BTS - Boy In Luv · forum

Lilyanna

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-11-04T01:35:43+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, February 2, 2018 at 9:19:41 PM

Artist: BTS
Title: Boy In Luv
Tags: Bighit Entertainment SKOOL LUV AFFAIR 랩몬스터 슈가 진 제이홉 지민 뷔 정국 Rap Monster Suga Jin J-Hope Jimin V Jungkook K-pop Kpop Firetruck Bangtan Boys Sonyeondan Bulletproof Boy Scouts Bakari Euny
BPM: 83
Filesize: 30521kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:

Bakari's Insane (4.18 stars, 643 notes)
Easy (1.37 stars, 177 notes)
Euny's Extra (5.34 stars, 920 notes)
Firetruck's Normal (1.93 stars, 299 notes)
Hard (2.67 stars, 484 notes)
Insane (3.87 stars, 662 notes)

Download: BTS - Boy In Luv
Download: BTS - Boy In Luv (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Firetruck's Normal By Firetruck
Hard by me
Insane by me
Bakari's Insane by Bakari
Euny's Extra by Euny
Hitsounds 100% done by Euny

Last edited by Lilyanna 2018-09-06T18:14:10+00:00, edited 91 times in total.

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-11-04T17:44:58+00:00

for my baekhyun

since when taetae was your bae tho

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-11-04T17:55:52+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
for my baekhyun

since when taetae was your bae tho

for my bae

Firetruck!!!!

