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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 15. Januar 2018 at 15:21:45

Artist: u's
Title: LOVELESS WORLD
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Love Live! muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 内田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 marathon Phyloukz
BPM: 157
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Please enjoy! 3rd remapped version.

#5 for ranked Beatmap!

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Hitsounds by Toshino Kyoko


MP3 and Timing from Hanjamon's Taiko map.
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This will be my last ranked map (like 98% sure that this is it because nobody seem to care about my maps and I lost every piece of motivation). In addition to that, this is the best map I've ever made - the peak of my mapping... let's call it "career". So if you somehow care enough to open this spoilerbox, please appreciate this map as much as the map deserves in your opinion. I put lots of hours and effort into this map, please try to enjoy the map - I'd really appreciate it!! :)
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Cutsum? Nicuu!!!!
Am besten ändern^^
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M4M

museeeee <3 <3

00:12:737 (1) - shouldnt that actually start here :> 00:13:023 -

00:27:928 (1) - dont really think that note is necessary,plays totally fine without it

this tripple 01:10:062 (1,2,3) - try to put it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6360722 flow feels better imo

01:55:444 (2,4) - again,plays totally fine without them

this 01:56:208 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - i know you are following the music here,but i think letting it follow the vocals feels slightly better imo,so let it end here 01:56:877 -

02:34:520 (5) - NC because sv change

03:21:527 - maybe a pattern like that ? http://puu.sh/rOtVm/3aaffa92aa.jpg

well...actually thats all D: sry i suck at modding stream maps ;w;
and damn,such an evil ending :>

good luck with ranking it!!

MUSE FOREVER <3
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From my queue.~ Take my advice with a grain of salt because I suck at modding stream maps.
Leggo.~

Unbound by Fate

Insane

  • 00:00:603 (1) – This spinner is just for the drain time. ._. Could you shorten it so that I don’t have to get RSI before I even start playing?
  • 00:26:208 (1) – Why NC this?
  • 00:29:552 (2,3) – Fix blanket here and at 00:30:316 (4,5).
  • 00:34:138 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/rOB5e/5bbddc24b6.png ?
  • 00:38:342 (7) – Strong note on this downbeat, I would change it to a circle that spaced pretty far away.
  • 00:48:851 (4,5,1) – Awkward to play. It’s up to you if you wanna change it because it breaks flow pretty hard.
  • 00:57:355 (1) - ? One note NC? Wasn’t done here 01:01:654 (1,2) so why there?
  • 01:19:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Just asking to be noteblocked imo. There’s a reason you don’t see streams like this in ranked very often. This is precisely why. It overlaps itself in a weird place so you end up hitting a further note at the same time of the note you’re currently on, leading to a broken combo. Argument: “blame the player for not following the stream correctly!” I think this is a bad argument because a stream should be easy to follow at this difficulty. If you’re mapping 7* it’s a different story. Here again: 01:33:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) aaand 01:49:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). I don’t wanna say remap the streams. I really don’t. Maybe it’s just me. If somebody else complains about it, do take into consideration.
  • 02:32:036 (3,4) – What? Is this spacing intended? If so, why? And if not, please fix it.
  • 02:40:922 (12,1) – Looks ugly with how close the circle is. Up to you with what you wanna do with this.
  • 03:16:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - … Almost impossible for players at this level to hit I’d say.
  • 03:42:164 – Honestly this kiai could start at the beginning of the solo.
  • 04:19:902 (2,3,4) – I don’t get it. This doesn’t fit, please change it so the stream curves better.
  • 05:03:278 (1) – Slider probably would be nicer to play than a spinner.


That's all. Interesting map, good luck!~
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museeeee <3 <3

00:12:737 (1) - shouldnt that actually start here :> 00:13:023 -

00:27:928 (1) - dont really think that note is necessary,plays totally fine without it

this tripple 01:10:062 (1,2,3) - try to put it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6360722 flow feels better imo

01:55:444 (2,4) - again,plays totally fine without them

this 01:56:208 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - i know you are following the music here,but i think letting it follow the vocals feels slightly better imo,so let it end here 01:56:877 - that feels weird i'd say, I end the stream with a 1/4 slider so it ends with the vocal, lets see what others will say :D

02:34:520 (5) - NC because sv change

03:21:527 - maybe a pattern like that ? http://puu.sh/rOtVm/3aaffa92aa.jpg i did smth similar to yours which i made all over the map, so its consistent. good point to mention because that spot was completely random before change

well...actually thats all D: sry i suck at modding stream maps ;w;
and damn,such an evil ending :>

good luck with ranking it!!

