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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 14. August 2017 at 23:40:45

Artist: Chitose Haru & Kumagai Eri
Title: Perfect Free
Source: 音楽少女
Tags: Nwolf 沼倉愛美 numakura manami 瀬戸麻沙美 seto asami ongaku shoujo taishi cosmic record ending electro muster electro.muster GWAVE dnb drum and bass drumstep anime
BPM: 178
Filesize: 9568kb
Play Time: 05:46
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  • Inner Oni (5,25 stars, 1956 notes)
  • Oni (4,02 stars, 1606 notes)

Download: Chitose Haru & Kumagai Eri - Perfect Free
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SV changes | uncommon 1/6 | Streams


RLC's Perfect Free (osu!standard)


attempting SV things. You might not be able to sightread this map.
Last edited by Nwolf on , edited 8 times in total.
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well uh, ye, i guess i'm gonna mod this based on your mention of it in PM?

Modding both diffs btw. No comments on SV; that's not important here

General settings/Miscellaneous

  • Looks OK although I think maybe the HP could be increased slightly? For Oni, at least, I'd probably make it 5 just like the Inner

Oni

  • 00:19:526 (36) - Not exactly sure why there's a note here; it doesn't seem as if the guitar's that emphasised here; yes it does play on the note but it's not as significant. Maybe remove it, considering it's the Oni? For Inner I think it's possibly fine, but here I'm not too sure
  • 00:22:054 - Maybe fill this gap with some notes? I don't think that it needs to be a completely empty beat despite it being the Oni; you could probably add a note at 00:22:279 - in particular
  • 02:02:504 - Can you make this Kiai section a little bit more dense? It seems kind of really simple by comparison to the Inner, especially the bit where there would be 1/6s; I recommend possibly adding 1/4s there and suggest one or two more notes in the section in general (possibly 02:10:172 - ?)
  • 02:34:863 - see above. It just feels a bit weird having not even 1/4 on the Oni but 1/6 on the Inner as before.
  • 03:16:998 (31) - Since there's no 1/6 here what about making this a finisher? Makes it similar to the above 2 suggestions where you had finishers on the non-1/6 bits (since, well, emphasis is quite high)
  • 05:43:290 (26,27,28,29,30) - maybe make this last pattern kkkkd or something similar to have the high-pitch notes be k rather than some of them being d? just a minor thing here

Inner Oni

  • 02:07:223 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - I'd suggest changing this bit slightly so that the 4 kats before the 1/6 can become like, 2 instead, so that the low vocals can be represented, as well as the 1/6 being a bit better-sounding with the music? not sure how to phrase it. probably a pattern like this? kkkk for guitar, dkdd for a sort of transition and then kkkdddk would sound a bit better imo (although maybe you prefer the dkkdddk?)
  • 02:21:717 (77) - How come the notes extend only briefly past here? The synth-sound seems to be carried across the entire gap to 02:22:223 (80) - so imo either remove 02:21:802 (78,79) - or add a couple more notes to signify the extended synth.
  • 02:40:257 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - I'd probably change this pattern slightly so that the wub sound = k thing is on the 1/2 instead of where it is right now; atm it seems kind of off imo. Maybe this instead? If you apply the suggestion, consider making the other dkkdddk patterns be similar to this one (or the one you chose), else I'm not gonna suggest the others.
  • 04:20:706 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - perhaps consider matching the notes up to the guitar with more kats rather than dons? Consider something like this (changed the bit beforehand for better flow)

Yeah sorry I couldn't find more, this is all I got. the map looks nice. but please make sure you nerf Oni's SV sometime as you said you would.
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Oni

00:25:762 (68,69,70) - Not a big fan of this d triplet, I'd change it as k d like this Image

01:44:386 - Maybe add a note here for emphasizing purposes ?

03:16:998 (31) - No finisher here ?

04:25:088 (51,52,53) - This triplet feels a bit off, consider moving this note 04:25:172 (52) - to 04:25:004 -

05:15:397 - A note there would greatly emphasize this part, if you look at it as a whole.

05:32:251 - Kind of the same idea as above, add a note here 05:32:251 - ?


Inner Oni

00:54:751 (149,150,151) - The end of the stream don't really fit to the music, I'd at least put the last note as a don to reflect the battery behind.

02:07:897 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - Pretty sure a ddddddk 1/6 would fit better the music and be easier to play since there are tons of SV changes.