MrKosiej

439 posts

Joined September 2015

MrKosiej 2016-11-12T18:19:56+00:00

sup

IRC Mod

18:44 MrKOSIEJ: 00:09:532 (1) - i think you could correct that blanket a bit
18:45 MrKOSIEJ: 00:11:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - that circle is bit messy, try slider stream converting if you cant hand place everything nicely just yet
18:47 MrKOSIEJ: 00:15:135 (10,1) - and 00:15:315 (1,2) - space is the same even tho there is a difference in time
18:48 Lilyanna: take it easy boi owo
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: make the first jump smaller, or make the second one bigger
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: :v
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: just writing
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: i thought i have a minute
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: lol
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: so im like out of time rn
18:48 MrKOSIEJ: XD
18:49 MrKOSIEJ: but its your map, and you should care about the mod, so you should have time to listen to me if you want that mod :v hmm
18:49 MrKOSIEJ: ok, ill wait for your response
18:49 Lilyanna: im listenning
18:49 Lilyanna: no go on
18:49 MrKOSIEJ: alright then
18:50 MrKOSIEJ: 00:19:653 (6) - nc?
18:50 Lilyanna: what u mean there is difference in time?
18:51 MrKOSIEJ: http://puu.sh/sfScH/101dfdf722.jpg
18:51 Lilyanna: i nc every 2 downbeats
18:51 MrKOSIEJ: i know, it gets me triggered a bit lol, i like more ncs xd
18:51 Lilyanna: 00:22:544 (1) - i removed nc here
18:52 MrKOSIEJ: why?
18:52 MrKOSIEJ: why would you do that
18:52 Lilyanna: i did that jump to emphasize the strong beat
18:52 MrKOSIEJ: its a sepparate sequence
18:52 Lilyanna: it should be fine
18:53 MrKOSIEJ: i feel like you sometimes don't look at distance between notes. That its insane, does not exlude keeping consistency in spacing
18:53 Lilyanna: they all spaced 1.30
18:53 MrKOSIEJ: 00:23:086 (3,4,5,1) - then what is that
18:54 Lilyanna: that were drumps
18:54 MrKOSIEJ: 1.5, 1.3; 0.8
18:54 Lilyanna: i wanted to make it more jumpty
18:54 Lilyanna: 00:21:459 (2,3,4) - here i reduced
18:54 Lilyanna: and next i increased
18:55 MrKOSIEJ: if you wanted to make it more jumpy then make it more jumpy, but dont make it less consistent in spacing
18:56 MrKOSIEJ: 00:25:617 (5) - correct blanket
18:57 MrKOSIEJ: 00:29:773 (1,2,3) - make double blanket?
18:58 MrKOSIEJ: 00:38:809 (3) - make it in straight line to 00:38:448 (1,2) -
18:58 MrKOSIEJ: 00:39:532 (3) - same or correct 00:39:352 (2) -
18:59 Lilyanna: ok fixeedd
18:59 MrKOSIEJ: 00:46:761 (1,1) - make it covered in the same ammount as 00:46:400 (7) - covers 00:46:761 (1) -
18:59 MrKOSIEJ: nice
19:01 MrKOSIEJ: 01:03:568 (2) - correct blanket
19:01 MrKOSIEJ: 01:09:532 (1,2,3) - what even is that
19:01 Lilyanna: i dont think the same coverent is needed since they both spaced same
19:01 Lilyanna: it just
19:01 Lilyanna: the
19:01 Lilyanna: sv changed
19:01 Lilyanna: made it look like that
19:01 MrKOSIEJ: and unnevesery overlapses, look weird, plays weird
19:02 MrKOSIEJ: maybe 01:09:171 (3,4) - make slider out of these and keep the same sv later on
19:02 MrKOSIEJ: and ofc fix positions
19:02 Lilyanna: looks fine for me
19:02 Lilyanna: no
19:03 MrKOSIEJ: looks crappy for me. But do as you want xd
19:03 Lilyanna: ok
19:03 MrKOSIEJ: 01:20:918 (4) - i'd use nc cuz sv changes
19:04 MrKOSIEJ: 01:24:351 (6) - correct the straight line
19:05 Lilyanna: u mean ds?
19:06 MrKOSIEJ: sv change, yes i meant ds
19:06 Lilyanna: it looks so straight !
19:07 MrKOSIEJ: i have a good eye for straight lines, i can see a very lil change
19:07 Lilyanna: owo
19:07 MrKOSIEJ: 01:50:014 (3) - it should be 01:49:924 - here
19:08 Lilyanna: i cant fix something i see no wrong
19:08 Lilyanna: anyway nxt
19:08 MrKOSIEJ: 01:50:195 (4) - and this should be on the whit tick
19:08 Lilyanna: i dont want map the blue tick
19:08 Lilyanna: also i want that clap
19:08 Lilyanna: and smal slight voice off is ok
19:08 MrKOSIEJ: the you dont wwant to map as i should be mapped, you make it rhytmicaly wrong
19:09 MrKOSIEJ: but alright, lets go on
19:09 Lilyanna: its fine
19:09 Lilyanna: if more
19:09 Lilyanna: mention ill change
19:10 MrKOSIEJ: k
19:10 MrKOSIEJ: 02:10:255 (4) - nc and 02:10:436 (1) - remove nc?
19:11 Lilyanna: hm
19:11 MrKOSIEJ: 02:30:496 (1,2,3) - another one weird section, it plays so weird xd
19:12 MrKOSIEJ: 02:44:953 (1,2,3) - make it parrallel to 02:44:592 (2,3) -
19:13 MrKOSIEJ: its not, i have a good eye, remeber XD
19:13 MrKOSIEJ: 02:53:809 (4) - correct blanket
19:13 Lilyanna: it playes looks fine
19:13 Lilyanna: owo
19:14 MrKOSIEJ: 03:01:400 (4) - correct blanket
19:15 MrKOSIEJ: ill just ask, 03:12:604 (2) - is this intentionaly not fully covering 03:11:159 (4) - ?
19:16 MrKOSIEJ: 03:25:617 (1,2,3) - another non streaight line, just gonna point those out, change it or not, idc
19:17 MrKOSIEJ: 03:29:592 (2) - correct blanket
19:18 MrKOSIEJ: ok, i think that's all

-Hoshizora

6 posts

Joined February 2016

-Hoshizora 2016-11-12T19:42:34+00:00

Mod for the "I have no idea about Normal Diffs so i will just Mod the "Say wjhat you want" Diff.

I hope i can help you a bit.

SPOILER

00:36:279 (1,2,1,2) - Those are overlapping, 00:35:556 (1,2) - have the same rythm, but they stand alone.
01:20:376 (1,3) - 02:14:773 (4,6) - Is there a reason for those overlaps?
02:36:641 (5,6) - 02:38:087 (4,5) - 03:28:327 (4,5) - 03:29:953 (4,5) - I think the spacing doesnt fit the song that good, compared to the notes before. Music doesnt seem to increasy intensity in my opinion.
03:30:495 (1,2) - This circle seems unnecéssary for me, instead i would start the slider on that point like before 03:29:050 (1) - (for example)

Those are the points i would probably change, otherwise its a nice map in my opinion.

Cheers

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-11-13T11:54:47+00:00

Sherlock again wrote:
Mod for the "I have no idea about Normal Diffs so i will just Mod the "Say wjhat you want" Diff.

I hope i can help you a bit.

