巴拉到藍線上啊
02:06:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 這幾個好像什麼都沒對到啊orz 建議刪掉
Arusamour
MASTER (6.1 stars, 668 notes)

  1. when you dramatically open up a map -> 00:02:437 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2), but then you ruin it -> 00:07:237 (1,2,3,4). you're not giving respect to the set up. you can do the symmetry scenario or the other not symmetry scenario.
  2. 00:12:037 (1) - prefer that you use a 1/2 slider here instead as it would follow out the flow much better and share commons grounds with the same type of pattern on 00:21:637 (1)
  3. 00:13:687 (2) - a 2 red anchored slider is not fitting. it has no reason to stay unique among the other sliders in this section mostly because you haven't used advantage of it so then it just becomes something to look at and not play around.
  4. 00:15:637 (1) - replace with example 1 and see how you feel because to me, just the slider feels too much like a filler note.
  5. 00:20:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - there needs to be a stronger seperation from 00:20:437 (1,1) and 00:20:737 (3,4,5). hint: start with replacing 00:20:887 (4) with a 1/4 slider.
  6. 00:24:787 (6,7,8) - why a triple? delete 00:24:862 (7), replace 00:24:937 (8) with 1/4 slider.
  7. 00:59:437 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - if you want to be nutty, you can nc spam.
  8. 01:00:787 (4) - ctrl + g
  9. 01:04:087 (4) - ctrl + g
  10. 01:29:737 (1) - stacking it or greatening the spacing would much better emphasize it
  11. 01:30:637 (1) - you haven't done anything special with repeating 01:30:187 (2). 01:31:087 (2) is just a filler slider. you need to look to change shape in all 3 sliders -> 01:30:187 (2,1,2) or redo 01:30:637 (1).
  12. 01:34:237 (1,1,1) - this pattern will never fit the map. when have you used very visual slider patterns that cover up most of the playfield and is done in this same respect?

    circle size should be changed to -> 4.5 (from 4.3) or higher (capped 5) because there certain instances where in the map, patterns are cluttered then poorly represent that visual.
    example: 00:07:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - | 00:15:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - | 00:22:387 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - | 00:30:037 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -

    this difficulty needs a good bit of polishing and i think that certain patterns need remodeling and some concepts to be remapped.

Flask's Insane (4.83 stars, 507 notes)

  1. 00:18:937 (3,4,1) - this is actually unreadable (you can't sightread this) due to stack leniency.
  2. 00:20:587 (2,3,4) - mistakable as a double instead of a triple because 00:20:737 (4) is hiding too well.
  3. 00:34:837 (1) - stack undearneath 00:34:237 (4)'s end. area might be little bit too cluttered but folllowing 00:37:237 (1) - | 00:42:037 (1) - | 00:44:437 (1) - | 00:46:837 (1) - much more important.
  4. 00:45:037 (3) - maybe 2 circles instead of slider to emphasize the kick with the same respect as you did on the same parts within the section.
_MiaoFUuU_
水摸一下

Extra

  1. 00:18:037 (1) - 这个钝角的弧度可以包好一点
  2. 00:21:637 (1,1,1,1) - 感觉这4个有点缩了,可以放开来做
  3. 00:28:837 (1,2,3,4) - 00:29:437 (5,6,7,8) - 可以分开两段来做,因为感觉1234不适合跳的节奏啊
  4. 00:50:437 - 这段的爆发点都在开头,00:50:437 - 00:50:887 - 但是短滑条用在了结尾 00:50:737 - ,个人认为不适合,而且打起来莫名的滞后感,感觉就像00:50:737 (4) - 爆发过度去这个00:50:887 (1) - 一样...短滑条用在爆发点比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8132489
  5. 01:33:637 (3,4,5,6) - 这4个要不要组成个菱形
  6. 01:39:562 (2,3) - 这里不直,后面那个也是
  7. 01:42:937 (1) - 这里可以不NC

MASTER

  1. 00:11:137 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个猫嘴flow有点卡手
  2. 00:20:587 (1) - 如果这里跟着钢琴NC的话,前面大白线建议不要NC 00:20:437 (1) -
  3. 01:24:037 (4) - 这个NC吧
  4. 01:38:137 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这里不美观
  5. 01:42:937 (1) - 一样不NC