04:16:661 (114,115,116,117,118) - Feels kind of overdone here, I'd just keep the first and last note of this quintuplet.

04:31:408 (119) - Move this to 04:31:240 - and change it to a k ? Would flow and suit better to the music imo

04:38:908 - Feels empty tbh, I think you could put some triplets and 1/1 here, there is still the guitar and stuff to map on.

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Oni
01:49:526 (65,66) - change to kk
:arrow: fit the background high pitch sound effect

02:21:212 - change to k
:arrow: feels better? idk XD

02:44:302 - why not start the slider here?
:arrow: feels strange to start at 1/2 beat

03:02:672 - change to k
:arrow: ddkdk seems fit the vocal more

04:04:105 - add d
:arrow: fits the music better

04:22:644 - change to k
:arrow: maybe a little complex but it'd fit the guitar sound

05:03:178 - add spinner here?
:arrow: 2.25 bars of empty seems a bit boring

05:10:594 (9,10,11) - why finisher here?
:arrow: I suggest to put normal notes here to emphasize finisher on 05:11:268 -

will continue tmr..


Inner Oni
00:51:717 - change to d
:arrow: seems k hitsound doesn't suit the music here,d sounds better to me
*it's fine to keep 00:53:066 - as k cuz of variation

01:49:526 - change to kkd?
:arrow: just feel funnier

02:08:066 - change to k
:arrow: high pitch sound effect at this point

02:22:223 (80,84) - both change to d?
:arrow: I think it's better to follow the vocal pitches here

04:12:111 - change to k in case you applied 02:08:066 - this

05:21:296 - change to d
:arrow: highlight vocal on 05:21:380 -

05:32:251 - add a note here
:arrow: since this is the most intense point imo,I think adding a note to emphasize the music is a good idea

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well uh, ye, i guess i'm gonna mod this based on your mention of it in PM?

Modding both diffs btw. No comments on SV; that's not important here

General settings/Miscellaneous

  • Looks OK although I think maybe the HP could be increased slightly? For Oni, at least, I'd probably make it 5 just like the Inner hm ya

Oni

  • 00:19:526 (36) - Not exactly sure why there's a note here; it doesn't seem as if the guitar's that emphasised here; yes it does play on the note but it's not as significant. Maybe remove it, considering it's the Oni? For Inner I think it's possibly fine, but here I'm not too sure more interesting this way I believe, also fits in an Oni
  • 00:22:054 - Maybe fill this gap with some notes? I don't think that it needs to be a completely empty beat despite it being the Oni; you could probably add a note at 00:22:279 - in particular Tried that exactly for this reason but I felt like it played very uncomfortably for an Oni
  • 02:02:504 - Can you make this Kiai section a little bit more dense? It seems kind of really simple by comparison to the Inner, especially the bit where there would be 1/6s; I recommend possibly adding 1/4s there and suggest one or two more notes in the section in general (possibly 02:10:172 - ?) Did this during self-modding; especially now that SV is gone it has more notes. More than Inner Oni in some patterns, but with the lacking SV changes it should be fine.
  • 02:34:863 - see above. It just feels a bit weird having not even 1/4 on the Oni but 1/6 on the Inner as before. Added a few 1/4 notes
  • 03:16:998 (31) - Since there's no 1/6 here what about making this a finisher? Makes it similar to the above 2 suggestions where you had finishers on the non-1/6 bits (since, well, emphasis is quite high) ya
  • 05:43:290 (26,27,28,29,30) - maybe make this last pattern kkkkd or something similar to have the high-pitch notes be k rather than some of them being d? just a minor thing here good idea

Inner Oni

  • 02:07:223 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - I'd suggest changing this bit slightly so that the 4 kats before the 1/6 can become like, 2 instead, so that the low vocals can be represented, as well as the 1/6 being a bit better-sounding with the music? not sure how to phrase it. probably a pattern like this? kkkk for guitar, dkdd for a sort of transition and then kkkdddk would sound a bit better imo (although maybe you prefer the dkkdddk?) I do prefer the dkkdddk, there is no kkkdddk 1/6 in this map on purpose to break the meta a little bit.
  • 02:21:717 (77) - How come the notes extend only briefly past here? The synth-sound seems to be carried across the entire gap to 02:22:223 (80) - so imo either remove 02:21:802 (78,79) - or add a couple more notes to signify the extended synth. last synth note played is the last note mapped, after that it's just held. Also makes a gap to the vocal notes.
  • 02:40:257 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - I'd probably change this pattern slightly so that the wub sound = k thing is on the 1/2 instead of where it is right now; atm it seems kind of off imo. Maybe this instead? If you apply the suggestion, consider making the other dkkdddk patterns be similar to this one (or the one you chose), else I'm not gonna suggest the others. nop, explained before.
  • 04:20:706 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - perhaps consider matching the notes up to the guitar with more kats rather than dons? Consider something like this (changed the bit beforehand for better flow) I see no problem with mapping guitar as kat and don? The guitar kinda goes wild.

