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WEAVER - S.O.S. [Taiko]

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World Fraction
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 12, 2017 at 1:26:55 PM

Artist: WEAVER
Title: S.O.S.
Source: うどんの国の金色毛鞠
Tags: Udon no Kuni no Kinniro Kemari Poco's Udon World Opening
BPM: 117
Filesize: 2784kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.71 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.39 stars, 104 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.4 stars, 260 notes)
  4. Oni (2.99 stars, 356 notes)
Download: WEAVER - S.O.S.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is going to be the first map that I try and get ranked.

Thanks to Yuno for helping me with the bpm and offset, and one final thanks to snowball112 for continuing to support the map and helping me with anything related to it.

FOR BN'S. This is the metadata!! http://www.weavermusic.jp/discography/ and this http://www.udonnokuni-anime.jp/goods/music.html
Kith190
I like the song and the way of mapping but I found a pair of things that I think need some rework.
Oni
00:04:254 - red to blue
00:30:664 - blue to red
00:50:536 - red to blue
01:25:664 - red to blue
01:26:305 - red to blue

And i think that the difficulty should call Inner Oni because there are 1/8 notes. But I colud mistake.
Anyway i like that song, so good job!
Topic Starter
World Fraction

Kith190 wrote:

I like the song and the way of mapping but I found a pair of things that I think need some rework.
Oni
00:04:254 - red to blue - makes sense
00:30:664 - blue to red - ^
00:50:536 - red to blue - no change as i didnt hear any snares
01:25:664 - red to blue - yup
01:26:305 - red to blue - ^

And i think that the difficulty should call Inner Oni because there are 1/8 notes. But I colud mistake.
Anyway i like that song, so good job! tyvm and yea i changed it to Inner Oni, i was thinking about that last night.
Cris-
A random mod because i love this song and the anime ;)

METADATA

  1. Artist: WEAVER
  2. Title: S.O.S.
  3. Source: うどんの国の金色毛鞠
00:51:049 - You can set this at "Preview Point" on Timing section
Good luck on your map! :D
Topic Starter
World Fraction

Cris_1 wrote:

A random mod because i love this song and the anime ;)

METADATA

  1. Artist: WEAVER
  2. Title: S.O.S.
  3. Source: うどんの国の金色毛鞠
00:51:049 - You can set this at "Preview Point" on Timing section
Good luck on your map! :D
MUCH better preview point thanks for that!
Nanners
o/ Mod cause you asked.

General
Check AI mod. Alot of your objects in your diffs arent snapped.
Also, make sure to set the SV to 1.4, do it through the .osu since doing it the other way can cause it to be slightly off.

Oni
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This is kind of bland and boring, I know it fits the drums, however, maybe try changing it to something like this Doing something like this will still match the beat since the d's will catch when the drum is louder and still provide a fun pattern

00:02:331 - Change to a D since the following note after it is higher pitched, the note before isnt as high pitch and would make more sense to be a don rather than a kat

00:03:099 (15,16,17) - Change to k k d due to it landing on a drum at the end, would make more sense to have it go high high low, or you can do k d d. Both fit well.

00:03:869 (19) - Make into finisher. You can hear a strong beat, better to have a finisher represent it.

00:06:049 (28) - Move this to 00:05:921 - and change to d. The way it is now feels very weird and offbeat.

00:06:946 (32) - Make into a finisher.

00:07:972 (37) - ^

00:18:613 (96,97) - You have 2 notes stacked over each other. Delete before it causes trouble.

00:26:177 (121,122) - Perhaps change these to d while keeping the note after it a k to make the clap more authentic and flows better imo

00:26:946 (128) - Considering changing to a k. It becomes a more, high pitched sound, rather than a lower one.

00:38:228 - Add a d. Theres a drum you can hear, and it breaks the flow of having k d d before that part.

00:50:536 (213) - Change to k. Ends on a high pitch note.

00:51:049 - Add ak. You can hear the snare.

00:54:896 (229) - Remove Finisher. You dont need a finisher as there is no loud sound signifying a finisher being needed.

00:55:151 - Add a d and delete 00:55:344 (231) - Matches the rhythm more.

00:59:767 (256) - Change to k. You can hear the clash of a symbol, so making it into a kfits more imo.

01:03:101 (272) - Remove finisher. Nothing to emphasize.

01:10:665 (310) - Delete, no sound.

01:10:922 (311) - Move this to 01:10:856 - fits better than before

01:11:306 (313) - Delete finisher. Not needed.

01:15:280 (334) - ^

01:16:177 (342) - Change to k to match the beat becoming louder.

01:19:510 (359) - Delete finisher. Nothing to emphasize.

01:23:613 (383) - ^

01:26:818 - Consider adding a k since there is sound, and makes the decent to d more rhythmic.

01:28:485 - Suggest adding a k since you can hear a slight jingle right at the end, and leaving it blank would make the sound there pointless to begin with.

Inner Oni
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I suggest doing something similar to the img I showed in the oni.

00:05:023 (28) - Delete, no sound to map, and adding excess notes to fill in the gap is pointless.

00:05:280 (29) - Move this to 00:05:280 (29) - since where the k is now theres nothing to map, and makes a cute little pattern to fit the beat.