Flask's Insane

  1. 00:12:037 (1,3) - 这里可以弄得美观一些
  2. 00:15:187 (4) - 这里节奏变了,可以像这里00:15:787 - 一样NC一下
  3. 00:20:587 (2,3,4) - 打的时候没看出是3连
  4. 01:19:237 (1,2,1,2) - 这里的排列和节奏的逻辑性不对啊,怎么一个竖的一个横的
  5. 01:38:737 (4,1) - 包好
  6. 01:39:537 (1,1,1) - 放25%这3个都是1/4的蓝线上的

Yoru's Insane

  1. 00:54:037 (1) - 这个重音怎么跟去了尾巴了?
  2. 01:11:137 (5,2) - 这两个不要碰着
  3. 01:29:137 (1,2) - 这两个距离应该大点,01:29:287 (2) - 可以把尾巴叠去01:29:737 (1) -
  4. 01:39:562 - 01:40:162 - 要不填上,不然感觉对不上节奏
  5. 01:44:437 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 把这段的whistle去掉吧,就跟finish就可以了
  6. 02:07:237 (1,2,3) - 不直
早飞~
wajinshu
[Easy]
00:05:737 (2,1) - Stack is misaligned XD
[Normal]
00:16:837 (1) - Nazi but little overlap with the hp bar. Would prefer if were moved down
00:24:487 (2) - Maybe stack end slider with 00:23:137 (4) - ?
01:38:437 (4) - Rotate this slider a -15 degrees its must be better
[Kalibe]
00:08:887 (5,6) - nice blanket)0
00:45:187 (6,1) - saame
01:08:437 (1,2) - I think ctrl+g would be better
01:35:737 (4,1) - Maybe you could avoid that overlap?
01:45:787 (6) - Overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled). Would prefer if were moved up and left slightly to avoid this
[Kanau]
00:48:487 (2,3,4) - Prefer to change 1/4 kick slider with reverse It will be much easier to play and more convenient
00:59:437 (1) - Maybe try to change the shape of the slider? Players can get confused, because up to this moment there was a 1/4 rhytm, and now the rhythm is 1/3 ...
01:37:837 (1,2) - Talking about in 2
[Yoru]
00:09:037 (5,6) - It seems inconvenient to catch the rhythm 1/4 after the game with a rhythm 1/3. The rhythm is very difficult, it seems to me better to remove 00:09:237 (6) - and make revers to this
00:26:737 - Must be 1,20х because a very similar sounds 00: 27: 487 -
00: 33: 637 (3) - nc?
00:38:437 (3) - ^
01:39:037 (3,1,1) - Nice stack and put 01:39:562 - here something here sound too
[flask]
00:18:187 (1) - Delete this nc? for consistency and put here 00:18:037 (6) -
00:20:587 (2,3,4) - Why not stack it man also 00:20:812 (5) - why do you ignore this sound?
00:32:887 (4,1) - oh, isn't this spacing too close? seems like the sound from 4 to 1 very strong
01:12:637 (2) - Nc?
01:40:737 (1,2,3) - I don't know where you heard the rhythm 1/3 but here 1/4 lol
01:45:437 (2) - Same ^
[Extra]
01:19:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/3 piano
01:35:137 (4) - silence slider end
02:04:762 (1) - Delete this nc
Nice Master diff. That's all. Good luck!
Topic Starter
sahuang
Sorry for misclick zzz
Kalibe
add something to tags aa

[easy]

- 00:02:437 (1,2,1,2) - im not really sure about mapping these 1/2 when normal didn't even mapped those, i'd remove it just for safe, there are only 1/2 in diff so ):
- 01:11:437 (4) - 00:19:237 (1) - add whistle on end, it's still a piano sound.
- maybe use more stack leniency for easier diffs? 7 would be preferrended tho

[pentori]

- same about stack leniency as in easy
- 00:19:687 (2) - 00:18:487 (5) - 00:24:487 (2) - 00:28:087 (4) - 01:11:887 (4) - add whistle on head
- oh and more hitsounds on last section 01:53:437 - feels empty here ;w;
- 01:45:637 (6) - why not making this a 1/1 to get 01:45:937 - piano sound mapped?