MUSE FOREVER <3


Awesome mod, chnaged all except some small things i mentioned <3 thank you very much
expect your mod in 1-2 days :3

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From my queue.~ Take my advice with a grain of salt because I suck at modding stream maps.
Leggo.~

Insane

  • 00:00:603 (1) – This spinner is just for the drain time. ._. Could you shorten it so that I don’t have to get RSI before I even start playing? well either place a spinner or map 4 other diffs because i cant get any drain time form somewhere else. I think you'd choose also the first thing. I also cant lower the length of it because yeah... everything else than from the very beggining wouldnt be fitting imo
  • 00:26:208 (1) – Why NC this? fix
  • 00:29:552 (2,3) – Fix blanket here and at 00:30:316 (4,5). fixed (i think
  • 00:34:138 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/rOB5e/5bbddc24b6.png ? thats too simple (im actually tried of that pattern xd), i like the current one aesthetic-wise
  • 00:38:342 (7) – Strong note on this downbeat, I would change it to a circle that spaced pretty far away. good point
  • 00:48:851 (4,5,1) – Awkward to play. It’s up to you if you wanna change it because it breaks flow pretty hard. yes, i really have to find a solution for this, im already up to it
  • 00:57:355 (1) - ? One note NC? Wasn’t done here 01:01:654 (1,2) so why there? accident
  • 01:19:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Just asking to be noteblocked imo. There’s a reason you don’t see streams like this in ranked very often. This is precisely why. It overlaps itself in a weird place so you end up hitting a further note at the same time of the note you’re currently on, leading to a broken combo. Argument: “blame the player for not following the stream correctly!” I think this is a bad argument because a stream should be easy to follow at this difficulty. If you’re mapping 7* it’s a different story. Here again: 01:33:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) aaand 01:49:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). I don’t wanna say remap the streams. I really don’t. Maybe it’s just me. If somebody else complains about it, do take into consideration. so, personally i never missed (especially on the lower spaced streams) at those streamoverlapping spots. And if then at the more spaced ones in the kiai's. i missaimed them obviously and never experienced things such as "noteblocking" (i really know what you mean). i will definetly get more testplays too see how they play it. Becuase the overlapping streams are kinda the concept of the map, it really is aim heavy. As you said I will also wait for other modder's opionions to this
  • 02:32:036 (3,4) – What? Is this spacing intended? If so, why? And if not, please fix it. whoopsie, fixed
  • 02:40:922 (12,1) – Looks ugly with how close the circle is. Up to you with what you wanna do with this. yes, i will remap 02:41:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since it plays really awkwardly so i will change that too in future
  • 03:16:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - … Almost impossible for players at this level to hit I’d say. lol, i played it now first time (because i made it recently) and i missed 3/3. Changed
  • 03:42:164 – Honestly this kiai could start at the beginning of the solo. gonna keep it in mind and wait, good point actually
  • 04:19:902 (2,3,4) – I don’t get it. This doesn’t fit, please change it so the stream curves better. same here.. i dont really now i like it but at the same time its hard to hit and yeah...
  • 05:03:278 (1) – Slider probably would be nicer to play than a spinner. probably

That's all. Interesting map, good luck!~


Thank you very much for your free mod, much appreciation <3
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Hey! ^^
This is my second mod-attempt so i don't really know if it's useful or not but i'll try my best :D
( I also want to get more into modding so here i can train a bit ;) )

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- 00:48:851 (4,5,1,2) - The position of the 3-stack breaks the flow. Maybe put these notes like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366483

- 01:00:890 (3,4,5) - Some people may misread this part (1/4 instead of 1/3) so don't use the same spacing for that small stream so it stands out from the rest. Also it's smoother when you link the sliderwith the stream like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366537

this is just a mostly personal opinion(- 01:06:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - like this :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366609/https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366622 it's feeling better )