00:05:664 (31) - Dont need the finisher.

00:08:100 - Consider adding a d to fill the sound there and keep it matching the beat/rhythm.

00:09:638 (51) - Remove finisher and I suggest beginning your stream here, since the sound that you mapped for the stream begins here, makes the most sense to start it where it should start.

00:13:228 (77) - Delete, no sound to map.

00:13:485 (78) - ^

00:13:869 (81) - Finisher note needed.

00:16:305 - Consider adding a d to fill the beat.

00:17:972 (105) - Remove finisher, and start the stream at 00:17:844 (104) - Since thats where the beat begins to make the streamy sound.

00:18:742 (116) - Consider changing to a K as well as with the stream before it since theres an emphasize at that time, and making it a D at the end of the d d d d d d would make it harder to hit.

00:54:255 (262) - Delete. No sound.

00:54:896 (266) - Remove finisher.

00:57:331 - Consider adding a note here to match the sound you can hear, what you add is up to you but I suggest a d

00:58:870 (287) - Start stream here.

00:58:999 (288) - Remove finisher.

00:59:767 (299) - As with other streams, consider using K to match the loud crash while keeping it playble.

01:02:460 (313) - Delete, no sound.

01:03:101 (317) - Remove finisher.

01:03:869 (322) - Maybe add the finisher here instead.

01:07:459 (340,341,342,343,344,345) - Perhaps you could make this kkkkddddK. Makes the sound you hear there match.

01:10:665 (359) - No sound. Delete.

01:11:306 (363) - Remove finisher.

01:12:074 (368) - Like before, maybe add the finisher here instead.

01:19:510 (412) - Remove finisher.

01:21:946 - Consider adding a d since there is sound here.

01:23:485 (435,436) - Same as before, start stream at 01:23:485 - and remove the finisher.

01:24:382 (447) - Change to K to match the loud part.

01:26:818 - Clear sound, considering adding a note.

01:28:485 - Same as oni, you can hear a slight jingle so maybe add a k


Thats it for now~ Keep in mind these are mere suggestions, not everything I say will be agreed with by others. I will mod the other diffs if you want at a later time. Best of luck~ :)
Topic Starter
World Fraction

Nanners wrote:

o/ Mod cause you asked.

General
Check AI mod. Alot of your objects in your diffs arent snapped.
Also, make sure to set the SV to 1.4, do it through the .osu since doing it the other way can cause it to be slightly off.

Oni
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This is kind of bland and boring, I know it fits the drums, however, maybe try changing it to something like this Doing something like this will still match the beat since the d's will catch when the drum is louder and still provide a fun pattern

00:02:331 - Change to a D since the following note after it is higher pitched, the note before isnt as high pitch and would make more sense to be a don rather than a kat

00:03:099 (15,16,17) - Change to k k d due to it landing on a drum at the end, would make more sense to have it go high high low, or you can do k d d. Both fit well.

00:03:869 (19) - Make into finisher. You can hear a strong beat, better to have a finisher represent it.

00:06:049 (28) - Move this to 00:05:921 - and change to d. The way it is now feels very weird and offbeat.

00:06:946 (32) - Make into a finisher.

00:07:972 (37) - ^

00:18:613 (96,97) - You have 2 notes stacked over each other. Delete before it causes trouble.

00:26:177 (121,122) - Perhaps change these to d while keeping the note after it a k to make the clap more authentic and flows better imo

00:26:946 (128) - Considering changing to a k. It becomes a more, high pitched sound, rather than a lower one.

00:38:228 - Add a d. Theres a drum you can hear, and it breaks the flow of having k d d before that part.

00:50:536 (213) - Change to k. Ends on a high pitch note.

00:51:049 - Add ak. You can hear the snare. THIS is the only thing i didn't change. i Honestly only hear vocals. :?

00:54:896 (229) - Remove Finisher. You dont need a finisher as there is no loud sound signifying a finisher being needed.

00:55:151 - Add a d and delete 00:55:344 (231) - Matches the rhythm more.

00:59:767 (256) - Change to k. You can hear the clash of a symbol, so making it into a kfits more imo.

01:03:101 (272) - Remove finisher. Nothing to emphasize.

01:10:665 (310) - Delete, no sound.

01:10:922 (311) - Move this to 01:10:856 - fits better than before

01:11:306 (313) - Delete finisher. Not needed.

01:15:280 (334) - ^

01:16:177 (342) - Change to k to match the beat becoming louder.

01:19:510 (359) - Delete finisher. Nothing to emphasize.

01:23:613 (383) - ^

01:26:818 - Consider adding a k since there is sound, and makes the decent to d more rhythmic.

01:28:485 - Suggest adding a k since you can hear a slight jingle right at the end, and leaving it blank would make the sound there pointless to begin with.

Inner Oni
00:00:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I suggest doing something similar to the img I showed in the oni.

00:05:023 (28) - Delete, no sound to map, and adding excess notes to fill in the gap is pointless.

00:05:280 (29) - Move this to 00:05:280 (29) - since where the k is now theres nothing to map, and makes a cute little pattern to fit the beat.

00:05:664 (31) - Dont need the finisher.