[kanau]

- many whistle missing for noticeable sounds like 00:13:687 (2,3) - 00:14:887 (2) - 00:16:087 (3) - 00:18:487 (2,3) - 00:19:687 (2) - and etc. please do something with those :c
- 00:20:587 (2,3) - don't you think this spacing is too much... spaced? it plays kinda awkward now, try mayb to decrease it and soften the flow?
- 01:27:787 - why not mapping this beat, it's pretty loud kick sound and u mapped it earlier on 01:25:987 (3) - 01:24:337 (1) - so why here u avoid it ?
- 01:46:087 (1,2,3) - maybe fine, but for safety i would decrease ds for these a bit like use 1.0x instead ?

[yoru]

- 00:19:087 (5,1) - make these parallel, would looks better i think ! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141721
- same with 00:26:437 (1,1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141734
- 00:39:637 (1,4) - maybe add also whistle for those objects, they have the same whistle sound as 00:37:237 (1,1) - though..
- 01:24:187 (2) - weird rhythm choice, would have more sense if you make 01:24:187 (2) - a 1/2 and add clap on end to fit with main beat tho
- 01:29:737 (1,1,1) - do these overlaps consistent each other -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141963 (much better visually)
- use more od ? like 7,3 fits better than 7 though..

[flask]

- 00:08:737 (3) - just a suggestion, but if you add nc on, it would be pretty nice visually xd
- 00:20:587 (2,3,4) - this looks messy and imo it looks more like a double rather than triple, pls make it better to interpret as a triplet or just stack it lol
- 00:21:637 (1,1,1) - silence ends plssss
- 00:39:637 (1,1) - same as in yoru diff
- 01:11:137 (4,1) - vs 01:12:337 (1,2) - :thinking: choose which nc structure u want to use, don't do both zzz
- 01:11:137 (4,1) - silence ends too 01:24:637 (1) - same
- cool one

[extra]

- 00:39:637 (1,1) - same as in flask and yoru
- 01:46:312 (1) - i can say, the end of this spinner have audiable sound, so i'm not sure having 5% a good idea, more like 40% ~ 50% is better option to me
- hard to find something, pretty clean one

that's all from me w

http://puu.sh/vWSNa/4de579be46.rar fixed mods above xd
DeletedUser_423548

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:18:037 (3,4) - I think sound picking like image is good
  2. 00:27:637 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:50:437 - I think the volume is small
    About 70%
  4. 01:13:837 (3,4) - This is strange if you are picking up the sound of a piano
    The sound of the piano is like this
  5. 01:16:237 (3) - ^
  6. 01:39:037 (1,1) - overlap

  • [Pentori's Normal]
  1. 00:15:487 - I think that you can pick up the sound of the piano here
  2. 00:23:137 (4,2) - I think this can be stack
  3. 00:32:437 (4,5) - For beginners this arrangement gets confused
    Ctrl+J is better
  4. 00:47:437 (6) - ^
    I think that Ctrl+J will make the next flow better
  5. 01:14:137 (5) - 01:14:437 - I think that it is better to match it to the sound of this piano
  6. 01:21:337 (4) - ^
  7. 01:33:637 (5) - Ctrl+J is better
    The flow also gets better

  • [Kalibe's Advanced]
  1. 00:17:437 (2,3) - Blanket looks bad
  2. 00:37:987 (6,1) - bad flow
    00:37:987 (6) - How about a -40 ° 00:37:837 (5,6) - blanket?
  3. 00:54:637 (5,6,5,6) - Why is the sound different?
  4. 01:08:437 (1,2) - Ctrl+G is better
  5. 01:11:437 (4,5) - Patternally 1/1 slider
  6. 01:18:637 (5) - You should add NC here
  7. 01:28:237 (5) - ^
  8. 01:35:737 (4,1) - overlap

  • [Kanau's Hard]
  1. 00:29:286 (3,5) - それぞれにNCをつけてもいい気がします
  2. 00:30:637 (2) - 1/4だと思います
  3. 01:02:437 (2) - こっちにNCだと思います
  4. 01:06:037 (2) - ^