SPOILER
00:36:279 (1,2,1,2) - Those are overlapping, they are stacks00:35:556 (1,2) - have the same rythm, but they stand alone. i have no other area ;w;
01:20:376 (1,3) - 02:14:773 (4,6) - Is there a reason for those overlaps? yes its just a way of mapping
02:36:641 (5,6) - 02:38:087 (4,5) - 03:28:327 (4,5) - 03:29:953 (4,5) - I think the spacing doesnt fit the song that good, compared to the notes before. Music doesnt seem to increasy intensity in my opinion. oh ye i agreee fixeddd
03:30:495 (1,2) - This circle seems unnecéssary for me, instead i would start the slider on that point like before 03:29:050 (1) - (for example) ye there was drum beats thats why i did there but ur point make more sense changed

Those are the points i would probably change, otherwise its a nice map in my opinion.

Cheers

thannk u for mod <3

greatnathyboy

51 posts

Joined October 2015

greatnathyboy 2016-11-13T20:31:01+00:00

hey, noob mod incoming

say what you want
00:00:858 (1,2,3) - do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562829
00:01:942 (4,5,6) - looks a little odd. either move 6 down or 4, 5 up
00:03:749 (1,2,3) - same here
00:12:333 (8,1) - is this distance intentional?
00:13:508 (4,5,6) - either https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562869 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562877 would look better imo
00:16:762 (6,7,8) - equilateral triangle maybe
00:19:291 (4,5,6) - 6 is too close to 4, distance them a bit
00:27:424 (2,3,4,5) - i actually really like this part, maybe move the 2 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562911
00:45:677 (5) - not pretty
00:46:400 (7,1) - place the 1 under the 7's endpoint
01:08:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - good jumps
01:15:677 (4,1) - blanket could be improved
01:54:171 (2,3,4) - looks slightly off
02:03:026 (3) - i don't think small sliders like this need to have a curve
02:16:761 (1) - imo spinner doesn't fit the music here
02:54:894 (2,3,4) - fix triangle
03:34:833 (1) - this is a personal opinion but i think 1 would be better here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563030

overall, good map. good luck getting ranked

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-11-13T22:22:13+00:00

greatnathyboy wrote:
hey, noob mod incoming

say what you want
00:00:858 (1,2,3) - do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562829 i dont get idont see what u mean
00:01:942 (4,5,6) - looks a little odd. either move 6 down or 4, 5 up its fine
00:03:749 (1,2,3) - same here okay fixed that
00:12:333 (8,1) - is this distance intentional? it automaticaly changed because the sv so i let it so it emphasize that note i hope it playes fine if someone else mention ill fix
00:13:508 (4,5,6) - either https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562869 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562877 would look better imo all should be fine
00:16:762 (6,7,8) - equilateral triangle maybe fixed
00:19:291 (4,5,6) - 6 is too close to 4, distance them a bit fixed
00:27:424 (2,3,4,5) - i actually really like this part, maybe move the 2 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562911 yess fixedd
00:45:677 (5) - not pretty mean :'(
00:46:400 (7,1) - place the 1 under the 7's endpoint fixed
01:08:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - good jumps o w o
01:15:677 (4,1) - blanket could be improved fixed
01:54:171 (2,3,4) - looks slightly off :o fixed!!!
02:03:026 (3) - i don't think small sliders like this need to have a curve its fine
02:16:761 (1) - imo spinner doesn't fit the music here agree i just out of ideas to map that parts so i let it spinner for now xD ill map it soon
02:54:894 (2,3,4) - fix triangle looks fine
03:34:833 (1) - this is a personal opinion but i think 1 would be better here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563030 its a good idea but the reason didnt want a jump there is there is no strong beat just a quiet voice so i think i keep it like this but i like ur idea :p

overall, good map. good luck getting ranked

thannkk u for mod !!!

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Kirisakiii 2016-11-14T12:10:30+00:00

M4M from your q
Thanks for your mod! This is gonna be hard, but I’ll try ;u;

Firetruck’s Normal

01:33:388 – I suggest adding a note here
01:51:460 (2) – work on curve
02:08:086 (1) - ^
02:34:111 (1) – curve in a bit at the end
02:54:351 (2) – note
03:11:701 (1,2) –Rather than two sliders, try using one. It follows the same rhythm as the long sliders. Add a note at 03:12:785

Hard

00:37:725 (1) – no need a nc here
01:13:147 (6) – nc here? Since there’s one at 01:10:255 (1) following the vocal
02:09:171 (3) – I know it follows 02:08:809 (2), but maybe working on the curve?
02:51:460 (1) – curve
03:14:231 (3) – don’t know about this but—ctrl+g this? Kinda like the idea of a jump here
03:31:580 (2) – curve the end a bit more
03:43:147 (2) – another ctrl+g? like a finale at the end or something lel

Say what you want

01:22:906 (1) – curve the start a bit more
02:16:761 (1) – as for the spinner here, why not following the same rhythm pattern as the one in front?
02:56:701 (3,1,2,3) – make it evenly spaced between these four sliders. It’s prettier that way
03:08:267 (4) – small detail but put this slider at x:352 and y:288
03:14:592 (1) – curve the end a bit more

