1. Firetruck's Easy (0,94 stars, 51 notes)
2. Last dance (2,53 stars, 169 notes)
3. Normal (1,66 stars, 96 notes)

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Goodbye t.o.p QQ

Ataraxia wrote:

Wowwww

Firetruck's Easy

00:57:003 (3) - you could do more polish if you do This fixed on my way lol

01:10:337 (3) - ^

01:27:003 (1) - Control H and stack, this will be a more polish flow and its better play i think its fine because if we do that it will ruin the flow of th next object

Normal

Allls good

Last dance

00:42:003 (4,5) - i think you can do a smoother curve, like this okayy

01:46:170 - i miss a circle here ;-;, you could do a instintive patten, create a circle and stack her in 01:45:337 (4) - xD yes thought soo added also on normal added

omg this map is perfect you could call BN xdd

MashaSG wrote:

M4M back

Sry for delayed and shitty mod lo

Firetruck's Easy
— Turn off widescreen support because you dont have storyboard? fixed
— Maybe lower AR and HP? I checked other maps with this SR, and yep, there were some with AR3 but nobody used HP3. i think they fine and balanced with spread but ill ask more about it ty

00:30:337 (3) - 00:37:004 (3) - I believe Im not first person who tells you to Ctrl+J this sliders for better flow but since its unnecessary you can keep it keeping it

00:53:670 (1,2) - Blanket is really off fixed

Good Diff

Normal
Same with widescreen support

00:30:337 (1,2,3) - Your blankekts here arent symmetrical fixed

00:53:670 (1) - Maybe add standart finish like in Easy? This finish isnt feet the music well as for me true fixed

00:55:337 (3,4) - Check this part and this 00:58:670 (3,4) - For me its pretty similar, you even mapped it by copypasting, but in first part you use drum sampleset on tail of 00:55:337 (3) - and in the second part you didnt, thats strange mistake fixed for all diff

01:08:670 (3,4) - 01:12:004 (3,4) - Again same fixed

Cool Diff

Last Dance

00:34:920 (2,4) - 00:36:795 (8,1) - 00:41:587 (3,4) - 00:42:837 (5,1) - 00:44:920 (3,4) - 00:49:920 (6,1) - 01:01:170 (2,3) - 01:04:504 (2,3) - Some of these blankets is really off, some a little bit, but anyway if you want really ideal map, you should fix them all, though you can use 1/16 and Ctrl+G'ing sliders to see mistakes fixed all i hope

Nearly ideal map!



Thats all I think, map is really great and ready for ranking I think!

Good Luck!

squirrelpascals wrote:

M4M from your queue. It's a good set, so take these as suggestions

Hard

• 01:00:337 (1) - Do the same thing here as you did at 00:41:170 (2,3) - ? i wanted to emphasize them differently

• 01:02:628 (4) - The beat here isnt very strong. Maybe you can remove this note its following the vocals

• 01:05:754 - Make this clickable? i think its fine

• 01:07:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - and etc.- this rhythm goes on for a long time and gets repetitive. I would try to add a triple at 01:07:003 (1,2) - and 01:09:503 (7,8) - but you can also try other ways to try to add more variety in this rhythm added

• 01:23:670 (1) - Maybe you can put this like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7075934 for flow purposes i dont see problem with flow its intended

• 01:29:503 (7) - Maybe you can end this note, and others like this, on the 1/6 note at 01:29:781 - if someone else say smth about i will

• 01:32:629 - put a note here? done

Normal

• 00:33:670 (1) - For aesthetic purposes, make the ends of this slider parallel? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7075973 fixed

• 01:29:087 - Make this clickable? fixed

• 01:36:170 - Put a circle here? fixed

• 01:38:669 (3) - Use this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7076021 fixed

• 01:42:003 (3) - Same thing for this one, but i would more strongly suggest changing this one especially because the note which you started the slider is on a weaker note agreed fixed

Fire truck Easyl

• 01:06:170 (4,1,2) - put 2 where 4 is? since there no overlap and the notes are rly far in time idont see problem so its fine

• 01:46:865 (1) - Start this on 01:47:003 - since its an easy diff i dont think its hard also its consistent with other diff and the vocals stars there

Good luck

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

m4m !!!

Firetruck's Easy
00:43:670 (3) - how about to ctrl+j on this slider, it better flow also make a variety of this slider. imo~
01:07:003 (1) - try adding finish hs since you did it on 00:53:670 (1) -

Normal
01:20:337 (1,1) - imo it feels like playing easy diff, you should add something at the middle of these sliders, pls be consistent cause you did it on 01:33:671 (1,2,1,2) - variation

Last dance
00:54:504 (3) - missing clap fixed
00:54:921 (4) - missing drum sampleset i dont want drum there
01:19:503 (2) - nc here would be nice cause this is the hardest diff. okay did there and other to be consistent

that's all neat mapset. GL!!!!