  • [Yoru's Insane]
  1. 00:07:987 (1) - remove NC
    Changes in songs are from here00:07:837 (3) -
  2. 00:12:637 (3,3) - stack miss?
  3. 00:38:437 (3) - Add NC
    00:36:037 (1) - just like here
  4. 00:43:237 (3) - ^
  5. 01:33:787 (4,5,1) - this is blanket?
    I think that it is better to match the distance
  6. 02:06:037 (3) - Since songs are changing, add NC

  • [Flask's Insane]
  1. 00:14:287 (3,6,1) - stack miss?
  2. 00:18:037 (6) - Add NC
    The song is changing here
  3. 00:20:587 (2,3,4) - stack?
  4. 00:26:737 (1) - remove NC
    I think that it is NC that does not make much sense
  5. 00:27:637 (4) - Add NC
  6. 01:15:037 (1,2) - blanket miss?
  7. 01:17:287 (2) - I am leaning a bit to the right
  8. 01:22:237 (3) - Add NC
    According to the finish
  9. 01:40:837 (2,3) - It is 1/4
  10. 02:06:037 (4,5,6,7) - Since the sound is getting bigger, let's add NC and increase the distance
  11. 02:07:837 (1) - Prev 0.16
    02:07:612 (1,1,1) - Next Prev 0.18 or 0.19

  • [Extra]
  1. 00:29:287 (4,7) - Add finish
  2. 00:35:437 (1,2) - Ctrl+G stack is better
  3. 00:37:837 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:46:087 (2,3,4) - I think that it is better not to stack
  5. 02:05:737 (2) - Ctrl+G is better

  • [MASTER]
  1. 00:11:737 (5,6,7,8) - Feeling like a picture like a image
  2. 00:11:737 (5) - Add NC
  3. 00:29:737 (7,8) - Ctrl+G is better
  4. 00:46:087 (2,3) - It is better not to overlap the slider
    Your mapping was
  5. 01:14:587 (2,3) - If I do Ctrl+G
Good luck
Pentori

Kaine wrote:

Normal
01:38:437 (4) - I think rotating this slider a couple degrees anticlockwise works better i think the visual flow into 01:39:037 (1) - is nice atm
01:42:637 (3) - Move the red node so that the slider's "edge" is on the red tick? the sound changes a bit on the red node, and moving it there would accentuate that a bit imo sure

wajinshu wrote:

[Normal]
00:16:837 (1) - Nazi but little overlap with the hp bar. Would prefer if were moved down yes done
00:24:487 (2) - Maybe stack end slider with 00:23:137 (4) - ? ye
01:38:437 (4) - Rotate this slider a -15 degrees its must be better think its fine rn

Kalibe wrote:

[pentori]

- same about stack leniency as in easy done, tho i didnt stack anything :d
- 00:19:687 (2) - 00:18:487 (5) - 00:24:487 (2) - 00:28:087 (4) - 01:11:887 (4) - add whistle on head ya
- oh and more hitsounds on last section 01:53:437 - feels empty here ;w; tbh i just recopied hitsounds cos they all seem fucced
- 01:45:637 (6) - why not making this a 1/1 to get 01:45:937 - piano sound mapped? mainly mapped drums throughout entire map

Yasaija 714 wrote:

  • [Pentori's Normal]
  1. 00:15:487 - I think that you can pick up the sound of the piano here rhythms arent supposed to follow piano, i dont want to mix too many tracks
  2. 00:23:137 (4,2) - I think this can be stack done
  3. 00:32:437 (4,5) - For beginners this arrangement gets confused nice
    Ctrl+J is better
  4. 00:47:437 (6) - ^ but this doesnt flow well with 00:46:987 (5) . since theres a gap between 00:47:437 (6,1) - its fine
    I think that Ctrl+J will make the next flow better
  5. 01:14:137 (5) - 01:14:437 - I think that it is better to match it to the sound of this piano dont rly want to skip that drum
  6. 01:21:337 (4) - ^ ~
  7. 01:33:637 (5) - Ctrl+J is better think it flows fine from the slider tail, though not visual but its a downbeat so
    The flow also gets better
thanks every1!
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Silky
Topic Starter
sahuang

