direday wrote:

Mod just for the sake of sharing my subjective view.

SPOILER

General:
Great map overall and fun to play. I do agree that low SV fits song much better. However it feels like you've tried a bit too hard to make this map nothing like those "stupid pp meta maps" and I'm pretty sure that it would've reflect the song better if you'd make some jumps with sharp angles where it fits the song (after the drump triplets namely). i dont really think big consecutive jumps fit in many places, so i see how it looks like that lolz

Also not sure, but I'd turn up the volume across the board a bit. yea raised

00:50:392 (3,3,3) - I feel like these could use a bit more SV. Maybe 0.67 like the next reverse sliders. want all these to be the same length visually as those revesre slidesrs
00:58:642 (1,2,3) - Those are hella unreadable. You start all the reverse sliders on white tick and then there are suddenly 2 circles with irregural timing. Imo you should either have all 4 sets of 3 sounds mapped identicaly, or at least change first 3 reverse sliders into slider + circle to let player taste the timing needed for hiting irregulary placed notes. i think the reverses indicate what rhythm will be clearly enough. they're like what you said with "taste the timing" of irregular notes
00:56:842 (1) - love this part. sik
01:06:442 (1) - Yeah the music pretty much stops and it should be reflected in map. How about changing 01:06:442 (1,2,3) into reverse sliders with low SV (0.5x). If you also change 00:56:842 (1) into slider+circle you'll have a nice difference in feel. i think no movement fits better than movement along sliders g
01:46:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason for those to be mapped so differently from 01:37:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Music is exactly the same there. First one uses comfortable sharp angle after the triplet and imo fits music much better with bigger jump. Also triplets are spaced differently. changed spacing for juimps and triples
02:42:442 (1) - I think you are doing simple sliders here to make map more diverse but I still think that you need to place 3 sounds for those, even if you already have a lot of reverse sliders in the map. rhythm here actually isnt supported by reverse sliders. like monstrata's set does thes ame thing lol
03:04:042 (1) - Did you do those just do deviate from monstrata's set maps? Imo those are too boring to not to map the vocals there and change back to drums/lead when it kicks in. the song is super calm here so i wanted rhythms and placements to be as simple as possible
03:37:342 (8) - This one should be rotated CCW a bit. (Sry for being a nazi) i just copy pasted stuff idk what u mean
03:40:042 (1) - Not mapping those sounds is a crime against humanity. Srsly I get that music stops again but c'mon. Make it at least a reverse slider or smth. don't want rhythms ot be that dense a
03:41:842 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion: may be smth like this? wanting it to be symmetrical like the previous slider

Since you already have used a lot of wave like shapes with sliders I think that would be more pleasant to play.
04:01:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like you are too inconsistent with those. Why not make every one of those like the very first one? For me the way music seems to slow down on triplet and then bursting on after the singletaps screams the need of jumps with a sharp angle after the triplet. it's the same as the previous kiai so idk whats inconsnistentnnestns
04:18:442 (1) - Ye again. I'd make those into reverse sliders for 3 sounds. Cool combo tho. trying to make these stand out above the other 3/8 rhythm reverse thignsx
04:30:442 (1) - I love how you made those. Wonder why there is nothing like it in the other mapset since it fits the music perfectly. yeeeeeeeeeeea

Sorry for my broken Engreesh in advance. thanks!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Random mod

[General]

The minimal hitsounding is charming and fits the maps nicely, just like the low overall hitsound volume. Sometimes it seems a bit too low though which makes some sections' hitsounding almost inaudible to me. Specifically:
00:59:242 - to 01:06:442 -
03:23:242 - to 03:40:042 - raised thsee
Looking back at it, I find the different hitnormal less audible than the regular soft hitnormal in general, so it might just be me. Maybe ask for some more opinions on this topic, as it can also be related to the headphones used.

[Normal]

00:55:192 (2) - Move the tail anchor down just a little bit? The sliders aren't perfectly parallel and it's kind of noticable because they are placed in line.
01:27:442 (1) - Use a different combo color for this object (aka NC it)? From your color haxing it should belong to a non-yellow combo, however if the intention is to avoid very short combos it's fine as well.
01:32:842 (1) - Offscreen.i did everything

[Hard]

01:40:042 (1,2) - Could be lined up a bit better.
04:35:242 (1) - I had problems reading this because the head and tail are so heavily overlapping. It looks a bit clustered so imo it would be better to have them only slightly overlap, somehow like this: http://puu.sh/sxlCf/75409810d4.jpg Rearranging the pattern a bit would be required but I think it's worth it. same

[Insane]

Hmm, I wonder why you don't use yellow combo color for those combos 01:37:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:46:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - etc. like in Hard. actually wanted 02:05:842 (1) - this thing to be orange and separate from the previous combo. making the other things orange would mean 2 orange colors in a row and cant do that so ya

00:49:642 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Personally I don't enjoy the copy-paste here very much. I love the repetetiveness for those sections 00:59:242 - (they are probably my favourite sections of the map) but for the beginning it feels like the placement is unbalanced (all objects are in the top left corner) and there doesn't really seem to be a reason for it from the music. Maybe you could rearrange this part so that the objects are placed more across the playfield, since the spacings for large gaps in rhythm like 00:50:392 (3,1) - don't matter anyway. i wanted 00:56:842 (1,2,3) - these to be the same as 00:50:392 (3) - 00:52:792 (3) - 00:55:192 (3) - so cant really make things cross screen without big jumps at the end, and they're near the left because 00:59:242 (1) - starts at the left and i didnt want high spacing there either g
01:08:242 (4) - NC it and use yellow color? Otherwise it seems inconsistent with 03:41:842 (1,2,3,4) - , unrelated from what I mentioned above. dud ut



Great mapset, I love how the lower diffs turned out! Feel free to call me back once you have the star priority. thankx