00:08:100 - Consider adding a d to fill the sound there and keep it matching the beat/rhythm.

00:09:638 (51) - Remove finisher and I suggest beginning your stream here, since the sound that you mapped for the stream begins here, makes the most sense to start it where it should start.

00:13:228 (77) - Delete, no sound to map.

00:13:485 (78) - ^

00:13:869 (81) - Finisher note needed.

00:16:305 - Consider adding a d to fill the beat.

00:17:972 (105) - Remove finisher, and start the stream at 00:17:844 (104) - Since thats where the beat begins to make the streamy sound.

00:18:742 (116) - Consider changing to a K as well as with the stream before it since theres an emphasize at that time, and making it a D at the end of the d d d d d d would make it harder to hit.

00:54:255 (262) - Delete. No sound.

00:54:896 (266) - Remove finisher.

00:57:331 - Consider adding a note here to match the sound you can hear, what you add is up to you but I suggest a d

00:58:870 (287) - Start stream here.

00:58:999 (288) - Remove finisher.

00:59:767 (299) - As with other streams, consider using K to match the loud crash while keeping it playble.

01:02:460 (313) - Delete, no sound.

01:03:101 (317) - Remove finisher.

01:03:869 (322) - Maybe add the finisher here instead.

01:07:459 (340,341,342,343,344,345) - Perhaps you could make this kkkkddddK. Makes the sound you hear there match.

01:10:665 (359) - No sound. Delete.

01:11:306 (363) - Remove finisher.

01:12:074 (368) - Like before, maybe add the finisher here instead.

01:19:510 (412) - Remove finisher.

01:21:946 - Consider adding a d since there is sound here.

01:23:485 (435,436) - Same as before, start stream at 01:23:485 - and remove the finisher.

01:24:382 (447) - Change to K to match the loud part.

01:26:818 - Clear sound, considering adding a note.

01:28:485 - Same as oni, you can hear a slight jingle so maybe add a k


Thats it for now~ Keep in mind these are mere suggestions, not everything I say will be agreed with by others. I will mod the other diffs if you want at a later time. Best of luck~ :)
thanks for the mod, i pretty much changed everything because it made sense and only one part i didn't.
Vulkin
you forgot an i on "Muzukashi" ;w;
but good mappu <3
Topic Starter
World Fraction

Vulkin wrote:

you forgot an i on "Muzukashi" ;w;
but good mappu <3
OMG thanks for that lol WOOOPS
zigizigiefe
[Inner Oni]
00:01:690 (12,13,14) - I think this should be kkd
00:04:254 (23,24) - ctrl+g
00:04:767 (26) - k
00:06:433 (35) - add finisher
00:08:485 (45) - add finisher
00:10:151 (60,61) - d
00:09:767 (54,55,56,57) - k
00:10:792 - add k note here
00:11:049 (67) - add finisher
00:11:562 (70) - d and finish
00:11:819 (71) - k
00:12:075 (72,73) - ctrl+g
00:13:356 - add k note here
00:17:972 (107,108,109,110) - k
00:18:357 (113,114) - d
00:18:486 (115) - k
00:26:049 (143,144) - k
00:31:946 (170) - k
00:42:074 (206) - d
00:47:715 (230,231) - d
00:48:485 (234) - d
00:49:510 (239,240,241,242,243) - i think this pattern should be kkddk
00:50:023 (245,246,247) - kkd
00:50:280 (248) - k
00:50:408 (249,250,251) - ddk
00:54:382 - add k note
00:55:151 (270) - k
00:55:664 (273) - d and finish
00:55:922 (274,275) - ctrl+g
00:56:433 (276,277) - k
00:56:946 (279) - add finisher
00:57:331 (281,282) - d
00:58:997 (292,293,294,295) - k
00:59:383 (298,299) - d
00:59:510 (300) - k
01:00:023 (305,306) - ctrl+g
01:02:587 - add k note
01:05:152 (332,334) - ctrl+g
01:10:792 - add k note
01:11:562 (371) - k
01:11:946 (373) - k
01:12:332 (375,376) - ctrl+g
01:15:280 (390,391,392) - dkk
01:15:792 (395,396,397) - kkd
01:18:228 (410) - d
01:20:280 (423) - d and finish
01:23:613 (444,445,446,447) - k
01:23:997 (450,451) - d
01:24:126 (452) - k
01:27:715 (474,475,476,477) - k
01:28:099 (480,481) - d



Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
World Fraction

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:01:690 (12,13,14) - I think this should be kkd done
00:04:254 (23,24) - ctrl+g yea much better
00:04:767 (26) - k
00:06:433 (35) - add finisher
00:08:485 (45) - add finisher
00:10:151 (60,61) - d
00:09:767 (54,55,56,57) - k
00:10:792 - add k note here
00:11:049 (67) - add finisher yup
00:11:562 (70) - d and finish
00:11:819 (71) - k
00:12:075 (72,73) - ctrl+g
00:13:356 - add k note here
00:17:972 (107,108,109,110) - k
00:18:357 (113,114) - d
00:18:486 (115) - k
00:26:049 (143,144) - k
00:31:946 (170) - k
00:42:074 (206) - d
00:47:715 (230,231) - d
00:48:485 (234) - d
00:49:510 (239,240,241,242,243) - i think this pattern should be kkddk
00:50:023 (245,246,247) - kkd donezo
00:50:280 (248) - k
00:50:408 (249,250,251) - ddk
00:54:382 - add k note
00:55:151 (270) - k
00:55:664 (273) - d and finish
00:55:922 (274,275) - ctrl+g
00:56:433 (276,277) - k
00:56:946 (279) - add finisher yup
00:57:331 (281,282) - d
00:58:997 (292,293,294,295) - k
00:59:383 (298,299) - d
00:59:510 (300) - k
01:00:023 (305,306) - ctrl+g
01:02:587 - add k note
01:05:152 (332,334) - ctrl+g
01:10:792 - add k note
01:11:562 (371) - k
01:11:946 (373) - k
01:12:332 (375,376) - ctrl+g
01:15:280 (390,391,392) - dkk
01:15:792 (395,396,397) - kkd
01:18:228 (410) - d
01:20:280 (423) - d and finish
01:23:613 (444,445,446,447) - k
01:23:997 (450,451) - d
01:24:126 (452) - k
01:27:715 (474,475,476,477) - k
01:28:099 (480,481) - d

everything i changed will be in pink, if i didnt then it means i left it alone

Good Luck :D thanks a lot for the mod, though i didnt change too much.
IControl
Nm from my: Que


General


Disable: count down and wide screen support

all difficulties must have an 1.4 sv according to ranking criteria.

But you are free to change sv in timing setup panel if it is a smooth transition and above the muzukashii level.

Also make sure to recheck your sliders.


Vulkin's Kantan


00:20:280 (24) - this part is a little dull to play how about trying:


00:20:280 (24) - d

00:20:792 - add k

00:24:895 - add d

00:25:921 - add d

00:26:433 (34) - this could be removed

00:28:485 - repeat


00:51:049 (64) - this could be removed


00:56:177 - I think the kai time could be a bit less dull too:


00:56:177 - add k

00:56:946 (72) - move this to here: 00:57:203 -

01:12:587 - repeat


Futsuu



00:06:690 (16) - this could be removed to stay consistent with here 00:03:100 -

00:07:331 - add d (1/4 bluc tic) to map more accurately to the song

00:07:459 - remove? I'm not sure if 1 double is ok in futsuu otherwise keep it

00:08:741 (22) - remove to stay consistent with 00:04:382 (10) -

00:12:844 (31) - move to 00:12:972 - remove 00:13:101 (32) - to be more accurate with the song

00:13:613 (32) - move to 00:13:356 - ^


00:15:409 (36,37,38,39) - be weary of the long 1/1 patterns like this. They should be used sparingly and they wont get ranked through ranking. try breaking it down by:

removing 00:15:409 (36) -


00:15:665 (36) - change to k mapping to keyboard

00:16:946 (40) - move to blue tic again and make similar changes like at 00:12:972 -


00:42:331 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - to long break it down

00:45:408 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - ^ try leaving space for some of the vocals in the beginning of this pattern and you could gradually map the drums at the end if its not to many 1/1 notes

00:53:869 (130) - try mapping to the blue tics

You could probably tell by now that kai section needs to be remapped because there are to many 1/1's try emphasizing the vocals and only mapping to the drum beat if its not to overbearing like i said b4


01:28:356 (233) - move this to here: 01:28:485 -


Muzukashii



00:06:946 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - why not make this part like 00:02:331 - I sounds to over mapped

00:12:459 (47) - these could be removed. Theres no sound really going on here

00:13:869 (53,54,55,56,57) - mapping to the paino at this part doesn't really go to well with the rest of the map cuz it seems abrupt. Try mapping to the
drums

00:14:896 - this could be removed to give more empathize to 00:14:638 -

00:16:434 (63) - remove ^

00:29:895 - add d d To make this part a bit harder compared to your futsuu

00:43:100 (133,134,135) - I'm not sure if the a lot of kkd triples will make it through the bns i would change to kkk or ddd for a few of these

00:49:510 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - you should save these types of patterns for oni. I know the bpm is low but muzukashii players can't stream like this yet.

00:53:869 (177) - remove sound more accurate to the song

00:54:510 (179) - move to here 00:54:382 - you should remap kai section based around this

01:27:587 (325) - remove

01:27:715 (325,326) - change to kk for an easier to read pattern


Oni & Inner Oni


I think you should consider nerfing the 1/8s in Oni because they are a bit to hard to play. Consider using more complex stream patterns like you did in your muzukaii diff.


Inner Oni shouldn't be to hard from Oni. You should nerf some of the really long 1/8 patterns because it sounds a bit to over mapped.



Sorry its hard to mod the last few diffs because It looks like it needs a lot of rework if you are going for rank. It's fun to play but just not suited for the lower ranked players. I can mod Oni and Inner oni again after you remap them if you really want.. Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
World Fraction

IControl wrote:

Nm from my: Que


General


Disable: count down and wide screen support

all difficulties must have an 1.4 sv according to ranking criteria.

But you are free to change sv in timing setup panel if it is a smooth transition and above the muzukashii level.