DavidEd wrote:

m4m

add your gders to tags
guess i will finish tags altogether after everything
MASTER
00:07:687 (2,1,2,3) - aaaa square is off a bit too lazy to change zzz
00:10:087 (3,4,5,6,1) - star is off ;-; i dont think so...did it by auto polygon
00:16:837 (1) - could use a bit of emphasize for how loud this piano beat is. perhaps put it at x335 y306 for a nice correlation with 00:16:987 (2,3,4) - ? nice

00:46:087 (2,3,4) - perhaps arrange these like this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057076 looks better visually and its easier to read cause its simular to what youve done previously ok
01:08:437 (3,4,5) - i feel like this is too weak for a finish. how about something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057094 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057103 ? maybe thats a good idea

Extra
00:09:562 (5,1) - perhaps space these out for emphasize on the finish? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057125 k
00:28:537 (3,1,2) - ctrl+g for emphasize on the piano? even though the 2nd piano beat is on the 1/6 (smh)
g 00:28:537 (3) -
01:08:437 (3,4,1) - same as master this is fine as its not highest diff but increased ds
01:11:137 (4) - ctrl+g for flow ok
01:33:637 (3,4,5,6) - form a diamond shape? not necessary

lower diffs are clean ;_;

nice mapset. good luck!
Thanks

Kaine wrote:

MASTER
00:27:637 (1) - why is this slider angled? before this slider, all "sharp" sliders were on special sounds, which made me think this was a special sound too but nope. make it a smooth slider like 00:18:037 (1) - this should be fine imo
00:30:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - replace these with sliders to serve as an introduction to the 1/3 sound? the way this pattern comes up is very sudden i will think about this
there's basically nothing of value in this mod, sorry - godlike mapset
deleted is fixed

Regou wrote:

[Master]
00:07:837 (3,4) - 這組節奏試著換成1/1滑條+圈圈? 感觉这样也行吧
00:31:237 - 說實話我不是很滿意這段(到kiai之前)的節奏,既然這是最高難度我覺得節奏可以填的更滿更豐富,可是這裡大部分比較突出的鋼琴1/3音都被省略了(因為只跟了鼓),相對來說好像單調了一點點 要不要試著把鋼琴音補上去?这段感觉好难做难。。其实我也不知道怎么做啊。。
01:34:237 (1,1,1) - 這個是故意的嗎?感覺每條滑條之間間距一樣會更好看 速度变慢了间距就弄小了。

好圖
谢啦

Arusamour wrote:

MASTER (6.1 stars, 668 notes)

  1. when you dramatically open up a map -> 00:02:437 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2), but then you ruin it -> 00:07:237 (1,2,3,4). you're not giving respect to the set up. you can do the symmetry scenario or the other not symmetry scenario.
    no idea what do you mean, the start is fine imo,im just stacking 00:04:987 (2,1) -
  2. 00:13:687 (2) - a 2 red anchored slider is not fitting. it has no reason to stay unique among the other sliders in this section mostly because you haven't used advantage of it so then it just becomes something to look at and not play around.feels ok to me
  3. 00:24:787 (6,7,8) - why a triple? delete 00:24:862 (7), replace 00:24:937 (8) with 1/4 slider. there's triple beats here
  4. 01:00:787 (4) - ctrl + g
  5. 01:04:087 (4) - ctrl + g no
  6. 01:30:637 (1) - you haven't done anything special with repeating 01:30:187 (2). 01:31:087 (2) is just a filler slider. you need to look to change shape in all 3 sliders -> 01:30:187 (2,1,2) or redo 01:30:637 (1). nah
  7. 01:34:237 (1,1,1) - this pattern will never fit the map. when have you used very visual slider patterns that cover up most of the playfield and is done in this same respect?
    should be fine
    circle size should be changed to -> 4.5 (from 4.3) or higher (capped 5) because there certain instances where in the map, patterns are cluttered then poorly represent that visual.
    example: 00:07:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - | 00:15:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - | 00:22:387 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - | 00:30:037 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -

    this difficulty needs a good bit of polishing and i think that certain patterns need remodeling and some concepts to be remapped.
lol thx but some ideas i dont really think so
Flask
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