Really well-made and everything

so sorry if its just this

Good luck on your beatmap!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-11-14T20:34:46+00:00

Kirisakiii wrote:
M4M from your q
Thanks for your mod! This is gonna be hard, but I’ll try ;u;

Hard
00:37:725 (1) – no need a nc here ops fixed
01:13:147 (6) – nc here? Since there’s one at 01:10:255 (1) following the vocal fixed
02:09:171 (3) – I know it follows 02:08:809 (2), but maybe working on the curve? fixed
02:51:460 (1) – curve fixed
03:14:231 (3) – don’t know about this but—ctrl+g this? Kinda like the idea of a jump here i dont see reason for jump
03:31:580 (2) – curve the end a bit more fixed
03:43:147 (2) – another ctrl+g? like a finale at the end or something lel its fine
Say what you want
01:22:906 (1) – curve the start a bit more fix
02:16:761 (1) – as for the spinner here, why not following the same rhythm pattern as the one in front? mapped fixed
02:56:701 (3,1,2,3) – make it evenly spaced between these four sliders. It’s prettier that way fix
03:08:267 (4) – small detail but put this slider at x:352 and y:288 fix
03:14:592 (1) – curve the end a bit more
fix

Really well-made and everything so sorry if its just this
Good luck on your beatmap!

thank u for mod !

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-11-14T20:40:56+00:00

Kirisakiii wrote:
M4M from your q
Thanks for your mod! This is gonna be hard, but I’ll try ;u;

Firetruck’s Normal
01:33:388 – I suggest adding a note here sure
01:51:460 (2) – work on curve ya
02:08:086 (1) - ^ it's like that on purpose
02:34:111 (1) – curve in a bit at the end got it
02:54:351 (2) – note what? why
03:11:701 (1,2) –Rather than two sliders, try using one. It follows the same rhythm as the long sliders. Add a note at 03:12:785 sure

thx for modding!!

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hlanden

104 posts

Joined September 2014

hlanden 2016-11-15T22:26:15+00:00

Hello! Noob mod incoming!

Firetruck's Normal

00:18:207 (1,2) - blanket these?
00:27:966 (3,4) - ^
00:37:002 (1,2) - ^ (Suggesting a blanket on this even if you don't to the ones before because 00:39:894 (1,2) - is a blanket)
01:14:592 (1) - This one is visually inconsistent because almost all of the other sliders are curved or have sharp angles, maybe change it?
01:31:219 (2) - ^
01:30:135 (3,1) - Blanket and move the other ones accordingly?
01:31:219 (2,1) - If you do the one above and also curve the slider might blanket these 2 too?
02:23:267 (2,1) - Looks visually inconsistent because of no overlaps till now.
02:27:604 (2) - Straighten this? (Or curve the one before it.)
02:36:279 (2) - ^
02:52:183 (2) - ^ (Or maybe just keep all of them lol, there was enough repeatence to keep them (saw 2 more after these, even though I would still suggest changing because I saw none of these combos till 02:27:604. Actually, seeing that everything is in the kiai time from 02:27:604 on, maybe the best idea would be to change just that one and keep everything else.)
02:54:351 - Maybe put a note here because this is where the break actually starts?

Hard

00:13:508 (3,4,1) - I don't know if this is intentional, but the triangle looks a bit wierd.
00:16:400 (3,4,1) - ^ (The other ones after these look symmetrically better)
01:14:231 (1) - This slider looks a big ugly D:
01:51:821 (4,5,6) - Only triple in the whole map. Highly suggest changing it to a repeat slider or removing it.
02:07:725 (1) - ^
02:12:785 (2,1) - I'd prefer this to not be overlapped (Untill now only held sliders were overlapped)
02:19:291 (4,1) - ^
03:12:424 (5,6) - Better blanket.