Del05 wrote:

Hi

M4M

• 
  Choose one :

1. ISHIDA YOKO - Ashita no Tsubasa
2. Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV Size)
   You can mod my map as fair as my mod here. So if my mod not very helpful you can give short mod too. Thank you

Actually this map already good, have nice flow and i think no rhythm issue too xD
I just can mention some minnor thing actually xD but i hope this mod will help this map get better

[Normal]

1. 01:33:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - why you use different rhythm here ??? actually it is exactly same with 01:20:337 (1,2,3,4) - so why it is different now ?? xD better to make it same consistent i think its fine i just wanted to variate a little
2. 01:37:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - same why different with 01:23:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - actually the main prob is what you map it here or ^^. are you still follow the vocal even it is in red line or not. for prev part you dont because you use 1/1 slider as the beginning but at the second part you map it, you use 1/2 as the beginning. Are you map the vocal even in red line or not is my main question for this diff lol xD, because at prev section you dont map it (you use 1/1 slider) but you use circle at red line for the vocal, like in 00:28:254 (2,3) - ayy okay since not first one who say this i remaped that part all same now xd
3. 01:46:865 (1) - same like easy but the vocal of DANCE start there
4. 01:44:503 (2,3) - try to make it become 1/2 slider ?? cause i think 01:44:920 (3) - is not any strong sound or strong vocal here so make it 1/2 slider will better i think its fine
5. 01:31:170 - it is better to make this sound clickable, so my suggestion change 01:30:336 (1) - become 1/2 slider then add delete 01:31:586 (2) - and make 1/2 slider or keep 01:31:586 (2) - and add 1 more circle i think its fine as it is

[Last Dance]

1. 00:30:129 (8,1) - blanket a little off looks fine to me
2. 00:36:795 (8,1) - ^^ --> http://puu.sh/tpssx/ae7dc44eeb.jpg fixed
3. 01:03:254 (6,1) - blanket off fixed
4. 01:04:504 (2,3) - ^^ same
5. 01:19:503 (2) - you can use nc here actually because this rhythm not same like the previous oneyes done
6. 01:46:865 (1) - same like easy same reply
7. 00:54:504 (3) - why use sampleset soft on head ? you must use clap on head yes fixed
8. 00:54:921 (4) - sampleset drum on tail fixed
9. 01:09:087 (6) - missing sampleset drum fixed
10. 01:13:670 (1) - i will like it if you change it become 1/2 slider and 01:14:504 - 1/2 slider again (try it ) done

That's all from me
Sorry if i use rude word or too harsh
Thank you and good luck
~Del's Modding Queue~

• [General]

1. Nothing

• [Firetruck's Easy]

1. 00:30:337 (3,1) - I suggest to overlap them but it's not very important because the slider 1 is far later, but that is a little noticeable.
2. 00:40:337 (1,3) - They're not very similar, I know you raised the slider 1 for the slider 2 but it's the same vocals here 00:40:337 (1,3) - and it should be nice if you make the similar sliders for similar vocals.
3. 00:53:670 (1,2) - Can you curved the slider a little more? Like this slider it should be better 01:02:003 (2) -.
4. 01:23:670 (3) - Can you make the red point very in the middle, here

• [Normal]

1. 00:32:004 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow?
2. 01:19:503 (2) - NC because there is a strong beat.

• [Last Dance]

1. 01:03:254 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket.
2. 01:03:670 (1) - Why this slider is not aligned? Just on the 1/16 but Idk why you put the end here..

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

• [General]

1. Nothing

• [Normal]

1. 00:32:004 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow? i like this flow more tbh
2. 01:19:503 (2) - NC because there is a strong beat. i would like to keep it consistent like that tho if someone else say same ill fix

• [Last Dance]

1. 01:03:254 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket. fixed.. again
2. 01:03:670 (1) - Why this slider is not aligned? Just on the 1/16 but Idk why you put the end here.. its was mistake because w hen i tried fix bllanked i used 1/16 xd

Rip for the short but it's all that I found... (Don't kds if it's not helpful)

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

Firetruck's Easy
00:43:670 (3) - how about to ctrl+j on this slider, it better flow also make a variety of this slider. imo~
01:07:003 (1) - try adding finish hs since you did it on 00:53:670 (1) -

Del05 wrote:

[Firetruck's Easy]

1. 00:53:670 (1,2) - if it is not blanket, please make it blanket it will look better. If it is a blanket, improve it the blanket a little off
2. 01:07:003 (1) - can add finish on slider head
3. 01:20:337 (1) - why you dont use 1/1 slider here ?? at prev section you always use 1/1 if the lyric on white tick, and at this time the lyric also on 01:21:170, so make it become 1/1 slider
4. 01:23:670 (3) - ^^ it will sound better if you 1/1 slider same like ^^
5. 01:33:670 (1) - ^^
6. 01:37:004 (3) - ^^ i wanna emphisize the strong beautiful vocals with a long slider on these parts
7. 01:10:337 (3) - (tail) at prev you always use soft whistle for anything like 01:12:004, for ex 01:02:003 (2) - 00:45:337 (4) - so i think better make it consistent. change sample set drum from the tail and add soft whistle instead
8. 01:46:865 (1) - just suggestion, why dont start at 01:47:003 ? since the vocal actually more loud and more hearable (if you know what i mean, lol i cant explain it sorry xD) at that time 01:47:003 but the vocal starts there