Yeah sorry I couldn't find more, this is all I got. the map looks nice. but please make sure you nerf Oni's SV sometime as you said you would.


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Oni

00:25:762 (68,69,70) - Not a big fan of this d triplet, I'd change it as k d like this Image ye

01:44:386 - Maybe add a note here for emphasizing purposes ? not sure if 5-plet fits here

03:16:998 (31) - No finisher here ? Dain mod .w.

04:25:088 (51,52,53) - This triplet feels a bit off, consider moving this note 04:25:172 (52) - to 04:25:004 - restructured here a little bit

05:15:397 - A note there would greatly emphasize this part, if you look at it as a whole. ye

05:32:251 - Kind of the same idea as above, add a note here 05:32:251 - ? added in self-mod


Inner Oni

00:54:751 (149,150,151) - The end of the stream don't really fit to the music, I'd at least put the last note as a don to reflect the battery behind. ya

02:07:897 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - Pretty sure a ddddddk 1/6 would fit better the music and be easier to play since there are tons of SV changes. Supposed to be kind of a theme throughout the map that the 1/6 aren't your common oooooox or oooxxxo

04:16:661 (114,115,116,117,118) - Feels kind of overdone here, I'd just keep the first and last note of this quintuplet. removed a few notes around here.

04:31:408 (119) - Move this to 04:31:240 - and change it to a k ? Would flow and suit better to the music imo Prefer current flow with the upcoming dk dk doublets

04:38:908 - Feels empty tbh, I think you could put some triplets and 1/1 here, there is still the guitar and stuff to map on. kat triplets.
With SV.


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Oni
01:49:526 (65,66) - change to kk
:arrow: fit the background high pitch sound effect restructured this bit instead

02:21:212 - change to k
:arrow: feels better? idk XD sure

02:44:302 - why not start the slider here?
:arrow: feels strange to start at 1/2 beat starting on the 1/3 synth/drum thing

03:02:672 - change to k
:arrow: ddkdk seems fit the vocal more simplicity

04:04:105 - add d
:arrow: fits the music better ya

04:22:644 - change to k
:arrow: maybe a little complex but it'd fit the guitar sound this whole part is kinda difficult and complex due to being a solo and also Inner Oni being quite hard here. It should still be acceptable.

05:03:178 - add spinner here?
:arrow: 2.25 bars of empty seems a bit boring maybe

05:10:594 (9,10,11) - why finisher here?
:arrow: I suggest to put normal notes here to emphasize finisher on 05:11:268 - perfect free.


Inner Oni
00:51:717 - change to d
:arrow: seems k hitsound doesn't suit the music here,d sounds better to me
*it's fine to keep 00:53:066 - as k cuz of variation mhm

01:49:526 - change to kkd?
:arrow: just feel funnier restructured in self-mod

02:08:066 - change to k
:arrow: high pitch sound effect at this point same deal as with previous two mods

02:22:223 (80,84) - both change to d?
:arrow: I think it's better to follow the vocal pitches here ya

05:21:296 - change to d
:arrow: highlight vocal on 05:21:380 - nah, boring

05:32:251 - add a note here
:arrow: since this is the most intense point imo,I think adding a note to emphasize the music is a good idea I'm fine without

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thanks for all the mods~

Oni SV completed, Inner Oni SV edited.
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03:20:875 (66) - missing slidertick
03:32:841 - spinner here for the nonsense sound in the background?

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offset +5...? must only be me
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hi o/

I just have a question about 1/6 doublet in 04:23:571 (50,51) - in inner oni, is there any reason that you have to use 1/6 here? In my opinion,the guitar solo part are almost 1/4 patterns,and I think it is not necessary to use 1/6 pattern in order to follow guitar. I would like to know your reason about 1/6 usage .
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is there any reason that you have to use 1/6 here?


qoot8123 wrote:
to use 1/6 pattern in order to follow guitar.


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