1. The Song Is About a Tragic Love (5.56 stars, 1337 notes)

Zanarc wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 03, 2016 at 7:44:53 PM

Artist: Rameses B
Title: Beside You (feat. Soundr)
Tags: DnB NCS
BPM: 174
Filesize: 11096kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:

1. The Song Is About a Tragic Love (5.56 stars, 1115 notes)

Download: Rameses B - Beside You (feat. Soundr)
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"When you lose yourself I'll be right beside you."

2nd Beatmap (WIP 80%)
Advice Appreciated

I recorded myself playing your map for the first time. I really like it, but there are some comments I have about it.

Here's the video of my first play: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7p5fuKcnjBc

The circles at 00:16:464 (2) - and 00:16:636 (3) - , when I first played it (as you can see in the video), I missed the third circle. Sure, had I been expecting it, I probably could've hit it, but I think it'd be best if you shortened the distance of these two circles, especially since it's still near the beginning, which is calmer than the rest of the song. Maybe changing it from this: ( https://puu.sh/s5NsI/8bd2804548.jpg ) to something a little more like this: ( https://puu.sh/s5NsU/e2ed0f6041.jpg ) Changed

The sliders starting at 00:33:533 (1) - and ending at 00:38:878 (3) - are actually something I haven't really seen before. They focused more on a backgroundish noise, when I would've expected a more upfront melody follow, usually with the lyrics, or at least with half the sliders. Regardless, I actually really like this. It's different, and I really enjoyed this part when I played it. Thank you C: That's me trying to be a bit unique. Since I'm still beginning most of the mapping is inspired but other mappers I like to play.

00:40:430 (1) - because this circle is a double due to the "eh eh eh" sound it makes, but it clashes with the drums, I think you could possibly replace that ( 00:40:430 (1) - ) and 00:40:602 (2) - with two short sliders that are spaced kind of like this: (before: ( https://puu.sh/s66QX/154306e6d7.jpg -- after: https://puu.sh/s5Ntu/baecf416f3.jpg ), and then the third ( 00:40:774 (1) - ) moved a bit closer (but only if you did the two slider thing). Changed, I like it better this way

Starting after this circle (01:06:636 (1) -) is a long break, which I think you could use for more map time. It's got a lot of space for more sliders, circles, and overall fun. Will change as I continue mapping

03:52:154 (1) - this return slider, plus the three after it, I can't really figure out what sounds these cover, so I don't know exactly how they fit. I slider broke or slider-end missed these hard several times after my first play. You might want to consider changing those in some way. Changed, I agree. I did this at first cause I really liked the way it was implemented in Strategas' "Hide Away My Heart." But it really doesn't fit as well as I would have liked.

Can't wait to see it when it's finished. I really like this song, and I think the map looks very promising Thank you very much. I try to map in small spurts so I'm inspired while I map and not just mapping because I have to finish it. So it may take a bit but I'll finish it. Just wanna make a fun map players can enjoy. Thank you for helping me achieve that

-Vaarka

Zanarc wrote:

I recorded myself playing your map for the first time. I really like it, but there are some comments I have about it.

Here's the video of my first play: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7p5fuKcnjBc

The circles at 00:16:464 (2) - and 00:16:636 (3) - , when I first played it (as you can see in the video), I missed the third circle. Sure, had I been expecting it, I probably could've hit it, but I think it'd be best if you shortened the distance of these two circles, especially since it's still near the beginning, which is calmer than the rest of the song. Maybe changing it from this: ( https://puu.sh/s5NsI/8bd2804548.jpg ) to something a little more like this: ( https://puu.sh/s5NsU/e2ed0f6041.jpg ) Changed

The sliders starting at 00:33:533 (1) - and ending at 00:38:878 (3) - are actually something I haven't really seen before. They focused more on a backgroundish noise, when I would've expected a more upfront melody follow, usually with the lyrics, or at least with half the sliders. Regardless, I actually really like this. It's different, and I really enjoyed this part when I played it. Thank you C: That's me trying to be a bit unique. Since I'm still beginning most of the mapping is inspired but other mappers I like to play.

00:40:430 (1) - because this circle is a double due to the "eh eh eh" sound it makes, but it clashes with the drums, I think you could possibly replace that ( 00:40:430 (1) - ) and 00:40:602 (2) - with two short sliders that are spaced kind of like this: (before: ( https://puu.sh/s66QX/154306e6d7.jpg -- after: https://puu.sh/s5Ntu/baecf416f3.jpg ), and then the third ( 00:40:774 (1) - ) moved a bit closer (but only if you did the two slider thing). Changed, I like it better this way

Starting after this circle (01:06:636 (1) -) is a long break, which I think you could use for more map time. It's got a lot of space for more sliders, circles, and overall fun. Will change as I continue mapping

03:52:154 (1) - this return slider, plus the three after it, I can't really figure out what sounds these cover, so I don't know exactly how they fit. I slider broke or slider-end missed these hard several times after my first play. You might want to consider changing those in some way. Changed, I agree. I did this at first cause I really liked the way it was implemented in Strategas' "Hide Away My Heart." But it really doesn't fit as well as I would have liked.

Can't wait to see it when it's finished. I really like this song, and I think the map looks very promising Thank you very much. I try to map in small spurts so I'm inspired while I map and not just mapping because I have to finish it. So it may take a bit but I'll finish it. Just wanna make a fun map players can enjoy. Thank you for helping me achieve that

Glad I could help - I map similarly. Don't feel rushed to finish it, just take your time, because good maps shouldn't be rushed. I really like your map so far, and hope it gets ranked some day :3

pls don't forget my kudosu ;_;

-Vaarka