Girl in luv

00:04:472 (3,4,5) - Needs better possitioning.
00:05:918 (7) - Move this one a bit to the left
00:08:990 (7,8) - Blanket can be a bit better.
00:12:424 (1) - This note's snap is wierdly different than the others.
00:13:870 (6) - A bit to the left to make a triangle maybe?
00:16:762 (6) - ^ (If you decide to keep yours, move ^ a bit to the right for more consistency)
00:13:870 (6) - NC
00:16:762 (6) - NC
00:42:062 (3) - Move a bit to the right maybe?
00:42:604 (4) - Move this one a bit down
00:49:111 (4,5) - Spacing too big imo.
00:51:279 (8,1,2,3) - Make this more like a square.
00:52:003 (4,5) - Spacing too big imo.
00:57:966 (4,5,6,7) - 2 sliders would work a lot better here imo
01:05:195 (3,4) - Make it like 1 and 2
01:05:918 (1,2) - Maybe make this a slider?
01:09:532 (1,2,3) - This is literally mapped to nothing.
01:12:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Make this one a bit more symmetrical.
01:19:653 (3) - The curve of these is a bit ugly.
01:19:653 (3,4) - I hear a triple with the slider end(meaning 2 notes after it, instead of just one.
01:21:460 (4,1) - I hear a short stream between these 2 (I know this is mapped for consistency, but the first part is extremely overmapped(Not in the kiai) and this part is overmapped(In the kiai.) Consider changing them to suit them better.
01:42:785 - Break is over here with a note(or a slider)
01:43:147 - and here is a triple.
01:44:592 (7,8,1) - This can be a 5 note stream.
01:43:870 (3) - No sound here, maybe change the other one to a slider? (It's fine like that too though. If you take ^ take this one into consideration too)
01:49:653 (2,3,4) - This is unreadable.
02:09:171 (4,5,6) - Why did you miss places where you heard triples and put it here instead :/
02:09:261 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make this one a bit more symmetrical.
02:18:930 (1,2,3,4) - Still don't like that pattern.
02:29:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ (I mean, why did you even map a stream in the beggining if you decide to intentionally leave out so many spaces for streams after that... Won't even bother listing the other ones where I hear streams or nothing and you put circles)
03:22:183 (1,2,3,1) - ?
03:24:351 (4) - Slider ending on a stronger sound than it begins on.
03:27:243 (1) - ^
03:31:942 (1,2) - Again triple.
03:34:472 (3,1) - ^
03:44:592 (4) - ^

Okay, to sum up, you started the map with a stream which leaves me with the impression that you are going to map a harder difficulty than what this is. On some places you undermap on others you overmap, I couldn't understand why. This feels like a map that was mapped by 2 different people, one making a hard difficulty and undermapping certain places, other one an insane difficulty and overmapping certain places.

TL;DR - Hard and Normal are excellent but last diff has a lot of mistakes imo.

Don't take this mod too seriously since I'm a begginer and I might be the wrong one here.
Wish you the best in future!

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-11-15T23:51:24+00:00

M4M Slot
(will works on it once I'm home)

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-16T07:31:21+00:00

from my queue p/5613500/

Normal

00:48:568 map this. The beat is noticeable and should be mapped before coming to a halt

00:51:460 ^

00:54:351 ^

02:54:351 Start the break here, or map this. Having to start the break earlier on a white tick feels weird

Hard

01:49:291 (1) - blue tick beat here might be better

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-11-16T08:06:21+00:00

hlanden wrote:
Hello! Noob mod incoming!

Firetruck's Normal
00:18:207 (1,2) - blanket these?
00:27:966 (3,4) - ^
00:37:002 (1,2) - ^ (Suggesting a blanket on this even if you don't to the ones before because 00:39:894 (1,2) - is a blanket) i wanna keep my pattern here, blankets arent very important anyways
01:14:592 (1) - This one is visually inconsistent because almost all of the other sliders are curved or have sharp angles, maybe change it?
01:31:219 (2) - ^ they're fine. i have lots of straight sliders
01:30:135 (3,1) - Blanket and move the other ones accordingly? same as before
01:31:219 (2,1) - If you do the one above and also curve the slider might blanket these 2 too? same as before
02:23:267 (2,1) - Looks visually inconsistent because of no overlaps till now. no that's totally fine
02:27:604 (2) - Straighten this? (Or curve the one before it.) it already is wut
02:36:279 (2) - ^ that's just gonna feel awkward to play
02:52:183 (2) - ^ (Or maybe just keep all of them lol, there was enough repeatence to keep them (saw 2 more after these, even though I would still suggest changing because I saw none of these combos till 02:27:604. Actually, seeing that everything is in the kiai time from 02:27:604 on, maybe the best idea would be to change just that one and keep everything else.)
02:54:351 - Maybe put a note here because this is where the break actually starts? sure

Normal

00:48:568 map this. The beat is noticeable and should be mapped before coming to a halt added note

00:51:460 ^ ^

00:54:351 ^ ^

02:54:351 Start the break here, or map this. Having to start the break earlier on a white tick feels weird added note

also bae you messed up a bit with title, you put ''방탄소년단'' as title but that's the artist xD just swap '방탄소년단' and '상남자' xd

thanks for modding

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:방탄소년단
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ArtistUnicode:상남자
Creator:Lilyanna
Version:Firetruck's Normal
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364,68,76761,1,8,1:0:0:0:
267,14,77123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,67,77484,6,0,P|96:48|25:66,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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73,204,78568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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435,233,82906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,35,85436,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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241,51,90135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-11-16T11:48:24+00:00

hlanden wrote:
Hello! Noob mod incoming!