Also make sure to recheck your sliders.



Futsuu



00:06:690 (16) - this could be removed to stay consistent with here 00:03:100 -

00:07:331 - add d (1/4 bluc tic) to map more accurately to the song

00:07:459 - remove? I'm not sure if 1 double is ok in futsuu otherwise keep it

00:08:741 (22) - remove to stay consistent with 00:04:382 (10) -

00:12:844 (31) - move to 00:12:972 - remove 00:13:101 (32) - to be more accurate with the song

00:13:613 (32) - move to 00:13:356 - ^


00:15:409 (36,37,38,39) - be weary of the long 1/1 patterns like this. They should be used sparingly and they wont get ranked through ranking. try breaking it down by:

removing 00:15:409 (36) -


00:15:665 (36) - change to k mapping to keyboard

00:16:946 (40) - move to blue tic again and make similar changes like at 00:12:972 -


00:42:331 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - to long break it down

00:45:408 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - ^ try leaving space for some of the vocals in the beginning of this pattern and you could gradually map the drums at the end if its not to many 1/1 notes

00:53:869 (130) - try mapping to the blue tics

You could probably tell by now that kai section needs to be remapped because there are to many 1/1's try emphasizing the vocals and only mapping to the drum beat if its not to overbearing like i said b4


01:28:356 (233) - move this to here: 01:28:485 -


Muzukashii



00:06:946 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - why not make this part like 00:02:331 - I sounds to over mapped

00:12:459 (47) - these could be removed. Theres no sound really going on here

00:13:869 (53,54,55,56,57) - mapping to the paino at this part doesn't really go to well with the rest of the map cuz it seems abrupt. Try mapping to the
drums

00:14:896 - this could be removed to give more empathize to 00:14:638 -

00:16:434 (63) - remove ^

00:29:895 - add d d To make this part a bit harder compared to your futsuu

00:43:100 (133,134,135) - I'm not sure if the a lot of kkd triples will make it through the bns i would change to kkk or ddd for a few of these

00:49:510 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - you should save these types of patterns for oni. I know the bpm is low but muzukashii players can't stream like this yet.

00:53:869 (177) - remove sound more accurate to the song

00:54:510 (179) - move to here 00:54:382 - you should remap kai section based around this

01:27:587 (325) - remove

01:27:715 (325,326) - change to kk for an easier to read pattern


Oni & Inner Oni


I think you should consider nerfing the 1/8s in Oni because they are a bit to hard to play. Consider using more complex stream patterns like you did in your muzukaii diff.


Inner Oni shouldn't be to hard from Oni. You should nerf some of the really long 1/8 patterns because it sounds a bit to over mapped.



Sorry its hard to mod the last few diffs because It looks like it needs a lot of rework if you are going for rank. It's fun to play but just not suited for the lower ranked players. I can mod Oni and Inner oni again after you remap them if you really want.. Good Luck! :)
HEY, thanks for the mod man. I really appreciate it! I changed a few things and left a few things. Someone said they would go over my Oni and Inner Oni for me and let me know what to change.
Vulkin

IControl wrote:

Vulkin's Kantan


00:20:280 (24) - this part is a little dull to play how about trying:


00:20:280 (24) - d no, because of consistency

00:20:792 - add k ok

00:24:895 - add d ok

00:25:921 - add d ok

00:26:433 (34) - this could be removed ok

00:28:485 - repeat you mean add d at 00:28:997 - ? ok


00:51:049 (64) - this could be removed ok


00:56:177 - I think the kai time could be a bit less dull too:


00:56:177 - add k ok

00:56:946 (72) - move this to here: 00:57:203 - nah feels better following the other beat

01:12:587 - repeat ^
Im sorry ze kantan is dull ;w;
im not very good at this type of songs
but still, thanks alot for the mod :)
IControl

Vulkin wrote:

IControl wrote:

Vulkin's Kantan


00:20:280 (24) - this part is a little dull to play how about trying:


00:20:280 (24) - d no, because of consistency

00:20:792 - add k ok

00:24:895 - add d ok

00:25:921 - add d ok

00:26:433 (34) - this could be removed ok

00:28:485 - repeat you mean add d at 00:28:997 - ? ok


00:51:049 (64) - this could be removed ok


00:56:177 - I think the kai time could be a bit less dull too:


00:56:177 - add k ok

00:56:946 (72) - move this to here: 00:57:203 - nah feels better following the other beat

01:12:587 - repeat ^
Im sorry ze kantan is dull ;w;
im not very good at this type of songs
but still, thanks alot for the mod :)


Well I men't from 20:280 to follow the same exact thing that i moded before because its more or less the same exact melody at 28:485 btw.
snowball112
Heya, random mod.

General
  1. Sliders at this bpm have the ticks at 1/8. You should remove all sliders across your diffs and replace them with notes as the music doesn't really call for 1/8 usage. The beginning for example up to 00:01:817 - could use a spinner in the lower diffs to be more beginner-friendly.
  2. Your diffs appear a bit too complex imo in terms of rhythym and spacings.
  3. K/F/M all need higher hp, suggest 7/6/5 respectively.
  4. Change K/F SV to 1.4^
  5. Remove SV changes from lower diffs, I think it's fine if you just use them in Oni and Inner Oni.