- 01:10:444 (4,5) - Why no 2-stack like the others inc (01:12:737 (2,3) /01:13:501 (5,6)). I have also problems to read the two notes for some reason when they are like this. :arrow: Ouups, I saw that one of the other modders suggest that pattern :/ : well it's up to you to decide ^^

- 01:33:374 (2,3) - here I would put a slider like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366709 because the beat on the 3rd note is very weak

- 01:35:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - You can put a NC at the 5th note and 01:36:431 (3,4,5,6) - a NC on the 4th note. Looks/fits better imo

- 02:08:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The overlapping circles could cause problems in reading this part because 1,2,3 have the same sound and it won't fit when you overlap two of them but not all of them. I took an other option because it felt better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366808

- 04:21:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Here you have a circlemoving because of the kickslider 04:21:909 (1,2,3,4) but then you destroy the flow by putting the stream in the top-right corner. The stream is going anticlockwise while you move your cursor clockwise when you play the kickslider part.
Turn the stream+following slider like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366907/https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366912 then the whole part is going clockwise

I know my english is not the best/ my kind of writng is a bit....wierd but i hope i could help you ^^
Also I like your style in this map, it felt new/fresh compared to the rest of ranked maps who are coming out lately so i hope your map can be ranked too.
Now I'm done today ^^
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Hey! ^^
This is my second mod-attempt so i don't really know if it's useful or not but i'll try my best :D
( I also want to get more into modding so here i can train a bit ;) )

Unbound by Fate

- 00:48:851 (4,5,1,2) - The position of the 3-stack breaks the flow. Maybe put these notes like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366483 yea i will find a way to make it better read/playable xD

- 01:00:890 (3,4,5) - Some people may misread this part (1/4 instead of 1/3) so don't use the same spacing for that small stream so it stands out from the rest. Also it's smoother when you link the sliderwith the stream like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366537 changed, DS higher

this is just a mostly personal opinion(- 01:06:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - like this :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366609/https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366622 it's feeling better ) fine how it is i think, fits quite well to the music imo

- 01:10:444 (4,5) - Why no 2-stack like the others inc (01:12:737 (2,3) /01:13:501 (5,6)). I have also problems to read the two notes for some reason when they are like this. :arrow: Ouups, I saw that one of the other modders suggest that pattern :/ : well it's up to you to decide ^^ removed the 2 stacks, they were pretty much random

- 01:33:374 (2,3) - here I would put a slider like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366709 because the beat on the 3rd note is very weak tru

- 01:35:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - You can put a NC at the 5th note and 01:36:431 (3,4,5,6) - a NC on the 4th note. Looks/fits better imo really good point, because the vocal starts there too. Changed that for all spots in the kiai's

- 02:08:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The overlapping circles could cause problems in reading this part because 1,2,3 have the same sound and it won't fit when you overlap two of them but not all of them. I took an other option because it felt better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366808 also really good point, fixed

- 04:21:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Here you have a circlemoving because of the kickslider 04:21:909 (1,2,3,4) but then you destroy the flow by putting the stream in the top-right corner. The stream is going anticlockwise while you move your cursor clockwise when you play the kickslider part.
Turn the stream+following slider like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366907/https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6366912 then the whole part is going clockwise i really dislike that aesthetically. you are right with the flow thing but you can argue a flow interruption in case to emphasize 04:22:673 (5) - which is the beginning of a intense section (also notable with the finish hitsounds)

I know my english is not the best/ my kind of writng is a bit....wierd but i hope i could help you ^^
Also I like your style in this map, it felt new/fresh compared to the rest of ranked maps who are coming out lately so i hope your map can be ranked too.
Now I'm done today ^^