Hard
00:13:508 (3,4,1) - I don't know if this is intentional, but the triangle looks a bit wierd. fixedd
00:16:400 (3,4,1) - ^ (The other ones after these look symmetrically better) fixed
01:14:231 (1) - This slider looks a big ugly D: tried to fix it
01:51:821 (4,5,6) - Only triple in the whole map. Highly suggest changing it to a repeat slider or removing it. i dont think this a problem if the song asked for triple there
02:07:725 (1) - ^ i think its fine
02:12:785 (2,1) - I'd prefer this to not be overlapped (Untill now only held sliders were overlapped) i cant stop the editor is because sv cha,ged
02:19:291 (4,1) - ^
03:12:424 (5,6) - Better blanket. nothing meant to be blanket there
Girl in luv
00:04:472 (3,4,5) - Needs better possitioning. looks fine to me
00:05:918 (7) - Move this one a bit to the left looks fine
00:08:990 (7,8) - Blanket can be a bit better. its looks perfect for me
00:12:424 (1) - This note's snap is wierdly different than the others. fixed since u not first one to say this
00:13:870 (6) - A bit to the left to make a triangle maybe? okay
00:16:762 (6) - ^ (If you decide to keep yours, move ^ a bit to the right for more consistency) ok
00:13:870 (6) - NC
00:16:762 (6) - NC i nc every 2 downbeats i dont want break the consistency
00:42:062 (3) - Move a bit to the right maybe? why
00:42:604 (4) - Move this one a bit down
00:49:111 (4,5) - Spacing too big imo. fixed reduced
00:51:279 (8,1,2,3) - Make this more like a square. i fixed stuff it doesnt have to look like square
00:52:003 (4,5) - Spacing too big imo. fixed
00:57:966 (4,5,6,7) - 2 sliders would work a lot better here imo
01:05:195 (3,4) - Make it like 1 and 2
01:05:918 (1,2) - Maybe make this a slider? no
01:09:532 (1,2,3) - This is literally mapped to nothing. Vocals ?!!!!
01:12:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Make this one a bit more symmetrical. remapped
01:19:653 (3) - The curve of these is a bit ugly. looks fine
01:19:653 (3,4) - I hear a triple with the slider end(meaning 2 notes after it, instead of just one. okay
01:21:460 (4,1) - I hear a short stream between these 2 (I know this is mapped for consistency, but the first part is extremely overmapped(Not in the kiai) and this part is overmapped(In the kiai.) Consider changing them to suit them better.
01:42:785 - Break is over here with a note(or a slider) not needed
01:43:147 - and here is a triple. i cant just add triple and ruin the emphasize of the other strong drum i mapped it based on that drum not that background triple sound
01:44:592 (7,8,1) - This can be a 5 note stream. same reply
01:43:870 (3) - No sound here, maybe change the other one to a slider? (It's fine like that too though. If you take ^ take this one into consideration too) i donnt want sound mean but i feel like ur mod is remapping for me and u dont get the idea behind this
01:49:653 (2,3,4) - This is unreadable. i think its fine
02:09:171 (4,5,6) - Why did you miss places where you heard triples and put it here instead :/ because i did triples only to the vocals
02:09:261 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make this one a bit more symmetrical.
02:18:930 (1,2,3,4) - Still don't like that pattern.
02:29:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ (I mean, why did you even map a stream in the beggining if you decide to intentionally leave out so many spaces for streams after that... Won't even bother listing the other ones where I hear streams or nothing and you put circles)
03:22:183 (1,2,3,1) - ?
03:24:351 (4) - Slider ending on a stronger sound than it begins on.
03:27:243 (1) - ^
03:31:942 (1,2) - Again triple.
03:34:472 (3,1) - ^
03:44:592 (4) - ^

Okay, to sum up, you started the map with a stream which leaves me with the impression that you are going to map a harder difficulty than what this is. On some places you undermap on others you overmap, I couldn't understand why. This feels like a map that was mapped by 2 different people, one making a hard difficulty and undermapping certain places, other one an insane difficulty and overmapping certain places.
TL;DR - Hard and Normal are excellent but last diff has a lot of mistakes imo.