Vulkin's Kantan
Too long patterns and not enough breaks for a kantan, the chain from 00:40:792 especially needs some spacings. And this diff needs some breaks overall, even though bpm is low.
  1. Suggest you try something like this for the beginning section, cursor on 00:10:023 to have 2 rest moments in this section. I think this would be fine to help beginners read the different spacing here.
  2. You may want to consider using 1/1 doubles instead of triples in the calm part from 00:19:254 and remove notes like 00:21:305. Similar with:
    1. 00:23:356 ^
    2. 00:29:510 ^ etc.
  3. 00:54:126 suggests you're following vocal, but placement is not correct as the vocal lands on the blue tick. Either move 00:54:126 to 00:53:997 for vocal or to 00:54:638 and change 00:54:382 (90,91) to d for the instrument.
  4. 01:10:792 - d, see ^
  5. 00:56:946 - remove and move 00:58:485 to 00:59:510 and d? Would be better for breaks.

Futsuu
  1. I think 00:45:921 - this pattern could be nerfed a bit
  2. 00:56:691 - remove? nicer for instrument emphasis imo.
  3. Why are you following the main instrument at 00:12:588 and drums right before at 00:02:330 in the same section? I think you should try to be consistent in what you follow until 00:17:972.
  4. 00:18:741 - this part could use a finish for transition.
  5. 00:52:331 (122,123) ctrl+g, the first two notes match together better this way.
  6. you could simplify the part from 00:55:664 as bit. Maybe try something like this, cursor on 00:58:486. I think simpler patterns like this would work well.
  7. 01:16:049 - delete, too hard for futsuu.

Muzukashii
This diff has too complex patterns, you can't really expect muzu players to play that many multicoloured 1/4 patterns.
  1. 00:01:817 - patterns up to here would be great for a lead-in in the oni, but for muzu I suggest you simplify this part:
    1. 00:00:407 - remove
    2. 00:00:664 ^
    3. 00:00:921 (5,6) - ^
  2. 00:10:023 - 1/4 d triple and 00:10:536 - finish
  3. 00:55:151 - this should definitely be a k for the strong clap.
  4. I suggest you remove notes like 00:57:460 to give emphasis to the strong instruments sounds beforehand, just like you did at 01:01:306.
  5. 01:04:127 - remove, similar to ^.
  6. Try to have 01:07:972 stand alone as a finish and have some larger spacings beyond this point, this part feels too densely mapped otherwise. I suggest you use the two strong instrument sounds like ^ to set up short breaks.

Oni
  1. You should move the note from 00:18:677 to 00:17:908 or so, would be nicer if 00:18:742 has a finish.
  2. 00:25:921 - the instrument you're mapping is so soft, why not remove:
    1. 00:26:049 -
    2. 00:26:562 -
    3. 00:26:882 -
    This part is relatively calm, so I think lower note density works better.
  3. I think something like this, cursor on 00:53:613 could work nicely here. Because there is no sound on 00:53:485 and to follow the drums better.
  4. For the next part, maybe try something like this, cursor on 00:57:715 to follow the drums more closely. You may need to save some of the longer patterns and the sparing use of 1/8 for inner oni though, so you could also remove the notes from 00:58:870 and 00:59:126 here.

Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:638 - I don't think this stream is a good idea. This part is calm.
  2. Same with 00:17:844 and the others. I think stuff like 00:00:921 (5,6,7) is fine because it has support with the drum, but the long 1/8 does not feel fitting. This song is calm, and it creates a really weird contrast to the rest of the map. Just nerf the pattern length in oni a bit and have the long 1/4 patterns mixed with some 1/8 drum here.
It depends on what you do with the rest of the set on whether this diff fits, If you nerf the other diffs like suggested the set could still support this inner even without the long 1/8 and still not be too similar to oni.

I think you can nerf all the diffs a bit, patterns are a bit complex for futsuu and muzu especially, and kantan needs some larger breaks.

Good luck
Topic Starter
World Fraction

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, random mod.

General
  1. Sliders at this bpm have the ticks at 1/8. You should remove all sliders across your diffs and replace them with notes as the music doesn't really call for 1/8 usage. The beginning for example up to 00:01:817 - could use a spinner in the lower diffs to be more beginner-friendly.
  2. Your diffs appear a bit too complex imo in terms of rhythym and spacings.
  3. K/F/M all need higher hp, suggest 7/6/5 respectively.
  4. Change K/F SV to 1.4^
  5. Remove SV changes from lower diffs, I think it's fine if you just use them in Oni and Inner Oni.

Vulkin's Kantan
Too long patterns and not enough breaks for a kantan, the chain from 00:40:792 especially needs some spacings. And this diff needs some breaks overall, even though bpm is low.
  1. Suggest you try something like this for the beginning section, cursor on 00:10:023 to have 2 rest moments in this section. I think this would be fine to help beginners read the different spacing here.
  2. You may want to consider using 1/1 doubles instead of triples in the calm part from 00:19:254 and remove notes like 00:21:305. Similar with:
    1. 00:23:356 ^
    2. 00:29:510 ^ etc.
  3. 00:54:126 suggests you're following vocal, but placement is not correct as the vocal lands on the blue tick. Either move 00:54:126 to 00:53:997 for vocal or to 00:54:638 and change 00:54:382 (90,91) to d for the instrument.
  4. 01:10:792 - d, see ^
  5. 00:56:946 - remove and move 00:58:485 to 00:59:510 and d? Would be better for breaks.