ShogunMoon wrote:

• [Firetruck's Easy]

1. 00:30:337 (3,1) - I suggest to overlap them but it's not very important because the slider 1 is far later, but that is a little noticeable. i'd rather keep it as it is :>
2. 00:40:337 (1,3) - They're not very similar, I know you raised the slider 1 for the slider 2 but it's the same vocals here 00:40:337 (1,3) - and it should be nice if you make the similar sliders for similar vocals.
3. 00:53:670 (1,2) - Can you curved the slider a little more? Like this slider it should be better 01:02:003 (2) -. its fine as it is imo
4. 01:23:670 (3) - Can you make the red point very in the middle, here

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Hobbes2 wrote:

[general]

01:20:337 - no kiai here? i think it would fit i thought about it but they sing and the music too soft :/ ill think about it xd

[Firetruck]

00:30:337 (3) - not a big deal but you could ctrl+j the shape for better flow i think its fine xd

00:35:337 (2) - with grid off ctrl+right and ctrl+down to fix the stack with the previous circle, same with 00:39:504 (4) - fixed i know truck will be lazy to do this xD

00:45:337 (4) - i think you should place this higher to match the curve of the previous slider, something like this maybe - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7093829 agree fixed

01:03:670 (3) - ^ Similar to the above fixed those angels were big xd

Well, this diff is really clean, good job!

[Normal]

00:30:337 (1,2,3) - should make it symmetrical right? so copy paste 1 and 2 then rotate that to get the shape for 3 i dont get it it seem symmetrycaly fine to me

00:52:837 (3,4,1) - might as well make this an equal triangle fixed little

01:03:670 (1) - ctrl+h? cos the flow here 01:03:670 (1,2) - is kinda weird so if you ctrl h the shape it fixes that problem true fixed

01:06:587 - no real sound here so i dont think this should be clickable, maybe just make 01:06:170 - a 1/2 slider so that this sound is on a slidertail instead you right fixed but i just removed that note xd

[Last Dance]

00:32:837 (6) - ctrl+left so the tail is fully overlapped by 1 (this is super particular lol) nicee fixed xD

00:34:920 (2,4) - i guess you want the blanket to be better here yess fixed its hard for me to blanket 1/2 sliders they short lol

00:53:670 (1) - combos here are kinda long, i think you can split them up (so 2 combos per measure instead) i fixed for ther other also to be consistent i hope

01:01:170 (2) - you can improve this shape, make the first and last straight parts parallel fixed

Nice and clean map, not much to find. ready to be pushed forward imo

good luck~

1. Are you sure about metadata? I am fairly sure that the artist name is romanised in both cases. Here's the video proving me right. // Here's a proof (2)
   Note: the Korean name should be in the tags, I suppose.

1. You don't really need Approach Rate 3. At this BPM 2 would do way better as the song is meant to be way slower than an average one.
2. 00:52:003 (6,1) - most of the things are blanketed, so it would be cool to have these two blanketed as well.
3. 01:00:337 (1,2) - how about a reversed 1/1 slider and then a circle on 01:02:837 - to give more emphasis to the vocals and the background beat? a picture
4. 01:23:670 (3,1) - In case you change the Approach Rate to 2 this migh tlook a bit untidy. Just give it a bit of extra thought if you do change the BG.
   
   It's neat, I like it.

1. Approach Rate 4, perhaps. The song feels really slow and so does the mapping. There is no need to use 5, give it a bit of a relaxed feeling.
2. 01:00:754 - 01:02:837 - I'd try to work out something different to give the vocals some extra emphasis they deserve.
3. 01:19:503 (2) - the slider oes not feel very reasonable as it leaves way stronger vocals on 01:20:129 - out. You can try to use two 1/2 circles to simplify rhythm or fit a 3/4 slider
4. 01:28:253 (2,3) - if you Ctrl+G the rhythm here, 01:29:087 - the vocals on this beat would get a clickable object, which seems to work better with your rhythm.
   
   It's okay. Just a few things here and there.

1. 00:53:045 (5,1) - the flow here does not feel very natural due to the angle. How about something sharper? Something that'd resemble your previous patterns? what do you think about this?
2. 01:12:420 (2,3) - 01:15:753 (2,3) - I would use a slight jump here to be consistent with 01:10:754 (2,3) -
   Note: alternatively, you can just do some rearrangements and avoid that slight jump.
3. 01:23:462 (4,1) - the placement suggest a sharp/sudden angle change, which does'nt seem to match with your style here. something more linear, perhaps?
   
   I feel like this is an okay difficulty as well. Could use just a bit more work with spacing to make it more interesting with the song. Otherwise, that was quite good, indeed!