Don't take this mod too seriously since I'm a begginer and I might be the wrong one here.
Wish you the best in future!

thank u for mod

Underdogs wrote:
from my queue p/5613500/

Hard
01:49:291 (1) - blue tick beat here might be better i think it should be fine iif anyone mention again ill fix it

thx for mod

Firetruck wrote:
also bae you messed up a bit with title, you put ''방탄소년단'' as title but that's the artist xD just swap '방탄소년단' and '상남자' xd idk korean o_o i hope ure righttt xD

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-11-17T01:53:27+00:00

M4M Return from t/470343/start=120

Normal

00:10:255 (2) - since it flowto opposite side of slider curve, there will be softer if you make an angle instead since it also oppositing flow from (1)
00:33:749 (3,4) - this gap a bit catchy actually, that slider miss reading is not avoidable, try to make (3) as 1/2 slider instead so the gap on that part will more consistant
00:41:339 (1,2,1) - nazi flow, move the circle more to right indeed
00:45:677 (1) - not only mess too see, it also mess on emphasisng the rhytm, try as possible to make the angle right at mayor rhytm (white tick)
00:47:123 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it will be boring if you use that kind of repeating imo, try more variant such like https://gyazo.com/d0225b79ecfe54b9df9b9baa3dd92e0e
00:58:327 (2,1) - move this about 2 grid to right
01:01:580 (1,1) - ugh overlap
01:18:207 (2) - 1 ~ 2 grid to left
01:23:990 (2,1) - this flow is a bit awkward, you can actually not make (1,2) overlapping each other to get better flow here. yeah its ok
01:29:773 (2) - move 1 grid to right so it will be simmilar like 01:28:327 (2) -
01:31:942 (1) - you miss a beat there, a " ~ " shape slider maybe?
02:07:364 (3,1) - blanket?
02:38:448 (1) - slider like 01:21:821 (1) - instead imo
02:44:954 (2,1) - same as before
03:13:147 (1) - you can make it better
03:37:725 (1,2) - personally i stand against this flow, but up to you since looks like theres no space left there lol

[heading]Hard

00:04:653 (4) - unstack?
00:09:532 (1) - well the vocal a bit vibrate there, add an angle or curve may works
00:15:135 (4,1,3,4) - that overlap is on purpose?
00:43:508 (4) - ohh lily why
01:49:291 (1) - you can actually play with vocal here, which mean you can decrease the lenght bt 1/4 and add a circle stacked at 01:50:014 -
02:03:749 (1) - make it a 1/1 instead imo, why? to give same rhytm applied with previous one so that "brm brm" absorb well by that reverse 1/2 slider
03:30:496 (1,2) - nice one
well theres some blanket issues, but not really important tho since this hard. nice diff

Insane

00:24:713 (3,4,5,6) - such of creative patterning
00:54:713 - *use little girl voice* "um sir, you may forget something here"
00:57:966 (4) - NC for reading pls
01:21:821 (1,2) - my deadspot xD
01:49:291 (1,2,3) - if you trying to emphasisng vocal theres a miss here 01:49:833 -
02:11:520 (2) - not in a line
02:19:653 (1,1) - add an angle imo
02:57:604 (2) - ctrl+g?
the other issues is NC that mostly unconsistant, yup not mention it since I think you can figure it out by yourseslf

hope this enough
goodluck

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-11-17T04:47:17+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
M4M Return from t/470343/start=120

Normal
00:10:255 (2) - since it flowto opposite side of slider curve, there will be softer if you make an angle instead since it also oppositing flow from (1) sorry i don't understand what you mean ;w;
00:33:749 (3,4) - this gap a bit catchy actually, that slider miss reading is not avoidable, try to make (3) as 1/2 slider instead so the gap on that part will more consistant yup
00:41:339 (1,2,1) - nazi flow, move the circle more to right indeed yup
00:45:677 (1) - not only mess too see, it also mess on emphasisng the rhytm, try as possible to make the angle right at mayor rhytm (white tick) tried my best
00:47:123 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it will be boring if you use that kind of repeating imo, try more variant such like https://gyazo.com/d0225b79ecfe54b9df9b9baa3dd92e0e it is boring but it's fine also too lazy to make new pattern h e l p
00:58:327 (2,1) - move this about 2 grid to right yup
01:01:580 (1,1) - ugh overlap woops fixed
01:18:207 (2) - 1 ~ 2 grid to left yup
01:23:990 (2,1) - this flow is a bit awkward, you can actually not make (1,2) overlapping each other to get better flow here. yeah its ok did something to fix flow
01:29:773 (2) - move 1 grid to right so it will be simmilar like 01:28:327 (2) - yup
01:31:942 (1) - you miss a beat there, a " ~ " shape slider maybe? sure
02:07:364 (3,1) - blanket? aaaaaa
02:38:448 (1) - slider like 01:21:821 (1) - instead imo sure
02:44:954 (2,1) - same as before yup
03:13:147 (1) - you can make it better yup
03:37:725 (1,2) - personally i stand against this flow, but up to you since looks like theres no space left there lol i think it's fine lol

thanks for modding!