Futsuu
  1. I think 00:45:921 - this pattern could be nerfed a bit
  2. 00:56:691 - remove? nicer for instrument emphasis imo.
  3. Why are you following the main instrument at 00:12:588 and drums right before at 00:02:330 in the same section? I think you should try to be consistent in what you follow until 00:17:972.
  4. 00:18:741 - this part could use a finish for transition.
  5. 00:52:331 (122,123) ctrl+g, the first two notes match together better this way.
  6. you could simplify the part from 00:55:664 as bit. Maybe try something like this, cursor on 00:58:486. I think simpler patterns like this would work well.
  7. 01:16:049 - delete, too hard for futsuu.

Muzukashii
This diff has too complex patterns, you can't really expect muzu players to play that many multicoloured 1/4 patterns.
  1. 00:01:817 - patterns up to here would be great for a lead-in in the oni, but for muzu I suggest you simplify this part:
    1. 00:00:407 - remove
    2. 00:00:664 ^
    3. 00:00:921 (5,6) - ^
  2. 00:10:023 - 1/4 d triple and 00:10:536 - finish
  3. 00:55:151 - this should definitely be a k for the strong clap.
  4. I suggest you remove notes like 00:57:460 to give emphasis to the strong instruments sounds beforehand, just like you did at 01:01:306.
  5. 01:04:127 - remove, similar to ^.
  6. Try to have 01:07:972 stand alone as a finish and have some larger spacings beyond this point, this part feels too densely mapped otherwise. I suggest you use the two strong instrument sounds like ^ to set up short breaks.

Oni
  1. You should move the note from 00:18:677 to 00:17:908 or so, would be nicer if 00:18:742 has a finish.
  2. 00:25:921 - the instrument you're mapping is so soft, why not remove:
    1. 00:26:049 -
    2. 00:26:562 -
    3. 00:26:882 -
    This part is relatively calm, so I think lower note density works better.
  3. I think something like this, cursor on 00:53:613 could work nicely here. Because there is no sound on 00:53:485 and to follow the drums better.
  4. For the next part, maybe try something like this, cursor on 00:57:715 to follow the drums more closely. You may need to save some of the longer patterns and the sparing use of 1/8 for inner oni though, so you could also remove the notes from 00:58:870 and 00:59:126 here.

Inner Oni
  1. 00:09:638 - I don't think this stream is a good idea. This part is calm.
  2. Same with 00:17:844 and the others. I think stuff like 00:00:921 (5,6,7) is fine because it has support with the drum, but the long 1/8 does not feel fitting. This song is calm, and it creates a really weird contrast to the rest of the map. Just nerf the pattern length in oni a bit and have the long 1/4 patterns mixed with some 1/8 drum here.
It depends on what you do with the rest of the set on whether this diff fits, If you nerf the other diffs like suggested the set could still support this inner even without the long 1/8 and still not be too similar to oni.

I think you can nerf all the diffs a bit, patterns are a bit complex for futsuu and muzu especially, and kantan needs some larger breaks.

Good luck
ERMAGURD! Thanks a lot for the mod! I changed quite a few things, and got rid of the stupid nasty sliders and those crazy 1/8th patterns. I hope the map is to everyone's liking as of now.
OSUjanaiKATSURAda
Hi Wfraction nice song/anime a Mod

General
  1. Get rid of Sv changes in Kantan/Futsuu as its confusing for this level will cause an accuracy drop for new players

Kantan
00:10:023 (13) - drag this to 00:09:767 - as it gives more representation to that part00:15:151 (20) - remove then add a don here 00:15:921 - 00:20:280 (26) - don00:20:792 - add a don here as it emphasis consistency with these triples/part 00:18:228 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - 00:25:921 (32) - drag this to the previous red tick sounds better00:33:613 (42) - ^ the next red tick00:35:664 (45) - move it to 00:36:177 - and change it todon00:37:715 (47) - drag to 00:37:203 - plays better fitting vocal/instruments00:37:715 - to 00:40:280 - feel this not fitting u may like to fill the blank00:44:382 (53) - kat00:45:408 (55) - drag it to 00:45:921 - as its needed imo more in that strong beat00:50:023 (61,62) - d00:56:433 - add a d01:03:356 (78) - d01:20:792 (101) - drag to next red tick01:25:664 (107) - change to d01:27:972 (108) - move it to previous red tick sounds better00:50:023 (61,62) - d

futsuu
00:01:562 (5) - change it to k00:04:895 (13) - drag to 00:04:767 - as the sound is more rhythmic here00:08:997 (23) - ^00:13:100 (32) - ^00:17:203 (42) - ^00:25:408 (58) - to don maybe00:25:664 - add kat00:57:204 (129) - change it to kat as it will offer better consistency with 00:58:228 (131,132) - 01:01:306 (140) - don maybe01:06:947 (154) - remove then add a don01:26:946 (207) - maybe remove but add a don here plays better imo01:28:228 (211) - remove

muzukashii
00:06:305 (22) - remove not fitting and no beat there00:07:074 - adding a circle kat or don plys better00:34:382 (110) - change to kat00:41:049 - add a kat here emphasised with the coming 1/2 pattern00:41:049 - remove01:04:896 (221,222,223) - change this to kats

inner oni
00:14:382 - fill it with a kat sounds weird as a blank01:20:921 (385) - remove
well Done Hope it Helped ( Goodluck )
Topic Starter
World Fraction