Thx very much for your mod, much appreciation <3
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  • 00:14:265 (1) - Shouldn't the slider end should be snapped to 3/4? From what i see there you're trying to map the vocals, Which doesn't land on white ticks the beginning follows the vocals better now
  • 00:15:794 (1) - Same here, also, i am not sure which instrument you're mapping with this slider including this
  • 00:31:845 (1) - Remove NC ? They're better If they stick apart, and make consistent with other
  • 00:36:431 (5) - NC
  • 00:48:851 (4,5,1) - I think having those stack fits the song better, from now it looks they're playing stronger notes which the music doesn't provides , yet also can make this pattern can be easier to read if unstacked with 00:48:660 (3) - yes youre right, im still to lazy to find a proper solution, ill be on it
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  • 00:50:571 (3) - NC, it's better if they're split, also, It's better if have consistency on NC by 1 or 2 white ticks until 00:57:068 -
  • 01:14:648 (3) - NC
  • 01:34:138 (1) - Remove NC
  • 01:34:520 (1) - NC
  • 01:35:667 (1,4) - Swap NC ,And make consistency on NC by 2 white ticks until 01:56:686 - This applies to other 2 kiai parts
  • 01:56:686 (3) - NC
  • 03:01:941 (1) - Add a note here? filled the awkward breaks
  • 03:02:896 - You're missing a drum sound here, how about making 03:02:800 (7) - a kick slider, so it can also emphasizes the vocal at 03:02:992 (1) - ? same
  • 03:23:151 - You're missing a strong stream here :v i want to give the player a little break, because its quite exhausting to play almost 1/4 constantly, ill consider that and wait what other modders said since u are the first :D
  • 03:41:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that you can improve the stream shape by using the the what? oo
  • 03:53:437 (1) - Remove NC
  • 03:56:686 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe lower the DS? I think it can misread as 1/2 good point
  • 03:56:686 (1,4) - Swap NC
  • 04:05:667 (1) - Remove NC
  • 04:23:055 (1) - I think having a sharp turn here is better then 04:23:151 (2) - , Since this note has stronger notes "convert slider to stream" feature tru
  • 04:43:310 (9) - NC
    Other then NC inconsistency problems there's nothing more to say i fixed all NC's u mentioned


Good luck~


thank you very much for your mod! was especially in the intro very helpful, much appreciation <3
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Woah I liked this map a lot / nice streams
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Woah I liked this map a lot / nice streams omg thank you so much for 2 stars <333


Thank you very much for your mod! I really appreciate it (:

Edit:
01:38:915 (4) - vocals start here, and starting streams in blue ticks like 01:38:820 (3) - is kinda confusing since the vocals starts on the red one, its on you to change or not :p (I mean, to make something like you did 01:48:278 (4,5) - ) i reconsidered it and remapped that part for all appropriate spots. So a 1/4 slider starts at 01:38:915 - and at 01:39:106 - followed by the "intense" stream to fit the vocals in the song.

Thank you for that advice, feels way better now!
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I see Love Live! From #modreqs

Just a quick metadata check, that's all! Add these to your current Metadata
  • Tags: Love Live! 高坂穂乃果 Kousaka Honoka 園田海未 Sonoda Umi 南ことり Minami Kotori 小泉花陽 Koizumi Hanayo 星空凛 Hoshizora Rin 西木野真姫 Nishikino Maki 矢澤にこ Yazawa Nico 絢瀬絵里 Ayase Eli 東條希 Toujou Nozomi 三森すずこ Mimori Suzuko 内田彩 Uchida Aya 徳井青空 Tokui Sora 南條愛乃 Nanjou Yoshino 楠田亜衣奈 Kusuda Aina 堀絵梨子 Hori Eriko Pile 久保ユリカ Kubo Yurika 飯田里穂 Iida Riho

    Since we got µ's as the Artist, it might be cool if we put the Seiyuus and Characters in tags.
Metadata Source: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html


Good luck!
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I see Love Live! From #modreqs

Just a quick metadata check, that's all! Add these to your current Metadata
  • Tags: Love Live! 高坂穂乃果 Kousaka Honoka 園田海未 Sonoda Umi 南ことり Minami Kotori 小泉花陽 Koizumi Hanayo 星空凛 Hoshizora Rin 西木野真姫 Nishikino Maki 矢澤にこ Yazawa Nico 絢瀬絵里 Ayase Eli 東條希 Toujou Nozomi 三森すずこ Mimori Suzuko 内田彩 Uchida Aya 徳井青空 Tokui Sora 南條愛乃 Nanjou Yoshino 楠田亜衣奈 Kusuda Aina 堀絵梨子 Hori Eriko Pile 久保ユリカ Kubo Yurika 飯田里穂 Iida Riho

    Since we got µ's as the Artist, it might be cool if we put the Seiyuus and Characters in tags.
Metadata Source: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html


Good luck!


Thank you soooo much!! (:
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