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Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-11-17T18:23:09+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
M4M Return from t/470343/start=120

[heading]Hard
00:04:653 (4) - unstack? why its ok like that
00:09:532 (1) - well the vocal a bit vibrate there, add an angle or curve may works i expressed it in another way from wavy slider to a straight one
00:15:135 (4,1,3,4) - that overlap is on purpose? no fixed
00:43:508 (4) - ohh lily why idk xD is it that bad lol
01:49:291 (1) - you can actually play with vocal here, which mean you can decrease the lenght bt 1/4 and add a circle stacked at 01:50:014 - not really needed
02:03:749 (1) - make it a 1/1 instead imo, why? to give same rhytm applied with previous one so that "brm brm" absorb well by that reverse 1/2 slider because there is strong drum at second one i didnt want ignore it owo
03:30:496 (1,2) - nice one
well theres some blanket issues, but not really important tho since this hard. nice diff thx

Insane
00:24:713 (3,4,5,6) - such of creative patterning
00:54:713 - *use little girl voice* "um sir, you may forget something here" xDD i may just map it the truth is i was out of jumping ideas so i left it like that lool ur modding is funn owo
00:57:966 (4) - NC for reading pls done
01:21:821 (1,2) - my deadspot xD why it look big spacing but its all aprox 1.5 even
01:49:291 (1,2,3) - if you trying to emphasisng vocal theres a miss here 01:49:833 - its same as the revers slider in hard the vocal on blue not even red and it should be fine ultil more people say
02:11:520 (2) - not in a line fixed
02:19:653 (1,1) - add an angle imo not needed
02:57:604 (2) - ctrl+g? yes, sir!
the other issues is NC that mostly unconsistant, yup not mention it since I think you can figure it out by yourseslf

hope this enough
goodluck

thank u for the mod !!!

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2016-11-19T15:27:43+00:00

SPOILER

23:43 Lilyanna: hey
23:44 bbj0920: hey
23:45 Lilyanna: would u please mod my map just on difficulty ? >w<
23:45 Lilyanna: one*
23:45 bbj0920: ok
23:47 *Lilyanna screams*
23:47 *Lilyanna is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1123277 BTS - Boy In Luv]
23:47 Lilyanna: last diff >o<
23:49 bbj0920: 00:11:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
23:49 bbj0920: why not just circular stream
23:49 bbj0920: this triggers to a new level
23:49 Lilyanna: what is cicular stream
23:51 bbj0920: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6605961
23:51 bbj0920: looks cleaner
23:53 Lilyanna: okay ye ill convert slider
23:53 Lilyanna: is this irc mod?
23:53 bbj0920: i think
23:54 Lilyanna: b-b-but
23:54 Lilyanna: wait a min?
23:54 bbj0920: i'll post on thread if u want
23:54 Lilyanna: ye prefer if it s okay x)

00:48:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - song gets less intense and distance gets larger??
00:51:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ and more
00:57:966 (1,2,3,4) - it's before the less intense part, too early to make the distance narrower
01:20:918 (1,2,3,4) - I'd emphasize this part tbh
01:49:291 (1,2,3,4) - very weird stop, and hard to read because 1/1 and 1/2 are w/ the same distance but there's no distinguishment w/ NCs. i hear the vocal and have a strong urge to click 01:49:653 (2) - on 01:49:562 - but wait it's on white tick and i get a 100. tl;dr redo the pattern
02:03:026 (3) - why is it a triplet, breaks consistency with 02:01:581 (3) -
02:04:472 (3) - change this too. and if you do it, ctrl g 02:04:833 (4,5) - so distance between 02:04:472 (3,4) - feels less weird
03:08:809 (1,2,3,4) - I'm triggered to a new level (again)

some parts flow kinda strangely ex) 00:19:291 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:22:544 (5,6,7,8) - 00:26:882 (1,2,3) - 03:31:580 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

This map feels like a mapper's 'earlier' map. if you ask me if the map's quality is justifiable with tons of mods, to be very honest I'd say no.
I see you are a newcomer, I highly recommend you to be more experienced and someday come to this mapset and rework. I'd rank a better version of a map, not rank an awkward version of a map with tons of mods (that require tons of effort to get)
ex) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/190486 compare this to recent/even year-old maps of handsome, just doesn't feel right yeah?

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[heading]Hard

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Time Capsule wrote:

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Time Capsule wrote:

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