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hi Wfraction nice song/anime a Mod

General
  1. Get rid of Sv changes in Kantan/Futsuu as its confusing for this level will cause an accuracy drop for new players excellent point

Kantan
00:10:023 (13) - drag this to 00:09:767 - as it gives more representation to that part00:15:151 (20) - remove then add a don here 00:15:921 - 00:20:280 (26) - don00:20:792 - add a don here as it emphasis consistency with these triples/part 00:18:228 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - 00:25:921 (32) - drag this to the previous red tick sounds better00:33:613 (42) - ^ the next red tick00:35:664 (45) - move it to 00:36:177 - and change it todon00:37:715 (47) - drag to 00:37:203 - plays better fitting vocal/instruments00:37:715 - to 00:40:280 - feel this not fitting u may like to fill the blank00:44:382 (53) - kat00:45:408 (55) - drag it to 00:45:921 - as its needed imo more in that strong beat00:50:023 (61,62) - d00:56:433 - add a d01:03:356 (78) - d01:20:792 (101) - drag to next red tick01:25:664 (107) - change to d01:27:972 (108) - move it to previous red tick sounds better00:50:023 (61,62) - d

futsuu
00:01:562 (5) - change it to k i actually changed that beginning part to a spinner for the Futsuu and Muzu now00:04:895 (13) - drag to 00:04:767 - as the sound is more rhythmic here i'm sorry but i didnt change any of those as it didn't really match what i was mapping to 00:08:997 (23) - ^00:13:100 (32) - ^00:17:203 (42) - ^00:25:408 (58) - to don maybe the clapping is very prominent here00:25:664 - add kat ok00:57:204 (129) - change it to kat as it will offer better consistency with 00:58:228 (131,132) - alrighty01:01:306 (140) - don maybe no change01:06:947 (154) - remove then add a don sure01:26:946 (207) - maybe remove but add a don here plays better imo was already a don01:28:228 (211) - remove ok

muzukashii
00:06:305 (22) - remove not fitting and no beat there ok00:07:074 - adding a circle kat or don plys better no change00:34:382 (110) - change to kat i hear nothing that could make me change to a kat. sorry00:41:049 - add a kat here emphasised with the coming 1/2 pattern i added00:41:049 - remove i think you meant 00:41:305 (130) - but no change01:04:896 (221,222,223) - change this to kats sure but it means changing this 01:13:100 (251,252,253) - too

inner oni
00:14:382 - fill it with a kat sounds weird as a blank OK, had to add one here 00:06:177 (34) - 01:20:921 (385) - remove yea i see that
well Done Hope it Helped ( Goodluck ) Thanks!
Vulkin

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hi Wfraction nice song/anime a Mod

General
[list][*]Get rid of Sv changes in Kantan/Futsuu as its confusing for this level will cause an accuracy drop for new players done

Kantan
[*]00:10:023 (13) - drag this to 00:09:767 - as it gives more representation to that part Doesnt sound right to me, so no
[*]00:15:151 (20) - remove then add a don here 00:15:921 - ok
[*]00:20:280 (26) - don nope because of consistency
[*]00:20:792 - add a don here as it emphasis consistency with these triples/part 00:18:228 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - ok
[*]00:25:921 (32) - drag this to the previous red tick sounds better ok
[*]00:33:613 (42) - ^ the next red tick ok
[*]00:35:664 (45) - move it to 00:36:177 - and change it todon im focusing on the claps so no
[*]00:37:715 (47) - drag to 00:37:203 - plays better fitting vocal/instruments ^
[*]00:37:715 - to 00:40:280 - feel this not fitting u may like to fill the blank yup
[*]00:44:382 (53) - kat ok
[*]00:45:408 (55) - drag it to 00:45:921 - as its needed imo more in that strong beat nah, dragging 00:47:972 (59) - to 00:47:459 - instead and making it d
[*]00:50:023 (61,62) - d putting spinner instead so sorry
[*]00:56:433 - add a d ok
[*]01:03:356 (78) - d ok
[*]01:20:792 (101) - drag to next red tick
[*]01:25:664 (107) - change to d
[*]01:27:972 (108) - move it to previous red tick sounds better doesnt for me sorry ;W;
[*]00:50:023 (61,62) - d o again lol

well Done Hope it Helped ( Goodluck )
Thanks for the mod!
Also selfmodded my diff a bit so yea

To Snowball112:
didnt update my diff on your mod because world_fraction applied em for me so, sorry ;w;

https://puu.sh/skv3N/9f3752e342.osu
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